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About my plan
I have a plan. So I just started it today.
It's IG account that introduce abont Japan. (For example...cultures,foodies,caffe shops,phote spots and tourist spot.)
But it's getting ready now.Just opened account.
I want lot of people to know about japan's many carme.
I started it that study English for me.
Then I'm recruiting friend(volunteer) who correct to my post.
You read this and If you want to do this.
Please send me message on IG DM.
ID : 8_2ki
Thank you for reading my post.
-Haz
Jan. 19, 2020
Summary
I am posting a summary of an article I read a few days ago.
Mucus
Mucus is our body's hero according to the author.
Mucus is best known for stringy slime dripping from noses and vicious goop hacked up by sickening airways. But it’s so much more than that. Mucus coats the surfaces of intestines, eyes, mouth, nasal cavity, and ears, playing important physiological roles. It hydrates, cleans, supports good microorganisms, and repels invaders.
Most of these functions come from mucins. Mucins give mucus its gel-like qualities. Mucins come in two types: secreted mucins and exuded mucins.
In airways, having too much mucus might cause harm under certain conditions: asthma, cystic fibrosis, and chronic obstructive pulmonary disease.
However, in the intestine, having too much mucus is not a problem. Having too much would be better rather than too little.
Thank you very much for reading.
Jan. 19, 2020
Quiero probar algo diferente
Todas mis entradas en este sitio son de mi vida y mi experiencia pero eso me aburre. Mis experiencias no son amplias y muchas veces no puedo pensar en cosas interesantes para escribir. Así que, quiero tratar de escribir algunos relatos cortos. No soy escritora aunque quería ser escritora cuando era pequeña, pero pienso que esciribir relatos cortos es un buen ejercicio para la mente. Hace algunos años perdí la creatividad y no puedo pensar creativamente. Escribir relatos cortes, aunque sean horriblemente escritos, me permitiría estudiar y usar gramática y vocabulario que nunca emerjan si solo escribo de mi vida. También quiero leer artículos y resumirlos aquí para mejorar mi nivel. Ojalá que pueda reservar una hora por día para escribir y ojalá que ustedes no les importa corregir mis cuentos terribles.
¡Gracias por leer!
Jan. 19, 2020
Konjunktiv II Übungen
Konjunktiv II (Vergangenheit)
1. Ich hätte Biologie studiert, wenn ich mich mehr für Pflanzen als für Menschen interessiert hätte. Das heißt, ich habe Psychologie studiert und nicht Biologie.
2. Wenn ich dich gesehen hätte, hätte ich dich natürlich gegrüßt. D.h. ich habe dich nicht gesehen und deswegen nicht gegrüßt.
3. Ich wäre ins Konzert gegangen, wenn ich genug Geld gehabt hätte. D.h. ich habe nicht genug Geld gehabt, darum bin ich nicht ins Konzert gegangen.
4. Warum habt ihr nicht gefragt? Ich hätte euch mein Auto geliehen. D.h. Ihr habt nicht gefragt, deswegen habe ich euch mein Auto nicht geliehen, weil ich nicht gewusst habe, dass ihr mein Auto braucht.
5. Frau Müller wäre nicht glücklich gewesen, wenn wir ihr nicht ein Geschenk verschenkt hätte. D.h. wir haben sie ein Geschenkt verschenkt, deswegen ist sie Glücklich.
Jan. 19, 2020
Life is...
This morning, I saw a small beautiful rainbow in the sky.
My husband, my son, my mother, and I were really lucky to see it because it disappeared in a few minutes.
Something happened that made me incredibly moved this evening.
I thought that rainbow made a miracle.
“There’s many ups and downs in our lives.”
I think it’s so true.
I will accept everything and move forward.
Jan. 19, 2020
Jan. 19, 2020
What I hate on a packed train
What I hate on a packed train is when I get off. There're so many people that we can't get off the train smoothly, yet some people never fail to strongly push us from the back as if they tell us to get off quickly. Some other people hit us with their bags and some other people clear the throats noisy, repeatedly to make the others move aside. I really get disgusted just seeing these people.
When I get off a train, I say loud, "Excuse me! I'm getting off!", then many people try to move aside to pass me through. When I say "Thank you" passing, many people quickly clear themselves on my way.
When I ignored what grandma said as a child, she said me, "Is your mouth an ornament? Go to a hospital right now and have your mouth and vowel got rid of by a doctor. Give them to children who haven't had their mouths and vowels since they were born." I feel sometimes I'm glad I had a strict grandma.
I think many of Japanese people tend to take bad behaviors not saying anything. These people are just cowards who can't speak out what they want to say.
