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pilgrim77

Dec. 20, 2020

Mein erster Post

Hallo, dies ist mein erster Post hier. Ich weiß nicht was ich mit dieser App machen möchte, aber ich werde vermutlich sie als Tagebuch verwenden. Heute bin ich müde, also werde ich wahrscheinlich noch viel schreiben.

Ich hatte heute einen kurzen Unterricht an der Uni und dann habe ich zurück nach Hause gekommen. Es ist sehr komisch, in diesen Corona Zeiten zu leben. Die Meisten meine Unterrichten sind online und ich glaube dass, das nicht gut ist.

Ich mochte mehr schreiben aber ich muss wieder studieren. Ich hoffe ich kann jeden Tag einen Post schreiben um mein Deutsch zu verbessern. Danke und ich warte auf Ihre Kommentare.

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ines

Dec. 20, 2020

今天

我跟我的男朋友一起去了看电影。然后，我们在一家中国饭店用筷子吃了饭。吃完的时候，我给我的中国朋友写了一张信。在信里我给我的中国朋友介绍我的男朋友。我现在正在做晚饭。

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ines

Dec. 20, 2020

の...に

山の向こうに町はありません。丘の上に町があります。駅のとなりにホテルがあります。駅の向かいに教会があります。寺もあります。どの寺のうちろに美術館があります。どの美術館の前に何がありますか。

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sota

Dec. 20, 2020

December 19

I was planning to stay at home for 10 days but now, I can go to the school from next Monday except 4 people who had close contact with the patient. Public health authorities told me you can go to the school even if you didn't take a PCR test. In my opinion, If I think about the incubation period for COVID-19, going to a school is not a good idea.

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acorngalaxy

Dec. 20, 2020

¿Deben los maestros estar armados con armas en EE.UU. ?

¿Deben los maestros estar armados con armas en EE.UU. ?

Al parecer que no, un rotundo “NO”, así dice la mayoría de personas.

Ya vemos que la situación de tiroteos en Estados Unidos es volátil. Es decir, un estudiante puede parecer normal, teniendo amigos a su lado siempre, esbozando una sonrisa grande, logrando buenas puntuaciones, pero al siguiente día, viene a su escuela, armado hasta los dientes con un chaleco repleto de cargadores y cuchillos, con una Glock a su lado y un fusil Bushmaster, matando a sus meros compañeros y maestros a diestra y siniestra.

Así que los republicanos les puso a los estadounidenses con una solución: ¿Por qué no armamos a los maestros para que puedan luchar contra algún invasor?

Aquí está mi respuesta al respecto de esta solución:

Sí, es posible que hagan esto. Solo tienen que aprobar el proyecto de ley y en una semana se verá a todos los maestros con una pistola a sus lados. En la superficie, parece que las escuelas tendrían seguridad reforzada, pero necesitamos pensar al fondo.

Puede ser que al contrario, un maestro tenga la intención de cometer un crimen. Y tendría un arma de gratis, gracias al gobierno estadounidense.

O puede ser que algunos maestros no tienen experiencia con el manejo de un arma, y les disparan accidentalmente a sus estudiantes, porque se olvidaron de prender el control de seguridad en sus pistolas. Si eso pasara, ¿Quién asumiría la responsabilidad? ¿El gobierno? ¿Los maestros? ¿Los padres por haber inscribir a sus niños a la tal escuela?

Hay que muchas consideraciones que se debe tomar en cuenta. Al fin y al cabo, no creo que esta sería la solución, al menos una solución adecuada. La educación estadounidense necesita una reforma. Los programas necesitan animar a los estudiantes a que hablen cuando necesiten ayuda, y no a quedarse callados y dejar que sus problemas se metan y se hundan en la cabeza hasta que la ira o la depresión nuble sus juicios.

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ionknow

Dec. 20, 2020

une comparaison

En 2005, la construction des appartements en Allemagne a été beaucoup moins qu’en des autres pays.

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alisson

Dec. 20, 2020

Was für einen Maus hast du?

Ich habe kurzlich an die alten Computermausen gedacht. Der erste Maus, den ich benutzt habe, war analog. Es hatte einen kleinen Kugel im inneren, die Bewegungen in x und y Koordinaten übersetzte. Dieses Design war eine Entdeckung vom Xerox in der 70er Jahren. Heute habe ich eine optische Maus, wie die meisten Leute glaube ich. Ich habe jedoch von ein neue Art von Maus gehört, und war ein bisschen neugierig. Dieser Maus von einem Unternehmen namens Odin ist projektiv wie ein Hologramm oder so. Obwohl ich das Design cool finde, ich glaube es sieht nicht ganz funktional oder praktisch aus.

