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L'intelligence Artificielle
Tout le monde connaît les histoires de sciences-fictions dans un monde où les machines pensent eux-mêmes, où les robots vivent parmi les humains. J’ai toujours pensé qu’il semble que ce ne soit qu’une chose du cinéma, mais ce concept n’est pas lointain. Il s’appelle l’intelligence artificielle.
Premièrement, qu’est-ce que l'intelligence artificielle, ou IA? En gros, ce sont les techniques qui permettent aux machines d’imiter le cerveau et l’intelligence des humains, résoudre des problèmes et d'agir correctement dans chaque situation. À cause de ça, l’IA peut faire les travaux répétitifs, travailler avec une réduction des erreurs et faire l’exploration difficile. Cela semble compliqué, mais les gens sont exposés à l’IA tous les jours, comme dans Google Maps, Siri et les robots de chat. Qu’est-ce que tous ces exemples ont en commun? Bon, ce sont toutes les innovations qui aident les humains d’une manière ou d’une autre, ce qui est le but de l’AI. Pensez-y; en tant que l’IA continue à évoluer, ainsi que la qualité de notre vie quotidienne.
En outre, l'IA est très utile dans ma propre vie. Je me servis des algorithmes partout, comme sur mon Instagram et les pages de shopping, qui me montrent les choses qui m'intéressent. À cause de COVID-19, je dois faire les transactions pour magasiner avec les paiements électroniques. Tous utilisent l’IA! Peut-être que dans le futur, nous aurons l’IA encore plus avancée, comme les voitures à conduite autonome et les machines qui peuvent rechercher pour nous aider l’amélioration d’humanité.
Cependant, bien que l’IA a beaucoup d'avantages, il y a aussi des inconvénients. Alors que le grand public sera ouvert aux changements apportés, certaines personnes ne seront pas prêtes pour cela. Ayez en tête considérer de problèmes éthiques que peut ralentir le développement d’IA, comme le chômage du remplacement d’êtres humains par des machines et l'inégalité parce que seulement quelques personnes auront les moyens d’acheter. Et si les robots peuvent penser eux-mêmes, devons-nous les traiter comme des égaux? Et si nous devenions inférieurs à l'intelligence artificielle? Il y a beaucoup de risques à considérer.
Bien entendu, l’IA est une question d’importance mondiale. Autour du monde, les effets d’IA sont évidents. Nous sommes à l’ère de l’innovation, donc la créativité est une composante essentielle développer pas seulement l’IA, mais l’expédition spatiale, les robots, la médecine et la science en général. Nous devions travailler main dans la main pour répondre aux problèmes et rechercher ensemble pour le futur.
Jan. 21, 2021
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Как прошёл урок?
У меня более гибкий график в этом семестре, чем в прошлом.
Моя бабушка сттала католичкой, когда она вышла замуж на дедушке.
У меня та же самая ситуация, как у него.
Эта формулировка не очень хорошо звучит.
Я покажу свой экран, чтобы вы увидели папку.
Я выключю демонстрацию экрану.
Они не могу позволить себе квартиру потому, что цены на жильё очень высокие.
Она совсем недовольна этой ситуацией.
Если я буду хорошо учиться, у меня будет хорошая оценка.
Jan. 21, 2021
Jan. 21, 2021
Sobre mi familia
Hola a todos! Hoy quiero escribir sobre mi y mi familia. Tengo 24 años y soy de estatura media. Soy rubio y mis ojos son azules. Cuando era un adolescente, tuve muchos granos en mi cara. :) Mi mamá y papá son más bajos que yo. Mi mamá es rubia y tiene ojos verdes. Tiene 60 años y tiene arrugas pero es muy bonita. A ella le gusta mirar series turcas. Mi papá es moreno y su ojos son azules. Él es muy fuerte porque el trabajaba en una mina. Mi hermano es lo más alto de mi familia. Es moreno y tiene ojos verdes. Trabaja en una pizzería. Ellos viven en una ciudad muy pequeña cerca de la frontera con Alemania. Yo vivo en una ciudad grande, junto a Varsovia. Les gusta visitarme porque aquí tenemos muchas cosas que hacer.
