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Dec. 3, 2019
Samstag, 30. November
Am Samstag, folgte ich den Schwarzfreitag ("Blackfriday" in den USA) Schnäppchens, weil ich etwas neues kaufen will. Diesmal möchte ich ein großes "curved" Bildschirm kaufen und vielleicht auch einen neuen Rechner. Mein derzeitiger Rechner ist nämlich ein Notebook, der schon drei Jahre alt ist. Deshalb möchte ich einen neuen Rechner kaufen, um mein alten Notebook zu ersetzen.
Dec. 3, 2019
Dec. 3, 2019
Problems with incorrect oils and car breaks over for good.
A few yeas ago i bough a car which consumes the oils more faster than normal. In reality i understand no care consumes the oils if that car has normal systems, so i begin to believe that the car has a symptom that the mechanic should to check. Then the problem at that time is no have enough money for to pay a evaluation for complete, so i need find solutions for the oils reduction, and for the good fortune of those times, there is agressive economic revival in my zone, and they open a city of dollars where to buy cheap everything, and for the good fortune of mine they sells oils of the w50 that is good for the systems in the car i talk about. So i go and discover that this product is economic to levels no one could believe, and if regular oils have the price of nine dollars this oils is only two dollars so i am surprise and buy a big stock to take to the garage and keep oils there for to use when the car has no more and with that protect the motor. In the start it is good and the motor makes sounds like kitty and all in house are elated for such good investing in the stock, and all feel is enough oils for to save enough cash to take car to mechanic and fix the repairs that needs. This situations evolutions to a hole new system and now I carry a card bored box in the trunks for to carry six or eight bottles of oils special if the travel is large, and we need to feed the motor because it consumptions the oil, and so far so good, no problem in nothing. Tough my friends who knows this tells me it is bad idea do this, and i say yes you have a dot, but i know what i do, and continue with plan to extension the life of the motor 'till the moment all money is sufficient for to take to the shop and take the mechanic for a spin so he analyzes the conditions the car has. But a little i dident know, and on one day with out nothing to give me warnings, the crackle in bellow the hood begins and i say oh my god what is this, and pull the over to the side of the road, and when i turn the cap clockwise counter it shoots drops of oils into the roof and the hood, and i am not believe this is happen but this is no time for to considerations to call for helps because the night is approaching so i pop the trunks and take one full bottle and three quarts of the second and spill in the inside of the motor, and when starts sounds good again so i drive into the night but keep in mind the feeling this is not the end. It is not the end. A little days after the crackle begins again under the roof of the hood, but now at the exit of the smoke tube too and it makes sounds like fartings with smoke smelling gasoline and is now bad to levels that we have no preparation, and again one more time we go to the trunks but this time its not only one bottle and three quarts but 3 bottles full and when start the car, the crackle got off the car but in my mind i believe this is not last time i hearing from him and drive into the road again with this emotions in my head. Now it is inevitable to think the cars has to go to the mechanic but the money that is put in the bank is not sufficient still and i opt for to talk to him and arrive at a deal, so this is what i say: this and this happen because i find bargain in the city of dollars, and spill the oils into the motor for ten months now and money is almost ready but not complete still, and a little time before the crackle begins and the second times it comes with the comany of smoke that comes out of the smoke tube, and people looks funny to the car when it drives, and specially in traffics with many many cars, and it cant's continue anymore, so please help me arrive to deal and maybe i pay you in payments, so he says to me when i stop: you are good man of good word and i have no problem give you this deal, but let's open the hood and ignite the car, and we do this but oh my god, the smoke fill into the room in less than two seconds and we suffocation to almost losing conscience and the crackle is impossible to support so we walked fast to the outside of the shop, and nothing we can do, we wait for the gasoline in the motor to consume and it finishes and the crackle ends and it is over. So i look at the car and he look at the car also and moves his head like he says no in silent with the eyes on the floor, and at the end of many seconds, he blows a little air and says me he need open the motor, and to come back three hours later, so i do this, and the surprise, is oh my god, the motor is open and all shiny parts have a cover of a liquid like honeys, and the mechanic says the oils we use for all this time is cover the motor in the inside and contaminations all the system and he needs to do the overhauls like the show on the TV with CHIP FOOS but the question in my head was this costs very expensive and i have terror for asking the total values of the overhauls whether it is costing one eye of the face and of course, he says yes. So i now travel to my work and to my home in the transport public to learn it is comfortable with the seats, and people like to talk to you, even in the times that you wish only to rest your eyes, i there i meet interesting peoples for to talk with, and too many travel in this transport all days so its like a community on tires, and after a month and two weeks the mechanic calls me to come and give the car a check and no crakles anymore, and he puts a new tube of smoke in the back in the style of FAST AND FURIOS the first, and likes me very much, and biggest recommendations he makes is to stay away from the oils of two dollars, and he tells me i have no worries again because a car no concumptions the oils if it is normal, only makes black the oils after many many kilometers like ten thousands, and i make a promise to me in my head that i can never fall in the fantasy of cheaps oils again. Today i still make payments for the overhauls but the car motor's makes purr like a brand new kittens.
