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私の好きな町
伝統と現代が出会う場所 金沢
石川県にある金沢は歴史的で現代的なことがある町だ。金沢城から金沢２１世紀美術館まで、あらゆるタイプの訪問者に何かがあるだろう。
金沢に行ったら、まず古い建物があるひがし茶屋街を歩いてみてほしい。まるで江戸時代を散歩しているような気持ちになって、いい写真を撮れるだろう。その古い通りには、伝統的な金工芸品などのお店がたくさんあるので、お気に入りのお土産や台所用品などを探してみるのも楽しいかもしれない。
また、１００年以上前からある喫茶店を訪れるのもいいだろう。そこでは、実際に江戸時代の雰囲気が楽しめてみたり、伝統的なお菓子やお茶を飲んでみたりすることができる。日本の中では東京や京都など一番人気のある町と言えるですが、次回に日本の旅をしたがる時は金沢を訪れてはどうだろうか。
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Valutare l'arte oggettivamente
Prima di ieri, he visto che un utilizzatore aveva trattato un argomento interesante: se può valutare la literatura o no? Vorrei generalizzare a tutte le opere culturali per il testo che sto scrivendo oggi.
È una domanda interesante di sapere se ci sono realmente "buone" o "brutte" opere, perché porta a parlare della nozione di qualità nel arte. Si puó spesso sentire che è impossibile valutare oggettivamente una musica, un romanzo o un filme, visto che la definizione de "cos'è l'arte" cambia secondo le diverse persone e soprattutto, che i gusti sono molto diversi.
Sono in parte d'accordo con questo avviso. È vero che non vogliamo tutti le stesse cose dal arte. È anche vero che le coso che mi piaceranno a me non necessariamente piaceranno al mio vicino, e dato che i gusti personali dipendono di una soggetività propria, è illusorio (e onestamente pretenzioso) di fare una lista dei "buoni gusti".
Tuttavia, mi sembra che ci sono criteri oggettivi per valutare la qualità di una opera. In un filme, per esempio, si vede subito se il direttore prova a creare un'atmosfera particolare, o se solo vuole fare un filme per i soldi. Tutti non possono apprezzare lo stile particolare di un autore, ma tutti possono costatare se la storia è ben construita, se porta una riflessione, se i personaggi sono interesanti. Infine, se tutti i gusti sono differenti, penso che molti seranno d'accordo per dire che Confucio e Racine elevano lo spirito più degli influencers Instagram, o che la musica di Leonard Cohen o Ennio Morricone nobilitano il cuore più di quella del ultimo rapper alla moda che parla di fare cose straniere con le madre dei suoi nemici (ci sono cose interesanti nel rap, e davvero, anche questi rappers sono divertenti, se si sa ascoltarli con distanza..!)
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La technologie
J’aime le internet. C’est très pratique. J’ai un portable, un ordinateur portable et une tablette. Je fais un majorité de ma temps en ligne. J’ai acheté un service de musique, ils nom est Spotify. J’aime écouter de musique classique. Je cherche souvent des informations en ligne. Je peux écrire un blog un jour! Parfois, je envoye un email à mes professores. Mes amies postent souvent les photos de vacances. Je ne poste jamais les photos des vacances, à cause de je pense ce n’est pas interessante. Je poste les photos des livres et des animaux. Ma mere envoye rarement les videos drôles à moi. Tous le soir, je tchatte avec mes amies.
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Talk
Do these sentences sound natural?
online English lesson conversation
A: Firstly, I chose free talk because I want you to read aloud sentences I made with correct pronunciation and help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in the sentences. Is that okay with you in that way?
B: Of course.
A: I'm new at this, so there may be room for improvement in this approach, and I know it's exhausting for you to read aloud all the time, but please take care of me.
A: Okay. Also do you want me to read and then you?
B: No, we only have 25 minutes, so please read aloud only to you.
