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LupitaCan25

Aug. 18, 2025

My First Day

Hello I am Lupita, I want to learn more English than I know right now. This is my first day and I started with a some activities, one of these is write in this app the things I will be learning. Thank you for your support.

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7777

Aug. 18, 2025

累

有时我吃食物，然后累死了。我猎我的累的原因是我的食物。当我吃食物的时候，我吃饱。然后我累死了，以至于我睡觉。我怎么停？我要做事但是我的眼睛累死了。

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EdoBona11

Aug. 18, 2025

Hi, I introduce myself

Hi, I am Edoardo, a young Italian boy, I live in Calusco D'Adda, a little country between Milan and Bergamo, in Lombardia, in Italy. I am fourteen years old, but in October I will be fifteen. I live in my house it is big and it has got a big garden. I live with my two dogs, Holly and Nesquik, my sister and my parents. I'm prepering for my second year in the superior school, here in Italy we call it that, I did my homework. I went in Sardinia with my camper for ten days this summer. It is all.
I remember you who is reading that, it is my first Text in this website.
Thank you for reading.
See you in another text.

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feralfuton

Aug. 18, 2025

家族について

皆さん、こんにちは。ブライアンです。今日は家族について書きます。私は彼女とアメリカのコンネチカット州に住んでいます。両親と兄弟もコンネチカット州に住んでいます。兄弟が４人います。娘が1人います。

家族と釣りに行くの大好きです。釣ったの後、よくバーベキューを食べます。娘と一緒に美術を作るの好きです。娘は沢山才能がありますよ！娘と彼女と一緒にゲームをするの大好きです。それにホラーの映画を見るの好きです。

今日の作文はここまでです。最後まで読んでくれてありがとうございます。またねー。

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CorentinG

Aug. 18, 2025

Meine Reise in Europa, Folge 3: Papst und Kaiser

Nach ein Frühstück bevor dem Treviso-Brunnen, bin ich der Vatikan gehen gesehen. Ich habe nur 15 minuten gewartet, weil es nicht so vielen Menschen gab, deshalb war ich glücklich. Das Gebäude war sehr beeindruckend und der Innerraum des Petersdoms war ein wahres Wunder.
Auf dem Weg des Circus Maximo, bin ich den Tiber entlang spaziert, wo ich ein Eis gekauft habe. Es ist schnell gesmolzen aber es hat mich gut getan.
Nächste habe ich die antike Ruinen besucht, besonders die des Kaiserpalast, der war so groß wie eine Labyrinth. Ich bin im Hotel zurück gegangen um ein Nickerchen zu machen, weil ich ein bisschen müde war.
Nachdem ich aufgewacht bin, bin ich in der Stadt gelaufen und habe ich ein Pizza für das Abendessen gekauft.

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Ciferjaques

Aug. 18, 2025

08/18

去年はJLPTを参加しました、でも残念ながら、通りませんでした。
今年もJLPTを参加したいです、今度は合格してほしい。

でも、先週と先々週はゲームを遊びました、やばいwwwww
NO MAN'S SKYは本当に楽しいです。

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JAVIER_MARTINEZ

Aug. 18, 2025

MY BROTHER IS LEAVING THE CITY FOR A YEAR

My brother Pablo and I are like best friends. We really get on well with each other and we always have fun together. He's older than me and he will end his degree, but he is going to finish it in Praga.
He will do an erasmus the next year, it's similar to a scholarship. Our goverment will pay him an amount of money and he will be able to get his career done in another country.
I'm really upset because he is like the union of all of my family, I feel much more comfortable with my family if he is next to me. Plus, I always do activities with him or talk about our lives everyday, so I will feel really alone without Pablo.
One of the last things we are going to do before he leaves is a tatoo about us, we are thinking about some ideas but we are not sure enough for now.

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evanweber723

Aug. 18, 2025

Se vivessi in Italia...

Se vivessi in Italia, probabilmente abitassi in una città grande come Roma, Napoli, o Palermo. Amo grandi città e anche se mi trasferissi in un piccolo luogo visitassi altre città spesso. Mi concentrei a diventare fluente in Italiano più velocemente possibile. Sono sicuro che le Gente ci incontro sarebbero estremamente gentili e vorrei a parlare con li quando posso. Forse tornerò a scuola in Italia, non Sono sicuro cosa voglio fare quando sarò finito con il mio viaggio. Allora, potessi volere fare qualcosa di diverso da quello che facevo prima, cioè ingegneria. Voglio dire, qualcune cosa io faccia, spero abbia scopo e significato.

