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Qu'est-ce que vous faites dans la vie?
Un jour un voyageur a tombé dessus des hommes qui traînaient des pierres lourdes. Leur chemin semblait long et presque insurmontable. Alors, il a décidé d'arrêter un d'entre eux et lui demander ce qu'ils faisaient. L'homme l'a regardé avec un regard terne et a poussé un soupir. Après, il " a expliqué " à le voyager, il a dit simplement qu'il traînait des pierres. Il était en colère parce que le voyager ne pouvait pas comprendre ça lui-même. Alors, le voyager ne pouvait que poser la même question à un autre porteur : " Pouvez-vous me dire qu'est-ce que vous faites ? Pourquoi traînez-vous ces pierres si lourdes ? ". Cet homme a répondu qu'il gagnait sa croûte car sa famille était très grande et il devait la soutenir. Donc, le voyageur a décidé de parler avec la troisième personne. Il a choisi encore un parmi les hommes de façon aléatoire et lui a demandé ce qu'il faisait. Ce porteur s'est arrêté, a bombé sa poitrine et a fait un grand sourire. Avec la joie dans ses yeux il s'est exclamé, qu'il était là pour bâtir une cathédrale. Son voix a sonné fort et fier.
Vraiment, nos buts peuvent toujours expliquer notre état d'esprit et notre attitude à ce que nous faisons dans la vie.
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자기 나라에 비하면 한국 방식의 교육방식은 어떻게 다른가? 그쪽 국가에서 한국 교육방식을 따라할 이유가 있나
미국 교육방식은 한국 교육방식에 비하면 많이 다름이 있다. 미국보다 한국은 훨씬 요구하고 스테스 많다. 한국에 학생들이 너무 늦게 공부하고 일하고 겨우 잠을 잔다. 한국에 학생 열심히 공부하는 학원이 있다. 학생은 대개 집에 말고 여기에 공부한다. 스트레스 때문에 많은 학생이 자신 죽이기로 한다. 한국에 학생의 교육 목표는 대학교에 가는 거인데 초등학교만큼 대학교 도전이 없다.
미국에 학교는 아직 많이 도전이 있지만 한국 비교하면 덜 스트레스 있다. 학생은 대개 사회적 삶은 있을 수 있다. 또, 많은 학생이 아르바이트가 있기도 한다. 대개 학생이 학원 대신에 집에 공부하거나 언젠가 카페나 도서관에 공부한다. 많은 똑똑하고 열심히 일하는 학생이 겨우 잠을 자지만 대부분 한국만큼 학교 때문에 잠을 잘 수 없는 학생이 겨우 있다. 또, 초등학교에 비하면 대학교 대개 거의 어려우거나 더 어렵다.
미국 교육방식은 한국 교육방식을 따라하면 안 된다. 한국 교육방식이 너무 성격해도 너무 많이 스트레스가 있고 학생들에게 좀 위험한다. 미국 교육을 향상하기 위해 다른 방식이 있다.
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Aug. 12, 2020
De små tog
Misty Mountain Railroad var en modeljernbane nær Blairsville, Georgia. Man betalte ti dollars for at komme ind. Der var et stor bygning, med mange små tog. Der var tog tæt på loftet og vejene på gulvet. Der var en lille gangbor omkring rummet. Den var en stor cirkel omkring togene. Dar var en gammel mand, der kunne godt lide tog.
Nær døren, der var et lille karneval og Atlanta, Georgias største by. Der var en slagmark og et snædrakket bjerg. Der er mange små byer fra nordliske Georgia og et lille nail house. Det »neglehus« var omgivet af en stor byggeplads.
Aug. 12, 2020
Programación y idiomas
Los procesos de aprender programación o un idioma son muy parecidos. Un gran parte del proceso es entender la estructura del lenguaje y las reglas, mientras que al mismo tiempo hay ciertos temas que uno aprende por memoria porque no le queda otra manera. También cuando sabe cómo manejar cierto lenguaje es más fácil aprender un lenguaje nuevo: Python a Javascript o castellano a francés.
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Brief Antwort
Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,
vielen Dank einen Tandempartner zu vermitteln. Ich beantworte Ihre Fragen gerne. Zuerst muss ich mir vorstellen. Mein Name ist xxx und ich komme aus Indien. Ich bin 32 Jahr alt. Ich interessiere mich auf Buch lesen, historische sehenwürdigkeiten besuchen und Meditation. Ich lerne Deutsch seit sechs Monaten. Jeden Tag habe ich am Nachmittag die Zeit von 14 Uhr bis 15 Uhr. Ich freue mich, meinen Tandempartner zu treffen.
