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Oct. 17, 2020
Alcohol
In Japan, people who are under 20 years old are prohibited to buy and drink alcohol, so I can't drink yet. Some of my friends are over 20, and they often drink liquor. I can't understand why they prefer to drink because I think drinking has many demerits and only a few merits.
The biggest demerit is damage to health. Of course, moderate drinking is not a problem, but there are many incidents that are caused by alcohol. For example, alcohol harms the liver, or many people are suffering from alcohol addiction. Drunken driving often kills people.
In addition, I don't think alcohol is delicious. I secretly tried to beer, wine, and whiskey, but all of them were not good for me. My friend said it is pleasant to get drunk. However, I just get sleepy when I get drunk. Besides, a hangover maybe ruins a good feeling.
Oct. 17, 2020
If l could live anywhere in the would, where would l choose?
I think I would choose to live in Australia because it is a beautiful and attractive country. There are many clean beaches and magnificent scenery in the country. Also, there are a lot of animals and the environment is clean, with not much environmental pollution. Besides, Australia has a high-quality education and medical compared to most other countries, and that is one of the factors why many overseas students come to Australia.
Oct. 17, 2020
Agriculture Products Trade Fair
In autumn, our province will hold an Agricultural Products Trade fair every year and I will attend the fair for work reasons. Agriculture is a basic industry, people cannot live without it, but agriculture is hard to do; farmers are hard to be, and it is difficult to make money as a farmer. I don't know if it is the same situation in other countries. Literally, the basic industry should be an industry that can easily make money and people who do it can easily be rich, but the opposite is true. I don't know why this is the case. Maybe there are many things in the world like that. They are just mysteries and you never figure them out.
Oct. 17, 2020
Oct. 17, 2020
Oct. 17, 2020
Reparando las gafas de mi madre
Hoy las gafas de mi madre se perdieron uno de sus plaquetas. Pensó que tendría que comprar gafas nuevas, pero recordé que tenemos unos kits de reparación de gafas que nunca hemos usado. Encontré en uno de ellos plaquetas nuevas, tornillos pequeñitos y un mini destornillador. Reparé sus gafas en apenas un minuto. Me alegra que su problema fue tan fácil de resolver y que ahora no tiene que comprar gafas nuevas.
Oct. 17, 2020
Oct. 17, 2020
Agricultural products trade meeting of Anhui Province
I am on my way to Anhui Province agricultural products trading meeting. The meeting is held once every year in the capital city Hefei. During the meeting, famous and quality agricultural products from sixteen prefecture level cities were gathered, and some agricultural relative departments or companies of the whole province would visit the meeting for showing, learning and sharing. For this meeting, we organized two classes with about 100 people who focused on fruits and vegetables attending the meeting. It will take three hours to get from our city to Hefei. I wish for a peaceful journey for us.
Oct. 17, 2020
Шаббат
По-моему, самое лучшее в иудаизме – у нас праздник каждую неделю. Это называется шаббат по ивриту, и просто означает “суббота”. На самом деле, шаббат скоро начинается, и я должна закончит этот текст до этого. Шаббат – день отдыха, и соблюдение праздника считается одной из базовых заповедей иудаизма. Существует очень много правил о том, что можно делать в шаббат и что нельзя делать. Формально, запрещено совершать 39 видов деятельности. Я никогда не была в Израили, но перед коронавирусом, мой папа часто ездил туда по работе. Он мне сказал, что в субботу в Израили бизнес закрыт, автомобиль стоит в гараже, телефон не звонит, радио и телевизор и компьютер отключены. Они находят очень креативные способы соблюдать правил. Например, двери лифта откроют на каждым этаже, чтобы люди не должны нажать кнопку. Это считается использованием электроэнергии, поэтому запрещено.
Я теперь не строго соблюдаю заповедей шаббата, потому что я должна проснуться в четыре утра каждую субботу, чтобы завести два урока английского языка. В следующем году, я постараюсь поменять мое расписание, чтобы я могла соблюдать правил и не работать в субботу. Сегодня я посмотрю службу в интернет из синагоги в Нью-Йорке, где всегда транслируют службы. Я буду зажигать свечи, пить немножко вина и есть тип хлеба, который называется “хала”. Это мой любимый день недели.
Oct. 16, 2020
Lonelier Than Being Lonely
Being alone doesn't necessarily mean being lonely.
When you choose a path no one else chooses, you will be alone because you will be the only one there. However, when you follow a path everyone goes, you will feel lonely because it is not where you belong to.
When you feel peaceful being alone, you are not lonely; when you feel alone in the crowd, you are lonely.
You may feel lonely when you are single, but you will feel lonelier when you are unloved in a relationship.
You may feel lonely when you have only a few friends, but you will feel lonelier when you have no one to talk to despite having hundreds of friends on Facebook.
