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Jan. 11, 2021
Translation Practice
The next day, my mom asked her if she remembered what my mom had said, but my sister said: no. And then my mom repeated it again, and asked her again, but she still said: no. So my mom started to teach her to count fingers, one word by one word, and told her that when she counted to the seventeenth word, she could find my father.
Jan. 11, 2021
Translation Practice
Mom was aware that there were not many days left for her. One day, mom called my older sister to the front and said to her: "If one day I pass away, cannot raise you up, sorry, you must go find your father." My father's address is: Jiuda 1 team, Mingjing commune, Jiangyou County, Sichuan Province. Wu Daishou.
Jan. 11, 2021
Série sur Netflix
Je suis en train de regarder une série télé qui s'appelle "Spinning out". Il n'est pas terrible, mais je ne le recommande pas. Il y a beaucoup de séries qui sont bien mieux intelligents et créatifs. J'ai décidé de regarder cette série parce que je m'intéresse au patinage artistique dernièrement. J'ai commencé par regarder des compétitions russe pour pratiquer la langue, et puis j'ai cherché des séries sur le sport sur Netflix. En fait, j'ai regardé les premiers épisodes doublés en français, et je me suis aperçu que les voix des acteurs ajoutent beaucoup à l'expérience de visionnement. Dans l'original, on sent les emotions des personnages, et c'est difficile de reproduire cela, même si le scénario est bien traduit.
Demain, si j'en ai le temps, j'écrirai un petit résumé des dernières épisodes. Les verbes réflechis s'avèrent utile pour décrire les feuilletons : ils se détestent, ils s'aiment, ils se fâchent l'un contre l'autre, ils se maquillent, ils se soûlent et tout le tralala.
Jan. 11, 2021
Gilmore Girls
Para praticar, veo "Gilmore Girls" a Netflix en español.
Esta serie es sobre una madre y su hija quién viven en la pueblo ficticio, "Stars Hollow."
La hija se llama Rory y es muy inteligente. En el primer episodio, se acceptó en una escuela privada se llama Chilton.
La madre, Lorelai, era muy feliz para su hija. Pero, no sabía como pagarlo. Lorelai es una madre sola. Entonces necesitaba pedir ayuda de sus padres ricos.
Esta serie es muy graciosa y reconfortante. Lo veo de vez en cuando.
Jan. 10, 2021
Why do you learn foreign languages?
I read an article saying that people who get more free time due to the lockdown tend to start learning foreign languages. They are just killing the time, and besides, learning foreign languages helps you to get a new job. The author got interested in decoding the script on ancient architecture by learning Luwian, of which I never heard though.
Though I'm glad to read and correct articles written in Japanese, I want to know why those who live far from Japan got interested in Japanese. I guess that anime and manga enticed them to learn the original language.
Jan. 10, 2021
Translation Practice
[wait for me] column group invited his older sister to the show. She told him about a painful history. Back then, three people in his family were all abducted. First, they were abducted to Tangshan by traffickers, and then, they were turned to Anhui. After many setbacks, they finally came to his step-father’s home. His mom was ill, but his step-father’s family was very poor. to see a doctor for his mom, they had to chip in three, five or ten yuan.
Jan. 10, 2021
Translation Practice
Liufu is painful. For more than a decade, there has always been a knot in his heart: why does mom commit suicide? Where is his own father? He asks his step- father, but step- father doesn’t tell him. He asks his older sister, and she doesn’t know either. The only thing he can know is that his hometown is in Sichuan.
Jan. 10, 2021
Jan. 10, 2021
Les réseaux sociaux
Je ne les utilise pas beaucoup.
( Je crois que ne sont pas de mis âge).
J'ai Facebook et Twitter et, si bien je ne les utilise pas, si je reçois ce que mes amis téléchargent.
J'ai vu que le gens publient leur vie sans honte, téléchargent leurs photos et las voient plus d'une centaine de personnes, vraiment, sont-ils tous ses amis ?
