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Mi Primer Mensaje
Hola mis amigos! Mi llamo Tim y estoy aquí porque yo quiero aprender más Español. Quiero hablar más Español para mi trabajo en Medicina. Yo siento que si aprendo Español puedo mejor cuidan a mis pacientes. Lo siento, mi Español es muy, muy malo pero yo soy intento aprender todo lo possible. Gracias por leer.
Dec. 9, 2019
When you're bored
Come to think of it, boredom is the cradle of creativity and productivity.
We always complain about being bored. Something likes: It's boring here at my town, I can't wait for the day I get out of it; or I've literally gone through hell having to watch that bore of a film with my grandmother. More often than not, we try to break free from dullness by doing something, anything. That's why I think boredom gives birth to creative ideas and productive works and thus, we should give it credit rather than whining about having nothing to do all the time. This is not you being bored, it's you being lazy. So the next time when you feel bored, you know that something good is about to be created, by no other than you.
This idea is not something I have pondered on for a long time. A couple of minutes ago, I was bored. Then I came across this site, a seemingly perfect place for me to rant about my tedious life. So that is it for this first entry of mine on this site: nothing profoundly meaningful but just what I suddenly come up with when I have nothing else to do after work.
Cheers.
Dec. 9, 2019
An entry from my diary
All I can’t stand has a name. So does all I love.
When somebody starts describing to me their travels to places, all this ‘I have been here and there, I tried X and Y, I bought Z’ hardly tells me anything about either a person or a place. Well, let’s say it doesn’t tell me much. It’s not real. What fascinates me is how one felt there and what one has experienced. Living it, this is an approach.
Once I was told (reproachfully) that I’m always lucky to come across wonderful people who treat me in a special way. That’s not quite true.The truth is that in order to find a treasure I have always had to go through so much crap in the blind belief that there is the Grail somewhere deep inside.
The first thing I did this year subconsciously was that I bricked up all the entrances and exits. A vicious circle was triggered. I couldn’t breathe, I needed fresh air but failed to find the way out of the trap over and over again. I hardly yielded to it. However, life is full of coincidences, now and then it assumes strange forms. On my third visit to Berlin I grew a friendship I hadn’t known before. He was sensitive, unbelievably patient and shrewd. His capacity to perceive things surprises me even now, over time.
There was a whole world there. He let me in. Each object at his home had a story to tell. Each word conveyed a meaning. I even thought that he could give sense to the senseless. It was him who was surrounded by wonderful people. Sometimes he was inexplicably sad, off in some direction of his own. Sometimes I looked at him and he reminded me of myself. Maybe that’s why he got me in no time. Never had I felt so understood and accepted. I got rid of all the chains that had oppressed me and could afford just to be myself. He wasn’t deaf to my pain. When he smiled at me, I felt so natural as if I had just been born and still didn’t know the rules by which people live.
We had coffee or his signature cold tea in the morning, leisurely and ritually, then got lost in the city till late at night and on our return couldn’t stop talking on the balcony. I spoke out my joys and sorrows. He saw me at both extremes, at the moments of complete happiness and abject despair.
There was a whole life there. One day I failed, he saved me the trouble. I asked him if he was upset with me, he replied: «Honey, I’m never». Later he told me that I’m not aware of how different I am and that I see what others don’t. I felt something similar with few people. With my art teacher, I was 7 years old, with Y. in Saint Petersburg, I was 17. They guided me through life in the same way. How much of what they have once said to me still echoes in my ears! It is something to touch someone’s heart in a way it has never been touched before. All the rest doesn’t matter that much.
A documentary director, writer, a very human one (!), he is an inexhaustible source of inspiration to me, that Grail that brings me back to life and reminds me not to stray from my path. All I love has a name. He has a beautiful Scandinavian name. Dag.
Where else, if not in Berlin, could I experience that?
Dec. 9, 2019
Dec. 9, 2019
To gossip or not to gossip, that's the bond.
No thing feels best then to take apart the entire life existence of other peoples, and while perhaps there is moral grey areas conservationists might to argument in the contrary, there are a numbers of valid reasons for to indulgence in the timeless tradition of gossip in the job, at the school, in the congregations, and in any possibility to gather in societal groupings.
