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์ค๋ ์ถ๊ทผํ์ง ์์๋ค
์ค๋ ์ถ๊ทผํ์ง ์์๋๋ฐ ๋์ ๋ณ์์ ๊ฐ๋ค. ํ์์ผ์ ์ผํ๋ค๊ฐ ๊ฐ์๊ธฐ ์ด์ง๋ฌ์์ก๊ณ ์ฐ๋ฌ์ง ๋ปํ๋ค. ๊ทธ๋์ ๋จํธ์ด ํฐ ๋ณ์์ ์์ฝ์ ํ๊ณ ๋๋ ์ค๋ ๊ฑฐ๊ธฐ์ ๊ฐ๋ค. ์ค๋์ ํ์์ผ์ ์๊ธด ์ฆ์์ด ์์ด์ ์์ฌ ์ ์๋์ ๊ทธ ๋ ๋ฌด์จ ์ผ์ด์๋์ง๋ฅผ ์ ํํ๊ฒ ์๋ ค์ฃผ์ง ๋ชปํ๋ค. ๋์ ๋ชธ์ด ํ์์ ์ด๋ค์ง ์ ์ ์๊ฒ ๋ช ์ฃผ์ผ ๋ค์ ๋ด๊ฐ ๋ค์ ๋ณ์์ ๊ฐ์ ์ ๋ณด๋ฅผ ๊ฑท๋ ๊ธฐ๊ณ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ์ ๊ฒ์ด๋ค. ์ ํํ ์ด๋ค ๊ธฐ๊ณ์ธ์ง ์ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๊ฒ ์ง๋ง ๋ฐ์ผ๋ฉด ๋ฐ๋ก ์๋ ค์ค ๊ฒ์ด๋ค!
Jan. 16, 2020
์ข์ํ๋ ์์ฌ
์ ๋ ์ด์ ๊ฐ์ฅ ์ข์ํ๋ ์ค์ ํ๋ผ ๋จน์์ต๋๋ค. ์ด ์์ฌ ์นํจ๊ณผ ๊ฐ์์
๋๋ค. ์ด๋ ๊ฒ ์ค๋นํฉ๋๋ค.
์์นจ์ ๊ฐ์๋ค์ ์๋ฅด๊ณ ์ ๊ธฐ ์ฐ์ฅ ์์ ๋์ต๋๋ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ ์นํจ ๋์์ ์ ๊ธฐ ์ฐ์ฅ์ ์ผญ๋๋ค. ์ ๋
์ ์ง์ ์ ๋
์ ๋ค ๋ ๊ฒ์
๋๋ค. ํ๋ฃจ ์ข
์ผ ์ง์ ๊ฐ๊ณ ์ด ์์ฌ๋ฅผ ๋จน์ ๊ณ ๋ํฉ๋๋ค.
Jan. 16, 2020
Ein schwerer Tag
Heute war ein schwerer Tag. Ich hatte viel Arbeit, aber habe nicht viel getan. Meine Hauptaufgaben sind sehr absktrakt, dennoch es der Anfang des Jahrs ist und ich muss einen Jahrplan machen. Als mein Tag sehr schwierig war, heute schreibe ich nur bisschen.
Morgen mรถchte ich frรผh aufwachen und fahre vor meine Mitarbeiter nach Bรผro. Ich werde eine Checkliste mit zwei oder drei Aufgaben machen. Ich glaube, dass es auch einfacher sei wenn ich meine Idee zum Papier schreiben wird. Wenn etwas abstrakt ist, versuchte ich es greifbar machen, indem schreiben zum Papier.
Hoffentlich werde ich frรผher Schlรผร machen!
Jan. 16, 2020
Advertising
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order for a business to succeed, it must put more money in advertising.
When asked is it must put more money in advertising in order to become successful business, most people strongly support the idea that it should spend big money on it, while some disagree. Personally, I side with the latter. I think it is not necessary to put large amount money in advertising.
Firstly, putting more money on increasing quality of product will bring business to succeed. Rather buying a beautiful product, people choose a high quality one. A business improve a productโs quality is beneficial to them, because it will attract more and more customer and keep the customer in long term as well. Iphone, for instance, Apple is one of successful technology companies in the world. It puts a big amount of money on enhancing the quality of iphoneโs system, applications, appearance and so on in order to cause much more peopleโs interests. This strategy totally works, since once most people use iPhone, they are not willing to use others companiesโ since they are already used to iPhoneโs system. So, focusing on quality leads a business to succeed.
