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La peur de parler français
J’ai peur de parler français !
Actuellement, je passe les vacances à la ville de Québec. C’est une très belle ville, et j’y ai visitée quelques fois dans ma vie.
Mais j’ai un problème : Quand je veux parler français à quelqu’un, je me sens paralysé par la peur ! Par exemple : aujourd’hui, une petite fille québécoise me regardait. Elle rigolait et était très mignonne. J’aurais dit « coucou mademoiselle ! », mais j’avais trop peur ! C’était que deux mots !
J’ai peur de parler français pour deux raisons. Tout d’abord, quasiment tous les québécois parlent anglais couramment. Je me sens un peu bête quand je leur parle en français… ça sera plus facile si je leur parle en anglais. Deuxièmement, j’ai un mauvaise accent. Je parle parfaitement dans mes pensées, mais quand je parle français dans la vraie vie, j’ai un gros accent américain.
Je sais que la seule façon d’améliorer mes capacités à parler, c’est de parler plus fréquemment. Quand je serai à l’université, je voudrais passer une année à l’étranger (en France, au Québec) pour que je puisse parler français avec plus de confort.
Si quelqu’un a des astuces pour n’avoir pas de peur en parlant, n’hésitez pas à me dire !
April 20, 2023
Ingénieure Logiciel
Je suis une ingénieure logiciel. J'étudie puis environ 2-3 ans maintenant à la UC Berkeley pour mon master. Je travaille en developpment et recherche. J'aime les mathématiques. Quand j'etais petit, je disais aux gens que je voulais être scientifique. Et maintenant, je suis quelque peu scientifique. Je me sens un peu perdue quant à mes objectifs futurs.
Aujourd'hui a été une journée épuisante. Je suis allée à la bureau toute la journée. J'ai travaillé sur un project de groupe pour ce soir. Mon semestre de printemps se termine bientôt.
April 20, 2023
Formal Email 1
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in reply to your rental housing advert that you posted, and I would like to schedule an appointment to view the property as soon as possible. Before doing so, I would like to request some additional information regarding the rental. Could you please provide me details regarding the rental such as the monthly rent, lease rent, and any other information that you think could be relevant for me to know? Additionally, I was wondering if you would be so kind to send me some more pictures so that I may have a better idea of its condition. Furthermore, it would be helpful to know if any utilities are included in the rent.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration in this matter. I hope to hear back from you soon to arrange a viewing at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Sergio
April 20, 2023
April 20, 2023
Le temps
Parfois je trouve le temps est une chose mystérieuse. Pourquoi? Parce qu’on peut le mesure par une horloge, mais avant la création d’un horloge, comment on l’a mesuré? On l’observe par le soleil ou la lune? Cela vaut dire quand la nuit arrive, la lune apparaître, c’est la nuit, quand le soleil apparaît, c’est le début d’un jour. Lorsque l'homme a inventé l'horloge, tout avait une mesure. Scientistes ont dit qu’il y a 4 dimensions dans le domaine physique. On pense généralement qu'il n'y a pas d'espace avec 0 dimension pour les points, 1 dimension pour les lignes, 2 dimensions pour les surfaces et 3 dimensions pour les objets volumétriques.Mais le temps et l'espace peuvent-ils être mélangés ensemble ou non ? Nous parlons de 4 dimensions, nous introduisons le concept de temps, mais je pense personnellement qu'il s'agit d'un concept erroné, car le temps et l'espace sont deux concepts différents qui ne peuvent pas être superposés.
Tout comme l'espace est tridimensionnel, le temps peut également être analysé en trois dimensions, c'est-à-dire en lignes temporelles, en plans temporels et en corps temporels. Le temps et l'espace peuvent être librement combinés dans n'importe quelle dimension, ou ils peuvent exister séparément l'un de l'autre, sous forme de lignes, de plans et de corps sans temps. Ou encore une ligne, un visage et un corps de temps sans espace.
Merci beaucoup pour votre correction ! :)
April 20, 2023
April 20, 2023
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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!
Yes! That's exactly what I wanted to say! I learned a lot! Thank you so much!🙇♂️🙏
I lose feeling in my legs if I sit on the toilet for more than 5 minutes, and if I sit on the toilet for more than 10 minutes it hurts that I really have to limp. Sometimes even just sleeping I lose feeling in my legs. I looked it up and it came up as pisiform muscle syndrome. I thought about going to the doctor, but before I do that, I'm going to stretch and soften my body to improve it.
