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请帮我修改我的翻译
你们好，
我在IG上面，找到了一个关于学习语言的账户。她叫 strawblondiestudies，她的专业是国际研究。她目前学习日语，韩语和汉语，其中她的日语水平是最高的。她这个月分享给大家一个 “30 天的挑战。”我下面把她写的挑战单子翻译成英语。如果你们有时间，请帮我看出错误。谢谢！[ ] 是我翻译的部分
我认为一天完成一个任务可以给你得到成就感。如果你们也想参加这个30天的跳钱，我下面会贴上她原来的单子。(更新：我不能贴上原来的单子，明天试试别的方式）
TL = Target Language （我的TL是中文。)
Day 1: Introduce Yourself in 5-10 sentences [使用汉语写自我介绍]
Day 2: Learn 5 words and write a sentence for each [首先学习5个性的词汇，然后使用新的词汇写成句子]
Day 3: Watch a film in your TL (w/o subtitles) [看一部中国电影，但不允许有字母！]
Day 4: Find a studygram friend with the same TL [在IG上寻找一个学习中文的朋友]
Day 5: Spend 20 minutes on a lang learning app [用一个学习语言APP/软件学习中文，至少用它20分钟]
Day 6: Learn the words to a song chorus (learn the whole song) [学习一首歌的高潮-gao1chao2, 必须学习所有的歌词！]
Day 7: Write 3 + sentences about why you study your TL [写一篇短文关于你学习中文的原因/为什么你学习中文？-至少用3个句子来写这篇短文]
Day 8: Learn some onomatopoeia [学习拟声词-ni3sheng1ci2]
Day 9: Read 2 pages from a book (finish the chapter) [读两页-必须读完那个章节-zhang1jie2]
Day 10: Learn 1 grammar point and write 3 sentences [学习1个语法点，然后使用刚学到的语法点来写3个句子]
Day 11: Listen to a podcast [听一个播客-bo1ke4]
Day 12: Learn an idiom/proverb (record yourself saying out loud and share) [学习一个成语、俗话，谚语-yan1yu3 记住录下你说的话，然后分享给别人听！]
Day 13: Write 5 sentences about your goals for your TL [至少写5个句子关于你学习中文的目标]
Day 14: Find and follow 3 new accounts that post in/about your TL [寻找和关注三个学习中文的IG账户]
Day 15: Learn 10 new words and make a story to remember them (record and share the story) [学习10个性的生词然后使用它们创造一个故事所以你能记得它们的意思-把你刚写的故事录下然后分享给别人听]
Day 16: Write 3-5 sentences about your day [使用3-5个句子写成一篇关于你的天的故事]
Day 17: Find a new Youtube channel and watch a video [在YouTube上面 找到一个新的关于中文账户，然后看他们的视频]
Day 18: Watch a TV episode （without subtitles) [看一个电视剧的集，不允许看字母]
Day 19: Write 5 sentences about your future plans [使用中文来写5个句子关于你学习中文的未来的计划）
Day 20: Message a native and start a conversation [发给一个中国人/母语是中文的人 一条短信，开始聊天]
Day 21: Attempt a tongue twister (record and share) [试试一个绕口令，然后录下和分享给别人听]
Day 22: Try a new study method [试试一个新的学习中文的学法]
Day 23: Write 5-10 sentences about your favorite things [使用中文来写5到10关于你最喜欢的东西的句子]
Day 24: Shadow a conversation (record and share) [偷听别人聊中文，然后写出对话的内容，分享聊天的内容]
Day 25: Read an article [读一篇全都是中文字的文章]
Day 26: Do something you normally do in your native language in your TL (journal, shopping list, speak to pets etc) [使用中文来解释你一般用你母语解释的东西]
Day 27: Learn a joke/pun (record and share) [学习一个笑话，录下和分享]
Day 28: Test yourself [测试-ce4shi4自己的中文水平]
Day 29: Write 5 sentences using 5 things you’ve learned this month [使用你这个月学到的5个生词，语法，笑话等等来写成5个中文句子]
Day 30: Teach someone something you’ve learned this month (make a lesson for IG and share) [教一个人你这个月学到的新知识，然后在IG上面分享]
真不好意思，我没办法贴着原来的单子。
Dec. 10, 2020
genervt sein
In der heutigen Gesellschaft leiden immer mehr Leute unter von dem Studiums oder der Arbeit verursachenden hohen Druck. Sie geben zu, dass sie einfach wegen der Kleinigkeit genervt sind. Außerdem kann das gestörte Gefühl entsteht, wenn man seine Grenze einfach überfährt und sich dann immer mit irgendetwas behelligt, was man nicht will.
