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옥상에서 도대체 뭐하는 거지??
나는 오늘 퇴근하고 집에 들어가자마자 운동하기 시작했다. 요즘 건강을 더 잘 챙기려고 노력하고 있으니까 1주일에 최소 4번씩 운동을 한다. 오늘의 운동을 하고 샤워하려고 했는데 갑자기 남자친구는 "야, 맞은편 건물 옥상에 사람이 있다!"고 했다. 나도 보고 싶어서 창문 밖으로 바라봤는데... 사람들이 가지 말아야 옥상 위에 고등학생 처럼 보이는 사람 2명이 옥상에 같이 누워 있었다! 오늘 날씨가 이렇게 추운데 도대체 뭐하는 것이었을까...?
날씨도 춥고 옥상도 위험해서 남자 친구는 바로 관리사무실로 신고했다. 그리고 직원은 경비원을 바로 옥상으로 보낸다고 답했다. 나와 남자 친구는 너무 궁금해서 경비원이 맞은편 옥상에 나타났을 때까지 창문 밖으로 계속 바라보았다. 그리고 경비원이 나왔을 때 바로 올라가서 그 학생들을 잡힐 줄 알았는데... 그러지는 않았다!
이유는 옥상 위에 작은 건물 처럼 생긴 구조물이 있어서이다. 학생들이 그 구조물 위에 있었는데 거기까지 올라가려면 계단을 올라간 뒤에 위태로워 보이는 사다리도 올라가야 되는 그런 곳이었다. 내가 사는 건물에서 잘 보였는데 경비원에게 잘 보이지 않았을 것이다. 그래서 우리는 관리사무소에게 학생들의 정확한 위치를 알려주고 그 직원은 경비원에게 알려줬고 경비원은 계단을 조금 올라가고... 내렸다! 그리고 2분이나 뒤에 또 올라갔는데 계단 위에 있는 사다리를 쳐다보지도 않고 또 내렸다! 나와 남자 친구는 이 장면을 보고 얼마나 답답했는지...
결국에 관리사무소 직원은 우리에게 경비원의 핸드폰 번호를 알려줘서 우리는 창문에서 보이는 것들을 사진 찍어서 경비원에게 보냈다. 그리고 몇 분 뒤 경비원 2명 더 나와서 결국 그 분들 중에서 한 명은 계단을 올라가 사다리까지 다 올라가서 학생들에게 혼을 냈다.
이렇게 써 보니까 남들에게 별로 재미없는 일일 것 같은데 그때 당시 그 장면을 보는 나와 남친에게 너무 재미있었다!
Dec. 6, 2019
Üdv mindenki
Francia vagyok, és négy évet éltem Budapesten, de öt évvel ezelőtt visszaköltöztem Franciaországba. Azóta, egyaltalán nem gyakoroltam a magyar nyelvet, sajnos. Pedig az jól ment.
Mostonában japánúl tanulok. Kezdő vagyok még, és nem mertem irni semmit. Nem tudom, hogy magyarok járnak ide egyaltalán, úgy látszik én vagyok az első, aki magyarúl ir. De sose lehet tudni.
Jól esne, ha gyakorolnék egy kicsit. Úgy érzem, lássan visszajön minden, és a legnehezebb, a francia billentűzet használni magyar nyelven. Bár bisztos vagyok, hogy hiba is van.
Dec. 6, 2019
Dec. 6, 2019
Kindheit
Als ich ein Kind war, aß ich so viele ungesundes Essen. Damals, seit circa zwanzig Jahre, war es sehr gewöhnlich, dass ich zwei oder dreimal Teller für Mittagessen aß, zum Beispiel. Außerdem trank ich so viele süße Getränke, also mit viel Zucker. Deswegen wog ich etwa 100 Kg., als ich ein dreizehnjährigen Junge war. Das ist etwas wahnsinnig im Rückblick!
Heutzutage habe ich ein normales und gesundes Gewicht, und esse normalerweise nur einen Teller pro Mahlzeit.
Dec. 6, 2019
आज के पांच शब्द - वाक्य
6-12-2019:
आज के पांच शब्द:
1. छोर(m) – Edge/Border/End
2. बांधना(v) – To tie
3. धार(m) – Blade
4. हिलना – Shake
5. बकरियां, ऊंट और गाय-भैंस - Goats, Camels and Cow-Buffalo
वाक्य:
1. तुम तुम्हारा छोर पार कर रही हो।
2. हिन्दू विवाह परम्परा में दूल्हा ने दुल्हन का कंठ को ताली बांधना एक महत्वपूर्ण व्यवहार है।
3. मेरे शहर में एक गुंडा है, वह 'धार बाबजी' के नाम पर प्रसीद है।
4. हम सिरप बोतल को उपयोग करने से पहले उसको एक बार हिलाना/हिला करना पड़ता है।
5. बकरियां, ऊंट और गाय-भैंस किसानों की महत्वपूर्ण संपत्ति हैं।
Dec. 6, 2019
Dec. 6, 2019
Animando a mi hermana
Esta noche mi pareja y yo saliremos para compartir unas cervezas con mi hermana. El último fin de semana, mi hermana tuvo un mal rato cuidando a nuestra abuela, quien tiene noventa y cinco años. Nuestra abuela todavía está casi independiente, pero puede necesitar un poco de ayuda con tareas fisicales (como lavar y colgar la ropa, por ejemplo). Una mujer alquila una parte de su casa y suele ayudarla con estas tareas, pero ella fue de vacaciones durante el fin de semana y por eso mi hermana – quien fue la única de nosotros cuyo horario lo permitiría – fue pedida quedarse con nuestra abuela en su lugar.