Jan. 21, 2021
Plusquamperfektübungen
Bevor ich die Wohnung verlassen habe, hatte ich alle Fenster zugemacht oder: Nachdem ich alle Fenster zugemacht hatte, habe ich die Wohnung verlassen.
Ich ging heute raus, nachdem ich mich angezogen hatte oder: Ich hatte mich angezogen, bevor ich heute rausging.
Ronny hatte für die Prüfung so viel gelernt, dass er sie mühelos bestand.
Nachdem ich viele Übungen und Einträge verfasst hatte, gewann ich eine Pause oder: Bevor ich eine Pause gewann, hatte ich viele Übungen und Einträge verfasst.
Bevor ich meine derzeitige Wohnung verließ, hatte ich einen großen Teil der Kaution bezahlen müssen.
Jan. 21, 2021
Gastronomia. Część druga: tajskie Pra Gung
Poszukałem tej poprawy w Internecie i wcale nie rozumiem jak to się pisze. Znalazłem różne pisownie: "Phla Kung", "Pla Kung", "Pla Goong" itp. W tekście używam pisowni menu restauracji. Prawdopodobnie jest problem z transliteracją z tajskiego, ale nie mówię po tajsku, więc nie wiem dlaczego są tyle różnych wersji. Gdy jeden z was wie, proszę dajcie mi znać.
Zeszłego roku pracowałem w Anglii. W miasteczku bliskim pracy jest tajska restauracja. Bardzo lubię spróbować obcej kuchni i skorzystałem z okazji, żeby coś namówić. Polubiłem jedzenie tak bardzo, że namiawałem tajskie jedzenie raz w tygodniu przez miesiąc. Oczywiście nie będę pisać o każdej potrawy, których spróbowałem, również dlatego, że nie pamiętam ich wszystkich.
Pra gung jest pikantną sałatką. Główny składnik jest rodzajem azjatyckiej krewetki (https://pl.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Krewetka_tygrysia), do której jest dodana trawa cytrynowa, liście mięty, kolendra, chili i sok cytrynowy. Na pewno kombinacja składników jest bardzo ciekawa, nawet dziwna, ale smak jest niesamowity.
Dowiedziłem się, że w Azji południowo-wschodniej gotowują jedzenie zgodnie z filozofią yin i yang. Wszystko w życiu ma swoje przeciwieństwo i nawet w kuchni każdy smak musi być zrównoważony. Każda potrawa ma kombinację przeciwnych smaków: słone z słodkim, kwaśne z gorzkim, pikantne z świeżym itd. Bardzo lubię to filozoficzne podejście do kuchni.
Jan. 21, 2021
Lettera
Mi ha aiutato tanto le tue correzione. Nel tuo ultimo commento avete menzionato un scrittore chiamato Italo Calvino! Ho due libri scritti da lui, uno si intitola "Il visconte dimezzato" e il altro "Il cavaliere inestinte", comunque non gli ho letto ancora e non ho il libro che sia il più conosciuto da lui, cioè, "La città invisibili"
Nel mio paese (Mexico) è molto faticoso ottenere un libro scritto in italiano, ci sono librerie da seconda mano dove (si sei fortunato oppure si Dio ti aiuta) troverai uno. La tematica non è importante per me, ho trovato alcuni, 6 oppure 7. è vero che si può usare Amazon oppure oltre servizi ma, io sono un romantico, me piace andare a libreria per ricercare uno qualsiasi libro, come si fosse tesoro, frugare lentamente sui stanti di libri, allora, questo non va cosi quando si usa Amazon, e libro sta li, molto caro. Insomma, preferisco andare alla ricerca dei libro come si fosse un tesoro nascosto.
Che cosa stai leggendo adesso, fatemi sapere. Quale libri scritti da Umberto Evo avete già letto?
