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Nov. 5, 2019
Story about how I fried a cutlet
I stood at the stove and fried a cutlet in butter.
So I got a mug of water in my left hand and a smartphone in the other
I was talking to my wife on the smartphone while I fried my cutlet.
By the way, the cutlets were from a store. They were a pre-cooked product.
And when I fry those cutlets, they usually go to pieces.
I don't want that, so I asked my wife how can I avoid it.
And she told me: "just add a few drops of water".
Ok, I have some water in the mug in my hand.
And I poured some water on my cutlet...
Suddenly, a column of fire blazes up in front of me, up to the ceiling.
It looked like a fire-breathing dragon cutlet burned the ceiling.
I didn't know what to do... omg... wtf... I was panicking.
I decided to take the frying pan and rinse it with water.
But I change my mind because the fire could burn the kitchen set.
Fortunately, the fire went out.
After this situation, my hands were shaking.
Luckily, that granny, from whom I rented a room, hadn't seen this terrible picture.
Nov. 5, 2019
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Nov. 5, 2019
A peculiar story
A certain girl, always defying the gender stereotypes, is wearing a top hat and a very elegant suit while taking a walk through the neighborhood in the middle of the night. Suddenly some thieves appear out of nowhere and try to take her purse, but she pushes them away and throws away her coat, revealing a tight shirt and a pair of muscle-ridden arms. "So you wanna fight, huh?", she says, while a visible drop of sweat falls from the forehead of each of the thieves, who after hesitating for a while decide to just run away.
Nov. 5, 2019
Beauty treatment
I am interested in the beauty treatment. Because I worked in beauty salon as part-time job when I was university student. I tried some beauty laser treatment effecting on hair removal and blackspots removal. The treatment which I want to try lately is Derma Stamp effecting on open pores.
Nov. 5, 2019
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Nov. 5, 2019
練習01
おはよう！
つまらない投稿かもしれないが、よく間違う文法に文を書いてみました。
にあっても
風邪にあっても彼は入学試験を合格しました。
友達はブサイクにあってもいつも新しい彼氏と付き合っている。
としても
試験を受けようとしても、合格できるわけがない。
彼女を食事に誘おうとしても、彼女はデートだと思わない。
切符は売り切れなのでフェスに行ったとしても何もならない。
ふられるとしても、告白しないとチャンスがない。
てからというもの
お酒を飲めるようになってからというもの、毎週末二日酔いがある。
一人暮らしを始めてからというもの、お母さんの味噌汁を恋しくなりました。
次第
ご飯を食べ次第、掃除をしてください。
雨が降り始め次第、道は傘だらけだ。
毎日投稿しようと思ったが、１２時過ぎて毎日になりませんね。まあ、また書きます！
Nov. 4, 2019
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Sunday
I cooked pancakes for the brunch in this morning. After that, I went hiking in the park which has lake. I went there around 4 pm and it was already darker outside that's because daylight saving time has finished in California so I just walked around there only 30 minutes. I'm kinda miss Summer time in California.... And my boyfriend cooked pasta for dinner and enjoyed spending time with him.
Hope everyone had a great time today as well!
Nov. 4, 2019
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Nov. 3, 2019
Please correct my introduction
I wrote self introduction like below.
Please correct🙏🏻
I’m willing to help you to study Japanese!
I’m not a professional Japanese teacher, but I’ll always try to make an effort for studying with you! :)
And thank you very much for correcting my English!
I’ll progress little by little!!
Nov. 3, 2019
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Mon premier mois en France
Il y a quatre semaines j'ai déménagé en France. C'est encore très inhabituel pour moi de vivre dans une ville si petite où le bus ne circule plus après 20h et les bars ne sont ouverts que deux jours par semaine. Je n'ai pas encore pu tisser des liens avec des natifs ici, à l'exception des professeurs avec lesquels je travaille. Ils sont tous plus âgés que moi. J'aimerais rencontrer des gens de mon âge, mais il n'y a pas beaucoup de jeunes ici. À part cela, j'aime habiter en France. En Allemagne, beaucoup de gens croient que les Français soient arrogants, mais au moins ici dans le sud la plupart des gens sont très gentils et serviables.