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yegorhayk89

Jan. 1, 2021

Oude ouders

Mijn ouders zijn boven de 60 nu. Ik zie hun elk jaar met Kerst. Soms zie ik hun vaker, maar dit jaar lukt het niet. Elk jaar merk ik op hoe merkbaar ze ouder worden. Ze worden kalmer, bewegen langzamer, praten meer en vertellen hetzelfde verhalen vier of vijf keer en doen ze minder elke dag. Ik vind het soms verfrissend om een dagen met mijn ouders door te brengen en alles langzamer te done. Maar wat ik minder prettig vind, is dat ze geen ambities meer hebben. De toekomst is niet meer opwindend voor hun en ze kijken nergens ernaar uit.
Voor mij is zelf-ontwikkeling en verbetering de drijfveer van het leven, en ik kan me geen leven voorstellen waar ik geen doelen heb en de toekomst geen verandering biedt.

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ricky

Jan. 1, 2021

A family I like

Today, I am going to talk about a family I like. It is my close friend’s family. She is from a respectable family. Several months ago, they bought a new condominium in Beijing with carving furniture and cherry ground. They invited me to their new apartment. They hosted me hospitality with elegant food. It was the first time I met her families, but I can tell they are well-educated through their speech and behaviour. Her father is the CEO of a big company. He is really talkative and sociable. He seemed to know everything, because every time we try to strike up a conversation he can always easily get into conversation with us and get to the point. Her mother is a teacher and she is also well-informed. I really like this loving family. It is the one I am always looking forward to living in.

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Jack

Jan. 1, 2021

Translation Practice

The New Year is coming. In China, you have passed the New Year, but in the US, January 1st hasn’t come yet. I have some resolutions for 2021. I want to change myself. To tell you the truth, I think I am lazy, and also have some bad habits. Through getting rid of the bad habits and working hard, I think I will be happy and become diligent. The following three paragraphs are the goals that I want to realize next year.
First, I want to attach great importance to Chinese learning. I want to pass HSK5 in 2021. I think it will be difficult to achieve this goal. Although my spoken Chinese is not bad, there is a lot of HSK5 vocabulary that I haven’t studied. Besides, many characters that I don’t know how to write, and I can only type. Moreover, I can’t write them fluently, and I have to look at some words that I am unfamiliar with in a dictionary when I write them. I think if I study hard, watch more Chinese TV shows, write more journals, maybe I can do it. Apart from this, I want to read a book this year. My plan is that every day before I go to bed, I read it a little.
Second, I want to learn a new foreign language: Swedish. My cousin is German, and his husband is Swedish. They live in Sweden and they have three children. They only speak Swedish (generally, they can understand German, but they can’t speak it). I want to get along with them well, so I want to speak Swedish. My goal is that by the end of 2021, I can take a 15 minute chat in a row in Swedish without a single English word. I also know that it’s difficult to achieve this. I only know some simple Swedish words and sentences, but I don’t even know a little of some Swedish grammar and many words. I don’t know if I can do it, but I want to try.
The last plan has nothing to do with a foreign language. I want to actively help others more. Basically, I think I am a good person and I am very friendly to others, but because I am always shy, I usually avoid helping others. I think I should develop my style. Next year, I want to join more public welfare activities. Thus, I am useful to our society and I hope I can make myself happy.
I also have some small New Year’s resolutions, but I am afraid of pursuing too many goals, and I don’t want to put much pressure on me. I hope everyone can realize their resolutions in 2021. Everybody, come on!

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Jack

Jan. 1, 2021

Translation Practice

I also have some small New Year’s resolutions, but I am afraid of pursuing too many goals, and I don’t want to put much pressure on me. I hope everyone can realize their resolutions in 2021. Everybody, come on!

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deborahj

Jan. 1, 2021

Quelle est la devise d'australie

La devise de l'australie peut se résumer en deux mots 'fair go’ : Je ne sais pas comment on peux les traduirai.

Cette phrase apparais dans les nouvelle très souvant. C’est un but. Souvent on échoue, mais c’est un grande but.

Ce but demand qu’on donne la tolérance et le respect mutuel vers les autre Australiennes et Australiens. On doit porte un masque pour protéger les autres ainsi que soi-même

On doit laisse les concitoyens pense ce qu’il veut (sauf si le résultat est de menace l’autre). Les citoyens peuvent croire en un dieu or pas croire en un dieu. En Australia, la religion la plus populaire du pays est l’athéisme. En fait sur la dernière “census” en Australie, certains ne prend pas la question très au sérieux, ils écrivent leur religion comme “JEDI”
On doit donne la compassion pour ceux qui en ont besoin. Apres les feu et les inundation, beaucoup de bénévoles vient de l’aide des victimes.
On dois donne le respect a les règle de loi et les tribunal, et til faut tout est egal devant la loi. C’est un “fair go”

Je pense que les devises de beaucoup de pays democratic sont un peu similaire.