Desafortunadamente, mi hermana terminó muy desconsolada por el comportamiento de nuestra abuela. Siempre ha sido un poco discutidora, y es el tipo de vieja que tiene una gran variedad de opiniones fuertamente derechistas. Mi hermana y yo – y, de hecho, toda la familia aparte de nuestra abuela – no compartimos sus creencias, y aunque mi hermana intentaba evadir toda discusión sobre estes temas, ¡mi abuela la seguiría a cada habitación para continuar el argumento! Además, nuestra abuela le insistió que cociera toda la comida, incluyendo postres después del almuerzo y la cena, y que lavara, secara y pusiera en su sitio todos los platos inmediatamente después de comer, aunque estas no son cosas que la mujer que vive allí suele hacer. Según mi hermana, nuestra abuela nunca dijo tanto como una «gracias» – sólo le gritó por no hacer estas cosas tan rápidamente o perfectamente para satisfacer sus criterios. Claro que mi abuela no ha sido así siempre, pero como se ha envejecido, esta irritabilidad y irracionalidad se han puesto más evidentes.
Mi padre, mi tío y yo todos le hablamos por el teléfono (en momentos diferentes) para ofrecer apoyo y consejos sobre cómo desviar las peroratas de mi abuela y no antagonizarla. Al final, obviamente, mi hermana sobrevivió los días en la casa de mi abuela y pudo volver a casa. Ahora, mi pareja y yo queremos comprarle unas cervezas y animarla después de su pesadilla.
Dec. 6, 2019
Dec. 5, 2019
Rocketsheeps in all countries to populate equally.
The victorys are for the persons which arrives first than others. The humanity is close to extension the realm they have now, to place farther than beyond this world, but it should be for to all countries. The colonization processes works only in the beginning, but the nefarious effects can feel all the way to 500 years in to the future. All neighborhoods that are stablished centuries in the past always begins with a lot of productivity for the conquistadors, but because it is most of the times only one country or continent attacking the nation to conquest, for the good or the bad, they only has one opinion, so all his decisions are coming in one directions, and the history is repeats all times, many times. There is never one success conquistador nation who is lasted for centuries with the power they obtain without they fall, longer or sooner, but give your self the oppurtinity to stop in your track and think perhaps it is for the reason that is only one conquistadoring country actings in solitary.
In a matter of a little times, the humanity will conquest the moon, and from that place it will distribute to all planets that have friendly conditions for to withstand the weight of the life in the population of humans. If the wish that human scientists have is to obtain a planet in property, it should cannot be only a few little countries. The datum is there, it shows no signs of error, it says inevitably the results is after an extension of period of time, the progress in society and money, and land and farming, and food distributions, and near to all aspects of life in civilization go down, if this is the enterprise of single nations. Why not connect forces together? and attack the new planets in joining a superplanetary alliance right here on earth? Each planet should to have a rocketsheep, and perhaps you can stop a moment on your tracks, and give this a good chunk of thinking: colonization and conquistation is a suffering process and it is lasting for too long, because, and only maybe, because it is not a league of countries that do the attack and colony.
How much countries is their in the 5 continents, a lot, that is how much. So each country alone has to have one rocketsheep to send in space in intervalling lunch dates, settingly before by the specialists in orbital launches to catch graviteitional pulls that can to conduct a prove to that far distance, and have progressive arrivals at the planets of new destinations for distributions of the chores the must to do in order, to have, the creation of the replication of this planet, with the minimals for guarantees of the super living of the travellers, and perpetuations of us as a spices, but in the new territory. This sounds not impossible because the countries that are good for war, make colonies with that resource, and the countries that are good for farms, do farms, and if they are good for sailing, they colonize by the fish and live like that. There is no way the humanity can faster the colony in other planet if it does alone with only one country. And how this is to be maked? Every things are maked with a plan, and the plan could have possibilities whether countries receive trainings for to make their own sheeps. With the plan for acquisition of the primal matter for to build theirs rockets sheeps. With the technology that is all around this planet now, and the knowledge in action that scientifics shares with all of us all the time. The most enormous challenge is the finding of the willing to helping everyone country for to achieve this.
