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Nov. 22, 2019
Vacations last year (Problem solution story)
There were many bad roads we drive in the way to the beach. the wholes on the pavement are so deep you can put your foot your calf and your knee inside and keep going. Because of this, the car had problems of the tires and one exploded when it went into a whole. the tools had stayed in the garage, and we could not see any help 360 degrees around. we were by ourselves. good thing is mum has many resources of the hands, and quickly found a way to make lever with branches she spotted in the distance, so after breaking them off the trees, and with the use of a big rock, all the family stands on top of the branch which is by now leaning over the big rock on the side of the car with the wheel that exploded in the deep whole, so after several up and down motions, the car begins to give in, and little by little it moves to the side, and the hope of all around begins to rise, and in the final moment, we did it. With all the participation of every member of the family in this journey we push the cars approximately 37 degrees in a direction away from the hole, and now it is free. we have regained the liberty of the car, but still have most important problem: the wheel is exploded, and pushing car is not an option, because it is heavy, and we are strong but not that strong, so in the final instance, my brother Marco remembers we have coupon for $350.00 we won on a Black Friday sale, and he thinks we don't have to preoccupy for the wheel because we can only buy one more wheel with no difficulty if we only go to store and exchange our coupon for new wheel. My mum is not sure if this is good thought because this is not the only whole we see on the road. the holes are all over the pavement and some deeper than others, others deep enough to go in up to stomach, and she worried that we are driving and fit the other wheels in other holes on the road, and we have the problem of exploded wheels again, except this times we may not do much to solutions the problem, because there are no branches in the distance we can see, only grass and that does not have the strength necessary to push car away from hole if this happens again. the good thing is my family is supernatural intelligent and my brother Paul decides to say my mum the solution is driving by the side of the road not on the road. of course she says, no matter the exploded wheel, the sides of the road doesnt have much holes so the problem is not that obvious. with plan in mind, we drive at full velocity to the store and exchange the coupon, we got the best new wheel we needed to change for the exploded one and we manage to stay at the beach before the sun goes under. we had a rocky start to the beach trip, but it was great after all at the final. This is my trip to the beach and the memory i remember of the problems and solution we found to work together to never surrender in the presence of a trouble that is not enough to stop us.
Nov. 22, 2019
Nov. 22, 2019
練習０２
前回の投稿は残念ながら添削されていないけどまた投稿やってみます。
練習なので勉強している文法に合わせている文を書いてみました。
ばこそ
1. 頭が良ければこそ、ちゃんと学校に通うべきだ。
2. 身長が低ければこそ、姿勢を注意するのだ。
とあって
3. 晴れている秋の日とあって、紅葉を見に行く人が多い。
4. 悠介くんは就職しているとあって、髪を黒く染めた。
ではあるまいし
5. デブではあるまいし、元気な食欲があることだけだよ。
6. 健康が悪いのではあるまいし、階段はそんなに疲れるものじゃない。
手前
7. おじさんにいつもアドバイスをもらっている手前、おじさんに何かがあったら手伝えたい。
8. うさぎの手前、獣医に行くのはすごく怖い。
ゆえに
9. 実家の事情ゆえに、結婚式に出席できません。
10. 先輩にひどくいじめられた故に、会社を辞めることにしました。
Nov. 22, 2019
Nov. 22, 2019
Das Leprous Konzert
Am Dienstag, den neunzehnten November, bin ich in einen des besten Konzerts meines Lebens gewesen. Die Band Leprous hat in der Freiheizhalle in München für ungefähr zwei Stunden lang gespielt. Vorher haben zwei andere Bands auch Musik gespielt, weil sie das Konzert für Leprous öffnen haben. Ich war in der ersten Reihe und habe alle die Bandmitglieder sehr nähe gesehen.
Nov. 22, 2019
Preference
( Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. )
There are over hundreds of ways to complete projects, some like to do it with co-workers, others prefer doing by themself. Both have upsides and downsides, working with other people will gain vary viewpoints from them, and learn how to respect from different opinions; however, doing work alone that is able to state their own points completely.
To begin with, there are a lot of views for a thing because everyone is from different places, growing in different families, and different education. To hear differing aspects is one of the life lessons which will probably give you other ideas that you have not ever thought of; learn more knowledge which you have not expected to. In addition, one of the more important things of working on school projects is a discussion. Students can learn how to communicate with others who have opposite sights and respect them, which definitely affect on their social network. If someone who did not listen to other viewpoints and only insist own point, he/she might do not have many friends. Moreover, having a good communication skill and accepting others advises which will help you to earn more life-enriching experience, and let you become a better person.
On the other hand, work school projects on your own are a good way to state own's points completely. Students are able to illustrate the self idea and give a whole comprehensive picture to someone who examines their works. Furthermore, doing homework alone is more efficient. The reseasons of this are that you can schedule your time, make a plan and complete it as soon as possible, and does not have to match-up co-workers' schedule that will cut much more time.
