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Nov. 19, 2020
Parents should not restrict children from using electronics
It is hard to deny that use electronic devices will do harmful to health, and such a fact may mislead impressionable people to generate the opinion that parents should limit the time that children use electronic devices. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously. As far as health, knowledge, and feasibility are concerned, I strongly hold that parents should not limit the time that children spend on electronic devices.
First and foremost, children can learn new knowledge from internet by the electronic devices, as this various knowledge won’t be taught in school. Meanwhile, the culture of internet was changed very fast, if you keep distance from internet, you will behind our time; Not to mention that children are inclined to use newest internet hot word.
Furthermore, the fact that we can get sources we need by the electronic devices indicates that electronic devices will be feasible to us. Take the case of mine, I prepared the English test. The course of off-campus is extremely expensive. So I use my cell phone and laptop to learn English course. It’s cheap and feasible. As a result, I can sit here to take English test with confidence. Had it not been for using electronic devices to prepare my English test, I would never get ready to take the English test.
Nevertheless, a voice arises that use electronic devices will be harmful to our body. Ironically, we living an electronic era at our time. The electronic devices are everywhere in our daily life, and as the fast growing of the technique, the harm of electronic devices have been diminished. Therefore, use electronic devices in a right way cannot deteriorate your health.
In a nutshell, I maintain that parents should not limit the time that children use electronic devices. Admittedly, as my favorite quote from James Madison goes, as long as the reason of man continues fallible, different opinions will be formed, and some people may oppose me. However, I believe they will compromise after being exposed to my article.
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Nov. 19, 2020
Journal 11/19/20
Why do you learn a foreign language? This is a great question. For me, there are no special goals for learning English. I am a person who always likes doing things, and I don’t want to waste time. Currently, my work is not very busy and I think I have a lot of space time, so I want to do some things to entertain myself. But what can I do? According to our government policy, I am not allowed to run business although I am very into it. The things I would do must be available when I am at work, so that definitely would be learning. Thus, I chose to learn English. Why don’t I learn another foreign language? Because I think that English is more popular in the world. All above is the reason why I study English.
Nov. 19, 2020
Una carta sobre la lectura
Chris,
¡Gracias por tu carta!
¿Qué pasó con tu espalda? No sabía que te habías herido. ¿Sigues corriendo en intervales de dos minutos? Tal vez hace demasiado frío para correr ahora.
Echo de menos montar en bicicleta. Me imagino que tu ruta en el centro de la ciudad es muy bonita, más aún ahora que la Navidad viene pronto. Hace unas semanas gané una bicicleta en un sorteo pero tengo que ajustar los frenos antes de montarlo de nuevo. He estado muy ocupada últimamente pero intentaré ajustarlo mañana o el día siguiente para disfrutar del buen tiempo.
Ahora estoy leyendo "La Vida Secreta de las Abejas" de Sue Monk Kidd. Me inscribí en la biblioteca hace poco y saqué este libro para empezar. Lo elegí porque lo había leído en mi clase de inglés en el colegio y me gustó. Todavía no he leído mucho de ello porque es difícil dedicar tiempo al hacerlo cada día. También solía buscar cada palabra que no conocí, lo cual me distraía mucho. Ahora intento buscar sólo las palabras que necesito para sumergirme mejor en el libro.
En términos del genero, la mayoría de los libros que leí este año no fueron de ficción. Por ejemplo, leí un libro sobre los ataques de pánico, otro sobre budismo y unas autobiografías. No obstante, he dado cuenta que puede ser difícil sacar la motivación para terminar ese tipo de libro, en particular cuando sea en español.
Tengo ganas de seguir leyendo... ahora que he conseguido mi meta de lectura mi nuevo objetivo es leer más ficción (preferiblemente obras originales en español). Me gustaría volver al sentimiento de tener 8 años y estar de vacaciones, pasando todo el día leyendo. Era muy fácil leer cuando era niña.
¿Y tu? ¿Qué te gusta leer?
Como los días festivos vienen pronto, espero que tú y tu familia estéis sanos y felices.
Un abrazo,
Cordero
Nov. 19, 2020
Journal 11/19/20
It’s been a long time since I’ve watched a movie. Maybe it was a decade ago. So far I can remember the movie’s name: Mermaid, and the director is a famous comedy director called Zhou Xingchi from Hong Kong. The most impressive thing about watching movies was in my childhood. At that time, there was no cultural entertainment life in the countryside. As far as I can remember, the only thing that can make us excited is watching movies. When night comes, we bored fellow kids have nothing to do but look for somewhere to play movies. For doing this, we just depend on hearing the sound of the generator because as long as some villages play movies, they must use generators. Why? because back then, the countryside didn’t have electricity. Besides, playing movies was all outside in the fields. When we found some village was playing movies, we fellow children would walk for several kilometers to go there and when we were back, it was almost midnight. Although we felt tired, we were very happy.
