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Der Umzug
Hallo Leute, heute bin ich sehr erschöpft, da ich ein paar Freunde bei einem Umzug geholfen habe. Es ist immer anstrengend, wenn man in einem Umzug helfen muss. Aber meine Freunde haben mich immer geholfen, wenn ich etwas in der Vergangenheit brauchte. Deswegen bin ich heute glücklich, ein guter Freund zu sein.
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Feb. 15, 2020
A story
Bob has missed a significant number of classes; consequently, the principal invites the truant to his office.
"How come you ’ve skipped so many classes?"
" You know, I've calculated my time and realized that I have no time for studies. I need to sleep eight hours a day, which is close to one hundred twenty-two days a year. Weekends take one hundred and four days a year , and summer holidays take around sixty days. I spend an hour at each meal; namely, that’s three hours a day or forty-five days a year. Also, I ’d need at least two hours a day to rest and keep fit, which adds another thirty days. To sum it up, that's approximately three hundred sixty-one days a year, which leaves only four days for school."
However, the principal proves Bob wrong.
The question is: What's wrong with Bob's calculations?
Feb. 15, 2020
Les hommes et les femmes peuvent devenir amis
Beaucoup de Coréens croient que les hommes et les femmes ne peuvent devenir amis. Ils croient que si un homme et une femme sont ensemble, on ne peut pas éviter les sentiments romantiques. Donc, beaucoup de Coréens n'aiment pas du tout si leurs petit amis ont des amies qui sont femmes, ou si leurs petite amies ont des amis qui sont hommes. Au début, mon mari aussi l'a cru. Mais comme la plupart de mes amis sont des hommes, je lui ai dit que je vais continuer à faire des choses avec mes amis et s'il ne l'aime pas, il peut chercher une autre copine. Maintenant, il aime bien mes amis et il sait qu'ils n'ont pas d'idées romantiques! Comment pensez-vous? Est-ce que les hommes et les femmes peuvent être simplement amis?
Feb. 15, 2020
青蛙谁会说话 (Talking Frog)
有一天，一个男子过了路，然后他看到一只青蛙。青蛙说了：“亲爱的！如果你吻我，我就变化漂亮的公主” 他把青蛙带了和放兜里了。男子看它，就微笑了。青蛙说：“你现在吻吻我，我变化公主” 。男子又看和微笑了。青蛙又说了：“要是你吻我 和变我里公王，我一定会你的最爱的女朋友“男子又看，又微笑了。其后，他继续了走路。青蛙喊叫：”如果你吻我和变我里公王，我永远一定会你的女朋友!"他又看，微笑了，然后继续走“青蛙问：”怎么回事？我能当你的漂亮女朋友！你终于吻我！“男子说了：”听我，我每天在工作很忙，没有时间为女朋友。可是，说话的青蛙是酷！要不我们来到家，就把你放鱼缸“
Feb. 15, 2020
Nyheten av nytt dataprogrammet
Jag hörde den här nyheten på radio sweden på lätt svenska. Det sändes på tisdagen förra veckan. Det var en inrekes nyhet om sveriges SOS Alarm System. När man behöver hjälp av ambulans, polis eller brandkår, ringer man 112.
Nu ska sverige försöka ett dataprogram med artificiell intelligens att hjälp personalen att förstå vilket problem den som ringer har.
Dataprogrammet ska lyssna och analysera personens ord och röst. Myndigheterna hoppas datorprogrammet ska hjälpa personalen att skicka hjälp snabbare och bättre.
Det ska börja i Jönköping och Halmstad till sommaren.
Jag tycker att programmet är en bra ide eftersom när människor är i panik kan det vara svårt att förstå dem. Jag hoppas det fungerar.
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Feb. 14, 2020
100
Hallo alle zusammen. Heute schreibe ich meinen 100. Eintrag, das heißt, dass ich seit 100 Tagen jeden Tag einen Eintrag geschrieben habe!
Wenn ich im November begonnen habe, Einträge zu schreiben, hätte ich nicht gedacht, dass ich ein Ziel wie 100 Einträge schreiben schaffen konnte. Ja, ich mache noch viele Fehler beim Schreiben, aber ich fühle mich wie mein Schreiben Niveau deutlich höher ist und selbstverständlich ist jetzt das Lesen von Zeitungen, Bücher, und so weiter auch einfacher.