J'utilise beaucoup Wassap pour communiquer avec ma famille et mes amis, pour envoyer des photos et des blagues.
Pendant la pandémie ils ont été très utiles pour que les gens ne se sentent pas seuls, isolés de leurs amis, en particulier, les jeunes.
Jan. 10, 2021
Quelle Semaine !
2020 était une mauvaise année. Ça a causé beaucoup de problèmes pour tout le monde. Mais voila, on est en 2021 et la prémière semaine de l'année était complètement folle. Les cas du Covid-19 continuent à augmenter alor que les vaccins sont distribués. L'attentat du Capitol à Washington a vraiment secoué le monde. Il y avait de nombreux supporters de Trump qui avaient refusé le résultat de l'élection présidentielle et ont décidé d'attaquer le Capitol. Pour moi, cet événement m'a étonné parce qu'il n'y avait pas de préparation de la police. C'était une honte. L'année dernière, le Capitol était bien sécurisé quand il y avait des manifestants qui manifestaient pour la justice de la vie des Noirs. Ça, c'est un "double standard". Ce jour-là, on a vu que la police a échoué et notre démocratie était en danger. Aprés quelques jours, Trump a été interdit d'utiliser les reseaux sociaux et il est vraiment dans le pétrin à cause de son mauvais comportement. On verra ce qui passera la semaine prochaine et pour le reste du janvier. C'est très inquiètant !
Jan. 10, 2021
Jan. 10, 2021
Translation Practice
Today, I want to talk about my hometown. My hometown is a small village which is located in the southeast part of England, and it is 60 kilometers from London, so most people in the village work in London. The village is quiet, and there are many children in the village. Maybe for the young, the village is a little boring because it doesn’t have shops and bars. I think a special thing for my village is that it has a long history. For example, there is a church built in the eleventh century in the village. When I was a child, I liked exploring around the village by bike, and played with kids from other villages. Children living in the village are able to experience freedom and relaxation.
Jan. 10, 2021
Fantasma parte dos
(Parte 2 de una serie, echa un vistazo a la primera parte para contexto :))
Decidí estudiar España con toda fuerza. Veía películas y series españolas. Estudiaba mapas y enmarcaba sitios que me llamaban la atención. El verano antes de que saliera, leí tres libros sobre la cultura, arte, cocina y gente de España. Leí sobre los 800 años del poder músulman, de conquistar y reconquistar y de la sangrienta guerra civil que todavía divide a los ciudadanos. Leí sobre cómo los españoles se reúnen en tiempos de tragedia, cómo comparten pan juntos y del latido del corazón nacional. Me enamoré del país. Leí más. Cambié mi acento. Tenía que experimentarlo por mí mismo.
Cuando ella murió, mi mamá dejó atrás un libro lleno de fotos y recuerdos de su tiempo en España. Una serie de fotos muestra ella en la ciudad, en su apartamento, viajes por España, su novio y las expresiones que heredé. La sección más larga del libro deconstruye la última fortaleza árabe de España que está por encima de la ciudad de Granada: la Alhambra. Sentada sobre una sección arrugada de montaña que se mete en la ciudad como un dedo, la Alhambra es una mezcolanza impresionante de arquitectura musulmana y cristiana fusionadas juntas. Un escritor medieval la describió como “una perla roja entre un mar de esmeraldas”, referiendo a la calidad roja de las paredes rodeadas por árboles florecientes. Por el número de fotos en el libro, el detalle que notó por sus notas sobre la fortaleza y la copia de “Cuentos de la Alhambra” que encontré en su cuarto, ella tenía que estar enamorada del edificio antiguo. Por cierto, estaba enamorado yo.
Durante mi año final de la universidad, fui a Granada para estudiar durante un semestre. Tan pronto como pude, visité la Alhambra y volví otra vez y otra vez. Miraba fijamente a las derruidas almenas anaranjadas y pensaba en mi madre caminando por los muros. Quería ver la fortaleza de todos sus ángulos, sentir como se cambia de día a día. Necesitaba saber cómo la luz deja llevar sobre ella. Quería agarrar el fantasma que se le aparece.
