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How this Covid- 19 effects people life
Since the Covid -19 virus appeared in of public sight and the positive cases keep rising up in a lot of counties, people need to convert their lifestyle for the pandemic as we should fight the virus together, so people would wear the mask when they purpose to go out prevent infected by other people, also oppositely not to infect others. Meanwhile, having a social distance of 1 m between you and others on a public occasion, the huge changes people stay at home as far as possible, to decreased people's risk of infection.
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Oct. 13, 2020
日本語日記 10月12日
今日は忙しがった。月曜日で英作文のクラスがある。クラスの前に必要な読書と宿題をした。このクラスは4時から6半時から、私の一番長いクラスだ。毎月曜日で、このクラスの出席と準備はほとんど5時間をかかる。晩ご飯を食べるとき、「らき☆すた OVA」を観た。面白かった。「らき☆すた」のおかげで、次のアニメを観たいのは「涼宮ハルヒの憂鬱」だ。過去で観たけど、詳しく覚えない。でも、多分「Endless Eight Arc」を全て観ないけど。「Endless Eight」は8つのエピソードで同じことが起こる。でも、絵はそれぞれのエピソードで違う。続の映画のプロットに対して大事けど、ちょっとつまらない。
Oct. 13, 2020
Journal 2020.10.13.01
When I was in middle school, l had the experience of being a street vendor. At that time, among villages near my village, there was a village named Xiaolizhuang, and their villagers were all rich because they were doing vegetable trade in our home market town. At that time, every family in the countryside had a small vegetable garden for their self supply. So I thought, why couldn't I go to the market town to sell some green beans? We can't finish eating them anyway. My school was located in the market town too. It was about the first year of middle school. One day, when I was off class, I took a few handful of beans to the market town. I forgot what the price was back then, but I do remember that I didn't sell a piece of beans, even though there were some people who asked the price of them. Finally, I had to bring them home and eat them. That is the only time I have been a street vendor, even though nothing was sold, I remember that clearly until now.
Oct. 13, 2020
Shortsenteces14
1. bugün çok kasvetli o yüzden balık tutmaya gitmeyeceğim belki yarin gidebilirim. Today is very gloomy therefore i Will not go fishing today's maybe i can go tomorrow.
2. binada çok fazla kasvetli var çünkü futbol takımımız maçını kaybetti. there was a lot of gloom in the building because our football team lost the match.
3. Beyzbol sahasını güneş tarafından kavruldu. The baseball field was scorched by the sun.
4. yemeğim biraz daha kahvrulabilirse garsona sordum. İ asked the waiter if he could parch my meal a bit more.
5. Kuzey batısında florida'nın plajlarında zümrüt yeşili suyu var.
İn the Northwest of Florida there are beaches with emerald green water.
6. florida'nın kuzey batısında bölgesi Meksika Körfezinde zümrüt kıyısını isimli. The Northwest region of Florida on the gulf of Mexico is called the emerald coast.
7. Ayşe zümrüt bileziğini kayboldu. Ayşe lost her emerald bracelet.
8. mücevhercinin zümrüt kolyeleri pahalıdı düşündüm. İ thought the jewelers emerald necklaces were expensive.
9. gecenin ortasında uyandığım zaman geceyi uçsuz bucaksız görünüyor. When i wake up in the middle of the night, the night seems endless.
10. Bütün arkordeon müziği çeşitleri severim. İ like all kinds of accordion music.
11. evimde dedemin çalışmayan arkordeon. My grandpa's accordion which does not work is at my house.
12. akordeonu oynayan adam benim amcam. The man who is playing the accordion is my uncle.
13. odamın duvarının kırmızı rengi tür tuğla kırmızı isimi. The red color of my rooms walls is a type of red called brick red.
14. parka giden yolun gri tuğlaları var. The road which goes to the park has gray bricks.
15. tuğla fırının içinde bir pizza koyarız. we put a pizza into the brick oven.
16. Gölün arkasında bir tuğla evi de bir tekne var. There is a brick house and a boat behind the lake.
17. yağmur ve kasvetlilik günlerde korku filmlerine izlemeyi severim. İ like to watch horror movies on rainy and gloomy days.
