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Ldangelo

Oct. 13, 2020

Meine erste Schritte auf Deutsch

Hallo suzammen, Heute enscheidunge ich ein Journal zu schreiben, Ich bin nur ein Anfänger, aber möchte ich mein Deutsch zu verbessern, Es ist schwierig alleine zu tun, deshalb komme ich hier , um hilfe zu finden.

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alexwong2164

Oct. 13, 2020

Talk to the pro.

Few weeks ago, have an argument with my best friend.

He wants to immigrate to UK.

As a friend I will always support his decision.

But after I ask him few more questions about his planning.

I was sock by how poor his plan.

So, I told him he should talk to immigration consultant.

He reacted annoyingly because he said most consultants are not reliable.

Actually, I do agree that.

But to be fair I don’t all immigration consultant will be that worst.

To prove him wrong, I will talk to some consultants.

At the end, maybe I will move to other country too.

If I can found a good immigration consultant.

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oceandrive76

Oct. 12, 2020

Un libro que justo leí

Justo leí el libro "me llame estadounidense". Es la historia verdadera sobre un niño somalí que aprendió inglés a través de la música y las películas. El libro habla sobre su vida antes de que empiece a la guerra civil en Somalia. Creo que era muy triste, pero también tiene esperanza. El niño crecía durante la guerra, pero cuando era un adulto escapó la destrucción. Podía mudarse a los estados unidos y ahora es un traductor. La historia está llena de inspiración y esperanza. Lo recomiendo para todos.
No lo aprobé esta entrada.

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caniche

Oct. 12, 2020

成功之路 · 提高篇 - 第八课

恰好
1) 我正要去买一台电脑，恰好现在电脑店打折出售。
2) 今天整天下雨了，恰好我昨天买了一把雨伞。
3) 我喜欢的人突然来我家访问，恰好我早上收拾干净了，要不没面子。

透气
1) 爷爷在家里抽烟，空气不好，要透气一点。
2) 早上起床以后我喜欢透气屋子。
3) 教师闷极了，请把窗口打开透透气。

一旦
1) 对高中学生高考很重要，一旦考得不好会影响学生们的生活前途。
2) 我只有一串钥匙，一旦丢掉了不知道怎么办才好。
3) 他不管结婚了，下班后还去酒吧见女人，一旦被妻子发现了，夫妇关系就会出现问题。

v+透了
1) 我解不透他在说什么呢。
2) 小李不懂事透了，单面批评老板的想法。
3) 啊，雨下透了！我忘了打雨伞，烦死我了。

非得
1) 学习外语，非得背生词不成。
2) 不管什么关系，非得下功夫不行。
3) 如果你想跑好一次马拉松，非得认真地操练不可。

还是……吧
1) 嗯，我怕他一个人去就会迷路了。还是我陪她去吧。
2) 根据天气预报明天会打雷，我们还是留在家把。
3) 在以大城市长大不太自由，对孩子来说还是住在农村好一点吧。

看把……v/adj+得
1) 快吃什么药物吧，看把你这么病得！
2) 你好好学习吧，看把你的成绩坏得！
3) 小王，你好好休息哦，看把你熊猫眼黑得！

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claudiabzs

Oct. 12, 2020

Was von Beruf bin ich? Raten Sie!

Für meinen Traumberuf muss man sieben Jahren in der Uni studieren. Außerdem muss man am Wochenende und manchmal am Nacht arbeiten. Die Arbeitszeit ist von 8 Uhr bis 16 Uhr, aber fast jeden Tag Überstunde machen ist sehr normal. Meine Arbeit ist schwer und wichtig für die Menschen. Meistens arbeite ich zusammen mit Kollegen aber manchmal muss ich allein arbeiten. Ich benutze ziemlich die Händen. Häufig arbeite ich in einem Krankenhaus oder in einer Praxis.
Könnten Sie raten, was ich beruflich mache?

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joelia

Oct. 12, 2020

jour 25

Je voudrais obtenir l'insignie legendaire dans Duolingo. J'ai avancé dans le ligue de diamant mais c'est très difficile de gagner.

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Martine

Oct. 12, 2020

Online-Schule

Wegen Coronavirus haben wir jetzt Online-Schule. Wir benutzen Zoom, um am Unterricht teilzunehmen. Ich finde es gut zuhause "in der Schule" zu sein, weil wir nicht so früh aufstehen müssen, und um den Verkehr nicht sorgen. Aber es ist auch schwieriger die Informationen, die wir lernen, zu verstehen und behalten. Habt ihr auch Online-Schule? Wenn ja, wie findet ihr sie?

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meanbowler

Oct. 12, 2020

My pet!