Nov. 19, 2020
「老師嚴，學生才學得快、學得好。」你同意這樣的說法嗎？
我一看到這個説法就强烈地不同意。 不過這個説法的意思取決於【嚴】的定義。確實，學生會對【嚴】有各種定義。所以在這個文章我會創作我自己的定義來表達【嚴】的意思。在我看來，如果老師很嚴，他可能會有下面的特徵:
- 首先，他保持一個嚴格的時間表
- 其次, 他有一個很不依不饒的脾氣，而不接受學生的錯誤。長話短説，他不耐煩。
- 最後, 他的心眼有點窄。就是説，他容不下新主義，而不是一個開放的人。也跟教書的新方法也許不會合拍。他不嘗試教書的新方法，而是遵循古板的方法。
如果我們用這個定義，【有這樣的老師才學得好】對我來説就是一個謊言。我的哲學就是一個老師應該讓他的學生更深入（然後懷疑）世界的常態。對我來説，【學好】就是學會問問題，而不是學會總是服從權威遵守準則。在西方哲學的理念，權威跟嚴格是消極的事情。我自己剛好同意這個看法。就可以記得過去知名的研究者。 例如尼古拉·哥白尼 - 一個文藝復興時期的科學家。 一開始，他的主意關於行星的軌道對天主教會等於異端。我認爲當環境鼓勵時，新想法更容易出現。 所以，我不支持這樣的説法 （至少如果我們使用我的【嚴】的定義）。 當然會很重要有一個有組織，及時的老師，但是他不必嚴格。
謝謝大家的幫助 ：）
Nov. 19, 2020
The Queen’s Gambit Likes/Hates
If you are a Netflix fan, you should watch already.
I’ll let you decide which is likes or hates.
I love the protagonist her eyes are so big and nose too.
I wish I had a girlfriend just like that.
So, the word “endgame” is come from chess world not the avenger movie?
American always wins. Russian, monsters from space…
I start play chess now, I wish someday I can beat my old computer.
Chess it is game or our life is a “game” too.
A game lead to two paths.
Making a right decision is the win path.
Making a wrong decision is the losing path.
So, one winner with smile face and many losers with sad faces.
Nov. 19, 2020
Nov. 18, 2020
Las casas
Aunque para muchas personas es una necesidad, los humanos no han tenido las casas durante la mayoría de nuestra existencia. En lugar de ellas, vivíamos en cosas como tiendas de acampamento, ¡o hasta nada! Mientras las condiciones eran brutales, ayudaban a los humanos crecer y evolucionar. Cuando empezamos a construir casas hace miles de años, las poblaciones de estos lugares eran pequeñas, nada más que aldeas. Sin embargo, con la ayuda de la agricultura, la población humana aumentaba cada vez más. Las primeras ciudades se crean alrededor de tres miles años ac. Estas casas lucían muy diferente que las casas modernas, pero aún les daban a los habitantes protección de los elementos. Realmente, todas nuestras casas, incluso si sean muy diferente, sirven el mismo objetivo, protegernos del tiempo y la temperatura.
Por todo el mundo hay casas diferentes, adaptadas para las condiciones que se encuentren.
Nov. 18, 2020
Nov. 18, 2020
Nov. 18, 2020
"La zuppa degli idioma"
In Italia, se hai un’esame o un’intervista, i tuoi aimci non diceranno „Buona fortuna“ ma invece „In bocca al lupo“, perchè gli italiani credono, che dire „Buona fortuna“ a qualcuno fa al contrario sfortuna.
Una persona che dice „In bocca al lupo“ sarà probabilmente una persona „buono come il pane“, cioè un’individuo molto gentile e con un buon cuore.
Un’altra persone, che ha un carattere peggio, forse penserà „L’erba del vicino è sempre più verde!“ perche lui vuole quello che tu hai. Lui non dirà „In bocca al lupo“. Forse secondo lui tu non devi avere successo. Lui prova di combattere il tuo successo e prova a fermarti di riuscire i tuoi obiettivi. E invece pensa che lui dovrà avere il successo. Pensa „A mali estremi, estremi rimedi“.
In questi situazioni la cosa più importante per te è di non „affogare in un bicchier d’acqua“. Devi concentrarti sugli tuoi obiettivi e continuare il tuo duro lavoro fino a riesci le tue ambizioni.