Obwohl das genervte Gefühl häufig als negative Emotion betrachtet wird, hat es eigentlich positive Einflüsse. So wie Angst, die uns über eine mögliche Gefahr informiere, ist auch das genervte Gefühl Teil der biologische Warnfunktion von Emotionen: Es informiere uns darüber, dass irgendwas nicht so läuft wie wir das gerne hätten und wir was ändern müssen.
Wenn man mit dieser Emotion nicht gut zurechtkommen, wird unsere Leben schlecht beeinflusst. Man wird mit weniger Motivation arbeiten und leben. Wenn man es nicht rechtzeitig bekämpfen kann, entwickelt es zu weiter psychische Krankheiten.
Um uns im Leben wenig genervt zu fühlen, sollen wir zuerst die Ursache, die stören uns, finden. Dann entspannende Musik helfen uns, uns psychisch erhöhen. Wenn man das Problem selbst nicht lösen kann, soll man nach professionelle Hilfen suchen.
Zum Schluss möchte ich sagen, es ganz normal ist, wenn wir genervt sind. Wichtige ist, dass wir durch Erhöhung wieder erfüllte Motivation zum Leben haben.
Dec. 10, 2020
Dec. 10, 2020
¿Qué está pasando en la foto? (3)
La foto: https://www.nytimes.com/2020/12/06/learning/whats-going-on-in-this-picture-dec-7-2020.html
A primera vista, me llamó la atención el hombre en la chaqueta azulada, posado para una foto. Supongo que él tiene que ver con el escenario que rodea. Quizás él sea Nelson y el barco en la botella es suyo. A mí, me parece que él tiene la pinta de una artista, que siempre prefiere los tenis y solo lleva la chaqueta cuando la situación se oblige. Me pregunto en que país están. No puedo distinguir la idioma del anuncio arriba de su cabeza ni la bandera que ondea en la asta. Si yo tuviera que adivinar a fuerzas, diría que están en Europa pero no apostaría ni un centavo.
Dec. 10, 2020
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Dec. 10, 2020
チョコレートはバニラ
英語には「vanilla」は味の意味だけでなく、もう一つの意味がある。それは地味の意味だ。バニラなゲームはアップデートする前に、始めてのゲームだ。もし誰かの趣味はバニラなら、その趣味は多分人気で、みんなが好きから特別ではない趣味だ。そしてバニラな人は特別ではない人だ。この意味は元に味について話します。バニラなものは人気すぎて、アイスやケーキなどは全部バニラの味から、バニラの味はつむらなくなって、まるで特別な味がない。その上に、バニラの食べ物は大抵白いし、地味な感じは強い。
私はバニラが大好きので、その考え方は間違っていると思う。バニラはずいぶん特別な味がある。もし何かが本当に特別味がないなら、その物は多分甘いだけだと思う。でも、味の使い方と言えば、今一番バニラなバニラじゃなくて、チョコレートだろう。世界で一番人気な味は多分チョコレートで、会社が新しいスイーツを作る時いつもチョコレートの味を作る。店でバニラな食べ物があるか分からないが、チョコレートは絶対にある。だから、チョコレートはバニラだ。
Dec. 10, 2020
旅行
我认为旅行有能喜欢的方面，也有不喜欢的方面。我最喜欢的方面是尝试不熟悉的食物。我还记得和父母一起去密歇根州的乡间的时候，我们去了一家迷人的小饭店。这家饭店的人员自己种苹果和别的水果，然后把水果做成果冻和派。饭店有自己做的苹果酒，也有苹果酒味道的甜甜圈。旅行的时候我特别喜欢去这样的小饭店吃新的食物。我也喜欢参观博物馆，尤其是艺术馆。参观比利时根特的刑具博物馆是我最难忘的记忆之一。这时候，我五岁左右。我对断头台有很大的兴趣。我在断头台前走来走去，一直检查它。这是我妈妈最喜欢的故事。她很多次给我和他人讲这个故事。她也有一张我在断头台前面的照片，可惜我们找不到它。
我最讨厌的方面是坐火车或者飞机。坐飞机让我感觉非常紧张，所以我比较喜欢坐火车。可是有时火车的乘客特别讨厌。坐车是我最喜欢的旅行方法，可是我不会开车。因此我平时不旅行。
Dec. 10, 2020
Правила университета
В нашем университете правила не бывают слишком строгими. Наверное это потому, что университет находится на западном побережье США и в целом, люди здесь более спокойные, чем на восточном побережье. Преподаватели не стараются контролировать то, что делают студенты, но всем понятно, что если вы пропускаете уроки и всегда опаздываете на лекций, то вы провалёдетесь курс.
