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天气
我今天的演讲题目是我们国家不同地方在同一季节里气候
目前，我们的国家大部分地区都已经进入了冬季，进入到了一年中最冷的季节。我想问大家一个问题? 你们觉得 在我们的国家 南方和北方的冬天，哪里更冷呢？这个问题好像似乎没有讨论的必要，因为从北方到南方的天气变化很大。在南方，一年的季节可以分成两季。半年是雨季，半年是干季。在南越，似乎没有冬天因为冬天天气不是很冷，中评气温只是25度左右。北方的气候跟南方不一样。一年分成四李：春，夏，秋，冬。在北越，冬天比较冷。最低的气温大概是3、4度。我老家是义安的，以前在庆和生活过六年，就以这两个城市作为标准来说。义安和庆和的一月天气有很大不同。这时我家乡的人们都穿着很多衣服以保持温暖。前天我跟亲戚视频聊天，他在老家穿着大棉袄我在穿着夏天的衣服。当我住在南方时，因为我不需要冬天的衣服，我不得不把它们扔掉。这时，虽然不如北方寒冷，但南方的天气也很凉爽和舒服。来南方以前，我真的以为我会很喜欢南方的天气.来了南方一年，我是真的很想念北方的寒冷，和家人在一起的棉被里的温暖。我记得在北方，每年开春儿看见迎春，桃花，菊花开始有花苞的时候心里就很开心的感觉。说这些也不是说我就那么不喜欢南方的气候，只是一年里能经历环境如此丰富的变化真的感觉很美好。庆和是最美丽的海滩之一，这里的天气也很好，我很喜欢这个地方。 无论天气如何，我都希望你会喜欢自己生活的地方
Jan. 9, 2021
Translation Practice
I am Ma Tianliang, and I am from Luoyang. The coincidence is that today is Christmas Day and my birthday. I am a university student with a computer science major. In other people’s view, I am nothing special, not handsome and don’t have a rich family. I never have a girlfriend. But although I am just twenty years old, I am a graduate student at Zhejiang university, and someone thinks this is my only pride.
Many people at my age have a lot of relatives, but I am not in the same situation. I don’t know who my father is. Several times I tried to ask my mom about my father, but she definitely didn’t want to talk about it and this question made her uncomfortable. So in the recent few years, I have never asked her again, but I hope one day I can meet my father. If someone isn’t often asked about my family, I would forget that everyone has a father.
To be honest, my mom’s background is not clear, and which is even a mystery. I know she was pregnant before she got married, and people look down at her. Because of the other’s discrimination, she rarely went out. The COVID pandemic this year exacerbated her lonely lifestyle. Our family is very poor: we wear second hand clothes, and eat simple food. As to how my mother makes money, I don’t know either. However, in my life, she supported me as much as she could, and I always trust her.
Today, when my classmates and I were eating Christmas apples, my mom unexpectedly came and told me seriously: “Ma Tianliang, you are already twenty years old; I should explain some things to you"I thought inside:" why did she come here from Luoyang? What is the matter going on?”
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Jan. 9, 2021
My favorite band
Today, I'm going to talk about my favorite band. I really love Mr.children of Japanese musical artist. I think their’s band name is interesting because “Mr” and “children” mean opposite. Their vocal is Kazutoshi Sakurai, who I respect the most in the world. He has a great singing voice and meaningful lyrics, so the people who listen to their song get into them. Of course, I’m also one of them. Whenever I was struggling with something, they always helped me. You have no idea how much they mean to me. I can’t thank them enough and have too many things I want to tell about them, so I can not write everything. Please listen to their song when you have a moment.