18. Günün kasvetli parçası çoktan geçti. The gloomy part of the day has already passed.
Oct. 13, 2020
Cómo empecé a apreciar el arte
Nunca estaba muy interesada en la historia del arte hasta el año pasado. Siempre me gustaba dibujar y pintar (aunque no era muy buena) pero no entendía los cuadros en los museos.
En mi tercer año de la universidad, tenía la oportunidad para estudiar "reconocimiento del teatro," "reconocimiento del arte" o "reconocimiento de la música." Había decidido tomar la clase sobre música porque siempre me ha encantado ir a conciertos y de niña tocaba el cello en la orquesta joven de mi ciudad.
En el último momento, decidí cambiar mis planes y estudiar arte porque quería poder ir a un museo y apreciar las obras. Esta decisión hizo que me gustara más las técnicas de hacer arte y las formas, líneas y colores en los cuadros. También empecé a dibujar casi cada día. Hice amigos que a ellos también les gusta dibujar y hasta ahora compartimos artículos sobre el arte o mandamos los dibujos que hemos hecho.
Oct. 13, 2020
o que você faz no seu tempo livre?
Neste momento, por coisa do Covid, eu tenho muito tempo livre.
Eu approveito para estudar inglês, português e russo. Para esturdar estas idiomas, eu leio, eu escuto musica e eu assisto videos no Youtube.
Eu tambem approveito para apprendre a computação, eu apprendo o "Python".
Oct. 13, 2020
Oct. 13, 2020
Talk to the pro.
Few weeks ago, have an argument with my best friend.
He wants to immigrate to UK.
As a friend I will always support his decision.
But after I ask him few more questions about his planning.
I was sock by how poor his plan.
So, I told him he should talk to immigration consultant.
He reacted annoyingly because he said most consultants are not reliable.
Actually, I do agree that.
But to be fair I don’t all immigration consultant will be that worst.
To prove him wrong, I will talk to some consultants.
At the end, maybe I will move to other country too.
If I can found a good immigration consultant.
Oct. 12, 2020
Un libro que justo leí
Justo leí el libro "me llame estadounidense". Es la historia verdadera sobre un niño somalí que aprendió inglés a través de la música y las películas. El libro habla sobre su vida antes de que empiece a la guerra civil en Somalia. Creo que era muy triste, pero también tiene esperanza. El niño crecía durante la guerra, pero cuando era un adulto escapó la destrucción. Podía mudarse a los estados unidos y ahora es un traductor. La historia está llena de inspiración y esperanza. Lo recomiendo para todos.
No lo aprobé esta entrada.
Oct. 12, 2020
成功之路 · 提高篇 - 第八课
恰好
1) 我正要去买一台电脑，恰好现在电脑店打折出售。
2) 今天整天下雨了，恰好我昨天买了一把雨伞。
3) 我喜欢的人突然来我家访问，恰好我早上收拾干净了，要不没面子。
透气
1) 爷爷在家里抽烟，空气不好，要透气一点。
2) 早上起床以后我喜欢透气屋子。
3) 教师闷极了，请把窗口打开透透气。
一旦
1) 对高中学生高考很重要，一旦考得不好会影响学生们的生活前途。
2) 我只有一串钥匙，一旦丢掉了不知道怎么办才好。
3) 他不管结婚了，下班后还去酒吧见女人，一旦被妻子发现了，夫妇关系就会出现问题。
v+透了
1) 我解不透他在说什么呢。
2) 小李不懂事透了，单面批评老板的想法。
3) 啊，雨下透了！我忘了打雨伞，烦死我了。
非得
1) 学习外语，非得背生词不成。
2) 不管什么关系，非得下功夫不行。
3) 如果你想跑好一次马拉松，非得认真地操练不可。
还是……吧
1) 嗯，我怕他一个人去就会迷路了。还是我陪她去吧。
2) 根据天气预报明天会打雷，我们还是留在家把。
3) 在以大城市长大不太自由，对孩子来说还是住在农村好一点吧。
看把……v/adj+得
1) 快吃什么药物吧，看把你这么病得！
2) 你好好学习吧，看把你的成绩坏得！
3) 小王，你好好休息哦，看把你熊猫眼黑得！
Oct. 12, 2020
Was von Beruf bin ich? Raten Sie!
