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船の町
男の人がすごく好き。男性って美しいと思う。
もちろん、男の人のみんなが美しいわけないけど、カッコイイ男子の人に会う時に、ちょっと興奮しちゃうね。その瞬間にそんな気持ちを表さないけど、ドキドキする。
男性の足が好き、あとは背中の筋肉と腕の筋肉も大好き。背が高い，細マッチョの人がいいと思う。一番好きなのは、顔が若く見えて、肌もちょっと黒い人。
そうっか、忘れられないよね。足の手もセクシーだと思う。
電車の中で長く見っちゃうダメだけど、バスケットボール、サッカーと野球の制服と靴下を履いてる日本人の男の人が大好きだからよく見っちゃう。
最近特に一人の男の人が好きになった。
彼は18歳で、ちょっと俺にとってはちょっと若すぎる。この世界で付き合っちゃダメだから残念だと思う。でも、すごく気が合うよね。特に彼の考え方すごく面白くて、真面目だし、優しい人だから好きになった。彼は深く考える人だと思って、俺といっしょ。俺たちの趣味もだいたい同じ。後は、俺たちは人見知りで、二人ともちょっと変わってる。
性格以外、彼は背が高くてイケメンな男の子。
分からないけど、他の世界だったら、彼は俺のことも好きかもしれない。。。
この世界で、ゲイとストレートってそういうことがなくて、
誰でもは単に好きな人が好き。。性別と関係ない。
そうだったらいいと思う。。
Dec. 9, 2019
Port Veronas
Me gustan chicos mucho. Creo que los chicos son muy hermosos. No todos los chicos, por supuesto, pero cuando veo un chico guapo me vuelve loco!
No muestro como me siento en ese momento, pero mi corazon late muy rapido ~
Amo las piernas de los chicos. Amo sus brazos y sus músculos de la espalda también. Me gustan chicos altos y delgados pero tienen un pocos músculos. Lo mejor, me encantan caras jovenes tambien. La piel oscura es sexy para mi. ¡No puedo olvidar, me encanta el pelo de las piernas también! Se que no deberia mirar demasiado, pero amo a los chicos en Japon que usan calcetines y uniformes de beisbol, futbol y baloncesto.
En realidad, hay una razón para esto.
Creo que me gusta mucho un chico que tiene 18 años, asi que es demasiado joven para mi. Es una lastima que en este mundo no podemos estar juntos. Tambien, nos llevamos muy bien. Me encanta la forma en que piensa. El es muy listo y amable. Creo que es un pensador profundo, como yo. También tenemos los mismos pasatiempos. Los dos somos tambien un poco extranos e introvertidos. Además, es muy guapo un alto. Quizas en otra vida, a el tambien le gusto. Desearia poder vivir en un mundo donde no existan personas que son gay y heterosexual, pero simplemente todas las personas pueden amorse.
Dec. 9, 2019
Dec. 9, 2019
Dec. 9, 2019
Mein Erster Beitrag
Das ist meinen ersten Beitrag. Ich weiß nicht, was ich hier schreiben soll, aber werde ich versuche.
Ich lerne Japanisch. Ich will Anime ohne die Captionen verstehen. Mein Lieblingsanimeflim nennt "Chihiros Reise ins Zauberland."
Ich spiele viele Videospiele. Ich liebe ihnen.
Ich schreibe gern Deutsch. Ich hoffe, dass mein Deutsch nicht schlecht ist.
Dec. 9, 2019
Erstes Mal
Guten Tag! Ich fand LangCorrect von Reddit. Ich habe Deutsch studiert für fünf Jahre. Davon abgesehen, Ich habe ständig im Zeit nicht studieren. Dadurch mein Deutsch ist nicht die Beste. Wie kann ich verbessern?
Tut mir leid, wenn das total verwirrend ist; ich brauche Übung dringend.
Tschüss!
