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Les énergies renouvelables et la "cannibalisation"
On a vu une croissance très forte des énergies renouvelables (éolien, solaire) dans les dernières deux décennies. Ces énergies sont "bas-carbones", et de moins en moins chères (grâce à des améliorations technologiques).
Toutefois, elles créent deux problèmes importants. Premièrement, parce qu'elles marchent seulement quand il y a du vent ou du soleil, il faut qu'on garde aussi des énergies plus flexibles (comme le gaz) pour être toujours sur d'avoir assez d'énergie.
Deuxièmement, quand il y a du vent à un parc éolien, il est probable qu'il y en ait aussi aux autres (également pour le soleil et les parcs solaires). Donc, quand il y a du vent ou du soleil, beaucoup d'énergie renouvelable est créée simultanément. Cela peut provoquer des problèmes pour les infrastructures d'électricité, ainsi que baisser le prix d'électricité reçu par les développeurs d'énergie renouvelable (un effet qu'on appelle la "cannibalisation").
On devrait prendre des mesures pour ralentir la cannibalisation et protéger des investissements bas-carbones: cela est essentiel pour lutter contre le changement climatique.
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Nov. 2, 2020
제가 래퍼한테 갖고 했던 편견
저는 한국 힙합을 진짜 좋아하는 편이에요. 특히 AOMG라는 기획사에서 나오는 아티스트들이 좋다고 생각해요. AOMG 아티스들을 너무 좋아해서 지금 AOMG/H1GHR MUSIC 번역일팀에 무료로 일하고 있기까지 좋아한단 말이에요. 근데 사실은 한국 힙합을 좋아한지 얼마나 안 됐어요. 8월부터 인가요? 아무튼 한국에 관심이 많아서 아무래도 핫한 래퍼들이 누군지 다 알고 있었지만 그냥 랩 음악을 전혀 듣지 않았어요.
이제 생각하다보니 솔직히 제가 래퍼힌테 몹시 무시한 것 같아요. 어떤 편견을 갖게 했나 봐요. 편견을 갖게 한 이유는 여러 가지 있었던 것 같아요. 근데 적어도 가장 큰 이유가 말쓸드러면 제가 모든 래퍼의 가사를 보여주는 척만 갖고 있다고 생각했어요.
그때는 한국어 가사를 잘 안 봐서 어쩔 수 없이 노래의 내용이 몰랐죠. 이제 제 한국어 실력이 그때부터는 훨씬 더 좋아해져서 요즘 가사로 공부도 해요. 이렇게 공부로 많은 랩 노래가 좋은 내용도 있고 좋은 의미도 있을 수도 있더라고요. Swag이나 보여주는 것만이 아니에요.
당연히 많은 래퍼가 노래 가사를 재미로 만들었겠죠. 근데 옛날에는 가사가 깊은 의미가 있어야 한다고 생각했어요. 이제는 가사가 특히 큰 의미가 없어도 나쁜 노래가 아니라고 생각해요. 예를 들어 마미손의 노래처럼 큰 의미가 없이 재미있는 노래가 꽤 많더라고요.
요즘 저는 주로 한국 힙합이랑 한국 R&B(?) 제일 자주 듣는 것 같아요. 특히 최근에 박재범과 DJ 웨건이 나왔던 Everybody Sucks라는 앨범을 잘 듣고 있어요. 앨범 중에 Deep Sea DRIP, Twist the Plot 그리고 Out of Place이라는 노래를 제가 가장 좋아하는 노래예요. 굳이 뽑자면 제가 제일 좋아하는 노래는 Out of Place이는 것 같아요. 가사도 좋고 비트도 좋고 깊은 의미가 있어도 좀 재미있게 들을 수도 있다고 해야 되나요? 또한 이 노래의 피러링 래퍼는 우원재라는 래퍼라서 더 좋아요. 저는 특히 우원재를 좋아하니까요
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Nov. 2, 2020
Journal 11/2/20
Generally, I don't buy clothes until they are damaged. A couple of days ago, we were going to have an official business trip. A colleague was very unsatisfied with my clothes and said if I don't wear new clothing they will not go with me. Although my clothes are not in fashion, they are not worn out, so I am usually not willing to buy a new one. But in this kind of situation, it would be better to wear new clothes. Overall, this is an official business trip. This time, I bought a pair of leather shoes, trousers and a shirt with liner inside. At ordinary times, I only wear canvas shoes, jeans and a sweater. That is not very suitable on formal occasions. Because I have new clothes now so that those old clothes do not have many opportunities to wear, but they are not worn out yet, I can’t bear to throw them away.
