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15 mai 2022 - L’interview
Interviewez votre personnage de fiction préféré.
Moi : Bonjour Miss Granger, merci d’avoir accepté mon invitation ! Je suis votre grande fan parce que non seulement vous avez toujours de très bonnes notes à Poundland mais vous êtes aussi courageuse et vous vous réfléchissez bien avant de mettre les plans en action. Parfois, on se moque de vous comme « Mademoiselle je-sais-tout », comment vous le voyez ?
Hermione : Ça voudrais dire que je suis vraiment intelligente, pas vrai ? Mais oui, quand j’étais jeune, je n’étais pas contente de ça parce que les gens voulaient moquer de moi, mais après tout, c’est les regards des autres, je m’en fiche.
Moi : ah oui, très bien, c’est l’attitude qu’on doit tout apprendre. J’ai une autre question, pourquoi vous avez choisi Ron mais pas Harry ?
Hermione : en fait, je ne sais pas, peut-être que j’avais passé plus de temps avec lui que Harry pendant les vacances ? Mais même Ron est un peu bête, il m’aime beaucoup et il me soutient au cœur de développé ma propre carrière professionnelle.
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May 15, 2022
Daily Practice
I have watched a video titled "The benefits of good posture" created by TED-Ed. I would like to summarize its content as my daily practice today
1. What elements cause poor posture?
Sitting in an awkward position for a long term is one of the reasons for poor posture. Using computers and mobile devices can also promote poor posture since that encourages you to look downward.
Unsurprisingly, keeping stationary for a long period with good posture can be more harmful than regular movements with poor posture.
2. What does the adverse effect of poor posture?
If your posture is not appropriate, your muscles have to work harder to keep you upright and balanced. Over time some muscles might become tight meanwhile others mighe become inhibited, which might increase the likelihood of accidents and make some organs like your lungs less efficient.
Apart from muscle strain, researchers have found that poor posture can contribute to some diseases ranging from scoliosis and tension headaches to back pain, though it is not the exclusive reason for these diseases.
Besides the physical pain, poor posture can also affect your emotional status and your sensitivity to plain.
3. What does good posture look like?
When you are standing properly, your spines should become one straight line when you look from the front or the back. When you look from the side, your spines should have three curves: one at your neck, one at your shoulders, and one at the small of your back.
When you are sitting, your neck should be vertical instead of tilted forward. Your shoulder should relax and your knee should be at a right angle with your feet flat on the floor.
4. How to improve your posture?
You can redesign the environment. For example, you can adjust the screen of your computer at or slightly behind your eye level to prevent looking downward for a long time. Don't wear shoes with high heels.
Exercise is extremely important since you can move your joints and muscles when you do exercise. You are used to sitting, try to walk around regularly. As a result, your muscles will be strong enough to support you effectively.
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May 15, 2022
May 15, 2022
May 15, 2022
Ton type
Quelle femme/homme est ton type. Tous les gens ont une préférence, quelques aiment quelqu'un qui est plus grand ou petit que les, quelques aiment si sa partenaire est intelligent ou est sportif etc. Frenchement je ne suis pas exactement sûr de ma préférence, probablement parce que je n'avais jamais une petite copaine jusqu'a maintenant. Alôrs il y a beaucoup de choses qui j'ai trouvé sexy d'une femme, en majorité je m'en fiche comme elle regarde, principale chose qu'elle mets sûre qu'elle est en bonne sante et elle m'ai plu. Il y a ce proverbe "L'apperance attire mais le caractère decide". Je le trouve cent pour cent vrai, dans ma vie il y a beaucoup de gens qui je trouve "joli" mais leur caractère horrible détruit tous.
May 15, 2022
May 15, 2022
What was the best part of your day today?
What was the best part of your day today that you would like to share?
A great question. The moment that made me feel so good today is I should get up at 8.30. am but I choose to sleep again until 8.55.am. when I wake up at 8.30.am. That is an amazing 20 minutes for sleeping.
May 15, 2022
Profissão
Olá! Eu chamo-me Rani e tenho 21 anos. Sou estudante e estudo na Universidade de Educação de Hanói. Depois de graduação, eu quero trabalhar como uma professora de matemática. Eu adoro fórmulas, cálculos, equações e resolução de números. Quando era criança, eu era uma menina com uma paixão por números. Nas aulas, quando via o professor ensinando no pódio, eu tinha o sonho de me tornar professora. Eu tenho observado os ensinamentos dos professores que me ensinaram. Depois disso, pesquisei e aprendi mais sobre como transmitir conhecimento profissional. Sei que para ser professora além de aprimorar os conhecimentos, é preciso também praticar a paciência, confiança e generosidade. Ser professora é um bom trabalho, mas vai enfrentar muito estresse, como notas, métodos de ensino, alunos, etc. Embora essa profissão tenha muitos desafíos, sempre escolho perseguir o meu sonho. Eu tentarei o meu melhor para estudar bem para me tornar uma boa professora de matemática no futuro.