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JAVIER_MARTINEZ

Aug. 18, 2025

I'M DISSAPOINTED WITH MY FAMILY

I had forgotten how this page was called and I had to ask to chat gpt.
I just want to talk about how dissapointed I am with my aunt; few days ago, I texted in this website about the situation with my aunt and her cat.
She asked me if I could take care of her cat again, in my mind I was like: "can you please stop travelling or at least don't call me for this fucking job again". However, I was positive and I thought that this time would be different and she would pay me, because she was going to the beach for 1 week.
I told her that I would be her cat's carer.
When she came back, she didn't even thank me for everything I did, wtf. From now on, I'm totally sure that I will never help her, she's not gratteful, that's obvious.

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Emilysoares

Aug. 18, 2025

Tenses of my day

1. Today, I’m not very productive, I finished some tasks and learned English for 1 hour.
2. Now, I go to get lunch and watch some videos or read a book.
3. I’m tired, but the day starts now.
4. In this moment, I’m reading a book called “As coisas que você só vê quando desacelera” by Haemin Sunin.

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MikaSwedish

Aug. 18, 2025

Mitt sätt att lära mig ett nytt språk

Bortsett från alla kurser inom svenska som andraspråkutbildningen har jag läst tidigare i 2024 Bageri och Konditori kursen på Komvux i Umeå. Kursen varade i nästan ett år och avslutade jag den förra april.

Alla kurser jag har läst sedan jag kom till Sverige har gått bra, trots att jag har lat för att prata svenska ibland. Jag jobbade först som servitris på deltid i Blå Huset och nu jobbar jag i Rost lite mindre än på heltid.

Mitt modersmål är franska och jag kan också engelska och spanska. Eftersom jag redan talade tre språk innan jag började med svenska är det ganska lätt för mig att lära mig nya för att jag redan har mina strategier.

Det svåraste för mig är att prata, särskilt med de långa och korta vokalerna eftersom jag aldrig kan höra skillnaden. Det är också lite svårt för mig att första folk ibland men bara för att jag har hörselbearbetningsstörning. Jag har svårt att tolka vad folk säger i alla mina språk då är det inte bara ett problem med svenska.

Jag lär mig svenska mest genom att skriva mina egna texter och samtala med svenska vänner. Jag lyssnar aldrig på radio på grund av min hörselstörning men jag lyssnar mycket på svenska låtar samtidigt jag läser låtens text. Jag läser inte så ofta nu men gillar att hålla mig uppdaterad med världsnyheterna genom att läsa 8 Sidor varje dag. Jag brukar inte titta på TV så ofta men när jag gör det tittar jag på katalogen från SVT Play, typ serien Bonusfamilj, dokumentärer samt barnprogrammet.

Jag studerar bäst på jobbet efter mitt pass. Jag gillar att ha en blandning av tystnad och ljud och jag inte kan ha detta varken hemma eller på biblioteket. Dessutom finns det för många saker hemma som tar min uppmärksamhet från studier och temperaturer på biblioteket är alltid för varmt eller för kallt.

Om du skulle be mig mina bästa inlärningstips skulle jag svara att det fungerar jättebra att hitta en ny favorit musik artist som du kommer att älska och vilja lyssna på hela tiden. Dessutom hjälper det att tvinga sig själv att tänka på det nya språket så ofta som möjligt.

Jag hade inte förväntat mig att arbeta på en café efter jag klarade Bageriet utbildningen men jag är glad här och vill helst jobba här i länge. Det är mycket stress under lunchen för att det kommer så många kunder, men annars gillar jag att jobbet handlar mest runt rutiner.

Det viktigaste för mig med svenska är att kunna prata och förstå bra, främst för att jag gör ett serviceinriktat jobb, men jag vill också kunna skriva bra. För att nå detta sista mål behöver jag lära mig nya ord varje dag för att öka mitt ordförråd.

På grund av min hörselstörning är det ganska svårt för mig att lyssna på något, typ på tv eller radio när det inte finns ingen undertexter, då behöver jag ett så högt som möjligt volym och att kunna sitta så nära som möjligt från radio.

