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Книги
Трудно сказать, кто мой самый любимы писатель, так как мой вкус в книгах меняется с течением времени. В последнее время, я читаю книги писательницы Tana French. Она ирландка и пишет детективные романы. Качество её прозы довольно лучше, чем в других детективных романах, и сюжеты её книг просто захватывающие. Они как правило написаны с точки зрения детектива, и кажется, что French знакома с детективной работой. Мой папа мне подарил две книги на день рождения, и я очень обрадовалась, когда их увидела.
По большей части, я люблю современную литературу, а иногда читаю нехудожественную литературу о социологии или психологии. Самая длинная книга, которая я закончили - это роман японского писатели Харуки Мураками. Этот роман был лишком длинным, чтобы поместиться в один том, и надо было купить два тома. Я всё-таки прочитала книгу в течение недели. Когда меня интересует сюжет, я потеряю счёт времени и продолжаю до конца. К сожалению, концовка этого романа была для меня немного неудовлетворительной. Если вы заинтересованы в таком жанре, я бы порекомендовала читать роман “Кафка на пляже” того же автора.
Aug. 27, 2020
Journal intime 27 août
Jeudi 27 août
Aujourd'hui a été un grand jour. J'ai passé au lycée. Finalement! Il serait un mensonge quand je dirais que l'école ne me manque pas. L'école á été relax. Nous avions le matière Politique. Je l'aime. J'ai aussi déjà fait les devoirs. Les devoirs c'était deux petites exercice. Je vais avoir le matière du français á mardi. Je suis heureux que j'aie la possibilité d'aller à l'école. Heureux que j'aie la possibilité de recevoir une éducation professionnel. Pendant le confinement j'ai appris que c'est important d'apprécier les petites choses. J'ai aussi joué du foot avec quelques copains ce soir. C'était trop cool.
A la fin, je voudrais dire merci au Monsieur Elephant qui a corrigé tous mes textes. Vous vraiment m'aidez beaucoup
C'est tout pour le moment.
Aug. 27, 2020
Summer night
Summer nights are really nice, especially in the countryside. Back in the seventies, I was a kid and studied in primary school. When summer night came, we fellow kids went to a threshing ground with a mat on the top of our head and the threshing ground was out of our village and near a farm. Generally, there were seven or eight kids in a group. There were a few year old kids and there were also teenagers. The twinkling stars in the sky, the night wind blowing gently and the insects chirped. The teenagers would tell us a story. We watched a different star and told a legend story to each one. When we heard the sound of generator, we knew there must be a village that was playing a movie and we would go towards the direction that the generator sound was from to find which village was playing movies. At times when we went back after the movie, it was already in the small hours. However, sleeping outside in the summer night is nice, but you would feel a bit tired in the morning and your quilt was kind of wet. If it was raining at night, that would be awfully terrible!
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Aug. 27, 2020
Закрытый пляж
Привет. Я только закончила покушать. Я поела хумус с хлебом. Это мне очень нравится)))
Ну, меняя тему, мы с моей кузиной и её парнем ездили послезавтра на пляж. Мы были на машине через час, и когда мы наконец-то пришли, пляж был закрыт из-за коронавируса, а потом мы решили поехать в общественный бассейн. Мы не могли войти потому, что нам нужно было сделать заказ накануне.
Мы не знали, что делать, и решили поехать в общественный парк, чтобы есть и отдыхать.
Несмотря на то, что мы не могли принять ванну, был приятный день. Мы были вместе семь часов))
Aug. 27, 2020
si pudieras vivir en cualquier lugar del mundo ¿dónde?
Es un poco difícil contestar a esta pregunta de manera original porque siempre me ha gustado vivir donde nací. Me siento hasta afortunada de haber nacido aquí : cerca de Paris, Francia.
Si quiero estar exigente, me gustaría moverme al dentro de la capital, porque de momento todavía vivo en las afueras. Estaba muy agradable crecer en una ciudad más pequeña, aunque sí es bastante grande y no un pueblo. Ahora quiero vivir dentro de "la gran ciudad" para sentirme al centro de esta vida animada y no al lado. Además, Paris realmente es una ciudad muy bonita, y no creo que es posible cansarse de ella.
Quizás en unos años me gustaría vivir en otra capital europeana, como Berlin o Madrid, para ver como son las cosas allí. De toda manera, pienso que prefiero vivir en una gran ciudad, en este anonimato agitado.
