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Carros autônomos
Estou respondendo a alguns tópicos do meu livro em português. O texto abaixo é um daquelas respostas :)
"Empresas se unem para desenvolver sensores melhores para carros autônomos"
No futuro distante, é óbvio que todos os carros serão autônomos. Mas, antes disso, tem que existir um período com a transição. Atualmente, por exemplo, a maioria dos carros não são autônomos, mas os modelos mais novos estão ganhando mais recursos autônomos de segurança, tipo sensores de pontos cegos, assistência de estacionamento, orientação de faixa, etc.
De grão em grão, aqueles recursos vão ficar mais avançados, mais seguros e mais acessíveis para a maioria dos modelos de carro, enquanto a infraestrutura precisada vai se-desenvolver no mesmo tempo. A infraestrutura é súper importante, pois sem desenvolvimento dela, às vezes os carros não possam se comunicar entre outras veículos, e essa é uma coisa crítica para facilitar um sistema autônomos de transporte.
No mesmo tempo, tem que existir outros métodos de garantir segurança para os pedestres e ciclistas também, para desenvolver uma rede de transporte segura e integrada.
Nov. 16, 2020
Nov. 16, 2020
PUBG
Nowadays, I seldom play video games, but I sometimes do PUBG mobile, which is a battle royale game with 100 players. This game has a variety of modes, but I mainly play quad mode. It needs four players so I play this with three of my friends. I prefer voice chat with friends rather than playing the game. It is my stress reliever.
Nov. 16, 2020
Nov. 16, 2020
レイトンシリーズ
子供の頃、私の一番好きなゲーム機はニンテンドーDSでした。ある好きなゲームはレイトン教授でした。謎々ゲームです。あのとき、このシリーズで2ゲームだけがありました。その二つのゲームをよく遊びました。子供なので、ゲームの謎は難しくて、刺激的でした。高校生のとき、3のゲームをしました。懐かしくて、楽しいですが、簡単でした。今レイトン教授は6ゲームがあって、スピンオフもあります。全てのゲームは大人として簡単なので、多分遊ばないと思います。でも思い出としては大切です。
今年レイトンのアニメを見出しました。2009年の「レイトン教授と永遠の歌姫」（映画）と「レイトン ミステリー探偵社~カトリーのナゾトキファイル~」（シリーズ）があります。9月ぐらい永遠の歌姫を観ました。楽しくて、音楽と絵はレイトン教授のゲームにそっくりでした。今日はカトリーのナゾトキファイルを観始めました。レイトン教授の娘のカトリーは主人公です。レイトン本人は消えたから、カトリーは彼を探しています。主に、毎エピソードで、違う事件を解決します。映画に似ている、ゲームの影響が見えます。子供向けですが、面白いです。子供向けのアニメの日本語はもっと簡単なので、割に易い練習です。
Nov. 16, 2020
Nur Schreiben ueben :)
Lieber Herr Ebert,
Ich schreibe Ihnen wegen meiner Situation in meiner Arbeit. Ich moechte Ihnen Bescheid sagen, dass ich meine Arbeit nicht mehr bewaeltige, aus diesem Grund wuerde gerne um Ihr Verstaendnis fuer meine Situation bitten. Bei der Firma arbeite ich staendig von 8 Uhr bis 19 Uhr und innerhalb dieser Arbeitzeit habe ich eine Menge Aufgaben zu erledigen, vor allem die Last einer Schreibarbeit. Das mache ich alles alein. Dann bin ich voellig fix und fertig nach der Arbeit. Deswegen moechte ich einen Vorschlag machen: wie waere es, wenn ich erst von 8 Uhr bis 16 Uhr in einer Woche arbeite? Was denken Sie davon? Es waere sehr freundlich von Ihnen, wenn Sie mir das erlauben. Aber bei mir geht es ebenfalls doch kein Problem, wenn es das nicht geht. Denn ich kann ganz die Arbeitsituation bei der Firma verstehen.
Ich danke Ihnen sehr herzlich fuer Ihr Verstaendnis.