Jan. 9, 2021
琴棋书画的宇宙（3）
我是马天良，老家是洛阳，而今天我20岁了。巧合的是，今天也是圣诞日。我是一个大学生，计算机科学专业的。在别人的眼里，我没什么特别的、没那么帅，我家没那么有钱。我从来没有女朋友。可是尽管我才是20岁，我是浙江大学的一个研究生，有人说这是我的唯一天赋。
很多同龄的中国人有许多亲戚，可是我的情况不一样。我不认识自己的老爸。我几次对老妈尝试提问我的老爸是谁，不过她显然不想讨论这个话题，这一切让她不舒服。这样我几年来没提过我的老爸，然而，我偏偏还欲望有一天我可能认识老爸。要不是人们屡次地提问我家庭的情况，我说不定忘记普通的人有着老爸。
老实说，我老妈的背景很不清晰，甚至有点神秘。我知道了她年轻时没结婚却怀孕了，因此人家冷眼地看不起她。由于别人对她的偏见，她很少出门。今年的新冠疫情加剧了她孤单的生活方式。我们家很穷，我们穿着二手的衣服，吃着简单的主食。我老妈如何赚钱，连我也不知道。无论如何，在我一生中，她一直尽量支持我，我一直信任她。
今天，我在大学跟同屋们吃着“平安果”时，我老妈竟然来了严肃地对我说：“马天良，你已经20岁了，我应该给你解释一些事”。我在心里想：“她干吗从洛阳来到这里呢？这到底是怎么回事？”
Jan. 9, 2021
I have read great journal.
I have read the article "A vaccine is joyful news - but am I really ready to go back to the world?" written by Emma Brockes. I am very impressed with it. She said exactly what I'd like to say! See following phrase in the article.
“I want to be around people who don’t want me to speak,” a friend wrote to me the other day by text – we don’t talk on the phone; it requires too much effort – and I understood precisely what she meant.
I mean we were over-connected each other. There was no time to stop and think about ourself. We had to do something or meet someone endlessly without any time to look back. We believed that busy life was an indicator of success. Corona-19 is obviously bad news, but it gives us chances to look back.
Jan. 9, 2021
Translation Practice
I want to write about my hobbies.
[hobby one. Listen to music]
I like various styles of music. Especially rock music and metal music. Some time ago, I liked Mongolia music. Recently, my favorite music is Chinese popular music. Zhoushen is a splendid singer. Tang Hanxiao is a talented singer-songwriter. There are also many excellent singers. For example, A Yunga, Zheng Yunlong and so on. I especially focus on the Chinese entertainment circle. My favorite musicians: China, Zhoushen(I am a raw rice), Tang Hanxiao, Mao Buyi, Summer. Mongolia: THE HU, Khusugtun etc.
Jan. 9, 2021
Automobiles
Today, I started to go to a driving school to get a driving license. I already have a driving license for motorbikes, so I've decided to get a manual transmission license because changing gears is exciting. Nowadays, the number of MT cars is decreasing, and automatic transmission is common in Japan. Driving an AT car is easier, so people tend to have only AT license. How about in your country?
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Dry Air
In winter, my room is way too dry. I have a hygrometers. It always shows less than thirty percent. Sometimes, it doesn't measure humidity because it's too low. I easily get sore thort from dry air. I stock up some candies. I suck them when I have a sore thort. I sometimes dry laundry indoors to keep the air moist, but it doesn't work well. I'm interested in using a humidifier, but I heard that it's a bit hard to maintain. If you don't maintain it properly, mold could grow in the device. I should probably buy a humidifier and use it correctly so as not to dry in the room.
Jan. 9, 2021
The rise of late night anime
This week, tens of thousands people on twitter celebrated 10th anniversary of starting "Madoka Magica" on the air.
Ten years ago, I was still a high school student and indifferent toward Japanese anime. Moreover, I didn't have enough time to watch TV in order to work hard on studying for university entrance exam. But, even if I watched just one episode of these popular anime, such as "Madoka Magica" and "STEINS; GATE", I would be addict to them.
This decade must be a golden age for late night anime, which are broadcasted on TV and targeting for teens and adult audiences. The movie of late night anime had never earned over two billion yen until "Madoka Magica" sat a new record.
Last year, twelve movies earned over two billion yen in Japan even though theaters restricted the number of seats. Two of them are late night anime. One is my favorite anime "Violet Evergarden" and the another is "Demon Slayer". Surprisingly, "Demon Slayer" earned over thirty billion yen and established a Japanese record.