You are so bright. Even if I go blind, I can still find you.
What's that?
It's a green tea flavored cookie. I think it's a classic souvenir.
When I am nerves, by mind went blank often. I want to be calm in times like that. I want to overcome that.
Can I take a bath first?
Sure. Go ahead.
April 20, 2023
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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!
I think I have an idea that I can only be kind to those who benefit me in some way. But I have one of my goals in life to reduce the number of animals killed to zero. I thought this was not about profit. But helping them would save me from reliving their painful reality in my thoughts, and seeing them live happy and healthy would eases my heart. The point is, I have my own interests in this as well. Previously, I was walking through a train station and an old lady asked me for money and I gave her $10. At the time, I only gave it to her because she was in trouble, but when I thought about it again, I realized that there was a benefit to me in this as well. If I did not give her the money, she might be in trouble more, and I would feel responsible if something bad happened to her. In order to avoid such a future, I thought that I understood this reflexively and gave her the money. In other words, I gave her the money to escape responsibility. I think there is no one in the world whom we helped even though there was really no benefit to us. That is natural when you think about it. My actions are related me. Even if there is no real benefit such as "money," the relief or satisfaction or things like that within myself is also a benefit to that person.
The nature of a person's behavior changes depending on what kind of benefit is inside them. I don't think there is no such thing as no-benefit support in this world. If there is, please tell me.
April 20, 2023
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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!
I have never studied at all in my life, so now I enjoy studying.
I don't know about the younger generation today, but it was like that in our time.
Do you think guys really like her?
What am I talking about?
What was I talking about?
Your way is more elegant.
Opposing Russia's invasion but not imposing economic sanctions or nothing against it is the same as doing nothing and just saying "rape is wrong" when a woman is being raped in front of your eyes.
In Uganda, same-sex sex can be punishable by death.
I heard there are over 1,200 species of spiders in Japan, but only about five are poisonous.
North Korea, Uganda, China. If you look at the countries that side with Russia, you will see that Russia should not be allowed to win.
When I see a Japanese supermodel married to an unsuccessful Japanese comedian, I feel true love, not money.
Fireworks festivals are often held even when it rains, as long as there is no wind.
I heard that some Japanese elementary and junior high schools are using manga as teaching materials in their moral education classes these days. For example, using One Piece as a teaching material, they are teaching how to make friends and the words that must be said because they are friends. I think this is a good way to make moral education fun for students, since they are still immature and often have no interest in such things. So I hope that the cartoonist will draw more philosophically and morally good things.
April 20, 2023
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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!
I think there are certain behaviors that are acceptable if done by a woman that I think is beautiful, but not if done by a woman that I don't think is beautiful. For example, if a beautiful woman brought something to my house every day, I would be very happy, but if someone who isn't brought something to my house every day, I might feel annoyed. I thought this is lookism, and I thought this is a dangerous thought.
In this world, we provide good service to those who pay us, but not to those who don't. In the same way, I can be more tolerant of people who heal my eyes in return, and I can be more kind than usual to them. But money is the right of any person to have, but beauty is largely a factor that each person is born with. It is discrimination that determines whether a person receives the service or not based on their natural factors, so to speak, luck.
At any rate, I think lookism is a dangerous ideology, but I can't imagine how it can be completely eliminated from my mind. If there is a way to eliminate this idea, please tell me that.
April 20, 2023
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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!
a: Do you buy lottery tickets?
b: I don't. Do you?
a: I sometimes buy scratch tickets! The prize money is very expensive in the U.S, right?
b: How much is it in Japan?
a: It's not scratch, but in Japan, the highest prize ever is about 50 million dollars, I guess. But I heard before that the prize money in the US is 3 billion dollars. It's a dreamy story. It is the best proof that luck exists.
It's difficult. I don't understand it at all. Is this really a question for elementary school students?
That happened to me too.
私にも同じことがあった
Something like that happened to me too.
私にも同じようなことがあった
言われてみれば確かにそうだね
Come to think of it, maybe you are right.
君は映画を何で観る？ネットフリックス？
What do you watch movies on? Netflix? Amazon? Or the illegal ones?
