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Quando foi a última vez que você praticou um esporte?
Eu fiz esporte para última vez hoje a noite.
Eu gosto de correr, mas infelizemente nâo posso ir embora por causa de Coronavirus.
Mas eu tenho sorte, eu compri um esteira para correr no apartemente duas semanas atras.
Então eu posso correr na casa, e bom para o moral.
March 26, 2020
격리 생활
코로나바이러스 때문에, 나는 집에서 머무르고 있다. 우리 나라는 이주일 동안 비상사태를 있어서 밖으로 나가면 안 된다. 그래서 나와 내 친구들 다 집에서 있고 못 만난다. 그렇지만, 우리는 같이 컴퓨터 게임을 하고 음성 채트에서 이야기해서 괜찮는다. 엄마가 여기 있고 우리 고양기도 있어서 나는 혼자 아니다.
지난 금요일에 "동물의 숲"이 발매했는데 나는 그것을 놀고 있다. 재미있다! 그 게임을 너무 좋아한다. 나는 토픽 시험을 위해 공부하고 있는데 코로나바이러스 때문에 한 달에 미루됬다. 그렇니까 지금은 좀 쉰다.
근데 집에서 항상 머무르기 너무 피곤하다. 이 사태를 빨리 끝났으면 좋겠다... 밖으로 가서 산책을 다니고 싶다!
March 26, 2020
Qu'est-ce que je prends quand je sors de chez moi
Évidemment, je ne peux pas sortir sans mes clés. Mais, généralement, j'ai aussi besoin de mon portable. Si j'ai envie d'acheter quelque chose, de prendre le métro ou l'autobus, ou d'aller à la bibliothèque, je prends aussi mon portefeuille. Ces trois choses, c’est tout ce qu'il me faut. Le reste n'est pas si nécessaire.
Aujourd'hui, les portables peuvent être très utiles. Avec le mien, je peux regarder les horaires des trains ou de l'autobus, écrire des mémos et consulter des cartes. Mais je peux encore aller loin de chez moi sans le prendre. Je connais bien la ville, et il y a un plan de ville à beaucoup des arrêts de bus.
March 26, 2020
Trennbare Verben: Übung
Ich hole das Paket ab. Mein Vater holt jeden Tag meine Mutter von ihrer Arbeit ab.
Ich rufe den Arzt. Cristina ruft mich später an. Sie hat mich später angerufen.
Nachdem sie die Tür aufgemacht hat, habe ich die zugemacht. Dann hat sie die Heizung angemacht und das Radio angeschaltet.
Nach 30 Minuten, habe ich die Flasche aufgekriegt.
Könnt ihr das Fenster aufmachen? Nein, gerade haben wir etwas vor, sorry.
Die Schüler schreibt im Unterricht mit.
- Entschuldigung Lehrerin, können wir jetzt gehen?
- Jonas fährt später los aber Sarah darf jetzt losfahren.
March 26, 2020
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March 26, 2020
'What' Cleft Sentences
1) What Samantha did was help an injured man stand up and give him a lift to the nearest hospital.
2) What happened was Daniel and I went out of the house, saw a suspiciously familiar face, then realized it was the offender from the news.
3) What he detested was the wedding invitation from his friend.
4) What Colonel Harris did was order all of us to wipe out the local residents in this area.
March 26, 2020
March 26, 2020
March 26, 2020
Quais são alguns pontos negativos das redeis sociais?
Pessoalmente, eu nunca me inscrevi num rede social, nem Facebook, nem Twitter etc. mas eu acho que tem pontos negativos.
Eu acho que o primaira problema é os "Fake news". É muito facíl nos redeis sociais de publicar informações errados. Por examplo, pessoas morreram no Irã porque eles leram no redeis sociais que álcool ia matar o Coronavirus.
Um outro ponto negativo e que nos podemos ser anónimo, então é possivel de falar sobre coisas ilegal ou intimidar outras pessoas.
March 26, 2020
March 26, 2020
March 25, 2020
Der Frühling kommt
Und weil wir alle Zuhause bleiben müssen, können wir den nicht genießen! Das ist wirklich schade. Die Sonne scheint, die Vogel singen und die Blumen blühen. Wobei ist seit ein paar Tagen die Temperatur etwas niedriger im Vergleich letzen Monat.
Habt ihr in den letzten Tagen spazieren gegangen?
March 25, 2020
March 25, 2020
Shazam Part 2
This article definitely contains spoilers.
Continuation from last time of the rundown.
The villain is a man who couldn't pass the Shazam test by the old Shazam when he was a child. This villain killed this old Shazam and gained an evil power with monsters.
Billy had moved from foster parent to foster parent. But finally he met a nice couple. This couple were also raised up in a foster home, and took in four children before Billy after they married. The family was not going well first, but after Billy's secret was revealed to the siblings, they started to cooperate with Billy.