For listing the first one that goes to my mind is the joy it creates. You and the groups of peoples who are building the gossip targets an individual and proceed to argument in the contrary of all thinks that make this person. You may to begins with the weight and critic is it is too light or if it is on the heavy side of the coin. You may to discuss the relationship marital or singular status of the subject and with no boundaries pass judgements in regards of the partner, or the lack there off, because that is the beautiful of gossip, theres no limitations to what can to be done. If it is crafted in the school, you can to target the professors and disect their methodologies if you have the wish for that. If it is about the cooking person in the cafeteria, you can talk about why they give more foods to some one than the others because perhaps there is a romantic interesting there. If it is in the congregation, you could to center your attention to the attires and invent reasons why they use the suits they use, because they have no more, or because they love that suit and nothing more.In short, the reasons for to indulgence in the ancient traditions of gossip are infinity, but ultimately the main principal reasons is that it gives joy to the hearts and the souls, and no one should to stop and say no to the abundant felicity encountered within inside the universe of universal gossip.
Second reasons after the first reason I give, it is in the natural condition of the bond. In the super productions of holliwood, mister James Cameron calls it Tsaheylu, a word in the language Na´vi with the meaning of neural connections by the likes of the tales. The blue peoples , and animals in this super production have little hairs at the end of the tales, and when they connect the hairs with the other tale, they suffer a neuronal intrinsical reciprocal mystical experience, called the bond. When two peoples gossip, they also experience the bond. The reciprocation of the trust that the two people experiment connects them for life. Their pupils dilate, their hearts synchronize, their blood flows in unison, their minds become one. This two people, have now a confidence in the other they can always be safe. They now have a crime partner, and this does not have a dissolution. When two people make the bond, of the gossip, they have now mated for life like beavers or bold eagles. And that is worthiness of your respect and acknowledgement.
The reason number three, is the creations of factions of gossipers within the kingdom, and please give me your pardon for electing this license, but i will call kingdom and given plays that has gossip happening, to match, the metaphor, of factions, for because, every group of gossiper, is a faction, inside the kingdom. So each faction, recognize the members of their league as troopers of the same womb, and no other member can insert himself there, it is impossible, it is impermeable, it is impenetrable, and no one has to speak of this ever, it is a thing that you no speak of, because by making the bond, you are elected and christened as one of the group, and you shall never ever ever betray your leader, your pack, your troop, your family. So in addition to the enjoyment you aspire with the gossip, you become a brother of a nother mother, or a sister, and that has no price. Only value.
In less regard for the reasons you are entertaining the decision for becoming the next gossiper in one faction of the kingdom you belong, with the acceptance of the bond, you are signing a contract of the social kind, and with this great responsibilities, you will have to receive also some benefits in additional form that what I already tells, like for example the entertaining of each memeber. You see, with the skillful art of gossip, you developement many abilities you will other wise should have never to obtain like the blessing of creativity and scents of humor. With advancing levels of gossip you can to tickle of the funny bones of all members in the clan. Not like jester. More like a smart guy who can produce laughings with his remarkings about other people; and this will augment the opinion the factions will have of you, and your status will continue to go up. But you are to be full of care. And this is why...
... with the power of the gossip, you can to give directions to the opinions of the others, and with all that might, where you can flick them is impossible to say. So you may play fully start to gossip in the directions of a woman who have been lost the train and now her rice is already passed. She is, in your words in this parable, a lady who has no lucky, and is now only good to dress saints, because she will not know men, and men don't want to know her. You tell a women member of your faction this, and proceeding to say that she should to be in hurry because she is next in the line, and because you are brothers of the bond now, she makes the decision to follow after your gossip, and uses much time to think she has necessity to know a man too, or she is the next in the line for to lose the train. She jumps at the first man she sees, she marries, has family, and ten years laters she has remorse for to follow the influence in her ideas your gossip creates. That is another reason for acting full of care because you can never make predictions about where the impacts of your influential gossips will reach.