Dec. 3, 2019
Dec. 3, 2019
Visiting with my dad
I’m trying to write about something happy or fun on here 😆
Today my son, mom, and I visited my dad in the hospital.
He had a heavy “appendix” and had an emergency operation.
Since it was a rare case and a tough situation, he’s still been in the hospital for over a month.
He’s getting better and better, and especially he looked fine today.
He said he enjoys making friends in the same room and talking nurses and his doctor 😂
He said he talked with a neighbor patient for 3 hours...!!
His social skill is still high in such a situation! 😂
We were really happy to see him and his neighbor patients!
Dec. 3, 2019
Dec. 3, 2019
Dec. 3, 2019
La première niege de cet hiver
Aujourd'hui il fait niege. Il n'y avait pas beaucoup de niege, et comme la terre n'était pas froid, la niege a toute disparu. Les élèves étaient très heureux de voir la niege! Voyant leur joie, j'ai pensé à ma jeunesse. Quand j'était jeune, j'ai aimé beaucoup la niege. S'il y avait beaucoup de niege, je ne suis pas allée à l'école. Ma soeur et mon frère et les voisins et moi a construit des bonhommes de niege, et nous avons bu du chocolat chaud. J'aimais bien ce temps!
Dec. 3, 2019
आज के पांच शब्द - वाक्य
3-12-2019:
आज के पांच शब्द:
1. छप्पर(m) – Roof
2. खोखला – Empty
3. रेशा(m) – Fiber
4. गद्दों – Mattresses
5. झोंपड़ा – Hut/Cottage
वाक्य:
1. रात भर छप्पर में सोते हुए तारों को देखते हुए हमारे प्यारों को याद करना बहुत रोमांटिक फील है.
2. खोखले जहाज आवाज करते हैं.
3. अच्छे स्वास्थ्य के लिए हमें अधिक फाइबर/ रेशा लेने चाहिए।
4. हर कमरे के एंट्रेंस में गद्दों रखना एक एक अच्छा काम/व्यवहार है.
5. जंगल में आदिवासी झोपड़ों में रहते हैं.