May 15, 2022
May 15, 2022
文化冲击
今天我想讨论住在德国和住在美国的差别。
我觉得德国和美国有很多差别。我在德国乡村长大了，在那儿德国的文化很传统。但是我不只是德国人，我也是美国人，因为我爸爸是美国人，所以长大的时候我也学关于美国的文化。虽然我认识都两个文化，但是我还有时饱受文化冲击住在美国。
我们在西雅图来到的时候，我马上注意都东西更大。楼房都更大，车都更大，餐都更大。我们的美国房子比我们的慕尼黑房子很大。我很喜欢住在一间很大的房子，因为我有很多空间，而且我可以邀请我的朋友们，但是如果都房子很大的话，这也意味着我总是必须开车很远去别的地方。我很讨厌开车，但是不能用公共交通，因为又慢又脏。
我也觉得在美国交朋友们一点难，因为人们通常不谈到他们的个人生活。在德国谈到你的个人生活很普通，你很快地感觉你们认识互相。在美国我常常不知道谈到什么，因为人们好像一点不舒服谈到个人生活。常常我们谈到我们的工作，或者我们的爱好，但是我们不谈到我们的家，我们的看法，或者我们的问题。德国人常常谈到他们的问题，所以很多人说德国人抱怨太多。我也觉得德国人抱怨很多，但是我也很喜欢感觉他们信任我他们的问题。有时在美国我看见了有人很多次，还不知道他们真的想什么，或者他们喜不喜欢我。德国人很不一样。通常你很快知道他们喜不喜欢你，因为如果他们不喜欢你的话，他们表现不一样。美国人可能觉得这是很不友善，但是我很喜欢知道人们喜不喜欢我。
我非常喜欢我在美国可以见面很多很不一样的人。在工作上我有美国的同事，印度的同事，中国的同事，和欧洲的同事。我觉得都国家的文化很有意思，很喜欢跟他们说话。在我的家乡所有人是德国人，所有人有白皮肤。搬家慕尼黑以前我从未见面了一个中国人。第一次我老公去了我的家乡，很多人凝视他，他觉得很不舒服。一个姑娘还叫了“妈妈，妈妈，他是中国人！”。在美国通常没有人凝视你因为你显得不一样。
May 15, 2022
Regarding mask
In Japan, most people wear masks when out of the house. The government in Japan doesn't take this situation seriously in terms of wearing a mask, which can cause dehydration, lack of oxygen, and so on and so forth. As summer comes, I argue that we need to realize that we don't have to read the atmosphere anymore when it comes to COVID-19.
To consider the problem of face-mask, we have to weigh the pros and cons of wearing masks.
The pros are obvious that it will protect you from infection, and also protect people around you.
The cons are particularly serious in summer. Wearing a mask can easily cause dehydration and oxgenless. These were not the fatal problem in 2020, because no one can go outside. In 2022, there is no restrictions regarding transportation. But the prime minister in Japan, still now, strongly recommend wearing a mask when out of the house whereas some authority warned of referred riskiness of dehydration.
In conclusion, we should consider taking off masks during summer.
May 14, 2022
May 14, 2022
運転違反をしたお年寄りが運転技術検査を受けなければならない
5月13日から、日本の運転法律が変わりました。お年寄りが運転するときの事故を無くすために、７５歳以上の人は運転免許を新しくするとき、3年以内運転違反をしたことがあるなら、運転技術検査を受けなければなりません。しかし、決まった日まで合格ができなったら、免許が無くなります。毎年１５万人ぐらいが検査を受けることになりそうです。
その法律がいいと思っています。人が年を取って視力も悪くなって、反応の速度も遅くなります。運転を危なくしながらとても安全だと錯覚する人が多いです。別な人とお年寄りのための法律です。特に、お年寄りの体は比較的弱いから、事故があるなら、ひどいけがをする可能性が高いです。
May 14, 2022
Mon adolescence
Pendant mon adolescence j’étais gâté. Par exemple, je recevais tous les cadeaux pour mon anniversaire ou Noël. J’ai changé quand j’ai quitté ma maison familiale pour l’université. Immédiatement, j’ai changé. Je travaillais à payer pour l’école. Je payais mon loyer. Par conséquent, j'ai appris comment être un adulte ! Mais, je suis très heureux de cette expérience parce que je me sens très responsable.
May 14, 2022
Transportation 2
I am pretty sure that private cars and motorbikes are the most popular vehicles in my country. It’s obvious that there are a large number of people who tend to drive to work. Additionally, there will be more drivers on the roads in the future due to the convenience of motoring and the transport infrastructure in various provinces that are suitable for cars.
Riding a bike means you’re exposing yourself to air pollution. Plus, I am afraid of highways or main streets because vehicles will travel at a very high speed. I rather take the bus instead.
In my perspective, buses will take the lead and will continue to dominate in my country. Because of more economical than other transportation and getting-around quickly, also now offer better services like good air conditioning.
Although using public transportation in order to economize as well as to help protect the environment, owning a private vehicle hits the points.