Nov. 18, 2020
Rain
Today it's pouring outside. It was somewhat hot earlier, so I even put my swimsuit on. Now I feel ridiculous. In spite of that, I love rainy days. When the weather is rainy, I enjoy having a cup of coffee while watching something on Netflix. I usually like having a blanket with me, but today is not cold enough. It's 24 degrees Celsius, which is not much, but the humidity makes it worse. There's nothing but hatred in my soul towards hot weather.
I was thinking of sunbathing a little before it rained (I had no idea it would), as my mum worries about me not getting enough vitamin D if I don't. I get her point because I haven't gotten out of the house for months, and that can't be healthy.
However, since the rain ruined my plan, I'll have a cup of coffee while watching Harry Potter.
I was wondering if there are any phrases or expressions to denote hatred apart from saying "I hate this".
Nov. 18, 2020
Mein erstes Journal
Hallo Leute!
Ich bin Fred Flügel, ein brasilianer, der im Schreiben besser werden will. Ich habe den größten teil des Jahres 2016 in Deutchland gelebt und bin in dieser Zeit zur Schule gegangen, das heißt ich kann relativ gut sprechen, hören und lesen.
Aber jetzt möchte ich nochmal nach Deutchland fliegen, um da Physik an der Uni studieren. Dafür muss ich nicht nur gute Noten und einen Brief der Empfehlung haben, sondern auch einen guten Test-DAF schreiben.
In diesem Test hat man zwei Übungen, in denen man schreiben muss. Die erste ist Grafikbeschreibung: mit ungefähr 100 bis 150 wörter, man muss die Informationen eines Schaubilds zusammenfassen. (X hat in den letzten 3 Jahren gesunken, Y in Männer zweimal schwacher als in Frauen, usw. )
In der zweiten Übung, muss man einen argumentativen Text schreiben. Im Blatt gibt es ein paar Texte oder Bilder, die um das Thema gehen, und damit schreibt man 200 wörter von Argumente und Gedanken über das Thema.
Ich habe ein bisschen Angst vor dem Test. Ein Teil von mir denkt, dass ich nie eine gute Schreibübung machen kann. Aber ich hoffe, dass mit der Erweiterung meines Wortschatz und mit der Praxis, jeden Tag ein bisschen zu schreiben, werde ich gute Ergebnisse erzielen.
Nov. 18, 2020
Удаления зубов мудрости 2
Мне вырвали все четыре зубы мудрости две недели назад. После операции врач мне сказал, что ему было трудно вырвать зубы, но в итоге, ему удалось. Первые несколько дней было очень больно, но я решила не использовать опиодных медикаменты, хотя у меня был рецепт на них. Я не могла есть жесткую еду, поэтому я ела суп, йогурт и много арахисового масла. Теперь я чувствую себя довольно лучше. Зубы ещё болеют, но не так плохо. Я просто рада, что операция прошла и не надо беспокоиться об этой.
Nov. 18, 2020
Shortsentences23
1. Çitimizi eski ve sağlam değil kısa bir süre içinde yıkılacak. Our fence is old and not sturdy, it will collapse soon.
2. Yaklaşık ben on yaşındayken balıkçı iskelesinden bir küçük köpek balığı yakladim. When I was around 10 years old, i caught a small shark from a fishing pier.
3. Balık tutmaktan bitirdik sonra arabamın içinde balık kokusunu yayılıyordu. After we finished fishing, the smell of fish was spreading inside my car.
4. Odamdaki yayılan kokusunu seviyorum. İ love the smell that is spreading in my room.
5. Balıkçı dükkanın duvarında en büyükleri balık yakalandığını gösteren fotoğrafları sergilenecek. The photographs that show the biggest fish that are caught, will be on display on the wall of the bait shop.
6. Neden Yeni gömleklerini henüz sergilenmiyor hiç bilmiyorum. İ don't know why the new shirts are not on display yet.
7. Çok fazla şapkalar sergilenmekte vardı, bir şapka seçemebilirdim. There was too many hats on display, i was unable to choose a hat.
8. Bağıran adam hiç herkesin ilgisini çekmedi, o ne istiyordu emin değilim. The man who was shouting did not catch anyone's attention, I'm not sure what he wanted.
9. Yeni saç kesimini ile herkesin iligsi çekebileceksin. You will be able to get everyone's attention with your new haircut.
10. Kasabanın gecekondu bölgesinde benzin için durdum. İ stopped for gas in the slum part of the the town.
11. Gecekondu mahallesinde yürüyorum, çoktan biri bazı uyuşturucu bana teklif etti. I'm walking in a slum neighborhood, someone has already offered me drugs.