Perhaps we, the people reading this now, wills be to olds when this happens. When the locals of the new planets earths and the colonizers and conquistadors we send, begin to mix and populate all the new continents, we will already loosing the opportunity for us, but the kids of the kids we have in this times today, maybe is going to become responsible for this multiplication for when it sure happens. It does have sense to think thoghts of this kind. Quiet a little countries in the times today have very very good skills for the farming culture. Other build machines like all days. And the one who are fame for the arts and the sports. What about the anothers, the ones that have for sure the super discipline that is a necessity in an enterprise this big? How many continents possess the blessings of the 100 percent of the populations with ability to reads and writes soooo very very well that all become engineer or doctor, or cook or banker? Those continents could resuscitate the academy in the new planet, and in the doing of this, they are going to passing the knowledge sins the beginnings of times, to the earth of the future. In the moments today, I have conviction that the travel for the colony of the moon is only disposition for a little few people, and they are no enough to do all things I list before on they own. The more the best. So I have thoughts that conviction me to fantasies about a rocketsheep for country, and each countries assumes the cost of the trip for colony, bye choicing the peoples that contribute to the benefit of all the mankind.
In person I understand, that in the present moments, the prize to take the travelling is much, and no one can to pay, but no is that solution in cutting the costs and distributions among the total population?, no is that the ways the humanity today super lives the arising challenges in this society that never stops to grow?, no is that the way we are elevating our selfs above all the vicissitudes that are with us sins the starting of our lifes as a mankind?, so is this suppose to be a not realistic proposition?, well how knows… the satellites are giving mappings of the path that mankind has to follow to reach the next habitable realm, and in agreeings with a paper I read last morning in the corner of the branch, the exploratory travels to space are starting from a long time ago, so it feels that one rocketsheep a pop, could put us there fasters and betters, and for more farthering lasting periods.
Dec. 5, 2019
Dec. 5, 2019
Dzień dobry!
Chcę nauczyć się po polsku bo moje rodzice pochodzą z Polski. Jestem Niemką i mieszkam we Francji. Pracuję jako nauczycielka języka niemieckiego. Lubię języka polskiego i humoru polskiego. Rozumiem bardzo dużo, ale mowić po polsku to bardzo trudno dla mnie. Mam problemy z gramatyką i czasem też z wymową. Ale bardzo lubię uczyć się tego języka bo to naprawdę wyzwanie.
Dec. 5, 2019
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Dec. 5, 2019
आज के पांच शब्द - वाक्य
5-12-2019:
आज के पांच शब्द:
1. एकमत(adj.) – Unanimous
2. खेत(m) – Farm
3. मेड़(m) – Line/Hedge
4. झाड़ियाँ – Shrubs
5. गुठलीदार(adj.) – Stoned
वाक्य:
1. उसे प्रधान मंत्री बनाने के लिए सांसदों ने एकमत से निर्णय को आ चूका है।
2. खेतों में किसानों ने कृषि की जाती है.
3. मेड़ पर कौआ कुहुकुहु कर रहा है.
4. झाड़ियों के अंदर कभी-कभी सांप छिपा कर रहते हैं.
5. तरबूज को भी एक गुठलीदार फल कहना गलती नहीं होते है.
Dec. 5, 2019
Hello
I am Michiru. I joined now. I use English mainly in emails at my work. Sometimes I make our confused due to my poor English. I want to improve my English. I hope I can exchange emails smoothly with customers. Is it ok to post here an email I want to send to a customer? I want to have my message checked if it doesn't make a customer confused.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Dec. 5, 2019
Dec. 5, 2019
친구에게 운전을 알려주는 것
나는 운전 면허증이 없다. 운전을 못해서가 아니라 시간이 없어서 그렇다. 고등학교 때 운전을 좀 배우긴 했는데 다양한 이유로 면허증을 따지 못했다. 겨울에는 운전을 잘하는 사람에게 별문제가 되지 않은데 초보자에게 매우 위험할 수 있는 눈 때문에 연습을 많이 했고 한동안 발 수술을 해서 운전을 못했다. 우리 언니와 남동생은 나보다 자동차를 쓸 이유가 더 많아서 그들은 나보다 더 빨리 배웠고, 부모님은 나에게 운전을 가르쳐줄 시간도 부족했다. 그에다가 대학교에 갔을 때 다른 나라로 이사가서 물론 운전 연습을 하는 것이 쉽지는 않았다. 결국에 자동차가 거의 필요없는 서울에서 살게 되어서 운전을 배우지 않아도 되겠다고 생각해게 되었다.
