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Should school put the equal emphasis on subjects like music?
Some people argue that subjects like music, art and drama should share the equal importance with other school subjects. This essay totally agree with this statement because it helps students to develop their potential and to relax.
Providing primary students with more subjects like music, art and drama encourages them to fully develop their own potential in their young age. This is to say that classes like music and art service as a stimulus to help students to find out their own talents since gifts for different fields vary from person to person. Therefore, children can figure out what they good at with more exposure to related fields because their ability in this field can be fully developed only if it can be found in their young age. For example, it was continuous practice since his was 11 that make Langlang one of the most renowned pianist in China.
Giving the same importance on subjects like music and drama is a good way to relief students from their heavy study. In other words, now that students are under considerable pressure in academia because they are asked to become top students in classrooms by their parents as well as society, they tend to hit their books all days. In this way, their will be burned out, which is detrimental to their body and psychology. For example, a survey from Tianjin university shows that teenagers from schools where more music and drama courses are provided are healthier both in their physical and psychological than those who from schools where provide less.
In conclusion, I totally agree with that schools should put more focus on subjects like music and drama because it makes a contribution to develop students potential by motivating them and it also serves as a good method to unwind.
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Jan. 16, 2021
Over mezelf
Hallo. Mijn naam is Dawid en ik kom uit Polen. Ik ben 24 jaar oud en ik werk in HR bij Philips. Ik woon in de derde grootste stad van Polen - Łódź. Ik spreek vloeiend Pools en Engels. Ik leer Spans en Nederlands. Ik woon in het centrum van de stad in een klein appartement. Mijn vrienden wonen in andere regio's dus ik reis vaak. Ik vind reizen heel boeiend. Ik ben in veel Europese landen geweest maar in het Western van het continent dus ik wil ooit ook Oekraïne of Moldavië bezoeken. Na het werk kook ik graag. Ik kan geweldige sushi maken! Als ik vrij heb, kijk ik vaak Netflix of ik lees boeken. Meestal in het Engels of in het Nederlands. Mijn niveau van het Spaans is te laag om dit te doen. In het Pools vind ik het zinloos omdat ik de taal elke dag gebruik. Ik hoop dat de corona virus snel voorbij is zodat ik naar een restaurant of kroeg kan gaan. :)
Jan. 16, 2021
Le 16 janvier - Introduction
Bonjour à toutes et à tous ! Mon vrai nom est Viacheslav mais tout le monde m'appelle Slava. C'est plus court, plus facile à prononcer et mémoriser. Basé sur mon nom, des gens souvent assument que je suis une fille, mais ce n'est pas le cas. Je suis un garçon de 30 ans d'origine Russe. Je suis chercheur. Je travaille en chimie à l'université. J'enseigne, mais pas trop. Le plus part de mon temps je fais des manipulations au laboratoire, analyse des résultats et rapporte mes découvertes scientifiques. Pour le moment, je bosse en France et d'ailleurs j'apprends le français. Merci de lire et corriger mes posts. Ça m'aide énormément pour mon apprentissage.