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N'est pas timide
De temps en temps tu dois être audacieux. La timidité est quelque chose qui peut cacher ta crédibilité. Si tu veux que les gens font confiance à toi tu dois le montrer que tu n'as aucune doute sur tes capacités. Par exemple disons que tu es dans une entreuve d'emploi peut-être ton futur supérieur va te demander à quel point tu veux avoir ton salaire. Au lieu que le sous-estimer dis lui le salaire que tu veux et quand tu fais cela ne lui montre aucune doute. Ceci veux le montrer que tu es capable parce que tu as confiance à toi-même. C'est important d'être plus courageux dans certain scenario mais on doit aussi pas oublier de rester à sa place. Si tu sais que tu peux le faire n'hesité pas, si tu sais que tu ne peux pas faire montrer modestie.
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Fencing Coach introduction
Alvin Zhou
National Champion member
He was selected to the Youth National Team
16 years fencing coaching experience
Currently：
Fencing coach of West Vancouver Community Center
Fencing coach and manager of Jericho Hill Community VTM Fencing Club
Coaching Achievement:
World Junior Competition champion
British Commonwealth Games fencing bronze medal
National Competition Champion
North American Cup Champion
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IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING ( detals in notes)
There are 4 reasons in the survey for showing the main reasons for teenagers in one African country using their phones between 2016 and 2019:
1. Social networks
2. Email
3. Digital camera
4. Phone calls
Then we can make comparisons where relevant:
1. The rates of them are decreasing from up and down in every chart between 2016 and 2019. Which are Social networks > Email > Digital camera > Phone calls.
2. The rate of Social networks is accumulating in the four years except year 2017. Which are 50% to 56%.
3.. The rate of Email is decreasing in the four years. Which are 25% to 19%.
4. The rate of Digital camera is accumulating in the four years except year 2017. Which are 15% to 20%.
5. The rate of Phone calls is decreasing in the four years except year 2017. Which are 10% to 5%.
Conslusion:
1. All the dates of the chart are changing stable in these years except year 2017.
2. People in African are getting more and more into social networks, digital camera between 2016 and 2019 by phones.
3. Pople in African are getting less and less into email and phone calls between 2016 and 2019 by phones.
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「からと言うと」を使った例文
この約款から言うと、今更襲撃するとしたら、背信行為と言われて、戦犯として刑を執行されてしまいます。
ある元市会議員の経験から言うと、市議会の中で堕落の事件が多かったです。
社内政治から言えば、あの受付嬢からの噂はなかなか大影響があるよ。
この詩の歌学から言ったら、句切りにも情報がある。
親分の見解から言うと、配下は早起きが容易いぞ。異議を唱えない方がいい。
個人的な資質から言うと、妻のために彼は気配りが行き届いてみたいです。
経済から言うと、複合企業さえ苦境に陥っているのですね。
張本人にとっては、犯罪記録から言えば、短気のあまりに仲間に唆されやすい。
狩野さんは、決意から言えば、どんなに試練を乗り越えることができると思う。
授業から言うと、生徒たちはまだ混迷極まっているでしょうね。
ゲームから言うと、何回か度重なる拉致させたことのあるピーチ姫が怪しくなりはじめてるだろうか。まさか…狂言誘拐なんか？！
信仰から言うと、豚肉を食べてはだめなのです。
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Japan
Definitely I would love visiting Japan because I love anime and they say that the Japanese people are very distant.
I think I will like a place like that but maybe I will never go.
Talking about visiting it on summer is something that doesn't matter but thinking it better it comes to mind the scene of the temples or the singing cicadas.
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Summer Camp
I have never gone to a summer camp but I would love to.
I don't think often about my ideal experience but one of them would be the typical one in a teen drama just because I like manga and I sometimes read things like that.
But If I really go to a summer camp I don't think anything like that happens, but I would really enjoy the events there even if they make me nervous and I'm an introvert
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Mistakes 2
Mistakes can be embarrassing so I think I don't like making any mistakes.
But the worst is always at the beginning because later on, you realize that you don't need to worry about it.
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Es muss gesagt werden.
Ratet mal, in welcher Sprache die meisten unkorrigierten Beiträge sind. Also kann ich euch sagen. In Deutscher Sprache. Fast 500 Beiträge bleiben unkorrigiert, einschließlich 42 Beiträge in diesem Monat. Mein letzter Beitrag wurde auch nicht korrigiert, obwohl ich ein positives Korrekturenverhältnis selbst habe. Es ist einfach unfair, dass die Deutsche Muttersprachlern so schlimm anderen auf dieser Website helfen.