May 14, 2022
Eine Kunstwerkbeschreibung
Das Kunstwerk hängt in New York. Man sieht einen dunkelblauen Himmel, der rundes gelbes Figur in verschiedenen Größe enthält. Sie scheinen wie Monde. Am unteren Bildrand kann man ein kleines Dorf sehen. Es hat in der Mitte einen Turm einer Kirche. Im Vordergrund gibt es ein schwarzes Gebäude, aber es wirkt eher wie einen Baum.
Das ganze Bild übertragt ein Gefühl von Einsamkeit oder Trauer. Es ist alles sehr dunkel und schwarz.
Wisst ihr, welches Gemälde ist?
May 14, 2022
Teil3
Häufig argumentieren regierungsnah Medien damit, können die Leute normales Leben in West-Europa nicht leben, denn Migranten vergewaltigen die Frauen und die Behörde kann nicht dagegen tun. Moderne Welt hat kriminalfreundliches Rechtssystem, ist es Problem auch in Ungarn. Islamische Kriminelle zündeten Tempel an. Die Kreuzen können nicht in den Schulen sein, weil er den Islamische Studenten verletzt. Ja das ist Absurd für mich auch, obwohl ich nicht religiös ist. Die öffentliche Sicherheit ist schlecht in sehr katholischen Ländern in der Welt. Ungarn wurde auch viel mehr international im Vergleich zuvor 10-20 Jahren. Wohlstand bringt Unsicherheit, schlechte öffentliche Sicherheit anhand der staatlichen Medien. Ungarn braucht Sklaven, Leibeigen, Soldaten und natürlich sogenannte nationaler Großkapitalist. Die Ungarn, die in West-Europa arbeiten, wollen sie nicht zurückziehen. Ich bin pessimistisch aber verfallende West wird immer höher als unsere illiberale Demokratie sein.
May 14, 2022
May 14, 2022
May 14, 2022
Månförmörkelse
Den här natten ska det bli en månförmörkelse. Det börjar klockan halv fyra här i Tyskland och man kan se det till halv sex. Sedan är månens nergång så man kan inte se fullständigen förmörkelsen.
Ibland, under månförmörkelsen månen ser röd ut. Normaligtvis skinar solen på månen och ljus är reflekterat och därför kan vi se månen. Men när det är en månförmörkelse, jorden är mellan månen och solen. Men jordatmosfären brytar och spridar solljusen. Men röd ljus är spridad mindre än blå ljus: Så bara den röda del av ljus skinar på månen och är reflekterad. Därför ser månen röd ut.
May 14, 2022
14 mai 2022 - Variations sur l’amour
L’amour ne se limite pas aux humains. Moi, j’aime le ciel bleu ; j’aime la mer ; j’aime le matcha ; j’aime le gâteau ; j’aime ma chambre, et j’aime aussi mon ancien lycéé-collège… je ne sais pas ce que l’amour rassemble mais je pense qu‘il y a une chose commune, c’est que toues ces choses-là me font sourire. L’amour m’apporte dans une état de sécurité et d’être alise. Je me souviens une rêve que j’ai fait il y a pas longtemps : je suis retournée à mon ancien lycée en portant l’ancienne uniforme, une robe bleu pour assister à un événement ; et j’ai rencontré une de mes anciennes camarades qui revenait pour aider un nouveau prof. Je ne souviens pas exactement les détails de ma rêve mais le lendemain quand je me suis réveillée, j’étais vraiment heureuse et j’ai vraiment passé une bonne nuit.
May 14, 2022
May 14, 2022
How do you know that you were not a rabbit in your last life
How do you know that you were not a rabbit in your last life? Do you know what the rabbits are thinking when they eat grass? Do you think I must be crazy if I say that it is not only humans who can think about the universe and there is a crazy, eccentric little bunny who has fun from daily dressing and playing various roles?? He has recorded365 costumes in his lifetime, from crying to violent rage, he doesn't care whether his adrenaline will kill him, he has to realize his dreams - ROLE PLAYING DREAMS!
May 14, 2022
Cover Letter 4
I have followed some of the projects of your research group. I am greatly interested in your research on the development of new synthetic probes. Although I was trained as a synthesis chemist, I always wanted to work in the chemical biology field, at the chemistry-biology interface. Using chemical tools to probe biological problems and understand processes within cells and living organisms, chemical biology has a significant bearing on drug discovery and biomedical research. I have found these features in your research. Your research in the development of biological probes is brilliant, indeed.
May 14, 2022
Cover Letter 3
I saw on the Sorbonne University website that you are looking for someone experienced in catalyst development. Due to that, I have read some of your research papers. They are impressive, indeed. One of my research interests revolves around developing new synthetic strategies, particularly asymmetric ones, for biological applications or research per se, so your work in this field suits my research interests. Since I have worked on a catalyst project during my master’s, I have a good experience and knowledge in the catalyst field. Thus, I believe that my experience in this area would be an asset to your team.
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