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Dec. 15, 2020
Journal 15/12/20
When I was going to go home from work, my headmaster called me and told me that there would be a meeting related to the communist youth league being held in the meeting room on the first floor of the district committee tomorrow morning and the meeting would start at 9 am. There are no communist youth league members in our department because the employees here are all beyond their twenty-eight, so I think the contents of the meeting would have nothing to do with our job. But as a component of the district government, our department should send people to attend the meeting on time, carefully record and truthfully convey the spirits of the meeting.
Dec. 15, 2020
Dec. 15, 2020
War conflicts
Who can prevent conflicts? People who cause conflict, because they first need to understand why conflicts are unnecessary in the world. If they do not change themselves, the world situation will never change. And no one can not change their way of thinking until they realize that they should be tolerant of everyone of a different color skin, religion or origins. Conflicts will disappear if conflicting people stop appropriating for lands or fighting for lands with raw materials. Conflicts will disappear too if the whole world will be tolerant and honest each other.
We can also teach people by showing them, for example, pictures of various looks of each nationality, in order that accustom them that everyone is different. Eventually we are people and nothing that is human is to us strange (I don’t know if sentence is correct, original version: ‘Humani sum, humani nihil a me alienum puto’). We can also make conflicting individuals aware of the types of religion that do not hurt anyone, that all religions are in some way similar to each other.
Are there too many repetitions? Can it be replaced with something?
Dec. 15, 2020
Journal 25/22/20
I couldn’t log into a WeChat account this afternoon. It required me to use a phone I last time logged into the account to scan the QC that the WeChat provided. I used two phones that I used to use to try, but they all failed. Another option was to let a WeChat friend send me the number WeChat provided, but that account didn’t have any friends. I looked at a solution on the internet and it told me that I could use my phone number to complain about login. I followed the steps to do it and finally I logged in. I have a lot of precious pictures in the moments of that account. I don’t want to lose them.
Dec. 15, 2020
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Dec. 15, 2020
English Conversation
Today, I did an online English conversation for the first time. Speaking is quite different from writing, and I think speaking is the most difficult among the four skills (Reading, Listening, Speaking, and Writing). In Japanese education, we learn reading mainly and listening and writing a bit. I think it is impossible that all students practice speaking in English because there are few opportunities to use English in Japan. Anyway, I'll try to keep improving my English.
Dec. 15, 2020
我学习汉语的三个原因
1. 我学习汉语的第一个原因是：我享受听中文歌。（可以说：”我喜欢听懂中文歌“ 吗？- I like to listen and understand Chinese music?）
我也是很多中国歌手的歌迷，比如林俊杰，周兴哲，周伦杰等等，而且我天天听他们的歌曲。
2. 我学习汉语的第二原因是：我还想提高我的汉语水平，所以我能继续与我的中国朋友（和我在中国认识的会说汉语国际的朋友）保持联系。我们都用中文沟通。我也想认识更多的学习汉语的新朋友。
（哪个是对的词汇- “所以我能继续..." 还是 ”所以我可以继续..." ?)
3. 我学习汉语的第三原因是： 我是一个美国华裔。为了更了解我和我家庭背景和文化，我几年前开始学习汉语。原来我的父母不高兴我在大学选中文的专业，但随着时间过去，他们慢慢地接受我的选择。
（“更” 在 “为了更了解..." 听起来奇怪吗？）
（第2和3的句子，必须加上 ”个“ 在 ”我学习汉语的第二/三（个）原因“ 吗？）
谢谢！
Dec. 15, 2020
Can you make it more colloquial or improve it？ plz
How do you like your college life ?
1. I had a great time in college, because I had a lot of fun, made lots of friends, and finished my homework follow my plan. The most important thing I achieved was figuring out who I really am and what really makes me happy. With no parents or other authority figures around to dictate rules, I learned to make choices just for me. Those choices defined a direction for my life that was based on what I wanted, not what I was told to want. I learned how to create my own happiness.
2. My opinion: As we known, we had the same goal and go towards it during our senior high school. But there were too many subjects we have to learn and we often forced ourselves to finish the daily tasks without passion. When I was a freshman in college, I suddenly dawn on the mean of “life is full of challenges”. I used to think time is always no enough, but now time is no a luxuries anymore. I have fewer classes than I used to and have so much leisure time to enjoy. I can do everything I want, so it caused the beginning of bad habit. I addition in wasted my time on playing computer games and playing mobile phone. I even didn’t want to leave my dormitory. But you know, people is change with time go by. Time is not about how much you have, but how you use it. I started to review and preview my study in the classic and go to the library to read books in English as possible. I gained patience on doing everything, including study and social contact. In a word, college life is a new born of my characteristic and the consist progress of improving myself.
Dec. 15, 2020
¿Cuáles son las canciones que nunca jamás vas a olvidar?
