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May 15, 2025
Une invitation
La semaine dernière, j’ai reçu une invitation. Mon amie, Nora, qui habite en Malaysie, a décidé de visiter l’Australie. Elle a plusieurs amis qui habitent à Canberra et elle a l’intention de rester ici pendant quatre jours.
L’une de mes aimes, Georgina, a organisé une petite soirée chez elle pour rencontrer Nora. Georgina est sympa et elle adore des fêtes. Le thème du soirée est Pizza. Chacun doit apporter une pizza à partager.
J’ai décidé de préparer ma pizza à partir de zéro ce que je n’ai jamais fait auparavant. Je me suis demandée si je suis trop ambitieuse, trop audacieuse. J’espère fortement que non. Alors, j’ai trouvé une recette ce que me semble assez facile. Je croise les doigts pour que ma pizza soit bonne, soit délicieuse et ne soit pas un échec.
May 15, 2025
May 15, 2025
J’ai voté
L’élections australienne aura lieu demain. Chaque fois je vote en avance. De cette façon, j’évite les foules qui attendent jusqu’au dernier moment, le jour de l’élection. L’autre chose que je déteste est de faire la queue. Cela me semble être un gaspillage de temps.
Normalement, les centres de vote ouvrent deux semaines en avance et je m’y présent la première semaine. Cette fois -ci, j’étais très occupée et n’avais pas l’occasion de voter pendant la première semaine. Alors j’y suis allée aujourd’hui, le jour avant l’élections et à mon horreur, le centre de vote était tout à fait bondé.
Je devais faire la queue pendant une heure: une énorme perte de temps. Pendant que j’attendais, plusieurs partisans de la campagne m’approchaient. Ils voulaient me parler de leur candidat et m’inciter de voter pour lui. Ils avaient des brochures et c’était impoli de ne pas leur parler. C’était agaçant et j’étais fatiguée.
May 14, 2025
Esercizi di frasi semplici - Parte Diciotto
Abbiamo dovuto attendere il nostro turno per riprendere il servizio.
La scena finale del film ha avuto un effetto straordinario sul pubblico.
Il professore ha spiegato l’argomento con la massima chiarezza.
Dopo la fermata, il treno ha ripreso a scendere lentamente lungo la valle.
Per ottenere risultati, ognuno deve trovare il proprio metodo.
Il romano ha raccontato una scena divertente accaduta al mercato.
Il servizio clienti è stato straordinario, hanno risolto tutto subito.
Scendere a compromessi è spesso necessario per ottenere il massimo.
Lo scopo di questa regola non mi è chiaro.
Le piace chiacchierare con i suoi amici.
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
Émotions et mémoire.
Récemment, j'ai découvert une chose fascinante : quand une émotion est profondément touchée ou joyeusement éveillée, notre mémoire devient plus vive. C'est tellement vrai. Quand j'apprenais l'anglais, il n'y avait pas encore Internet comme aujourd'hui. Il fallait simplement mémoriser des mot et des phrases avec des manuels. J'ai toujours eu du mal avec ce genre d'apprentissage par coeur sans les sentir. Mais avec le français, tout est différent. Grâce à Internet, je peux chercher des expressions qui résonnent avec mes propres émotions. Et ça, c'est formidable. C'est même devenu un plaisir pour moi. Quand une émotion précède le mot, je le retiens beaucoup mieux. Et en plus, ces mots, ce sont les miens. Ils reviennent, encore et encore. Je crois sincèrement que c'est la répétition de ce qui nous tient à coeur qui ancre profondément la mémoire. Je suis vraiment reconnaissante d'avoir trouvé ce LangCorrect, ce lieu où je peux partager ce que je ressens. Merci.
May 14, 2025
The best job in the world )
It is hard to choose a particular job, even though we can immediately mention dozens: prestigious, well-paid, a job everyone dreams of.
And sometimes it works, but there is one more perspective which relates to the correlation between a particular person and a particular job, when we say that they are off for that job, even if such a job doesn't bring a lot of happiness to its owner.
And discussing the best job, we should not forget about the relative character of it, there is no job without the man. And the man or woman is important, important is their attitude, in our case, their attitude to the job. And then we can say that any job could be the best job ... For some of them.
So then the question should be rather put not the best or worst job generally, but the best and worst job for someone.
Since you can even be a king, living an aristocratic life and at the same time be deeply unhappy.
In such a case, the nature of our perception of 'the best' or, correspondingly, worst job, slightly shifted from outer characteristics, as attractive as they ever could be, to a more specific inner perception.
And then even a job which is considered to be not socially respectful could bring a lot of joy to someone. I recently read about a man who was a journalist who interviewed a celebrity, but after being fired, he started to work as a driver of a garbage truck and found peace and happiness because he wanted to be in the open air and do physical work without engless stressful searching a new topic for a new article.