Secondly, they said, producing a product is people looking for. People always buy a product that is practical, convenient and facilitative. In other words, they dislike a good that is difficult to use, hard to carry. If a business yearns to succeed, they must spend a lot money on designing a product that customers are easy to use. A case in point, in the past, people were using CD player for listening; however, they are using MP3 which is easier to carry around and light. A company who made MP3 was producing a product that people think is practical, so it is worth to invest money on it.
Admittedly, some people might say that it must put more money in advertising in order for business to succeed, it will either boost their brands or create a trend. For example, a coke company sponsored a celebrity to endorse their product. The well-known person took a photo, post on the social media, and tried to attract people to buy it. The company spent money on the celebrity, attempting to advertise people. However, the action of putting much more money in advertising will not lead a business to succeed, since a company should focus on their productโs quality and practical utility. These definitely bring a far benefit to a company, after all.
Jan. 16, 2020
ๆญฏๅป่ ใซ่กใใชใใใฐใชใใชใใ
2้ฑ้ๅๅฌไผใฟใซใขใกใชใซใซ่กใใพใใใ
่ฆชๅใจใฌในใใฉใณใงๆผใใฏใใ้ฃในใฆใใ้ใซๅฅฅๆญฏใๅฃใใฆใใพใใพใใใใใใชใซ็ใใชใใฃใใงใใใๅใใฎใฏ็ตๆง้ฃใใใชใใพใใใ
ไปๆฅๆญฏๅป่
ใซ่กใใชใใใฐใชใใชใใงใใใๆญฏๅป่
ใใใฏๅใใใๆนใงใใใ้ข่ฅฟใฎ็ฐ่ใใๆฅใใใใๆญฏๅป่
ใใใฎๅใๆนใซใพใ ใชใใชใใงใใๅใๆฉๅฃใงใใใใพใ่ใๅใใพใใใ
ใงใใใใ้ ๅผตใใพใใ
Jan. 16, 2020
I Dolci!
Pensavo di scrivere questo diario in giapponese perchรฉ voglio provare a usare il giapponese il piรน possibile ma penso che il mio giapponese non sia sufficiente per esprimermi chiaramente.
Ieri dopo la lezione, sono andata alla panetteria di Dominique Ansel appena aperta la scorsa settimana. Non vedevo l'ora di assaggiare i suoi dolci perchรฉ sono un fan di signor Ansel. Ammiraro la sua passione per fare i dolci, รจ il mio mastro pasticciere preferito. A me, รจ un maestro nei dolci francesi. Nella panetteria, ci sono dei dolci che sono a forma del cibo tradizionale di Hong Kong che รจ piรน famoso. Secondo me, signor Ansel ha fatto un bel lavoro nella localizzazione.
Alla fine, ho comprato la madeleine alle castagne che somiglia ad una castagna arrosto. Erano sfornate da poco, cosรฌ erano deliziose! Ho comprato anche un croissant ma non l'ho ancora provato.
Ho il suo libro di ricette ma non ho ancora provato le ricette perchรฉ mi sembrano molto difficile da fare. Spero di migliorare la mia abilitร di fare i dolci prima di provare le sue ricette.