Hace unos años, un video de una ballerina cubana con 94 años que sufría de alzhéimer se hizo viral cuando recordó los movimientos del Lago de Cisnes. Esta historia es un buen ejemplo de que tan interconectadas son la música y la memoria. Segun la ciencia, cada vez que escuchamos una melodía se lanza un llamativo proceso en nuestro cerebro, activando varias zonas, incluso en nuestra memoria. ¿Para ti, cuáles son las canciones que nunca jamás vas a olvidar? ¿Serían vinculadas con un evento especial en tu vida? ¿Quizás las habías repetidas por meses sin fin?
Dec. 15, 2020
Dec. 15, 2020
2020.12.15 Tuesday
Do the advantages of computer games outweigh the disadvantages? Why?
As for me,I think that the disadvantage of computer games outweigh the advantage.
It' sure playing computer games can elevate people's reaction ability. But for those people who just lack of self-control,they may become so addictd to games that they forget their assignments and even abandon their goals which was set last week!
In addition,I found some people talked billingsgate when they played the computer game because they will lose their game soon. It seems that the games will impacted people's mood,which let you become more impulsive and irritable as well.
Dec. 15, 2020
Предложения для моих карточек - 12/14
Когда я хотела найти работу, я искала вакансии на некоторых сайтах.
Я думаю, что люди моего поколения редко ходят в кадровое агенство, потому что нам легче искать работу по интернету.
Если вам трудно написать резюме, этот сайт может вам помогать в поиске работы.
Она разместила фотографию в интернете после вечеринки.
Я очень в тебе разочаровалась.
Если вы хотите, чтобы опубликовали вашу статью, нельзя ждать у моря погоды. Надо послать предложение редактору журнала!
Есть в США в общей сложности 16,5 миллионов случаев коронавируса на сегодняшний день.
Я просто не могу сидеть сложа руки когда ты делаешь столько ошибок.
Я жду с нетерпением следующую книгу этого писателя. Я очень восхищаюсь его остроумием.
Многие студенты моего университета работают на почасовой основе во время учебного года.
Терпеть не могу групповые проекты. Другие члены моей группы просто бездельничают и именно я должна сделать всю работу. И ещё, признают свои заслуги того, что не сделали!
Если я хорошо работаю и получаю хорошие отзывы, то повысят мою зарплату через полгода.
Я вырабатываю планы для всех моих учеников, чтобы контролировать их прогресс в изучения английского.
Я наконец доработала статью и её послала редактору журнала.
Я хочу заработать на служебную собаку. Стоит дорого обучить такую собаку но она безусловно мне очень поможет.
Dec. 15, 2020
Un protector bucal
Rechino los dientes al dormir y la otra noche soñé que había roto uno de ellos. Estaba muy preocupada y mi novio me compró un protector bucal para dormir. El protector está hecho de plástico que se pone en agua caliente para suavizarlo antes de moldearlo a los dientes. Queda bien por ahora pero me pregunto si tendré dificultad para dormir con plástico en la boca.
Me suele doler la mandíbula además de este problema con el rechinar de los dientes así que tengo que hacer una cita con mi dentista para arreglarlo.
Dec. 15, 2020
Dec. 14, 2020 The decoretions for Christmas
I like all the decoretions for festivals, but personally, I don't like to have many things that only use for few days a year. I need to spend a lots of maney to buy them, a lots of time to collect them, also a lots of space to store them. So, I always prefer to choose some simple things for decoreting.
This year I find a solar laser light which is very convenience and interesting. The only thing that I need to do is to put it into the snow of my front yard. It will shine the gree and red moving light pattern on the wall. It looks plenty and beautiful. It uses the solar power, so I don't need to worry about to setting up the cable or something. It's super easy. Only one thing was over my mind that was too cold this few days. The battery couldn't work outside. I hope the temperature can go up next week.
Dec. 15, 2020
Работа и кризис
Из-за кризиса многие люди потеряли работу и стали безработными. Многим кажется, что это ужасная ситуация, но тут есть и положительная сторона. Если вы получаете удовольствие от работы и предпочитаете держаться за своё место, то понятно, почему вы боитесь безработицы. Но если наоборот, то зачем продолжать ходить каждый день на работу как на каторгу? У вас возможность искать работу по новой специальности или исполнть детскую мечту. Подумайте, может быть кризис – это шанс полностью изменить свою жизнь к лучшему. Лучше поздно, чем никогда!
Dec. 15, 2020
Dec. 15, 2020
Quand j'étais petite
Quand j'étais petit, je vivais à St. Paul. Chaque jour, je prenais le bus à l'école. Quand j'arrivais, je disais "bonjour" à mes amis. Je commençais à 9h et je finissais à 3h. J'aimais jouer au foot et je voulais être jouer professionnel quand je grandissais. Chaque été, je voyageais à Chicago avec ma famille et je mangeais de la glace là-bas.
Dec. 15, 2020
Digital Clock
I have a digital clock next to my bed.
It has a function when the room gets dark the back light will turns on.
Therefore even the room is dark I can still see the time.
The back light isn’t strong but still make the room become little brighter.
I was annoyed by that.