Nov. 16, 2020
Nov. 16, 2020
Journal 11/16/20
Because of the suggestions of the group owner, I have checked some information about this song, and I know that the song is written and sung for patients with depression. I have gone through the song and its lyrics, but I didn’t have a strong impression of it. Maybe it is because I am too old to be up to dates. I usually like songs with beautiful lyrics and melodies, especially the lyrics. It should be very meaningful and can inspire us. There are lots of these kinds of Chinese songs, for instance,
在这相似的深夜里, 你是否一样, 也在静静追悔感伤. 如果当时我们能不那么倔强现在也不那么遗憾
--刘若英《后来》
你是千堆雪我是长街, 怕日出一到彼此瓦解.
--王菲《邮差》
最美的不是下雨天,
是曾与你躲过雨的屋檐.
--周杰伦《不能说的秘密》and so on. These lyrics are very beautiful and meaningful and it can easily touch your heart. However, I am very glad to know that you like this song so much. Maybe each song belongs to a different person.
Nov. 16, 2020
15/11/20
Por alguna razón he estado muy cansada durante todo este fin de semana. Anoche me fui a dormir más temprano que lo normal y me levanté a las 10:00.
Después del desayuno, no tuve la energía ni las ganas de hacer algo en particular y volví a la cama para descansar. Aunque me habría gustado ir al museo o pasar el día leyendo con mi amiga, creo que tomar un descanso es nunca una cosa mala.
Nov. 16, 2020
A Chinese Language Partner
I occasionally talk with Chinese people as language exchange partners, one of them said to me in March that she will take a Chinese CPA exam in Nobenmber this year. So, she wants to halt chatting with me. Of course, I agree with her. She was a married woman working as an accountant in Shanghai. When I met her, she was working in a law office as a Japanese interpreter, it comes to her Japanese, she can barely talk to Japanese companies' Japanese employees in Japanese. She graduated from a famous graduate school of Jilin Province, and got a JLPT First class certificate, though, I think that the practices of her Japanese talking were not enough. Particularly, when she talks with a Japanese on the phone, it's so hard for her understand what the Japanese is talking about.
That's the reason I began to talk with her, after half a year passed, she managed to understand what a Japanese was talking about, in terms of me, felt like miraculous, her boss raised her Japanese language levelled up, and her boss also graduated from graduate school of the Hokkaido University, and had obtained a doctorate degree of civil law. However, for some reason, her boss cannot speak Japanese so well. Her boss's doctoral dissertation seemed to be barely passed.
During that time I had talked with her almost every day. Unfortunately, I could not but stopping to talk with her, because her boyfriend got jealous of me, she was talking beside him in Japanese. Her boyfriend couldn't understand any of the Japanese. I like dad jokes, making her laugh beside him seemed to make her boyfriend get jealous of me. We ended up talking. I don't know real reason, she implied the reason, but I don't want to pry into the real reason. Actually, I was a third wheel.
<< To be continued >>
Nov. 16, 2020
Presentation
Good evening
My name is Jorge Torres, I'm studying for take the IELTS exam, in Q2 in Twenty twenty one (2021). I think that writing is a weakness in my learning path for gain confident and expertise with English. I found this website casually, when I researched about resources for to improve writing skills and seems a good method for my practice.
Nov. 16, 2020
Mortal Combat
After finish the 7 days boring training course.
First thing I go home to do is play video games!
Mortal combat is the one I pick.
I might just played 1 hour approximately.
But my finger is too painful and I need to stop.
Someday I will just keep play video games all day all night.
Actually this is the 25th times I participated this training camp.
A quarter century!
But under the threat of virus.
Everybody just go home just and avoid grouping together.
I hate you! (Virus)
Nov. 16, 2020
Min dansk er ikke så god endnu
Min dansk er ikke så god endnu. Jeg kender ikke mange ord. Dansk grammatik er ikke så svært for mig, fordi jeg har lært tysk, og jeg tror, det hjælper. Der er også mange lignende ord mellem tysk og dansk.
Jeg bor nu i Rio de Janeiro, den næststørste by i Brasilien. Jeg har arbejdet i 5 år i São Paulo, den største by i mit land. Jeg har også boet i næsten 9 år i Japan. Jeg taler portugisisk, engelsk, japansk, spansk, tysk, noget russisk, og jeg prøver nu at lære andre sprog.
Jeg elsker at lære sprog, at rejse, at møde nye mennesker og at opdage nye ting. Jeg håber, at jeg en dag kan rejse til Danmark og opleve dette interessante land.