Jan. 16, 2020
2020.01.15(ๆฐด)
้ชใใฐใใไปๆฅใฏ55ใปใณใใใใ็ฉใใฃใใ้ชใฎใใๅญฆๆ กใฏ้้ใใฆใใฆใใชใฉใใฏในใฎๆฅใ ใฃใใใ ใใฉใๅญฆๆ กใฏ้้ใใใใฎใงใใพใ IOCใใใฆใใชใๅ้ใฎใฟใคใ ในใญใใใๆฅ้ฑๅพใซใใใใๅ้ใฏๆฅใ็ตใคใซใคใใฆใพใใพใใใฃใจไธๅฎใซใชใใ็งใฏ็ซๆๆฅใซใใฆใใใฃใใญใๅฎใฏใฟใคใ ในใญใใใ้ธใถๆใๆฐดๆๆฅใซใใใใฃใใใฉใใฎๆฅไปใฏใใ่ฉฐใพใฃใฆใใใๆๆๆฅใจ็ซๆๆฅใๆฎใฃใฆใไธๅนธใจ่ฆใใฆๅฎใฏๅนธ็ฆใใใใใชใใ
Jan. 16, 2020
Discordใฎๆ็จฟ
ใButlerใใใซใใฎ้ฏใไปปใใใใฎใงใใใฃใใจ้ ๅผตใฃใฆใใใจๆใฃใฆใใพใใใใใใ่ฒใ
ใชๆฑบๅฎใๅคใใไธใซใ้ฏใฎๅบๆฌ็ใชๆง้ ใๅคใใฆใใใจๆใใพใใใชใฎใงใๅคงใใชใขใใใใผใใใใใฐใใใง่ฒผใฃใฆใใใ ใใพใใ
่ฆ็นใฏไปฅไธใงใ๏ผ
ใปไป้ฑใฎ้ฑๆซใใๆฏ้ฑใฎใใใซ้่ซใใคในใใฃใใใชใฉใ้ๅฌใใใใจๆใใพใใๆๅใฏไธๆ้ใใใ่ฑ่ชใง่ฉฑใใฆไธๆ้ๆฅๆฌ่ชใง่ฉฑใใคใใใงใ๏ผใคใพใใไธๆ้ใใใฃใใ่ฉฑใ่จ่ชใฏไบคไบใใพใ๏ผ
ใปใทใฃใคใชไบบใ่ฉฑใใใใชใไบบใๅๅ ใงใใพใ๏ผjproom่ใๅฐใจenroom่ใๅฐใไฝใฃใใฎใงใใใฒใๅฉ็จใใ ใใ
ๆฅๆๆฅใฎๆฅๆฌๆ้ใฎๅๅ10ๆใซใใฎใใคในใใฃใใใ้ๅฌใใพใใๆ้ใใใฃใใ่ฉฑใใพใใใ๏ผ(ๆฅๆฌๆ้๏ผ1ๆ19ๆฅใปๅๅ10ๆใ๏ฝใใขใกใชใซๆ้๏ผ1ๆ18ๆฅใปๅๅ8ๆ EST๏ผ
ใใใใใใใใใ้กใใใพใ๏ผ่ณชๅใใฃใใใใฒๅใซ้ฃ็ตกใใฆใใ ใใ๏ผใ
ใผใผใผใผใผใผใผ
่จๆญฃใใฆใใใใๅนธใใงใใใใใใใ้กใใใพใ๏ผ๏ผ
Jan. 16, 2020
Jan. 16, 2020
ใ่ๅฑใใใใ
็งใฏๆจๆฅใใใใใใใฎใ่ๅฑใใใใใ่ชญใฟใพใใใ็ฉ่ชใฎ่ๅฐใฏ็ฐ่ใงใใๅ็ฉใฎใพใญใใงใใ่ๅฑใฎไธปไบบใใใพใใ่ๅฑใฎไธปไบบใฏ้ๅนดใฎๆฏๅญใใใพใใๆฏๅญใฏ่ฉฑใใพใใใใใใฉใใใฉใผใใจใ ใ่จใใพใใใใๆฅใ็ทใ่ๅฑใซๆฅใฆใๆฏๅญใ็ทใฎๅจใซไนฑๆดใใใใจ่จใใพใใใๅฎใฏใใใใฏๅใงใใใไบไบบใฏไบใใซๆใๅใฃใฆใใใ่ๅฑใฎไธปไบบใฏๆใไบใซๅๆใใใใๅใใใใฆๆญปใใ ใๆญปใฌๆใฏๆฏๅญใฏใใใใ่ฉฑใใพใใใ็ก้งๆญปใซใใใใชใใใใจ่จใใฆใใใฎๅพใๆฏๅญใฏใใฎๅจใๅฆๅจ ใใใฆใ็ตๅฉใใพใใ่ฉฑใฏใจใฆใๆฒใใ่ฉฑใใงใใๆๅพใซใฏๆฏๅญใฏ็ถ่ฆชใซใใใซใชใใพใใใใๆๅณใๅฝผใฏ็ถ่ฆชใฎใพใญใใพใใๅฝผใฎ่ตคใกใใใฏใ่ฉฑใใชใใฎใงใๅฝผใฎใพใญใใพใใ
Jan. 15, 2020
ํ๊ตญ์ด 2020/01/15
์๋
ํ์ธ์~
์ ๋ ์ค๋ซ๋์ ํ๊ตญ์ด ๊ณต๋ถํ๋ ค๊ณ ๋
ธ๋ ฅํ์ง๋ง ์ค๋์ ์์ง๋ ์๋ชปํด์ ..
