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nueli

Dec. 17, 2020

이사하지 못하다

저는 이사를 못해요 :(
집의 임자의 이들이 마음을 바꿨어요. 왜를 몰라요.
행복했지만 지금 슬퍼요. 그럴 때 프랑스어로 "merde !" 말 할 수 있어요.
이사를 정말 하고 싶어요! 피곤해요.

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nihongolearner19

Dec. 17, 2020

Entrada 7

Estoy leyendo el libro “La Resistencia” de la serie “Memorias de Idhún”. Hoy leí el capítulo uno. Me gusta la historia por ahora. Tengo curiosidad por los orígenes de Jack, el protagonista, y su conexión al mundo de Idhún. No tengo mucha experiencia con novelas en español (es el tercero) pero me gusta la forma de escribir de Laura Gallego García. Espero terminarlo en más o menos tres semanas porque es un libro de la biblioteca.

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MikaSwedish

Dec. 17, 2020

Digital minimalism

Jag brukade läsa massor böcker varje år men steg för steg sluttade jag göra det. Istället spenderar jag mer tid på internet, Netflix, Reddit, Instagram, etc. Jag har slutat tänka på allting och ingenting och börjat med vara passiv i livet. Det är svårt nu att fokusera på något; min koncentrationsförmåga är annorlunda och blir värre varje år.

Jag har bestämt mig för att försöka leva en månad fri av digital innehåll. Jag läser en bok nu som kallas Digital Minimalism av Cal Newport för att förbereda mig före den utmaningen. Jag ska göra det i Januari. Jag ska försöka att inte använda alls för hela månaden dessa appar: Facebook, Instagram, Netflix, Reddit och alla liknande. Det kommer att vara några undantag för Netflix och Instagram.

Jag har bestämt mig att använda Netflix och youtube bara för att lära mig svenska. Filmerna och videorna behöver vara på svenska eller händer om det svenska språket.

Jag ska bara använda Instagram för att hålla kontakten med andra vegan konstnärer. Jag kommer att använda Instagram bara ett par gånger om veckan, kanske bara på samma dagar varje vecka.

Efter att månaden är klar ska jag se vilka appar jag verkligen saknade och vilka kan jag raderar från min telefon. Om en app inte ger mig något värde så ska jag sluta att använda den.

Jag vill göra det här eftersom jag tillbringar för mycket tid på Netflix och Reddit. Jag vill inte spendera mitt liv över en skärm och det är dags att göra något.

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Flan_girl

Dec. 17, 2020

Study plan

Creating a study plan is harder than I'd thought. I'm going to try different ideas to see if they work. I was thinking about dedicating a day of the week to write something specific, though I'm still figuring it out.

My best friend has a higher English level than mine and my sister is a Spanish-English translator, so I could ask them both for study material.

My main focus is on writing, as it's the skill I want to improve the most. However, I still want to practice speaking, reading and other skills. I also want to broaden my vocabulary.

Will it help with the correction if I write my journals in my native language? I've seen that some of the people who correct my journals study Spanish, but some others don't. I just want to know if it's worth it to take the time to do it.

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xaksli_lima

Dec. 17, 2020

Did life on Earth come from space? Part four. My thoughts, p

After watching this amazing video "Did life on Earth come from space?" on the YouTube channel "History on the Earth", I was thinking a lot about the origin of life and evolution.
Evolution is a fascinating process when the simplest forms of life have been evolving into the higher forms as well as the intelligent life. The last one gave a diversity of humans, nations, races, languages, cultures, religions and so on. It's really interesting. I am excited thinking about it.
If this fact can be possible that life to Earth came from space, it means that life had begun on another planet.
Nowadays, we are discovering thousands of new exoplanets in orbit. We may yet find advanced civilizations.
Until life is found on another planet, we will never truly know whether we are children of the earth or the universe.

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alisson

Dec. 17, 2020

Stein überspringen

Ich habe vor kurzem vom ein beeindruckender Rekord gehört, ein man namens Kurt Steiner hat 88 mal einen Stein übersprungen. Ich wünschte dass ich das mehr oft machen könnte weil es wirklich befriedigend ist. Es gibt auch eine Wissenschaft dazu, man muss den Stein drehend werfen um es zu stabilieseren und auch in einem Winkel, um die Welle, die es es vorwärts schieben erzeugen.