Основным исключением являются правила об обмане. Университет очень серьёзно относится к этому вопросу. У каждого кусра есть специфический список того, что нельзя делать. Например, во многих курсов компьютерных наук студентам не разрешают делать домашнюю работу вместе. Говорят, что каждый год есть несколько студентов, которые не обращают внимание на это правило и падут в неприятности. По-моему, это разумное правило и у меня нет никакой претензий к университету.
Dec. 10, 2020
Something about me
I've been thinking in my family's future. We have a lot of plans and we are working really hard to make them come true but like any men around the world my work takes up most of my time. I have a child who I love so much. He is 3 years old and very active. He likes to talk and play most the time, my wife is a very strong woman, she has problems with her family but that never break her down. About me... I like to play bass and I like to learn languages, I've never made an English test to know my level, I've never been at an institute, I've learned just watching movies, listening music, speaking with natives. I would like your help to improve my level.
Dec. 10, 2020
Упражнение 1-41
1. Лида не работала, пока училась в университете.
2. Лида стала работать после того как окончила университет.
3. С тех пор как окончила университет, Лида работает учительницей в школе.
4. До тех пор пока не ушла на пенсию, Лида работала учительницей в школе.
5. До того как пойти в школу, Степан ходил в детский сад.
6. Степан занимался плаванием в то время как учился в школе.
7. После того как окончил школу, Степан больше не занимался плаванием.
8. Прежде чем поступить в университет, Степан занимался с репетитором.
9. Степан много занимался перед тем как стать вступительные экзамены.
Dec. 10, 2020
Текст с выражениями времени
Я поступила в университет полтора года назад. До тех пор я изучала русский язык сама, без учителя. Как вы представляете, это было трудно и у меня был особенный плохой акцент. Прежде чем записаться на курсы русского языка, я сдала устный экзамен с директором факультета. Она разрешила меня пойти на третьий курс и мне сказала, что надо было немного подработать, чтобы догнать других студентов. Я упорно трудилась и достигла лучшего уровня русского к концу семестра.
Когда я вернулась домой на лето я поняла, что надо было продолжать с изучениеv языка, иначе я бы всё забыла. С тех пор я говорю на русском 3-4 раза в неделю, изучаю язык каждый день и стараюсь читать и писать как можно большего. В январе я собираюсь вернуться в университет. Я уже записалась на два курса русского языка. Надеюсь, что смогу достичь высокого уровня в следующем году.
Dec. 10, 2020
Patines/patinetas/patinetes
Ayer escribí sobre patinetes y monopatines. ¡Gracias a todos que leyeron y corrigieron mi ensayo! Mientras leí las correcciones, me di cuenta que las palabras "patines", "patinetas" y "patinetes" son semejantes. Siempre había pensado que "patinete(s)" refería a los zapatos con ruedas y también a la tabla con ruedas y un manillar que se monta de pie, pero creo que me he confundido. Busqué unas fotos para entender la diferencia entre ellas.
