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Que pensez-vous des prix littéraires?
Une site littéraire fait une enquête auprès de ses internautes. L’enquête, intitulée “Que pensez-vous des prix littéraires?”, vise à recueillir l’opinion des lecteurs sur l’utilité ou non de ces prix, sur l’importance de leur influence dans le choix des lecteurs... Vous participez à cette enquête en laissant un message argumenté sur le site.
Bonjour à tous,
À travers l’enquête intitulée “Que pensez vous des prix littérares?” qui attire l’attention de nombreux internautes ces derniers jours, je veux également participer à cet enquête pour vous faire partager ma réflexion sur cette question qui me tient à coeur.
Tout d’abord, on ne peut pas nier que des prix littéraires font partie de grandes influences sur des auteurs. Il existe plusieurs façons pour que les lecteurs s’intéressent aux ouvrages telles que choisir un thème qui est très populaire ou adapté aux goûts de chacun, organiser des expositions de livres, lancer des publicités. Pourtant, aucune façon n’est plus efficace que celle d’obtenir des prix littéraires. Une oeuvre recoit un récompense ou un prix prestigieux qui aide son auteur à améliorer son retentissement et à vendre facilement son ouvrage. Grâce à cela, leurs futurs travaux recevront davantage l'attention des lecteurs. C’est pourquoi, plusieurs auteurs aspirent à perfectionner leur ouvrage pour réussir à atteindre cet objectif.
De plus, on n’oublie pas d’ajouter que des prix littéraires permettent également aux lecteurs de faire un choix approprié dans la profusion des livres qui sont de plus en plus envahissants dans les librairies à chaque “rentrée littéraire”.
Pourtant, il faudrait penser aussi aux impacts négatifs qu’apportent ces littéraires. On soupçonne progressivement les attributions des grands prix tels que Nobel, Goncourt, Renaudot, etc. En effet, ces attributions ne correspond pas aux mises en avant d’auteurs que peuvent faire les critiques et notamment la presse. Il existe plusieurs ouvrages et auteurs jugés excellents par la presse et les critiques mais ils n’apparaissement pas dans la liste des prix littéraires. En outre, malgré des récompenses reçus, ces oeuvres n’ont pas encore été appréciées par les lecteurs. C’est pourquoi, il me semble que les organisateurs de prix devraient se rendre compte des commentaires et des opinions des lecteurs non seulement des experts et des professionnels.
En espérant avoir apporté une contribution utile pour vous. Merci d’avoir lu.
Dec. 2, 2020
Dec. 2, 2020
思い込みが激しくてすみません’ （１）
私が投稿したエントリーが思い込みが激しい内容がほとんどなんだけど、自分の精神がすっきりするために、自分の気持ちを書かないといけない。
普段、温厚に見える私が自分の思い込みを人にめったに話さないから、自分の思考に向かわないと、心が折れそう・爆発しそう（？）
来日してから何年かが立って、現在、接客のバイトをしている。バイトをしている中、どれだけ私の日本語能力が足りてないっていうことに気づく瞬間が多い。プライドが絶滅されたりする時が多い。悲しいことに、英語で話してる自分がすらすらと表現できるけど、日本語で表現しようとすると、他人に大人として見られてない気がする。
なんで今の日本語のレベルまで上達させるにはこんなに時間がかかったかと言うと、やっぱり、問題は、デカすぎるプライド。
常に人の目を気にしちゃう私と違って、器の大きくて、プライドの小さくて、日本人に打ち明けられる外国人のことをすごく羨ましくて耐えない。
Dec. 2, 2020
名片
王云：你叫什么名字？
棵红玉：我叫可红玉。
王云：你做什么工作？
棵红玉：我是法国老师。
王云：你在哪儿工作？
棵红玉：我在北京语言文化大学工作。
王云：你大学有什么地址？
棵红玉：大学在北京市学院路(3)号15。
王云：你的电话号是多少？
棵红玉：我的电话号是 010-62004253。
王云：你的电子信箱是什么？
棵红玉：我的电子信箱是[email protected]。
Dec. 2, 2020
Journal 12/1/20
This afternoon when I was at my office, I heard a touching story from a Tik Toker. His names are Ben and Ernie. He said when he was a teenager, his grandma’s health was not in good condition. The doctor suggested that she should do some exercises regularly. His mom lets him take a walk with his grandma every day. His grandma often told him some interesting things about life lessons, and often asked him “how was your day” He said he was very reluctant to walk with his grandma every day, and he was always answering his grandma with “good” or “same as always”. He wanted to hang out with people at his age, and he was afraid that his friends would laugh at him because he was always hanging out with his grandma. This kind of situation changed when he went to college. One day in the first semester, his mother called me and told him that his grandma had passed away in her sleep. He was shocked when he heard this unexpected information, and he immediately headed home. At that moment, he cried and he started to know the love from his grandma and he regretted his behavior when he was with his grandma. He said it was at that moment, he felt he was really missing his grandma and started to know how much his grandma loved him. He hopes people love their families when the families are alive.