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Anerneq

Dec. 17, 2020

Воспоминания с детства

Я помню, что когда я был ребёнком, я сказал маме, что по-моему был где-нибудь какой-то портал к миру, в котором все люди жили счастливо и не было терпения. Она ответила, что если это было правдой, все люди бы уже тюда поехали.

Я помню, что мои родители брали мне с моём братом и сестрой в очень малый городок названный "Небида". Около городка есть у берегу моря малая гора, на которой есть руины шахты. Я не знаю технических слов, но есть руины строения, в котором шахтёри взяли минералы с шахты. Я очень любил смотреть на это строение с высоты горы с морем за ним.

Я помню, что очень любил прочитать книги и комикси Диснея. В школе моя учительница сказала родителям, что вместо того, чтобы забавить с другими детьми, я часто читал книгу сам на перемене. К сожалению теперь мне трудно прочитать так как делал в детстве.

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this

Dec. 17, 2020

토픽 64회 #54: 청소년기

청소년기는 굉장히 중요한다. 나이를 먹을 수록 아동에서 어른으로 넘어가는 시기에 똑바르게 변화해야 한다. 호르몬을 바뀌며 집중력이 떨어지는데 사회를 성공하게 가입하자 꼼꼼하게 해야 한다. 아동은 책임감 없이 놀 수 있는데 성인으로 이동하도록 지혜롭게 가르쳐야 한다.

이 시기에 주로 다양한 특징들을 보인다. 외모에는 키가 크지며 얼굴의 모습도 변화한다. 마음속에서는 분노, 우울증, 대답감 다 표현하게 됨으로서 안정을 흔히 찾게 된다. 이상태에서 스타일 또 태도에 변화 볼 수 있게 된다.

청소년의 올바른 성장을 돕자 노력하게 해야 한다. 첫번째, 성인들은 청소년한테 화나게 하지 않다면 위기를 피해할 수 있다. 청소년시에 혼란과 방황을 너무 겪음으로서 부정적인 감정을 능어나면 스트레스를 너무 많이 받아서 삶을 망치질 수 있다. 몸이나 마음이 변화하고 있으면 가족들이 무조건으로 사랑을 보여해야 한다. 또한, 청소년이 심하던 실수도 하면 긍정적으로 안전하게 반응해야 한다. 분노나게 반응하면 청소년이 죽을 때까지 잊지 않겠다. 반면, 너무 자유롭게 키우면 청소년이 함부로 하는 어른으로 바뀜으로 인해 의심적으로도 해야한다. 무엇보다, 청소년에 맞춰야 하고 행동이나 말하기 전에 생각해야 한다.

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alexwong2164

Dec. 17, 2020

Looking back 2020

Last year was simple to talk about.

No good news at all.

When you think that was worst.

This year is much worst then last year.

Still some good “things” happen to me.

(March) Find a really good job that I can’t complain.

Hope this job can help me to complete other dreams.

(January) Manage to make a new Japanese friend.

Hopefully someday will meet each other.

(November) Manage to loss few pounds of my fat body.

Hopefully someday can transfer to a “muscle man body”.

(November) A lucky bicycle accident. Why is lucky?

Because I can end up broken the bone instead just damaged the muscle.

What about your 2020?

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this

Dec. 17, 2020

토픽 64회 #53: 온라인 쇼핑 시장의 변화

2014년과 2018년의 사이에 온라인 쇼핑 시장이 변화하였다. 2014년에는 온라인 쇼핑 시장의 전체 매출액이 46조원이였다. 사용기기에는 소비자들이 14조원을 스마트폰으로 구매했으며 32조원을 컴퓨터로 구매하였다. 2018년에는 온라인 쇼핑 시장의 전체 매출액이 96조원이였다. 소비자들이 53조원을 스마트폰으로 구매했는데 39조원을 컴퓨터로 구매하였다. 매출액이 2배로 증가난 원인은 온라인으로 다양한 상품을 구매가 가능성 때문이다. 컴퓨터 대신에 스마트폰을 사용하는 이유는 쇼핑 접근성이 때문이다.

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xaksli_lima

Dec. 17, 2020

Raamatupidaja Marike räägib oma tööst.