Presently, I have no pets. I wish I had a dog or a parrot. Actually, my landlord does not allow me to keep pets. It is very unfortunate. Years ago, I had a parrot which I loved a lot. My parrot liked to eat walnuts and apples every day. One day, after finishing my work at the office, I got home and knocked on the door. When my sister opened the door, unfortunately, the parrot flew away.

It was my fault because my sister told me to close the door immediately because the parrot was out of the cage. But I did not listen to her and thought that the parrot also loves me and will not fly away. I was wrong. I kept the door open for around 10 seconds, and the parrot being an opportunist, flew away.

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meanbowler

Oct. 12, 2020

Tier!

Ich habe zurzeit keine Haustiere. Doch ich hätte gern einen Hund oder Papagei. Mein Vermieter erlaubt mir es leider nicht, ein Haustier zu haben. Vor Jahren hatte ich einen Papagei, den ich viel liebte. Er wollte immer Walnuss essen. Äpfel hat ihm auch gefallen.

Als ich eines Tages aus meinem Büro nach Hause zurückkam, öffnete ich die Tür. Leider flog der Papagei weg. Ich war sehr wütend und konnte eine Woche lang nicht schlaffen. Der Papagei flog in der Umgebung meiner Wohnung. Immer wenn ich zur Arbeit ging, begleitete er mich.

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portuguesia

Oct. 12, 2020

Contabilidade

Na contabilidade, há três tipos de relatórios financeiros: O balancete, o demonstração de resultados, e a declaração de patrimônio líquido. Cada um desses documentos contém informações financeiras importantes; como as ativas e despesas de uma certa pessoa ou empresa. São importantes para a comunicação entre duas empresas que querem fazer negócios.

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alisiah

Oct. 12, 2020

Effect of Modern Equipment on Language Skills

Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in
communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skills. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no shortage of opinion on using technological devices leaves negative effects on language skills or has positive benefits besides their disadvantages. In my opinion, utilizing modern equipment can give rise to productive results. I feel this way for several reasons.
First of all, these devices, as their names suggest, are a means to achieve some goals in the first place. This leads to the conclusion that the overall assessment of them depends on how and for what aims they are used. You see, the internet at the hands of evil people might result in catastrophes, or dignifying people can make the world a better place to live by making use of it. My personal experience is a great example of this. I have an enthusiastic desire to read. My house is rather small and does not have much space to keep books. The problem was solved easily by buying a laptop. Now I have hundreds of books inside my laptop. As a result, the range of my studies has increased significantly and my reading skills have improved tremendously. The possibility of reading these numbers of books became possible just by utilizing a modern-day device.
Secondly, there are some programs that correct your written documents, say, by identifying misspelled words. Although this may lead to the thought that these programs tempt people to do not attempt to improve their writing skills, on the contrary, it can help to achieve a higher skill easier by showing their mistakes on the spot. Moreover, people who have bad handwriting can gain benefit from writing programs. Drawing from my own experience, my handwriting is barely legible despite having tried hard to improve it. People had trouble reading my writing and were always complaining about my handwriting. Considering that using electronic devices has become the most important way to communicate in individuals’ lives, my problem has almost resolved by embracing new technological equipment. It's certainly clear to see why I believe the growing use of new technologies can help people improve the quality of their writing.
In conclusion, computers and mobile phones can lend themselves to improving language skills. This is because depending on how we use them they can be quite useful and they have options like correcting writing.

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julien

Oct. 12, 2020

What time do you normally go to bed?

What time do you normally go to bed?

I usually go to bed at 10:30 PM.
As I try to sleep 8 hours per night, i go to bed at 10:30 PM. Tt can take 15 to 30 minutes to fall asleep, so I normally sleep at 11PM. My alarm clock rings at 7 AM every morning. So I sleep 8 hours per night.

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ryanj1234

Oct. 12, 2020

Четвёртая глава книги "Азазель"

Фандорин пришёл в дом графа Зурова, чтобы играть в карты. Он похож на молодого человека из хорошей семьи, и опытние игроки сразу увидели в его шанс выиграть много денег.

Зуров сам предложил Фандорину играть с ним. Игра начилась и... Фандорин выиграл у Зурова более десяти тысячи рублей. Зуров рассердился, и начал кричать на Фандорина. Зуров хотел устроить дуэль, но Фандорин предложил ему бросить жребий. Тот кто проиграл застрелится.

Как объяснил Фандорина, это было бы лучше. Люди подумают что кто-то из них просто проиграл много денег и убил себя. Зуров согласился и велел слугу принести карты, шампанское, и револьвер.