Dec. 3, 2019
Dec. 3, 2019
スリラー
子供の頃から物語が好きだ。小説だろうとゲームだろうと別に関係ない。面白い物語なら興味深い。中学生のころに俺の一番好きなジャンルはファンタジーだった。ドラゴンとか魔法使いとか勇者がよく出る物語。あの頃には、俺の一番好きだったファンタジー物語は”指輪物語”だった。指輪物語がその頃から俺の好みを影響した。
今にもファンタジーが好きけど、一番好きな物語のジャンルが変わった。今、一番好きがスリラーだ (マイケル・ジャクソンの曲じゃない。。。）。
”スリラー”が何のジャンルかって誰かに言われたら、俺の答えは”テンションが高い物語”。登場人物が凄く危ない状況に落ちて、そして状況を克服しなければならない。登場人物に、勝利がもちろん１００％じゃなくて、彼らの死の危険がある。
最近、スリラーゲームをプレイした事があった。日本のゲームだった。そのゲームに、登場人物が悪い組織にでかいビルに監禁された。彼らに脱出可能性があったけど、渡された目的を達成する必要があった。目的がそれぞれだった。”お前いがいに皆を殺せ”とか、”死亡した人物を5人発見して”、とか。その目的を制限時間以内にクリアしなければならない必要があった。できないなら。。。死亡。ビルにそれぞれの武器が散った。鉄パイプから機械銃。凄く面白いゲームだった。
いいスリラーを知ってる人がいるなら、教えてくれ。”カイジ”を見た頃から、そのようなアニメを探している。
Dec. 3, 2019
三番
土曜日：
土曜日は普段の日でした。9時から5時まで働いたのにちょっと問題がありました。仕事の冷蔵庫の中には氷がたくさんありました。私と同僚は何かをして考えました。私たちは冷蔵庫を消して、掃除をしました。
その日も新しい先生に会いました。その人は他の同じところに働いてる先生と研修していたから私たちは会えました。仕事のあと、新しい先生はたくさんの荷物があったから私は駅まで彼に乗せてあげました。運転しながら私たちは話していました。これはその人の初めて日本に来たから彼に色なものと言いました。
日曜日：
私は何も全然しませんでした。ゲームをして、ご飯を作りましただけ。
月曜日：
毎月曜日日本語の授業のために市役所に行きます。ネイティブスピーカーと話せるようにいつも役に立つといいです。そのあと、ご飯の材料のためにスーパーに行きました。その夜はフライドチキンを作りました。それ以外、毎日中ゲームをしました。
Dec. 3, 2019
Dec. 2, 2019
Dec. 2, 2019
The local chidhood store around my block.
Every person in the world is suppose to have a memory of the block where he live his lives. There are memories of the colors in the houses, and the smells in summers or winters, and the vision of the sky where the sun is yellow and the rest is blue, with the clouds flying east towards west and viceversa, and in the streets, the vision of the local dogs in stray situations who live well with the other who are property of the owners, and in general, the typic picture a memory of the childhood has when you remember. The edifices are of various natures, because in only one block can have the one for the meats, the other for repairs the cars, the hospital, and the bakers for the morning biscuit. All together in the space of a block, like an ecosystem in essential balance to support others. I know this because my block in the childhood had the bakers store, and the tortilla store, and the bicycle store, and the favorite of all the childrens was the local store for candies, snacks, fruits, cold beverages, and artesanal syrup for to put in a bag of fruits that all childrens believed it a feast for the senses. All boys who had a life in the block, asks the mother of each for a coin of various denominations that can to be 1 cent, 5 cent, 10 cent, 25, cent, 50 cent, or 100 cent that we call with the name of the national flying bird that we call eagle and you have to not confusion with the eagle from the bigger country in the direction North in relation to the latitude of the block of my childhood. If the mother of the kid gives the coin of the 100, that is like giving naturals powers because you now have the power of shopping almost ten times more than the childrens who only receive the coin of 10 cents. I am always in the center. My fathers were very very very cool all times because they put in my hand a coin of 50 scents and when I put in my pocket it feels like it has much power of purchase. (all candies and fruits and snacks were as cheap as only 3 cents a pop) so 50 was like millionaire in the vision of a children who only knows coins for after school.
The local store in the center of my story was legends most important because of the lady who owners the store. She was loving all the time, to assist, to prepare the syrups, to incorporate the promotions of the sodas with the caps of the bottles, or the stickers of soccer football during the mundials cups, and i remember specials the Italy 90 for the pet that mundial was a boy of squares with the head of a soccer football ball. Ciao is the name, that is translates to good byes. So this lady never lost a chance to make your days specials, and when the day of the summer were with us, she makes delicious icecreams that she puts in bags, and you will suck the bag as you runs playing soccer football, or a game of tags. She has a name special for each of the childrens like cauliflower head for the kids with curlys in his hair who has a patch of white hair on the top. She calls Hammock face the kid that laughters with the mouth open and moves in motions to left and right. She calls mama mia the girl that has a mother that hears ABBA all days, and you can listen from the outside of her house. She calls water bottle the kid that always carries a bottle old of purification water that out of the blue he takes with him every place he goes and she calls this boy water bottle. This was my favorite special name, because in my idiom this translations to little bottle of little water, and is funny. She was a stapler in my town, she was an institute in my neighbors, she was a wisdom in my block.
