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Dec. 3, 2020
About me
I'm a person who enjoy stay alone, I don't know why but in general I prefer my own company, maybe because I love think about the universe, the crazy ideas, possible futures or simply smile remember embarrassing situation... My personality limited my number of friends but my friend understand me and I love them for that, sometimes is difficult for me understand when I can speak with them because I think that they are busy or they don't want speak we anyone or they want a time for themselves and I prefer respect yours space.
Dec. 3, 2020
Home sweet home.
I live in Mexico City. This city could be splendid for many, but awful for others. I enjoy the opportunities you can have in this city. For example, the most notable university in the country is in Mexico City; at this place, we have too many various restaurants and eating options. We have theaters, museums, places for shopping...
On the other hand, Mexico City is stressful, there is traffic almost all day, some places in the city are dangerous, and sometimes the people not very friendly.
Despite these opposite aspects, Mexico City has something that enchants. And for people like me, that was born here, it could be challenging to adapt to other places. I'm a city rat.
Dec. 3, 2020
La Dispute
J’ai engagé une femme pour nettoyer la maison de mes parents. Après 4 heures et demi, elle m’a dit ça allait coûter $500. J’ai été très étonnée, parce que le montant n’était pas raisonnable. C’est plus de $100 de l’heure. Elle m’a dit qu’elle nettoyer toutes les fenêtres, à l’intérieur et comme l’extérieur. Mais c’est impossible ! À moins d’avoir une échelle et d’avoir pu atteindre les fenêtres à premier étage, elle n’aurait pas pu les nettoyer. De plus, elle a expliqué que les salles de bain et les tiroirs de la maison étaient sales, mais encore une fois, ce n’est pas probable. Elle vient de nettoyer la maison il y a trois semaines, et personne n’y a même dormi depuis. J’ai suggéré que nous trouvions un compromis, mais elle a refusé. Plus tard, son mari m’a envoyé un texte très menaçant. La grammaire était vraiment mauvaise, mais j’ai compris l’essentiel de ce qu’il essayait de dire. Maintenant, je devrais chercher une solution pour résoudre cette dispute. Je pense que j’ai le droit de la poser pourquoi la tâche de nettoyer est si chère.
Dec. 3, 2020
Snow
I saw a Youtube video of Canada. It seems they've gotten their real first snow fall. It's a beautiful scenery. When I was kid, snow piled up on the ground in my city at least a few times a year, but we didn't have snow last winter. It might have snowed lightly, but I missed seeing it. I'm looking forward to seeing how the scenery will change in Canada during winter.
Dec. 3, 2020
About gym:
The gym help me fisical and mentally. I love it! I created a routine and habit at the gym is incredible how make adapt at the situaction and body, mint at form to the that I want. I’m stronger fisical and mentally is amazing. I realized routine of legs and abdominals. My favorite routine is the of legs but is more difficult and more painful.
Well, at now I’m mantened the constance and perseverance, is a path very difficult but I'm firm and sure that I’ll achieve my objectiv and my dreams.
Dec. 3, 2020
Journal 12/3/20
I have forgotten how many times I have come to Dabie mountain. It is located at the border of Anhui, Henan and Hubei provinces, and it is between the Huai river and the Yangtze river. It covers 380 kilometers long from east to west and 180 kilometers long from south to north. Its average altitude is 500 to 800 meters, as well as 1500 meters in the main hills area. Its highest peak is Baimajian, 1777 meters. There are many beautiful scenic spots in Dabie mountain. The most famous one is Tiantangzhai, and its highest peak is 1729 meters, and covers 172 square kilometers.
Dec. 3, 2020
My Bicycle Needs Repairing
I'm going to a bicycle shop today. My bicycle needs repairing. Its battery runs out pretty soon. I might have to replace the battery. I looked into the bicycle maker's website. It says my bicycle's battery may be fixed by rewriting the program. I don't correctly remember when I bought it, but I've used it for about seven years or so. I had it repaired many times. I take care of it and want to ride it longer until it's completely broken.
Dec. 3, 2020
Mi rutina
¡Hola a todos!