"Patines" parecen zapatos o botas con ruedas.
Un monopatín/una patineta es una tabla con ruedas.
Un patinete es como un monopatín con un manillar.
¿Me podéis avisar si lo he entendido? Si es así, quiero aclarar que mi amiga tiene patines y me ha regalado un monopatín/una patineta.
Dec. 10, 2020
Journal 22/10/20
I live in the northern part of Anhui Province. When I was a child, our area mainly planted sweet potatoes, so I was fed by them. What kind of sweet potatoes tasted the most delicious? Let me tell you. When sweet potatoes harvest season comes, the big and good quality ones are made into dried sweet potato slices or deposited in the cellar in order to eat during the later days. The small and bad quality ones are just put on the corner of the yard without any protection methods, and let the wind blow and rain. Many days later, the sweet potatoes become dry, soft and the color also turns dark. Alright, it is time to eat it: first, wash them clean and put them in a pot. Second, add water and as much as possible. Third, light firewood starts to boil them until the water in the pot is almost dry. Now the delicious boiled sweet potatoes are done. After cooling them for a little while, you can pick them out and put them in a bowl, then eat them. Sweet potatoes cooked this way are especially sweet because after many days drying, the water inside the sweet potatoes is almost gone, thus the sugar inside the sweet potatoes are in high concentration, plus the long time boil until the water in the pot is almost dry that some sweet potatoes even boil out syrup, so it smells good and tastes very sweet. But nowadays, it’s hard to have an opportunity to eat these kinds of sweet potatoes. All that has only become a beautiful memory.
Dec. 10, 2020
Home gardening 2
I planted green onion on my balcony about two weeks ago. It looked they hadn't grown at all, and people said that it's hard to grow during the cold weather, so I gave up watering them. But yesterday morning, I looked at the containers that I planted green onion seeds, I noticed that some buds spouted. It took more than two weeks to germinate. I was happy to see it! But my dad said that his green onion has withered in his patch, and it was too late to plant. I understand that it's hard to grow plants during winter, but I'll water them and wait and see.
Dec. 10, 2020
Aujourd'hui, j'ai un test de français
Je me suis inscrit au cours de français que mon université offert, et aujourd'hui j'ai un test de ce course à 21 heures. Ça me parait, à vrai dire, un peu injuste puisqu'on a ce cours les samedis, pas les mercredis. Le prof nous a dit que prendre le test aujourd'hui était nécessaire parce qu'il y a des élevés que ne peuvent pas le prendre les samedis, car ils travaillent ou pour des autres raisons. Bon, ça c'est une bonne raison, mais il y a aussi des élevés qui travaillent les mercredis ou qui ont des cours jusqu'à 21 heures. Heureusement, mes cours ont fini à 19 heures aujourd'hui, mais en autres jours j'ai cours jusqu'à 21 heures et il se passe souvent que les profs ne nous laissent pas sortir jusqu'à un peu après 21 heures, comme à 21 heures et 15, par exemple. Si ça m'arrivait aujourd'hui, ça cerait très compliqué pour moi de prendre le test.
Dec. 10, 2020
Friends
What is actually a friendship? We as people , as humano long for deep , meaningful connections but at the same time we want 1000 followers on Instagram and being in contact with people we don’t really care about and that we don’t even consider a friend/we don’t consider even a friend.(personas que ni siquera consideramos amigos,I don’t know where “even “ should be situated)
We do that for our ego and I actually think is sad and I am quite ashamed of myself for being caught in this trap for a couple of years now .
As a New Years resolution I want to connect more with people that I care about and less with people that I couldn’t give a shit about them .
In the end I don’t think we’re meant to talk with so many people and that can produce a feeling of emptiness at least in my experience.. I just want 2-3 good friends that I talk regularly, and my family and let go of all the other distractions, the noise of the world and do whatever the fuck I want. Time is limited.Let’s spend our life being 1000% true with us and what we feel,want,need in order to be happy. Cheers 🥂 my friends.
Dec. 9, 2020
Dec. 9, 2020
¿Las ha complicado nuestras vidas la tecnología?