Ich möchte mich alle Menschen, die mir mit Korrekturen, Tipps, oder freundlichen Worten helfen haben, bedanken. Vor allem meinen Freund Aka, vielen Dank für so viele Korrekturen!
Bis die nächsten 100 Einträge!
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Feb. 14, 2020
Stonehenge
Stonehenge is west 140km of London. Stonehenge is located in Salisbury plains. Around Stonehenge wide plains expands in all directions.
What I was most impressed there was to see horizon between sky and land. I have ever seen horizon between sky and sea in Japan, but it was the first time that I saw it.
Archaeologists say Stonehenge was built up around 4000 year ago.
Stonehenge is made up of large stones. The stones with a height of about 5m are arranged like a circle.
In the center of the circle, there're some large stones assembled.
The structure is so sophisticated that some scholars say the day of a solar eclipse can be calculated.
Who and how and why in the world built up those stones has still been veiled in mystery.
Feb. 14, 2020
Being a Mother
My son often tells me that he loves me the most in the world.
It makes me really happy.
In Japan, they say that children finish doing everything as gratitudes for their parents by the age of three.
I don’t think so, because my son who is four and a half years old tells me good things and be nicer day by day. :)
Becoming a mother is a really great thing.
I couldn’t imagine that a little baby loves me all the time no matter what.
I feel he gives me more than I give him.
I hope he grows up to be a thoughtful person.
Feb. 14, 2020
딸기 생크림 케이크
오늘은 발렌타인데이라서 딸기 생크림 케이크를 만들어 보겠다고 다짐했다. 몇 년 전에 한 번 만들어 봤는데 잘 나왔다. 그래서 이번에도 남편에게 해주고 싶었다. 그런데 지난 번에 그 케이크를 만들었을 때 사용했던 레시피를 찾지 못해서 인터넷으로 다른 레시피를 찾았다.
오늘 아침 케이크를 만들었다. 간단한 레시피에 간단한 재료가 들어갔는데 웬지 뭔가 잘못 나온 것 같다. 케이크가 예상보다 무거운데 향기와 색깔이 좋고 맛도 괜찮은 것 같다.
오후에 마트에 가서 딸기와 생크림, 분당을 샀다. 그 다음에 집에 와서 딸기를 씻고 자른 뒤에 생크림과 분당으로 휘핑크림을 만들었다. 마지막으로, 케이크를 반으로 잘라서 가운데에 휘핑크림과 딸기를 넣은 다음, 위에 휘핑크림을 더 얹고 딸기를 최대한 예쁘게 내려 놓았다. 사실은 케이크가 별로 예쁘지 않은데 내 마음을 담은 케이크다. 남편이 아직 퇴근하지 않았는데 집에 오면 바로 내가 만든 케이크를 보여주고 싶다!
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Gap year
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: After high school, students should have at least one year to work or travel. It is better than attending university straight away.
When it comes to whether or not students are better to have at least one year to work or travel before attending university. Some people suggest that after graduated from high school, students should go to colleges straight away. Other argue that the opposite is true. There is possibly some truth to both arguments, but, in my opinion, I agree with the statement offered in the prompt.
To begin with, in order to develop students’ interests accurately, having a work or a travel experience is able to assist them. Only through experiencing real life by working or traveling, can students observe the things they truly love. Think of a student majors in Science; however, he does not know what it is before entering the school. What will happen? He may be find out that he dislikes the subject, but it is too late to change a major in the end. Is not he wasting time? Usually, most students choose their majors since their parents force them to. So, it is better to have at least one year to work or travel which students are able to find their interests on the field they like, what if they notice that they do not interest in the field they chose first, they can change it right away until they found one. Therefore, the experience from working or traveling helps them to choose a major they desire for and make a great effort on it.
In addition, through work or traveling can fertilize students’ life experiences. To be more concise, everything they learn and anything they observe from the area of work for or places they travel to, it will extend their life widths. A case of in point, students have opportunities to travel more than one place, they explore different cultures, histories, even making friends with people who from all over the world. They learn knowledge from these which aids them to become a person with distinctive perspective. Thus, they are able to standout in their professional field.
Of course, some people might say that it is essential to students to attend to colleges straight away, since they have to study continually instead of wasting time to travel or work. For instance, in most Asian countries, parents do not allow their children to go traveling one year after high school. It not only disappoint their expectancies but not be accepted by traditional concept as well. Likewise, I am more favor of students should have at least one year to work or travel before going to colleges. It either helps them develop their interests or enriches their life-experiences. Hence, providing students a chance to work or travel before attending colleges straight away, it will definitely benefit to their life after all.