感覚的にマイナス一点しただけです！
Minus 1 point is somehow I just feel so.
April 20, 2023
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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!
I think the famous donut shop in Japan is Mister Donut or Krispy Kreme.
Which do you prefer?
It depends on the day. But I don't buy either by myself. I usually get them from someone. But if I were to buy one myself, I would choose Krispy Kreme when I want something rich and filling, and I would choose Miss Donut when I want a regular donut. I more get Misdo because they have more stores in Japan than Krispy Kreme.
In Japan, Mister Donut is called Misdo for short.
April 20, 2023
Words 10
Is there a way to say these sentences so that they sound more natural?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️ Also, it would be very helpful if you could provide a sentence with the word's correct usage if the word is used incorrectly.
1 can
共感できます。
I can relate.
2 happen
旅の恥はかき捨て。
What happens in the us stays in the us.
3 even
とんとんで終わった。
We broke even.
4 good
早めに出発して正解だったね！
Good call leaving early!
5 people
ここは若者が遊ぶ町です。
This is where young people hang out.
6 keep
私、口固いから。
I can keep a secret.
その状態をキープして。
Keep just like that.
7 quiet
彼はとても静かだね。良い子だ。
He's very quiet. Good boy.
8 at
感情を持ち込むな。
Leave emotion at the door.
9 library
図書館が好き。落ち着くし、家よりも集中できるし。そこに横になれる場所あったら住むだろうな。
I like libraries. It's calming and I can concentrate better than at home. If I had a place to lie down there, I would live there.
10 man
男はやるときはやらなきゃ。
A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do.
11 not
私が求めている物とは違う。
It's not what I'm looking for.
12 live
人生は１度しかないからやりたいことをやろう！
You only live once.
誰かに介護されながら生きるくらいなら、その前に死にたい。
I would rather die before that than live while being cared for by someone.
13 without
これなしでは生きていけない。
I can't live without this.
君なしではできなかったよ。本当にありがとう。
I couldn't have done it without you. Thank you very much.
14 lose
（失敗しても）ダメ元よ。
I have nothing to lose.
それなくしちゃった。
I lost it.
あ、蚊がいる。
ほんとだ。あれ、見失った。どこだ。
Ah, there is mosquitoe.
Omg, true. Oh, I lost it. Where is it?
15 blue
青はすごく似合うね。
Blue is your color!
16 glove
手袋って一つも持ってないから、良いのを探してる。
I don't have one pair of gloves, so I'm looking for a good ones.
17 party
持ち寄りパーティしよ！
Let's have a potluck party!
パーティーの主催者は誰なの？
Who is hosting the party?
18 we
友達を通して出会った。
We met through a friend.
日本にチップの習慣はない。
We don’t tip in Japan.
話が違います。（約束と違う）
That’s not what we agreed.
19 need
カンペが必要だ。
I need a cheat sheet.
返してほしい。
I need it back.
20 some
私の分も残しておいて。
Leave some for me.
もう少し私を信用してよ。
Give me some credit.
April 20, 2023
Words 9
Is there a way to say these sentences so that they sound more natural?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️ Also, it would be very helpful if you could provide a sentence with the word's correct usage if the word is used incorrectly.
1 strong
Stronger strongest
見かけの割に昔は強かった。
しっかりした味。
強い香水は嫌いじゃないけど、車に酔う。
I used to be strong for what I looked like.
Tastes too strong.
I don't mind strong perfume, but it makes me carsick.
2 person
君のような優しい人がまだこの世界にいたなんて嬉しいよ。
I'm glad there is still kind person like you in this world.
3 grandfather
祖父は脳梗塞に 5回なった。
My grandfather had five strokes.
祖父は10年以上寝たきりで家で祖母が食事からトイレから全てをお世話していた
My grandfather was bedridden for over 10 years and my grandmother took care of everything from eating to toileting at home.
4 die
未来の世界のために何か良いことを残してから死にたい
I want to leave something good for the future world before I die.
5 last
最後にあったのいつだっけ？
When was the last time we met?
6 gas
痛みが全くないガスが開発されれば話は別だが、動物の安楽死にガスを使うのは大反対だ。
Unless a gas that is completely painless is developed, I'm very much against the use of gas for putting animals down.
7 price
値段はどこに書いてあるの？
Where are the prices written?
