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木曜日、３０日
ネトフリクスやユーチューブを全然見たくないからトレントで日本のテレビ放送をダウンロードする。最近は「女子グルメバーガー部」と「DASADA」が好きだ。
「女子グルメバーガー部」には毎回女の方二人を紹介て一緒にレストラン行く。その前に、女主人公と相手の関係が見せれる。ハンバーグーより人間関係は興味をそそるけどアメリカ人に日本式ハンバーグー不思議だ。
「DASADA」は高等学生女主人公が二人ある。一人が人気女あるけどファッション部員と喧嘩になるから去ったのに、大学の入学資格のために入部が必要だ。その時に、不器用な高い女と合う。高い女は自分で作るなシャッツを売るけどブランド名がじゃないから主人公に尋ねる。「ださだ」で返事ので商品名が「DASADA」でなたった。二人親しくなって一緒に新しい部を作る。
July 31, 2020
El dentista
"Tienes que fijar la próxima cita en seis meses", me mandó la ultima vez que vi el dentista, hace 2 años. No era que no quería ir al dentista - pues, claro que no quería ir al dentista - pero no era la razón que no fui. Es que cosas pasan y hoy, después de 2 años, me encontré tumbado, bajo la luz tan brillante, escuchando al sonido del torno que parecía tener baterías super cargadas y un motor dispuesto a hacer polvo de cualquiera cosa que vaya a enfrentar. Segundos sentaban como minutos, mientras él preparaba el torno para su trabajo más duro de la semana, mi cuerpo se tensó esperando lo inesperado. Al momento que me tocó el diente, no sentí nada y me acordé de las herramientas hoy en día son más suaves que antes.
Gracias por leerlo! Por favor, incluya revisiones para sonar más natural.
July 31, 2020
July 30, 2020
Day 30 - End of the Challenge
For the last 30 days, I have been participating in a 30-day challenge. The core of the task was to work on the languages each one was learning, but also to do something in group which is always more fun and motivating than doing it alone. Today, that the challenge is closing, it’s time to look back and assess what I’ve gained and what areas I need to reinforce. The positives are that I could catch up with my English studies after not having done much in the past 2 years, and to my surprise, I’ve continued to improve in spite of not having worked on my English actively. Another thing that makes me close these 30 days with a smile is knowing that I never took the challenge lightly, quite the contrary, every day I spare some time to write something meaningful to me. In fact, if I had written something quickly just to keep up with the challenge, now I’d be quite dissatisfied with myself.
As for the aspects I need to take more seriously; Punctuation. In this regard, most of the feedback I got had to do with punctuation. Hence, this August I’ll put myself to study what relative, dependant, and independent clauses are. I admit that for many years I’ve proudly refused to even consider studying that aspect of grammar. However, since I’m looking forward to the C1 certificate, I have to make peace with the idea that English in this regard is different from Spanish. For example, in Spanish we have more freedom when writing, punctuation is also more intuitive than regulated. Besides we don’t have anything called “run-on sentences”. That’s why in Spanish one has the freedom to write long sentences, and also to use plenty of adjectives to describe the same thing. In conclusion, I’m the one who has to adapt to English grammar and not the other way round.
I would also like to learn another language, consequently this next 30 days I’ll allocate some minutes of my days to write in French. I have a simple goal: 100-word paragraph daily. Luckily I have engraved in my mind, the first time I wrote a paragraph in English, it took me the whole afternoon. I assume that with French I’ll have to go through the same agony.
July 30, 2020
Lacrime di pagliaccio
Il pagliaccio stava camminando per le strade nella notte più strana della sua vita. Le strade erano vuote: c'erano solo lui, la forte pioggia e la luminosa luna. Non sapeva cosa era successo, la divertente città allegre che conosceva aveva diventato un posto triste e senza vita.
Seduto sulla strada, il pagliaccio ha trovato una sporca bambola vicino ai suoi piedi, probabilmente lasciata lì da una bambina, e viene subito in sua mente le immagini dei bambini che giocavano nella città. Ma perché non erano più lì? Perché non c'era nessuno con cui giocare, ridere o parlare? Come non aveva nessuna risposta decide tornare a camminare, anche se non c'era qualcuno che gli aspettasse.