Nov. 2, 2020
Exercises (3)
1, Normally I wouldn't judged what you do, but this time I would say you have done it wrong.
2, He's never participated in any kind of war but keeps bragging about how brave he was in a war that even has never begun.
3, When I was a child I would go to the cinema every Friday.
4, When I was a child I once went to the cinema but forgot the way to leave.
5, To be honest, it is very kind of you to give me such a great chance, but my hands are tied so I am not able to jump at it.
6, "What are we going to do?" "We will be learning some vocabulary I guess?"
7, "No one wants to be held back a grade, but for god sake, please stop banging on about it, I'm fed up with such nonsense."
8, He's got a bad rep for being so mean to people, but trust me, it's not on purpose, he has been doing so for so many years only because he had a lot of sad experiences several years ago.
Nov. 2, 2020
C'est difficile de trouver la motivation
J'étais convaincu que j'allais écrire ici chaque jour, pourtant ça n'est pas ce que c'est passé. Pourquoi? Je ne sais pas, peut-être que je trouve difficile avoir mon exam et je preffere de laisser passer l'opportunité plutôt que travailler dûr et trouver que j'ai echoué même en m'efforçant. C'est une chose très commun chez l'être humain, l'auto-sabotage.
Mais c'est si stupide! Parce que bien si je ne reussi dans cette occasion, je dois travailler dûr n'importe quoi. Si je le fais comme ça, je serai en train de m'amelliorer pour la prochaine occasion! Mais si je refuse, j'aurai perdu un mois entier.
Nous sommes si étranges!
Nov. 2, 2020
Nov. 2, 2020
What I want to read
Needless to say, authors can't always write what every reader want to read. Even if I realize this fact, I sometimes want to criticize them for what I want them to describe in detail or what I don't want to read.
Recently, I can't make up my mind if I have to buy Light Novels of "Monogatari series" released in English. This manga series are also very popular among foreign countries and you can find good reputations on Amazon. However, I don't like some part filled with sexual harassment enough that I skipped these scene when I watched the anime series.
Reasons why I want them are not only learning English but also cover illustrations. These illustrations are absolutely stunning designed by VOFAN, who is famous Taiwanese illustrator.
Nov. 2, 2020
La tarea de escritura
Distinguido señor o señora, lo agradecería mucho si te tomas un momento para corregirme. Me presentaré. Me llamo Nick y estoy escribiendo este texto para practicar mi español.
Entre tanto llevo seis meses graduándome y ayer fue mi último día. Hice mi última presentación a mis colegas y los convidé a pastel de manzana. Ese mismo día también vi a La Voz a través de una plataforma en línea se llama Atresplayer. Lo disfruté mucho, ya que los candidatos y jueces eran amigables y de buen corazón el uno con el otro. En los Países Bajos esto es mucho menos el caso, debido a este experimento esto como extraordinario.
Más tarde en el programa empezó la juez Laura Pausini a cantar unos de sus más famosos canciones. Reconocí esta canción inmediatamente, dado que crecí con esta canción. La no he escuchado en algunos años y me gustó escuchar esto de nuevo. Tampoco darme cuenta de que ella es la cantante original, pero reconocí su voz pronto como empezó a cantar. Y ahora que estoy estudiando español entiendo el italiano un poco. ¡Esto me hace feliz! En resumen, una noche exitosa!
Nov. 2, 2020
Planning to Playing Table Tennis.
