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Die Eule der Nacht
Ich habe immer das Gefühl gehabt, dass ich nicht genügend Wissenschaft habe, um ganze Sätze zu bauen. Dieses Gedacht jagt mich vielvolgend. Ja ich denke nicht auf satzbauen, sondern auf die Selbsicherheit, die mir sehr fehlt.
Ich denke es kann Grundsätzlich zu meiner Kindheit zurückleiten, weil meine Eltern könnte nicht weitergeben, was sie selbst nicht gegeben hatten.
Aber ich bin sicher, dieser Gedanke wird plötzlich wie ich meinen Kopf auf das Kissen legen aufgelöst. Es ist zu spät, über diese Dummheiten zu brüten. Morgen wird bestimmt besser sein.
Gute Nacht! :)
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Mein Lieblingsfilm
Mein Lieblingsfilm ist Jurassic Park 2, tasatlich mag ich alle Jurassik Park filmen, aber der zweite film ist besonder, ich weiß noch nicht warum.
Als Jurassic Park 2 ins Kino bekommt hat, war ich ein Kind. Ich habe Dinosaurier mein ganze Leben geliebt, dehalb habe ich immer auf Jurassik Park gefreut.
Als der erste Jurassic Park ins Kino bekommt hat, war ich ein Baby, trotzdem war ich groß genug und meine Mutter hat mein Liebe für Dinosaurier entdekt, und sie hat mir und meiner Schwester ins Kino gebracht, ich erinnere gar nicht, weil ich zu klein war, aber meine Schwester hat mir immer gesagt, dass ich zu viel wahrend des Films weinte.
Meine erste Erinnerung über dem ersten Jurassic Park film war zu Hause, mein Onkel hat den vhs-Film gemietet. Ich habe dieser Film geliebt, aber der zweite film war am besten.
Als erstes, gab es mehr Dinosaurier, der -Erste film war am meistens über den T-Rex und die Raptors.
Es gibt auch andere Jurassic Park filmen, und auch Jurassic World, aber der zwiete war für mich am besten.
July 9, 2022
L'enfance d'un lectrice
Après J'ai appris à lire, je savais que j'avais trouvé mon véritable amour. J'ai lu tous. Le livres d’histoire, d’amour, des romans et le poésie.
Si j'avais un livre, je sentirai libre. Les autre choses dan mon vie sont disparu quand je lisais.
Chaque semaine, ma mère me amener à le bibli pour choisir des livres. Tous les jours dans le bibliothèque semble comme Noelle. Dans les livres, j'ai trouve un maison. Un endroit ou je peux se sentir, ou je peux rire, ou je peux oublier que ma famille est brisée et je n'avais pas beaucoup de potes. Quand je lisais, c'était juste le livre et moi.
July 9, 2022
Makanan basi
Hanya dua hari yang lalu, ibuku berbelanja untuk membeli bahan makanan. Dia selalu hati-hati dan selalu mengecek semua tanggal kedaluwarsa. Salah satu hal yang dia beli adalah daging kalkun. Daging itu sudah dimasak, diiris, dan dibungkus. Seperti biasa, dia menaruhnya di kulkas langsung setelah dia pulang.
Siang ini ayahku mengeluh karena rasa daging kalkun agak aneh. Dia sering rewel dalam hal makanan, jadi sayangnya pada awalnya aku tidak yakin apakah dia serius. Misalnya, bahkan saat menurut ibuku dan aku hidangan tertentu rasa enak sekali, ayahku kadang-kadang sama sekali tidak menyukainya.
Oleh sebab itu, aku memutuskan untuk mengeluarkan daging kalkun dari kulkas dan mengecek kalau keluhan ayahku serius, atau tidak. Aku tidak mau membuang dagingnya kalau itu tidak sebenarnya basi. Ternyata ayahku benar. Aku tidak butuh memakannya, karena aku menyadari itu berbau basi. Aku membuangnya agar tidak ada seorang pun di keluargaku yang menjadi sakit kalau seseorang tidak sengaja memakannya.
Menurut tanggal kedaluwarsa, daging kalkun itu seharusnya segar sekali. Tetapi, di sisi lain, ada kemungkinan daging tidak disimpan dengan benar di pasar swalayan.
Terima kasih sudah membaca tulisan ini! Aku menulis versi dalam bahasa Inggris di bagian Notes/Catatan!
July 9, 2022
El nido
Ayer escuché un ruido en la estufa de leña. Se ha caído un pájaro y me miraba a través de la ventana de la estufa. Era verano y por suerte no teníamos la estufa encendida. Abrí la puerta, y el pájaro voló por la ventana hacia la libertad.
Esta mañana el pájaro ha vuelto a la chimenea. Esta vez no pude verlo y tuve que quitar la estufa del conducto para rescatarlo. Decidí tapar la chimenea hasta el otoño para evitar que el pájaro volviera a entrar, pero cuando llegué arriba, descubrí un nido con dos pajaritos dentro, encima de la tela metálica que puse el año pasado para evitar tales ocurrencias.
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A & B Talk 50
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me.
A: Hi.
B: Hey. Could I ask you something?
A: Sure.
B: Do you know how to get from here to Shinjuku?
A: It's a little tricky.
But, wait a minute, there's a good app. It's a train app, it says in English. How's this?
B: Oh, that's really help.
A: I think this would be useful for foreigners, so why don't you download this app? If you don't wanna do, take a picture?
B: I'll just take a picture for now.
A: Ok. So here you are.
B: Thanks.
A: And the next one, just in case.
B: Oh, thank you!
A: Will you be able to get there?
B: It looks be able.
A: Oh, glad to hear that. Then have a nice trip.