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Jack

Jan. 1, 2021

Translation Practice

The last plan has nothing to do with foreign languages. I want to actively help others more. Basically, I think I am a good person and I am very friendly to others, but because I am always shy, I usually avoid helping others. I think I should develop my style. Next year, I want to join more public welfare activities. Thus, I am good for our society and I also hope I can make myself happy.

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Aiden

Jan. 1, 2021

Returned to Evernote from Notion

I just tried Notion and it feels so complex, although I could use it. I just want to write a note, just that. I can make a note in one or two clicks on Evernote.

Notion has so many functions and that is the reason why so many people enthusiastic about Notion. However, in case of me, it's not. I like Evernoto because it has no functions. I can focus on writing and scrapping easily. Notion seems more suitable for constructing a web/wiki, not a note taking.

Regardless of my preference, it is certain that both of them is really good product. For now, I just prefer something simpler. Evernote remains my filing cabinet.

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Jack

Jan. 1, 2021

Translation Practice

Second, I want to learn a new foreign language: Swedish. My cousin is German, and his husband is Swedish. They live in Sweden and they have three children. They only speak Swedish (generally, they can understand German, but they can’t speak it). I want to get along with them well, so I want to speak Swedish. My goal is that by the end of 2021, I can take a 15 minute chat in a row in Swedish without a single English word. I also know that it’s difficult to achieve this. I only know some simple Swedish words and sentences, but I don’t even know a little of some Swedish grammar and many words. I don’t know if I can do it, but I want to try.

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Jack

Jan. 1, 2021

Translation Practice

First, I want to attach great importance to Chinese learning. I want to pass HSK5 in 2021. I think it will be difficult to achieve this goal. Although my spoken Chinese is not bad, there is a lot of HSK5 vocabulary that I haven’t studied. Besides, many characters that I don’t know how to write, and I can only type. Moreover, I can’t write them fluently, and I have to look at some words that I am unfamiliar with in a dictionary when I write them. I think if I study hard, watch more Chinese TV shows, write more journals, maybe I can do it. Apart from this, I want to read a book this year. My plan is that every day before I go to bed, I read it a little.

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LucianoL

Jan. 1, 2021

New Year´s Eve

This year was a tough one, but luckily it has finished. I wish you a good and fruitful 2021!

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Jack

Jan. 1, 2021

Translation Practice

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fabledlamb

Jan. 1, 2021

Supersticiones

Mi familia tiene algunas supersticiones para el año nuevo. Cada año en el 31 de diciembre, vestimos en rojo (para suerte) y puntos (para ganar dinero). También ponemos monedas en los alféizares para que los espíritus puedan traer dinero si entran por las ventanas.

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darcy

Dec. 31, 2020

¿Qué fue lo último que soñaste?

Mi ùltimo sueño

Yo no puedo recordar mi último sueño. Por alguna razón, cuando me levanto en las mañanas, yo sé que yo soñé, pero no puedo recordar. Para unos minutos, yo puedo recordar fragmentos de mi sueño pero nada más de fragmentos. Incluso los fragmentos desaparecen después de unos minutos.

Desafortunadamente, sobre todos mis sueños son pesadillas. Ya sea alguien muere o alguien me roba o... la lista continua.

Cuando los sueños son buenos, yo intento a quedar durmiendo. Por ejemplo, un ruido me despertará, y yo intentará a incluir el ruido en mi sueño. O, alguien me despierta, yo quedo en mi cama e imaginar el sueño otra vez hasta yo comenzar a dormir y soñar el sueño. ¡A veces, esa manera funciona!

¿Haces esas cosas tú?

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Norah

Dec. 31, 2020

Productivity

This year was a total disaster for me. I stand in awe at people who got to accomplish something this year . Hopefully next year will be better.I don’t believe in goals. I am old enough at this point to know that I wil never reach them. Instead this year I will thing about 3 things that will bring me the utmost happiness if I accomplish them and I will do my best to enjoy the process. No massive objectives,3 small things that in the long run will change my life .