ํ๊ตญ ์ฌ๋๋ค์ด ๋น ๋ฅธ ๋งํ๊ธฐ ๋๋ฌธ์ ์ ํํ
ํ๊ตญ ๋๋ผ๋ง๋ฅผ ์๋ง ์์ด ๋ณด๋ ๋๋ฌด ์ด๋ ค์์.
๊ทธ๋๋ ์ธ์ ๊ฐ๋ ๋ค ์ดํดํ๊ณ ํ๊ตญ ์ฌ๋์ด๋ ์ ์ฐฝํ๊ฒ ์๊ธฐํ๊ณ ์ถ์ด์.
๋ค๋ค ๋์์ฃผ์
์ ๊ฐ์ฌํฉ๋๋ค!~
Jan. 15, 2020
Geld
Wenn ich habe 100 Euro, ich kรถnnte viele Dinge damit machen. Aber jetzt, brauche ich Geld zu reisen nach Barcelona zu treffen eine Freunde, Elena. Sie liebt gerade in Barcelona, denn sie geht zu die Barcelona Universitรคt. Sie ist eine tolle Fruende von mir, and ich liebe Sie so sehr. Ich wรผrde gerne ein Wochenende dort verbringen. In Mai, ein band namens โCellar Darling" wird ein Konzert durchfรผhren. Sie sind eine meiner Lieblingsbands! Also, hoffentlich ich kann mit Elena zum Konzert gehen.
Jan. 15, 2020
Jan. 15, 2020
ไผๆก ใผ๏ผ๏ผๅ็ฎใฎๆ็จฟ
ๆ่ฟๅใฏไผๆกใฎใใใซใ็ถใใใๆไผใฃใฆใใพใใใ็ถใใใฏ่ชๅใฎๆฃฎใฎๅใใใใใใๆฏๅนดๆจใๅปใใ ใใใฉใฏใฟใผใซ็ฝฎใใใใใกใฎๅฎถใซ้ใใ ใใใพใใไปๆฅใผใใๆไผใฃใฆๆฌๅฝใซใใใใใใงใใใ
Jan. 15, 2020
1ๆ15ๆฅใ
ไป้ฑใฎๆๆๆฅใ็งใฏไบ้ฑ้ใฎไผใฟใๅงใพใใพใใใใใฎๆฅใฏๆฅ็จใๆธใใพใใใๆ่ฟใกใใฃใจๅคชใใใกใชใฎใงใใใฎไบ้ฑ้ใซๆฏๆๆฃๆญฉใใใใใจใซใใพใใใ
ๆจๆฅใๆฃๆญฉใฎๆใซ้ฃใฎๅบญใใใ็งใ่ชฐใใ่ฆใฆใใใใใซๆใใพใใใๅคใชใ ใชใจๆใใพใใใ่ชฐใๅบญใซใใชใใฎใงใใงใใๆญขใฃใฆใๅบญใใกใใใจ่ชฟในใใใใใใซใฏ้ปใ็ซใจ้่ฒใฎ็ซใใใพใใใใจใฆใๅฏๆใ็ซใใกใงใใใๅ็ใๆฎใฃใฆใๆฃๆญฉใ็ถใใพใใใ
Jan. 15, 2020
ใใฃใจๆฌใ่ชญใฟใใ
ๆ่ฟใฏใใใพใๆฌใ่ชญใฟใพใใใใใๆใใใฃใใๆฌใ่ชญใใใใฉใใใใฏๅๅใงใฏใใใพใใใๅใฎ้จๅฑใซๆฌใใฏใกๅใใๆฌๆฃใฏๅใซใพใฃใฆใใใใใคใใใฎๆฌๆฃใ่ฆใใจใใพใใๆใใใใฆใใพใใใใฃใจๆฌใ่ชญใใใใซใใคใ้ใฎไธญใซๆฌใ็ฝฎใใพใใๅณไปใฎ้ใฎๆฌใฏใDavid MitchellใฎNumber Nine DreamใใใใฆCarl JungใฎMan and His Symbolsใๆฏๆฅๆฌใ่ชญใใ ใ้ ญใๅฟใใใฃใจๅผทใใชใใพใใ
โ็ฌใฟ
Jan. 15, 2020
Ich habe keine Lust
Heute habe ich keine Lust, auf etwas in meinem Journal zu schreiben. Da ich noch in der Arbeit bin, schreibe ich nur einen kleinen Text.
Mein Ellbogen fรผhlt sich heute ein bisschen besser als gestern und vorgestern, wahrscheinlich weil ich gestern ein paar entspannt รbungen fรผr ihn gemacht habe. Aber er ist noch nicht hundert Prozent in Ordnung.