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Tuba

Aug. 18, 2025

The Black Sea

I would like to share an article I read about theBlack Sea.
The article also mentions that recently, geological and archaeological discoveries have changed the way we think about the Black Sea. Actually they say that it was originally a freshwater lake. Because all glaciers melted during the last Ice Age and came out it. The Black Sea became salty when the Mediterranean spilt over this age.

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lazypolyglot

Aug. 18, 2025

Quel genre de musique aimez vous le plus, ou détestez vous le plus ? Pourquoi ?

Mon genre de musique préferé

Pour moi c'est une question très difficile parce que j'écoutes beaucoup de genres. Il y a quelques ans, quand j'étais un ado, j'ai écouté la musique veille des années 1960 et 1970 et quand j'étais un peu plus âgée, j'ai aimé la musique indie des 1990. Aujourd'hui j'aime ces genre parce que j'éprouve de nostalgie, mais j'ai aussi etendue mon goût. Récemment j'ai apprécié la musique arabe et la musique classique. J'aime beaucoup le chanteur palestinien Saint Levant qui chante en arabe, anglais, et même en français et je le verrai en live bientôt. D'ailleurs j'adore la musique classique depuis étant une môme. J'ai appris jouer du piano et du flûte quand j'étais très jeune alors je pense que je peux comprendre cette musique de façon que des personnes qui n'ont pas appris jouer d'un instrument peuvent. Généralement, j'écoutes le genre de musique qui corresponde à mon humeur et le « Vibe » (comme on dit en anglais) que je veux vivre à ce moment-là.
Savez-vous qu'il y a de recherche qui suggère que notre goût de musique pour la vie est impacté le plus par ce que nous écoutons à l'âge 13-14 ?

Merci d'avoir corrigé

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Monsieur_Elephant

Aug. 18, 2025

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Antik Mısır

Antik Mısırı kültürü çok seviyorum! Bu tutkum gençken doğdu. Mısır tanrıların küçük yontuların koleksiyonum var. Her biri küçük yontu bir kitapçıkla satıldı. Bu kitapçıklarda, tanrının tarikatı ve semboları hakkında, arkeolojik yerler, Mısır dili, mühim firavunlar hakkında bilgi vardı. Koleksiyon harika!

Mükemmel Antik Mısır'dan çok az şey miras aldık, ama o bize güzel bir hediye iletti: yazıyı! Latin, Yunan, Arap, İbrani, Devanagari, Thai, Gürcü, Kambocalı yazısı... Hepsi Fenike alfabesiden geldiler. Fenike alfabesi kendisi basitleştirilmiş hiyerogliflerden geldi. Çılgınlık, değil mi?

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Rastochi

Aug. 18, 2025

Acabo de ver un video sobre el famoso Karl Marx

En este escrito, voy a recapitular lo que apprendi el video del youtuber "platonto" :

- La filosofia de Karl Marx se construiye sobre el siguiente principio : el ser humano quien debe trabajar para expresarse, es un animalo practico
-Karl Marx odiaba el capitalismo, sin embargo, no rechazo totalmente porque hay que llevar el capitalismo a su extremo y despues repartir la riqueza entre la gente : no podemos repartir la riqueza si no hay riqueza, pero es gracias al capitalismo que un pobre puede estar rico, en un sistemo feuda no es posible.

Ademas la filosofia de Karl Marx es malinterpretado de muchas personas, por ejemplo la lucha de classe no es la revolucion perso solo un evolucion de los trabajadores.

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paula9099

Aug. 18, 2025

If you could have any superpower, what would it be and why?

The real advantage of teleportation

I would love to have the power of teleportation. I love travelling but is something expensive and, depend on the place where do you want to go, you will need to stay more days or less. I have always dreamt with having a coffee in Rome on Monday, to see the London Bridge on Tuesday, or enjoying a meal in Chile on Thursday and go back to work next day without jet lag.
But the really important part of teleportation to me is when you go out to have some drinks or you go to a party and it gets really late, with teleportation you don´t need to wait for the subway! you go directly home yo your bed! It`s totally the best superpower that I can imagine.

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TOMO_o

Aug. 18, 2025

How often do you go to the theater?

I don't go to the theater mostly. Actually, I went to see "Lion King" and "Cats" just one time when I was kid, since then I've never gone to the theater. I prefer the movie theater and have gone to there several times these days.