Dec. 2, 2020
「東京マスクランド」が横浜に誕生！
クリスマスはもうすぐです。
Christmas is coming soon.
プレゼントを選べることは悩んでいますか？
Any problem getting presents for you friends?
もし、横浜に近くへ暮らすには、ぜひこのテーマ・ショップが行ってみてください。
If you do live near Yokohama, you should check out this theme shop.
友達にプレゼントを買うために面白いマスクが絶対にあります。
I am sure you can found some interesting masks for your friends.
ちょっとだけにメリークリスマスが望む。
An early Merry Christmas to you.
ちなみに、横浜はすきですか？
By the way, do you like Yokohama?
横浜大好きです。
I love Yokohama.
ただ二回のに。
Even I only visited two times.
もしウイルスのせいで、３，４回に遊ぶのことは簡単にできます。
If not because the virus, I do think will visit 3 or 4 times.
実は、不動産さんも相談してます、小さい住宅を紹介します。
Actually, I have contact a real estate agent to look for small apartments in Yokohama.
今回のクリスマスプレゼントは００欲しいです。
I wish my Christmas presents is a…
Dec. 2, 2020
Музыка
Всем привет! Сегодня я хотела поговорить немного о музыке, так как, я обычно перевожу видео на русском, чтобы пополнить словарный запас, но сегодня я решила переводить песню, что слушаю в течение года. Знаю её значение, но хотела учить слова, что не знала.
Я обычно слушаю много к-поп, специально БлэкПинк, но предпочитаю слушать рок или металлическую музыку.
Как обычно слушаю музыку на английском, а иногда тоже слушаю песни на русском. Считаю, что русский - это язык, который хорошо звучит в музыке.
В последнее время, слушаю группу IC3PEAK. Мне очень нравится их эстетика в их видео и текст песнь.
Dec. 2, 2020
Competition or cooperation
Some people argue that the best way to prepare for life is to learn how to cooperate, while others believe that competition is the best way. To some extent, I agree with the former view, but I think that the latter view can also be justified.
On the one hand, collaboration is one of the basic skills for entering into society. Working together plays a crucial role in people’s lives, as all individuals are gregarious animals, so that almost everything in society requires teamwork. Construction industry, for example, one person can not build a skyscraper, the establishment of high buildings needs the cooperation of workers like plumbers, iron men and supervisors. For this reason, teamwork is of great significance in every walk of life.
On the other hand, competition serves as a stimulant for people to make progress. The desire to be the top one for citizens is a pillar to move forward not only for themselves, but also for society as a whole. For instance, in the workplace, in order to get promotion, staff may try harder to perform well to stand out from the crowd. If every staff thinks so, the holistic productivity of company will be enhanced, which in turn makes a contribution to overall economic growth in their country. In this way, it is beneficial for the development of human civilization.
In conclusion, I think that both cooperation and competition are of importance, with the role of basic skills and the motivation they played.