Feb. 14, 2020
Eine kurze Reise
Am Samstag werden meine Mama und ich nach Seattle fliegen. Seattle ist die nördlichste Großtadt USAs, die nur zwei Stunden weg von der Grenze Kanadas ist. Sie ist besonders berühmt für Kaffee (Starbucks war hier gegründet), Meeresfrüchte, und die Landschaft. Wir planen, um der Pike Place Markt und die Allnadel zu besuchen. Ich bin darüber froh, weil ich kürzlich in der Schule viel zu tun hatte. Meine Mama und ich sind gespannt auf entspannen und Besichtungen machen.
Feb. 14, 2020
Solving the problem of sensitive frog populations
The audio lecture I listened to and the reading passage that I read have opposing views about offering some practical solutions to slow down the problem of sensitive frog populations. Firstly, the reading mentions that frog populations extremely reduce since they are being harmed by pesticides, which are used by farmers to prevent insects from damaging farm crops. If laws prohibit the farmers using the harmful pesticides, it would solve the problem of declining frog populations. On the other hand, the listening asserts that the laws are not economically practical or fair. The farmer rely o the pesticides to decrease crop losses and stay competitive on the markets. If farmers followed the strict regulations, they would sever disadvantage compare to farmers in other areas. They would lose more crops and have lower yield than competing farms.
Secondly, the author presents that a fungus deadly affects frog populations as a result of frogs absorb water, fungus infects they die of dehydration. Researchers propose a treatment that kill the fungus with heat, it would protect sensitive frog populations from infection. Yet, the speaker from the listening passage indicates that the treatment offered by researchers should apply individually to each frog. Using them on a large scale is significantly difficult. Moreover, the treatment does not prevent the frogs passing the fungus on their offsprong. The treatment have to be applied again and again individually, so it is complicated and expensive.
Thirdly, the reading states that human activities, such as excessive water use, threaten frogs’ natural habitats, since they lay their eggs in water and depend on wetland habitats. If the key water habitats could be protected, many frogs would recover. In contrast, the lecturer argues that the solution offered by reading is not save frog populations. The real threat is global warming. It contributes to disappearing of many water and habitats, causing entire species to go extinct. Thus, forbidding humans from using water is not prevent the habitats changes caused by global warming.
Feb. 14, 2020
日本の文化の面白いこと（第二：バレンタインデー）
少し疲れたため、今日の日記は短くします。
明日はバレンタインデーですね（日本人が読んでいるときに、もうバレンタインデーかもしれませんけど 笑）。日本では義理チョコとか好きな人にチョコレートをあげることになっているって聞いたことがあります。しかし、アメリカにはそういう習慣はあんまりない気がします。なぜかというと、アメリカ人はこの日にチョコレートをあげるより、花やプレゼントをあげる傾向が見られます。しかも、日本と違って、男性でも女性でも好きな相手にものをあげられます。それだけではなく、アメリカではデートや映画を見に行く人は多いでしょう。
義理チョコの概念も全くないという理由で、日本の文化はとても不思議だと思います。どうして日本だけはそういう習慣がありますかね。日本人はPRや広告に騙されやすいかな？クリスマスにもケンタッキーチキンは相当人気がありまして、外国人としてとても面白いです。とはいえ、皆さんにチョコレートをあげたいです！受験生や学生たちは「キットカット」が大好きですね？「きっと勝つ」という言葉も似ているんですもんね。
Feb. 14, 2020
O movimento para liberar o Quebec
O movimento pela soberania do Quebec é tanto um movimento political quanto uma ideologia de valores, conceitos, e ideais que lutam pela independência da província canadiana do Quebec.
Vários grupos políticos diversos se uniram perto do final dos anos 1960 para criar o “Bloc Quebecois” um partido político que é exclusivo para o Quebec. Desde 1968 o partido está apelando para negociações constitucionais sobre a questão de soberania provincial, além de realizar dois referendos provinciais em relação á questão. O primeiro, que ocorreu em 1980, perguntou se os quebequenses desejavam abrir negociações constitucionais com o governo federal (e outras províncias) com o objetivo de estabelecer um pacto de "associação de soberania" entre a província do Quebec e o resto do Canadá. Cerca de 60% do público quebecois rejeitou esta ideia apresentada pelo líder do Bloc Quebecois, René Lévesque. A questão foi ignorada pelo partido pela maior parte dos anos 1980, especialmente depois da partição da constitução canadiana sem a autorização do governo do Quebec, e a criação Do CORAF que consagrou a protecção da língua framcesa e a cultura francesa-canadiana. Em 1995, após duas tentativas falhadas de segurar as mudanças quebecois à constitução canadiana, o governo do Quebec realizou mais um referendo sobre a independência do Quebec; o que foi rejeitado por mais de metade do público quebecois.