If you are of the good kind of gossiper and use this power only for the doing of the good, you may become an expectation and develop the synergy necessary to have learning from the actions of the others that you precisely gossip about. So that is good too, and there are more benefits. Like for example, you have to live your actually faction for a new one because you move countries. New languages, new idioms, new lexicons, new proverbials, new culture, new motions of gesticulations, and all have new meanings. By accepting the gossip for the doing of the good, you can shortcut with a bypass the learning of all the rules of this new kingdom, and get the hanging in much sooner time. I only have to say that you must to choose your next family very full of care before you make the bond. Remember it is for life.
I never have intentions to be the talker of morality, so in honest fashion, I tell you that in person I feel no need to use the words good or bad to description the gossip. That is for the gossiper to choice what words she wants to use. But in person, I will say this: if you gossip only for the pleasures of the guilt, if it gives you much schadenfreude, rejoice to the full extend of your capabilities, and don't hold your horses, because you will still be in bond, and once in bond, always in bond. Beside, in additions to be a member of your faction, you are too a donor of energy for the synergy of your siblings of other mothers, and to that finish, no gossip, evil and malignant, or innoncent and playful, is of waste. So gossip like the tomorrow never comes and live your live any such way you choice too. Is gossip a necessity? Is gossip and evil of the social? the answer is yours.
Dec. 9, 2019
Falsi miti sull'Italia
Il compito nel mio libro dello studente è "Scrivi un breve articolo sui falsi miti o sulle false credenze che esistono sul tuo Paese o sull’Italia". Per favore non prendete il post a cuore, non vorrei offendere nessuno. Sono solo le mie osservazioni soggetive.
L’Italia è il Bel paese, come lo descrissero i poeti famosi Dante e Petrarca. Cosa c’è di bello in Italia? E’ un paese estremamente ricco delle bellezze, della storia e cultura. Proprio qui nacquero non solo i piatti più diffusi nel mondo come pizza e pasta ma anche molti architetti, pittori e registi prominenti. Ancora adesso Italia ha un ruolo molto importante nella società contemporanea: lancia nuove tendenze della moda, fabbrica automobili lussuosi, ha molti destinazioni più desiderati per i turisti.
Tutti noi sappiamo che ci sono cosiddetti stereotipi su ogni paese e su ogni cultura. Senza dubbio si basano su qualcosa che c’è. Ma domandiamoci se siano veri o meglio fino a che punto siano veri?
1. Tutti gli italiani mangiano pizza e pasta giorno e notte. Pizza e pasta sono ovviamente i piatti molto famosi sia in Italia che fuori da essa. Tuttavia dobbiamo prendere in considerazione anche il fatto che l’Italia è un paese molto giovane come la nazione unita, esiste come la conosciamo oggi non da tanto. Prima delle guerre d’Indipendenza e dell’unità dell’Italia che avvenne nel anno 1861, il belpaese era diverso: era suddiviso in molti piccoli regni dove dominavano i costumi e tradizioni differenti. Questo si sente anche adesso: tutte le regioni italiane hanno i propri piatti tipici, feste diverse, per non parlare di un gran numero di dialetti in Italia. Ritornando a discutere il cibo, non si può negare il fatto che la cucina italiana varia molto, a seconda della regione. Per esempio, se si va a Bergamo, si trova polenta, in Piemonte si mangia molto di più la carne e la cucina si assomiglia più a quella francese mentre nella cucina siciliana ci sono molti elementi arabi (prendiamo cous cous) e si usa di più gli prodotti che si coltivano là come mandorle e pistacchio o frutti di mare.
2. La lingua italiana è la più bella del mondo. Molti se la innamorano a prima vista. Ma cosa voi direste se sapeste che nella lingua così melodiosa si abusano delle parolacce. Cazzo, cazzata, che cazzo stai facendo, mi rompi i coglioni e mille altre combinazioni di queste parole si sentono pronunciare da ogni angolo in Italia, dai bambini agli anziani, dai supermercati alle università. Questa peculiarità aggiunge certo tipo di colorito e rende la lingua più espressiva oppure fa parte del temperamento irascibile della popolazione italiana? Magari entrambi.