Jan. 10, 2021
If you had all the money in the world (part 2)
I want to continue my story about how you could invest in a business if you had all the money in the world. I would like to change the textbooks. As I said in the previous essay, the main problem is that the teacher only uses a small part of the book. The ideal situation would be that the teacher could choose one chapter (or less) from a textbook, another chapter from another book, etc. Obviously, the only way to do this is to use digital books.
But how to organise all this in a legal, easy, and efficient way so that the teacher can choose different parts of different books and build his own digital book?
Jan. 10, 2021
Jan. 10, 2021
Schreiben auf Deutsch
Ich habe mich gerade entscheiden dass ich mehr Deutsch schreiben muss. Seit ende März, habe ich viel Deutsch gelesen, hören und ab und zu habe ich ein bisschen gesprochen. Wenn ich kann, höre ich easy German an, und da habe ich eine gute idee bekommen. Eines des moderators versucht Spanisch zu lernen und hat empfiehlt dass eine gute Übung ist, 100 wörter jeden Tag zu schreiben ist. So, ich glaube jetzt, muss ich vielleicht dreimal pro woche einhundert wörter schreiben muss. Ich hoffe diese übung mein Deutsch verbessern kann. Gerade, habe ich vielleicht achtzig wörter geschrieben und brauche ein paar mehr um einhundert wörter zu erreichen.
Jan. 10, 2021
Jan. 10, 2021
Jan. 10, 2021
Translation Practice
January 19th, Sunday.
[hobby 3. Watching Chinese TV shows]
Recently, I like watching Chinese TV shows on YouTube. Most of the Chinese TV shows have subtitles. Even if you are not able to catch their meaning completely, you can overall understand them. I love "Travel Notes on Youth" the most, and I have watched it several times. Yangdi is a humorous person, and I like him.
Jan. 10, 2021
Jan. 10, 2021
Anonymität?
Es ist keine Neuigkeit, dass mann, wegen seiner Meinung, in den sozialen Netzwerken, Hasskommentare und Bedrohungen bekommen kann.
Vor kurzem, hat Bundestagspräsident Wolfgang Schäuble, einen Vorschlag gemacht, um dieses Problem zu lösen. Er is gegen die Anonymität im Nezt und will neue Regeln feststellen, um jeder im Internet seinen richtigen Namen zu nutzen.
Nach seiner Meinung, sollen die Regeln und Werte des Internets, die gleichen vom Welt sein.
Viele Meschen sind allerdings dagegen, weil Anonymität auch wichtig ist. Ohne Anonymität kann man sich vor Hass nicht schützen und die Opfer werden leichter identifiziert.
Außerdem beweist eine Untersuchung der Universität Zürich, dass wenn es um Hasskommentare geht, spielt die Anonymität der Täter keine wichtige Rolle. In der Tat, schreiben Meschen mehr Hasskommentare unter ihrem wirklichen Namen als unter einem falschen Name.
Jan. 10, 2021
Min snöelefant
Igår och idag har det snöat igen. Jag gick inte ut igår eftersom jag hade ont i kroppen men idag gick jag ut med min partner Zimon. Vi gick hos sin mormor som har en stor trädgård med mycket snö. På morgonen bakade jag en brownies tårta för att ta med till sin mormor. För det första lekande vi lite med hunden Diego runt huset med Zimon, sin mormor May och sin bror Lucaz. Sedan åt vi tårtan med kaffe och te för mig. Jag försöker att inte dricka kaffe för mycket. Bara två gånger varje månad är tillräckligt enligt min åsikt. Slutligen gick vi ut och startade jag att göra min elefants kroppen. Zimon och sin mormor lekte lite med snö och gjorde ett snöbollskrig. Zimon kände sig kall jättefort och gick tillbaka in i huset. May stannade ut för att hjälpa mig med snön. Jag tillbringade en timme och en halv med att börja elefanten men snart gick solen ner och kom natten. Temperaturen föll och det var för kallt för att stanna ut. Därför är det varför gick Zimon och jag tillbaka hemma. Jag ska komma tillbaka hos sin mormor imorgon för att avsluta elefanten. Men jag tror faktiskt att det skulle ta mig flera dagar, kanske två eller tre.
