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historical places
Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
There are a number of factors that can help to explain why these places lose their primary appeal to locals. Perhaps the primary reason is that not only historical sites but anything gradually loses their primary attraction for humans. These places are much more exposed to local inhabitants so that it is natural that locals do not attract to them the same as foreign visitors. The more similarity between the cultural background of a historical place and a visitor the less attractive that place to the visitor.
Another reason might be that authorities often do not pay enough attention to conserve the historical places. Due to this reason, the conditions of these historical sites degrade over time. However, there are solutions that can be considered to resolve the issue. To gain back residents’ interest, the authorities can rearrange and redecorate these tourist attractions to make them more absorbing to the visitors. To achieve this, more public money should be spent on this problem. The authorities can continue campaigning aiming at increasing the awareness public of these attractions. In summary, enough good measures can be taken in attracting the local inhabitants.
Sept. 18, 2020
animal rights
Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the
protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?
It seems to me that humans have committed a considerable number of cruel things to other creatures for a long time. I believe that all the creatures that feel pain should be equal in basic rights. I assume arguments that people have used to justify the equality in human rights can be applied to animals. One of these arguments is that humans have many features in common, hence the equality in primary rights. If this argument is valid, it will works for the proof of animal rights as well. Not only humans and animals share many characteristics with each other but also with plants and even solids. According to another reason, the capability of thinking and reasoning is what deserves a creature to have rights. This kind of argument leads individuals to fascistic governments. As a consequence, disable humans will be stripped of any rights they naturally have, and practically it gives others license to commit any immoral acts to these kinds of individuals. These sorts of acts are not tolerable and acceptable in modern societies. Thus, human beings have been depriving animals of their most basic natural rights such as the right to survive. Therefore, I think humans have not paid enough attention to the life and rights of other creatures.
Sept. 18, 2020
traveling to remote areas
It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
First of all, we should ask ourselves whether traveling to isolated wild areas is beneficial to whom? To humans or to the natural environment and its residents? Most likely it will adversely affect numerous plant and animal species. Modern human beings have caused many irreversible damages to the earth’s ecosystem and I do not believe this case would be an exception. Industrial societies have an insatiable desire for capital. The first priority of these kinds of societies is producing and selling goods as much as possible to earn profits.
To humans, this action has benefits to some extent. On the one hand, adventuring in untouched areas brings some benefits to individuals in terms of both science and recreation. Scientists can make use of undiscovered secrets in the wilderness to develop their researches. Travelers use this opportunity to relieve some stresses and enjoy themselves. On the other hand, the wilderness is full of unseen dangers. For instance, someone who wants to travel to the Amazon jungle might find oneself in danger of various poison insects and wild animals.
In conclusion, I guess that the detrimental consequences of traveling to these distant areas far outweigh the positive ones.
Sept. 18, 2020
noisemaking
Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
I think one of the main reasons for this disagreement is the problem in determining and defining the borders of the private and the public. The people who agree with noisemaking without any restriction would argue that producing noise is a private matter and therefore a personal problem. In fact, they don’t recognize the well-known distinction between the private and public issues and believe it is just a formal classification and doesn’t stem from nature. They justify themselves by this egoistical view that in the case of the conflict between private and public interests, people should first prioritize their own needs. However, this point of view leads to a chaotic society, which prefers instinct to order and reason. While modern societies assign a high positive value to toleration and freedom, they impose a restriction on these values. Individuals are free to do everything until their actions do not harm others. According to this opinion, noisemakers endanger people’s health and affect their quality of life. Due to this reason, generating noise must be put under control.
In my view, there is an unavoidable, fateful, and tragic conflict between civilization demands and biological needs that allow human beings to lead a fulfilling life. The problem in question is one of these conflicts. Whatever choice we make leads to unavoidable suffering. However, what we can do is to lower these sufferings and choose a path that ends a more satisfying life. My choice is devotion to civilization and therefore put limits on noise making.
Sept. 18, 2020
Consumer Avengers
Almost everything is back to normal.
Restaurants can open up 12pm, up to 4 persons sitting in a same table.
Sport center, library, cinema…
Our life can be acting as a normal human being again.
What happens next?
A lot of people will become “Consumer Avengers”.
Without knowing when will the virus come again.
They will start spent / enjoy as much as they could.
Because the world might end tomorrow.
I use to don’t believe this theory.
But this time I am become a 70% believer.
Maybe later I will become a 100% “consumer avengers”?
Life is too short.
We have to make it colorful, nothing wrong with that.
Sept. 18, 2020
leadership
Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think younger leaders would be better. Do you agree or disagree?
First of all, it is better to remember to not judge the capability of individuals by mere their age. The leadership of an organization is a critical position that cannot be given to staff members based only on their age. One the one hand, it is common sense that elderly people have much more experience than the young. Due to this reason, most likely they can handle problematic situations better. The Aged are more respected in the organization and then have a more powerful voice than the young staff. As the time spent working in the organization is longer, the elderly can understand the problems and feelings of the staff much better.