3. Ci sono anche i pregiudizi sul comportamento e anche sull’aspetto fisico degli italiani. Si considera come la gente pigra, che per la maggior parte si gode i piaceri della vita. La famosa dolce vita si associa sempre all’essere il motto degli italiani. In realtà gli italiani sono molto diversi. Come era stato menzionato prima, l’Italia è anche adesso un paese che non ha finito la sua unificazione. A capirlo, occorre solo visitare una città del Nord e un’altra del Sud. Si distinguono non solo per mentalità e dialetti parlati in diversi luoghi ma anche per l’aspetto fisico. Ci sono molti italiani con gli occhi azzurri, la pelle chiara, i capelli biondi e di statura alta.
4. Tutti gli italiani sono mafiosi. Purtroppo questo mito è ancora vivo ed è dovuto al fatto che in Italia del Sud ci sono stati molti associazioni mafiosi. Ci sono anche molti film, serie televisive e libri dedicati a questo fenomeno. Comunque occorre dire che alla fine del 20 secolo sono stati presi i provvedimenti mirati a combattere la mafia. Adesso nonostante che il tasso di criminalità sia ancora abbastanza alto in Italia, la paura della mafia è esagerata, non c’è bisogno di spaventarsene.
5. Tutti gli italiani sono allegri e amichevoli. E lo sono, ma contrariamente a quanto si crede, è difficile nominare gli italiani una popolazione molto amichevole. Non sono ostili a trattarti con disprezzo, però se ti sorridono, probabilmente vogliono venderti qualcosa o anche approfittarti in qualche modo. A dire la verità, a volte è difficile trovare nemmeno un ristorante dove ti servano bene. Bisogna sempre stare attenti con gli italiani, la truffa è una cosa che loro si esercitano molto bene, ti inganneranno prima che tu te ne accorga. Di regola, amichevolezza è una osservazione che concludono i turisti affascinati dall’atmosfera dei paesi del Sud. Gli italiani sono devotissimi alle loro famiglie, lo sappiamo tutti, ma in realtà non sono amichevoli neanche verso i loro concittadini, anche meno se si tratta degli stranieri.
6. Per finire, Tutti gli italiani amano il calcio (e anche lo giocano). Per la disgrazia dei tifosi devo ammettere che nella mia esperienza io abbia incontrato molti italiani che sono assolutamente indifferenti al calcio e non lo guardano mai.
In conclusione, c’è un fondo di verità in ogni credenza però non creiamo l’immagine completa di una certa cultura basando solo su essi.
Grazie mille per le correzioni e suggerimenti.
Dec. 9, 2019
Ein Neuer Freund - Kurzgeschichte Teil 1
Es war ein normaler Mittwoch bei der Schule: ich setzte meine Schultasche in mein Schließfach, lief nach unten, um ein heißes Mittagessen zu bekommen, und saß alleine in einer Ecke. Seit die Situation vor einem Jahr, kämpfte ich mit Depressionen. Ich stand zwischen einer Freundin und ihrem Freund, und ich fühlte sehr schlecht. Manchmal fragt e I ch mich warum Ich glücklich bin. Ich stelle vor, wie meine Freunde mit mir gesessen haben. Vielleicht sprechen wir von anderen Leute oder neuen Spielen. Vielleicht haben wir ein gutes Mal. Der Gedanke macht mich glücklich. Aber eines Mittwoch hatte ich mich verändert.