Being lonely is being lonely because it is your status quo. Trying to escape from loneliness is lonelier because it confirms your anxiety over loneliness.
Oct. 16, 2020
Übungen 12
Am Morgen. Negieren Sie den ganzen Satz. Wo steht nicht?
Ich konnte heute um 7.00 Uhr nicht aus dem Bett kommen.
Ich bin ich zehn Minuten später nicht ins Bad gegangen.
Ich habe um 8.00 Uhr nicht in der Küche gefrühstückt.
Ich bin danach nicht aus dem Haus gegangen.
Ich bin kurz darauf nicht in den Zug eingestiegen.
Ich bin um 9.00 Uhr nicht im Büro angekommen.
Mein Chef hat sich an diesem Morgen nicht gefreut.
Oct. 16, 2020
Oct. 16, 2020
Place Adverb
The verb "go home" was first used in the 18th century. Presumably used as an abbreviated version of "go to home." Why not think of "go home" as an independent verb?
When I began to study English, this place adverb has given me a lot of trouble to make a sentence. That's why I learned by heart each sentence as an independent verb, I don't know why I have to omit a preposition "to". Even though an English teacher advised that I should have omitted a preposition "to", I still couldn't understand why I had to omit it. The teacher didn't refer to anything like this place adverb, either.
As mentioned above, someone wrote a comment how this the verb "go home" was used, and that was just used as an abbreviated version of "go to home." It's so interesting, isn't it? I can fully understand by tracing its origin now. The comment used "presumably", this meant to say this is still guessing?
Oct. 16, 2020
Beschwerdebrief - Schreibübung
Hallo Leute,
könnte jemand von euch meinen Brief korrigieren. Es ist kein echter Brief, sondern eine Schreibübung.
Danke im Voraus!
Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,
nachdem ich Ihr Angebot bezüglich einer privaten Kleinanzeige, in einem Werbinserat gelesen habe, habe ich es in Anspruch genommen. Leider bin ich wirklich unzufrieden mit diesem Angebot, denn dort steht dass, die Anzeige 2-mal in ÖVNachrihten erscheint würde, aber es war ganz anders, da meine Anzeige nur einmal erscheint hat.
Außerdem steht im Angebot dass, meine Anzeige kostenlos im SuperAnzeiger erscheinen würde.
Allerdings musste ich dafür extra bezahlen. Sie haben auch gesprochen, dass in die Anzeige man bis 15 Wörter schreiben kann. Dies war auch nicht wahr, denn in der Anzeige, nur 10 Wörter erlaubt waren.
Letzlich, habe ich erwartet, dass meine Angebot bis 31.12. erscheinen wird. Leider war die Aktion eine Woche früher beendet.
Deswegen möchte ich als Entschädigung, 20% Erstattung meines Geldes. Wenn Sie nichts unternehmen, sehe ich gezwungen zum Rechtsanwalt zu gehen.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen,
Oct. 16, 2020
Quale Superpotere vorrei avere?
La prima cosa che mi è venuta in mente: viaggiare nel tempo. Sarebbe veramente molto potente. Si potrebbe tornare indietro e provare di nouvo quando si sbaglia. In generale si potrebbe impedire cose terribili come i nazisti o altri genocidi.
E inoltre, si potrebbe diventare molto ricco giocando alla loteria.
Sfortunatamente, ci sono alcune cose che complicano la possibilità di viaggiare nel tempo. Per esempio, se si cambia il passato, potrebbe essere che in seguito non si esista più. Una soluzione possibile sarebbe che si creasse un nuovo universo ogni volta che si viaggia nel tempo. Un'altra possibilità sarebbe che il libero arbitrio non esistesse: Anche se si viaggia nel tempo, non sia possibile regolare il proprio comportamento in seguito. Quindi il superpotere non servirebbe a molto.
Oct. 16, 2020
Oct. 16, 2020
Седьмая глава книги "Азазель"
Фандорин поехал в Санкт Петербург. Он знал из списка Амалии, что какой-то человек должен взять письмо для "Крога" тем же день. Он ждал у централной почтой и наконец увидел нужного человека. Это Джералд Каннигем, педагог и главный помощник леди Эстер, который взял письмо.
Бриллинг был в Петербурге и Фандорин решил пойти к нему обсуждить расследование. У квартирой Бриллинга Фадорин рассказал всё, что случилось в Англии, а также то, что Джералд Каннигем получил письмо из Лондона. Бриллинг очень удивился, он хорошо знал Джералда. Они решили пойти к нему чтобы узнать больше о деле.
Они постучали в дверь Каннигема и он открыл. Бриллинг очень волновался, и требовался от Каннигема чтобы они пойти в кабинет обсуждить важное дело. В кабинете Бриллинг взял револьвер и выстрелил Каннигема. Потом он нацелил на Фандорина. Фандорин побежал к нему как можно быстрее и они полетели из окна.
