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May 14, 2025
1 mois à Lyon
Je suis allée à Lyon pour étudier le français pour 1 mois en Avril à Alliance Française. Mon niveau c'etait A2N2, ça veut dire le derniere niveau des débutants. Aprés avoir fini le cours, Je suis dans le niveau intermédiaire, mais je ne me sens pas encore à l'aise de parler le français en dehors des cours. j'ai eu un excellent résultat en class, sourtout en parlant avec mes amis éleves, mais je perds beaucoup d'opportunité de parle la langue parce je ne suis pas sûr de moi dans ce sens.
Le weekend dérniere je suis allée à un aperitif avec 2 français et ils ont dû parler anglais à cause de moi. Aprés je avoir passé 1 mois à Lyon en étudiant le français? Sérieux! C'est pas vrai! Donc, maintenant je recommence à etudier.
La bonne nouvelle c'est que pour la première fois j'ai réussi communiquer avec mes beaux-parents. Certainement j'ai fait beaucoup des erreurs mais je pouvais voir leurs joie en me parlant. C'etait vraiment cool...super!
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
Talking to people
Humans are born with a need of social belonging. Therefore it is important to have people in your life you enjoy talking to. Personally, I like talking to my friends in school during the breaks. Since we have similar interests, there's always a fun conversation. Usually, these are about our private lives, school or other, completely random things. With one of my friends I'm talking about our future plans often. We want to study law together and I think it's going to be great fun. Who do you talk to the most and what are your favorite topics to talk about?
May 14, 2025
L'Alchimiste
Aujourd'hui, je veux parler sur le livre l'Alchimiste, l'un parmi mes livres préférés. Est ce que tu imagines que j'ai voulu lire ce livre pendant 2 ans ?! Mais je l'ai abandonné toujours après un chapitre, peut être parce que je suis une perfectionniste et j'aimerai comprendre chaque mot et phrase, ce qui me gène beaucoup dans ma vie. Parfois, l'acte de commencer est l'acte le plus nécessaire pour atteindre quelque chose.
Je pense que je suis allée plus loin ce que je voudrais dire, mais j'ai voulu juste citer ma quotidienne lutte avec les livres en langues étrangers; Parlant sur l'Alchimiste, je trouve que c'est un livre qui me permet de me decouvrir, de comprendre la nature humaine, avec une histoire très intéressante. l'auteur a nous transmit son message à travers les adventures de santiago, un jeune berger qui voulait trouver son trésor et écrire sa légende personnelle, il a traversé le grand desert, survécu à des conditions supremes qui ont failli le mener à la mort, pour qu'il enfin comprendre que le trésor se trouve chez lui même. Je pense chaque personne peut interpréter ce livre selon sa propre mentalité dans la vie, il y a des lecteurs qui trouvent la fin non satisfaisante. mais je pense que c'est la meilleure fin possible pour une histoire à une dimension philosophique.
Est ce que tu as lit ce livre ? qu'est ce que tu penses ?
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
A night without my son
Japanese elementary schools usually have an event called “staying-over learning” for 5th graders.
It is an overnight trip led by school. The destination is some public facilities in countryside, and there kids enjoy outdoor activities such as hiking and camp fire.
My 10-year old son is out for that, so I and my husband are staying home as usual but…
it is unusually quiet a night.
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
O meu primeiro post
Na praia da Nazaré ontem:
Ontem a minha família decidiu ir à praia por volta das duas horas da tarde. O tempo estava perfeito, e nós estávamos entusiasmados. Eu ouvi dizer que o mar de Portugal é geralmente muito frio, mas quando eu mergulhei pela primeira vez, pensei que o mar de Portugal é bastante agradável.
Então eu estava animada para nadar ontem. Mas quando chegamos à praia da Nazaré, as ondas eram excepcionalmente grandes e fortes! No dia anterior, porque as ondas eram calmas e suaves, eu fiquei surpreendida! Então não podíamos nadar, é por isso nós só sentamos na sombra do guarda-sol e olhamos as ondas durante circa de duas horas. Nós ouvimos música e comemos as pipocas também.
Quando nós decidimos regressar a casa por volta das quatro horas, atrás de saímos da praia, nós vimos duas pessoas que decidiram nadar nas ondas perigosas! Os nadadores-salvadores precisavam de ir de barco para ajudar as pessoas. Foi muito assustadora de ver, mas eu estou feliz por eles estavam seguros!
- thank you for reading. I have been studying Portuguese for about 2 months and am trying to write more for practice.
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
Mein Bruder
Ich habe ein Geschwister, einen Bruder. Er ist ziemlich älter als ich. Wir haben einen Unterschied von acht Jahren. Daher haben wir miteinander nicht lange verbracht. Wir sprechen leider nicht zu viel, aber zu wenig. Wir texten miteinander nur, wenn wir Geburtstag haben. Als ich jung war, haben wir viel miteinander gespielt. Ich denke dass, mein Bruder sehr klug und intelligent ist. Er hat viel an einem jungen Alter erreicht. Ich bin stolz auf ihn, aber ich kann nicht das sagen. Ich finde es schwierig.
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
10 minute writing challenge with two words
— Awful. Honor
The competition was never just a competition. No words can describe when you heard your name as one of the earliest, the Honor that was not technically for me—it should not be.