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Translation Practice
After self-study at night, I returned to my dormitory, and at that time, the room was very lively. There were about eight or nine girls around Liu Xixi. Each girl held a piece of cake and ate joyfully. I suddenly thought of the cake my older sister bought me, but I didn’t have time to figure out what was going on. Liu Xixi immediately held my hand and happily told me:“I am very happy that I didn’t expect someone to know that today is my birthday, and thoughtfully brought me a cake. And there are beautiful flowers and blessing words on the cake. It’s a pity that you came back late and didn’t see it.I was dumbfounded at once. Liu Xixi handed me a piece of cake and said “they all don’t know who sent the cake. You are the only person who left the room last and I guess you must know who sent the cake. Please tell me that person, is it girls? Or boys?Right then, someone joked"it is definitely a girl. Our Xixi is so ugly, which boy would like her?Xixi was very disappointed after hearing this word. She held my shoulder and urged me"quick, tell me” at the moment, I almost wanted to spoke out loudly that the cake was my older sister bought me. But seeing the happiness on each person’s face and the look of expectation on Xixi’s face, I can’t bear to turn everybody disappointed and make a fool of Xixi, so I had to say a lie “he is a handsome boy" wow "with Xixi’s hail, everybody clapped together. Somebody said that guy must have a crush on you secretly"Xixi laughed.
Jan. 9, 2021
Los puentes
Mi ciudad tiene muchos puentes porque está al lado de una bahía y tiene ríos cruzándola. Cuando estaba en la secundaria, tuve que cruzar al menos un puente al día. Un verano, una amiga me visitó de otra ciudad. Cuando salimos del aeropuerto y cruzamos un puente enorme en camino a mi casa, ella estaba asombrada a ver tanto agua por todos lados.
Creo que vaya donde vaya en mi vida, siempre me gustaría tener las aguas cerca.
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Journal 1/9/21
It seems in the winters, in the north of Canada, there are roads everywhere, even though they are just frozen lakes. This might be a beautiful scenery in the world. Although I have a short experience of fishing, I have never fish on a frozen lake. The fish in your picture is big, and I think it would be delicious because it is purely feral. I originally wanted to fish some big feral fish in a wild river, but they were all small crucians. I don’t like fishing in a fish pond because I don’t think it’s very interesting, and it wastes too much time. So I quit after about one year’s fishing.
There are several words that I can’t catch well in the penultimate paragraph. Could you please write them down for me?
The question in the last photo is how to say “hello” in Chinese, and my answer is 你好.
Besides, I want to know about New Year’s Day in Canada, and how many days off.
Moreover, do Canadians celebrate the Chinese New Year?
Jan. 9, 2021
Unterhaltung
- Es ist nicht zu spät für diese Art des Gespräches?
+ Ist es? Ich denke so nicht.
- Manchmal wünsche ich, dass ich Zuhause geblieben wäre.
+ Wieso?
- Alles war einfacher damals.
+ Ja und? Nicht alles muss immer einfacher sein. Du hättest ein langweiliges Leben mit Kinder wie eine Trophäenfrau gehabt. Klingt das ein Leben, das du haben möchtest?
- Nein, aber wenigstens hatte ich die Sicherheit und die Unterstützung von ihnen.
+ Von deiner Eltern?
- Ja, sie haben immer geträumt von Großkindern... Sogar, wenn sie von ihm kommen.
+ Vielleicht war das ein bisschen gemein. Ich entschuldige mich, Ich meinte das nicht so... Hör mal, iss die Pizza und nimmt die Waffe. Wir gehen schießen.
- Werden sie nicht uns hören?
+ Es ist möglich. Aber sie können uns nicht sehen und das ist unser Vorteil.
Jan. 9, 2021
Weekly Review
It’s the day for weekly review. Let’s start!
★Last week’s plans★
- Do Pimsleur in consecutive days.
- Write at least 3 journals.
- 5 word in scrapbook.
★This week’s Achievements & Reviewes★
《Achievements》
- Did Pimsleur in consecutive days
>> Conversation 01 ~ 06
- Wrote 5 journals.
>>First step is always stressful.