Es la primera vez que yo escribo una revista en español. He estado aprendiendo español un poco más de un mes, más o menos. Ahora, todavía es muy difícil escribir en español para mí y solo puedo hacerlo muy lento, pero espero que escribiendo una revista va a ayudarme aprender a escribir en esta lengua.
Escribir en español es difícil, por supuesto, especialmente en el principio. Pero hablar es mucho más difícil para mí. Cuando intento hablar con mi amigo español, siempre tengo que pensar sobre los palabras y cuales de ellas debo usar. Muchas veces no puedo recordarlas immediatamente y por eso, la conversacíon se vuelve muy lenta. Pero en ese caso, si no puedo recordar una palabra o una structura de una frase, simplemente lo digo en inglés y así continuamos la conversación.
Estudio español todos los días, normalmente tres o cuatro horas al día, a veces más, cuando estoy muy aburrido y no tengo nada más a hacer. He casi terminado un curso de audios que escucho cada día durante una hora, más o menos. Entonces hago ejercicios en el libro para aprender español, durante una hora también, a veces más. Además, veo videos en español en YouTube todo el tiempo y esos me ayudan a mejorar también. Y desde ahora, escribir la revista será una otra forma de aprender español, supongo.
Me encanta mucho la lengua española y espero que en futuro lo puede hablar y escribir mucho mejor.
¡Gracias por leer!
Dec. 3, 2020
趣味の紹介
漫才のどこが面白いかと言いますとはっきり言えませんがやはり友だちとみて一緒に笑う，それって素晴らしいものじゃありませんか？それにストレスが溜まったときは心を落ち着かせるように漫才を楽しむのは最高だと思いませんか？
“なぜ海外の方は日本の漫才に興味があるでしょうか”と思っている人はいるでしょ。なぜかはやはり私にもよくわからないが15歳のころに始めたと思います。その頃に大切な幼馴染がアニメをみたりして漫画をよんだりし始めました，私も友だちとしてそういうことは気になりました。ある日，その子が私に動画を見させました。漫才の動画でした。そのあと，気になっていましたので自分で漫才の動画を見始めました。もっとみるともっと好きになっていました。毎週，その友だちの部屋にいって一緒に漫才をみることは日頃のことになりました。
漫才に興味があるなら，次のおすすめを見てみるとうれしいです。最初は有名な漫才師ですがやはり最高の和牛，紹介の要らないコンビなので早速次行きましょうか。大阪弁とおかやま弁のお笑いコンビの千鳥，仲の良い二人が高校から同級生で一緒に漫才師になりました。特別な漫才スタイルだからぜひみてください。最後はデュオではなくてトリオの“ロバート”。妙なスタイルですが絶対に面白いのでいつかみてください。
はい，以上です。間違うところがあったら教えてくださいね。
Dec. 3, 2020
Sicherheit im Straßenverkehr
Wegen der Entwickelung der Technologie verändert sich unsere Mobilität. Seit lange Zeit haben viele Leute über das selbstfahrende Auto gestritten, ob es genug sicher und ethisch berechtigt ist.
Meiner Ansicht nach ist es durchaus sinnvoll, dass autonomes Auto in der Zukunft eine wichtige Mobilität wird. Ein wichtiges Argument dafür ist, dass es ein gewisses Maß die Leistung des Staus durch die Kontrolle des Computers entlassen kann. Außerdem man kann im Autos Freizeit genießen, ohne für die komplizierte Situation des Verkehrs sorgen zu müssen.
Die Sicherheit spielt immer die relevanteste Rolle im Verkehr. Um sich die Sicherheit im Straßenverkehr zu erhöhen, kann diese folgende Maßnahmen getroffen werden, zum Beispiele kann die höchste Geschwindigkeit des Autos auf der Straße eingeschränkt wird, rekonstruiert die Regierung ein ordentlicheres Verkehrsnetz, stärkt die Erziehung der Verkehrssicherheit für Kinder und Jugendliche und so weiter. Mit ausreichenden Kenntnisse von Verkehrssicherheit hat man nicht nur die Fähigkeit, um die Problem im Verkehr zu lösen, sondern schützt seines Leben und anderes Leben vor potenziellen Unfälle.