B: Thank you! Take care!
A: You too.
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk 49
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me.
A: Hi.
B: Hey. Do you have a minute?
A: Yes. What's up?
B: Do you know how to get from here to Shinjuku station?
A: It's a little tricky. But wait a minute, there's a good app. It's a train app, it's said in English. How's this?
B: Oh, it's easy to understand.
A: Glad to hear that. Do you think you understand how to look at it? Do you want me to explain it to be sure?
B: Well, oh, I understand, so I'm ok!
A: Okay. Then, take care!
B: You too.
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk48
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me.
A: Hi.
B: Hey. Do you have a minute?
A: Yes.
B: Do you know how to get from here to Shinjuku station?
A: It's a little tricky. But wait a minute, there's a good app. It's a train app, it's said in English. How's this?
B: Oh, it's easy to understand.
A: Glad to hear that. Do you think you understand how to look at it? Well, let me explain to be sure.
B: Oh, that would be great.
A: This is the station where you get off. This one, this one, this one, and this one. And here is the name of the train line you will be on. This one, this one, this one, and this one. These are the departure and arrival platform numbers. These are the arrival times. These are the departure and arrival times. These are the number of stops until you get off. Well, that's about it.
B: Okay. I understand. Thank you.
A: Just in case, do you wanna take a picture of this?
B: Oh, thank you.
A: And the next one, just in case.
B: Oh, thank you very much.
A: No worries. Hope you get there. Then take care!
B: Thanks! You too!
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk 47
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me.
A: Hi.
B: Hey. Can I borrow you for a minute?
A: Sure.
B: Do you know what is the nearest station to Sensoji?
A: Wait a minute, that's Asakusa Station. And your train will take the Ginza Line to Asakusa Station, so if you exit the station from Exit 1, there is an arcade, and if you walk through the arcade, you will arrive at the Kaminarimon.
B: What's Kaminarimon?
A: It's the gate to Sensoji Temple.
B: Oh, okay. Thank you very much.
A: You're welcome.
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk 46
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
A: Are you looking for so something?
B: Oh, I need to catch a bus back to the station.
A: What station?
B: D station.
A: I'll look it up.
B: Thank you.
A: It have several candidates, but I don't know which one is right. If you like, we can start from the nearest one and search together.
B: Oh, that's really helpful. But how close do you think it would be?
A: Probably just near here.
B: Oh, I wanna try.
A: Ok. Let's go.
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk 45
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me. Got a few minutes?
A: Sure. What is wrong?
B: Do you know how long it takes to get to Omotesando from here?
A: Well, let me check, it says walking, about ten to fifteen minutes.
By train, it’s only one or two and it takes about 5 minutes to get to the station from here, so maybe 7 minutes?
B: Oh, really?
A: Yeah, but if you go on foot, you might get lost. It might be better to take the train, unless you wanna walk around town though.
B: Okay. So can you tell me how to get to the station?
A: It's hard to explain in words, so I'll just show you with app if you like?
B: Oh, really? Thank you.
A: No problem.
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk 44
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, Got a minute?
A: Sure. What’s up?
B: Do you know how long it takes to get to Ueno station from here?
A: Oh, wait a minute. Well, it depends on the train, but it takes about 30 minutes.
B: Thank you very much!
A: No problem.
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk43
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, how do I get to Tokyo Station?
A: Tokyo Station? A: Wait a minute, please!
I'm going to take a different train, but I'm going in that direction too, so let's go together anyway! I'll explain as we walk!
B: Okay!
A: You are on the 7:50 train at platform 3, right?
B: How many stops is that?
A: Four stops!
B: Okay!
A: By the way, that train takes 9 minutes. But if you take a different train at 49 minute, it will take you 5 minutes.
If you jog, you can make it in time, what should we do?
B: When is the next train coming?
A: In ten minutes.
B: I'm in a hurry, can we fast walk?
A: Sure! But please don't get mad if you don't make it in time!
B: Haha. Okay.
A: Then, let's go.
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk42
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
A: Do you need help?
B: Oh, thanks. We can’t find this okonomiyaki restaurant.
A: Do you know the name?
B: Well, Sorajima?
A: Oh, if there, it’s on the street one block up and walk a little bit.
B: Ok! Thanks for that!
A: No problem.
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk 41
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me.
A: Hi.
B: Hey. Could I ask you something?
A: Sure.
B: How long does it take to get to Soka Station from here?
A: It’s quite close. Only about two minutes by train. If you're going on foot, just go straight down this road and you'll get there.
B: Oh, ok! Which train will take me there?
A: Oh, wait a minute.
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk40
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me.
A: Hi.
B: Hey. Could I ask you something?
A: Sure.
B: How long does it take to get to Soka Station from here?
A: It’s quite close. Only about two minutes by train. If you're going on foot, just go straight down this road and you'll get there.
B: Oh, ok!
Thank you very much.
A: No problem.
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk 39
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me. Could you help me?
A: Sure. What’s up?
B: Do you know how long it takes to get to Sensoji Temple on foot from here?
A: Well, when I went there, I think it was about a 10-minute walk.
B: Okay. Thank you very much.
A: No problem.
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk38
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, do you know where the nearest library is around here?
A: Well, I don’t know it off the top of my head. Let me look it up.
B: Oh, okay. That's helpful!
A: No worries.
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk37
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, do you know where the nearest library is around here?
A: Well, pop into my head, I guess there is a library next to the supermarket over there.
B: Thank you very much!
A: You're welcome.
July 9, 2022
A & B Talk36
I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, do you know where the nearest library is around here?
A: Well, I guess there is a library around next to the supermarket over there.
B: Oh, okay. Thank you very much!
A: You're welcome.
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