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Lerner

Aug. 18, 2025

Den gleichen Inhalt mehrmals konsumieren

Es gibt viele Menschen, die dieselbe Bücher oder Filme wieder und wieder lesen oder ansehen. Wie immer, gibt es sowohl Vor- als auch Nachteile darin, und ich möchte sie heute aufzählen. Einerseits, wenn jemandem etwas Harmloses gefällt, gibt es ein Grund dafür, darauf zu verzichten? Außerdem braucht man manchmal viel Zeit dafür, ein neues gutes Buch oder einen Film zu finden. Andererseits, wie kann man seine Horizonte erweitern, wenn man keine neuen Informationen und Meinungen aussetzt?
Darüber hinaus gilt dieses Problem nicht nur für Medienstücke, sondern auch für alles andere: das Essen, das Reisen, das Kennenlernen neuer Leute usw. Ich habe vor kurzem mit einem Freund gesprochen, der sich „House“ elf mal angesehen hat. Er leidet an allen obergenannten Problemen und versucht fleißig, sie zu überwinden. Aber für solche Menschen ist es wirklich schwer, die Komfortzone zu verlassen.

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LLLeslie

Aug. 18, 2025

Do you like to order takeout?

Recently, all the food selling platforms are having a buzi war against each other, which benefits us consumers a lot—We get so many coupons for ordering takeouts. Not that I'm a fan of eating takeout, but it did save me some money. And most importantly, time. I don't cook, so I eat out. But it takes me more than 10 minutes to get to the restaurant I usually eat at. Back and forth, that adds up to nearly half an hour. Nevertheless, I believe every free luch(?) has a consequence. When the war is over and the backdrop goes down, maybe it's the time we pay double.

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cerise

Aug. 18, 2025

Japans Nachlichten

Seit der letzten Tragödie spricht der ganz Japan nur von Bären. Oft sehe ich unabsichtlich die Videos, in den Menschen, die von Bären angegrifft wurden, ihre Erfahren erzählen. Ihre Geschichten sind sehr grausam, sodass ich hier darüber nicht schreiben kann. Ehrlich gesagt möchte ich solche Geschichten gar nicht hören.

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bobjohn

Aug. 18, 2025

Daily Life: Part 7

Today, I want to share some tips about how to abolish your bad habit. Yesterday, one kind friend who communicates here taught me some shimmery advice. I'm just following one of advice. It's worked! I just studied English without my phone, and the result is that I divided my study time by 2 times than before. While I had been studying, I never wanted to grab my phone, because it was in another room. In conclusion, it's a good way for me to avoid scrolling phone during studying. By the way, just want to say thanks you! My pal!

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MatthiasPL

Aug. 18, 2025

How long is the game?

Hello! I would like share my opinion about the games pricing in realtion to lenghts. Many computer games have beautiful graphics and maybe intresting plot, but they are short. New games cost sometimes even 60USD. It's not just about a price but lenght this games. If games cost that much they should be at least on hundred hours of gamplay, but instead we get games which last for several hours... Of course graphics and plot are very important, but which such short game I can't even enjoy this, because many game are simply not create to replay. That's why I like strategy games. I can play multiple campanies and don't get bored.

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Irina1982

Aug. 18, 2025

Sentence practice 03

1 We need to take into account the society and the economic circumstances.
We have to consider the society and the economic environment.

2 High-density planting is threatening the biodiversity.
High-density planting has constituted a threat to the biodiversity.

3 Receiving education equally helps students slove the problem of getting low grades.
Equal access to education can help students with their problems of not performing well in study.

4 Access to different culture can stimulate innovation.
Exposure to different culture can promote innovation.

5 Governments should attach more importance to social welfare, especially the medical benifits.

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Fuji

Aug. 18, 2025

August 17th, 2025

Today, I woke up at 6:30.
I was happy, because I woke up at 8:00 recently.
After, I studied.
Afternoon, I called a my friend.
She was so funny.
She makes me laugh.

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15mei15

Aug. 18, 2025

My favorite core

I like watching TikTok. Since there are many "Core". Do you know core? It is explained as aesthetic or kind of beauty. For example, my favorite core is autumn core. According to fandom, autumn core is "Autumncore, or Fallcore is an aesthetic focusing on the season known as Autumn." I like it. Deep color, deep atmosphere and a slight chill make me comfortable and emotional. And as a person who live in most humid and warm country in the world, autumn's dry and sadness seems so romantic. I can't stop scrolling the autumn core page on TikTok.

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