予算オーバーです。
It’s out of my price range.
これの送料や手数料、全て込みの値段を教えてもらっても良いですか？
Can you tell me the all-inclusive price for this, shipping and handling?
8 suddenly
人生の目標を達成したのなら、ぽっくり痛みなく死ぬのも悪くない。
I want to live with as few regrets as possible in case I die suddenly.
9 drop
落とさないでね。
Please don't drop it.
この話をやめよう。
Let's drop it.
10 week
週末はどうだった？
How was your weekend?
今週ずっと雨だね。
It's been raining all week.
11 boy
少年よ、大志を抱け
私の心はまだ少年のままだ。これ誰の言葉だっけ？
Boys, embrace your ambitions! Whose words were these?
My heart is still a boy.
12 almost
もう少しで終わる
Almost done.
もう少しでクビになるところだった。
I almost got fired.
もう少しで帰り着く。
I’m almost at home.
もう少しで終電に乗り遅れるところだった。
I almost missed the last train.
13 fall
落ちないでね。
惚れやすく冷めやすい。
Don't fall off.
I am easy to fall in love with and easy to cool off.
惚れっぽいんです。
I fall in love easily.
眠っちゃいそう。
I’m falling asleep.
信じないで。（だまされないで）
Don’t fall for it.
14 off
どんなことがあっても笑い飛ばせる人が好き。
I like people who can laugh anything that happens off.
語呂がいいね。
It rolls off the tongue.
肩の重荷が降りた。
That’s a weight off my mind.
大通りからちょっと入ったところ。
It's off the main road.
15 bicycle
最近の自転車はカッコイイ。
Recent bicycles are really cool.
16 never
不可能はない
Never say never.
17 grow
最初は違ったけど）いいと思えてきた。
It's growing on me.
She’s growing on me.
（彼女のことがいいなと思い始めた
背が伸びたね。
You've grown.
一緒に歳をとりましょう。
Let’s grow old together.
18 old
年をとっても向上し続けていたい。
あなたは本当に年をとってる？なんか魔法の薬でも飲んでる？
No matter how old I get, I want to keep improving.
Are you really getting older? Are you on some kind of magical pill?
19 bad
意外かもしれないけど、昔は悪ガキだった。
It may come as a surprise, but I used to be a bad boy.
彼は嫌な空気を醸し出している。
He’s giving off bad vibes.
I’m picking up bad vibes.
（嫌な空気を感じている）
20 thing
It’s a guy thing.
男にしか分からない（感覚、拘り、悩み）
It’s a Japanese thing.
日本人にしか分からない（感覚、拘り、悩み）
The last thing I want to do is put you out.（君に迷惑をかけることだけはしたくない
The last thing I want to do is lose my phone.（携帯を失くしてしまうことだけはしたくない
April 20, 2023
Toeic 60-70
Is there a way to say these sentences so that they sound more natural?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️ Also, it would be very helpful if you could provide a sentence with the word's correct usage if the word is used incorrectly.
Based
This is a fact-based film.
Facility
What kind of facility is this?
Advance
Technology is going to advance quickly.
This is paid in advance.
Committee
What does this committee do?
Successful
The event was successful.
Excellent
Excellent service
Industry
There is a lot of darkness in the entertainment industry.
Fee
How much is the late fee?
Accept
Do you accept the offer?
Upcoming
What are your expectations for if there is an upcoming event?
April 20, 2023
Toeic 50-60
Is there a way to say these sentences so that they sound more natural?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️ Also, it would be very helpful if you could provide a sentence with the word's correct usage if the word is used incorrectly.
Display
Can I buy the clothes displayed there?
Candidate
It's great that you were chosen as a candidate!
State
アメリカの最大の州は？
アラスカです
Which is the largest State in America?Alaska
Please state the reason for returning the product.
本製品を返送される理由を書いてください。
The building we visited was in a terrible state.
私たちが訪れたそのビルはひどい状態でした。
Exhibit
Can I buy the exhibit?
Session
If you have any questions, please ask during the Q&A session.
Note
May I take notes?
Process
The insect may have mixed in during the manufacturing process.
Instruction
Did you follow the instructions?
Membership
How do I become a member?
Agency
He works for a travel agency.