>>I found my recordings.
>>Returned to Evernote from Notion.
>>Why I choose Pimsleur.
>>Old memories are always beautiful.
- Collected 4 word in scrapbook.
>>consecutive, distraction, scrap, stressful/stressed
《Reviwes》
- Good : It’s satisfying generally at first step, especially Pimsleur in consecutive days.
- Not good : I didn’t review my writings at all. To learn more effectively, I need to review my writings.
★Next week’s plans★
- Last week’s plan + Review my writings.
Jan. 9, 2021
8 января 2021
Я так взолнована, что буду изучать русскую литературу.
Говорят, что объявят импичмент Трампу, но до сих пор ничего не случилось.
Надо сразу написать статью до того, как другая газета её напечатают.
Прости, что я не позвонила тебя вчера. У меня вылетело из головы.
Если все сложится, я перееду в Беларусь через два или три года.
Зимой утром мне так сложно бодрствовать, когда на улице всё холодно и темно.
Картина изображает момент, где отцы-основатели США подписали конституцию.
Jan. 8, 2021
La lluvia de ideas
¿Cuándo eras niño, te dijera tu maestro que fuera "tiempo de lluvia de ideas"? Aunque creía que era inútil y un perdido de tiempo, ahora veo su valor. Hay veces donde no puedo pensar en una idea de escribir. Cuando sucede, tengo que hacer un paso atrás y crear una lista, aunque a menudo la hago mentalmente. Me he dado cuenta de que es muy difícil escribir de algo al menos que tengas la actitud correcta. Por supuesto, cuando necesitas escribir de algo para practicar el idioma que estudias, no siempre tienes mucho tiempo. A menudo, solo tengo alrededor de treinta minutos en que puedo escribir. Esta falta de tiempo lo hace muy difícil pensar.
Para acomodarme a este problema, uso tres soluciones. El primero es un generador de ideas, los cuales los puede encontrar en muchos sitios de web. Este es útil porque te dan temas diferentes, y tienes que usar todo tu vocabulario para contestar la pregunta. Es aconsejable que decidas el tipo de generador que quieras antes de que necesites. Hay dos tipos principales, los de preguntas y los de temas. La mayoría del tiempo, uso los de temas porque me siento que me den más flexibilidad.
El segundo es el uno en que planeo todos mis temas con anticipación. Sin embargo, este puede llevar mucho tiempo, así que solo lo uso ocasionalmente. El tercero es la lluvia de ideas, el cual es muy útil pero también puede llevar mucho tiempo. Al fin y al cabo, creo que es importante que sepas lo que quieres escribir para que puedas ahorrar tiempo.
Dos oraciones con "por si acaso".
1. ¡Lleva tu impermeable por si acaso llueve!
2. Estoy por salir el consejo porque es muy aburrido, pero voy a quedarme, por si acaso.
Jan. 8, 2021
Translation Practice
There is an interesting word in English and German: banana republic. Of course, the banana republic is not a country that voted with bananas. This word generally means some small countries with unstable regimes in Latin America. In the twentieth, some giant US companies started to cultivate fruits in those countries and output them to the US. By economic stress and corruption, those companies have a bigger influence on those countries, including supporting dictator and human rights violations.
Some European social media comments: these days, the US has become a banana republic itself. Does Chinese have this word?
Jan. 8, 2021
Translation Practice
The internet has become a necessary thing in people’s lives. According to Ofcom, in April 2020, the British spent 4 hours on the internet every day. Compared with what they did in April 2019, it was 30 minutes longer. Now things we can do on the internet are getting more and more. For example, working, shopping, watching videos and playing games. The Internet has many benefits. For instance, we can send and receive emails and chat with family and friends. There is also plenty of information on the internet, so we can study, read ebooks and listen to music. Recently, people think shopping online is cheap and has various choices. Although the internet has a lot of advantages, it also has some disadvantages. For example, some people, especially young people and children, spend too much time on the internet and are addicted. Apart from that, children can communicate with people online, but sometimes, they will be bullied. Although the internet has disadvantages, it is still very useful and changes our lives every day.
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