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eeprom

Dec. 20, 2020

Heute war es genau wie gestern

Schreiben Sie die Sätze und ergänzen Sie „auch“, sodass es sich auf den ganzen Satz bezieht.
1. Ich bin gestern ohne Wecker aufgewacht: Ich bin heute auch ohne Wecke aufgewacht.
2. Claudia ist gestern mit meinem Hund spazieren gegangen: Claudia ist heute auch mit meinem Hund spazieren gegangen.
3. Ich habe gestern Musik gehört: Ich habe heute auch Musik gehört.
4. Wir sind gestern ins Kino gegangen: Wir sind heute auch ins Kino gegangen.
5. Wir mussten gestern wegen der vielen Leute lange Schlange stehen: Wir mussten heute wegen der vielen Leute auch lange Schlange stehen.
6. Der Film gestern hat uns nicht so gut gefallen: Der Film heute hat uns auch nicht so gut gefallen.

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ionknow

Dec. 20, 2020

Les maisons

Les maisons en bois ne sont pas prises au sérieux en France et ceux qui s’en font construire sont vus avec condescendance. Une étude du Comité national pour le développement du bois confirme cette observation: En 2005, la construction des maisons en bois était de 5% par rapport aux autres pays comme l’Allemagne où ce percentage est de 30%.

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ricky

Dec. 20, 2020

Story

I can remember those days very vividly even now. It was several years ago, my grandfather was diagnosed with lung cancer and he suffered excruciating pain most of the time. Apparently it was an incurable illness. And at that time, all of my family were in other cities so on one took care of my grandfather. In this case, he needed to go to the hospital himself. At that time, I went to my hometown because it was my summer holiday. So I was the only one who could visit my grandfather from time to time. Sometimes I went to the hospital to visited him. At that time he was so happy because you know when people suffer they always want their families to e there for them. But at that time, I felt so bored and always wanted to hang out with my friends, as I didn’t know how bad the situation was. I am so regret that I did not spend more time with him. But now I have grown up and realized that I need to cherish every moment with my family because we all lead a fast-paced life and do not have time to gather together. Whenever they need help, we need to extend our helping hand to them and this is also a way to strengthen family bond.

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hebereke

Dec. 20, 2020

Think

It is important to think about something. To do so, we need something or someone that keeps us thinking, because it is difficult to make our thoughts deeper in our own. For example, in many Japanese schools, teachers often tell children to think about some topic for a few minutes in class, but most children cannot bear to stick with a single topic for more than a minutes. The rest of the time, they are always thinking about something different. That means they are stuck to think. Then, they need to communicate with others.
A little bit different opinion leads us to step forward, because it makes us to think about the difference.

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hebereke

Dec. 20, 2020

Cashless Society

A society without cash has a lot of advantages and disadvantages. For example, digital money will not allow bad people to conceal illegal trades or black markets. That means it may decrease the number of crime dramatically. However, if cash cannot be used in daily lives, elderly people who cannot be used to using smart phones or other devices would have a problem.

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steventart

Dec. 20, 2020

Oh Christmas

I used to be thrilled to death about Christmas. Because Christmas, no matter what it was, would always come with a long holiday. Waiting for Santa Claus dropping presents through the chimney which didn't exist in my house, I would look through the window, praying for something I didn't really understand. Such blissful innocence didn't last long as I grew up, but I'm still happy now, as out of the church come lots of beautiful and lovely songs reverberating among people. They were famous back in the day but not so nowadays, perhaps it's because people are much more into the virtual world as opposed to the real one. Sadly I have been gradually losing my passion on Christmas. If It was possible, I would go back to the day I was still innocent, and tell the younger me, "what a wonderful pain in the arse."