Они решели вытащили карты из колоды, и у кого чёрная, тот будет первым стреляться. Через несколько секунд, у Фандорина была чёрная. Он вставил револьвер в рот, выстрелил... и остался жив. Зуров крикнул "Всё! Молодец!", и пригласил Фандорина к себе в кабинет.

В кабинете, Зуров хотел знать, что он мог сделать, чтобы Фандорин его простил. Фандорин просто хотел знать об Амалии Бежецкой. Зуров сказал что Амалия как наркотик для себя. Он боялся её больше чем любил. Он предупредил Фандорина, что она его убьёт, если тот не забыл про неё. Но Зуров подал ему письмо он получил от Амалии. На письме был адрес с другим именем - мисс Ольсен.

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eeprom

Oct. 12, 2020

Mitarbeitergespräch

Heute hatte ich mein Mitarbeitergespräch mit meinem Chef. Es ist besser gegangen, als ich gedacht hatte. Mein Chef ist offenbar zufrieden mit meiner Arbeit, aber er kann nicht gewähren, dass ich nächstes Jahr einen weiteren Vertrag bekommen werde, da das Corona-Virus viel Zufall im Spiel gebracht hat.

Na ja, zumindest weiß ich jetzt, dass ich einen guten Job mache.

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alisson

Oct. 12, 2020

Über Entschlossenheit

Entschlossenheit ist sehr wichtig wann man ein Sprache lernst. Jeden Tag muss man üben, jeden Tag muss man auf diese Sprache sprechen. Es ist dann vielleicht ein bisschen selstsam das gibt manche Kurse wo man nur einmal in Woche geht und übt. Ob er nicht bei sich selbst lernt dann ist alles verloren. Es ist nicht einfach, aber es bekommt einfacher Tag für Tag.

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alexwong2164

Oct. 12, 2020

Fly?

So, we can’t go anywhere.

Hotel, tourists industrial and Airline Company is the no.1 victims.

I already mention that as a local, I can pay a cheap price to rent a hotel.

I also mention China is building a famous Japanese street to make the fan feel like in Japan.

Now the airline company!

Some airline company offering a trip that will take off and fly in the air for some hours then back to same airport.

When I hear such offer, I laugh immediately.

Who would stupid enough to take flight?

Well, all the tickets sold out almost immediately.

Some years later when we our son look back what had happened today.

They may laugh till one cries.

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tomorrowsarcher

Oct. 12, 2020

From a review's comment for an academic manuscript.

Considering the paucity of the evidence in the field and the importance of the study subject, I strongly favor this work concerning publication. Nevertheless, several aspects should be considered before acceptance.

The manuscript is rather hard to read. Please redo editing and language correction for better flow. The table notes (the notes being presented below the notes) need to follow the guideline from ICMJE. The numbers in the manuscript should be consistent in format. For example, sensitivity was presented either as 26-61% or 0.86.

Did you mean "p < 0.05" instead of "p ≤ 0.05"?

The results should preferably be described in the result section instead of the discussion section.

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rasata

Oct. 12, 2020

工作场所性别平等

去年在荷兰，埃因霍温技术大学决定雇用更多女性。根据规定，只有在六个月内没有女性专家的情况下，男性才能申请。我以这件事为例子，按照广播节目里研究生、科学家和他们的同伴的观点，我要讨论需要性别平等的原因，而且讨论得到性别平等要注意的地方。

科学是否需要性别平等。性别平等可以理解为得到职位的机会差不多或者两性比例差不多。与容易控制的前者不同，后者难以确保。工作场所两性比例的大区别，形成领域定型观念。比如，有人认为技术科学更适合男性，而人文科学更适合女性。这样的观点是促进性别不平等的主要因素。在社会压力之下，一些能干的人对某些工作机会就没有兴趣。为了避免这样人才失去的问题，要促进两性比例的合理。

重视申请人的性别是否得到工作场所合理的两性比例的好方式。有人怀疑，拒绝性别比例较多的人意味着专业素质贬值。还有人觉得，这种方式侮辱妇女，好像他们不能自主就业。这些反对有道理，新规定要是过分的话，享受优惠的性别比例较少的人就有可能被认为配不上自己的职位，结果是生产的新问题比解决过的多。我因此觉得在一切专业技能等标准相同的情况下，才能考虑个人性别。这样工作场所性别比例差别虽然改变得慢，但改变得更稳固。

从这个例子可以论断，一切领域都促进性别平等是吸引人才的基础。专业技能和个人素质是最重要的，而性别等特性都是次要因素。最好先考虑重要的因素再考虑要次的因素。这个例子的结论足够普遍，可能于其他工作场所也使用。

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alexwong2164

Oct. 12, 2020

ゼロ

１００（満点）は誰でも好きです。
Please usually like 100.