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
About Siria
President Donald Trump, announced this Tuesday penalizes to Siria after a conversation with the heir prince of Saudi Arabia, Mohamed Bin Salam. "After a conversation about Siria with the prince and Turkish president, they both are friends of me and ask me about sanctions against Siria. I will punish Siria because of its acts.
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
Re: Possible new job
Hey Bex,
thanks for trusting me with this! There are several advantages and disadvantages to working from home.
First of all, you're saving tons of time because you don't have to commute to work anymore. If your new workplace is close by anyways, other arguments might be more pivotal in your decision-making.
Additionally, you would be home during week days as well, which has multiple advantages. You get to spend more time with your family and in case of an emergency at home, you're right there. Last week my daughter was sick, but since I work from home, my husband and I could both go to work without leaving her home alone.
There is a few disadvantages, though. You have to figure out for yourself if you prefer working alone or not. You won't be in an office with your colleagues but instead will only talk to them during meetings. If you are a social person, working from home might not be for you. At the beginning of my job I was struggling to be productive and get done as much work as I could in an office. I got used to that pretty quickly, but that's another thing you have to evaluate for yourself.
The things mentioned above are learnings from my own experience and doesn't necessarily apply to everyone, but I hope I could help you at least a little.
I hope to speak you soon again!
Best regards,
xxx
May 14, 2025
Korean history
A few years ago, I watched a documentary about the history of Korea. I'm genuinely interested in history, but the Cold War always catches my interest. The documentary was talking about the Korean War, which was one of the several proxy wars. The narrators goal to reach out to as many people as possible became clear in the interesting way of portraying the history. It helped me understand the reasons and outcomes of the war and depicted different point of views to help the target audience to dive deep into the events. I recommend the documentary to everyone out there, as there are many takeaways that we can apply on our own lives.
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
とても忙しくて、眠れなかった一日
昨日は本当に大変な一日でした。仕事がすごく忙しくて、ほとんど残業みたいになってしまいました。それに、勉強もしなければいけなかったので、時間がぜんぜん足りませんでした。仕事のあとにすぐ勉強をして、気がついたら夜遅くなっていて、寝る時間がなくなってしまいました。結局、一睡もできませんでした。
仕事と勉強の両方をやるのはとてもむずかしくて、体も頭もすごく疲れました。朝になってもまだ何も終わっていないような気がして、気持ちも重かったです。今日は体調が悪くて、少し熱っぽいし、頭も痛いです。体がだるくて、集中するのがむずかしいです。
たぶん、ちゃんと休まなかったからだと思います。でも、やることが多すぎて、なかなか休めません。できれば今日は早く寝たいです。明日は少しでも元気になれたらいいなと思っています。
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
私の大好きなビデオゲームのランキング。
一ヶ月前に、私の大好きな歌のランキングを書きました。今日、同じことがしたいけど、今回話題はビデオゲームです！
様々なジャンルがすきからそれぞれ一つを選びます。
一番：「Hollow Knight」。ジャンルはMetridvaniaです。このゲームは最初に買ったものとまだゲームの中で一番の大好きなです！物語が面白かったとゲームプレイが楽しかったです！ちょっと難しいけど悪くない。ほかの好きなMetroidvaniaゲームは「Ori」です。
二番：「Persona 5 Royale」。ジャンルはRPGです。少し月前にこのゲームを終えました、物語は長すぎるですよね…最高なことが音楽です、絶対に。戦いもいいです。私はもっとこういうゲームをやりたいです。
三番：「Muse Dash」。このゲームは音楽ゲームです！私の恐らく大好きなジャンルですよ、こう言うゲームを遊びすぎました。音楽ゲームが大好きです、だけだ。他の好きな音楽ゲームは「Cytoid」と「UNBEATABLE」と「Osu!」です。遊びなさいよ！
私はまだもっとゲームがある！たぶん先回はもっとを書きます。
あなたの大好きなゲームは何ですか？
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
I start to practice my English
Hi! I want to tell you about my day. Today I had an appointment with my psychologist. She told me one very nice idea - there are two types of people. The first one has just one or two interests or hobbies, and they have a lot of skills in these subjects. The second one has a lot of interest and lighting knowledge in these areas. So I'm the second type. My psychologist gave me homework - make a list of all my interests. Now I'm feeling very strong motivation. I want to start exploring a new interest. In the next message, I'll tell you about this interest. Have a good day! Bye-bye! 😘
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
Perchè volgio imparare l'Italiano
Voglio studiare l'Italiano perchè è la lingua della mia patria. Non ho andato in Italia ma un giorno lo farò. Ogni giorno studio la grammatica, ascolto un podcast or un video e leggo qualcosa in iitaliano. Ho un partner di scambio linguistico e parliamo spesso, a volte in inglese e a volte in italiano. Per me, lo più difficile e scrivere, ma il mio obiettivo e parlare l'idioma al livelo C1. Lo so che è un obiettivo difficile di raggiungere, però sono determinato!