Aug. 27, 2020
没有人保护总统
几个星期前，维也纳警方在凌晨一点钟发现有四个人坐在一家已经关门的当地餐馆外面的位子。其中有一对好像刚开始谈恋爱的情侣，紧紧地坐在一起，跟另外两个人谈着话。平时，这也没什么特别的。但是时局不正常，四人违反了Covid19的宵禁。
当警察走近四名违法人员的时候发现紧紧坐在一起的夫妇是奥地利联邦总统和他的妻子。总统立即承认自己做了错误并道歉说，他在跟好久没见的朋友聊天的时侯忘记了看手表。
虽然这一事件太不重要了，但右翼民粹党发起议会质询，询问警方是否对总统进行了罚款。维也纳警方答复说，当时采取的策略是敏化公民而不罚他们，而这个策略也适用于总统的案件。
我为什么要写这个？
首先，我觉得这件故事（是真的）蛮有意思的。总统是人，但也是会承认错误并道歉的政治家，这已经是很少见的了。
其次，我认为某些事情在某些国家做得对。奥地利的国家元首可以在半夜独自一人在维也纳街上。没有人担心他的安全。我想这种事情在世界大多数国家都是不可想象的。
Aug. 27, 2020
Des choses que je fais pour éviter la procrastination
Des choses que je fais pour éviter la procrastination est utiliser un minuterie Pomodoro, bloquer les sites web distrayants, et tous les matins créer un liste de tâches rapides. Le minuterie Pomodoro, ça me force finir mes devoirs sans trop travailler mon cerveau, et en bloquant les sites web distrayants je ne suis pas tenté tergiverser. Cela me mène à être productif pendant la journée!
Aug. 27, 2020
Story-3
Al was thirtheen who lived in a little house with his parents. They had not got much money so their life was difficult.
Al loved music, he played the guitar and wrote songs in a band. Al's parents often came and listened to the songs of band.
Al's sister Lisa was born, she was very little so everyone was very busy and tired in the family. Al was said that he could not play the guitar in his home by his mother. He could not concentrate at school and forgot to do his homework.
One day, Al knew Lisa's heart was not good, she needed an operation quickly.
The operation was very expensive, Al needed more money to help Lisa.
Al was very sad and did not know how to get more money. His grandfather had an idea and asked Al to write a song for Lisa.
Al found his band friends to disscuss about the song for Lisa. They decided open gig to earn the money and created song on website for people download it.
At last, Al's family could pay the operation for Lisa. After a few days, the parents brought Lisa to go America to do operation.
Aug. 27, 2020
8/27 그냥 아무거나 쓰기
please correct my sentences! 문장들 좀 고쳐주세요!!:)
1. Ich habe gestern "Drachenzächmen leicht gemacht" sehen.
Hast du jemals den Film gesehen?
Ja, der Film ist niedlich.
2. Das neue Semester beginnt am Mittwoch. Es ist Zeit zu lernen.
3. Ich wolle eine Seife machen.
Ich möchte eine Seife machen.(?) which one is correct? or natural?
Ich wolle eine Zahnbürste kaufen.
4. Möchst du das tun? ( do you want to do that?)
Wollst du das tun?
Wollst du das machen? (?) which one is natural?
5.Die Farben sind Schön.
Das ist Braun. Du bist dran.(it is your turn)
Hast du schon ein Rose haben?(did you already have a rose?)
Hast du schon ein Rose?(do you already have a rose?)
6. Ist das richtig? (is this right?,is this correct?)
7. Ich möchte meine Freunden treffen.
Sie sind lustig (They are fun)
es macht Spaß ( it is fun)
es ist lustig( it is fun)
es ist Spaß( it is fun)??
Aug. 27, 2020
Bloody Steaks
I hope I don't violate any community guidelines by telling this joke, but in case I do so, I hope Masemune will pardon me.
So here it goes:
A German tourist walks into a restaurant in New York.
When the waiter approaches him, he says:
"I want a bloody steak!"
The waiter answers:
"Very well, sir, do you also want some fucking fries or a goddamn salad to go with it?"
I don't know whether such a situation has ever really happened, but it's not unlikely.
When a steak is "rare" in English, it is "blutig" in German and that literally translates as "bloody" to English. German speakers who are not aware of how the word "bloody" can be used in English are likely to order "bloody steaks" in British or American restaurants.
I remember who told me this joke. It was my English teacher in secondary school who wanted to create awareness of false friends.