Abschließend möchte ich sagen, dass wir alle Engagement für Verkehrssicherheit fortsetzen sollen. Nur gemeinsam können wir mehr Sicherheit im Straßenverkehr erreichen.
Dec. 3, 2020
Consistency
I can't believe I've been writing a journal a day for seventeen days now. I know my streak doesn't show it, but that's because I've written at different times and past midnight. I made sure to write a journal before bed every day, and I think that's what counts. Consistency isn't one of my strengths, so it feels good to finally be sticking with a habit. I can't believe I haven't ran out of things to write already.
I'm also trying to build the habit of walking thirty minutes every day, but I'm still working on it. I was also thinking about reading a bit every day. I've always wanted to do so, but I feel like I'm never in the mood. I have some books in English, so I think it'll be good practice, especially to improve my writing, which is my weak point. I don't know whether to re-read the books I own or to read the Harry Potter saga, as my sister owns the edition in which all of the book's spines together (in order, obviously) form a picture of the castle. I think she owns other books in English, like Alice in Wonderland, so I could read those as well.
I also think It would be a good idea to revise English grammar and broaden my vocabulary. All of the songs I listen are in English and most of the series I watch are in English as well (I like watching them in their original language, whether I know it or not), so if I payed more attention, I could really learn form them.
Dec. 3, 2020
Journal 22/3/20
I can’t remember which year I went to Wanfuhu, but it was definitely not a long time ago. In fact, Wanfuhu is a reservoir which is located in Shucheng County, Anhui province. But now, it is also a 5A scenic spot in China. Its view is really beautiful: a large area of water is distributed among the hills (because it is located at the foot of the northeast Dabie mountain) and many small islands are distributed among the water. It is a combination of mountains, islands, water, various green trees and colorful flowers. You can imagine how beautiful it is. If only I live in a place with mountains, sea, lakes, rivers, green trees and colorful flowers.
Dec. 3, 2020
MY Dear Chinese Friend part 4
To be frank, she doesn't want to have a baby, because of self-hate. She hates to be like her mother. But she has to bear the baby as a duty. She cannot imagine how she grows her baby. She has to prepare the day when her husband refers to a divorce. Even this year she wants to take the CPA exam.
Like last year, she quit to take with me in March and will take the exam at coming the first Sunday of Nov. After the day came, two days later, I contacted to her on QQ, what a surprise! She was pregnant. Expected date of delivery will be on the 13 the of January next year. If she bore the baby, I hope that she will come to know what parental affection is and what mother's affection to her child is.
Dec. 3, 2020
MY Dear Chinese Friend part 3
I know her character and her mother's are so much alike, as time has passed, she noticed that, and her younger sister bore a baby, and a way of taking care of the baby is being like her mother , She became to dislike her younger sister, too. It seems to me that she is totally confused. I guess she is irritated with her mother due to the hatred between close personality.
Every year she has to come back her countryside to see her parents and relatives. She stays her parents' house only for a day. After giving her parents and relatives a lot of presents she bought in Shanghai. She'll move to the husband's house to stay longer. Accordance with ages, she realizes that she is taking after her hatred mother. Nobody resolves this bewildered situation.
Dec. 3, 2020
My Dear Chinese Friend part 2
She was so deeply depressed that she couldn't study for a couple months. But actually, the score on the CPA exam was 9points less than passing mark. If nothing had happened, suffice it to say that she could pass the exam. At least, she could barely pass the exam. She's been expecting her pregnancy so long time. The miscarriage was such a severe trial and so shocking that she could not concentrate on the exams. There was a time when I mistakenly believed all men are created equal or rather say that all lucks is equal to everyone. The fact is, "No way."
Her parents are peasants who are not rich enough to let their daughter go to a university and a graduate school. She was so poor that she couldn't buy everyday necessities in university and a graduate school. She was depending on her relative's monthly allowances. Her relatives also are farmers. Her younger sister is only a middle school graduate, and she married to same middle school graduate guy working at a factory.