Dec. 2, 2020
CDs
I think CDs are going to disappear in 10 years. Now, music streaming services are mainstream for listening to music. Just a while ago, It had been CDs, and CDs replaced cassette tapes. Furthermore, cassette tapes had replaced records. It is more convenient to use streaming services than to use CDs, so CDs will be like records. Some people will enjoy CDs as a hobby.
I came up with this topic when I tried to English listening exam but I couldn't find a CD of the problems and couldn't do it.
Dec. 2, 2020
Dec. 2, 2020
12/2
学校で授業中ものすごくイライラしていた。今日は日本語能力試験のために勉強していたけど、先生のやってることが全然意味がわからなかった。
みんなが聴解の部分でかなりいい点を取ったのに、４０分をかけて間違ったところをもう一回させるというのは本当に何も役に立たないと思ってた。だって、同じところをリポートしてるから、聞き取りやすくなるのは当たり前じゃない？
そもそも、模擬試験の一番弱かった部分、語彙と文法に、もっと時間をかけた方が私たちの役に立てたのかな
その先生は今日一人で、来日したばかりなのにたくさんクレームを言ってきそうな学生を対応しないといけなかったから、可哀想だなと思ったけど、いつもこんな感じだから、あの先生。ちゃんとした授業をやってほしいのになあ。。
Dec. 2, 2020
Dec. 2, 2020
Dec. 2, 2020
L'ARRIVÉE
La porte était ouverte et je regardais ce rouge désert, celui qui est apparu dans mes rêves pendant les 8 mois passés. Je suis descendue du vaisseau et l'environnement y semblait plus légère malgré les chaussures martiennes antigravité. On ressentait la lumière du soleil plus près de la peau, même que sa chaleur, ceux qui disparaîtront tôt ou tard. J'ai chargé la voiture d'exploration avec toutes les choses essentielles pour ma mission et nous sommes partis.
Dec. 2, 2020
Je suis en train de lire les livres de Harry Potter
Parmi ceux qui apprennent les langues, on recommande souvent "Le Petit Prince" et aussi la saga de Harry Potter. C'est parce que ces livres ont été traduits en beaucoup de langues ; en fait, Le Petit Prince est le livre qui a le plus de traductions, hormis la Bible, bien sûr. J'adore Le Petit Prince. C'est un livre que je garde dans mon cœur, car ma mère me le lisait quand j'étais petit. Je l'ai déjà lu en français, donc j'ai dû trouver un autre livre pour continuer à pratiquer. J'ai choisi les livres Harry Potter pour les raisons dont j'ai déjà parlé. Ce sont des excellentes livres, et très faciles à comprendre malgré mon mauvais français.
Dec. 2, 2020
Journal 12/2/20
I usually pick my ear by myself, but one day I decided to go to a professional ear nursing store to pick my ears. In our city, picking ears once costs 45 to 50 CN yuan at a professional ear nursing store. It is very expensive. If you do it in a civilian barber store, the least price will be low to 5 CN yuan. Since I picked my ear at that time, I often felt my ear itchy. This situation has lasted about two or three months or so, and has not turned out to be better, so I have to go to a hospital to check it out. The doctor asked me if I had my ears picked somewhere. When I said yes, he told me that it was the fungi that infected my ears and he told me not to have my ears picked anymore. He gave me a box of ointment to treat fungi. After about ten days of treatment, my ears were cured.
Dec. 2, 2020
01/12/20
He pasado la mayoría de la noche leyendo. Quería intentar terminar mi libro esta noche, pero preferiría irme a dormir más temprano que lo habitual.
Sé que he escrito mucho sobre el sueño últimamente, pero de verdad creo que lo necesito. He estado más ansiosa y triste de lo normal y ha sido más difícil decidir qué escribir. Creo que una buena noche de sueño me ayudará. A pesar del frío, la esperanza de que el ejercicio me cansara un poco me motivó a ir a tenis.
Dec. 2, 2020
Avoiding procrastination
In general, I consider myself a person who doesn't procrastinate a lot. The thing is that I haven't time to procrastinate (jeje)...