Nella sua mano c'era la bambola che aveva portato, adesso pulita. Era così perso nei suoi pensieri che non aveva notato un paesello un po' lontano di lui oppure il sole, che adesso era nel cielo.
Quando è finalmente arrivato nella nova città, ha visto una bambina a guardarlo con curiosità, quando subito corre verso di lui.
- Mia bambola! Grazie per averla trovato Sig. Pagliaccio!
E poi le persone che abitavano la cittadina sono venuti.
- Sig. Pagliaccio! Ti abbiamo mancato tantissimo!
Lui era adesso felice, tutta la gente che conosceva era là con lui, a riedere e giocare tutti insiemi come prima, oppure almeno fino a quando non si sposterebbero di nuovo...
July 30, 2020
Übersetze alle Sätze auf Deutsch (Hausaufgaben)
Ich glaube, dass regnet werden.
Er hat Sauber, weil er die ganze Tag nicht Wasser getrunken hat
Wenn ich zu Hause gehe. die essen bereiten war
Er hat mehr Energie, seit er früher aufwachen.
Die Eltern so müde sind, wenn sie sind in Urlaub
Wie malen wollen, deshalb wir neuen Kugleschreiben kaufen
Bis seinen Tochter die Zimmer putzen, die Mutter ins Bett ist.
Sie kann nicht die suppe essen, weil es so heiß ist
Die Enginieren mochten nicht heute arbeiten, deshalb sie shon gehen
Wenn ich in Spanien leben, ich so fröhlich war
Die Mädchen is in das Bett, weil sie so müde ist
Bis der Student der Unterricht bereitet, der Professor in er Hause ist
Ihn kann schneller laufen, seit ihnen jeden tagen entrenieren
Ich mochte nach India fahre, deshalb ich ein Flugticken kaufe
Wir hoffen, dass wir punktlich sind
Seit die Lehrerin brille hat, sie besser sehen kann
Sie sagen, dass sie bereiten hat
Ich habe mein Tee getrunken, bis das Programm bereitet
Wenn er Mädchen war, er badminton spielt
Seit wir in Deutschland leben, wir jeden tag deutsche sprechen
Ich möchte in Deutschlan studieren, deshalb ich deutsche lernen.
July 30, 2020
climate change effects (1)
The growing climate change is the cost of human progress. In the current decade, the rising-worse climate quality is leading an irreversible result in the global world, for example, the glacier is melting, the green-house is thinning and renewable resources are declining. The unlimited use of free-natural resources is, to say the least, been dangerous than it first starts. But on the plus side, the human's aggression on nature could contribute to the society and economics market thrive.
July 30, 2020
Hören, mein Schlechte Fähigkeit ...
Zwischen alle meine Fähigkeiten in Deutsch, Lesen, Schreiben, Sprachen und Hören, gibt es kein Zweifel, dass Hören die Schlechte ist.
Ich weiß nicht warum, weil ich mit anderen Leute sprechen kann und alles verstände. Heute habe ich mit meinem Lehrer eine B1 Prüfung gemacht, und fast alle Fehler waren innerhalb Hören ...
Ich dachte, dass wenn ich viele Sprachen Übung machen, dann würde mein Hören verbessern. Aber es funktioniert nicht so :/
July 30, 2020
Air pollution
Currently, air pollution is a big problem around the world. There are many industries that are responsible for air pollution. They only care about making money, but they do not care about finding potential ways that could reduce air pollution. The situation is even worse in developing countries as there are no regulations or standards that could set a limit for CO2 and other greenhouse gasses.
The situation is also worse in China where CO2 emissions are beyond the permissible limit. Before the Coronavirus occurred in China, the Chinese used to wear protective masks to protect themselves from breathing toxins. I remember a friend of mine who was traveling to China with an N95 mask. When I saw her looking for a mask in Hiroshima City, I asked her the reason, and she told me that she was traveling to China and in order to protect herself from air pollution in China, she needed a mask.