Jan. 16, 2021
琴棋书画的宇宙（5）
我和老妈聊了颇长一段时间的天。我心里存在着矛盾。一个方面就是我一生中依赖和毫无怀疑地相信她。据我所知，我老妈从来没有说谎，而且她目前说的也跟事实一致。同时另一个方面是，她的故事听起来像虚构作品一样的难以置信。就像一位业余作家坐在咖啡厅一边喝杯咖啡一边写着短篇小说。有的人相信地球是平的、月球着陆是精心虚构的，还有无数其他的阴谋论。也许老妈在互联网找到了这样的网站，被阴谋论者洗脑。
我无语了，想着想着。老妈坐在对面，期待地望着我。过了一会儿，我问道：“那，我的老爸呢？”
她的眼神变成了更不耐烦，说：“儿子，你没听见我说的呢？你没有老爸。”
我忍不住喊道：“这不可能啊～。如果这是一种恶作剧，那么我觉得不好笑。”
我的话让老妈失望地叹了口气，说：“20年来，没有人相信我。你也不会呢？我不是在撒谎！我不是在骗你！”那时，老妈站了起来，开始收拾东西准备走。她补充道：“希望有一天你会了解。那一天打翻了我的世界。我所有的亲戚和朋友迟早感到耻辱而减少联络了。我不告诉你是为了保护你不遭受同样冷淡的对待。”
我问道：“那你为什么在疫情期间内来这里告诉我？”
她说：“我再也受不了了！你难道觉得我喜欢自己的生活方式？我受够了！算了。我现在告诉过你了，所以这种折磨结束了。”
Jan. 16, 2021
Boar #1
[ original, first version ]
In my workplace shift begins with roll call and his name was one of the few that I've easly learned and known who it belongs to. He caught my attention in the first sight, he seemed to be a very cool person. Confident. Funny. Experienced with work and people. He given this kind of "high school boy" vibe, even though he looks like full grown up men with his more than averge atlethic body and beard. But his attitude, jokes and sparkles in the eyes shown his very young, boyish spirit.
I think he didn't notice me at all. I was quiet, focused on doing my job. For first months completely uninterested in making friends or any socialization.
Things changed with the new year and his email - invitation for running session. I have a past with running. I came up to him to ask about details. In the ned those running session didn't work out, but at least or more importantly it started our relationship.
It grows slowly, organicaly.
I believe that for the beginning he was talking to me just to kill the time, to do anything except work. Maybe later he was talking to me bacuase I was always ready to listen about his passion.
He started to put tricks on me and I did not remain in debt. From turning off a device one of us was using or shooting the rubber band at each other to jostling and wrestling. It was fun, I smiled and laughed a lot thanks to him.
One of the reason I trusted him and felt comfortable around him was that I've known his girlfriend. She was working at the same company, but at higher position. She was beautiful, smart and kind. A bit intimidating for me. Because I respected her, I thought "If she trust him, then he must be a good guy and I can trust him as well".
We went to run together once. He gave me his banana to my oatmeal. During my vaccation I was updateing him how my running is doing. You know, small things. We were jus a colleagues from work.
There was... an accident in my family. He was one of the few that asked me what's wrong with concerd. He respected that I didn't want to talk about it and offered me a hug which I accepted.
Some time later there was something abviously wrong with him. I wasn't brave enough to ask why. I tried to find a balance between joking around and leaving him alone in peace. I wanted to my action speak "hey, if you need me I'm here, you can talk with me what's on your mind or I can help with distracted you from trouble". Even though I was full of doubts. Should I engage more? He surely have more trusted family and friends which he can talk with, who can give him a good advice and comfort.
I don't have enough wisdom nor experience to be a good advisor. I could only said to him "I'm sorry".
Some time later he said that actually my reaction was one of the best and that chocolate bar I bought, put in the box and throw at him from the distance (I tried to remain anonymous but somehow he figured me out) made him feel a little better.
Ironically, I asked his girlfriend what kind of sweets he likes and she suggested me that chocolate bar. Later I learned that she broke up with him and that was a reason for his anger and sadnes.
~ to be continued ~
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Jan. 16, 2021
I Need Paper.
Lately, there are many people who study with electronic devices like iPad. That looks great because of beautiful templates, variety colors, unlimited space, ease of searching. I also like to use the device and program like Evernote on PC. It helps me organize everything in one space and I can access anytime, anywhere.
However, it's not all mighty tool. It's very effective to record something, but not effective to study something. I can't take intense concentration on what I study at all when I use the electronic device. I don't mean game or youtube, but "not paper". Paper is a very crucial material. Without paper, I don't feel like I'm studying (actually I can't memorize anything from the monitor.). I know there are people who it doesn't matter to use paper. They are grown up with these devices and used to it.). But, as one of the analogue person, I really need paper and I'd like to buy a suitable printer.
Thanks for the corrections. Even if it is grammatically correct, please correct it naturally.