Dec. 9, 2019
Dec. 9, 2019
आज के पांच शब्द - वाक्य
9-12-2019:
आज के पांच शब्द:
1. उंगली(f) – Finger/Digit
2. मसलना(v) – Rub
3. सूंघना(v) – To smell
4. दिलाना(v) – Direct/Give
5. बेचैन(adj.) – Nervous/Tense/Anxious
वाक्य:
1. कभी-कभी कुछ लोगों को एक हाथ पे छह उंगलियां होती/दिखाती हैं।
2. चोट पे मसलना निषिद्ध है।
3. मेरी दिनचर्या में हर सुबह अपना बगीचा को जाकर वहां फूलों को सूंघना एक है।
4. प्रधान मंत्री ने मुश्करों को शूर करने को आर्डर दिलाया।
5. हमारे महबूबों को प्रोपोज़ करने से समय पर हमें बेचैन हो जाते हैं।
Dec. 9, 2019
Winter en verkoudheid
Begin van december heb ik systematisch last van verkoudheid. Ik draag nochtans extra dikke truien en lange sjaals. En toch moet ik met die verstopte neus omgaan voor de rest van december, soms tot en met januari. Wat extra vervelend kan zijn aangezien dat mijn examenperiode in januari begint. Ja, een andere vervelende punt van december : ik haat blokken. Normaal gezien is dit mijn laatste jaar op universiteit. Hopelijk zal ik volgende jaar meer van mijn familie en de wintersfeer genieten.
Dec. 9, 2019
Dec. 9, 2019
I went to south Korea this weekend.
I went to Seoul last weekend and had a great time there. So I would like to share some of my memories here. I have been to Seoul a few times before, so this was third time for me to visit South Korea. Last time I went in Summer, so I totally forgot Seoul could get that much cold, and I was not prepared anything for the weather at all. When we landed in Seoul, I saw the snow for the first time in this year and made me so excited but as soon as we got off trains, I was reglet that I did not pack any stuff makes myself warm such as beany and gloves but only warm jacket. The first thing we did was finding our hostel. It was kinda mission since we did not have wifi and we only have an instruction to the place and a rough map. We started to ask some locals to how to get the place and they are all so friendly and helpful.
Dec. 9, 2019
Dec. 9, 2019
Megoldották a hadkötelezettséggel kapcsolatos dilemmát
Lefordítottam a szerb nyelvből. Az eredeti szöveget a "B92"(bédevedeszetdvá)-ban tették közé.
«Megoldották a hadkötelezettséggel kapcsolatos dilemmát.
Belgrád - Szerbia elnöke állította, hogy a hadsereg reformjáról szóló kihirdetést nem úgy kell értelmezni, hogy a hadkötelezettséget újra vezetik be, mivel ezt a lehetőséget jelenleg nem fontolják meg.
Amikor a Pink csatorna "Hit" című programján az újságírók kérték, hogy magyarázza azt az állítását, amely szerint Szerbia nem fog vásárolni több fegyvert a hadsereg reformja során (ezt az állítást sokan úgy értelmezték, hogy újra bevezetik a hadkötelezettséget), az elnök azt mondta, hogy bele se gondolt.
"A jövőben fogjuk megfontolni ezt a kérdést; mind mellett szóló, mind ellen szóló érvek is vannak. Ha eljön az idő, beszélni fogunk róla. Semmilyen döntést nem hoztunk meg", állította Szerbia elnöke tegnap este.»
Dec. 9, 2019
Möten
Jag hatar möten på jobbet. De kallar för för mycket personer (halv av dem onödiga); vissa personer är sena; då pratar och pratar man om allting och ingenting; och sen avslutar vi med ingen beslut tagit. Efter sådant möte jag känner mig trött.
Jag gillar mötena med mitt lag. Vi har alltid en dagordning innan mötet börjar, alla punkter på dagordningen måste handla om >50% av deltagarna; varje punkt börjar med en verb (t.ex. 'ta beslut', 'informera') och alla vet vad är det som borde hända. Om någon pratar om ovidkommande saker, moderatorn tar hand om det. Efter sådant möte jag känner att jag har gjort nånting.
Alla möten kan bli bättre, det handlar bara om respekt för andra människors tid. Och en moderator kanske.
Dec. 9, 2019
"Si vous êtes de gauche, pourquoi faites-vous des choses..."
[traduit du catalan; originalement publié a "Catarsi"]
«Si vous êtes de gauche, pourquoi faites-vous des choses libérales ?