This villain was so strong that Billy was struggling to fight. Billy's siblings helped him. At the climax, Billy stood a magic wand holding which the old wizard passed on to him, and told his siblings to clutch it. They said “Shazam” together, and then, all of them turned into adult Shazam. The Shazam team defeated the villain and his monsters.
I like this story very much!
Billy's real mom marooned him at a festival when he was a little boy because she was too young to raise him up. Billy met his mom in person while the nice foster couple took him in, but he was rejected by her. Among hero's stories I know, Billy is the first hero who has a really miserable background. But he gained a new family whose members are all good and cheerful and kind. Also, I think this foster parents are very happy because their children are all Shazam though they don't know.
At the ending scene, Superman appers at the last scene.
This is really irresistible to fans 😍
March 25, 2020
March 25, 2020
March 25, 2020
３月２５日。
先日、私は友達と近い森へ散歩に行きました。この森はたくさんの経路があります。私たちは運動をあんまりしなかったので、簡単な経路を選びました。でも、この経路はとてもつまらなかったです。左手に見ると色々な高いビルを見えたが、右手に見ると汚い川がありました。でも、私達は森の中に入る小さい道を見付けた。この道はとても不思議で日光があんまり達しませんでした。それで、面白いだと二人言いました。そして、二人は森の中に行きました。
高い坂が突然現れました。自分はちょっと疲れっていてけど、目の前に美しい事がありました。土には落ち葉や大きい石などをかけて虫がたくさん飛んでいたのです。その時、二人は絵の中に入られたようです。
March 25, 2020
Sentences With Participle Clause
1) Scrambling up the wall, Marc scratched his palm on the sharp stone.
2) Knowing not to move the unconscious person, Josh instantly called the ambulance.
3) Were you here on time, you'd have seen your son graduate.
4) Having been bumped over the spikes, the front tires of the car became flat.
5) After forming an alliance with that company, Ms Baker received a wealth of profit.
6) Having decided where the children might go, I headed towards the convenience store.
7) Not spotted, the intruder sneaked into the rear open window.
8) Having given the report succinctly, he headed out from the office.
March 25, 2020
Survive On Venus (Integrated)
The listening section casts doubt on the reading passage for humans are impossible presence on Venus. First, the reading states that the pressure at Venus's surface is much greater than at Earth's. So, almost everything is landed on Venus by humans, such as spacecraft, would be crushed. The listening part, however, asserts that establishing a station which is floating on Venus' atmosphere rather than surface, the problem can be solve. Since since the pressure on the air is lower than surface. So, there is no danger of the station to be crushed.
Second, the author thinks that Venus contains very less water and oxygen for humans surviving. So, these should be import from Earth to Venus. Yet, the speaker from the listening portion points out that Venus does contains carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid, the chemicals are able to produce water and oxygen for humans survival. Thus, it is not necessary to supply these elements from Earth.
Finally, the reading passage mentions that sunlight is blocked by the thick clouds. Since very little light reaches the surface, humans could not get electricity to power. Nevertheless, the lecturer argues that above clouds are not very thick and clouds can reflect the sunlight too. People can collect the light from direct sunlight and reflection from above and below clouds to generate electricity to power the station.
March 25, 2020
March 25, 2020
March 25, 2020
Das Quarantänisieren
Einmal pro hundert Jahre... Hoffentlich das wird wahr, weil ich glaube dass ich durch so einander nicht erleben könnte. Diese Pandemie hat schon viele meine Pläne zerstört. Ich bin ein Senior und kann doch nichts tun. Ich sitze Zuhause, und breche zusammen, als ich fühle mich dicker und langsamer werden. Ich hasse mich, weil ich hasse meine Familie mehr jeden Tag. Meine Mutter ist mir sehr anstrengend, und mein Stiefvater ist einfach zu laut. Mein Großvater kann kaum irgendwas verstehen, und immer meine Mutter fragt dumme Fragen über Nachrichten von Wochen die schon passiert sind. Ich darf kaum ein Buch lesen, Fernsehen, oder eine Coke trinken, ohne meine Mutter etwas sagen. Ja, ich kann endlich Dinge die mir gefällt kaufen, aber das ist noch nicht ohne Kommentar von ihr.
Ich habe mich nicht so sehr vom Verlust Proms geweint, und auch nicht für den Schulabschluss, aber ich wäre infrage für eine Reise nach Deutschland kommen, und jetzt ist es einfach nicht. Ich habe Reisen verloren, und, am wichtigsten, meine tägliche Interaktionen mit meine Freunde und, besonders, Freundinnen, habe ich noch nicht mehr. Ich bin ja sehr enttäuscht, sehr frustriert drin, und will viel tun, aber kann nichts. Ich kann nur hoffen, dass, als ich so lebe, würde ich mich zu verbessern lernen, ohne Behörde.
Entschuldigung für das Ablassen meinen Dampf, aber ich wollte auf Deutsch zu schreiben, und das war all dass zu mir kam. Bitte helft ihr mich mein Deutsch zu verbessern! Besonders wenn ihr meine Redensart korrigieren könntet. Danke sehr!!
March 24, 2020