Nov. 15, 2020
Journal 11/16/20
Yesterday a foreigner on HelloTalk sent me a message and said he wanted to set up a language exchange group and invite me to join. I checked his profile and found out that he is living in Hefei now. Hefei is the capital city of my province. When I found out about these, I felt he was very kind, so I joined the WeChat group. Many of the group members are foreigners and they come from all over the world. Some of them are from South Africa, some are from Brazil, and some are from Myanmar. The group owner is from the US and yesterday he walked Shu mountain with a few of the group members in Hefei. I always read the words that the group owner wrote seriously because I want to learn more from him. I find that there is really something different from what I usually learn. For example, I used to write climb mountains, but he just says walk mountains. There are still many more. After all, I think I learned a lot from him.
Nov. 15, 2020
The Premodern Age
In the premodern age, the western world view came mostly from two sources: first, Christian religion which was mostly based on the teachings of the Bible and the Church’s interpretation of it, and the other, the philosophy of ancient Greek especially Aristotle’s views. Thomas Aquinas was the main intellectual figure in the middle ages who incorporated these two currents and shaped the world view of his era. This world view was predicated on the assumption of the existence of a good and wise God who had an on-going presence in all the components of the world. His wisdom gives a reasonable and understandable order to the framework of the world, and his goodness made the fear of living in a wild and unkind world tolerable. In other words, the presence and the authority of this well-intentioned and wise being made the world united and familiar with the scared and shied existence of humans, and therefore, the world became transformed from a threatening and frightening place to a safe and relaxing shelter or home. Thus, the grand religious narrative made humans assimilated into the world, that is to say, made a sort of life flow into the veins of the world, and made its structure look as if it was sensitive to the actions of humans and showed proportional and, often, predictable reactions to them. Therefore, in the framework of this grand narrative, humans could, at least somewhat, tame the world’s destructive and rebellious forces such as death, natural disasters, injustice, and social violence through the propitiation of wise and kind God.
Nov. 15, 2020
Los restaurantes
No sé cuando los primeros restaurantes aparecí. Debió de haber sido antes de los romanos. En los tiempos antiguos, había hostels que también se servía la comida. Durante el imperio romano, era común salir a un restaurante para cenar, especialmente en las ciudades como Pompeii. Pues, no estoy seguro sobre las personas súper ricas, pero la gente común lo hacía. Mientras aldeas y pueblos falten la elección de variedad, las ciudades suelen tener muchas diferentes comidas étnicas, mostrado la diversidad del lugar. Es interesante mirar todos los restaurantes rodeados en GoogleMaps y tal. Creo que te permite ver la diversidad del área. Aunque la comida es modificada para la gente del área, cada restaurante debe ser cómodo y amable para todos.
Nov. 15, 2020
Happy Pain
Few days ago, I am reading my friend’s post.
She said she can do 50 pushups in one round.
30 years ago, I can do 90 plus pushup in one round.
Anyway, motivate by her good behave.
Yesterday, I try to do 50 pushups too.
In my current condition one time 50 pushups is impossible.
My first attempt was 15 only.
So, I waited another hour to do the next set.
And the end of the day, totally did 48 pushups.
Close enough.
But today my while body is in pain.
I did try to pushups again, but only able to make 5 pushups!
Even I am in a lot of muscle pain but I will call that as happy pain.
Nov. 15, 2020
Nov. 15, 2020
Fuera de mi propio corazón
(Disculpa el tono sombrío de mi texto, y gracias por leerlo)
Hace algunos meses, aprendí lo que significaba querer a alguien. Siempre había parecido como un sentimiento demasiado fuerte para que yo aún pueda conocerlo, así que mi vida estaba demasiado rara, y no muy abierta sobre el mundo. Y cuando occurró, yo necesité demasiado tiempo para entender que estaba enamorada. Después de seis meses juntas, yo estaba empezando a entender algunas de esas cosas, pero ella empezó a no poder estar más presente para mi. Entonces me explicó que no podía soportar el peso y que tuvimos que interrumpir nuestra relación algun tiempo. Hoy estamos apartes desde hace siete días y recuerdo como yo amaba saber todo de ella. Me siento débil y lucho con el miedo que no vuelva más. Me parece como si yo estuviera fuera de mi propio corazón, suficientemente fuerta para continuar a vivir, pero no para sentirme llena.