La mobilisation pour le droit à l'autodétermination des dernières années et l'apparition d'un bloc social partisan de la construction d'une république ont marqué un tournant à gauche dans la politique catalane. La crise économique et surtout la manque de dialogue de l'État monarchique centraliste a facilité cette tendance, en parvenant à montrer son versant le plus antidémocratique avec la répression du referendum d'octobre 2017. L'affaiblissement de l'espace "convergent" (Convergence; droite libérale catalane) par la scission d'Unió (Union; droite conservatrice catalane) et la kyrielle de cas de corruption -malgré la grande capacité de résistance et recomposition qu'il a montré, sans quand même ignorer les tensions entre le nouveaux PDCat (Partit démocrate européen catalan; droite libérale catalane) et la "voie Puigdemont" - a permis l'essor d'ERC ("Gauche républicaine catalane"; centre gauche catalan) en tant que nouvel aspirant à être le parti hégémonique catalan. Le partit indépendantiste fait partie du gouvernement catalan conjointement avec la "marque maison" [1] post-"convergent" de «Junts pel Sí» ("Ensemble pour le oui"), un gouvernement qu'on pourrait caractériser comme étant libéral-républicain et qu'ERC définit comme étant de centre gauche.»
[1] Note: Je ne suis pas sûr si on peut le dire comme ça en français. L'auteur fait référence au fait que Junts pel Sí était un parti créé par l'ancienne Convergència, mais qui a rassemblé des "candidats indépendants" des autres secteurs de la vie publique catalane (des activistes connus, des musiciens, etc.) pour donner l'impression d'être une coalition plus vaste. ERC en faisait partie aussi mais beaucoup de gent considérait que c'était une coalition clairement menée par Convergència.
Dec. 9, 2019
Dec. 9, 2019
Ein tolles Buch!
Ich habe ein Buch gekauft. Es geht um die Geschicht von Duck Dogobert. Er ist ein Milliadär Ente. Wahrscheinlich ist es ein Comic. Ich habe schon viele Deutsch gelernt! Ich denke, dass es sehr nutzlich ist, weil mit jedem Text, gibt es auch ein Bild. Deswegen ist es einfacher, um die Kontext zu verstanden.
Wenn ihr einen Vorschlag haben, wie man Deutsch beim Lesen lernen kann, sag mal bitte!
Also, ich werde jetzt ein bisschen über meine lieblingsgeschichte bisher schreiben, dass in dieses Buch gibt. Es gibt ein Kapitel, wo Onkel Dogobert seine Milliadär Freunde trifft. Jeder Freund zeigt seine Sammlung. Wenn Dogobert dran ist, zeigt er seine Münzsammlung. Aller seiner Freunde sagen, dass seine Sammlung nicht gültig ist, weil sie ein Wert hat.
Es ist sehr lustig, um Onkel Dogobert zu sehen, wie er ein neues Sammlung finden versucht. Ich werde das Grund nicht erklären, aber am Ende jedermann verrückt werden. Um es kurz zu machen, möchtet aller Dogoberts Sammlung zu haben.
Das ist alles. Danke für eure Hilfe! Ich lerne viel mit euch!
Dec. 9, 2019
Lo que le compré a mi familia para Navidad
Hola a todos, espero que este día les vaya bien. Solo quisiera contarles un poco sobre lo que les estoy comprando a mi familia para Navidad, que aquí en el hemisferio norte (cierto, es posible que algunos de ustedes sean argentinos, peruanos, chilenos o cualquiera sea) nos se viene muy rápido.
Ya les compré regalos a mi prometido, el mamá de mi prometido, mi hermana, mi mamá, mi papá y mi perro. A mi prometido le regalaré unas camisas que acabo de comprar y una cita en la que solo seremos nosotros. (También, porque acabamos de establecer un acuario, nos regalaremos a nosotros mismos una luz bastante fuerte para él, para que podemos crecer algunas plantas en él.) A la mamá de mi prometido, le compré algunas nuevas toallas para su baño y alguna cera perfumada.
A mi mamá le daré un edredón que fue hecho por mi prometido y mi y un molde para hacer proyectos artísticos. Mi papá va a recibir un juego de mesa y varias herramientas. Entonces le compré a mi hermana un bolso y una vela perfumada. Finalmente para mi perro, acabo de comprarle un hueso para masticar y un nuevo tazón de comida.