As I haven't been playing table tennis at all lately, I'm planning to invite Hasegawa to play table tennis in the next week or so, but rubbers on my racket have deteriorated and it's difficult to put a rotation on the pinball, so today I went to the Table Tennis shop near Kamiooka station to buy some new rubber.
I had the shopkeeper put a OX short pips made by YASAKA on the back side of my racket and a 2.1mm sponge-thickness soft rubber made by Andro on the front side of my racket.
I am looking forward to playing table tennis with Hasegawa in the next week.
Nov. 2, 2020
Deadlines
I'm a university student, so I almost always have assignments during a term. Each assignment has a deadline, which is sometimes far from now and sometimes soon. If I'm not careful, I fall into a situation that I have so much homework that I can't deal with.
Once, I had final exams and term papers and assignments; it was a living hell for me. Since then, I keep in mind to finish my homework one day before the deadline and initiate long-term projects with a margin.
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Nov. 2, 2020
Todays Walk
I went for an hour-long walk because staying indoors all the time is not good for you, but today I'm going to write in my diary a detailed account of what happened during my walk.
I went out of the house around 1:30 pm and it was 21 degrees today and compared to yesterday, it was very warm and I didn't need to wear heavy clothes.
As I was walking to the park, I saw some local junior high school students heading our way, and I thought they were leaving school too early, and at first I wondered if they had skipped school, but now that I think about it, it's not strange that junior high school students leave school at this time of the day, because they have final exams at the end of November.
When I arrived at the park, there were some local college students enjoying their baseball games on the baseball field and a few elderly people running along the park path.
I found a pull-up bar set up near the park equipment, so I did some muscle training for a while, but it didn't last long as I hadn't done any muscle training at all lately.
I walked down the park path listening to music with my Bluetooth Earphone and as I was walking I found a vending machine and just as I was thirsty so I bought a 120 yen can of Coke for 200 yen that I had in my pants pocket and drank the Coke while sitting on the bench.
When I finished my Coke, I looked at my watch and saw that it was past 3:00 and it was time for my mother to get off work and come home, so I started to head home.
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Nov. 2, 2020
私の家族
私の家族の中で四人がいる：母、父、弟と私。母はロシア人だって、父はアメリカ人だ。しかし、二人はロシア語も英語もペラペラで話せる。母は先に翻訳家だって、今主婦です。父は移民の弁護士です。自分の法律事務所がある。彼はアメリカに住んでいたいロシア人に手伝います。先に母は色々な重要な書類を翻訳して手伝った。実は、父はビエトの崩壊の頃母と会った！モスクワに引っ越した後で、彼は彼女を翻訳家として雇った。
弟は16歳です。もうティーンエイジャーだよ！信じられない！彼は早く育ている。ランニングが好きです。高校のランニングチームの一員だし、毎日付近でランニングをする。すごいと思う！描くも好きです。数々綺麗な絵を描いた。母は描くのが得意なので、弟が彼女の才能を幾分受け継いでいた。
私たちは猫を飼っている。マシャと言う。ロシア語の名前だ。可愛すぎて、遊び好きな猫だ。犬っぽい人懐っこいものだ！私たちは猫といつも遊んでいる。弟が餌をやてるから、猫は彼の部屋に寝るのが一番好き。弟が猫の父っぽい。猫も家族の一員だよ！
Nov. 2, 2020
Nov. 2, 2020
Journal 11/2/20
I am not a tea person, so I rarely drink tea. Green tea has beautiful colors and it's very attractive when you see it. But every time I drink it I feel nauseated, so I rarely drink it. I once tried Pu 'er Tea. It's hard to say whether it is good or not, but I am a bit refusing their shape because I always think that as a tea it should not be squeezed into a cake. Plus, it's hard to separate. However, I often hear people say that it is very beneficial for our health to drink tea, so I still want to drink some tea more often and I have learned about black tea. It is said that black tea can warm you up and won't cause you stomach nausea. Then I bought it online and the brand is Keemun Black Tea. I just made a cup of it and it had a color the same as Pu'er tea’s. Also, it was very fragrant. I hope the Keemun Black tea will suit me to drink for the long run.