I read today it'll be difficult to speak if you don't speak at all for a long time, because the vowel shrinks. As you get older, more clearly it'll stand out.
Jan. 19, 2020
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Jan. 19, 2020
2020.01.18(土)
実は、昨日久しぶりに友達と話していたから長い日記を書かなかった。去年の春頃、英語を学んでいる日本人の生徒と英会話の練習でボランティアしていた。その経験で、この三人とすぐに仲良くなった。その時は第一目の学期は地獄のような忙しい時だったのでよく電話していない。友達はそろそろ（三月に）大学を始めるので暇な時間がついにある。私ももっと暇な時間があって、頻繁に電話したいものだ。日本語を喋る機会のこともあるね。
話しながら、友達はそろそろ矯正して驚いたことだった。去年、私と私の二人の友達とこの日本人の友達と知り合って、私たち三人は矯正をしている。そろそろ日本人の友達も、この団に入る（笑笑）。
今日はあまり面白くなかった。来週は2学期の間の週（生徒はテストを受けたことなかったり、課題をまだ出さなかったり、宿題に追いついたりするような一周間）だから暇な時だ！生物学のテストはもっと胃週間後にずれてよかった。
おけー、書くのやる気が出せないからここで終わりです。
Jan. 19, 2020
Jan. 18, 2020
Rant!
Hi guys! I have been here for a little over 2 weeks now. People here are really lovely and helpful so let me start by saying a huge thank you to you all! x Now comes my rant against another language learning group!
A while ago I joined a Japanese learning group on Facebook. Most people there are also pretty nice and serious about learning Japanese, which is superb! But occasionally there are people asking questions that can be answered by a simple Google search, which literally takes a few seconds. I mean, of course I don't mind people asking questions as long as they have actually made an effort to find out the answers beforehand. Just now someone in that group posted something like:-
How do I say
"How are you?"
"Thank you"
"What's your name?"
in Japanese?
Think that's bad? Wait til you hear this! They said, and I quote, "I don't understand Japanese words. Answer in English words."
If they aren't even willing to actually learn the Japanese writing systems, then I'm pretty sure they're not asking this because they want to start learning Japanese! Also, the use of the phrase "English words" just annoys me so much. It shows that they have no knowledge of the Japanese language at all, or just knowledge of linguistics in general. I'm not usually that petty, nor do I say bad things to people. But this is just ridiculous IMO. And the worst thing is, they didn't even say "thank you". I HATE RUDE PEOPLE!
That's about it! Thanks for reading! Again, thank you all for being amazing, and of course the admin(s) for doing a wonderful job! :) Just want you to know how much I appreciate this community! X
(Actually for English, I'm just trying to up my speaking game. I don't have a lot of chances to actually speak English now that I've graduated from university and I have yet to start working. So most of my entries would be rather causal as I'm trying to treat it as my "script" for when I'm speaking. Therefore, you don't need to comment on my formality unless you think that it's inappropriate even in speech. Thanks guys!! Much love x)
Jan. 18, 2020
Jan. 18, 2020
Stardew Valley
Hallo alle Zusammen!
Also, gestern und heute habe ich endlich das Spiel "Stardew Valley" auf meiner Nintendo Switch-Konsole gespielt. Das Spiel ist ein Art "Farming" Simulator.
Im Spiel gibt es viel zu tun, man kann Gemüse anbauen, Tiere pflegen und sogar einen Hund haben. Ich möchte mehr über das Spiel erzählen, aber ich fand mein Deutsch noch zu schlecht, um eine richtige Zusammenfassung zu schreiben.
Danke fürs Lesen und bis zum nächsten Mal!
Jan. 18, 2020
선생님 찾기
홍길동쌤 안녕하세요? 저는 메건 이에요. 8년 동안 한국에서 살았지만 4년 전에 독일로 이사했어요. 갑자기 독일어 배우고 필요했어서 한국어 연습할수있는 시간이 없었어요. 그래서 제 독일어 향상시켰지만 한국어 거의 다 잊었어요 (특별히 단어… 랑 문법 ㅎㅎ). 독일에 대학교 언어학 [Master's] 프로그램 [join]으러 , 3언어 말해야되요. 저는 TestDaF (독일어 시험) 이미 봤 [and passed] 서 지금 TOPIK 시험 보로 한국어 한번도 배우고 싶어요. 그렇지만 처음 한국어 기억하고 필요해요.
저는 "Korean Grammar in Use" 초급, 중급, 하고 고급 PDF들을 이미있어요. 제생각에는 초급이 제 수준은 맞고있어요… 그렇지만 홍길동 선생님 씨 다른책을 있는데요?