나는 운전 면허증이 없는데 남친은 면허증이 있고, 친한 친구 니콜도 면허증이 있다. 니콜은 중고차까지 있다. 니콜은 요즘 후면 주차를 더 잘하고 싶어서 우리 남자 친구에게 가르쳐 달라고 부탁했다. 그래서 오늘 퇴근하고 나와 니콜, 그리고 남친이 다 같이 니콜의 차를 타고 남친은 주차를 가르쳐주었다. 나는 뒷좌석에서 앉고 있었는데 나도 후면 주차를 배운 적이 있어서 나도 니콜에게 이런저런 팁을 주었다. 물론, 나의 남자 친구는 나보다 니콜에게 더 많은 도움이 되었는데 그래도 나는 조금만이라도 도움이 되었다고 생각한다! 결국에 니콜은 후면 주차를 전에 비해 훨씬 더 잘하게 되었다.
주차 연습을 다 마친 뒤에 우리는 다 같이 저녁을 먹었다. 나는 맥앤치즈를 만들었고 남자 친구는 고기를 구웠다. 친구와 저녁을 같이 먹는 게 언제나 즐거운 일이다~
Dec. 5, 2019
Dec. 5, 2019
Dec. 5, 2019
El verano comienza
En Australia se considera que el verano comienza el primero de diciembre, así que hemos estado en el verano por casi una semana. No creo que el tiempo se haya percatado del cambio de estación; aunque los últimos dos días han sido agradables, sufrimos tiempo frío y ventoso al inicio del mes y más tiempo así se está avecinando. Tengo que decir que el tiempo en marzo (¡después de que el verano ha teminado!) es mucho mejor que esto.
Hay otras indicaciones (mejores que el tiempo) que el verano está aquí. En las escuelas, los maestros han terminado de escribir los boletines de notas, y juntos con los estudiantes están preparando para el año que viene. Como maestra sustituta, no sé si tendré más trabajo este año o si tendré que esperar hasta febrero. (Claro que se necesita poder ahorrar dinero para durar en este puesto.) De verdad, no me molesta tener un largo descanso del trabajo… sólo deseo que me pagarían mientras tomo mi descanso. En un mundo perfecto… 😉
También puedes decir que es diciembre porque todo el mundo está hablando sobre las compras de navidad y las fiestas que se celebrarán en tres semanas… y la familia de mi pareja nos está fastidiando porque no entienden que yo también tengo una familia y no iremos sólo a las celebraciones que *ellos* tendrán. No hay nada como el espíritu de navidad, jaja.
Dec. 5, 2019
Eine Vorstellung
Meine Eltern wohnen in einer kleinen Stadt. Die Stadt ist Teil eines großen Land in Asien. Sie haben seit viele Jahren da gewohnt. Bevor ich zum Deutschland umgezogen bin, verbrachte ich auch circa drei Jahrzehnte in dieser wunderschönen Stadt. Weil meine Frau und ich weniger Geld diese Saison haben, können wir leider nicht meine Eltern für Weihnachten besuchen. Aber, das nächste Jahr sehen wir bestimmt unsere Familie. Ich freue mich sehr darauf.
Dec. 5, 2019
Dec. 5, 2019
Dec. 5, 2019
アメリカの公共交通機関
アメリカの公共交通機関を一つの言葉にまとめたったら、その言葉は時間通りじゃない。僕は混んでいる都市に住んでいて毎日ぐらい変な人を見える。その変な人の中にはホムレス（家がない、外に住んでいる）や薬中毒や頭が病気の人が多くていつも臭くて自分に変な言葉を話している。本当に可愛そうなことだと思っているが、お金をあげるとか手伝ってあげたいようにしたら、いつも悪いことの為にそのお金などを使っている。例えば彼らがお腹が空いていてお金をお返してくれないとお願いしたら、お金を出したら、食べ物を買わないでお酒を買う。そうして本当にお腹空いているホムレスが頼んだら、誰でも手伝わない。😭
ちょっと別なテーマを話しているから、前に戻ろう。そのホムレスなどの人で電車が遅刻しちゃう。例えばホムレスがホムからレールに下がって歩くことで、警察などが来るまで電車がもう30分ぐらい遅刻する。
この電車がとても悪くてニュースもテレビドラマを作った。そのドラマで想像出来ない事がよく見える、いつも馬鹿にしている。
アメリカの公共交通機関は日本と同じだったら、もっといい都市になるかもしれない。
Dec. 4, 2019
Dec. 4, 2019
Battery ran off
Early in the morning yesterday I was ready to drive to work I found that lights of my car were still on. Then I realized I forgot to turn the lights off and left my car all night aside the road. The battery totally went off. I tried to open the door but I was so clumsy that I couldn't even get the key out of my digital remote. I had to call my colleague for help. They suggested me that I should go to work first and fix it after work. But I insist fixing it right now cause I do not have time and always work over time. Anyway in the end I got a car repairman to help me charge my battery.
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