Фандорин упал на землю, сел, и осмотрелся. Бриллинг висел на дереве и умерал. Он посмотрел на Фондорина, сказал "Азазель", и умер. Фандорин понял, что Бриллинг был членом террористической организации "Азазель". Фандорин узнал слишком много и у Бриллинга не был нет выбора, кроме убить его.
Oct. 16, 2020
Oct. 16, 2020
Oct. 16, 2020
Krautrock
Diese woche ich habe versuche mehr Krautrock zu horen. Krautrock war ein genre von der 1960s stammt aus Deutschland. Die Musik ist sehr experimentel, das kann für manche unangenehm sein aber mir selbst fand alle sehr interessant. Ich mag besonders das Lied Future Days von Can und Hallogallo von Neu! , beide klingen sehr gut.
Oct. 16, 2020
Asking for features in Scrivener, an app
I strongly encourage the development team to introduce the keywords feature in the iOS version. Without that, I have to keep my private journal in a different app.
And as a Korean user who writes in Korean and English back and forth, the font support is far from satisfactory. When I do switching between Korean and English inputs that happens quite frequently, the font will be set as the default system font in the course of switching, regardless of my initial choice of fonts. On the other hand, Apple's native apps, such as Pages, have a different mechanism. In that app, when I choose a font that does not have a corresponding Korean typeset, it automatically matches the system Korean fonts according to whether the original one is serif or san-serif. When I switch back to English input, the font will be set as the selected one rather than the corresponding English font of the Korean fonts, as is the case for Scrivener. To maintain the English typeset, I have to choose the font every time I switch to English back from Korean input. If the app handles default Korean (or any other non-Latin language) and English fonts separately, this feature could be more desirable.
Oct. 16, 2020
Memory Flooding Back
It has suddenly occurred to me that I should write something about Pokemon. I used to be quite heavily into the anime. It was my childhood. After school, I just went straight home to watch the adventure of Ash and his companions. Back then I did not really have any toys to play so a TV was all I had. I once burst into tears after the channel said an episode of my favourite show was postponed. In the 90s, it was so common for us to remember those anime songs' lyrics which we did not even know what they were about. Nowadays we have so many entertainments, much more than before.
Oct. 16, 2020
自己紹介
初めまして、
私の名前はカンレイだ。（実はカンレイは日本語からの言葉の寒冷だ。馬鹿らしいようだと分かっている。この名前は ティーンエイジャーの時から選んだ。 ニックネーム が必要だったら、ゲームのキャラクター の名前を使った。この キャラクター は寒冷の不死鳥を命名された。それ以来この名前を使った。実生活にもこの名前を使う。）
今は33歳だ。
スイスの出身だけど、ドイツに住んでいる。
仕事は イラストレーターだ。
趣味は言語の勉強するのやゲームや本を読むのや描くのや料理をするのなどだ。今の勉強している言語は日本語、韓国語、フランス語、フィンランド語、スェーデン語、エスペラント語、ポルトガル語、中国語、インドネシア語だ。この言語にペラペラがない。本当によく初級のレベルだ。日本語には多分中級のレベルだ。でも話すことに下手だ。描くの時にもよく辞書を使うの必要だ。
よろしくお願いします。
Oct. 16, 2020
"Is Friendship Important?" - An Essay
That's a preparation task for my RNE (Russian National Exam, uh-huh), so I had to speculate on the topic giving my point of view, an opposite one and an explanation why the second one is wrong. Limit - 250 words, so vocab's really poor, but could you just check on very rude and clumsy constructions, something that catches your eye and sounds unlovely?? Thanks in advance!! Oh, and articles. They are my pain.
We all live in a society where we all have to interact with a lot of people. Sometimes we like them so much we befriend them, and these people become our beloved partners for a long time. Some individuals claim that friendship is a thing one cannot live without, while others argue that such form of connection is unnecessary and should be avoided. In this essay I will try to look upon this issue.
To my mind, friendship is an essential part of people's lives. There are some arguments to support my point of view. To begin with, comrades are amazing supporters for a case if something bad happens. True friends always stand by one's side to help. Furthermore, sometimes it is needed for humans to share their thoughts to feel better, and this is what friends are for.
Nevertheless, there are people of the opposite opinion. They think that friends are a burden keeping people down instead of letting them live on their own.
However veracious it sounds, I would not agreee with the above mentioned idea, because existence without comrades would be a hardship for anybody. People who do not understand it have never tried looking past themselves onto persons closest to them.
To sum up, although the problem raised in this essay seems controversial, I would like to point out again that there are different opinions about it, so people are free to choose what is best for them.