Vielleicht wenn ich mit den รbungen weitermache, wird mein Ellbogen in einer oder in zwei Wochen besser sein.
Jan. 15, 2020
่ช็ๆฅ
ไปๆฅใฏ่ช็ๆฅใ ใใใใซใALTใฎไผ่ญฐใใใใฎใงใๅ
้ฑไผ็คพใซไผใฟใ้ ผใพใใใ
ไผ่ญฐใฏๆฏๆไธๅใใฉใๆ่ฟ่กใใใจใใๆฐใใชใใ
็ตๆงๆ้ใฎ็ก้งใจๆใใใใใฆใๆๆๆฅใๅคใใฆใๅนดๆซใฎ็ตใใๅใซๅ
จ้จไฝฟใใใใ
ใพใใฏใๅๆ็ถใใไบๅฎใใชใใใชใใชใใๆใใใ็ตฆๆใใใใใใใใๆ้ทใใงใใไปไบใๆขใใใใฎใ
ใงใใใไปๆฅใฏๅญฆๆ กใงๅๆใพใงใซใใฆใๅ
็ใใกใฎใฌใในใณใๆไผใฃใฆใใใใๆฐไบบใฎๅ
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ๆไธญใซใ้ๅฝใฎไปไบใๆใๅบใใฆใ้ๅฝใฎๆใใใชใฃใ. ๅใฎใในใใๅฐๆฌๅใใฃใฆใๆฏๆฅๆฐใใ้ข็ฝใใใจใๅญฆใใงใใใใใ็ตๆธใจใๅฒๅญฆใจใใใใ
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Jan. 15, 2020
Jan. 15, 2020
์ ํ๊ตญ์ด๋ฅผ ์ ํํฉ๋๋ค
์ ๋ ์ฌ๋๋ค์๊ฒ ํ๊ตญ์ด๋ฅผ ๋ฐฐ์ฐ๊ณ ์๋ค๊ณ ํ ๋ ๋ง๋ค, ํญ์ ์๋๊ณ ๋ฌผ์ด๋ด ๋๋ค. ์ผ์ดํ๊ณผ ์ผ์ด๋๋ผ๋ง๋ค์ ์ซ์ดํ๊ณ ์ค๊ตญ์ด๊ฐ ๋ ์ ์ฉํด์, ํ๊ตญ์ด๊ฐ ์ด์ํ ์ ํ์๋๋ค. ์ ๋ง๋ก, ์ ๋ ๋ชจ๋ฆ ๋๋ค. ์ด๋ป๊ฒ ํ๊ตญ์ด์ ๊ด์ฌ์ ๊ฐ์ ๊ฑธ ๊ธฐ์ตํ์ง ์์ต๋๋ค. ์๋ ์, ๋ถํ์์ ์ํฉ์ ๊ด์ฌ์ด ์๊ณ ํ๊ธ์ ๋ํ ๋น๋์ค ๋ณธ ๊ฒ ๊ธฐ์ตํ๊ธฐ๋ ํฉ๋๋ค. ์๋ฌดํผ, ํ๊ตญ์ด๋ฅผ ๋ฐฐ์ฐ๊ธฐ ์์ํ์ต๋๋ค. ํ์ฌ, 1๋ ์ฏค ํ๋ฅด๊ณ ๋ง์ด ๊ฐ์ ๋์ต๋๋ค. ์์ง ์ดํ๊ฐ ์ ํ์ ์ด๊ณ , ์์ฃผ ์ฌ์ ์ ์ฐ์ง๋ง, ๋ฌธ๋ฒ์ ์๊ฐ์ด ์ง๋๋ฉด์ ์ข์๋ฅ๋๋ค.
Jan. 15, 2020
Ein freier Tag
Als ich mit meinen Eltern gewohnt habe, hat meine Mutter jeder Tag gekocht, geputzt und sich um uns gekรผmmert. Natรผrlich, war das sehr anstrengend so haben wir entschieden, ihr einen freien Tag zu geben.
Freitags, sind mein Bruder und ich von der Schule zurรผckgekommen und wir haben das Haus sauber gemacht. Danach hat die Familie Pizza zum Abendessen bestellt. Wenn die Pizza angekommen ist, haben meine Hรผnde gebellt, bevor der Auslieferungsfahrer die Tรผrklingel klingeln kรถnnte. Mein Vater ist runter die Treppen gegangen und hat die Tรผr aufgemacht. Wenn er der Auslieferungsfahrer bezahlt hat, hat er angemeldet, "Die Pizzas sind hier!" und jeder ist laufend gekommen. Wir haben vor dem Fernsehen gesessen wรคhrend des Essens.
