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안녕하세요~
안녕하세요! 저는 케서린이라고요. 24살이고 캐나다 사람이에요! 저는 영어 선생님이구요. 한국에 살고 여기에 영어 가르쳐요!
한국어 배운지 거의 2 년이 됐어요. 근데 지금부터 완전히 독학으로 공부해서 실력이 아직 너무 부족해요. 그래서 앞으로 여기에 매일 일기를 쓸 거에요!
오늘은 제 취미에 대해 쓸 거에요~
첫번째 연어 배우기를 너무 좋아해요! 지금 한국어하고 일본어하고 프랑스를 공부하고 있어요! 왜 너무 좋아하는 지 잘 모르겠어요 ㅋㅋㅋ 그냥 좋아해요!
두번째 소설 읽기! 어렸을 때 책을 읽기 가장 좋아하는 거이었어요! 지금 "잘못은 우리 별에서"를 일고 있어요. 한국어 많이 공부해서 한국으로 쓴 책을 읽기 시작했어요.
마지막으로 사진 찍기를 좋아해요! 저는 인스타그램에 예쁜 사진을 올려요! 예쁜 곳이나 예쁜 전망을 보면 사진을 찍는 거 좋아해요.
차, 오늘 일기를 끝!
Nov. 26, 2019
Je me présente!
Bonjour! Je suis américaine, mais j'habite en Corée du Sud. Quand j'étais jeune, j'étudiais le français pendant sept ans plus. Mon rêve était devenir traductrice français-anglais! Mais quand j'étais étudiante à l'université, mon rêve a changé. J'aime bien habiter en Corée, et maintenant je parle couramment le coréen. Mais comme je n'ai pas utilisé le français pendant plusiers années, j'ai presque tout oublié. Je suis en train de l'apprendre encore une fois! J'éspère que je pourra utiliser souvent ce site pour ameliorer mon français.
Nov. 26, 2019
Ein neuer Anfang
Wie ich gestern gesagt habe, möchte ich einfache Sätze schreiben. Zumindest bis ich genug Selbstbewusstsein habe, um mehr komplexe und schwierige Sätze zu bilden. Zwar fühle ich mich wohl sicher, dass ich nicht so viele Fehler gemacht habe. Aber der Fell ist, mache ich oft Fehler, dass meiner Meinung nach, sind sehr grundsätzlich. Na ja, mit genug Übung wird mein Deutsch sicher verbessern.
Nov. 25, 2019
Eating a god healthy food to balance the life in all ways
Foods are importants for our bodies and for the minds because you are what you eat, and the mind is also what you eat. I shall never say never eat a hamburger or a taco, they are delicios and sometimes is delicios to eat something yum, but there must to be a limit and the vegetables need to be in your life too and the fruits and water. for example, a tipic breakfast in my homestead commences with slices of fruit in the plate and it be yellow if it is pineapple or peach, and orange is papaya or mango, red if watermelon, but all times for breakfast the fruits are in slices on the plates to support the good nutrition we wish to accomplish.
The fruit is not all that fills the plate in mornings also the oat for the flower of intestines to keep health in digestive system and god proteins from beans or lentils and soy to give a strong push to the body early in the morning and if fries the food, canola oil, or corn oils is not as suggested as olives for better nutrition. on fact, we costum in home to use olives oils on bread and cheese, that go well with fresh juice directly from the fruit. orange, greatfruit, or pomello and must to be drinking very inmediately after the expulsion of the juice to retain the vitamins properties so all this together does contributions to the manner the body consumes resources and assigns vitamins, carbohydrates, proteins minerals for different functions.
Water is most important. water is a need during all the day. the habit to develop must to be 8 glasses of waters all the day, for it makes good results in relation with the inner systems, and the hydrant the body needs for a good function. so minimun there must to have been drinking four glasses of water by the hour of lunch, and depends on the activity or the work the person makes, he must to eat more or less, but all contained in the likes of rice, and white meats like chicken or turkey or fish. duck is good too because it is lean, not like the pig who has more grease the body sucks in the blood flow and gives clogs to the arteries. there must to be vegetables, like beets carrots celeries squashes cucumbers eggplants corns cauliflour and they can be cooking on fresh but are a great source of antioxidants for the benefits of the system in the body, the balance is what must to be not disremembered because it goes like this: much quantity of rice and greens, and the rest leans meats. if it is pig, only less than 20 percent of total food intake so the proportions combine with the plan of breakfast and the slices of fruits and the oats and the fresh expulsed juice continue feeding the body with many energy.