April 20, 2023
Talk 2-5
Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. Also, sorry for the length.🙏
Part 5
B: Lmaooo I also speak some german but only beginner level bc I studied it in school last year but forgot most of it 🥹thank you omg your english is perfect too what!! speaking 2 languages is already amazing!😭😭
Oh also in arabic read like kahwa カフワ (kahua) see it’s very similar😳
A: No way. I can't do it at all. I make Japanese sentences in my head and then change them to English sentences. I need time to think, so I can't do speaking and listening either.😇💀 So give me two languages.🥺🤲
Interesting! I've learned a lot from you!! Thank you.🥳🙇♂️ Yasmine! I'm going to bed now. You must be super tired, so I hope you get back into the rhythm. Don't get up until the morning.japagajgala Good night!
B: That’s totally normal it’s still so good don’t underestimate yourself!!!🫶🏻and for listening it’ll get better by listening even more!! Sure let’s exchange lol 🫣give me japanese fluency so I don’t have to study for it anymore🤲🏻 Of course!!! No problem 🥰 HaHaHa Good night Sho!!! I won’t don’t worry lol😭💀sleep well!
April 20, 2023
Talk 2-4
Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. Also, sorry for the length.🙏
Part 4
B: idk if I can stay up that long, I’m getting kinda tired lol
What time did you wake up?
A: Omg💀 if I go to bed now, *you’ll be that guy! You ready for this?(pic) I woke up a bit before 7am!
B: I hope not💀💀
wow that’s early😭I’m on summer break
A: Ohhh I’m jealous🥺 are you planning to go somewhere for summer?
B: I was gonna travel to Belgrade but then I got scared because of that monkeypox virus going around so I didn’t💀 but originally I was gonna go to Japan if the borders opened up but they didn’t so I decided on Belgrade instead. But now I’m just going to bars around here lmao
What are your plans this summer?
A: Nothing interesting. Just studied English💀💀 I hope you get to go to those places someday! Do you like bars?
B: LMFAOOOOO good job tho!!😭🫶🏼 I hope so too! Ty! And no not really I just like to drink lol
A: Thankyou!
What kind of alcohol do you like?
B: Mostly white wine and sometimes vodka with red bull I like mixing them together😂 what about u
A: Ohh vodka with redbull sounds good! Lol I don’t drink at all.😅 I mean sometimes I do but it depends on the situation or mood but I try to avoid it as much as possible😬 When I do drink it’s only drinks that look like juice, like Kahula and milk or whiskey and coke so people tease me for it and call me “gay”🙄😂 it’s so dumb considering how diverse the world has gotten🥲 (I’m not gay btw😂)
B: it’s so good you can barely taste the vodka the more redbull you add and you still get the same effect!😂
why’d they call you gay tho it’s not weird to not like drinking😭 oh I hate whiskey so much how can you drink it😖 Also what’s Kahlua?
A: Hahaha that’s nice! Because I don’t drink strong booze, and Kahlua and milk is the most “girly drink”🙄😂
That’s probably because it had Coke in it. It mostly just tastes like Coke. Idk how to say it in English, but I guess it’s like Vodka with Redbull! It tastes almost like coke
It’s a coffee liqueur. Kahlua and milk is like sweet coffee milk. Sweet and tasty
B: Ohhh omg I thought so at first bc Kahlua sounds a bit like the word coffee in arabic I was like how did he know that😳
A: Omg, you’re amazing! I just realized!!! You can speak 3 languages!!😲😲😲 Give me a language😭🤲
April 20, 2023
Talk 2-3
Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. Also, sorry for the length.🙏
Part 3
B: Ohh what prefecture are you from?
If you like swimming pools try paying for a swimming pool’s access in a hotel if they have that it’s a lot cheaper than staying a whole night🤣
I didn’t go at all this year too hahaha plus I hate tanning.
I just woke up btw💀💀
A: I live in Saitama Prefecture!
I'll try it!haha But I don't really like swimming pools, so I've never been a swimming pool facility nearby.💀💀
Is there a beach near where you live?
Already?! Will you be able to sleep early today?haha
B: I want to go!
Oh that’s too bad😩I think the reason I like swimming pools might be bc I did swimming before for some time lol
yeahh there are a lot of beaches near the place I live the closest one is like 25-30mins away but I don’t even go there bc it’s too crowded and not that clean💀but the other ones are good.