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alba

Dec. 31, 2020

ジャコモ・レオパルディ

ジャコモ・レオパルディは１７９８年に権限をなくした貴族から生まれた。
モナルド親父は聖職者に預けた時、ジャコモは優れた才能を見せた。
１０歳だった時、古典作品を訳したり、ラテン語で書いたりすることができた。
両親との関係は大変だった。ジャコモはいつも一人で、親父の大きい図書館で古典的な作品を勉強していた。
１８０９年から１８１６年まで研究に没頭した。この時代は「無謀で必死の研究 (mad and desperate study)」として知られている。この７年間、完璧にいろいろな言語を学んだり、古典作品を訳したり、博識な作品を書いたり、歌と哲学も勉強したりした。
このような孤独な生活はジャコモの体も心もすり減らした。

新年が良い年でありますように！！

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ella

Dec. 31, 2020

Thoughts

I just have read a post on Instagram about suicide. This guy wrote how he safe a life a year ago. There was a man, who wanted to jump from a bridge and end his life. But this Instagram guy was at the right time and in the right place to help him. And he started to reflect on how a little change in our plans can do a huge change in our lifes or someone else's life.
This is just the perspective from someone stand on the other side of the man that wanted to suicide. So now I'm wondering how this man ends up so close to his death, how many things had happened to him to want to do that. How dark and strong were his thoughts to lead him to that point.

I know this feeling when you are tormented with all these bad and dark thoughts. And sometimes I'm afraid of them because I don't know how strong I am to stop them or if I'm able to stop them to play with my mind. They feed themselves with my insecurities, mistakes, regrets, even my wishes. In those moments life seems to me so horrible. Then, when these thoughts do their part, which is torturing me, they abandoned me and left me empty, tired, and dry.

Because of this post on Instagram, I began to think about it and I realized that these thoughts are like these annoying visitors who no one wants but in any case, the come. The problem is that these ones can take you to your death. A death, that maybe you could regret or maybe no . A death that leaves broken hearts and that no one understands or expected. The trick is that this death is being slowly and silently waved in our heads.

I wish this man from the bridge is doing ok :)

it's just a reflection :)

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eeprom

Dec. 31, 2020

Infinitivsätze: Anbieten, anfangen, aufhören

In diesem Beitrag will ich ein paar Beispielsätze mit den Verben "anbieten", "anfangen" und "aufhören", die oft eine Infinitivkonstruktion einleiten, schreiben.

"Der Lehrer hat dem Kind angeboten, ihm mit seiner Hausaufgabe zu helfen"
"Gerade hat es angefangen, zu regnen"
"Endlich haben die Nachbarn aufgehört, laut zu feiern"

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claudiabzs

Dec. 31, 2020

Glücksmomente

Das war, als ich ein Stipendium in Frankreichg gemacht habe. Damals hatte ich noch nicht meine Ausbildung beendet aber ich hatte mich die Möglichkeit um ein Stipendium beworben. Es war wirklich toll. Dort habe ich mein Frazose Freund gefunden und wir sind seitdem zusammen.

Mein Lieblingsglückmoment war, als ich meine Doktorarbeit präsentiert habe. Ich hatte sehr lange daran gearbeitet und war sehr glücklich, als alles gut geworden hat. Meine Professoren haben mir sehr viel gratuliert und das hat mir sehr gefreut. Es war die Beendung auf mein Studium.

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hym

Dec. 31, 2020

Dec. 31st, 2020

Today is the last day of 2020. It's hard to say what my feeling is. I had the sweetest time and the most painful days in 2020. I would say that I will never forget the year of 2020

Ok, let's just talk some normal things. I got 3 short term traning certificates. They were Food safety, Computer skills and First Aid & CPR. My English level went up from CLB 5 to 6. I got a part time job for 5 months, and I have kept doing a volunteer job for whole year. I read 11 books. It's not too many because I spent too much time to read online articles. It looks not too bad. I did somethings in the awful year.

I have many plans for the coming new year. I want to keep on improving my English, to read more books, to get a one year course certificate, to keep doing my part time job and the volunteer job. I really hope the pandemic can finish as soon as possible because I'm also planning to travel to Dallas, Mexico, New Zealand and to go back to China. Actually it was my travel plan for 2020. So sad.

Anyway, life is always hard. I just hope it'll be a little bit more happiness than pain in the new year. Happy new year everyone!

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Ceci

Dec. 31, 2020

31 décembre (la fin de l'année 2020)

C'est un peu bizarre qu'aujourd'hui c'est le réveillon du Jour de l'an. Chez moi, chaque jour se ressemble. Le week-end a perdu sa forme ; je sais que c'est probablement une mauvaise habitude, mais j'étudie toute la semaine, quel que soit le jour ou l'occasion. Même le jardin a l'air d'indifférence envers le jour—j'habite dans l'état de Massachusetts, où il fait assez froid, mais la pluie a fait fondre toute la neige. Quand je regarde dehors, je vois juste la pelouse morte, les arbres nus, et le ciel gris. Ce n'est pas très festif ! Mais de toute façon, en général, je ne suis pas très enthousiaste de la fête du nouvel an. Je ne fait jamais de bonnes résolutions, par exemple. Pourtant, j'espère encore que l'année suivante ira mieux que cette année. Même si je ne suis pas plein d'espoir, j'ai beaucoup d'espoirs et souhaits. Alors… bonne année !