Dec. 9, 2019
Dec. 8, 2019
Historiallisien Rakennuksien Jälleenrakentaminen
Taipei on jolla tavalla mystinen kaupunki, jossa näkyy monipuolisia vieraita rakennuksia. Qing-dynastian kiinalaismaahanmuuttajat toivat perinteistä rakennuksen tyyliä, ja kohta yleistyi koko saaressa. Vaikuttavin on kenties ajanjakso, jolloin Taiwan oli osa Japanin Keisarikunnan siirtomaata. Meiji-restauraatio vaikutti varsin Taiwaniin, ja teollistunut ensimmäisen kerran historiassa. Sitä paitsi, useimmin kaupunkien maankäytöt olivat muuttanut merkittävästi. Toisen maailmansodan jälkeen Taiwan palautettiin nykyinen olevalle vallassa Kiinan Tasavallalle, toisin sanoen Kuomintangille. Japanin ja Kuomintangin välinen on ollut sodasta lähtien konfliktia, ja tämän takia, Suuri osa japanilaisia rakennuksia, mm. Šintolaispyhäköt, temppelit ja hallinnolliset rakennukset tuhotiin, kostonhimoisen mielen perustella. Itse asiassa tuhoaminen ei ole samanlaista kuin unhottamista, erityisesti ei se ottanut huomioon kaikki taiwanilaisten mielipidettä. Siitä on jo 32 vuotta, kun Taiwan tuli demokraattiseksi valtioksi, ihmiset ovat yleensä avaramielisempiä kuin ennen. Äskeisissä vuosissa Taiwanin hallinto sai jälleenrakentamaan muutamat perinnöt, jotta voimme opetella mitä on hukanut.
Dec. 8, 2019
Dec. 8, 2019
Faire du crochet et tricot
Bonjour, je veux améliorer ma grammaire, mais je ne sais pas d'écrire!
Aujourd'hui, je vais écrire sur le sujet de faire du crochet et tricoter.
Je sais faire du crochet et tricoter, mais je suis meilleure à faire du crochet. Je le fais depuis j'ai sept ans. Cependent, mon tricot a besoin d'améliorer. Je veux pouvoir faire les chaussettes et les pull-overs. C'est possible les faissons du crochet aussi, mais je pense que c'est mieux tricoté.
Ma tricote est en vrac et me faire toujours de finir quelque chose! Je sais si je m'ai excercé, j'obtiendrais plus vite. Mais, il y a beaucoup de projets pour le crochet, je me demande si j'aurais le temps de me practiquer ma tricoter. Aussi, je n'ai pas beaucoup d'aiguielles à tricoter, mais beacoup d'aiguielles à crochet.
Tant pis, peut-être un jour mon tricote améliorerai à la même niveau de mon crochet.
Dec. 8, 2019
potenzielles Vorstellungsgespraech
In den nächsten Wochen werde ich ein Vorstellungsgespräch für einen Job in Deutschland führen. Ich spreche nie, obwohl ich vor 20 Jahren Deutsch gelernt habe. Ich musste 20 Jahre lang nicht schreiben und ich glaube, dass die Schreibung in dieser Position notwendig sein wird.
Die Stellenbeschreibung besagt, dass Deutsch nicht erforderlich ist, aber ich möchte mich auf diese Gelegenheit vorbereiten.
Dec. 8, 2019
Dec. 8, 2019
Dec. 8, 2019
Dec. 8, 2019
O meu primero poste
Oi.
Eu estou novo para LangCorrect e eu estou a aprender Português de Portugal. Eu Sinto-me emocionante para começar escrever postes e a ajudar pessoal aprendem Inglês. Se posso melhorar como escrevo meus frases ou se eu posso usar melhor conjagaçãos do verbos então, por favor, corrige-me.
Dec. 8, 2019
Dec. 8, 2019
Мой кот
Я только что хотела написать свой первий маленкий текст для сайта, когда мой кот, которий спит на компютерном столе, голова мне на руке положит. Я вытащила рука из-под головей кота, и тепер он лежит на мышке и укоризенно смотрит на меня. Мы недавно купили ему большую подушку, на которой мог бы и спокойно спать пес, но он хочет всегда быт рядом со мной, как ребенок.
Dec. 8, 2019
Dec. 8, 2019
Essay about the consequences of improved medical care
One of the industries that have developed the most during the past decade has been the medical one. Thanks to several discoveries realized by researchers working in this field, many people live longer and better now.
This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of improved healthcare and will show evidence on the predominance of advantages over disadvantages.
Although maintaining a developed healthcare system often means an expansion of costs born by governments, it allows people to be more productive during great part of their lives. By ensuring a good level of health condition to each citizen, it is possible to build an active and efficient community. Another advantage of increased life expectancy regards the economic help that elderly people usually provide to the younger generation as they usually are the ones that have more savings.