Hahahshshs it’s already 2pm I didn’t sleep at all lol I might sleep like anytime soon💀when did you wake up?
A: Please come!
Ohhh, I feel u! I love the seas where it's clean and uncrowded! You too?
If you keep doing that, you're gonna end up like this!(pic)
B: Yes! One day!
For sure!! But I don’t like tanning at all because it hurts me so bad for a whole week😭does that happen to you too? HAHAHAHA wait I know this movie💀💀
Yesterday I woke up at 7 (pm) And just ate breakfast like it was still morning 💀
A: I used to love tanning, so whenever I went to the beach, I'd always burn myself. But every time I got too sunburned, I got a fever of about 39 degrees Celsius, my skin peeled off and turned white, oh yellow?haha and that's it all. So I gave up.
Oh, really? It must be me or you in the future.💀Keep it up and maybe someday it'll be time for a real breakfast.💀💀
B: Omggg💀💀Exactly what happens to me lol and my skin is so sensitive to the sun so if I stay too long in the sun some small pimples start to appear on my arms and then just disappear at night it’s so weird💀Fr😭
HAHAHAHA it won’t be that soon at this rate💀
A: Hahah Interesting. I think people like us are more likely to get deceases from sun burn, so be careful to us. haha
It must be some kind of prophecy.💀
You should stay up for another three hours! That would be the same as going to bed really early!
April 20, 2023
Talk 2-2
Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. Also, sorry for the length.🙏
Part 2
B: HAHAHAHAHA thank u thank u lol😩 What time is it there??
A: It's 1:30pm here!
B: Ohh 8-hour difference😳 some of my neighbors are starting to wake up and I still haven’t slept lmaoo
A: Yeah, your neighbors are right. gagyahagagya Aren't you sleepy? What time did you go to bed last night?
B: Nooo it’s sunday though😭who wakes up at this time on a SUNDAY lol
I do feel a bit sleepy ngl I probably will go to bed in the next 10-15 minutes
I went to bed at 4~ something last night so💀understandable hahaha
A: True🤣🤣 It wasn't even 6:00 yet.🤣
B: Righttt😂 that’s weird maybe they’re going to the beach or doing a roadtrip or something.
A: Yeah, that's understandable💀💀 But it's a vicious cycle!(￣◇￣;) I went to bed around 4:00 a.m. last night, though.jajagayaja
Wanna go too?
B: I knowww😩I’m gonna try to fix my sleeping schedule soon. Hahahahahaha
did you really.
Meh the beach not really I like swimming in pools more but a roadtrip doesn’t sound like a bad idea tbh😩
A: I'm in the vicious cycle too. Jagajyaga
Let's fix it together!😇👼
Omg, you're just awesome!!
B: We’ll try our best😩!!
Why awesome😭
What about u bhsjdjsj Do you like going to the beach often?
A: Yes! We will!
Just because. hahah I feel like people who go to a swimming pool are more health conscious.
Yeah, I like going to the beach! But my prefecture doesn't have a sea, so I can't go there at all. I only go a few times in the summer. But this year I didn't go at all.🤣
B: Ohh what prefecture are you from?
If you like swimming pools try paying for a swimming pool’s access in a hotel if they have that it’s a lot cheaper than staying a whole night🤣
I didn’t go at all this year too hahaha plus I hate tanning.
I just woke up btw💀💀
April 20, 2023
Talk 2-1
Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally, and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. Also, sorry for the length.🙏
Part 1
B: Hello!
A: Hiiiii!
B: I'm Yasmin! nice to meet you!!!
A: I'm Shou. Nice to meet you too!
B: How old are you Sho?😊
A: I'm 24😂 You thought I was about 8 years old? lolll
B: JAJSJS NO😭 I just ask everyone how old they are when I meet them😭
A: I see😂 Anyway, what's "JAJSJS"??