Jan. 16, 2021
第二次学舞蹈
因为中国的舞蹈老师很严格，容易对学生发脾气，我父母就没让我继续学习舞蹈。这是我长大后的一个遗憾，所以二十岁的我要重新开始积累舞蹈基础。在美国住发现这边除了专业舞蹈学院外就没有任何"狠"的老师，这反而让我感觉遗憾。小时候的我要是有温柔的老师会感觉如释重负，但现在的我却想认识一位严格，可以批评我的教师。
我已经不住在城市里，所以学舞蹈完全要靠自己努力。所以几个月前我为了从基础重学而开始练劈叉，得到了很多关于柔韧性的收获。以前我父母跟我说：“你都这么大了，不可能练出任何柔韧性。” ，所以我上高中时没有追求跳舞的梦想。现在我已经意识到他们所说的缺陷，但只要我坚持练习真的会有收获。我唯一后悔的事是没有早点做自己想做的爱好！
Jan. 16, 2021
ZZ2
Credo che, quello che ancora mi sembra molto difficile è capire gli scherzi in italiano.
Ho sentito un podcast che hanno detto tantissime ma, non ho capito niente. Alcuni usavano parole che non abbia sentito mai. So che gli umorismo è una cosa complicata di capire perché coinvolge tantissime idea precedenti, contesto culturale etc, etc.
Nella mia biblioteca ho trovato un libro di saggi da Luigi Pirandello chiamato; Umorismo, ma la cosa non va bene con quello libro, non mi fa ridere niente, dal altro lato, mi ricordo un libro; "Il nome della Rosa" scritto da Umberto Eco, mi sembrano molto grazioso, gli ho letto in spagnolo, inglese e in italiano.
Mi ricordo una parte che raccontava di come un pio sacerdote ha usato la sua intelligenza per umiliare a quelli che lo torturano... San Lorenzo...magari San Lucrecio, non mi ricordo bene...
Cosa devo fare? Vendere mia anima al Diavolo per farmi capire gli scherzi, oppure pregare tutto il giorno a Dio?
Mamma mia cosa dovrò fare per capire il umorismo italiano?
------Ho ricordato il passaggio-------
Si racconta di san Mauro che i pagani lo posero nell'acqua bollente ed egli si lamenta che il bagno fosse troppo freddo; il governatore pagano mise stoltamente la mano nell'acqua per
controllare, e si ustiona. Bella azione di quel santo martire che ridicolizzí i nemici della fede."
:)
Jan. 16, 2021
Comida casera
Esta semana he escuchado muchos episodios del podcast "Home Cooking." Los presentadores empezaron el podcast cuando la cuarentena empezó en marzo. Los escuchadores pueden dejar una nota de voz con una pregunta (las preguntas suelen enfocar en cómo usar algún ingrediente). Este podcast me hace reír :)
Jan. 16, 2021
Trecho de um livro, traduzido.
A sala ficou quieta novamente, exceto pelo assobio rítmico do respirador. O enfermeiro se sentou e esperou. Ele ia ficar lá na sala até que seu paciente abrisse os olhos dela. Depois ele ia beija-la, pois lá no fundo ele sabia que ele a amava; mesmo que não pudesse admitir isso para si mesmo
Jan. 16, 2021
Translation Practice
In 1999, He Qingkui wrote a short play for Zhao Benshan.
After reading the play, Zhao Benshan was worried about who was suitable for performing it. He thought that it was obviously not suitable for Gao Xiumin, so finally, he had to ask Song Dandan. Zhao Benshan called Song Dandan but he didn't directly tell her that he wanted to perform on the Spring Festival English Show with her.
He just told her that there was a good script that was worth seeing. After all, Song Dandan's partner was Huanghong at that time. Back then, Song Dandan faced a dilemma: it was also the time after Song Dandan's divorce with Yingda.
She had to raise her kids while working. It was a tough time for her. The negative effects from her divorce with Yingda are not small and her career was also in a tepid state.
Although every year she perform on the Spring Festival Evening Show with Huanghong, it didn't have an ideal effect. She also needed some changes. After seeing the script, Song Danda was tempted.