Aug. 27, 2020
Ninguém protege o presidente
Umas semanas atrás, a polícia de Viena notou quatro pessoas que estavam sentados na área pública de um restaurante local já fechado, à uma hora da manhã. Houve um casal sentado juntos íntimamente como recem namorados que conversou com duas outras pessoas. Em tempos normais, isso é nada de particular. Mas os tempos não são normais e as quatro pessoas estavam violando o confinamento de Corona.
Quando os policiais se acercaram aos quatro delinquentes, notaram que o casal sentado íntimamente era o presidente da república e sua mulher. O presidente admitiu imediatamente de haver cometido um erro e pediu desculpas explicando que simplesmente se havia esquecido do tempo conversando com amigos que não havia encontrado durante muito tempo.
Embora este evento seja insignificante, o partido populista de direita lançou uma solicitão de informação no parlamento pedindo se a polícia multou o presidente. A polícia de Viena respondeu que na época se seguiu a estrategia de sensibilizar os cidadões sem multá-los, e que se aplicou essa estrategia no caso do presidente também.
Por que falo desse assunto?
Primeiro, penso que esta história (que é verdadeira) é muito simpática. O presidente é um ser humano mas também um político que admite um erro e pede desculpas, o que é raro hoje em dia.
Segundo, penso que certas coisas dão certo em certos paises. O chefe do estado austríaco pode estar sozinho na rua no meio da noite, e ninguém fica inquieto pela sua seguridade. Penso que uma situação dessas é impensável na maioria dos paises do mundo.
Aug. 27, 2020
Vokabular
Ich will das nicht erleben, was ich schon erlebt habe.
Nach dem zweiten Weltkrieg könnte man die Stadt kaum erkennen, da die Bomben sie zerstören hatten.
Präteritum: Ich musste gestern nach München fahren.
Perfekt: Ich habe gestern nach München fahren müssen.
Konj. II mit Modalverb: Ich hätte gestern nach München fahren müssen.
Präteritum: Trotz die Beschränkungen, durften wir letzte Nacht ins Kino gehen.
Perfekt: Trotz die Beschränkungen, haben wir letzte Nacht ins Kino gehen dürfen.
Konj. II mit Modalverb: Trotz die Beschränkungen, hätten wir letzte Nacht ins Kino gehen dürfen.
Im Präteritum und Perfekt (Indikativ) sind wir ins Kino gegangen. Im Konj. II sind wir nicht.
Aug. 27, 2020
Aug. 27, 2020
Come ho imparato il francese
Ho cominciato a imparare il francese un anno fa. All'inizio lo studiavo da solo, leggevo un sacco di manga in francese e guardavo i video su Youtube ogni giorno. Dopo 8 mesi, ho deciso di trovare un insegnante francese per migliorare più velocemente. A questo punto, ho anche iniziato a parlare di più e scrivere testi che sono contrassegnati dal mio insegnante. Lentamente, mi sentivo più a mio agio nell'esprimermi e sono riuscito a ottenere il DELF B2.
Adesso, spero di fare lo stesso in italiano ma più efficiente. Per esempio, ho cominciato a scrivere testi qui e parlare con i nativi solo dopo 2 mesi. È ovviamente una grande lotta per me e uso molto Google Translate però sento che sto migliorando molto più velocemente in questo modo.
Aug. 27, 2020
Aug. 27, 2020
Cómo aprendí a cuidar mi piel
Quería aprender sobre el cuidado de la piel después de visitar a una amiga el verano pasado. Ella me mostró todos sus productos y me enseñó cómo mantener el equilibrio de la piel.
Unos meses después, empecé a buscar más información sobre cuales ingredientes son los más importantes y en que orden se debe usar las cremas.
Ahora, tengo mi propia rutina. Estoy muy contenta con la condición de mi piel! Prefiero usar productos con pocos ingredientes. Antes de comprar algo, paso mucho tiempo leyendo las reseñas y comparándolo con las otras opciones. Creo que ha funcionado! Además de mejorar mi piel, establecer una rutina ha sido útil para prepararme a dormir cada noche.
Aug. 27, 2020
Aug. 27, 2020
Story-2
Poor woodcutter Ali Baba saw the chief of the forth thieves to open a rock door and go into a cave. Later they came out and left, Ali Baba went into the cave to bring some treasures to go home.
He went to his brother who is a merchant home to borrow scales and explain the reason.
Ali Baba's brother went to the cave but the thieves discovered him and his body was dismembered.
Later, Ali Baba brought the dismembered body to go home, a cobbler sewn the body up. After that, Ali Baba buried the body.