Für meinen Traumberuf muss man sieben Jahren in der Uni studieren. Außerdem muss man am Wochenende und manchmal am Nacht arbeiten. Die Arbeitszeit ist von 8 Uhr bis 16 Uhr, aber fast jeden Tag Überstunde machen ist sehr normal. Meine Arbeit ist schwer und wichtig für die Menschen. Meistens arbeite ich zusammen mit Kollegen aber manchmal muss ich allein arbeiten. Ich benutze ziemlich die Händen. Häufig arbeite ich in einem Krankenhaus oder in einer Praxis.
Könnten Sie raten, was ich beruflich mache?
Oct. 12, 2020
Oct. 12, 2020
Online-Schule
Wegen Coronavirus haben wir jetzt Online-Schule. Wir benutzen Zoom, um am Unterricht teilzunehmen. Ich finde es gut zuhause "in der Schule" zu sein, weil wir nicht so früh aufstehen müssen, und um den Verkehr nicht sorgen. Aber es ist auch schwieriger die Informationen, die wir lernen, zu verstehen und behalten. Habt ihr auch Online-Schule? Wenn ja, wie findet ihr sie?
Oct. 12, 2020
My pet!
Presently, I have no pets. I wish I had a dog or a parrot. Actually, my landlord does not allow me to keep pets. It is very unfortunate. Years ago, I had a parrot which I loved a lot. My parrot liked to eat walnuts and apples every day. One day, after finishing my work at the office, I got home and knocked on the door. When my sister opened the door, unfortunately, the parrot flew away.
It was my fault because my sister told me to close the door immediately because the parrot was out of the cage. But I did not listen to her and thought that the parrot also loves me and will not fly away. I was wrong. I kept the door open for around 10 seconds, and the parrot being an opportunist, flew away.
Oct. 12, 2020
Tier!
Ich habe zurzeit keine Haustiere. Doch ich hätte gern einen Hund oder Papagei. Mein Vermieter erlaubt mir es leider nicht, ein Haustier zu haben. Vor Jahren hatte ich einen Papagei, den ich viel liebte. Er wollte immer Walnuss essen. Äpfel hat ihm auch gefallen.
Als ich eines Tages aus meinem Büro nach Hause zurückkam, öffnete ich die Tür. Leider flog der Papagei weg. Ich war sehr wütend und konnte eine Woche lang nicht schlaffen. Der Papagei flog in der Umgebung meiner Wohnung. Immer wenn ich zur Arbeit ging, begleitete er mich.
Oct. 12, 2020
Contabilidade
Na contabilidade, há três tipos de relatórios financeiros: O balancete, o demonstração de resultados, e a declaração de patrimônio líquido. Cada um desses documentos contém informações financeiras importantes; como as ativas e despesas de uma certa pessoa ou empresa. São importantes para a comunicação entre duas empresas que querem fazer negócios.
Oct. 12, 2020
Effect of Modern Equipment on Language Skills
Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in
communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skills. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no shortage of opinion on using technological devices leaves negative effects on language skills or has positive benefits besides their disadvantages. In my opinion, utilizing modern equipment can give rise to productive results. I feel this way for several reasons.
First of all, these devices, as their names suggest, are a means to achieve some goals in the first place. This leads to the conclusion that the overall assessment of them depends on how and for what aims they are used. You see, the internet at the hands of evil people might result in catastrophes, or dignifying people can make the world a better place to live by making use of it. My personal experience is a great example of this. I have an enthusiastic desire to read. My house is rather small and does not have much space to keep books. The problem was solved easily by buying a laptop. Now I have hundreds of books inside my laptop. As a result, the range of my studies has increased significantly and my reading skills have improved tremendously. The possibility of reading these numbers of books became possible just by utilizing a modern-day device.
Secondly, there are some programs that correct your written documents, say, by identifying misspelled words. Although this may lead to the thought that these programs tempt people to do not attempt to improve their writing skills, on the contrary, it can help to achieve a higher skill easier by showing their mistakes on the spot. Moreover, people who have bad handwriting can gain benefit from writing programs. Drawing from my own experience, my handwriting is barely legible despite having tried hard to improve it. People had trouble reading my writing and were always complaining about my handwriting. Considering that using electronic devices has become the most important way to communicate in individuals’ lives, my problem has almost resolved by embracing new technological equipment. It's certainly clear to see why I believe the growing use of new technologies can help people improve the quality of their writing.