The script was so nice, and it would be a pity if missed the chance. After weighing the pros and cons, Song Danda agreed to go to the Spring Festival Evening Show with Zhao Benshan to perform Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow.. Nice script added excellent performer, it's difficult to perform badly.
The cooperation of the two was really a hit and the program successfully won the first prize of language program that year, which also started the prelude of the two people's cooperation for many years. In 2006, during the performance of Xiao Cui Said things, Zhao Benshan made a serious mistake.
He forgot his bag when he went up the stage. Fortunately, Song Dandan carefully found the mistake at the beginning when Zhao Benshan started to go up the stage. Song Dandan hurriedly winked at Zhao Benshan, because the props to be used in the sketch were in the bag, which was a book written by Song Dandan YueZi.
Song Dandan quickly helped Zhao Benshan to block the camera, and Zhao Benshan took the bag at the moment when the camera switched, so as to avoid causing major mistakes.
It's sad that after the performance, Zhao Benshan and Song Dandan wept bitterly in the backstage of the Spring Festival Evening Show, which shows that it's not easy to perform at the Spring Festival Evening Show. Recently, Pan Changjiang announced his return to the Spring Festival Evening Show, and many old faces will return to this year's Spring Festival Evening Show.
Zhao Benshan and Song Dandan, the gold partners, don't know if they can return to the stage of the Spring Festival Evening Show. If they can join hands again, I believe they will bring us more laughter.
Jan. 16, 2021
Essay for suggestions
Do You Prefer to Dwell in the Past, Live in the Present or Dream of the Future?
Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a saying from Kung Fu Panda movie which states that “The past is history, the future is a mystery, but today is a gift what it is called the present”. It clearly states that nothing is in our control except the moment we have. Personally, I would much rather enjoy the present than the past or the future because it makes me happy and inspires me to accomplish my goals.
To begin with, living in the present enables people to admire the moment they have, so they will be relaxed and happier. This means people will feel the things and love to spend time with them. For instance, I am working with a Pharmaceutical company as a data analyst in Hartford. Even though it is a nine-to-five job, I am happy with my work responsibilities like data analysis, project delegation, and report submission. During this process, I am not only improving my skills but also interacting with different people who will have funny conversations, and some are pretty subjective too. After office hours, I am a dad and husband spending time with them which is the most incredible time I ever got in my life. Enjoying my son’s activities and appreciating his artwork. Everything I have is the time that I can control and adore the happiness received from doing those activities. Therefore, for me present means living in the moment which I adore than the things that are not existing like the past or the future.
Besides living in the moment, I choose to be in the present than the past or the future since the present inspires me to strive hard for a better career. In other words, I prefer to work for a purpose where I will devote my time to accomplish the tasks. For example, right now, I am preparing for my TOEFL exams where I must get a required score of 26 in speaking and 24 in writing. Therefore, I am working arduously to get the required grades which is critically important for me to land my career in the USA. If I receive the desired scores, I will be eligible for Pharmacy license Exam which is the first step for getting a registered pharmacist position in the USA. Hence, the present gives me an opportunity to work on my tasks and fulfill my dreams.
In essence, I strongly believe that the present plays an essential role in people’s lives than in the past or the future. This is because it allows people to appreciate the moment and live happily, also present motivates people to work hard for a better possibility.
Jan. 16, 2021
Ma première fois en écrivant en français depuis 2020
Donc, c'est la première fois que j'écris en français depuis mai 2020 et je suis sûre j'ai déjà fait comme 10000 erreurs. J'ai decidé de utiliser cette chose parce que j'ai besoin de practiquer la langue. J'ai étudié le français pendant 4 ans à l'université (je suis étudiante de langes), mais vraiment, je sens comme si j'avais appris rien et je pense que mon niveau est très basique et maintenant j'ai peur parce que ce semestre il faut que j'écrive un essai/thèse (en français, bien évidement) pour obtenir mon diplome et je veux pleurer.