Dankeschรถn fรผrs Lesen!
Jan. 15, 2020
ๆฅใฎๅบ
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Jan. 15, 2020
Nowadays, is it easier for people to maintain good health?
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, it is easier for people to maintain good health than those living in the past.
When asked about is it easier to maintain good health in present-day than in the past? Most people strongly support the idea that it is much more easier than before, while others disagree. Personally, I side with the first.
To begin with, most of governments provide an all-round health care system to citizens that they have a better chance to maintain their good health. As a government, strives for the well-being of the citizens is vital goal to govern the country. Having a good health system which will take good care of their people and live longer. Suppose a patient have a health problem, thanks to developed technology, he is able to discover the the problem early, be treated and recover as soon as possible.
Moreover, people have more health knowledge than before. The conception of health is developing by our education. More and more people concern about the nutrition balance and body health. For instance, most of family have refrigerator at home. If they have leftover, they will put it into refrigerator and finish it soon. It is because they have the conception of putting food into cooler that will not get worse. Yet, people in the past, did not have this technology to store the food, it was possible have some health problems. So the knowledge of health is essentially important to people which will maintain our good health.
Of course, some people might say that it is more challenging to maintain good health nowadays than those living in the past. It is because people are too busy to cook by themself and it is because too convenient to eat outside. In most Asian countries, for example, people usually work overtime, when they off duty, they are not willing to buy goods from supermarket, and cook by themself, since it is time consuming. So they prefer eat outside which the food is more salty and sweetly than the one made at home. However, I believe that it is easier for people to maintain good health of the time. It either we have an all-round health care system or good health knowledge. People have far more great chance, after all, living in a health life.
Jan. 15, 2020
Meetup
Ich habe heute Abend viel Deutchlernern getroffen. Wir haben im Cafรฉ Paprika, ein kleine Cafรฉ in San Francisco, uns getroffen.
Ich studiere Deutsch meistens allein, also war es bisschen komisch, mit zu viel andere zu reden. Es mach aber viel Spaร! Es war schwer, am erstens, Deutsch zu sprechen. Nach zwei Biere war es aber einfacher. Ich freue mich darauf, das German Stammtisch Meetup wiederzugehen.
Jan. 15, 2020
What can bring young people the most benefit
Some young people are free in the evening or have days off at school, which way can bring them the most benefit?
1. Trying to accumulate work experience by a part-time job or volunteering in a community.
2. Learning to play a sport.
3. Learning to play a musical instrument.
As time goes by, technology offers most people equally have an opportunity to gain abundant sources from the internet to develop own ability. Nowadays, young people live in a competitive society, more and more parents begin to pay attention on their childrenโs education not only academic work but extracurricular activities as well. Among the three choices offered in the prompt, I side with trying to accumulate work experience by a part-time job or volunteering in a community brings young people the most benefit.
To begin with, accumulating work experience by a part-time job is a best chance to observe the real work life. Only through a practical work experience, can young kids discover how is the workplace look like and be prepared advance. Working at a restaurant, for instance, children are able to learn how to order, make dishes,place tables and so on. Through the working experience, they certainly understand the whole process in real life not just imagination or even make sure this is the job they want to do in the future. So, having working experiences previously have much more benefit to young people, they will not waste their time to recognize what working area do they like after graduated.
Moreover, volunteering in a community is a priceless opportunity to learn interpersonal skill. In present-day, people gradually lose their ability of communicating with people face to face since they are too rely on communication applications. A case in point, being a volunteer in a hospital, young people have a chance to communicate with doctors, patients, and the others volunteers, meanwhile they are able to cultivate their interpersonal skill. In addition, the skill definitely help them learn how to express their perspectives politely and respect othersโ different viewpoints.
Admittedly, some people might think that young people learn to play a sport or learn to play a musical instrument are more beneficial. These either enhance their teamwork ability or develop all-round interests. Playing a basketball match, for example, players indeed need each other to cooperate with, build their well-coordinated and gain a victory as a goal which require a lot of practices to achieve. However, having work experiences or volunteering in a community cannot only have a better picture of real work life but learn interpersonal skill. For me, if children want to survive in this severe world of the time, after all, they should be prepared.