In conclusion, computers and mobile phones can lend themselves to improving language skills. This is because depending on how we use them they can be quite useful and they have options like correcting writing.
Oct. 12, 2020
What time do you normally go to bed?
What time do you normally go to bed?
I usually go to bed at 10:30 PM.
As I try to sleep 8 hours per night, i go to bed at 10:30 PM. Tt can take 15 to 30 minutes to fall asleep, so I normally sleep at 11PM. My alarm clock rings at 7 AM every morning. So I sleep 8 hours per night.
Oct. 12, 2020
Четвёртая глава книги "Азазель"
Фандорин пришёл в дом графа Зурова, чтобы играть в карты. Он похож на молодого человека из хорошей семьи, и опытние игроки сразу увидели в его шанс выиграть много денег.
Зуров сам предложил Фандорину играть с ним. Игра начилась и... Фандорин выиграл у Зурова более десяти тысячи рублей. Зуров рассердился, и начал кричать на Фандорина. Зуров хотел устроить дуэль, но Фандорин предложил ему бросить жребий. Тот кто проиграл застрелится.
Как объяснил Фандорина, это было бы лучше. Люди подумают что кто-то из них просто проиграл много денег и убил себя. Зуров согласился и велел слугу принести карты, шампанское, и револьвер.
Они решели вытащили карты из колоды, и у кого чёрная, тот будет первым стреляться. Через несколько секунд, у Фандорина была чёрная. Он вставил револьвер в рот, выстрелил... и остался жив. Зуров крикнул "Всё! Молодец!", и пригласил Фандорина к себе в кабинет.
В кабинете, Зуров хотел знать, что он мог сделать, чтобы Фандорин его простил. Фандорин просто хотел знать об Амалии Бежецкой. Зуров сказал что Амалия как наркотик для себя. Он боялся её больше чем любил. Он предупредил Фандорина, что она его убьёт, если тот не забыл про неё. Но Зуров подал ему письмо он получил от Амалии. На письме был адрес с другим именем - мисс Ольсен.
Oct. 12, 2020
Mitarbeitergespräch
Heute hatte ich mein Mitarbeitergespräch mit meinem Chef. Es ist besser gegangen, als ich gedacht hatte. Mein Chef ist offenbar zufrieden mit meiner Arbeit, aber er kann nicht gewähren, dass ich nächstes Jahr einen weiteren Vertrag bekommen werde, da das Corona-Virus viel Zufall im Spiel gebracht hat.
Na ja, zumindest weiß ich jetzt, dass ich einen guten Job mache.
Oct. 12, 2020
Über Entschlossenheit
Entschlossenheit ist sehr wichtig wann man ein Sprache lernst. Jeden Tag muss man üben, jeden Tag muss man auf diese Sprache sprechen. Es ist dann vielleicht ein bisschen selstsam das gibt manche Kurse wo man nur einmal in Woche geht und übt. Ob er nicht bei sich selbst lernt dann ist alles verloren. Es ist nicht einfach, aber es bekommt einfacher Tag für Tag.
Oct. 12, 2020
Fly?
So, we can’t go anywhere.
Hotel, tourists industrial and Airline Company is the no.1 victims.
I already mention that as a local, I can pay a cheap price to rent a hotel.
I also mention China is building a famous Japanese street to make the fan feel like in Japan.
Now the airline company!
Some airline company offering a trip that will take off and fly in the air for some hours then back to same airport.
When I hear such offer, I laugh immediately.
Who would stupid enough to take flight?
Well, all the tickets sold out almost immediately.
Some years later when we our son look back what had happened today.
They may laugh till one cries.
Oct. 12, 2020
From a review's comment for an academic manuscript.
Considering the paucity of the evidence in the field and the importance of the study subject, I strongly favor this work concerning publication. Nevertheless, several aspects should be considered before acceptance.
The manuscript is rather hard to read. Please redo editing and language correction for better flow. The table notes (the notes being presented below the notes) need to follow the guideline from ICMJE. The numbers in the manuscript should be consistent in format. For example, sensitivity was presented either as 26-61% or 0.86.
Did you mean "p < 0.05" instead of "p ≤ 0.05"?
The results should preferably be described in the result section instead of the discussion section.