ゼロは誰も嫌いです。
No one likes zero.

でも、もしこれは「毎日の感染者」数字代表として。
But in terms of the numbers of infected person daily record.

ゼロなれば、誰でもすきと思う。
I like everybody will like to see the “zero” number.

大抵２～３カ月前に、こちはほぼ一週間くらいゼロ感染者の数字が受けました。
I think 2 or 3 think moths ago, “here” will have like a week of zero person getting infected.

だから、政府はいろいろな施設が一度再開しました。
So, the government start to permit some public facilities reopen.

そのせいで、感染者の数字は急に上げた。
But because of that the infected persons goes higher again.

しょうがないに撤収しまった。
So, “back to square 1”.

今日は新聞にこの微妙なゼロは一度か再現しました。
Yesterday, this magic “zero” shows in every news again.

歴史当たり前には振り返しできませんか？
Will the history keep repeat itself again?

もし、後は感染者の数字が高くなれば？
What if the numbers go higher again?

或いは、誰もきつかない。
Or, nobody cares anymore.

過去９カ月はもう囚人のうおうな生活は耐えなれない、飽きる、十分し過ぎる。
We have been a prisoner for more than 9 months.

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alexwong2164

Oct. 12, 2020

Nor-cal, Sou-Cal

Just watched a video introduce the difference between the Asian in North vs South California.

First of all, I only know California by name.

I also know a famous city in US.

But other than that, nothing I can tell.

Thanks to this video.

Now, I know California is located where in US.

And over there have so many Asian.

Furthermore, Nor-Cal (sort form of North California) Asian is totally different to Sou-Cal.

Hollywood vs Silicon Valley.

Many different countries of Asian vs few countries of Asian.

Wish I can make some Nor-cal, Sou-Cal friends.

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ponta

Oct. 12, 2020

My Favorite Sounds

These days, AMSR has become very popular and you can find many AMSR videos on YouTube. Everybody must have favorite sounds.
In my case, favorite sounds are sounds of writing something, such as audio of a fountain pen and chalk. I love hearing sounds that a mathematics teacher draws math formulas. Besides, I like writing something with a fountain pen. The writing feeling is lighter and more comfortable than the feelings of a pencil and a ballpen. I recommend you to watch ”Custom Namiki Falcon, Part 2” on YouTube.
Furthermore, typing sounds are also good. I don't like the sounds of hitting the enter key strongly, but fluent typing makes me happy. I want to buy a premium keyboard like HHKB.

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raz989

Oct. 12, 2020

テニスの練習

ロックダウンに他のことなか僕はテニスを始めました。今までとても楽しくて疲れることでした。
しかし秋の始まりから、ここイタリアでよく雨が降っているので練習するのがあまり出来ません。
天気がよくなることが本当に欲しいですけど、今週の天気予報が悪いです、だから出来ない事と思います。

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heavensblade13

Oct. 12, 2020

日本語日記　10月11日

今日は、たくさん宿題をした。私の半分のクラスで、宿題の提出期限は日曜日の夜の零時だ。小学校から私の悪い癖は、絶対的な最後まで宿題を先延ばしにする。この癖のせいで、日曜日でたくさん宿題をやらなければいけない。宿題の後、「らき☆すた」を観終わった。楽しかった。冗談とキャラクターと他のアニメの言及は面白い。それから、アニメの「かりん」を観始まった。吸血鬼のアニメだ。でも、女の主人公は血を吸わない、逆に血を注ぎ込む。

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Jack

Oct. 12, 2020

Journal 2020.10.12.01

I have watched a series of videos from a famous uploader on YouTube. He is from Israel and graduated from Harvard. One of the videos that impressed me the most is clips introducing the Philippines. He said if let him choose a country to live in, the most suitable country is the Philippines. The reasons are the following three: first off, there is beautiful scenery in the country. Secondly, the stuff in the Philippines is very cheap. Third, people in the Philippines all speak English. I have never been to the Philippines. I didn't know if he was telling the truth. Anyway, if I had time, I would go there to verify the matter. Is that possible? Who knows?

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fabledlamb

Oct. 12, 2020

El tiburón

Hoy vi un tiburón en la naturaleza por la primera vez. Era pequeño y blanco, y estaba nadando cerca del malecón. Mi padre lo notó primero porque estaba llevando gafas polarizadas y podía ver su aleta dorsal a través de las olas. Me hace muy feliz que he visto este animal en su hábitat natural (pero parecía solo y triste... me pregunto si tiene algún amigo).

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