Liebe Grüße
Aug. 12, 2020
文化複習3
1. 一般來說，韓國人不喜歡外國人。
2. 一般來說，老師們都很喜歡小孩。
3. 在美國，一般來說，人們都只會說英文。
4. 一般來說，喜歡學習外語的人也很喜歡去旅行。
5. 一般來說，每天都吃蔬菜的人比不吃蔬菜的人更健康。
6. 我把破洞的舊鞋子弄丟了。
7. 他在廚房裡弄飯。
8. 她很聰明，什們都可以弄得了解。
9. 因為客人快要來，所以我們得把客廳弄乾淨。
10. 功課，他還沒弄完。
11. 我要買新的手機。我的手機不可以上網。再說，我的手機有時候自動關機。
12. 有不少人討厭他。人們都覺得他又自私又不誠實。再說，他喜歡批評別人。
13. 這件外套非常漂亮。再說今天打七十折！我很想買。
14. 水果很健康。再說，水果也很好吃。
15. 你把我們的報告弄丟。再說，你每天都遲到。老闆快要開除你！
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Aug. 12, 2020
Prisons
Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss.
Today, prison is the main instrument for punishing criminals. In my opinion, the role of prison in the punishment system should be minimized to a place for people who committed a serious crime. In this essay I will discuss the main points for shrinking the role of prison in modern society.
The first point is that prisons are economically inefficient. What I mean by this is that with the increase of criminal activity prisons quickly become overcrowded, and the government are forced to build new ones to fill the growing needs. As a result, this leads to the budget spending, which I think is not the best option for allocating tax payers’ money.
Another noticeable point is that the prison is not suitable for all kinds of crimes. That is to say, prison is a cruel punishment for minor offenses such as shoplifting. In many cases, people who committed that kind of crimes can become habitual criminals after leaving the prison. Therefore, I think the sentences for that kind of crimes should be changed for a lighter punishment such a community service.
Let’s turn to the opposite side of the argument. Many people believe that the prison is the only way to punish criminals. It is reasonable that there is no place in society for the criminals who committed a serious crime, and it is clear that serious crimes such as murder or rape deserve a prison sentence. However, I still insist that the minor offenses should be treated differently.
All in all, prison is one of the institutions that should serve the needs of society. If prisons become overcrowded and drain the budget, or turning individuals to the habitual criminals, it becomes a burden for the society. Therefore, I believe that the role of prison as a punishment tool should be minimized in future.
Aug. 12, 2020
Les faux indépendants
À l'égard d'une entreprise américaine, il est moins cher d'engager des travailleurs indépendants que des salariés, parce qu'on peut ainsi éviter les charges sociales. En même temps, le statut de travailleur indépendant peut désavantager un travailleur s'il ne réfléchit pas sa véritable relation avec l'entreprise qui l'emploie. En général, s'il est ainsi classé, le travailleur doit payer la proportion des charges sociales que son employeur payerait d'habitude, c'est-à-dire, deux fois sa contribution normale. Il peut réduire ses impôts s'il accepte son statut de travailleur indépendant et s'il déduit les dépenses qu'il a prétendument engagées au cours de son travail. Cependant, ce n'est pas une bonne idée : en exécutant cette stratégie, le travailleur commet une fraude, car ce qu'il déduit n'est pas souvent vraiment déductible. De plus, sans contester ce statut, le travailleur n'a droit ni aux allocations de chômage, ni à la compensation du travailleur (« workers' compensation », ou « compensación de trabajadores » en espagnol), ni au tarif d'heures supplémentaires.
C'est pour cela que les conducteurs de Lyft et d'Uber ont intenté un procès à leurs sociétés, mais il y a beaucoup d'autres exemples de ce problème en dehors de l'économie de partage. Pour combattre ce type de fraude fiscale, la Californie a adopté une nouvelle loi, AB5. Cette loi précise les conditions sous lesquelles on peut classer quelqu'un comme travailleur indépendant. Elle a beaucoup de défauts, mais je crois qu'elle sera avantageuse pour beaucoup de travailleurs.
Aug. 12, 2020
Fuyang
I was born in a small village of Taihe County, Fuyang City. Fuyang is my hometown.
The first time I went to Fuyang was in 1982 because going to school. The urban area population of the city then was a bit more than 150000 and the urban built-up area was about 15 square kilometres.
At that time, the famous buildings in this city were grand theater, department store, bus station and railway station.
The famous roads was Renmin road, Yingzhou road, Yinghe road and Yingshang road, especially the first two.
The tallest building was Fuyang hotel and it had five floors.
China was still in developing stage then, there were no tall buildings, no crowd people, no a lot of cars.
Of course, the city at that time wasn't looked as beautiful as it is now, especially in green works.
Now the city urban district has a population of about 1600000; his urban area covers around 160 square kilometres and various tall buildings and cars are all over the city.
It's estimated that each family has two or three cars.
Fuyang had rated of third-tier city since 2018, and its position has been risen from more than one hundred to seventy-eighth now.