To put it briefly, some students prefer doing assignments with a group over than working alone. This is because listen to different points which gives much more benefits, such as communication and respecting skill, but disadvantages are not able to demonstrate own ideas completely and not efficiency. Personally, I, for one, prefer working on school projects with other students.
Nov. 21, 2019
Eintrag 15
Manchmal finde ich wenige Zeit, um einen Eintrag für meinen Journal zu schreiben. Ich versuche jedoch die Zeit zu finden und in meinem Journal Fortschritt zu machen. Ich denke, es fühlt sich ein bisschen wie eine Sucht, aber die Sucht hier geht um eine Sprache zu lernen. Denn wenn man Korrekturen erhalten kann die Korrekturen das Lernen einer Sprache in etwas angenehm umwandeln. Trotz meiner Fehlern beim schreiben (und ich mache ja viele Fehler!), fühle ich mich größer Fortschritt in meiner Deutschkenntnis.
Nov. 21, 2019
Nov. 21, 2019
Book quote
I thought it's embarrassing myself swayed brand-oriented by those around me.
I am worry too much how people see.
It is important to be exposed English as usual since child who don't think like or dislike.
The difference is grace and you don't need fear. People who enjoy diversity looks enjoy.
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Nov. 20, 2019
他社からの電話 ロールプレイ①
ー電話の音が流れているー
A: ｘ社 B: 僕
A：もしもし、ｘ社でございます。
B: LangCorrectのマセムネと申しますが、いつもお世話になっております。
A: こちらこそ、お世話になっております。
B: 課長のC様、いらっしゃいますか。
A: 申し訳ございません。只今、席を外しておりますが。
B: あーそうですか。それでは、ちょっと伝えていただきたいことがあるんですけど。
A: はい、どうぞ。
B: 今日の午後6時に一緒にコラボレーションを頂く予定ですが、まだC様からの契約が届けなかったです。そして、サインしたコピーを持ってきて頂きたいと伝えていただきたいんですが。
A: サインしたコピーをお持ちするということでございますね。承知いたしました。
B: よろしくお願いいたします。それでは、失礼いたします。
A: 失礼いたします。
ネイティブスピーカーみたいに書き直して頂けませんか。
Nov. 20, 2019
Nov. 20, 2019
また勉強しよう！
ここは完全に秋になりました。窓から見える木は金色になりました。すごく綺麗ですね。読者がいるところも紅葉が綺麗ですか？
試験はもうすぐなのに先週あまり勉強しませんでした。日本語より英語で喋りました。イギリス人っぽいと言われましたw
もともとオランダ人なので母語はオランダ語です。外国言語の英語と日本語は脳の中近いので英語を話すと日本語は難しくなります。これからちょっと英語禁止にしています！
今週からちょっと日本語に集中したいです。なぜなら今度も勉強している文法で文を作ってみました。
添削してくださる方は本当にありがとうございました。
べく
1. 幸せに成るべく、今はできるだけ遊んでいろいろなことを試してる。
2. 英語をペラペラ話すべく、毎日勉強しています。
べくもない
3. こんな熱で学校に行くべくもないよ！
4. 勉強せずに入学試験を合格するべくもない。
んがため
5. 世界一悪いアニメを作らんがため、上手な絵を描きたくなる
6. 先輩に気付けられんがために、さくらちゃんは毎日先輩のロッカーにプレゼントを入る。
をもって
7. 配慮をもって、自分の気持ちを伝えようとしました。
8. 絵の具をもって、無口な子が気持ちを伝えた。
長くなってごめんなさい。
Nov. 20, 2019
Illuminated trees on the streets
Just after Halloween, every shop starts to put on a display of sales skirmish for Christmas on November 1. Also, the trees on the streets are lit up.
I read the illumination on the trees gives the trees a strong stress and the trees becomes tired and hard to give off oxygen during the night. I've been sad to see these illuminated trees since I knew this fact. What if a lot of trees in Tokyo stop giving off oxygen even though the air in Tokyo is basically polluted. I don't want to carry a portable oxygen tank with me all the time as I think it must be heavy definitely.
I think they should light up only buildings or ornaments on the streets, that is, not living things. They have to put themselves in tree's shoes as trees don't say anything no matter how tough they are.
Nov. 20, 2019
Eintrag 14
Gestern sind meine Frau und ich in ein besonderen Ort gewesen. Wir haben ein hinduistischer Tempel besucht. Nach eine Einladung eines Freund habe ich entschied, dieser heiliger Ort zu besuchen. Die Menschen da waren sehr freundlich und nett, die Stimmung war zwar angenehm, aber ich bin überhaupt nicht ein geistlicher Kerl. Wir aßen da typisches Indische Essen, das sehr lecker war. Vielleicht gehen wir eines Tages wieder hin.
