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Rahee

Jan. 2, 2021

아무 말 대잔치 1부

나는 요새 ‘여태까지 살아가면서 과연 내가 할 수 있는 최선을 다해 왔나?’ 싶은 생각이 자주 든다. 어릴 때부터 공부를 잘했고 좋은 성적을 받는 것이 우선 사항이라고 생각하며 완벽주의 성향이 있었다. 공부는 인생의 전부가 아니라는 사실을 잘 알고 있으면서도 강박관념에 시달리는 것처럼 최고의 결과를 위해서 공부를 열심히 하는 것에 중점을 두어 왔다.
지난 몇 년간 한국어 공부에 지대한 관심을 가지고 있어서 한국어 실력을 키우고자 많이 노력하고 있다. 매일 빠짐없이 팟캐스트나 드라마를 통해 듣기 연습을 하고 글을 쓰고 싶을 때 내 생각과 감정에 대해서 한국어로 써 보기도 한다. 읽기 연습도 하는데 주로 소설이나 웹툰으로 한다. 그러다 보니까 뉴스 기사를 읽는 것에 점차로 익숙해지는 것 같다.
문제는 취미로 시작했던 한국어 공부가 꼭 지켜야 할 의무가 되어 버렸다는 느낌이 든다. 한국어 공부하는 것을 더 이상 즐기지 않다는 것이 아니라 공부를 하지 않으면 기분이 몹시 나빠질 장도로 그것에 푹 빠져 있는 상태이다. 외국어를 배우면 좋은 점이 많지만 나는 한국어 공부라는 이 한 가지 일에만 집중하기 때문에 다른 유익한 취미를 즐기기가 힘들게 되었다. 예를 들자면, 그림 그리기에 대한 열정이 식었나 보다. 거의 안 하게 되었다는 말이다. 어릴 때는 내가 가장 좋아했던 것이었는데.
사실은 나중에 한국어 선생님이 되겠다는 생각까지 들었다... 어떤 이유로 한국어에 이렇게 집착하게 된 걸까? 시간이 가는 줄 모르게 한국어 공부에 몰두할 때가 많은데 왜 그럴까? 한국어를 능숙하게 구사하는 것은 나에게 또 다른 우선 순위가 된 것 같은데 이유가 무엇일까? 이 경우라면 그리 나쁜 것일까?
건강하지 않은 완벽주의를 추구하는 사람이라는 것을 인정한다. 외국어를 배우는 과정에서 실수하는 것이 당연한 일임을 알고 있음에도 한국어로 말하다가 실수를 하면 당황하게 될 때가 많다. ‘더 열심히 공부를 해야겠다’, ‘언제쯤 한국말을 자연스럽게 술술 하게 될까?’ 등 이런 생각이 자주 떠오른다.
전에도 말했듯이 공부는 인생의 전부가 아니다. 쉬는 시간을 한국어 공부로만 채우면 안 된다. 이 말들을 명심하고 완벽주의에서 벗어나는 방법을 찾아보며 다른 일을 즐길 시간을 내도록 하겠다.

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sota

Jan. 2, 2021

January 2nd

I was planning on studying, but I went back to sleep, so I’m studying now. I'm relieved because I memorized most of the Economics words. I also have to study one of the difficult subjects, Programming.

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Jack

Jan. 2, 2021

Translation Practice

Now, the situation in my room has changed. Two lovely cats continuously attract my attention, so that I can’t focus on my learning. When I sleep, one cat is in my right arm and another is lying on my chest. When I open the door, the most agile cat will go out like a rocket, so I have to hold it when I go to the bathroom or brush my teeth. More precisely state: I need to balance the cat on my shoulder while I brush my teeth. My teacher has said that taking care of neighbor’s cats must be a troublesome job. I think she is probably right. I cleaned my whole room and bought cat food online. Although they continually bother me while I am learning, they are still lovely.