12. Evime gitmek için bir gecekondu mahallesinin yürümem lazım. İ have to walk through a slum neighborhood to get home.
13. Kasabamdaki bazı gecekondu mahallelerini gözden kayboluyor. Some of the slums in my town are disappearing. There are slums in the eastern part of town, but there are no slums in the western part of town.
14. odamı temizlemek için garajdaki süpürge'yi ve eski püskü giysilere ihtiyacım var. İ need the broom that is in the garage and old rags to clean my room.
15. Temizlemek için eski püskü gömleklerimi kullanabilirsin. You can use my raggedy shirts for cleaning.
16. Eski püskü giysilerimi çöpe atacağım, o zaman bu hafta sonunda yeni kıyafetleri alacağım. I will throw away my raggedy clothes, and then this weekend i buy new clothes.
17. Evimdeken eski püskü gömleklerimden keyif alarım. İ enjoy wearing my raggedy clothes while I'm at home.
18. Çizmelerimi biraz eski püskü ama yeni çizmeleri almak istemiyorum. My boots are a little raggedy, but i don't want to buy new boots.
19.Güneş gözlüğümü kırıldı şu an işe yaramayacak. My sunglasses broke, they will not be useful now.
20. Boya kovasından boyayı bütün yere yayılıyor. Paint from the paint can is spreading all over the floor.
Nov. 18, 2020
Nov. 18, 2020
Nov. 18, 2020
Ciudad de Natal
No sé si mi ciudad de natal es una ciudad pequeña o pueblo grande. Ha registraba como una ciudad, por eso la llamo una ciudad. Me acuerdo cuando fui una niña pequeña, tuvo sólo una panadería. Esa panadería es uno de los lugares mis favoritos. Porque es cerca de nuestra casa, durante de los fines de semana, en la mañana temprana, caminaba a esa con mis padres. Ahora hay muchos panaderías, pero todavía está eso.
Hay una cathedral grande en el centro de la ciudad. Casi todos personas asisten a misa allá. A lado de cathedral es mi escuela primaria. Es una escuela católica. La escuela es grande, tiene sólo dos pisos pero el techos son muy altos. Es también antigua, era un convento. Mis amigas y yo pensábamos que la escuela fue embrujada.
Hay también la casa de mi abuela. Su casa es de tamaño bastante pero su jardín es amplio. Tiene muchos clases de plantas y árboles. Hay unos árboles de manga, de papaya, de guava, y banana. Mi abuela tiene unos pollos y unas cabras. Está en las afueras de la ciudad, por eso, detrás de su casa es una claro. Dejaba las cabras allá para comer en la mañana y en la tarde las devolvían a sus establo. Cada verano, me quedo en la casa de mi abuela, con mis primos.
Nov. 18, 2020
Canada Vancouver got many Japanese
Just watched a You Tuber introduce four cities in Canada.
He is looking for a city for immigrate not for travel.
I know nothing about Canada.
Only remember before 1997 many Hong Kong people pick this place to live.
So, I was thinking Canada should have many Hong Kong people.
Maybe they do but actually they have many people from other countries too.
Because this You Tuber said there is a city (in Canada) French is main language! (English is Second)
Anyway, he also mentions that many Japanese lives in Vancouver too.
I was a little surprise by that.
Is that true?
Nov. 18, 2020
Die Antwort einer E-Mail
Sehr geehrter Herr Mustermann,
vielen Dank für Ihre schnelle Antwort bezüglich des Lieferdatums meines Stuhles. Ich nehme an, dass der Stuhl bei mir zu Hause an diesem Datum eintreffen wird, ist das richtig?
Zu Ihrem Antrag: Im Anhang könnte Sie den signierten Datenschutzhinweis, die Sie mir geschickt haben, finden.
Mit freundlich Grüßen
Rom
Nov. 18, 2020
Die deutsche The Office
The Office war ein sehr beliebte Series in dem USA, es hat sogar ein neues TV-Genre schuf sozusagen. Manche Leute kennen auch die UK version, die nicht wie lustig als der USA Version ist. Aber wusstest du dass ein chilenisch version auf Spanisch namens La Ofis gibt? Es ist furchtbar, aber es ist nicht was ich wollte heute darüber reden. Ich will anstatt über die deutsche Version reden. Es heißt nicht "Das Büro", sondern Stromberg, und Ricky Gervais der produzierte die US-Adaption hat nichts damit zu tun, aber die Idee ist mehr oder weniger die Gleiche. Stromberg ist ein Damenmann, voll mit Zuversicht und Respektlosigkeit. In die original The Office, der größte Kontrast war zwischen Jim und Dwight aber hier es ist zwischen Stromberg und sein schüchtern und ungeschickt Kollege namens Ernie. Es ist eine lustige Serie, zumindest lustiger als die UK The Office.