Jan. 21, 2021
Le 21 janvier
Il pleut des cordes dehors. Je m'assieds au laboratoire en face de ma plateforme expérimentale. Mes manipulations sont en train de tourner. Je regarde sur l'écran de l'ordinateur qui montre l'évolution du courant électrique en temps réel. Le courant doit être proportionnel de l'efficacité de ma cellule électrique. D'ailleurs ça me fait du plaisir de voir qu'il grimpe. Je suis content malgré de la pluie.
Jan. 21, 2021
The way to improve public health
Some people would argue that it is crucial to provide the public with more sports facilities for their wellness, while others say that this has limited influence on public wellbeing. I believe that although providing sports facilities for citizens can help them to some degree, it is better to increase people’s awareness about the importance of health.
On the one hand, increasing the number of sports facilities is a good way to encourage citizens do some sports due to its convenience. Now that most people are overwhelmed by their work and study, and they are burned out after their daily routine, as a result they do not have energy to go to gyms. In this case, some people tend to resort to some sports facilities in their communities. For example, a survey from China shows about 83% Chinese would choose sports conveniences nearby for its convenience. However, I believe this method has limited effect due to a lack of awareness of the importance of health.
On the other hand, authorities should take the responsibility of educating people the significance of wellbeing. There are still some people have no idea about the importance of health resulting in ignoring their own health conditions. For this reason, it is necessary for authorities to increase the awareness of the importance of public wellness. For example, academies can instill students with the vital role health plays in their life, and in turn they will affect their parents and people around them. In this way, more people will aware of how important health is. I believe this method is preferable because it makes wellness a widespread idea.
In conclusion, although allocating more public money to sports convenience can improve public healthy conditions, it just effects a small number of people, and this is why more measures should be implemented by authorities to increase people’s awareness.
Jan. 21, 2021
Il mio provo di studiare l'Italiano ancora una volta
Ho studiato l'italiano quando avevo 17 anni, pero purtoppo non mi ricordo niente, e spero che questa volta imparerò meglio.
Sto solo provando questo sito per la prima volta, quindi apprezzerei qualsiasi feedback quindi so che funziona :)
Grazie mille!
Jan. 21, 2021
永生に生きていれば、面白いと思うことはまだある？
面白いということは、大抵新しい経験だと思う。例えば、映画館で新しい映画を見るとか、新しいレストランに行ってみるなど。でも、他の面白い経験の種類がある。それは、懐かしくさせることだ。例えば、久しぶりに友達に合うことや、小さいごろ好きな音楽を聞くことなど。だから、楽しみにしていることはやったことがないことと、懐かしくさせることに分けている。
もし永遠に生きれば、映画を見る機会が本当にたくさんあるから、多分新しい映画に飽きるだろう。だから、楽しいと思うことは懐かしくさせることだけが残っていて、過去のことばかり思い出す。（「私の一番好きな映画は２００年前に作られた。」）
Jan. 21, 2021
Jan. 21, 2021
I Have a Dream
Today I would like to tell you about my dream. For many years, I would like to visit a few places in the world. One of them is Japan. Why Japan? I want to tell you about that as well. I became interested in Japanese culture when I was 14. At first, I watched old animated productions such as Sailor Moon, Haibane Renmei, and Studio Ghibli productions. Later, I collected books with stories popular in Japan, Japanese mythology, and I read an anthology of Japanese theater and Japanese tea brewing. At that time, I used these anthologies during my Polish matura exam. I was writing some haiku poems. I was inspired by the poetry of Czesław Miłosz and other Japanese poets. I also did presentation on Japanese clothing for one website that doesn't exist now. However, I wanted to try something more. I decided to learn Japanese. I installed Japanese alphabet on my computer and my adventure with Japanese began. I have been learning Japanese for a few years using materials on the Internet. I became most involved in learning language when I joined the Polish beginner group. There used to be popular chats on the Polczat website. We learned something new every day in the chat. There were also competitions hold by the owner of the then only one Polish website for learning Japanese. I won the competition twice. Then I got a humorous book to write Japanese characters from scratch and sweets brought from Japan. To this day, I keep candy wrappers deep in my wardrobe. Later I started writing with Japanese people to practice Japanese conversations. Then one friendship was arise with a Japanese woman, even though the Japanese don’t maintain contact with anyone for that long time. I got a package of sweets from this Japanese woman for me and for my best friend. We were happy. After a while, I took a break from learning Japanese. To this day, I’m remembering a lot of Japanese characters, I’m watching Asian cinema and read books related to Japanese culture.