Depends of activities done, dinner is necessary or not. If it is, dinner must be careful, like same lean idea, but in other products. betters options are always salads with ricota cheese and baslamic vineger to ensure the systems rests well in the night with no movements in the stomach to provoke malignant feelings, and receive a good night sleep. After that repeat process all days, only susbtitute the menu with the proportions with the time, and accept the idea of discipline for the benefits of the body and the mind.
Nov. 25, 2019
たら
すし だったら、 かう よ。
牛乳 だったら、 のみません。
お母さん だったら、お父さん で 行きません。
たくさん すし を たべたら、あなた は 太い なりますよ！
たてもの が たかかったら、 たぶん あぶない です。
さむかったら、うわぎ を きます。
あつかったら、 かのじょ は 外 に いきません。
犬 だったら、たべたくないよ！
犬 が かわいかったら、 私 は こわしい だ！
ねこ だったら、大嫌い です。
イギルス を いったら、 あなた で べんきょうします。
ボビーさん が きたら、 私 は にける。
雨 が ふったら、 あの みせ が しまります。
本 は おもしろかったら、 よみたい だ。
がんばったら、 まける じゃないよ！
ゆうめい だったら、 かれ の 友達 に なりたいだ。
Nov. 25, 2019
Train tickets
I took in the train this morning and then walk up to my seat which was occupied another person. I asked them this is my seat but he and him friends insisted their seats. Then it hit hard, I was looking at wrong ticket which is valid for another train.
I felt so ashamed, and I left with saying "I am sorry" and walking up to my actual seat.
Nov. 25, 2019
2019年11月16日
我今天好累。昨天是禮拜五，但我沒上班。因為我爺爺上個禮拜過世了所以我想休息一點。
昨天早上我五點半起床開始學習語言。大概七點半我站在窗戶前看外面。我看到我的同事們都站在道路上等巴士。那時候感覺有一點不自在。看他們出發以後我打電話給我媽媽。因為爺爺過世所以外婆很孤獨。我媽媽去外婆家跟他在一起。聊天一點以後我整天都跟我男朋友在一起。我們先去超市買東西。然後我們去咖啡廳喝飲料學習外語。晚上我們點了炸雞。
我和我男朋友九點半睡覺。然後三時間之後起床了。原因就是我爺爺的葬禮。葬禮是美國時間15日早上11點，韓國時間早上1點。所以我和我男朋友12點半起床穿衣服。當然我們不可以去美國。但是我們給我姐姐打視訊電話參加爺爺的葬禮。因為這樣我們今天一直很累! 所以我們沒做特別的事。
Nov. 25, 2019
Hoi! :)
Nu is het Nederlands aan de buurt!
Hallo! Ik ben Luna, ik ben 26 en ik woon in Nederland. Ik kom oorspronkelijk uit Engeland, maar ik ben naar Nederland verhuisd in December 2018.
Ik heb sinds January 2019 het Nederlands geleerd, omdat ik denk dat het Nederlands leren echt belangrijk is! Heel veel mensen zeggen tegen mij, Ach, je hoeft niet Nederlands te leren, hoor! Iedereen spreekt goed Engels! - wat is waar, maar... als ik een goede baan wil, moet ik ook goed Nederlands spreken :P Dus... ja, hier ben ik!
Zoals je ziet, is mijn Nederlands echt slecht. Ik woon met mijn Nederlander vriend, maar we spreken altijd in Engels. Gisteren hebben we alleen in het Nederlands geprobeerd te spreken terwijl we een game speelden. Het was...moeilijk, en ik heb me hoe slecht mijn Nederlands is gerealiseerd. Ik spreek Nederlands op het werk maar het is alleen basic sentences :c Dus, ik wil graag hier mijn Nederlands verbeteren :)
Bedankt alvast!
Nov. 25, 2019
Frustrationen
Hi, heute bin ich ein bisschen wütend... wie kann es sein, dass ich sehr oft etwas auf Deutsch falsch bzw. mit Fehlern schreiben? Ich weiß schon, dass beim Sprache lernen es um Fehler machen geht und damit kann man von seine Fehler lernen. Vielleicht sollte ich mit einfachen Sätzen anfangen, denn sie sind wohl nicht so schwierig einzufallen!