Bueno, espero que les gustó a leer un poco sobre mi familia y lo que todos van a recibir para Navidad. (¡Ojalá ellos no vean este mensaje antes del 25 de deciembre!) No estoy seguro de lo bueno sea mi español, pero sé que son algunos errores. Gracias por leer esto y tengan un buen día y una feliz Navidad.
¡Hasta luego!
Dec. 9, 2019
Musik
Ich habe eine Frage an euch. Was sind eure Lieblingsbands überhaupt? Und was für Musik hören ihr gern? Das macht mich neugierig.
Als Junger, hörte ich meistens alternative Rock-Musik. Ich hörte Musik den ganzen Tag und die ganze Zeit. Beim Essen, Lernen, Laufen, usw. Heutzutage, meine Lieblingsmusikrichtung ist abschließend "Prog-Rock". Es ist eindeutig, dass meine frühere musikalische Vorlieben meine aktuellen Vorlieben geprägt haben.
Dec. 9, 2019
Dec. 9, 2019
Ma journee
Salut!
C'est mon premier post. S'il te plait, etre gentil!
Ma routine est que je me reveille a six heures et demi du matin parce que je travaille a sept heures et demi. Je travaille dans ma maison et normalment je travaille sept heures de demi au trois heures et demi. J'aime beaucoup travailler dans la maison mais ce n'est pas pour tout le monde. Apres de travaille normalment je marche 4 kilometres pour prendre air frais y etirer mes jambs. Et dans ma maison je fait du yoga.
Dec. 9, 2019
Salut tout le monde !
Bonjour à tous et à toutes ! Je m'appelle Calvin et j'ai commencé à apprendre le français il y a quelques ans. La production écrite reste encore un aspect plutôt faible à moi. Du coup j'espère qu'à travers du LangCorrect, je pourrai améliorer mon écriture petit à petit !
Juste un petit peu sur moi : je prends actuellement un année sabbatique après avoir obtenu mon diplôme ce juillet. Je viens de finir mon séjour à Paris où j'apprenais le français dans un petit école. Après quelques mois, je me sentais que j'ai appris tous ce que je pourrais dans un contexte d'une classe (principalement la grammaire) et ce dont j'ai besoin le plus, c'était simplement d'interagir plus avec les autres. Donc, je me suis rendu compte qu'en quittant l'école, je pourrais économiser plus et à sa place trouver moi-même les autres (soit en ligne, soit en personne) avec lesquelles je pourrais écrire ou parler. En même temps, j'ai déménager à Séoul pour apprendre le coréen aussi.
Voilà ma première poste sur LangCorrect ! Je voulais juste ajouter que je serai également ravi de corriger vos textes d'anglais. Merci et à bientôt !
Dec. 9, 2019
Dec. 9, 2019
日本で一番見たいのは
この年間、日本へ旅行するように日本語を勉強しています。もう９ヶ月勉強になります。
長くない間なので、簡単なことだけを話せたり、書かれたりします。申し訳ございません。
日本にいるとき何を見たいかな？この問題に答えるようにリストで頭を整理させなくてはなりません。それでは、そのリストを今やっておきますよ。
１）東京を見逃すは絶対いけません。大きそうだから何日もぶらぶら歩くことできるんだ。でも、アメリカから日本まで旅行機会が少ないので、休みが終わるまで東京の中にとどまるはいけないと思います。
２）富士山を目の前に見たいです。富士山は世界の一番美しい山一つです。上るできればいいでしょう。上るのは難しすぎれば多分ふもとの近くをハイキングするほうがやすいね。
３）寒い天気は最高だと思いますから、札幌にも旅行したいです。インタネットで高速道路の横に雪が何メートルも高く積もった写真を見つけたのは、「そんなところは危ないのか？」と言いました。雪でもそんなに好きじゃないよ！ それにしても札幌にまだ行きたいです。あの都市は周囲の雪と同じぐらいきれいだそうだから！