In the future, I would like to go to Japan with my partner who is also interested in this country. I would like to go to Tokyo, Hiroshima and Osaka. At that time, my ex-friend, from whom I got sweets from Japan, lived in Osaka. I hope my dream will come true.
Jan. 21, 2021
キャンプ
(あなたの学校に来た日本人の 留りゅう学生は、1 週間、しぜんの中でキャンプをするきかいがあります。でも今いる 留りゅう学生はキャンプに行きたがっていで、ホストファミリーはしんぱいしています。そしてあなたにせっとくの手紙がみを書くようにたのみました。その手紙がみを書きなさい)
金木さんへ、
お元気ですか。今日の天気はさむすぎで、雨をふって初めます。おさむさの 折からお 体をお 大切に。
金木さんのホーストファミリーによると、1 週間、しぜんの中でキャンプをするきかいがあります。それはいいことｔ思います。
まず、いい点はうつくしいしぜんの眺めがあります。そして、夜の中に、ほしを見ることができます。うんが良ければ、動物もいます。たとえば、色々なとりがい るかもしれません。
そして、ヘルシーのために、運動しなければなりません。だから、歩くことは金木さんにとって良いことです。歩きながら楽しむことができます。せきにすわるより運動します。
たくさんおやつを持ってきたほうがいいです。それに、キャンプファイヤーでマシュマロを焼けます。マシュマロを食べることがありますか。
家にいるのはかんたんですが、キャンプに行くことをけんこうしてください。
これで、終わります。お 返事を 待ちしております。
デイモンより
Jan. 21, 2021
Should You Eat Breakfast?
I think eating breakfast gives us many profits. The most significant profit is that breakfast is good for your health. You can't eat and drink during your sleep, so it's important to get food and water in the morning. Otherwise, you will be hungry and irritated before lunchtime. Some researches show eating breakfast is related to mental and physical health.
Personally, I didn't eat breakfast while I was in junior and high school because I didn't have time to eat. However, now, I can take a meal in the morning, and it energizes me. Because morning is busy, I often eat serial with yogurt, or a nutrition bar.
Jan. 21, 2021
Jan. 21, 2021
バイデンの就任式
今日はバイデンがやっと正式に大統領になった。最初の日でバイデンは15ぐらい大統領令をした。特にパリ協定を入り直して、Keystoneの送油管をやめさせたから、私は喜んだ。バイデンは少しいまいちと思うけど、トランプに比べると、大きな進歩だ。
ありがたいことに、キャピトルで暴力が避けた。多分強烈な警備のおかげで。もちろんトランプは就任式に出なくて、リゾートに行く前に「未来で私はまた戻る」と言った。情けない大統領の情けない終わりだと思う。彼はもう大統領じゃないから、たくさん州と連邦の捜査が進める。例えばニューヨーク州で税金の詐欺をして、ジョージア州で大統領選挙を干渉した。多分刑務所には行かないけど、トランプはたくさん不法なことをしたから、政府は処罰しなきゃ。
Jan. 21, 2021
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Writing for analysis
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although news plays an essential role in shaping people’s lives, the way people perceive depends on the person who covers the news that suits their opinions. Some people watch the news if it matches their opinion while others consider different views even though they don’t fit. In my opinion, I think watching news presented by people of different ideas which I do not agree on. This is because it helps me to cover the topic from various viewpoints and distinguish between facts and flaws. Also, viewing an opposite version of my views allows me to increase my critical thinking skills.