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oceandrive76

Dec. 31, 2020

La mejora

¿De qué manera te mejoras en el idioma que estudias?

Todos nosotros hacemos errores cuando aprendemos un idioma extranjero. Sin embargo, para movernos por delante de el nivel básico, tenemos que encontrar una manera para recibirnos correcciones. Desafortunadamente, incluso esto no es suficiente, necesitamos entender las correcciones por completo. Necesitamos entender el por qué que equivocarnos. Sin este conocimiento, lo seguimos haciendo una y otra vez y nunca aprendemos de él. Podemos revisar nuestro trabajo tantas veces que queremos, pero sin este conocimiento no sucede nada.
Aunque a veces es difícil practicar el idioma que estudias, creo que la búsqueda de una manera de revisar tus errores es aún más de un desafío. Había intentado crear una hoja de cálculo al principio para escribir todos los errores que hacía. Sin embargo, al fin y al cabo era sencillamente demasiado trabajo para mantenerlo. En lugar de eso, empecé escribir mi entrada corregida en un cuaderno. Lo comencé haciendo cada pocos días, pero con el paso de tiempo me daba cuenta de que era cada vez más útil. Ahora intento hacerlo para cada entrada con la esperanza de que me ayude a mejorar.
Me interesa aprender de qué otras maneras se usen para mejorar. Quizá leas todas tus correcciones en voz alta. ¿Te hace aprender mejor? Por otro lado, quizá las añadas a tu baraja de Anki. Yo lo hacía por un rato, pero encontré que hay demasiado para continuar haciéndolo. Creo que el mejor método de aprender depende de ti y que tienes que aprovecharlo para aumentar tu aprendizaje.

Dos oraciones con "llevar + participio/gerundio".

1. Llevo traídas tres bolsas para la limpieza del parque.

2. Se llevaba encerrando por tres años y aún no se recupera de la pérdida.

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Anerneq

Dec. 31, 2020

Новый год: добро пожаловать 2021

Этот год был для меня великой оказией, чтобы вырастить лично.
У меня планы на будущее и я добил несколько целов. Хоть ситуация коронавируса вопрепятствовала меня сделать дальнейшие успехи, для меня не было слишком тяжкая и я уверен, что в будущем году я исполню планы.
Я терпелив и жду позитивно на будущий год, потому что я знаю, что всё будет для меня хорошо. В конце концов приветствую 2020 год с многими надеждами.

С новым годом всем.

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Jack

Dec. 31, 2020

Translation practice

Xiaowang is talking with Xiaoding. Xiaoding is Xiaowang’s cousin. She wants to watch a Chinese movie with Xiaowang, but Xiaowang wants to watch a foreign movie. They want to look online for this week’s movie list. And then, Xiaowang’s phone rings.

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zoe1717

Dec. 31, 2020

Unverpackt-Laden

Heute stand in der lokalen Zeitung dass eine kleine Gruppe Menschen einen unverpackten Laden in unserem Viertel gründen wollen. Die Vorstellung ist dennoch kein üblicher Laden, sondern ein Mitgliedladen, wofür jeder einen monatlich Mitgliedbeitrag zahlt, und bekommt dafür die Gelegenheit, unverpacktes und biologisches Lebensmittel in diesem Laden am niedrigen Preis zu kaufen. Die Gründer wollen keinen Umsatz machen, sondern nur sicherstellen, dass genug Geld als Rücklage bleibt, falls etwas schlimmes passiert.

Nicht Mitgliedern könnten auch in diesem Laden einkaufen, aber würden einen Höheren Preis zahlen müssen. Ich finde die Idee gut, aber ich weiß nicht, ob ich jetzt Mitglied werden will, ohne die Angebote im Laden zu sehen. Das Problem ist, wenn viele genau wie ich denke, dann werden die Gründer nicht genug Geld haben, um den Laden zu eröffnen.

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sota

Dec. 31, 2020

December 31

My father was invited to his friends who are related to his job to have dinner including my family. Today is New Year's Eve, and I wasn’t interested in it, but he made an appointment with them. Why did they invite us, even though on New Year's Eve?

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