The green works has been developed rapidly and you can see trees, flowers and parks everywhere.
The entire city are tidy and clean; it's no worse than a big city.
Like other cities in China, the development of Fuyang is very fast.
As a Fuyang person, I'm very happy to live here and I'm very proud of it.
Aug. 12, 2020
climate change #1
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In the previous decade, in wealthier countries, people are starting to realize the increasing climate change issues. As we saw, the foresight governments are gradually educating the younger generation in the environmental aspect and how dangerous it is. In some, that is the cost of human progress. A shortly irrational investment accompanies with a blockbuster thriving. It is a fair deal for some. But an uncontrolled use of natural resources, over- urbanizing, industry, and unforested are bringing the irreversible influence to the earth. Such as, the ozone layer is thinning, temperatures are rising, glaciers are melting, and our precious natural resources are disappearing. The time change, the fate worse. On my side, there has no way to mitigate the climate issues that is the price of the population growing, self-ambitions, and social development that is unstoppable.
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The escalating climate change as though a visible signal of an abysmal apocalypse, blaming mankind’s atrocity that full their own pocket by pillage nature. Instead, this depletion is the cost of their growth. Rich countries prevail by this game, that they may draw from our natural resources far more than they need to. When the balance chain, which between the domestic environment and mankind, is crank, the rich countries will turn their gun force to weaker countries and then keeping work. Meanwhile, for poor countries, some of this consumption is part of their societal growth. Some of them maybe desire the rich countries, as a hero, pull them out of the financial marsh and lead a short term of soaring economy. In my position, that is no everyone has a brave discuss the climate change issues on the table, especially the poor.
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For the social development, education building up, and green, most will be happy to pay the price. In some’ views, the consumption is unavoidable. Because they think economic recovery is matter. Compared with the people who live in rich countries, the poor are more eagerly money to save them out of poverty. If the poor have an opportunity to be wealthier, they will grab it tightly even if destroy the environment for return. That is the best example of a lesson; facing the fortune, the voracious appetite of humans will be aggerating, particular without asking a return. In other words, I never trust human can depress their desire successfully. The war of allative climate change is doom to fail, in my opinion.
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Aug. 11, 2020
Punctuation
Recently, I found something I had no clue it existed in English language. Some time ago, I was wondering where commas should be put in the sentences. I had no idea. When I asked someone at the time, I was told to put it in places where I can hear a pause in sound while reading it, and I believed it. Can you imagine? At the time, I was used to adhering to strict rules of the Czech language-my mother tongue; nevertheless, I stopped searching for rules governing punctuation in English. Until yesterday, I followed an intuition rooting from what was ingrained in my mind from the countless years of studying English. Even though I usually got it correct, it wasn't always the case. My last journal "Act yourself into feeling" is an example of this. I found just yesterday about dependent and independent clauses, and guess what; it was here on langcorrect when I found out while reading corrections of other people's journals. This journal is meant to be a meaningless, arid piece of text only to strengthen my knowledge of punctuation rules. I noticed that even native speakers sometimes don't know these rules and use intuition as I did-just like many people do in my mother tongue.
Aug. 11, 2020
deserves to be delivered
I mentioned the verb "to deserve to" in the last post.
Today, I'd like to talk about my favorite stories from Japanese animation "Violet Evergarden" in which that verb is used.
The main character is 14-years-old girl named Violet who lost her both arms and feelings by harrowing war experience.
She learn to figure out the person's true feeling and express it on paper through writing on behalf of someone using a typewriter.
You couldn't help crying at outstanding stories and beautiful scene (image?).
I feel that English-dubbed version is more comfortable with the worldview of the stories than Japanese original version. And over all, the verb "to deserve to" is used at important scenes.
For example, the old postman told Violet as following.
"After all, each one of them contains someone's precious feelings. Every letter deserves to be delivered."
Also, episode 10 including following lines is famous for an emotional story.
"There is no such thing as a letter that doesn't deserve to be delivered."
I'd like to have more people watch it.
Aug. 11, 2020
Should you do sports to stay healthy?
There are many types of sports in the world. Some people say that Football is the most popular sport in the world because millions of people watch it on TV every day.
Many health experts suggest that doing any form of sports is crucial for our body to stay healthy. In spite of this, some people still do not work out or do not do any kinds of sports. This is the reason why some people gain extra weight. This results in their immune system become weak; thus, they face many health issues.
I believe that everyone should work out or do sports in order to remain fit. That is as important as our jobs and other daily activities.
Aug. 11, 2020
Sport treiben!
Sollte man Sport treiben?
Es gibt verschiedene Sportarten auf der Welt. Viele Menschen sagen, dass Fußball die beliebteste Sportart auf der Welt ist. Es gibt Millionen Menschen, die sich Fußballspiele in den Fernsehen ansehen.