Donc ouais, j'essaiera d'écrire ici pour practiquer et améliorer et aussi pour raconter quelqu'un mon proccess avec l'essai.
Jan. 16, 2021
foråret og kulturen
Jeg tror, de fleste kulturer har mange gamle ordsprog om årstider og årstidernes skiften, fordi i fortiden, hvad vi kunne høste var ret vigtig for, hvordan vi levede. Især om foråret, når vi kunne plante afgrøder for første gang siden vinteren startede.
Foråret kan være uforudsigeligt. Vintersne og is smelter og jorden begynder at tø op. Men der kan ske foråret sne, selv efter vinteren er forbi. Store foråroversvømmelser kan ske, forbi smeltning kan få vandstanden til at stige flere meter.
Danmark har 2 forår relaterede skikke, som jeg kunne finde: Fastelavn og Påske. Begge er relateret til at bringe fertilitet efter vinteren.
Påske i Danmark består af 2 dage, men mange steder giver folk flere fridage. Nogle mennesker går i kirke, og der er æg relaterede aktiviteter for børn. Folk giver hinanden anonyme gækkebreve, med vintergække indeni, og prøver at gætte, hvem der sendte det, ved antaller af prikker underskrevet. Folk dekorerer med æg, reder, og gule fjer. Der er også påskefrokost.
Påske i Chile er 1 dag, en søndag. Der er også æg relaterede aktiviteter for børn. Folk dekorerer med æg, reder, og kaniner. Kaniner medbringer chokoladeæggene. Vi dekorerer ikke med gule fjer. Vi har ikke det gækkebrev tradition. Jeg ved ikke, om andre folk har påskefrokost, men min familie har der det ikke. Måske fordi vi er ikke religiøs.
Jan. 16, 2021
Gestern war mein Auto geschleppt war.
Gestern war mein Auto geschleppt war. Stellen sie sich vor, an die Straße gäbe es kein Auto. Das war meine Erfahrung. Die Straße war leer. Ich begriff endlich, was passiert ist. Das Straßenschild sagt zwischen 16:30 Uhr 1830 Uhr, man kann nicht parken. Das ist ganz seltsam, mindestens hier in Melbourne. Normalerweise, das Abschleppen passiert abends oder nachts und fast nie am Nachmittag. Ich habe danach gelesen, dass dieses Straßenschild revidiert war. Die Regierung hofft, dass das neue Straßenschild die Sicherheit im Straßenverkehr erhöhen. Ich war nicht dieser besonderen Situationen bewusst. Deshalb musste ich eine teurere Strafe bezahlen. Nie mehr wurde ich die Bedeutung eins Straßenschildes vermuten.
Jan. 16, 2021
El agotamiento
Creo que me ha afectado el agotamiento. No las son tan fáciles hacer algunas de mis cosas favoritas. No es porque no me divierten, aún quiero hacerlas. Sin embargo, es como si falte la voluntad. Quiero hacer algo, pero no puedo levantarme para hacerlo.
Estoy intentando una nueva manera de aprender español. Durante los últimos meses, he intentado experimentar maneras de aprendizaje diferentes, y cuando uno no funciona, tengo que intentar algo diferente. Me he dado cuenta de que esta manera actual no es sostenible, especialmente con todas las otras cosas que hago ahora. Espero reemplazar esta manera otra vez en el futuro. Opino que tiene muchos beneficios. Desafortunadamente mi horario no la permite ahora mismo.
Mientras busco otra manera de aprender, estoy rehaciendo otras también. Por ejemplo, he intentado por toda esta entrad escribir oraciones cortas. Cuando lo hago, me equivoco menos. Siempre me impresionan muchísimas las entradas de inglés que corrijo. Rara vez no puedo entenderlas. Lo que me impresiona lo mejor, sin embargo, es su gramática. Lucho contra la gramática de ambos idiomas, el de inglés y de español, sino la de ellos es fabulosa. La mayoría del tiempo, tengo que corregir frases específicas, pero casi nunca tengo que reescribir la oración. Así que, sé que me estoy equivocando con algo. Espero que a través de esta nueva manera, lo arregle y escriba mejor.