Obviously, there are other reasons for air pollution as well such as vehicles. Usually, private cars are one of the reasons for air pollution in developing countries. In developing countries, because public transport is not suitable for passengers in a city, many people prefer to buy a private vehicle. When the economic situation of households improves, they plan to buy a car. I have even seen families with two or three cars. The bad thing about these vehicles is the fact that it has low passenger capacity but high CO2 emission. Therefore, imagine a city where almost every household owns a car or even every member of a family owns a car.
July 30, 2020
Летные каникулы
В настоящее время я в отпуске на один месяц. Каждый день я пытаюсь сделать что-то, отличающееся от предыдущего дня, но это не всегда возможно. Обычно я хожу в спортзал, который позволяет мне ненадолго сбежать из мира и укрепить свой ум. В другой раз я хожу на пляж, чтобы остыть. Обожаю ощущение, когда я засовываю голову в воду и ныряю. Потом я выхожу на берег и загораю на полотенце на песке, всегда с осторожностью нанося солнцезащитный крем.
Посмотрим, смогу ли я в один прекрасный день совершить поездку в другую страну, даже если с коронавирусом это не очень желательно...
July 30, 2020
Meine neue Mitbewohnerin
Ich habe diese Woche meine neue Mitbewohnerin getroffen. Wir werden bei College ein Tripel-Zimmer teilen, aber glücklicherweise haben wir keine dritte Mitbewohnerin. Wir werden wohnen in einem Studentenwohnheim, das weit vom Campus-Zentrum ist, aber es hat gute Absichten und ein Klavier. Ich war sehr nervös, um meine neue Mitbewohnerin zu treffen. Wir haben über Instagram DMs gesprochen, aber es war sehr kurz. Was würde geschehen, wenn wir zueinander nicht mögen werden? Doch war alles in Ordnung wann ich habe sie über FaceTime getroffen. Sie heißt Maria und kommt aus Massachusetts. Ihre Familie besitzt eine Brauerei, und sie will auch Geschichte studieren. Wir beiden lieben Wandern und Katzen. Ich bin sehr begeistert ein Zimmer mit ihr zu teilen. Ich freue mich auf, sie mehr kennenzulernen!
July 30, 2020
Mikkels Geschichte Teil 2
"Was meint das" fragte Mikkel: "Papa ist neun Jahre gestorben. Wieso sagst du das mir nur jetzt?"
Mutter antwortet: "Mein lieber Sohn, du warst nur ein Kind und nicht verstehtest. Jedoch wann du die Wahrheit willst, werde ich es sagen"
Mikkel denkt. Dann flüstert er: " Es ist egal. Hans war meiner Vater, meiner Papa. Er erzog mir. Ich liebte ihn. Nichts kann das ändern. Mein Plan ist unverändert."
Mutter sagt: Dein echter Vater heißte Wladimir. Wir trefften und verliebten uns zwei Jahre bevor du geboren warst. Wenn du drei warst, kamen zwei Männer zur Tür. Dann Wladimir sagte dass er verlassen brauchte. Er sagte dass wegen ihm wir in Gefahr waren. Dann heiratete ich Hans und du nicht erinnertest Wladimir."
Mikkel springt und sagt: "Hans' Mörder denkte wahrscheinlich dass Hans was Wladimir. Ich muss Wladimir suchen."
July 30, 2020
Day 1
Hello,
I'm new here and I will try to write everyday about my day.
First, I'm going to present myself. I'm an engineering from Madrid, Spain. I'm doing this because I would like to improve my English comunication skills. Altough I'm perfectly capable of understand English, my writting skills (and speaking) are not so developed.
About my day today, i dont have much to say, it had been a day like any other. I woke early up to go to work. It had been a very hot week here in Spain, specially in Madrid with maximum temperatures near 40ºC. The good news are that this is my last week of work before going on a 3 three weeks holidays, so I'm happy in this sense. I will talk about my holidays in future diary entries.
That is for today, you will know more about me in the comming days.
Thank you very much and best regards!
July 30, 2020
История Михаила часть два
"Что значит?" вопросил Михаил: "Папа скончался девять лет назад. Почему ты просто сейчас скажешь мне этот?"
Мама ответит: "сын мой, ты был ребёнком, ты не был понимал. Зато, если ты хочешь реальную историю я буду сказать."
Михаил думает. Он потом шептает: "Всё равно. Ханс — мой отец, мой папа. Он меня воспитал. Я его любил. Нет ничего может этот изменять. Мой план такой же."