B: Oh it’s kind of a way of laughing used in texting hahaha It’s like to express excessive laughter
A: Ohhh! I see!! I've learned something new! Thank you!! JAJSJS
B: Hahahaha it’s not always the same as the one I used😂 you just kinda tap random letters on the keyboard and it’ll look like you’re laughing on texts lol
A: Ohhhh! I see!! Then, vjkmdaj@gngdtgm how's this? 😭
Omg, wait. It's 5am there! You woke up early? Or haven't you slept yet?💀💀
B: That works too😭 I thought it was a whole email adress at first😭
I haven’t slept yet💀
A: Omg.🤣
Whyyyyyy 🧛♀️
B: Idk I was kinda studying japanese on anki on pc at first but then I just kept watching edits from the explore page on instagram💀
A: Ohhh great job!! Only the first!💀 But I kinda feel u.
B: HAHAHAHAHA thank u thank u lol😩 What time is it there??
April 20, 2023
The woman I admire most | part 2
When her parents died, they left her a rich inheritance. In 1931, Glessner Lee endowed with money she got the Harvard Department of Legal Medicine. Because the forensic field was dominated by men, Lee had to find a way to stand out amongst them. A great idea grew inside her mind – crafting tiny replicas of real crime scenes in order to help detectives examine clues in cases of unexplained deaths. Lee used these dollhouses in training lectures she gave police officers on crime scene forensics. The series of dioramas are known as The Nutshell Studies of Unexplained Death. During her lectures, the students were instructed to analyze every detail of a scene, every suspicious subject in the room, dubious position of the victim and after that, they had to draw conclusions from the visual evidence. It was an effective way to show to young students how they can distinguish a murder from suicide, and sometimes it did not depend by position of the victim, but the furnishing in the room (the way things were put and such, not sure if it’s right).
Frances showed interest in teaching police officers who has already worked because they were first who arrived at the crime scene, so they had to be attentive to find and save the clues, which are so needful for crime investigation. Whilst most of police officers unwittingly complicated the process of investigation by touching subjects, moving them from place to place, interpreting incorrectly the clues. Lee was also interested in improving contact between medical assessores, police officers, investigators and prosecutors. Her courses were considered to be the best for training detectives in US.
April 20, 2023
B1 Prüfungtest Übung 3
Sehr geehrte Frau Müller,
Bitte entschuldigen Sie mich aber ich kann heute zu unserer Termin nicht kommen. Ich habe neulich einen Text von meinem Vater und er hat mich gesagt, dass es ein Familiennot passiert wurde.
Wenn Sie möchten und Sie Zeit frei haben, können wir andere Termin planen.
Ich erwarte für seine Antwort,
Mauro
April 20, 2023
B1 Prüfungtest Übung 2
Der folgende Text ist eine Antwort zu einer Kommentar darüber, wie die Internet unsere persönliche Beziehungen verändert.
Ich stimme zu, dass persönliche Treffen nicht das gleiche Wert als Kontakte im Internet haben. Viele würden meine Meinung mitteilen, dass deine Freunde in die Augen sehen und sich umarmen viel besser für Menschen sind.
Aber ich finde es falsch, dass persönliche Treffen immer seltener sind.
Am wenigstens glaube ich, wegen der Internet nicht ist, sondern der Fall, dass wir in einer Wettweberbära leben. Neue Forderungen unseren Zeiten und die Veränderungen der Gesellschaft Lebensstille machen uns immer wegger von einander zu sein.
April 20, 2023
B1 Prüfungtest Übung 1
Liebe María,
Wie geht es dir? Ich erinnere mich, dass du eine stärke Grippe die letzte Woche hast und deshalb zu meiner Geburtstagsparty nicht gekommen bist. Ich weiß, wie schlecht am Bett zu bleiben ist und hoffe, dass du dich schon besser fühlst.
Es ist schlecht, dass du nicht mit uns warst, weil die Party super geil war! Unsere Freunde haben eine Überraschung geplant und hat mein Lieblingslied gesungen. Deswegen, dass sie alle Musikerfahrung haben, klang das Lied ausgezeichnet. Es hat mich zufrieden gemacht.
Nicht nur haben sie ein Lied vorbereitet, sondern auch haben viele Geschenke gebracht! Erinnerst du dich an dieses unbekannte Buch, das ich dir einmal genannt habe? Franco hat es gefunden und hat es mir geschenkt. Ich kann es nicht glauben!
Ich muss dir über viele Sachen sprechen, die an diese Nacht passiert haben und ich dir in einem Email nicht schreiben kann. Bitte sag mir wenn du dich erholst und frei bist.
Ich schicke dir eine Umarmung,
Mauro
16:59:26 (UTC)
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