Raamatupidaja Marike räägib oma tööst.
Ma töötan raamatupidajana eesti-soome firmas juba kaks aastat. Meil on palju toredaid inimesi. Tihti räägin inimestega ja suhtlen klientidega telefoni teel.
Minu tööaeg on paindlik sellepärast mõnikord võin töötada kodust.
Kaks korda kvartalis, mul on vaja aruandeid teha minu ülemuse jaoks. Ma korraldan ka kõik nõupidamisi raamatupidamise osakonnas. Käin kaks korda nädalas koosolekutel minu bossiga.
Mul on ka seitse alluvat. Meie meeskond on väga sõbralik ja professionaalne. Me töötame kiiresti ja kvaliteetselt.
Kaks korda nädalas õpin inglise ja soome keelt sest meie firmal on palju kliente välismaalt. Meil on ka komandeeringud välismaale viis või kuus korda aastas sellepärast sageli meil on vaja rääkida võõrkeelt välispartneritega.
Meil on palka üle keskmise Eestis, aga lisaks saame protsenti.
Ma armastan minu tööd.

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eeprom

Dec. 17, 2020

Beschwerdebrief

Sehr geehrte Kartenservice,
nach mehreren erfolglosen Versuchen, mich über die IDNow-Website zu identifizieren (die IDnow-Mitarbeiter schienen einfach aufzulegen, sobald sie sahen, dass ich keinen deutschen Reisepass hatte) habe ich mich (offenbar) am Dienstag über den POSTIDENT-Service der Deutsche Post identifiziert. Ich habe noch ein paar Probleme:
1. Es ist meine Vermutung, dass meine Identifikation auch bei der Deutschen Post nicht ausgefüllt werden konnte und dass der Mitarbeiter mir einfach gesagt hat, dass die Legitimation durch war, obwohl das nicht wirklich stimmte. Ist das richtig oder wurde meine Identifikation erfolgreich ausgeführt?

2. Meine Frau hat eine Partnerkarte erhalten, sie ist auch keine Deutsche und ich denke, sie wird die gleichen Probleme wie ich haben, sich zu identifizieren (egal mit IDnow oder über den POSTIDENT). Ist es notwendig, dass sie dies tut, wenn das Kartenlimit freigegeben wird, wenn ich meine Identifizierung vornehmen kann?

Meine Erfahrungen sind bisher sehr schlecht und ich habe überlegt, die Karte ganz zu kündigen. Ich hoffe, dass diese Probleme gelöst werden können.

Mit freundlichen Grüßen
rom

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ricky

Dec. 17, 2020

Whether all countries should reduce fossil fuels usage

People have different views about whether all countries should reduce their consumption of fossil fuels. In this essay, I am going explain why I strongly believe that every country should reduce fossil fuel usage.

One of my main arguments is that reducing the consumption of fossil fuels such as gas and oil makes a contribution to environmental conservation. In the modern world, one of the main reasons for environmental contamination is combustion of fossil fuels, and the exhausts of fossil fuels cause air pollution. For example, oil-powered vehicles need a large quantity of oil to drive engines. In this process, fume emissions from cars which contain harmful chemicals will have negative effects on air.

Another main argument is that reducing fossil fuel consumption, the main cause of global warming, also helps to ease the climate change crisis. Nowadays, the climate change crisis has become the main concern of the international community since the increasing temperatures worldwide damages our ecosystem, which will in turn destroy human beings. For the reason that the exhaust from fossil fuels will trap heat from the sun, which causes the greenhouse effect to destroy the ecosystem. For instance, rising temperature will cause melting of polar ice caps and sea levels will rise, therefore depriving the habitats of some animals like penguins and polar bears. As a result, the stability of the whole food chain will be destroyed.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that the international community should take some measures to decline the usage of all countries, because we need to preserve the environment and tackle the climate change crisis.