On the other hand, young individuals are much more capable in terms of physical ability. The role of leadership in an organization is stressful because directors must deal with a lot of problems and there is a lot of pressure on them. Younger generations are more creative and can open new paths to a company. They have significant familiarity with new technologies. As people become older they gradually tend to be more conservative, so that young staff is more open to new changes.
In conclusion, I am in this belief that in selecting the leader other important parameters should be taken into the account as well.
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Sept. 18, 2020
～たら （１７）- conditional
料理しようと思っていたら、味が不味いでしょう。
If I decide to cook, (the food) might taste bad.
暑かったら、クーラーをつける。
だれかいい人だったら、他人を手伝います。
If someone is a good person, they will help others.
ここに時計を置きったら、誰か盗みます。
If I leave my watch here, someone will steal it.
家にお帰りったら、酔っ払おうと思っていた。
彼は森に出かけたら、帰ってはいけません。
If he leaves the forest, he must not return.
飛べったら、毎日空の中で飛ぶっています。
If I could fly, I'd fly in the sky every day.
Sept. 18, 2020
Sätze mit dem Konjunktiv II in der Vergangenheit!
1. Karl bereitete sich auf die Prüfung nicht gut vor. Er fiel durch die Prüfung.
Wenn Karl sich auf die Prüfung gut vorbereitet hätte, wäre er durch die Prüfung nicht gefallen.
2. Ich hatte wenig Zeit. Ich habe nichts gekocht.
Wenn ich viel Zeit gehabt hätte, hätte ich etwas gekocht.
3. Wir haben nicht im Lotto gewonnen. Wir haben keine größere Wohnung gekauft.
Wenn wir im Lotto gewonnen hätten, hätten wir eine größere Wohnung gekauft.
Sept. 18, 2020
Hochzeit Einladung
Liebe Shakila und Lieber Shervin,
Ich wünsche alles Gute und viel Glück zu Eurer Hochzeit und euren gemeinsamen Lebensweg. Vielen Dank für die Einladung,
Sehr gerne hätte ich daran teilgenommen und wäre mit größtem Vergnügen Eurer Hochzeit, aber das tut mir sehr leider, dass ich nicht kommen kann, weil ich mich am 26. 2. 2029 ein Vortrag haben werde. Aber ich hätte gerne ihnen ein schönes Bukett entwerfen. Würden wir, nachdem die Feier in einem Restaurant treffen? Ich kann Euch besuchen und Eurer Geschenk da geben.
Freundlichen Dank im Voraus
Und bitte grüß die Schwiegereltern
schöne Grüße
Tuba
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Sept. 18, 2020
Che vorrebbero fare i partecipanti del corso:
Franco:
Non parteciperebbe mai a una trasmissione televisiva.
Non regalerebbe mai un cane a un amico.
Gli farebbe piacere abitare in Italia.
Gli piacerebbe studiare lingue orientali.
Melissa:
Le farebbe piacere sposare un italiano.
Le piacerebbe tornare bambina.
Non andrebbe mai in crociera per un mese.
Io:
Mi farebbe piacere volare in un deltaplano.
Mi piacerebbe cambiare lavoro.
Vorrei iscrivermi a un corso di danza.
Sept. 18, 2020
Oktoberfest
Nous sommes en mi-septembre et pour les habitants de Munich, ça veut dire que la période de l'Oktoberfest est arrivée. Contrairement à ce que le nom pourrait faire croire, l'Oktoberfest commence en septembre et se termine en octobre.
Cette année, cependant, il n'y a pas d'Oktoberfest. Elle a été annulée il y a quelques mois déjà, ce qui fera de 2020 la première année sans cette fête depuis la seconde guerre mondiale. C'est une grande perte pour l'économie de la ville, car le chiffre d'affaires supplémentaire apporté par l'Oktoberfest directement et par les dépenses des touristes de l'Oktoberfest indirectement a atteint un milliard d'euros ces dernières années. Bien sûr, elle manquera aussi à tous les fêtards. Pire encore, le gouvernement de la ville a interdit la consommation d'alcool sur quelques places publiques en raison du nombre croissant d'infections covidiennes et des plaintes des résidents. Il y a encore quelques mois encore, interdire la consommation d'alcool en Bavière était aussi impensable qu'interdire de manger des hamburgers dans les MacDo.
Le chagrin des uns est la joie des autres. L'une de mes amies habite non loin de l'épicentre de l'Oktoberfest. Elle est heureuse que cette année, il ne lui faut pas faire attention à ce que nous appelons des cadavres de bière et des pizzas de vomi sur son chemin au bureau.
Sept. 18, 2020
대학 생활 차이
프랑스에서 대학 입학이 한 날에만 본 시험보다 고등학교 3년 동안 받았던 점수도 고려한다.
그리고 대학의 순위가 대부분에 그렇게 중요하지 않다.
그래서 학생들이 전공에 대해 고민 해도 아무 대학에 가도 되는 것 같다.
한국 대학 제도가 미국과 비슷한 부분이 있는 것 같다.
프랑스 제도는 비교하면 훨씬 다르다.
첫째로 일주일에 들어야 하는 수업이 더 많다.