This morning, they finished all the cat food that my neighbors have. Yesterday, I went to the supermarket to try to buy some cat food in advance. I originally thought it would be like the supermarket in western countries, but I found that they rarely sell cat foods. Afterwards, I bought cat food in Jingdond, and the cat food quality was not as good as my neighbor’s. But the cat food is in Zhengzhou now; What do cats eat tonight and tomorrow? So I bought two packs of beef jerky and one can of tuna. Although these are not cat food, I think cats will eat jerky and fish. I don’t have experience of keeping cats, so my thoughts may be wrong. But at least, these two cats have some food to eat.

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no_face_spirit

Jan. 2, 2021

George R.R. Martin への手紙

George R.R. Martin様

お元気ですか。私はMartin様の本を大ファンなんですが、質問があります。つぎの本はすぐ終わっていただけませんか。どうして何も書くんですか。私は待ちにつかれたんです。もし本を終わったら、私に本を送ったらいいですか。私はそれを感謝します。
この手紙にこたえていただけませんか。

ありがとうございます

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heavensblade13

Jan. 2, 2021

ツンデレ

アニメでよくあるキャラ系はツンデレだ。ツンデレのキャラクターの中には有名な三人組は釘宮理恵が声優した。3人は「とらドラ!」の逢坂大河、「ゼロの使い魔」のルイズ、「灼眼のシャナ」のシャナだ。この3つの原作はラノベで、アニメのシリーズは2005から2008で作った。3回とらドラ!を観て、好きだけど、灼眼のシャナはまあまあだった。今ゼロの使い魔を観ている。多分一番悪いと思う。キャラクターと筋書きと設定はつまらなくて、冗談は何度も見て、古い。

3つのシリーズで女の主人公は典型的なツンデレだ。ツンデレはよく暴力で、主人公を投げてから、見にくい。暴力以外、ツンデレ系は攻撃的な言葉を使う。例えば、「うるさい、うるさい、うるさい！」と言って。この言葉使いはめんどくさいけど、暴力はもっとひどいと思う。ルイズは特に厳しい。彼女は鞭を使って、主人公を叩く。このひどい扱いからロマンスが生まれるのはかなりありえなくて、虐待の関係だと思う。私の意見で控えめなツンデレはいいけど、極めて暴力のツンデレは気障りだ。シャナは大丈夫で、大河はかろうじてオーケーで、ルイズはやりすぎと思う。

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yammy

Jan. 2, 2021

Mon progrès

Salut, il a eu longtemps puisque j'ai écrit une poste. Puisque la dernière fois, j'ai obtenu mon B1 avec bonnes notes et je suis en route à obtenir mon B2 avant ce juillet. Merci pour t'aide, c'était vraiment important pour mon progrès ; je suis allé très bien avec ma production écrites.

Il faut que je reste ici jusqu'à août parce que l'apprentissage à Montréal, c'est toute en linge. La situation avec le covid, c'est loin mieux en Australie (près d'éliminer sans vaccin), et j'ai un bon boulot ; il n'y a pas de raison de partir jusqu'à la situation s'améliorer.

D'ailleurs, j'ai pris une petite pause après mon examen, cependant il est maintenant temps de commencer à étudier si je veux mon B2 avant août. Voici mon plan. Tout d'abord, je trouve un tuteur. Je trouve les cours de français trop lent pour moi. Il y a beaucoup de gens gentils, mais les classes, c'est plus un passe-temps pour leurs, tandis que j'ai un but sérieux pour mes études. Deuxièmement, j'ai un programme précis, qui inclut d'écrire une fois par semaine ici.

Pour la prochaine poste, je vais raconter ma production orale pour ma B1, parce que c'était assez drôle (j'étais trop nerveuse et oublies beaucoup de trucs). À prochain.

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ankitrn

Jan. 2, 2021

Ein Interessantes Getränk

Hallo liebe Lesern von Langcorrect!