Nov. 2, 2020
Una nueva serie
En general no me gusta ver nada de televisión. Me cuesta ver series o películas porque me siento demasiado conectada a los personajes, pero últimamente he estado viendo New Girl y me gusta mucho. No sé si voy a continuar porque hoy vi cuatro episodios seguidos y sentí que había malgastado mi tiempo, pero a la vez creo que intentar ver algo hasta el final es una buena práctica (porque muchas veces no puedo hacer esto).
Nov. 2, 2020
Mein neue Wörte
der Fuchs! |
die Spinne | Die Spinne schnützt sich silb.
das Herd
der Zug
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Ich schreiben aber kopieren.
Ich weiß immer noch nicht, wie ich mein Gedanken auf Deutsch schreiben soll. Es macht mich traurig.
Ich habe viele neue Wörte gelernt, aber ich enniere mich nur daran, dass sie die Sätze gesehen haben.
Nov. 2, 2020
My day
My sleeping schedule still messed up. I don't sleep yesterday. I pass all night on YouTube.
My plans for the day was ruined when a visitor came. I don't expect him, but isn't a problem. We talk all day and play Shadow of Mordor and Assassins Creed. I can't study much today which make a little be sad
After the visitor has gone I feel tired and think that I would not study languages but, after a cup of coffee, my energies back did some activities.
Today I made A2 test and I pass, but I still unhappy with my English. Maybe I have to read and write more, I didn't this before. Always I learned vocab and listen to music and sometimes watch something.
Now I feel energized but I'll go to bed.
Good night.
Nov. 2, 2020
O INGLÊS É ESTRANHO, NÉ?
O inglês não é muito difícil para um falante nativo do português. Mas uma coisa que pode ser difícil é o fato da língua não ser fonética. A soletração tem poucas regras consistentes. Por exemplo: as palavras “night” e “kite” se pronunciam da mesma maneira. Também tem muitas formas irregulares dos verbos conjugados no passado: “to keep” conjugado no passado é “kept” e assim em diante.
Nov. 2, 2020
Nov. 2, 2020
方言和普通话
A 这不是金莲么？你前一段时间去中国，什么时候回来的
B 金芝, 好久不见
A 真没想到，能在这碰到你，你回来几天了？
B 我前天晚上刚回来
A 你在中国怎么样啊，你玩得愉快吗?
B 很好玩，这次旅行对我来说很有意思。我去过一些很漂亮的地方
A 真羡慕你，你容易跟中国人交流吗
B 在中国，方言很丰富，除了普通话 还有粤语常用在广东，广东的风景很漂亮，广东人也特别好，不过广东话很难听，不好懂
A 广东是中国声音最难听的地区。别说你不懂，就是许多人刚来那儿的时候也不懂。南方方言不仅北方人根本听不懂，即便是的南方地区，方言也是互相听不懂的，比如上海人就听不懂广东话，福建话。
B 难怪当我出去转转的时候，我向他们问好 但是他们回答我听不懂，我仔细听但一句也没听懂。
A 然后呢
B 看到我困惑的表情。我想他们猜到 我不是这里的人 所以他们用普通话跟我说话。以前我以为中国人说话都差不多呢。
A 你从来没听过方言，所以你这么认为，对吗
B 对啊
A 中国各地有各地的方言，有些方言和普通话相差很远
B 噢，原来是这样
A 比如 “什么” “不用” “怎么” 北方人怎么说，你知道吗
B 我想我已经听过，但是他们说话那么快，我不记得
A 北方人说话用 “啥” “甭” “咋” 代替 “什么” “不用” “怎么” 而且还用卷舌音。如果你想说 “什么时候来” 北方人说 “啥时候来” 或者 当他们说 “你甭去了” 就是 “你不用去了”
B 还有吗，我想多听一点
A 南方话“坐汽车坐地铁” 是 "乘汽车乘地铁" “一栋房子”是“一幢房子”或“一套房子 ”
B 我觉得很有意思，我想更多了解中国的文化，尤其是那儿的方言。所以我每天用北方话对我说三四句吧。
A 好啊
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