Мама говорит: "твоего реального отца зовут Владимир. Мы познакомились и влюбились два года назад ты родился. Когда тебе были три года, два человеки навещали. Потом Владимир говорил что ему было надо покинуть. Он говорил что из-за него мы были в опасности. Потом, я женилась Ханс и ты не запомнил Владимир."
Михаил прыгает и скажет: "убийца Ханса наверно думал что он был Владимир. Мне нужно найти Владимир."
July 30, 2020
CAN SOMEONE TURN THIS INTO SOMETHING MORE NATURAL?
Je sais pas vraiment ce que je veux dire ici, mais je viens de trouver ce site, alors j'ai pensé que ce serait bien d'écrire quelque chose et de voir si mon écriture est assez bonne, car je ne le fais généralement pas autant que J'aimerais. Je suppose que je pense que je parle couramment l'anglais, mais parfois cela peut ne pas me sembler si vrai, je veux dire, de temps en temps, je tombe sur des mots et je me dis: qu'est-ce que cela signifie ??? JE DEVRAIS SAVOIR CELA (cela arrive BEAUCOUP spécialement avec les livres / textes universitaires)! Mais bon, cela arrive probablement à tout le monde, même dans ma langue maternelle (le portugais) je me retrouve à n'avoir absolument AUCUNE idée de ce que signifie un mot, alors imaginez combien de fois cela peut se produire dans une langue qui n'est pas votre langue principale et vous n'en avez personne pratiquer avec. Donc je suppose que c'est ça, c'est juste quelque chose qui me traversait l'esprit, je ne peux pas me forcer à être parfait alors que c'est absolument normal de ne pas l'être.
July 30, 2020
random thoughts
I don't really know what I wanna say here, but I just found this website, so I thought it'd be nice to write something and see if my writing is good enough, since I usually don't do this as much as I'd like. I guess I think I'm fluent in english, but sometimes this may not seem so true to me, I mean, once in a while I come across some words and I'm like: what does this mean??? I SHOULD KNOW THAT (this happens A LOT specially with college books/texts)! But hey, this probably happens to everyone, even in my native language (portuguese) I find myself having absolutely NO idea what a word means, so imagine how often this can occur in a language that is not your main one and you have no one to practice with. So I guess this is it, this is just something that was running through my mind, I can't force myself so hard into being perfect when it's absolutely okay not to be.
July 30, 2020
July 30, 2020
Mes vacances aux États-Unis
Au début des vacances d’été j’ai voyagé seule en avion pour San Francisco pour rendre visite à ma grand-mère et ses chats. Bon, ma grand-mère n’habite pas en San Francisco, mais elle habite très près, alors je dis toujours que c’est San Francisco. Ma première semaine en Amérique était fantastique. Nous sommes allées à la mer en Santa Cruz, et je pouvais tirer avec des armes dans un champ de tir. Naturellement, j’ai aussi fait un peu du shopping. Avant que j’étais partie, ma famille m’avait donné une liste des choses qu’ils voulaient. La chose que j’aimais la plus était manger tous les choses qu’on ne peut pas manger ici en Europe, par exemple Cheetos. Comme toujours, le temps en Californie faisait parfait. À cause du coronavirus, tout le monde devait porter une masque tout le temps, mais pour moi, s’était pas grave.
Pendant la deuxième semaine j’ai suivi un cours de peinture. Je n’ai appris pas beaucoup, mais les gens étaient super sympas. Avant de partir, nous sommes allées traverser le Golden Gate Bridge à pied encore une fois.
Quand je suis revenu en Europe, je devais être en quarantaine pendent dix jours. Je me sentais un petit peu seulette, mais s’était pas très grave pour moi. J’ai pu faire beaucoup des choses sans être interrompu.
July 30, 2020
I'm on fire
I randomly choose words, expressions, phrasal verbs, etc. from my flash cards and my task is to incorporate them into meaningful sentence(s) or a short story.
Random words; MATEY, YOU KINDA ARE
I still can’t understand why I was fired.
To my mind, I was concise, polite and even matey to all of them, wasn’t I?
Well, you kinda were.