월요일부터 금요일까지 하루에 7시간 동안 수업을 듣는다.
그래도 숙제가 있고 조별 과제도 있다.
그리고 듣고 싶은 수업을 개별적으로 고르지 않는다.. 전공에 따라 고정된 과정이 있다.
Sept. 18, 2020
My deep thoughts on well-being
Wealth is well-being. Some people think so. However, let's take a broader look and talk about mental health. We need to understand the depth of its importance, and we need start practicing better habits to improve our well-being. First, let's think about how we behave with other people. Are we rude? If we want peace of mind so that others will treat us well, we should start with tolerance. Let's live in peace!
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Sep 18th 2020
Today is another good day as all the things on my schedule goes the right way. Of course, the instant gratification monkey still annoyed so much even though I had prepared some powerful tools to dispel it. I guess, like a schizophrenia person, I have to live in harmony with him instead of behaving to him as a rival.
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Sept. 18, 2020
単語の練習
1）今日は暑すぎたから、植物がしおれてしまいました。
2）彼はボールを握り締めていた。
3）太陽はその湖を水切りしちゃった。
4）（父）お母さんに花束を買ってあげよう、そろそろ誕生日だから。
5）息子がお母さんにに誕生日のための花束を買ってあげた。
6）エアコンを消してくれない？もうさむいから。
7）チンチラに餌をやった。
8）これは、友達がくれた。
9）持ち時間があれば、日本語を教えてくれない？代わりに英語を教えてあげるよ。
10）試験は満点を取ったから、欲しい物を買ってもらいました。
11）その本は先生が生徒にもらった。
12）スマホを借りてもいいですか。
13）スマホを貸してもらえない？
14）大人がいるから、しゃんとしろ。
15）友達は明日引っ越すから、お別れのプレゼントを買ってあげたい。
16）タンスの汚れを落としてくれない？
17）彼女に言わないでくれませんか。
18）彼氏がぬいぐるみをくれた。
19）ウクライナの文化は生きる人間に二本の花をあげるとだめです。死者だけでもいいです。
20）先生と話しながら、きつくなってきたよ。怒っただろう。
21）英語のクラブには、ほとんどの人は同じ興味があったから、本当に話して楽しかった。
22）ズームミティングの主催者はパソコンの画面を共有してあげました。
［上の文章には、パソコンの画面とデスクトップと、どっちが使ってもいいですか？または、他の言葉がるんですか？］
23）彼女はうそをつきそうだ。
Sept. 18, 2020
Daily (Traveling in Taiwan a year ago)
The 18th of September.
I hadn't really longed for traveling abroad for ages until I visited Taiwan a year ago. Before that, I would rather have spent a fortune in local than afforded for tourist overpriced food and accommodation abroad.
In fact, there were a ton of feelings and experiences I couldn't get it for growth locally. Seeing other people how to treat each other truly and work hard on the street or just a simple place. They were living seriously aroused my heart, as the same human, I desire to strive to live up to myself.
Sometimes we have to venture outside of our comfort zone to grow and you will feel all of the things are worth it.
Sept. 18, 2020
Meine ersten Arbeitstage (Schreibübung)
In den Ersten Tagen musste ich als neuer Mitarbeiter viel fragen, denn alles war für mich neu. Weil ich den anderen in der Abteilung nicht lästig fallen wollte, wollte ich aber nicht zu viel fragen. In der ersten Woche konnte ich nicht viel selbständig machen, denn keiner hatte Zeit, mir etwas zu erklären. Weil die Mitarbeiter gerade ein Projekt zu Ende bringen müssen, haben sie natürlich wenig Zeit für mich. Sie freuen sich aber, weil ich ihnen Kaffee koche und ihnen die lästigen Kopierarbeiten abnehme. In der nächsten Woche wird es bestimmt interessanter, denn ich darf in dem neuen Projekt mitarbeiten.
Sept. 18, 2020
A real book in my hand
After more than half year!
Our library is finally re-open again.
For the last six months I just keep reading from my tablet.
Well, I did learn new knowledge.
But siting in library reading books is a too different experience.
Library is for poor me like me.
Enjoy air condition in hot summer.
Reading all kinds book and free wi-fi limitless.
However, government still concern the public safety.
The library only open 1pm to 8pm, Monday to Saturday.
I hope someday they will open like a -7-11.
I do think the whole world will agree my suggestion.
Sept. 18, 2020
Erdbeeren mit Schokoladenüberzug
Diese Abend habe ich Erdbeeren mit Schokoladenüberzug gemacht. Es gab keinen besonderen Grund, sie zu machen. Trotzdem habe ich sie gemacht, weil ich einfach wollte. Es hat Spaß gemacht, die Schokolade zu schmelzen, und die Erdbeeren zu tauchen. Ich habe sie in den Kühlschrank gestellt. Jetzt esse ich sie und sie schmecken perfekt. Morgen habe ich vor, etwas anderes mit der übrig gebliebenen Schokolade zu machen. Vielleicht Kekse, Käsekuchen, oder Souffle.
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