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ines

Dec. 17, 2020

病気

A: 田中さん、病気です。
B: そうですか。どうしましましたか。
A: お腹が痛いです。
B: 何を食べましたか。
A: チーズを食べましたかも知れない。牛乳を飲むとお腹が痛いです。
B: 今はどうしますか。
A: 帰りたいです。
B: お大事に。またね。

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ankitrn

Dec. 17, 2020

Mein staubiges Haus

Gestern hatte ich realiziert, dass mein Haus sehr staubig ist. Nach Ich drei Wochen von meiner Reise Hause zurückgekommen bin, merkte ich, dass alle Zimmer meines Hauses staubig geworden sind. Es gibt einen alten Staubsauger in dem Keller, aber seine Tüte ist Weg und er funktioniert auch nicht sehr gut. Ich hatte sofort entschieden, dass ich eine neue Staubsauger kaufen muss. Dann öffente ich die Amazon website und nach ein paar Minuten, hatte ich einen Eco-sicher, tütelosen Staubsauger gefunden. Es war auch billig und ich freute mich sehr an den Einkauf!

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ponta

Dec. 17, 2020

Heavy Snow

In my town, it has been snowing for these three days. It's rare that snow piles up like this, so people who live in the city are not used to this situation. The traffic became jammed and some railways stopped. Seeing snow is funny but walking through snow is hard; it's slippy and cold. Therefore, I really appreciate online classes.

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Ritchel

Dec. 17, 2020

Conditional and future perfect tense

1. If you find my necklace right away, I'll give you money.
2. By the time I arrive home, I'm sure she'll have found my necklace.

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curiosity345

Dec. 17, 2020

我学习中文的5个目标

这是第13天的挑战（我两三个post前，已经把英文的30填的挑战单子翻译成中文）。

所以我在这里写着我关于中文的5个目标：
1. 首先我第一个目标是提高我的中文写法。我的弱点是写法，所以我在LangCorrect连我的写法。我希望12月结束的时候，我能把基础的中文语法掌握好（太感谢你们帮我修改我的错误！）

2. 我第二个目标是提高我的阅读。我寒假时打算读《小王子》。如果每天不能看完一章，我至少需要看完一页吧。如果太累的话，每天一行也行。

3. 我第三个目标是改成我说错的声调。我说中文的时候，有些词汇我认识，但我不知道他们的声调是什么，所以我想把这个坏习惯戒掉了。

4. 每个星期在 Anki APP 复习词汇两次。

5. 每次听中文歌的时候，写下5个新的词汇，然后学习它们，使用它们组成句子。

我觉得我可以完成这些目标。你们觉得我写着目标是不实现的吗？

完成这些任务对你们来说太吃力了吗？（吃力 = strenuous/too much to handle, 所以最后的问题的英文意思是： to complete these tasks, do you think it's too much to handle? or I'm taking on too much on my plate? Biting off more than I can chew? 中文有没有这些说法？)

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heavensblade13

Dec. 17, 2020

でかい漢字

先週「繭」の漢字を勉強した。「繭」の中に、「糸」と「虫」があるから、繭の意味は簡単だ。でも「繭」は大きいから、書くのは面倒くさい。幅は特にきつい。私にとって、普通に漢字の筆順を覚えるのや訓読みと音読みを暗記するのは難しい。でかい漢字の一番問題は練習の四角に収まること。

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llamameyi

Dec. 17, 2020

¿Qué está pasando en la foto? (4)

La foto: https://www.nytimes.com/2020/12/13/learning/whats-going-on-in-this-picture-dec-14-2020.html

Tengo que decir que esta foto captura perfectamente la evolución de ciertas sociedades. Es un gran hito que unas personas tienen el tiempo libre, suficiente alimento, y bastantes recursos para disfrazarse como varios arboles navideños, sin mencionar la tecnología para encontrar a otras personas para hacer lo mismo. Aplauso humanos, aplauso.

Las primeras cosas que vi fueron los disfraces de la más alta calidad, me parecen como el tipo de traje que los francotiradores llevan en un país nórdico, pero para civiles. Aquí es mi suposición, supongo que es un grupo de personas que hacen una tradición navideña, tal vez cantando canciones por su comunidad. Dado que una persona tiene un bastón y todas me parecen preparadas para el frío, creo que la actividad tiene que ver con estar afuera por un buen rato. Adivinaría que están en un país nórdico o tal vez Canadá.