You politeness was outstanding, but for the next time you’d like to make some suggestions for company to improve, please, don’t do it on the Board of Directors Meeting completely naked.
July 30, 2020
l'Accent polonais.
Aujourd'hui j'étais au téléphone avec cette dame de la commune de Bruxelles, pour demander mes documents. Basé sur mon accent quand j'ai parlé le français avec lui, elle pensait que j'étais polonais. Elle avait hâte de transférer mon appel à son collègue (qui parle le polonais ? ) 😂
Apparement je suis un homme à l'origine asiatique qui parle le français avec un accent polonais.
July 30, 2020
"Poolse Accent"
Vandaag was ik aan de telefoon met deze vrouw van de gemeente in Brussel, om mijn documenten aan te vragen. Gebaseerd op mijn accent toen ik Frans spreek, ze dacht dat ik een Poolse man was. Ze kon niet wachten om mijn oproep aan haar collega door te schakelen (aan iemand die Pools spreekt?) 😂
Blijkbaar ben ik een Aziatische man die uit Azië komt, en Frans met een Poolse accent spreekt. Godverdomme.
July 30, 2020
Ma vie pendant quarantaine
La période de quarantaine m’a servi beaucoup de bien. Par exemple, je faisais du sport tous les jours, car je n’ai pas eu de chance à sortir. Je faisais du jogging, et je faisais quelques exercices en ligne. Par conséquent, j’ai perdu du poids. Je n’avais jamais réussi à le faire avant !
En plus, mes relations avec mes parents ont beaucoup amélioré. Je passais plus de temps avec eux, et j’ai trouvé une nouvelle appréciation pour tout ce qu’ils faire pour moi. Avant la quarantaine, j’avais habité loin d’eux, et je m’étais habituée à faire tout seule. De mon retour dans la maison de mon enfance, grâce à eux, je n’ai plus dû faire la cuisine, ni la lessive, etcetera. C’était comme je suis redevenue une enfante !
Mais, en fait, j’ai eu peur que j’oublie comment à gérer ma vie. Quand on devient trop confortable, c’est dangereux, parce qu’on affaiblit. Je le déteste. Donc, je suis reconnaissant que la situation du virus est mieux, et je peux retourner à mon ancienne vie.
July 30, 2020
just trying to use some words from a book
Jane would often go to jewellery shops instead of museums. Unfortunately, she couldn't afford even the cheapest pair of earrings, while her peers would often show up at school with multiple ears swung from each ear, with diamond rings on each hand, and of course with golden necklaces and bracelets. Once while she was staying at her classmate's house, she saw a beautiful necklace with a butterfly. She tried it on. It suited her well. She looked stunning. And she felt that she was the butterfly. An ugly caterpillar turned into a beautiful butterfly. When her classmate left the room, she couldn't help it and put the necklace into one of her big pockets. Her classmate didn't notice anything. However, when Jane came home, she realised she'd done a stupid thing. She was a good person, not a thief. She wanted to return the necklace, but she didn't know how to do that secretly. While she was thinking about that, guilt was clawing at her insides.
July 30, 2020
July 30, 2020
Living separately
Nowadays more and more people choose living separately from their families. What are its causes and consequences?
There is no denying that in this day and age more and more people prefer living in their own apartments and being far away from the families. Can it relate to independence and maturity or it destroys family values? What are its causes and consequences? The following essay takes a look at both sides of the phenomenon.
On the one hand, in a modern world each person chases freedom and self-reliance. We have to realize ourselves and only living alone can help to get one's head around. Besides, being alone, a person can be a little bit more productive and spend more time reflecting on his or her actions. What’s more, only living separately man grows into adult one.
On the other hand, human as a biological species cannot exist without company or community. We all need people around us and our family, especially parents, is those only ones, who loves us unconditionally and it is strongly important to appreciate them. In addition, living together makes people corporate and discuss the problems with each other. Without any feedback and reaction to their behaviour person will not become the best version of yourself.
To elucidate, I should say that there is no "right way" to live your life. Everyone of us makes your own choices and decisions. Living separately is a wonderful way to get the feel of freedom an learn to take responsibility for your actions. But completely forgetting the family and relative does not lead to a happy life.