Nov. 15, 2020
Quando foi a última vez que você foi num restaurante?
Eu fui para a última vez num restaurante em setembro. Infelizemente, os restaurantes são fechados desde outubro e nós não sabemos quando eles vão abrir de novo. Eles são fechados por causa de Covid19.
Então eu peço comida para entregar. Eu acho que nós devemos ajudar os restaurantes para sobreviver, é porque eu peço comida e quando eles vão abrir eu iria comer no restaurante.
Nov. 15, 2020
Mein Streak!
Seit zwei Tagen, habe ich auf Reddit keine Texte geschrieben. Ich denke daran, dass ich Deutsch vergessen habe. Zurzeit bin ich nicht in Deutschland, sondern bei meiner Mutter. Das liegt daran, dass die Vorlesungen online angeboten werden. Deswegen sagte mir meine Mutter, dass ich neues Jahr bei ihr feiern soll.
Mit meinem Deutchlernen gibt es eine Pause, weil ich mit Uni-Fächern beschäftigt bin. Für sechs Uni-Fächer habe ich mich angemeldet. Das ist zu viel, jedoch muss ich auch Zeit für das Deutschlernen finden muss.
Nov. 15, 2020
Nov. 15, 2020
Cooking Creamy Pasta
Today, I cooked for my family to eat something that everyone ate. This meal was a pasta! Few weeks ago, we made a dinner competetion at home because of my mother was bored to cook. In that competetion, I cooked creamy pasta that I made up at my student's home. They like it bu I lost it. To be honest, everyone shocked that I could nice and edible meal for them.
Today, my mother didn't want to cook and asked me to cook the pasta that I made that day. I made it but this time, that wasn't good.
Nov. 15, 2020
Bör USA ha allmän sjukvårdsförsäkring?
Hej allihopa, idag tänkte jag prata om ett ämne som står mig nära - tillgång till sjukvård i USA. Varför står ämnet nära mig? Under hela 2018 hade jag inte råd att köpa sjukvårdsförsäkring som student, och jag känner till många andra studenter som hamnade i samma läget som jag. Det här menar att om jag eller någon av de skulle ha en olycka skulle vi bli tvungen att betala alla kostnader "out of pocket", alltså utan stöd från en försäkringsbolag. Och eftersom sjukvårdstjänster är så dyra i USA skulle det lätt leda till att vi går i konkurs (sjukvårds betalning är den primära anledningen för att gå i konkurs i USA). Så frågan blir då - hur löser vi det här problemet?
Sedan 2010-talet har efterfrågan för någon allmän sjukvårdsförsäkring blivit större och större, särskilt i de 2016 och 2020 valen. Några politiker har sagt att de vill förbjuda privata försäkringsbolag som får vinster från kundernas betalningar medan andra vill hitta ett sätt att få alla skyddas (jag vet inte om det här ordet funkar här) med de privata bolagen som redan finns. Jag har inte lösningen till problemet, men jag vet att någonting måste göras om vi vill att alla amerikaner ska känna sig trygga i sitt eget land.
Nov. 15, 2020
Arbeit in Deutschland
-Das Schwierigste ist, sich selbst ganz ehrlich zu beschreiben. Deshalb habe ich eine meiner lieben deutschen Freundinnen, Elena Steel, gebeten, ein paar Worte über mich zu schreiben. Sie stammt aus Deutsch-Köln und arbeitet als klinische Psychologie
-- meine freundin elena ist eigentlich diejenige, die dies vorschlägt, damit ich in die deutsche kultur eingeführt werden kann, die wirklich so ist und es liebt, mehr deutsche menschen zu kennen und mein schwaches deutsch zu verbessern. Ich plane danach, mich entweder für einen psychologiestudiengang einzuschreiben oder zu finden Eine Berufsausbildung vielleicht im Hopital oder eine Arbeit mit meinem Abschluss in Soziologie, die weniger wahrscheinlich ist. Ich liebe es, dass deutsche Menschen einen hohen Stellenwert für Lernen und Bildung haben, und ich möchte das von ihnen aufgreifen und mich selbst verbessern