Meine Schwester und einen Freund von ihr kamen zwei Tage früher als Weihnachten zu Hause an und dort hatten wir zusammen entschiedet ein schönes Mittagessen in ein Hotel zu machen. Wir hatten ein Weihnachtsbuffet bestellen und es gab viele verschiedene Essen und Getränke. Ein besonders Getränk hatte uns sehr beeindruckt. Der Name des Getränk war "Chameleon" und es war sogennant, weil die Farbe des Getränks würde ändern, nach man es gerührt hatte. Das Getränk komposiert aus Gin und viele andere Zutaten und schmeckt süß. Zuerst war die Farbe des Getränks Blau und nach ein paar Momente hatte die Farbe plötzlich geändert! Es war hüblisch und interessant zu sehen. Ich hoffe, dass ihr konntet es auch ein mal probieren.

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becky82

Jan. 2, 2021

我和猫新的生活方式

现在，我房间的情况变了。两只可爱的猫不断地转我的注意力，我如今无法学习。我睡觉时，右胳膊抱着一只猫，胸脯上躺着另一只猫。我开门时，最灵活那只猫像火箭跑出去，以至于刷牙或者上厕所时，我需要抱它。或更准确地说，我需要一边把猫平衡在肩膀上，一边刷牙。我的老师说了照顾邻居的两只猫很麻烦，而她可能是对的。我已经清洁了我整个房间以及在网上买了猫食品。它们不断地打断在学习的我。即使如此，它们还是十分可爱的猫。

今天早上，它们吃完所有我邻居拥有的猫食品。昨天，我事先去超市尝试买一些可以给这两只猫的食品。我本来以为跟西方的超市一样，在任何超市随时可以买猫食品，不过我发现了实际上很少卖猫食品。后来，我上网从京东买了猫食品，跟我邻居提供的差一点。但是那猫食品正在在郑州，今晚和明天猫还应该吃什么。所以今天，我买了两包“牛肉干”和一罐“金枪鱼”。虽然这些都不是猫食品，但是我觉得猫可以吃肉干和鱼。我没有经历养猫，所以我也许不对。至少这两只猫有吃的。

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fabledlamb

Jan. 2, 2021

ParaNorman

Hoy vi ParaNorman por primera vez. Es una película de animación inspirado por la brujería y el argumento tiene lugar en Salem, Massachusetts.

Esta película trata de un chico que puede hablar con espíritus. Todo el mundo (incluso su familia) cree que Norman está loco o que está inventando cosas para atraer atención y tiene que usar sus poderes para salvar el pueblo de una maldición.

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ricky

Jan. 2, 2021

Food

Nowadays, with the fast-paced life we led, we hardly ever have enough time to cook for ourselves to have a heavy breakfast. In this case, most of them just grab a piece of bread and eat them on the way to their schools or companies, while some of them prefer ready meals. When it comes to children, they are dying of junk food like burgers or fried chips which contain food additives, because they think nourishing meals are boring. On top of that, there are a large quantity of advertisements on TV to promote some processed foods, which aims at children. What’s more, younger generations prefer to go to restaurants since they believe it is a good way to gather together and have snap-up meals. However, some restaurants leave perishable food lying round outside the fridge, and some people get food poisoning.

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brando

Jan. 2, 2021

Mon Premier Post

Salut.

J'apprends le français depuis trois mois, mais je n'ai pas pratique la production, suelement la compréhension. J'ai envie d'écrire courts passages plusieurs fois par semaine afin que je m'améliore à me rappeler les mots et les phrases, et à les mettre ensemble.

Brando.

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Jack

Jan. 2, 2021

Translation Practice

Your inside world decided your outside behavior. Do you know those people who live painfully? Doesn’t their pain come from their inner confusion? Yes, it’s indeed this. We all intend to change ourselves by changing the environment. But think it reverse, we should change ourselves first before changing the environment.