Zahlreiche Experten erklären, dass man Sport treiben sollte, um gesund zu bleiben. Trotzdem treiben manche Menschen keine Sport. Deswegen nehmen sie zu viel Gewicht zu und sind sie oft krank.
Ich bin der Meinung, dass man jeden Tag Sport treiben sollte. Es liegt daran, dass man fast immer gesund bleiben kann. Deswegen ist es genauso wichtig wie unser Job und andere Tätigkeiten.
Aug. 11, 2020
Der Zauberwürfel
Momentan steht ein Zauberwürfel auf dem Tisch, an dem ich diesen kleinen Aufsatz aufschreibe. Obwohl ich kann ihn schon nicht mehr lösen, er erinnert mich an vorbeigegangene gute Zeiten.
Vor zwei Sommern war ich im demselben Kurs mit einem Mädchen, auf das ich stand. Im Verlauf des Sommers hat sie mir allmählich beigebracht, den Würfel zu lösen. In Wirklichkeit lernte ich gerne von ihr, weil es mir eine Ausreden gab, mit ihr zu sprechen. 🙂
Vielleicht sollte ich wieder lernen, wie man den Würfel löst. Immerhin habe ich die Zeit, da meine Uni noch nicht angefangen ist.
Aug. 11, 2020
Ratschläge für Studenten
Für Mona:
Mona sollte, eine besser Zeitplan machen. Sie muss auch Zeit für sie zu haben. Wenn sie zu viel Zeit nur studieren habe, sie kann nicht Erholung genug.
Für Schrauber:
Schrauber muss nicht zu viel Kaffee trinken, denn er kann nich schlafen. Er muss ihre Tage organiziert. Wenn man hat ein gut Zeitplan, mehr Dinge kann machen.
Für gerber02:
Ich weiß, dass mündliche Prüfungen jeden nervös mach. Aber wenn Sie entrenieren und wiederholen mehrmals, alles ist mehr einfach. Sie können mit ein Freund und mit Familie üben. Probieren Sie, atmen tief durch und nur konzentrieren. Viel Glück!
Aug. 11, 2020
Schreiben Model
Ich mache immer die gleichen Fehler wahrend schreiben. Deshalb habe ich gedacht, ein Schreiben Model zu machen. Es wird alle wichtige formelle und informelle Strukturen haben.
Zum Beispiel, in einem informellen Text am Anfang muss ich "Hallo Mariana" schreiben, aber in einem formellen Text "Sehr geehrte Frau Mariana" benutzen.
Vielleicht klingt es ein bisschen dumm, aber ich finde besser für mich, wenn ich eine Struktur oder Modell habe.
Aug. 11, 2020
Wo ist das Problem?
In Moment, versuche ich Deutsch studieren. In früher Monaten hatte ich mehr Disziplin, weil ich eine Sprache Prüfung hatte. Ich habe die Prüfung sehr gut gemacht. Ich habe die Bewertung, dass ich brauchte. Aber mit dem Pandemie, ich könnte nicht als früher konzentrieren. Weil ich bin ärztin, konnte ich nur an die Patienten und in mein Kollegen denken. Ich hatte gehofft, dass alle, die ich kenne, gesund sind. Aber ich glaube, dass ich hat zu viel alles verschoben. Und dass ich auch zu viel entspannen hatte. Ich möchte wieder, als früher Deutsch studiert. Ich weiß, dass ich entrenieren und wiederholen muss.
Hoffentlich, ich irgendwann kann perfekt deutsch sprechen und schreiben.
Aug. 11, 2020
Bildung Nie Beendet
Heute Morgen habe ich ein neues Sprachpartner im Internet gefunden, heißt Michael. Wir haben Englisch und Deutsch zusammen gesprochen.
Vor das, hatte ich keine Chance gehabt, ein Deutsches Sprachpartner auf der App Tandem zu finden. Dann habe ich so gemerkt, dass die Zeitzonen verschiedene sind.
Auf Spanisch lernen gibt's kein Problem. Es gibt Länder uns nebenan, die teilen unsere Zeitzone mit. Also dachte ich mir, klappt es besser, Morgens ein deutsches Sprachpartner zu suchen und Abends nicht.
Michael und ich haben über Radfahren und Rennrad fahren geredet. Dieses Wort Rennrad hatte ich schon nicht gewusst. Unsere Konversation war fantastisch. Nach einer Pause hat er mir gesagt, "Wow, du kannst wirklich gut Deutsch!" Ich war ganz stolz. Ich fühlte mich sehr glücklich. Dann machte ich sofort um 5 Fehler eins nacheinander.
Also niemals beendet die Bildung. Ich lerne immer. Ich lerne wie eine Sprache zu verbessern. Aber ich lerne auch Methoden, um gute Sprachpartner zu finden.
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