Discutiría que sí, la tecnología ha complicado nuestras vidas porque ahora hay tantos problemas que no existen hace cuarenta años. Ahora, tenemos la habilidad hacernos amigos con personas que viven al otro lado del mundo. Sin embargo, este nivel de conexión ha creado problemas nuevos como las guerras virtuales, los delitos virtuales y tal. Podemos encontrar toda la información que queremos al toque de un botón, pero ahora el riesgo del plagio es lo más alto que nunca. Nos rodeamos con la tecnología, pero también tenemos que luchar contra los problemas que se crean por culpa de esto.
Dos oraciones con la repetición de una palabra para enfatizarla.
1. ¡Yo intentarlo lo intento mucho pero no lo he vencido nunca!
2. La pelea era terrible terrible y al final él salió a su cuarto.
Dec. 9, 2020
My sleeping habits
Recently I'm thinking a lot about my sleeping habits. I used to force myself to wake up earlier, but after many failures I gave up on that idea. I'm definitely a night owl who loves sleeping. That's exactly who I am, it's my nature.
I'm most comfortable after sleeping for seven up to eight hours. Although I need many hours of sleep in order to feel rested, I often go to bed too late. The reason for that is because I'm definitely the most productive in the late afternoon and in the evening. I usually don't even notice when the time passes and suddenly it's 11pm. My current job suits well to my sleeping preferences, because I never start work before 2pm. Therefore, I can calmly sleep until 9-10 am. I often go to bed around 1am.
I almost never have problems to fall asleep, after laying my head on the pillow for less than 10 minutes I'm already asleep. I wish I needed so little time to get up too! Getting up is very difficult for me, I can be awake for even an hour, just lying in bed and doing nothing and still don't really feel like getting up. I know it's a waste of time, but it's stronger than me and I still do it quite often.
Sometimes I can't fall asleep when I worry about something or when it's too bright in my bedroom. I can't stand when it's hot in my bedroom at night! Funny thing is that although I don't consider myself a light sleeper, I immediately wake up every time I hear the alarm clock, even if it's somebody else's, not mine. If someone touches me or calls my name when I'm asleep I can also wake up at once, but every time I fall back asleep very easily.
I've been in a romantic relationship for seven months. It's the first time when I'm with someone and we're madly in love with each other. The first time when I woke up beside my boyfriend I felt so happy I can't even find words to describe that feeling of ultimate bliss. We don't live together yet, only during some weekends when we visit each other we have a chance to sleep together, so I noticed sometimes I miss him horribly when I'm trying to fall asleep by myself, when he is away.
I dream a lot. Unfortunatelly I mostly remember my dreams for a short period of time and then completely forget them. I'm not sure why, but lately I've been experiencing some nightmares. They are usually about letting my friends or family down, losing my job or about death. Sometimes I wake up while I'm having a bad dream and I feel terrified, with my heart beating like crazy. But then I just tell myself: 'Calm down, it wasn't real, it's just a dream'. After comforting myself I can fall asleep again.
I sometimes feel tired during the day. When I was a university student I took short naps almost every day. Never longer than 25 minutes. I think it helped me a lot at that time. I've tried some interesting technique - first drink black coffee and then have a nap for 20 minutes. I have to admit it works wonders, gives a strong boost of energy.
Dec. 9, 2020
Une lettre
Salut étranger,
J’espère que vous allez bien dans ces temps-là, avec la pandémie et tout ça qui l’accompagne. Naturellement, je ne vous connais pas, mais je suis sûr que vous aimerez ce livre autant que moi. Je dirais qu’il est typiquement suédois, et l’un de mes livres préférés !
Si vous avez des conseils pour quelques livres français qu’il faut lire, n’hésitez pas à m’écrire :)
Dec. 9, 2020
Dec. 9, 2020
How am I going to play Chess?
I wonder how I'll play this chess game against Alexa. I wonder if I can win because it's the first time I'm going to play a chess game in a tournament.
I'm going to look for advices in some books about chess and I'm going to analyze my games and movements to develop a better game in the chessboard.
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