Feb. 14, 2020
Practicing 아/어/해도 and 후에, 다음에.
자고 싶어도 밥을 먹어야 해요. 밥을 먹후에 잠을 잘 거예요.
Even though I want to sleep, I have to eat. I will sleep after I eat.
주말에는 쇼핑 센터에 가는 것이 싫어도 어제 가야 했어요. 사람들이 너무 많이 있어서 싫어요.
Even though I hate going to malls on weekends, I had to go yesterday. There's too many people so I hate it.
오늘은 밥을 먹후에 학원에 갔어요.
Today I went to the academy after I ate.
«규칙»을 자주 복습해도 항상 안키에서 잊었어요. 너무 답답하다.
Even though I often review the word «규칙», I always forget it on Anki. It's very frustrating.
말을 탄 후에 다리를 아파도 말타기 진짜 좋아해요.
Even though my legs hurt after horseback riding, I really like it.
영어로 읽기, 쓰기, 듣기를 잘 해도 이야기를 잘 못 해요.
Even though I can read, write and listen well in English, I’m not good at talking.
은행에 간 다음에 점심 먹었다.
We had lunch after going to the bank.
피곤해도 이 문장을 쓰고 있어요. 이 트윗 한 후에 저녁 먹을 거예요.
Even though I’m tired, I’m writing this sentence. After writing this tweet I’ll have dinner.
(I used 한 for the 2nd sentence because I didn’t know how to conjugate 쓰다 in the form I needed)
Feb. 13, 2020
I going to share with you how I start reading books
Before to start reading, just wait a minute and read the next.
"I want improve my grammar and other important things but if you think the text I'll write down, it look like some weird or the text had not sense to you, just wait and not correct. Usually I writing a lot metaphors"
So let's start it.
I'm 23 year old and i started reading when i was 15 year old. Always I thought the reading was something veeery boring because... To read a sheet with letters and sentences? I mean it is very boring. I remembered when I was talking with a friend in the high school and I ask him:
- What do you do in the night before sleep.
And he said me
- I read books, and now i'm reading this.
He put his hand in the bag and suddenly he took out a book, a biig book with a nice cover page. When I started to read the tittle i saw a word: "Eragon". Under that there was an image with the main characters. That took me by surprise because these character i knew them.
- I know them. I know the story. There's a movie about that. Have you seen the movie before?
- Yeah i did it.
- So.. Why are you reading it? it's not the same?
In that moment he told me.
- Never. Never the movie is like the book. The stories are different. Just think this: "you just have two hours to watch the movie. The writers had only a few hours to tell you about the all history. They had to cut a looot important details about that. These things don't happen in the book because the writer took all the time to write all the details and some interest things that happen in the book. The movie probably is the 50% or less than the history of book.
It's more. Take the book, i lend it you, just start with the first 20 pages. Only those.
So that was the moment when i started reading
Feb. 13, 2020
マラソンの練習 第3番
マラソンの練習 第3番
前のポーストにはマラソン練習ために必要な事の2つを話しました。まだ必要な事の1つがあります。それは栄養です。
たくさん運動したらちゃんと食べなければならい。ほとんどの日にはいいバランスのダイエットが足ります。でも、速く走った日とロング・ランの日は違います。あの日は蛋白質と炭水化物を食べる量は増えることが必要です。体はちゃんと筋を直せるために蛋白質が要る。で、早く走ったから体に少しエネルギーが残るので次の日に走るのにたくさん炭水化物を食べることが必要です。
さらに、レースの週には別のダイエットが要ります。水を飲むと炭水化物を食べるは通常から増えるのことが必要。それも、塩の食べる量も増えます。でも、脂肪とファイバを食べる量は通常より少ないになります。これはバランスのダイエットではありませんけどレースの日のためにいちばんいいです。
いいマラソンを走るのためは考慮する少し事ももっと多いです。でも、この3つがいちばん重要ですと思っています。