I think that the reason is that I tried to keep my motivation about work thinking that this is a very important activity, imagining the benefits in the future that could come if... (I just do this or that).
But, some tips that can serve are:
- Do and follow an agenda (in my case the google calendar is very useful).
- Use notes too. I use them to remember some task urgent or activities in a list.
- Trie to follow routines. Be strict with the hours, establish goals, follow some activities like the shower, dressing or breakfast before work and after that go to a space of working.
- Prepare the environment for the work. Use a specific place for that and put it nice.
I hope this tips would be useful for you!
Dec. 2, 2020
The big changing
I had been living a simple and planned life everytime, had two children, had a boyfriend, a house, a work, little problems, but in one moment everything had changed I need to moved at other country.
I was thinkin, planning and taking the control When Covid came.
The big changing didin't be to move a other country, It was to understand that I don't have the total control of my life.
Now I study english everyday,make exercise on my livingroom, work from home and I see the sun from my window and I wait, wait for my fly.
Dec. 2, 2020
Dec. 1, 2020
Graduation: Change of Plans
Yesterday, the school's administration sent a message in which they told students that the protocol for graduations has changed. It turns out that I will be able to graduate with all of my classmates because the school is allowed to host event with more people than it was allowed before. I'm so happy I get to graduate with my best friends! Now I know that day will be special for sure. It wouldn't be the same without them.
However, I'm angry towards some of my classmates. A reduced group of people (about a half of my classmates) have been planning to hang out after the graduation. Their intentions are doing the planning themselves and then telling the rest of the class. But no one asked them to do it. They are excluding the people they don't like from the decision making. That's so wrong! Things like this have already divided us in the past, and makes me strongly dislike my classmates. I'm definitely not going to do what they suggest.
A friend of mine is in that group and it really bothers me. She hasn't told me or my best friend a thing because she knows it's wrong. She doesn't tell us so that we don't complain about it. We found out anyway, but we don't want to say anything to her to avoid conflict.
Dec. 1, 2020
Journal 12/2/20
Last year, I bought a Gree brand air conditioner, and installed it in one of my houses. This air conditioner was bought online from the Gree flagship store. After a period of time using it, I found some problems with it. Firstly, no matter what temperature you set, it was always working all the time, and never stopped. Secondly, its heating or cooling effects are not good. You can be aware of this when you put your hands on the air outlet. Gree is the top air conditioner brand in China, and it is very popular in China too. It should account for 80 percent of the air conditioner shares. I am very puzzled about the performance of this air conditioner. Is the product quality of online and physical stores different? Or is it just that this one has quality problems? I don’t know. In a word, I am very dissatisfied with it.
Dec. 1, 2020
Dos temas breves
¿Si escogieras vivir en cualquier lugar del mundo, dónde estaría?
Esta es una pregunta muy difícil. Me gusta viajar a diferentes lugares, entonces creo que si tuviera que elegir solo un lugar para siempre, escogería una ciudad con muchísima diversidad y que estuviera cerca de la naturaleza. Aunque la idea de una aldea tranquila está bien, suena una poca solitaria. Mientras no me gustaría vivir en una ciudad muy grande, creo que una ciudad pequeña sería mucho mejor.
Sé que este es un cambio en la entrada, pero para alguna razón no me gusta el tema. Es como el tema es bien para una conversación real, no creo que me da mucho para escribir. Creo que lo más difícil cuando escribes en un otro idioma es la habilidad de desafiarte. Al intentar escribir usando utilizado estructuras de palabras más difíciles quizá suene fácil, no es. Siempre intento hacerlo, pero creo que algunas estructuras solo se pueden encontrar en conversaciones o algo así. A veces tiene que ser natural, y no podemos crearlo a través de ejercicios gramaticales, o al menos que no lo podamos hacer correctamente. Al fin y al cabo, aunque esto es un problema durísimo, nos muestra la importancia de hablar con otros, especialmente si quieres tener fluidez en tu idioma objetivo.
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