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Alexerdman

Jan. 2, 2021

Rabarber

Rabarber er en grøntsag. Rabarber bruges i tærter. Rabarber kan være farligt! Hvis man spiser rabarbers blade, bliver man syg.

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Aiden

Jan. 2, 2021

Why I choose Pimsleur.

Recently, I have considered taking a online English lesson. I found the a site like EnglishClass101, Rocket Language. I almost make a payment but I didn't, because I realized that just watching some lectures is not helpful. It could make me feel studying English for a hour, however that's not true. Nothing remains in my head.

I thought I need something to make me move. And then, I found Pimsleur. Although it has only audio lesson, it have great strength that make learner speak repeatly. I can concentrate on the lesson during the audio played. If watching normal lesson is passive study, Pimsleur is active learning.

Nevertheless, I am not sure that it is really works. I just want things to go well.

PS. Thanks for correction. Even if it is grammatically correct, please correct it naturally.

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Ceci

Jan. 2, 2021

1 janvier (coutumes du Jour de l'An)

Bien que ma famille n'ait pas fêté le Jour de l'An comme d'habitude, il y avait encore de certaines coutumes que nous avons respectées aujourd'hui. Par exemple, il ne faut pas dépenser d'argent ou sortir les poubelles. C'est à cause de l'idée que ce qu'on fait durant le Premier de l'An symbolise comment le reste de l'année se passera. Donc, si on achète quelque chose, ça indique qu'on perdra beaucoup de l'argent pendant l'année. De la même façon, si on sort les poubelles, on jettera et gâchera ses ressources. Nous avons aussi cuisiné un dîner un peu symbolique : nous avons mangé des nouilles, qui représentent la longévité. Ils étaient assez bons ; c'était la première fois où je les ai faits. En cuisinant, je me suis brûlée, alors j'espère que la prochaine fois, il n'y aura pas d'accidents !

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LucianoL

Jan. 2, 2021

The influence of books on our life

Books are extremely important for our life, not only because they provide information and improve skills, but also because they are an useful way of making contact with other cultures, and different points of view.

It can be debated, but I would say that books have been the "tool" through which civilization has reached this actual stage. Nowadays, we can see to and fro the influence of books on daily basis: our way of see the world was shaped by books and their ideas within them. In the same way, it´s impossible to argue that books are not helpful or a lost of time, because in fact they are - regardless of the genre of the book.

Sometimes, we watch on the TV a scientist talking about that nowadays, despite having a complete and handy access to books, we don´t read. Unfortunately, this phenom has been increasing since ten 10 ago without any interruption, but readers have not disappeared yet. Actually, I would say that we are experiencing a new increment in the percentage of people who are starting to read. Whether this is true or not, books will influence more and more on our decisions, and worldview, through their content. I hope that in this new year more people will give them an opportunity.

Thanks for reading!

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Jack

Jan. 2, 2021

Translation Practice

Fan Kexin is a Chinese skater. Her home is in Qitaihe, China, and many skaters are from there. When she was a child, her family was very poor. In 2003, she went to study skating at 9 years old. She joined the Chinese skating team at seventeen.

In 2012, she first participated in the World Skating Competition in England. She really wants to get first place because she can help her mom and dad to live a good life. She called her dad and mom as soon as she had just got the first place, and her whole family was very joyful.

Now, 26 years old Fan Kexin has participated eight times in the World Competition, and received first place five times. She hopes she can get first place in the Olympics Winter Game of 2022.

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garningsmannen

Jan. 2, 2021

Ämnen i varje lands filmer

Jag är öppen till det mesta, men här i Colombia teman brukar handla om motgång och hur man överkommer det, och det är alltid en gråtig historia där någon som lider bara försätter och lever. Det spelar ingen roll om du fattas en ben, du ska springa som alla andra och vara taksam för den andra benen du har kvar. Jag ibland gillar detta väg att tänka om problem men ibland det gillar jag inte, det beror på vad är problemet man har. Också det gör att våra filmer är så föruttsägbara.
Vad tänker ni? känner ni att filmer i ditt land brukar surfa en especifik ämne? I så fall, vad är det?