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historian

Dec. 17, 2020

Harter Lockdown

Ich habe heute in einer Zeitung gelesen, dass die deutsche Regierung einen harten Lockdown bestätigt wurde. Ich wohne in Melbourne, wo einer der schwierigsten Lockdown in der Welt war. Wir konnten nicht mehr als 5 Kilometer gehen, wir hatten eine Ausgangssperre von 20 Uhr bis 5 Uhr, wir konnten nur einmal pro Tag allein im Supermarkt oder Apotheke gehen und alle andere Geschäfte waren geschlossen. Mangels Friseurs scheint es wie viele Menschen direkt in den 70ern oder 80ern zurückversetzt haben. Es war schlimm für meine psychische Gesundheit und die psychische Gesundheit des anderen.

Aber, es funktioniert. Jetzt können wir eines „Covid-Safe“ Leben genießen. Dieses Wochenende, werde ich eine Reise nach Yarra Valley machen, um zu entspannen und Wein und leckere Speisen konsumieren. Ich hoffe, dass der Lockdown in Deutschland funktioniert so gut wie Melbourne und alle bald ihre Familie sehen kann.

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emilyyuyi

Dec. 17, 2020

economic development and environmental protection

Economic development and environmental protection have become common strategies of national policies. And those two have always aroused the greatest concern. What impress us most is the relationship between them.
In addition, current situation of them has been brought into focus. Nowadays, we should take action to deal with them.
At past, the fast economic development due to the sacrifice of environment, which bring us into the dilemma situation. However, with people have better normal life, they are eager to have a more comfort living environment that results in government pay more attention to environment protection, which force the public concerning the economic growth.
When take about the dilemma, the government publish the new policy, which named "green economy". It means that we should find out balance between the economic development and environmental protection. In the national view, we are no longer need "over-fast" economic development with sacrifice the environment. What we need now is a sustainable and healthy economy, which can be achieved by protecting the environment. Furthermore, we should follow those policies from ourselves. Please cherish our nature, it will bring us longer-flourish.

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emilyyuyi

Dec. 17, 2020

Happinesss

Happiness has been brought into focus. Nowadays, some people hold an opinion of improving material life will increase people's feeling about happiness. In addition, when we satisfied with our material living, the incremental salary will not continually be contributed to our happiness. Many reasons contribute to happiness.
Among the various reasons, people's satisfaction level plays an important role. That is to say, in the different stage of life, we will have various expectations about life quality. What is more, when we become more maturity, we will look for mental happiness rather than material happiness. As far as I am concerned, mental happiness cannot obtain by using money. However, you can get it by recalling the touching moment with your friends、your family, even though reading interesting books. The feeling you got named "happiness". As we know, mental happiness will last longer than material happiness. In a world, we should cherish our past experience or create present experience to enrich our mental world.

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edwardsbjeremy

Dec. 17, 2020

加湿器

今天晚上，当我和语言交流伙伴聊天的时候，她给我看一张有客厅的照片，然后她指不同的东西，向我问「这是什么」。她指一台humidifier的时候，我当时感觉我绝对不知道，可是我决定了合理地想出电器的名字，我最初想「哼，一台humidifier把水加到空气，提高湿度，所以可能是加湿器」我这么说，不料我说得对啊！真的是台加湿器啊！天哪

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fabledlamb

Dec. 17, 2020

La fiesta virtual de Navidad

Hoy había una fiesta virtual de Navidad con todos mis compañeros de trabajo. El viernes por la noche, mi jefa dejó una bolsa llena de sorpresas en el escritorio de cada empleado. Como mis compañeros de trabajo y yo nos alternamos trabajar desde casa y desde la oficina, nuestra jefa pidió que recogiéramos las bolsas antes del miércoles.

Esperé hasta el día de la fiesta para mirar el contenido de la bolsa. Había muchas dulces, una taza cerámica, un polo de chocolate y malvaviscos que se pone en leche caliente para hacer chocolate caliente y una cinta para el pelo con cuernos.

A las 13:30, nos reunimos por videollamada. El comité de participación de los empleados había preparado dos juegos. En el primero, tuvimos que responder “sí” o “no” a preguntas como “¿alguna vez has fingido que te gusta un regalo?” El segundo fue trivia y tenía muchas ganas de participar porque había ganado la competición de trivia de Halloween (pero esta vez no gané). Me alegra tener compañeros d trabajo tan simpáticos.

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