Men jag ser väldigt mycket fram emot att avsluta den. Jag hoppas att jag ska ha tid för att göra fler snödjur!
Jan. 10, 2021
Fictional dialogue between AI and human
K. voice: Change my status to available.
AI voice: Good morning, K. Today is 05.01.2026. At the daily meeting, I have taken for you, as agreed, only one task for today. You need to make the client's final presentation by next week. Also, David wants to discuss details about this presentation. You weren't available, so I took a free slot on Wednesday at 14:30. Is it OK for you?
K: Yes, it's ok. Am I not meeting Tess for brunch on Wednesday?
AI: She canceled it yesterday in chat.
K: Wait, what? Why don't I know anything? When did you chat with her?
AI: You assigned it to me yesterday because you wanted to concentrate on your yoga lesson. Chatting with Tess is not mandatory reportable, do you want to listen to the report now?
K: Right, I forgot. No, I don't have time, I need to start work now. Emm and you told me, that my boyfriend has some problems at work. So can you write to him that we can meet at...(pause)
AI: Whats about Saturday at 11 am?
K: Yes, it sounds good.
AI: Notification. The new version of Personal assistant is available. Do you want to get more information about the new features available to you?
K: Yes, I just wanted to take a break. I will open the website.
K. opens the website
The voice at the website: We take care of you. We want you to keep track of how much work your AI agents do for you. That's why we implemented the alienation scale.
K.: Alienation scale? What is that?
KI: Tess is calling. Do you want to answer?
K.: I'm free now, I guess yes.
Tess: So guess what? I get it!
K.: Hmm...It's cool (voice sounds puzzled)
Tess: Hey, what about you? What are you doing?
K.: Nothing, just checking the new features of my personal assistant. They have added a score, alienation score. Sounds strange
Tess: Finally! It's a result of our big project at the Ministry of digital health and wellbeing. I wrote about it yesterday. It took us forever to get this project approved! Have you seen the test?
K.: What test?
Tess: There should be a link to it.
K.: I don't see a... Oh, I see. The text is very small
Tess: I am not surprised... I think you should take the test, you often use an assistant for work, don't you? By the way, you know, while working on the project I talked to people who use it to communicate with family and friends! It's crazy...
K.: Hmm.. yes, crazy. But everybody uses them.
Tess: I am not
K.: Except you, of course
Tess: Just take a look and say what do you think about my work. I need to go, my boss is calling me. Bye!
K.: Bye, Tess
K.: Ok, let's start. How many times do you use KI to work? Hmm... Clearly more than once a day. Yes, KI?
KI: Yes. On average, we have collaborated 567 times a day in the last month.
K: Really?
K.: Last time I chatted with my parents...Hmm... When was the last time I texted my parents by myself?
KI: A month ago.
K.: That long?... Yes, I always have a lot of work at the end of the year.
KI: Should I set a notification to call your parents for you? Your dad goes through a tough time, maybe it's good to get more frequently in touch with him?
K.: Tough time? What do you mean?
KI: He took the news of his dementia symptoms badly. I can add a special module for patients with dementia. This will help to establish a more trusting and warm relationship between you. What do you think?.
....
KI.: K. can you hear me? Is everything alright?
Jan. 10, 2021
Winter
Ich habe eine Frage an euch. Ich wundere mich, ob es wirklich gesund ist, im Winter zu laufen.
Was ich damit meine ich, nächste Woche wird es kälter und wird wohl die ganze Woche schneien in meiner Stadt. Ich will ja laufen gehen, bin aber mir nicht sicher, ob das wirklich sinnvoll ist oder nicht. Man kann sich sehr einfach wegen des Schnees und gefrorener Fußgängerwegen verletzen. Tja, zumindest eine kleine Runde soll es vernünftig sein.
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