Nov. 25, 2019
Nov. 24, 2019
練習03
文法を覚えるために例文を書いてみます。よろしく！
ようと〜まいと、ようが〜まいが
11. 出席しようとすまいか、誰も気にしない。
12. 職場に行こうが行くまいが、仕事に集中できない。
ばかりに
13. 犬は部屋を汚したばかりに、一日中掃除しました。
14. 遅刻するくせであるばかりに、バイトはクビになった。
に言わせれば
15. 先輩から言わせれば、後輩の私たちはまだ下手だ。
16. 犬に言わせれば、飼い主なしに生きられない。
ざる
17. 満たさざる王子のお願いが叶われたそばからすぐ新しい要求を言う。
18. 降り止まざる雨のせい街は洪水になりました。
からといって
19. 毎日絵を描くからって美術家になれるわけじゃない。
20. 彼女にたくさんのバラをあげるからといって両思うになるのは限らない。
と相まって
21. 早朝と子供の泣き声とが相まって気分が悪くなるに決まっている。
22. ゲームとアニメとが相まって現実から逃げようとしました。
あかつきには
23. 質問をよく考えた暁には答えが出ました。
24. SNSに投稿したあかつきにはバイラルになりました。
Nov. 24, 2019
Mein erster Beitrag
Hallo,
Das ist mein erster Beitrag. Ich dachte, dass vielleicht sollte ich über meinen Tag schreiben.
Ich stand um 8 Uhr auf. Ich aß Müsli zum Frühstück. Dann ging ich einkaufen bei Aldi. Da kaufte ich Reis, Obst and Gemüse. Danach kam ich zurück nach Hause und räumte ein bisschen auf. Dann ging ich hinaus, um mit einem Freund Tennis zu spielen. Ich spielte ungefähr zwei Stunden. Nach dem Ende des Tennisspiels war ich ganz müde und deswegen kam ich zurück nach Hause. Am Abend sah ich mir eine Komödie an. Und jetzt dachte ich, dass ich ein bisschen Deutsch lernen sollte. Aus diesem Grund schrieb ich diesen Text.
Beste Grüße,
M
Nov. 24, 2019
Karlsruhe
Am diesen Tag bin ich, wegen eine Geschäftsreise, nach Karlsruhe gefahren. Deshalb musste ich heute um ca. 05:20 Uhr aufwachen, denn mein Zug nach Karlsruhe färht um 06:20 Uhr. Interessant ist, das Bundesverfassungsgericht liegt in der Stadt Karlsruhe, da es geht nicht um normale Fälle, sondern nur Fälle die die Verfassung betrifft.
Nov. 23, 2019
Tagebucheintrag #3
23. November 2019
Ah, es ist ein neuen Tag. Ich habe eine Weile nicht geschrieben. Genug Füllstoffe, und hier ist mein Tag:
Heute, ich hatte Klasse. Meine Schule musste den Unterricht ersetzen, da wir früher keinen Unterricht hatten. Ich musste Englisch, Mathematik, Sport und Kunst ersetzen. Danach musste ich Kurse machen, sie sind Verwaltung.
Ich bin gerade nach Hause gekommen und schreibe das hier.
Wie immer hoffe ich, dass dies in Ordnung ist!
Vielen dank fürs Lesen!
Nov. 23, 2019
Der Tag nach dem Konzert
Am Mittwoch, bin ich um ungefähr 08:00 Uhr aufgewachsen, weil das Konzert von gestern sehr spät endete. Trotzdem, das Erlebnis war einfach großartig. Deshalb war ich während des Tages ein bisschen müde, aber nicht so viel. Bei der Arbeit habe ich auch ein paar Sachen geschafft, aber nicht alle was ich schaffen möchte. Morgen habe ich eine Geschäftsreise geplant, die den ganzen Tag braucht. Ich will in den nächsten Tagen was von diesem Tag erzählen.
Nov. 23, 2019
Nov. 22, 2019
Nov. 22, 2019
Vacations last year (Problem solution story)
There were many bad roads we drive in the way to the beach. the wholes on the pavement are so deep you can put your foot your calf and your knee inside and keep going. Because of this, the car had problems of the tires and one exploded when it went into a whole. the tools had stayed in the garage, and we could not see any help 360 degrees around. we were by ourselves. good thing is mum has many resources of the hands, and quickly found a way to make lever with branches she spotted in the distance, so after breaking them off the trees, and with the use of a big rock, all the family stands on top of the branch which is by now leaning over the big rock on the side of the car with the wheel that exploded in the deep whole, so after several up and down motions, the car begins to give in, and little by little it moves to the side, and the hope of all around begins to rise, and in the final moment, we did it. With all the participation of every member of the family in this journey we push the cars approximately 37 degrees in a direction away from the hole, and now it is free. we have regained the liberty of the car, but still have most important problem: the wheel is exploded, and pushing car is not an option, because it is heavy, and we are strong but not that strong, so in the final instance, my brother Marco remembers we have coupon for $350.00 we won on a Black Friday sale, and he thinks we don't have to preoccupy for the wheel because we can only buy one more wheel with no difficulty if we only go to store and exchange our coupon for new wheel. My mum is not sure if this is good thought because this is not the only whole we see on the road. the holes are all over the pavement and some deeper than others, others deep enough to go in up to stomach, and she worried that we are driving and fit the other wheels in other holes on the road, and we have the problem of exploded wheels again, except this times we may not do much to solutions the problem, because there are no branches in the distance we can see, only grass and that does not have the strength necessary to push car away from hole if this happens again. the good thing is my family is supernatural intelligent and my brother Paul decides to say my mum the solution is driving by the side of the road not on the road. of course she says, no matter the exploded wheel, the sides of the road doesnt have much holes so the problem is not that obvious. with plan in mind, we drive at full velocity to the store and exchange the coupon, we got the best new wheel we needed to change for the exploded one and we manage to stay at the beach before the sun goes under. we had a rocky start to the beach trip, but it was great after all at the final. This is my trip to the beach and the memory i remember of the problems and solution we found to work together to never surrender in the presence of a trouble that is not enough to stop us.