She is very religions and you can see all around from the second you enters by the doors in all the walls. She has the pictures of all saints she believes, and she never eliminates, only contributions more to the posters on the walls. Special is when during the week holly, when all the roads are covered in carpets of shavings, and fruits the contain as many colors of two times the colors of the rainbow, and she obtains one more poster for the wall on the store, and it looks fantastic now because it all does many sense. All looks like collaging together, and give mystical emotion to the room with the bars and the snacks, and ever the bell sounds more ceremony now after the addition of the new poster.
The break through comes when she begins to serve lunches before and after the noon, and all now can come in and sit to eat. The smells are covering all the air and no nose is abandoned or ignored because you can resist, you cannot resist the fragance of the chickens boiling in the water, and the vegetables cooking in the kitchen, and the tortillas burning on top of the giant disk where to make tortillas of corn, and i'm telling you, it is precious to see this sight, because all childrens who are now adults and remember this store can agreement with me in so that she transported you to other universe with the aromas she covers the store now, specially in the days of the weekend because she cooks cakes of figs that are covering with orchata syrup, which is a syrup that she makes with the tradition drink of my town, and all persons from other blocks will come walking like zombies attracting by the frangance of the figs, and it flavors, o my goodness, like nothing is there outside. Her name was Abuela Mirna, and the store has a big letter yellow and blue with also the name of the store: TIENDA MIRNA, and no person can forget this letter even it is no there no more, because the store is no exist in this place after Abuela Mirna has to go for another place to live. She neves says the godbyes to no person, all you know she has the store open one day and cooks delicios food and give warm welcomes to the childrens and the persons that visit, and you close your eyes and when open, she is away, and the edifice is now a different color and the big letter with the name up the door of the store is in other place, and the door never opens again.
All the childrens that plays their in the years before Italy ninety who are now adults remember from affections the sentiments in their hearts that born from the permanence in this place enjoying the snacks, and the figs, and the syrups with the fruits. This is before the inventions of the internet so there are no pictures or films but you must to believe mine words, it is a lovely place that lives in the memory of the local children who lives there in the past.
Dec. 2, 2019
覚えなくいい単語 (”朱雀”とか）
俺の知っている日本語の単語を増やすためゲームから知らない単語を抽出しコンピュータプログラムに入力して覚えられるようになるための練習をする。語彙の能力を強化事だ。これは俺の日本語勉強基本だ。役に立つと思うけど、覚えなくいい単語を入力しまったことがある。例として、”朱雀”。なんのゲームから出たを忘れしまったけど、珍しい単語かも。Googleで調べた後、朱雀が何かの炎の鳥を分かった。中国の何かの伝説の妖怪のような物。これをプログラムから削除していいかも。まず、”朱雀”をプログラムに入力した俺は一体何を考えてた。。。
けど、それをしたとたんに、次のゲームに朱雀がまた出て、悔しい思いを味わうかもしれない。
Dec. 2, 2019
2 December 2019
Attempting to write more complex sentences!
जब मैं आज सुबह जागी, मैंने देखा की बर्फ गिरी है । यद्यपि, बर्फ के लिए मौसम बहुत गर्म था। बाहर टेंपरेचर 2 डिग्री सेल्सियस है, इसलिए टेम्परेचर कि वजह से बर्फ पहले ही पिघल चुकी है।
मैं आज बिंगो हॉल में काम करूंगी। मैं आज अपने नाना-नानी को डॉक्टर के पास ले जा रही थी लेकिन उन्हें अच्छा नहीं लग रहा था। मैं अगले हफ्ते उन्हें वहां ले जाऊंगी।
Dec. 2, 2019
Les chats dans mon bureau
Bonjour tout le monde !