Dos oraciones con "tocar + infinitivo".
1. Te toca preparar cena ya que estoy muerto.
2. Le toca pasear con el perro a Juan.
Jan. 16, 2021
Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder
Just learn this word from my friend’s post.
And I also check few articles from internet as well.
After knowing more detail about this illness.
My personal comment would be we all have this OCD.
But some people might be so serious, hence they need doctor’s help.
Some people may be having that in slightly.
In fact, I saw some friends around me they all have that OCD behaviors.
But they all consider that is a “normal”.
Our “mind” power is the most powerful weapon.
If we control that well, we can become so success in many ways.
But if we loss control it will backfire ourselves.
You want to dance with the devil?
Jan. 16, 2021
15 января 2021
Быть уверенным в себе – это преимущество. Тем не менее, считается некрасиво быть самоуверенным.
Моя семья состоит из трёх детей и двух родителей.
У меня теперь более гибкий график, чем в прошлом семестре.
Когда моя тётя вышла замуж за дядю, она стала католичкой.
У меня та же самая ситуация.
Его сестра сходит с ума по мальчикам.
Сколько времени они женаты?
Jan. 16, 2021
Jan. 15, 2021
About "そうこなくっちゃ" (2nd rev.)
「そうこなくっちゃ」のこと。
I've been thinking about the feeling of 「そうこなくっちゃ」
((「そうこなくっちゃ」について考えていました。))
== references =========
【そうこなくっちゃ】とは
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>> 相手の提案・反応に対して歓迎の意を表す言い回し。
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-- 🌐「そう来なくっちゃ(そうこなくっちゃ)」の意味や使い方 Weblio辞書
https://www.weblio.jp/content/%E3%81%9D%E3%81%86%E6%9D%A5%E3%81%AA%E3%81%8F%E3%81%A3%E3%81%A1%E3%82%83
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【なくちゃ】とは
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( about "〜なきゃ＆〜なくちゃ ( = ~nakya & ~ nakucha) suffixes )
>> They mean “to have to do something” or “must do something”
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-- 🌐 〜なきゃ＆〜なくちゃ ( = ~nakya & ~ nakucha) suffixes – Maggie Sensei https://maggiesensei.com/2010/11/20/%E3%80%9C%E3%81%AA%E3%81%8D%E3%82%83%EF%BC%86%E3%80%9C%E3%81%AA%E3%81%8F%E3%81%A1%E3%82%83-nakya-nakucha-suffixes/
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そうこなくっちゃ≒そうこなくては
└そう that; it
└こ come // { こ = 来 }
└なく not // { なく = 無く }
└て if; conditional
└は then; about
→ if that couldn't come, then ...
-- "have to" :: "If that couldn't come, then everything won't go well."
↑ and ↓
-- "歓迎の意" :: "If that couldn't come, then everything couldn't succeed, so I've supposed that will happens."
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In my mind, I related "そう来る"("そう" + "こ"{来}) to "That happened." …
> "That happened."
> └ 'That' <- (about) { you did the act. }
"そう"来る
└ {" you did the act "} came (come)
"そう来ると思った" ≒ I thought coming the future/happening that includes you do the act.
( ` especially you, you do "that"(the act)` )
.....
Well, you know, it's just a way to remember/handle "そう来る" things; it's just my something. 🤔
So I accept the "do something" way as well.
>>>>>
そうこなくては
└ そうこなくては、期待よりも下回る
└ そうこなくては、おもしろくない
└ そうこなくては、好ましい・良い展開にならない
↓ ↓
だから、そう来た現実は、好ましい。よって、私は歓迎するのだ。
<<<<<
━━━━━━━
>>>>>
If that didn't happen,
└ If that didn't happen, it would have fallen short of my expectation.
└ If that didn't happen, I would have been disappointed.
└ If that didn't happen, it would not have gotten a good situation, which I like.
↓ ↓
That's why I like this situation that coming; I welcome it.
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