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peachemia

Dec. 20, 2020

Mi familia en Navidad

Te cuento algo sobre mi familia en Navidad y nuestras tradiciones. Yo vivo con mi novio, pero en Navidad no estamos en casa, sino vamos a visitar a nuestras familias. La Nochebuena normalmente la pasamos con la familia de mi novio. Hay una cena de Navidad, a la cual vienen los padres de mi novio, sus abuelos y su tío con su esposa. Para cenar, los padres de mi novio preparan un fondue. Después de la cena, encendemos las velas del árbol de Navidad y abrimos los regalos.
Normalmente, el 25 de diciembre vamos a visitar a mi familia. Nos encontramos en un ristorante y comemos pescado allí. Vienen mis padres, mi tía y mi tío y mis abuelos. Después de la comida, damos un paseo por el pueblo porque hemos comido demasiado y nos sirve!
Este año, por Covid, todo es diferente. Hace algunos días, mi novio se puso enfermo con Covid. Yo no tuve un test pero creo que yo también estaba enferma. Tenemos que quedarnos en cuarentena durante Navidad. No podemos salir de casa y no podemos ver a nuestras familias. Vamos a hablar con ellos a través de Skype. Espero que mis abuelos entiendan cómo funciona. Dejamos los regalos fuera de la puerta y nuestra familia viene a tomarlos y a dejar sus regalos.

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Jack

Dec. 20, 2020

Journal 20/12/20

I looked at the picture you sent me carefully. I can see the blue sky and the distant woods, and the snow on the ground. The scene is definitely shot in the wild. But I have two questions that I want to know, if it is convenient for you to answer. First, is your office in the wild? What is the thing that is on the left of the picture? Is it a bridge? But it looks unlike a bridge. So I am very curious about that.

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basstobass

Dec. 20, 2020

Dimanche 20 décembre 2020

À Noël, nous mangions beaucoup de chocolat. J’étais souvent malade parce que j’ai trop mangé. Maintenant je suis une adulte, je ne veux plus manger autant. Maintenant, je préfère manger (ou boire) quelque chose d’autre comme de la viande, des patates rôties, du vin. L’année dernière je n’ai mangée que le déjeuner, j’étais rassasiée.

Hier je lisais ‘Les Seigneurs des Anneaux’ (cette fois en anglais car c’est ma première lecture) et dans ce livre il parle quelque fois de la nourriture délicieuse - surtout quand les Hobbits, Frodo, Sam, Merry et Pippin, mangent autour du feu de camp, ou une dans auberge. C’est très charmant - je ne connais personne qui n’aime pas cette trilogie. Personnellement, je ne peux pas m’arrêter de lire. Vendredi soir, je l’ai lu de sept heures à dix heures moins le quart. Je crois que je finirais la moitié de la livre bientôt.

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nikogp

Dec. 20, 2020

Christmas letter

Yesterday I walked all day long looking for Santa Claus with my 3 years old son. To follow the tradition, children need to write a letter to Santa Claus and give it in hand whithin the days before christmas. But Barcelona has changed a lot on last year. The impact of covid in a tourism based city has been huge: closed shops and empty streets are now the picture of the city. However Christmas is magical and there are lots of activities to enjoy with childrens. We spent 3 hours looking for a Santa’s letter, we wrote it and finally we give it in hand to Santa Claus. A beautiful experience for a 3 years old kid who don’t understand nothing about covid.

Happy Christmas

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thinkmore

Dec. 20, 2020

Playing Ring Fit Adventure

I bought Ring Fit Adventure at last Christmas. It's been out of stock for a long time, but I luckily found it on the way back home from grocery shopping. Playing Ring Fit Adventure is pretty tough. I was thinking of play it every day, but I couldn't. I mostly play two stages a day. At the beginning, my muscles were sore the next day. I played it 106 times until today. I've played it for 6 days in a row recently because I started playing rhythm dance mode. It's very fun to do it. I'm sure that I will play it tomorrow too.

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Jack

Dec. 20, 2020

Journal 20/12/20

In China, cities are similar to each other except for some minority cities. For this trip, the destination Hangzhou City is economically developed in China and it’s also the top one city among new first-tier cities. When you look at the appearances of Hangzhou and my hometown Fuyang, there seems no big difference except that Hangzhou has more tall buildings. But in fact, there are big differences between these two cities. First, Hangzhou is a deputy ministerial city, but Fuyang is just a prefectural city. Second, Hangzhou has an urban population of 7.45 million and covers 700 square kilometers, but Fuyang only has an urban population of 2 million and covers an area of 2 hundred square kilometers. Third, the GDP of Hangzhou in 2019 is 1,537,3 billion yuan, but Fuyang only has 270 billion yuan in the same year. Fourth, Hangzhou is the most developed area in its private enterprises in China, but Fuyang’s industry and private enterprises are very weak. Fifth, the natural scenery in Hangzhou is very beautiful and Hangzhou is called heaven on the earth, but Fuyang is just a medium city in plain areas and it doesn’t have those beautiful natural sceneries. So although the cities in China look similar in their appearances, they have significant differences.