Puisque je voudrais apprendre parler et écrire en français, je me promets que je vais écrire une chose chaque journée. Alors, aujourd'hui, je voudrais écrire à propos de quelques chats je connais.
Dans l'enceinte de mon bureau, nous gardons les chats et chatons. Il y a 2 ans lorsque nous avons sauvé un chat femelle. Elle a donné le naissance à deux chats.
Le première chat, est mâle et on lui appelle "Jack". Il est couleur gingembre et blanc. Il est très gros car il mange beaucoup.
La deuxième chat, on elle appelle "Jill". Elle est pleine blanche. Tous les deux chats sont très mignons.
Il y a 1 an depuis Jill a donné naissance à quatre chatons. Tous les chatons de Jill sont blancs et gris sauf un, qui est noir.
On a adopté deux chatons donc, maintenant, il y a quatres chats dans le bureau : Jack, Jill, et deux chatons sans noms.
Dec. 2, 2019
आज के पांच शब्द - वाक्य
2-12-2019:
आज के पांच शब्द:
1. मलाई(f) – Cream
2. लटकना(v) – Hang
3. भटकना(v) – Wander
4. गूंथना(v) – Interlock
5. बुनना(v) – Knit/Wave
वाक्य:
1. केक के ऊपर मलाई को पेस्ट/डोप करना ही बाक़ी है.
2. मैं अपने घर के मेरे कमरे में फैन को रंगबिरंगा बल्ब लटक किया हूँ.
3. कुछ लोग पराकाष्टि रात में सड़कों पर भटकते हैं.
4. वे दोनों एक हाथ को दूसरे से ऐसा गूंथ किया, जैसा अभी मैरिड हुयी.
5. मुझको कपडे बुनना आता हैं.
Dec. 2, 2019
Ma ville
Bonjour à tous ! Aujourd'hui je vais écrire quelque chose à propos de ma ville.
J'habite à Mumbai en Inde depuis plus de 20 ans. C'est un de les plus grands villes du monde par population. Il abrite toutes les types différents de personnes : les riche et les pauvres, les vieux et jeunes; qui viennent de partes différent de le pays et le monde aussi.
La vie dans cette ville est très vite. Tout le monde est très particulier de les temps. Même un peu de retard peux faire un gros désordre. Si vous manquez au train qui départ à le vrai temps par juste quelques minutes, vous aurez perdu beaucoup de temps importants.
Parler à propos du trains, le chemin de fer est très important pour la vie dans cette ville. On en s'appelle "le lifeline de la ville". Il est la plus d'occupé chemin de fer dans le monde parce qu'il apporte plus de 7.5 millions de personnes chaque jour (ça fait plus que la population de quelques pays!) Il y a un train chaque 3-5 minutes mais ça n'est pas suffisant car il y a beaucoup de monde toujours.
Après un jour fatiguée de travail, une personne de Mumbai adore rester chez lui et se détendre sans aller dehors. La vie ici est vraiment difficile.
Dec. 2, 2019
Dec. 2, 2019
Freitag, 29. November
Es ist etwas schrecklich, wenn man etwas wichtig nicht sich erinnern kann. Das Gefühl, das ich jetzt habe, ist eins von Angst. Als ich jeden Tag versuche etwas zu schreiben, hier auf dieser Website, manchmal habe ich das Gefühl, dass ich einfache Sätze nicht bauen kann. Also, was ich will sagen ist dass manchmal, Einatmen ist sehr schwer zu bekommen.
Dec. 2, 2019
1 December 2019
मैंने आज क्षितिज की मां से बात करी। हमने बहुत देर से बात नहीं करी लेकिन हम एक दूसरे को समझ सकते है! मैं हिंदी में और बोलना चाहती हूं। अधिकतर में केवल लिखती हूं और मैं कभी नहीं बोलती हूं।
मेरे बॉयफ्रेंड की पीठ पर चोट लग गई। मैंने उसको medicine दी। कल वोह घर से काम कर रहा है। मुझे लगता है कि उसे जल्दी बेतर लगेगा।
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