With regard to the disadvantages, economists often say that longer lives bring to a general higher level of unemployment. If governments are in charge to provide a monthly pension to the elderly, the increase in the number of people to whom retirement must be paid could represent a problem. Moreover, some important resources on the planet are limited and the increase of the population caused by a decrease in the rate of death could cause starvation periods.
Even if a development of the healthcare system will bring to some disadvantages, it is evident that by handling the increase in life expectancy and the consequent increase in population in the right way, countries can obtain more positive than negative effects.
Dec. 8, 2019
Dec. 8, 2019
Friends
Your expectations drag you down. Having standards is one thing, but not taking action because of an unfounded fear of not fulfilling your hopes will only keep you stuck in your hole. This usually happens with friends. You think that you should only seek people who match your requirements, but the reality is that there's a friend for every facet of your life. So you're a car enthusiast? Go and find people who are as well. Has chess piqued your interest? Look for other aspiring grand masters. There may be an overlap between your other interests and theirs, but that would just be a side-effect. The key idea is to go out and exploit your inclinations in order to expand your social circle.
Through a bout of loneliness, many desperate but tempting ideas can spring to mind. Nevertheless, they're less grounded in logic and reason than in emotional cravings. It's enticing to act on them, though it's only through a miracle that they'll lead you to a desirable outcome.
Apart from being more mindful of our emotions, it's imperative that we make peace with solitude. However derided it may be, only in those moments can we dig up insights that allow us to better understand ourselves.
Dec. 8, 2019
Hola a tots
Hola a tots. Després d'un interval de quasi cinc anys vull intentar altre vegada a millorar el meu català. Fa anys vaig utilizar lang-8 com una eina per practicar la meva escriptura. No sé si hi ha algú aquí amb la català com llengua materna. Potser no. Però em sembla una plataforma bona, per això intentaré aquí. Estaré agraït per a qualsevol ajuda.
Dec. 8, 2019
salut
Bonjour, je veux essayer ce site web parce que c'est un objectif à parler sept langues avant que je meurs, et aussi pourquoi pas. J'étudie les linguistiques à l'université parce que ça m'interesse beaucoup. Je suis pas un cours de français cette semestre parce que j'apprends deux autres langues qui m'intéressent, et il faut avoir les classes obligatoires. La semestre suivante je peux avoir une classe française donc ça c'est bon.
Dec. 8, 2019
bonjour :)
je m'appelle fifi et je suis lycéenne, je dois rapidement étudier avant que je doive passer cet examen pour une programme d'immersion en français, donc c'est pourquoi je suis ici. j'aime bien la langue mais elle se semble un peu difficile en parlant spontanément. aujourd'hui je suis de mauvais humeur parce que j'ai oublié mon téléphone à la maison et je ne peux pas y retourner. maintenant j'utilise une ordinateur mais la batterie est faible, à 2 % :) ok à bientôt quand je m'ennuie encore
Dec. 8, 2019
Could you help me with this essay? Is this written well?
As nowadays almost everyone possesses a car, traffic has increased so much that it may represent a big problem not only for the environment but also for the safeness of drivers.
This essay will discuss the factors that determined a significant traffic growth and the actions that governments could take in order to prevent people from using their vehicles.
One of the main factors that has caused a growth in the traffic of all cities is the economic expansion of the late 1970s that allowed many people to afford a car. Thanks to economic growth, in fact, firms working in the car industry became more competitive and started producing and selling cars at lower costs. Moreover, in order to reach the workplace, that usually was located far from the city center, citizens started feeling the need to buy a vehicle. From that moment the number of people possessing a car started increasing steadily.
Another factor that brought to a higher level of congestions on the streets is the decrease in the number of people willing to take a walk instead of using a means of transport to move around the city. Researches demonstrate that people prefer to use a vehicle even if their destination is near from where they are.
In order to encourage people to use less their cars, governments could use several measures, such as increasing the efficiency of public means of transport or reducing the price of the tickets required to take them.
Whereas it could damage oil companies’ financial statements, another way to help countries reduce traffic could be adding a tax on oil.
All of the three measures mentioned above could lead to the result desired.