A thief of forth thieves, Najid heard the cobbler's story, so he gave the cobbler two gold coins to take him to Ali Baba's home.
Najid putted a white mark on the door and left. Soon after that, Ali Baba’s servent Morgiana came out, she saw the mark on Ali Baba's door.
She made every door in the street. The chief could find Ali Baba's home. He gave the cobbler three gold coins, the cobbler took him to Ali Baba's home. Morgiana was watching from inside.
The chief who impersonated an oil merchant to take some oil jars to go Ali Baba's home.
Actually, there were thirty-nine thieves in the jars. Morgiana put hot oil in the jars, the thieves died suddenly.
The chief who pretended to be another a rich gold merchant to go Ali Baba home, but Morgiana recognized him at once.
After dinner, Morgiana danced. The chief readied to attack Ali Baba with his knife but Morgiana killed him immediately.
Morgiana explained everything, Ali Baba asked his son to marry her. Finally, they were very happy for many years.
Aug. 27, 2020
Aug. 27, 2020
Jak dojdu do práce (je to nudné, já vím)
Po létě a vloni jsem měla práci v resturaci. Často pracuju v odpolednech/večerech, takže občas to zavřu.
Vloni a od května do konce července aspoň jedu do práce autem rodičů protože nemám auto ani neumím řídit.
Nedávno ale jsem dostala kolo ze svého otce. Je to z své matky vlastně ale můj otec to upravilo. Dříve kolo vůbec nefungovalo.
Právě to je srpen (konkrétněji konec srpna. Září ublíží) a každý den když pracuju, nejedu autem. Jedu kolem.
Kolo není nejlepší (z 90. let) ale dojedu tam načase. Za ~25 minut jezdím na kole. Někdy delší, někdy krátší.
Ráda jezdím na kole. Obzvlášť když je vítr. Na mně to cítí tak dobře! A jsou dvě hory: Na cestě DO práce, první je stoupající kdežto druhá je sestupující. Naopak když se vratím domů.
Je to sranda, když sestupuju z hor. Jezdím tak rychle. Jediná věc, kterou nemám ráda o horách, je fakt, že když jezdím do kopce hory, věnuje se MNOHO energie z mě. Jako jsem velmi unavená a tkz. věci.
Tak někdy nejezdím kolem na cestě do kopce. Namísto jezdění, jdu pěšky (s kolem vedke mě) protože nemám energii. Vrátí se to mi když sestupuju do kopce ačkoli.
Aug. 27, 2020
Karneval der Kulturen, part 2
Der Karneval dauert 4 Tage und ist kostenlos. Er bietet die verschiedene Gruppen die Gelegenheit, ihre Kreativität, ihre Musik und ihre Tanzen zu demonstrieren. Die Szene zieht Unternehmen an, die liberalen Ideen wie Toleranz and Ökologie unterstützen. Nachhaltige Lebensmittel und Berlin Food Trucks sind dabei. Der Hochpunkt des Karnevals ist der grosse Strassenumzug mit 4000 Karnevalsakteur.
Die Teilnehmer sind immer begeistert und viel Spass wird gemacht.
Aug. 27, 2020
Opportunity cost (機会費用）
昨日日本人の友達にopportunity cost (機会費用）の概念を教えました。機会費用とは、どんなことをしても時間や金のコストがあるということです。具体的に言えば、できなかったことはそのコストとなります。たとえば、一時間日本語を勉強したらその一時間で運動できない。新しい車を買ったら使った金を投資できなくなり、コストは得られるであろう利益や利子です。
この概念は便利とはいえ全てではないと思います。使ってしまった金や時間のコストをこのように計算したら幸せがきっと逃げるでしょう。それに、みんながいつもこのように考えたら訂正してくれる人はいなくなるような気がします（笑）。なぜなら訂正することで僅かとはいえ時間のコストがありますから。もしこの投稿を訂正するopportunity costは大きくなければ訂正していただけませんでしょうか。😝
Aug. 26, 2020
The death penalty
I think the death penalty is not the best way, but it is still necessary.
From time to time, death penalty in japan has been questioned. Even though it has been under fire from the international right groups, the Japanese government have not abolished it and Japanese people are still permissive towards it. A poll conducted in 2014 shows that almost 80 per cent of the people think "the death penalty is inevitable." When they asked a reason, they replied, "if it were not for the death penalty, the victims and their family members cannot be at peace."
I believe there is another way, but I also think that that is what it is. Though resentment of victims cannot disappear, the punishment will be a kind of relief to them.