Honor. A noun, a simple word for some, but it was not like that at all, it was a distinction from everyone else. Something that makes you unique from others. The feeling of not achieving the honor I deserve one word can only describe—Awful…
I was part of our school publication, and luckily got the position as Senior Feature Writer and eventually compete for the same category. The time was precious at that moment, when you cannot think of any words make it redundant—but with more sense. The time was precious as well because every minute you cannot think of something to write you are already wasting it.
Now move forward for the awardee out of all writers there—something I cannot count. I been part of the 10th placers and we, I was just waiting for the right moment for my name to be called onto the stage. Take note I don’t want my name to be called—not because I don’t want but instead I know I placed lower than I expected.
May 14, 2025
Mercoledì 14 maggio
Il lavoro è diventato troppo stressante. Sono grata di averne uno, però magari i colleghi fossero più logici!
Dopo aver pranzato, posso sopportare meglio gli impegni. Non vedevo l'ora che arrivasse la pausa pranzo.
Forse è ora di rallentare il ritmo e finalmente pensare di più a me stessa. Non è normale sentirmi come se svolgessi anche le mansioni degli altri.
A parte questo, forse devo essere un po' più egoista e cercare di migliorarmi, invece di prestare attenzione agli altri.
May 14, 2025
Ein guter Freund...
Ein guter Freund oder eine gute Freundin ist jemand, dem sich über man kümmert. Sie hören deine Gefühle und geben vielleicht Ratschläge. Man kann auch, dem spät an der Nacht telefonieren. Sie wurden wahrscheinlich den Anruf annehmen. Ihr könnt mit dem deine Sorgen teilen. Ich denke jetzt, dass es schwierig eine gute Freundin zu suchen ist.
May 14, 2025
My grammar
I've been speaking English for years now but it doesn't mean my English is perfect.
Actually I reached a point where I'll just talk the way I think it sounds good, but unfortunately it doesn't mean it's natural for native speakers' ears. So I want to fix that.
A little bit about myself: I'm a translator (not to English, but from English) and I learned most of my vocab from reading books and watching YouTube.
I watched A LOT of cringe stuff back in the day. And people say my accent is a mix of different countries which I agree since I also watch a lot of foreigners talk and got their speech pattern overtime.
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
Il tempo di oggi
Qui il tempo è bello. Il sole splende, il cielo è azzurro con alcune nuvole, e la temperatura è piacente. Abbiamo un proverbio che si può tradurre letteralmente como "in aprile, non scopriti di un filo (= non togliti un adumento), ma in maio, fai ciò che vuoi". Significa che in aprile, il tempo è ancora incerto, con cali di temperatura e acquazzioni frequenti, e le belle giornate iniziano realmente in maio. Non è sempre vero, perché a volte abbiamo bellissimi aprili, ma questo anno, sembra che il proverbio sia giusto.
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
my wind down routine after a long day
When i get home , I change into comfortable pijamas , I make wuduu to pray el asr , empty my bag and organise my desk .
After that , I go to the kitchen to eat something , and then relax in my bad and watch an episode of my current serie , if I did a workout earlier that day , I will then put a hair oil and take a relaxing bath , around 8pm I'm gonna review what we had earlier in school , have dinner , pray el ichaa . and I always try to make a tomorrow to do list to keep track of my goals , if i felt well and a little energized , I make a cup of hot vervain tea and read few pages of my book , around 11pm I do my skincare (very simple , a cleanser and a moisterizer ) and brush my teeth to jump into my bed ( my fav part ).
Well i guess that's my perfect evening routine , of course sometimes I don't do it all , it depends much about my energy levels and my mood (well to be transparent , if I felt shitty i'm going to binge watch or sleep veryy early ) , but I have the must do, like my prayers , one hour study session and reviewing my day and my weekly plan , that's all , simple right? what do you think?
May 14, 2025
It's my first time to come here
I had a job interview today and got back to my place earlier than normal
took only a few minutes rest, went to couple of bicycle shops to fix my own one.
rest of them said they couldn't help me cause they don't have spokes fits to my bicycle
but the last shop owner found another way to solve this problem which is just changing the whole wheel
I was pretty tired of visiting shops in a row and like okay please change the wheel
this is the story about how I spent money today thank you
May 14, 2025
MY PROJECT
i have completed my undergraduation and in our last semister , we have to submit a project and my course is bachelor of technology and my branch is electronics communication engineering and my project is on unmanned aerial vehicles, intially the title of my project is vehicle tracking using UAV but later we changed it to vehicle detection using UAV, we changed our project because vehicle detection is easy when compared to vehicle tracking , the main reason is to change our project is , in vehicle tracking we should take many classifications like car, truck,bus,pedestrains etc but in case of vehicle detection there is only two cases, that is vehicle or no vehicle.the thing is we haven't consulted our project guide to change our project title, we ourselves have changed our project title. thank god, our project guide haven't found it. anyway in our project we detect vehicles , we train a dataset in matlab application by using code, our dataset name is VISDRONE, after training the dataset we get testing accuracy and training accuracy and we used a technique called GOOGLENET, the reason for using googlenet is ,it gives high accuracy, that is above 90%, anyway the final review of my project is still pending and it will happen in the month of june.
May 14, 2025