First of all, if people watch news that won’t match their opinions, first they will listen to the person’s perspective and analyze the information. In other words, assimilating information from different standpoints gives people an opportunity to understand the difference between factual information and bias data. The USA, for example, a recent incident US capitol riot by the Trump supporters that devastated the nation. As I was a die heart fan of Trump, I usually followed the news that supports Trump. However, after listening to Stephen Colbert's explanation for the causes of the riot and evidence that supports Trump’s involvement in it. Though I won’t agree with him initially, by reading the news of various views regarding the same incident, I realized that he was the mastermind behind this riot. Thus, people like me will be blindsided if we agree to the news that suits our opinions and will never see the reality. Hence, covering the news from different vantage points allow people to refine the information.
Second of all, when people watch the opposite views of their opinions it aids them to increase their critical thinking skills. This means in the case of political conflicts if people continuously arguing about their topic unable to trace out the flaws in the system. India, for example, the ruling YSR party leaders always boast about the positive side of their party and the programs, whereas if people listen to the different sides of the same issue, they can persuade the people who stand in favor of their opinion. Specifically, the YSR party recently launched a program of the daily labors-this program helps labor to work for 3 hours and get pay of 300 rupees. In this way, people who are the potential to perform other duties are reluctant to work on account of the 300 rupees free money. YSR party is doing this even though it creates a huge burden on taxpayers, just because of the votes and for the party's survival. How can I know this flaw that is detrimental to future generations if I have not watched different views? Thus, the government is making people couch potatoes with this scheme. Therefore, people should be aware of the government's motivation behind the execution of the plan which can be accomplished by following news of various opinions that do not meet with our opinion.
In essence, I strongly agree that watching the news from different perspectives that I don’t agree on benefits people in two ways. One way, people recognize the bias information, and the other way people enhance their critical thinking skills.
Jan. 21, 2021
Book review - Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone
I highly recommend this book to those who are looking for a mind-blowing and well-executed story.
The book is full of plot twists, and there’s never a dull moment.
Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone was the book that turned me into a big Harry Potter fan.
J.K Rowling is so imaginative and writes everything in amazing detail. One more thing is that this book is an excellent pick for those who are learning English and want to test, improve their reading skills, or simply learn new vocabulary since the book is not that hard to follow. (I'm a nonnative speaker, and I was able to follow it).
What's more, I find this book most suited for learners at the intermediate level or above as they would benefit greatly from it. Anyway, it's a fantastic read, and it's definitely worth a try.
Jan. 21, 2021
Essay for evaluation
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Money plays a vital role in society as a means of making all sorts of transactions and knowing its value is critically important to people. Specifically, young people learning about financial management enables them to grow not only as financially independent individuals but also plan for a better future. Although some people think allowing children to know about money makes them materialistic, to me this is an amazing approach that benefits children in the future. I believe that children will understand the value of credit and use it wisely for their educational purposes at a later age, and financial planning helps children to know the significance of savings for emergency needs.
First of all, children cultivating a habit of controlling their own money gives them an opportunity to make their own budget and allocating funds based on their priorities. This means if children can maintain their money at a young age they will know where the money has to be spent or not. For example, when I was in high school, I remember that my mother gave me an allowance of $40 monthly for my spending. This includes stationary, project materials, or outside dining. If I spend the money on trivial things like movies or buying a CD, then I have to wait till month end to meet my other necessities. This habit really helped me, when I was in college because of spending money with a limited amount of cash I adjusted myself and only bought the most important things. As a result of this behavior, I could meet my expenses in the college with a clear allocation of funds to various purposes. Because of my financial understanding at a young age, I was able to plan my budget and develop as a financially independent person.
Second of all, children learning about money matters at a young age not only makes them financially independent but also helps them to save money for future needs. In particular, we are uncertain about the emergency needs so if children how to save money thereafter they can use the funds during an unexpected crisis. For example, my brother used to squander money and have had none nested eggs for meeting his needs. Recently, he met with an accident and ended up in the hospital bed looking for some help. At that time, I supported him because of my savings, which I kept back when I was working. Had I not learned financial matters at an earlier age, I would not have money to support my brother. Therefore, learning about cash flow helps people to save some money to meet emergency needs.
In essence, I completely agree that to become responsible citizens, children must learn to maintain their own money at a young age because it helps them to plan their budget and save money for meeting unexpected emergencies.
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