Nov. 20, 2019
A seahorse - Tatsu no Otoshi go
One day my son asked me “mom, what is this name?”, and I answered “oh, it’s タツノオトシゴ.”
(Actually we talked in Japanese though. )
タツノオトシゴ
A seahorse is called “Tatsu no Otoshi go“ in Japanese.
He tried to say it slowly.
“ Tatsu no....”
(Me: “yes, yes! Go ahead!” )
“Oto...”
(Me: “yes! Almost done!”)
“Shingo!!!!!!!”
😳😱‼️‼️
Hey my babe...
“Shingo“ means “a traffic light” ! Lol
Nov. 20, 2019
Nov. 19, 2019
Nov. 19, 2019
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments.
More and more schools supply students with technology equipment, such as computers, gradually reducing books and handouts. There are some pros and cons of this issue are worth considering.
To begin with, one of the upsides of rasing several computes is that students can search for information quickly. Nowadays, we probably find anything on the internet, and some websites conclude all the details, thus we cut a lot of time doing research and discovering resources. In addition, computers are beneficial tools up-to-date. Teenagers are cable to learn numerous things and diverse knowledge from technology. Because of convenience, youths will gain more experiences, interests and increase their passion for learning new things. Taking advantage of technology, they will be a better person in the future.
What's more, computers are useful for students; however, there are some disadvantages as well. For example, most of the student easily distract by internet equipment for playing virtual games, watching videos, and so on. Using computers in the wrong way, youngsters' study efficiency will decrease and maybe cause them to addict to the internet. Moreover, using computers for a long period is harm to an eye condition, like currently, the number of younger people, wearing glasses is increasing. Besides, replacing books and exams completely by computers may not be a good choice. In my opinion, it tempts students to cheat and relies on searching for answers not thinking.
In conclusion, schools install more tablets and laptop computers for students, lessening books and other paper resources have the advantage and disadvantages. Personally, I, for one, disagree that schools' decision of replacing books with computers.
Nov. 19, 2019
Eintrag 13
Was ist am wichtigsten beim Sprachen lernen? Für mich ist diese Frage ganz deutlich, die wichtigste Sache ist unsere eigene Motivation eine Sprache zu lernen. Manche haben auch verschiedene Motivationen, z.B. wenn man eine gute Arbeit in Deutschland will, muss unbedingt Deutsch lernen. Ein weitere Grund kann auch das Lesen von berühmte Bücher in Italienisch, Spanisch oder Französisch sein.
Nov. 19, 2019
Just keep still, gosh darn it!
Today I learned the 顧 kanji, whose meaning is to "look back" or "turn around". As usual a little story is needed to keep the character in my memory long enough to be able to write it intuitively. For context, the 雇 part means "hire" or "employ", and 頁 is used with the meaning of "head" because of it presence in many kanji related to the head (even though the character technically means "page"). So without further ado here is the story I came up with:
"You were hired to take a picture of a major drug lord, so you prepared your 10x zoom long distance cameras and lenses, and took a plane to their country. A full head photo was the only requirement, which you thought would be pretty easy, but every time you were about to take the picture the guy would look back and greet some acquaintance or another. Being in a completely different building means only one angle is possible, so the guy constantly turning around made your job pretty darn difficult, having to go from roof to roof just to take a one picture."
Nov. 19, 2019
A lovely day
This morning my son was excited to go to a daycare center which he goes everyday ;)
Also it’s lovely weather today.
I found a cute cat on my way home.
Those small things made me happy :)
I am collecting such every small happiness and put them softly in a treasure box in my heart.
I hope you all have a lovely day☺️
Nov. 19, 2019
Nov. 18, 2019
Stuttgarts Zoo
Heute habe ich eine Sendung im "Das Erste" Fernsehstation über Tiere im Stuttgarts Zoo gesehen. Die Tierpfleger im Zoo müssen verschiedenen Tiere wie Alpakas, Affen, Giraffen usw. füttern und pflegen. Dann sah ich andere Sendung fern, diesmal über Löwen, die im Afrika Büffel jagen hatten.
Nov. 18, 2019
Tourists in Kyoto station
I've been to Kyoto last weekend. Going to Kyoto station to take a city bus, I got paralyzed at too many people.
There were some tentative information desks for many tourists, and the tourists got the number of bus stop there for their destinations, then they stood in a so long line and got on a bus each. Busses were coming one after another.
I felt as if I were a potato before becoming crisps in a factory. Fresh potatoes are collected and separate for each line such as Salt, Consomme, Sour Onion and etc. and then they are put in a bag and ship one after another like an endless assembly line operation.
The weather was beautiful. I felt hot even though it was late November. I thought the leaves are slower to turn red this year than usual.
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