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ella

Jan. 2, 2021

Zusammenfassungen

Hallo,

heute hätte ich viele Hausaufgaben machen sollen, aber ich machte keine :). Eigentlich habe ich nur zwei Hausaufgaben. Die erste ist eine Hausarbeit und sie handelte sich von Terminologie von Gynäkologie. Die zweite geht es um ein Analyse über die Ereignisse, die ich von der Suche von Terminologie bekamm.

Aber die wichtigste Hausaufgabe war die Zusammenfassung von vier Texte auf Deutsch und ich habe sie nicht gemacht.

Vielleicht mache ich sie morgen, wenn ich nicht so erschöpf bin. Es ist Ferien!, warum sollte ich lange Hausaufgabe machen? Ach! Ich erinnere mich jezt, dass ich eine gute Studentin sein möchte. Und wenn ich mein Deutsch verbessern möchte, muss ich denn viel üben :)

Ok, das wars

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Jack

Jan. 2, 2021

Translation Practice

I used to go to the karaoke bar several times when I was studying in Beijing. Usually, I am not good at singing, but I can sing some Chinese songs, like Guangliang’s Fairy Tale. This song’s lyrics are not complicated, so everybody can try it. Recently, I have been very into Zhou Huajian’s 花心.The first time I heard this song was when I watched the movie [阳光普照]. I really like the lyrics “spring will go and come again. The flowers will fall and reopen again." The lyrics touched me a lot. It means to me that although today is hard, please don’t give up, because tomorrow is wonderful.

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Jack

Jan. 2, 2021

Translation Practice

I think I am a hard work woman. I am studying Chinese although it is hard.
There are some new words in unit13, I’d like to practice.
1, there is a restaurant downstairs from my house. My colleague said the dishes were very delicious. I wanted to go there and have a try.
2, there are too many people in the lift, let us walkupstairs. Well, but where are the stairs? It is behind.
3, children all stood up when the teacher entered the class.
4, you should stand up when you see the chairman of China.
5, please don’t forget to turn off the light when you go out.
6, I don’t like math, so I will sleep during math class.
7, does everybody watch TV and buy things online?

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bralow

Jan. 2, 2021

¡Feliz año nuevo!

finalmente dos mil venti es terminada

en 2020 aprendí much sobre mí. tuve hacer mucho autorreflexión sobre quien queiro ser y como queiro vivir. aprendí llorar (eso muy deficil para mí) y aprendí amar. todavia necesita aprendo much o mas pero este viaje de spiritual me háre un persona mejor.

espero que todos las personas año esté llena de la risas y amor

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Jack

Jan. 1, 2021

Translation Practice

This is a jigsaw I have just played. Two weeks ago, I found it occasionally at a shop store. I wanted to play this jigsaw puzzle as soon as I saw it. I thought it would be very interesting because I have never played a jigsaw puzzle about stars. I unexpectedly spent a whole week playing it. Generally, I used to play a jigsaw within 4 to 5 days. Why does this one take my whole week? Am I not a masochist? No matter how difficult it was, I finally got it done. But I could not find the last piece although I looked it up everywhere. I was afraid that it would be eaten by a pet.

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Flan_girl

Jan. 1, 2021

New Year

Unfortunately, the new year didn't start so well for me. However, I can only hope for the rest of the year to be better. I don't think we can say that something is good or bad. There's always a bit of both. I'll try to be more positive and look for the good in situations where there's more bad.

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Jack

Jan. 1, 2021

Translation Practice

Xiaowang’s phone rang and this was Linna’s call. Linna wanted to celebrate Xiaowang’s birthday on Wednesday and Xiaowang would be free on Wednesday. Linna told Xiaowang that her birthday party would be held at 7pm on Wednesday. There would be 23 guests. Xiaowang wanted to bring Linna a gift.

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