Jan. 18, 2020
Jan. 18, 2020
Jan. 18, 2020
18 Gen 2020
Ciao a tutti! Spero che abbiate una buona giornata! Non mi sento ancora bene, ma sono felice oggi!
Da quel giorno che ho provato la Madeleine alle castagne, avevo voluto fare la Madeleine! E oggi dopo ho guardato qualche video su YouTube, ho deciso di provare a farla! Ho testato qualche infornata a trovare la ottima regolazione del forno, e finalmente penso che abbia fatto una buona Madeleine!
Inoltre, oggi mia sorella e il suo fidanzato sono venuti a casa nostra. Così gli ho dato la Madaleine e il tiramisu che avevo fatto ieri. Hanno detto che siano buoni! Sono molto felice! Mi piace fare i dolci perché voglio vedere i sorrisi delle gente di cui mi preoccupo quando mangiano il mio cibo. E non c'è niente che mi rende più felice che sapendo che gli piace!
Jan. 18, 2020
SERIAL CUL-DE-SAC POOPER
No matter how you disguise your poop, there’s always a reckoning!
It all started in Connecticut, USA on November 7th of 2018 when a resident of the East Granby neighborhood called the cops because he found something in the cul-de-sac near his house. The something was very stinky.
When the cops arrived they were able to determine that the poop was human and was covered with needles.
When more feces were found 9 days later, on November 16th, a motion-activated camera was placed in the area to determine who was committing the crimes. Shortly after, on December 5th, the third crime was committed but now the police got the footage from the camera and easily identified the suspect. It was the 43 year-old woman Holly Malone who lived around three-and-a-half miles away from the cul-de-sac. The woman apologized and blamed it on being lactose intolerant since she couldn’t make it to the nearest bathroom or her home on time.
She was charged with second degree breach of piece and was out on $500 bond.
The moral of the story is: if you poop in a public place, a reckoning will reach you anyhow!
Jan. 18, 2020
Jan. 18, 2020
Jan. 18, 2020
Jan. 18, 2020
Das Buch, das ich lese
Ich habe angefangen, ein deutsches Buch zu lesen. Es ist ein Kinderbuch, das wurde von Enid Blyton geschrieben. Es ist das erste Buch in einer Serie. Ich habe es gelesen, als ich jünger war und es gefiel mir damals. Ich denke, dass ich die ganze Serie nicht lesen werde, aber es ist erstmal gut.
Das Buch ist über ein Mädchen, das in einer neuen Schule kommt. Sie ist aufgeregt, weil ihre Mutter dieselber Schule gekommt ist und sie hat zum Mädchen viele gute Dinge darüber gesagt. Zuerst ist das Mädchen nervös aber sie findet Freundinnen sehr schnell und danach machen sie viele Unfuge.
Ich habe nicht viele Kapitel gelesen weil es gibt viele neue Wörter. Die Kapitel sind kurz und ich gebe alle die neuen Wörte in meinem Anki Kartendeck ein. Ich hoffe meine Vokablen verbessen würde.
Dankeschön fürs Lesen!
Jan. 18, 2020
Jan. 18, 2020
Mi relación de larga distancia
Siempre sabía que iba a estudiar en un país lejos de mi país de origen. Pero nunca pensaba en las consequencias por mi relación con mi novio. El es un poco más mayor que mi y había establecido una vida estable en mi país de origen. El también sabía de mis planes para la universidad. Durante dos años, fingíamos como nada iba a cambiar. En los últimos meses de mi tiempo con él, finalmente, abordamos la cuéstion de mi partida. Decidimos tratar de mantener una relación de larga distancia.
Después de un vuelo de 15 horas, llegué a mi nuevo "hogar", dejé mis cosas, y empecé a llorar porque estaba completamente abrumada. Hablar por teléfono a mi familia y a mi novio siempre me hacía llorar. Finalmente, recuperé y me fijé en la universidad pero siempre me sentía sola. Para mantener nuestra relación, mi novio y yo hablabamos por Skype cada día. Nos hablabamos sobre cada tema de nuestras vidas y cuando la conversación fue apagándose, manteníamos la llamada porque pudimos sentir la presencia del otro por el ordenador. Después de las cenas, veíamos a unas programas en línea para relajarnos juntos. Estos dos años fueron los más difíciles de mi vida hasta ahora.
Hace un año, mi novio le trasladó para ser conmigo durante mis estudios. Tengo mucha suerte que él pudo hacer eso. A veces no puedo creer que nuestra relación sobrevivío cuando oigo todas las historias terribles de relaciónes de larga distancia.