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ponta

Dec. 20, 2020

HIIT

Do you know HIIT? HIIT is the initials of High-Intensity Interval Traning. This is one method of training, and it's effective particularly for cardiopulmonary function. HIIT is sets of high-intensity workouts and incomplete recoveries such as jogging or walking. One of the upsides is this training needs only a few moments. However, it means the density and hardness is very high. I sometimes do HIIT, and I feel I want to quit this torture as soon as possible, but when I finish the program I'm proud of my patience. Freeletics is a good app for practicing HIIT.

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mr_h

Dec. 20, 2020

My biggest regret!

It will be probably when I was 7, and I was playing on my ps2, with a new friend I made.
He was 15 and we was playing wwe game and i was wining he said he was gonna show me
a new technique so i handed him my controller and he made my player approach his then he used his ultimate move making lose i started crying to mom this kid was living with us because his mom abandoned him when he was a child and he living with his dad and his dad brought him to us while he go to works and he could work on for my auntie convenient store anyway when mom heard i was crying she started freaking out i didn't thought she was gonna get like that
and he was very apologetic and he was just pulling prank on him but she didn't listen and kicked him out at midnight That night i felt very guilty because i knew i overreacted and i was thinking i will apologies to him in the morning when he comes back but he never did that was 14 years ago
last week i heard that he died in yemen in he sleep he left he is dad to go look for his mom leaving younger brother alone and all this from 15 just started flooding back i wished i could've
meet once more time so i can say i was sorry for acting childish

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mr_h

Dec. 20, 2020

How would you describe your favourite colour to a blind person?

That's intersting!

I would try to describe how it feels, for example: Red it's the same color of our blood, and
when you look at you get the feeling of passion or rage.

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heavensblade13

Dec. 20, 2020

日本語日記　12月19日

今日はたくさん日本語を勉強した。まだ遅れるけど明日は取り返すと思う。それから少し「ラストゲーム」と「イジらないで長瀞さん」を読んだ。今日は「痕」の漢字を学んだ。ある代わりの問題に出会った。例えば「跡」の他の代わりは「迹」、「痕」、「址」だ。「跡」は普通に書いているけど、たくさん代わりがあるのは紛らわしいと思う。

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Aviva

Dec. 20, 2020

Куда пойдём? (упражнение из учебника)

Какая выставка проходит в Центре современного искусства “Винзавод”? Какая тема выставки?
В Центре современного искусства проходит выставка “Лучшие фотографии России”. На выставке представлены популярные тем фотолюбителей Россиской Федерации: закаты, рассветы, детски улыбки и счастливые старики.

Что идёт в Московском драматическом Театре на Малой Бронной? Кто режиссёр? Кто играет в спектакль?
В Московском драматическом Театре идёт спектакль “Три сестры”. В нём играют Марина Александрова, Алёна Бабенко, Владислав Ветров и другие. Режиссёр – Александр Савостьянов.

Кто принимает участие в концерте “Моцарт-квартет”? Что в программе концерта?
В концерте “Мозарт-квартет” принимают участие Ирина Павлихина, Антон Кулапов, Вячеслав Маринюк и Сергей Мазаев. В программе концерта – Танеев, Моцарт, Сальери, Вебер и Мендельсон.

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Sebas

Dec. 20, 2020

J'ai réussi mon test de français

Comme je l'ai dit dans mon post d'hier, j'avais un test de français aujourd'hui. Je crois que j'ai réussi le test et donc ce niveau. Pour être diplômé en mon université il faut réussir quatre niveaux d'un langue étrangère, soit l'anglais, le français ou l'italien. Je parle anglais déjà et j'adore le français, donc pourquoi j'ai choisi le cours de français. C'est mon troisième niveau, alors je n'ai qu'un niveau de plus pour réussir ce critère. Je suis dans mon quatrième semestre, ce qui veut dire que j'avais beaucoup de temps pour faire le programme de langues, mais c'est mieux de le faire bien avant. Sinon, c'est assez difficile ! Je vais m'inscrire au niveau final dans les prochaines vacances.

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