After almost three months when I change the battery, I notice there is a switch at top side can turn off that function. (Stupid!)
I was happy the back light is off and the room is dark.
Another three months I change the battery again.
But this time I forgot not to turn off the back light.
Surprisingly, now I am happy the back light is on.
Dec. 15, 2020
Je me suis trompé hier en LangCorrect
Je me suis trompé hier ici. À la place de publier un texte en français sur la section française, j'ai publie un texte en français sur la section anglaise. J'ai pu commettre cet erreur parce que j'ai ajouté ces deux langues dans mon profil. À vrai dire, je n'en suis pas sûr pourquoi... Je n'ai plus besoin de pratiquer l'anglais écrit, même si je pourrais améliorer toujours mon prononciation. Donc, je ne vais rien publier en anglais, seulement en français. Comme je me suis trompé hier, personne n'a corrigé mon journal. Quelqu'un m'a fait remarquer mon erreur, alors j'ai publié le même journal encore et cette fois-ci il a été corrigé.
Dec. 15, 2020
Journal 25/12/20
Because my job has been adjusted, some of my former colleagues are theoretically not my colleagues anymore. So I never dare to want them to do something for me. This summer when I attended the building civilization city activity, some former colleagues worked with me at the same place again. One day I sent a sample form to our WeChat group for some reason, then the former colleague sent me a private message reminding me if I was making a mistake. Yesterday, a former colleague brought my certificate to me from a community that was far away from my office. I didn't dare to expect these things to happen since l left that department. It is because I am not a confident man. Furthermore, they don't have any obligation to do this in any circumstances. They don't have any mistakes even if they are not doing so. I am very touched when they do that. Although we are not colleagues now, I still hope they work hard, take care, have a happy family and a bright future. Again, thank them for their kindness and enthusiasm.
Dec. 14, 2020
내가 최근에 재미있게 읽고 있는 ‘나를 보내지 마’라는 소설에 대한 글
며칠 전에 가즈오 이시구로 작가님의 ‘나를 보내지 마’라는 소설을 읽기 시작했다. ‘킨들’이라는 전자책 리더로 영어 원서를 읽고 있다. 사실 내가 읽어 보고 싶었던 것은 한글판이었는데 나는 한국어 실력이 그다지 좋지 않기 때문에 한국판을 읽어 보면 내용을 이해하기 위해 노력하느라 스트레스를 받을까 봐 한동안 한글판을 찾아 보기를 주저했다. 마침내 오늘 구글 북스에서 ‘나를 보내지 마’의 한글 체험판을 찾게 되었고 무료로 첫 70페이지를 볼 수 있다. 읽으면서 모르는 단어나 표현이 많이 나오기 마련인데도 불구하고 부담없이 이 소설을 읽으며 즐겁게 시간을 보내 보도록 하겠다. 아무리 힘들어도 읽다가 중간에 포기하지 않으려고 한다. 내 한국어 실력을 향상시키기 위한 거니까.
Dec. 14, 2020
Conversación: Las fiestas
Un hombre camina hacía su amiga, la que está de pie al lado de una tienda.
A1: ¿Qué pasa?
A2: Nada. Acabo de comprar unos regalos de Janucá.
A1: Ah! ¿Qué compraste?
A2: Tienes que esperar. Verás bastante pronto. ¿Y tú, qué pasa?
A1: Voy a la fiesta de mi abuela. ¿Quieres venir? Solo es en la calle próxima.
A2: ¡Cómo no! Aunque no tengo nada para darles a ellos.
A1: Es genial, habrá mucha gente ahí. Aunque deberíamos ir tan pronto como podamos.
A2: ¿Por qué? ¿Es un acontecimiento especial?
A1: ¡Sí! Hoy es el cumpleaños de mi abuelo. Sin embargo, no sabe que hay una fiesta, así que todo el mundo quiere que se sorprenda cuando llegue.
A2: ¡Genial! Pero..., ¿por qué tienes estos adornos?
A1: Mi abuelita se olvidaba sus adornos a mi casa, entonces tengo que devolverlos. ¡Sin a ellos, no pueden decorar el árbol de Navidad!
A2: ¿Estás emocionando para Navidad?
A1: ¡Por supuesto! No hay una época que me gusta más que esta!
Dos oraciones con "llevar + participio".
1. Llevo terminados los adornos y ahora voy a hacer las luces.
2. ¡El camarero llegó con la sopa, la que llevaba llenada de hielo!
Dec. 14, 2020
Tere kallid sõbrad!
Tere kallid sõbrad!
Praegu on eriulukorra aeg, istun kodus ja vaatan saadet Anu Saagimiga. Anu pani rohelise kampsuni selga ja mustad püksid jalga. Ta ustub laua ees ja räägib aastalõpust tema sõbraga.
Aasta jooksul vaatasin nii palju saateid Anuga.
Praegu kell 12.00. Lähen varsti magada. Homme mul on vaja õppida eesti ja inglise keelt.
Head soovides.
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