Nov. 22, 2019
Nov. 22, 2019
練習０２
前回の投稿は残念ながら添削されていないけどまた投稿やってみます。
練習なので勉強している文法に合わせている文を書いてみました。
ばこそ
1. 頭が良ければこそ、ちゃんと学校に通うべきだ。
2. 身長が低ければこそ、姿勢を注意するのだ。
とあって
3. 晴れている秋の日とあって、紅葉を見に行く人が多い。
4. 悠介くんは就職しているとあって、髪を黒く染めた。
ではあるまいし
5. デブではあるまいし、元気な食欲があることだけだよ。
6. 健康が悪いのではあるまいし、階段はそんなに疲れるものじゃない。
手前
7. おじさんにいつもアドバイスをもらっている手前、おじさんに何かがあったら手伝えたい。
8. うさぎの手前、獣医に行くのはすごく怖い。
ゆえに
9. 実家の事情ゆえに、結婚式に出席できません。
10. 先輩にひどくいじめられた故に、会社を辞めることにしました。
Nov. 22, 2019
Nov. 22, 2019
Das Leprous Konzert
Am Dienstag, den neunzehnten November, bin ich in einen des besten Konzerts meines Lebens gewesen. Die Band Leprous hat in der Freiheizhalle in München für ungefähr zwei Stunden lang gespielt. Vorher haben zwei andere Bands auch Musik gespielt, weil sie das Konzert für Leprous öffnen haben. Ich war in der ersten Reihe und habe alle die Bandmitglieder sehr nähe gesehen.
Nov. 22, 2019
Preference
( Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. )
There are over hundreds of ways to complete projects, some like to do it with co-workers, others prefer doing by themself. Both have upsides and downsides, working with other people will gain vary viewpoints from them, and learn how to respect from different opinions; however, doing work alone that is able to state their own points completely.
To begin with, there are a lot of views for a thing because everyone is from different places, growing in different families, and different education. To hear differing aspects is one of the life lessons which will probably give you other ideas that you have not ever thought of; learn more knowledge which you have not expected to. In addition, one of the more important things of working on school projects is a discussion. Students can learn how to communicate with others who have opposite sights and respect them, which definitely affect on their social network. If someone who did not listen to other viewpoints and only insist own point, he/she might do not have many friends. Moreover, having a good communication skill and accepting others advises which will help you to earn more life-enriching experience, and let you become a better person.
On the other hand, work school projects on your own are a good way to state own's points completely. Students are able to illustrate the self idea and give a whole comprehensive picture to someone who examines their works. Furthermore, doing homework alone is more efficient. The reseasons of this are that you can schedule your time, make a plan and complete it as soon as possible, and does not have to match-up co-workers' schedule that will cut much more time.
To put it briefly, some students prefer doing assignments with a group over than working alone. This is because listen to different points which gives much more benefits, such as communication and respecting skill, but disadvantages are not able to demonstrate own ideas completely and not efficiency. Personally, I, for one, prefer working on school projects with other students.
Nov. 21, 2019
Eintrag 15
Manchmal finde ich wenige Zeit, um einen Eintrag für meinen Journal zu schreiben. Ich versuche jedoch die Zeit zu finden und in meinem Journal Fortschritt zu machen. Ich denke, es fühlt sich ein bisschen wie eine Sucht, aber die Sucht hier geht um eine Sprache zu lernen. Denn wenn man Korrekturen erhalten kann die Korrekturen das Lernen einer Sprache in etwas angenehm umwandeln. Trotz meiner Fehlern beim schreiben (und ich mache ja viele Fehler!), fühle ich mich größer Fortschritt in meiner Deutschkenntnis.
Nov. 21, 2019
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