She was only a shining star in her family, but actually she had a big setback in her middle school. She couldn't go to a high school for a year, so this period of time made her and her mother's relationship begin to discord. Her mother didn't make any excuse to help her. She felt herself so shameful and felt like a completely alone in the family she thought her mother was so aloof that she couldn't put up with such a condescending behavior. Since then, she and her mother's relationship was split out. She still dislikes her mother.
To be continued, to part 3
Dec. 3, 2020
My Dear Chinese Friend
The other day, I talked to one of my language exchange partners who wants to take a CPA Exam in China because of the fact that she is Chinese. We used to talk in Japanese and in Chinese. Last year, she said she'll take an intermediate class accounting exam and a CPA exam at the same time. Those who take an upper class exam usually need to have a couple of years of experience, but in her case, her master's degree would also qualify her for the exam. She doesn't have to have any experience, and can take any exam of accounting directly. She also wants to quit chatting with me in Japanese and in Chinese for readying the exams.
She's married for five years and no baby, and she's worried about a divorce. Usually, the women who can't give a birth seem to be divorced by her husband in China. She seemed to accept that traditional bad custom. That's one of the reasons why she wants to obtain the CPA certificate. If she were to be divorced, she could make her living alone with it.
Last year, she wanted to concentrate on her study so hard that we quit our chat until she will finish to take the exams. After everything was finished, when I began to talk to her, I came to know that she'd once been pregnant, and ended up miscarrying unfortunately, I shared with her feeling so much, I'm sure that she was the happiest person that period in the world. Although she happened to have her little toe broken in the middle of Yoga exercise in the gestation period, she didn't take any medicine for her pregnancy.
Part one to be continued,
Dec. 3, 2020
Aujourd'hui j'ai fini mes cours plus tôt que d'habitude
Aujourd'hui, mes cours ont fini à 18 heures. Selon le programma, ils devraient avoir fini à 19 heures, mais le prof nous a laissé sortir plus tôt. Ça me rend heureux parce que son cours était plutôt ennuyeux à vrai dire, et c'est très fatigant d'être assis sans bouger avec notre caméra allumé. Il est le seul prof qui nous a demandé d'allumer la caméra pendant le cours. Les Mercredis et les Jeudis vont être les jours les plus faciles ce semestre parce qu'on fini à 19 heures, lorsqu'on fini à 21 heures les autres jours de la semaine.
Dec. 2, 2020
ABBA MUSIC
Every morning, with I´m in the bathroom , I don´t listen to the radio . No news, only music.
Only Abba music. The Abba songs are the best start to the day.
News are important. The life, the reality is here... but all are bad news. More and more. Again and again.
The music no. And the Abba songs are friendly , really happy and that is good.
Abba right now don´t exist, but your music is the best medecine for my life.
Thanks for the Music is a tittle of a Abba song and in the morning I say Thanks Abba.
Dec. 2, 2020
Las revistas
Siempre estoy feliz cuando recibo una revista. Estoy curioso y quiero ver todos los temas nuevos que tiene. No creo que esté solo, en lugar de eso, sí creo que eso es la clave a la popularidad de las revistas. Recibes algo que solo es para ti, o eso es que te parece. Aunque ahora podemos acceder a toda la información que la tienen gratis en línea, por alguna razón las revistas aún son populares. Para nosotros, parece como un regalo que alguien a nosotros nos enviamos. De verdad, es similar a recibir un libro durante la Navidad, ¡salvo recibes un librito cada mes! Eso es que creo que las revistas todavía son populares. Me refiero, para la mayoría de estas empresas, podemos acceder a los artículos gratis o mucho menos caros que lo que pagamos para una suscripción de compañías.
Dos oraciones desafías (con tener + participio)
1. Tenía llenadas las tazas cuando Mario se los derramó.
2. ¡Ellos tienen acabado lo todo aunque usted les digiera no!
Dec. 2, 2020
Krimskrams
Am Testen.. 1, 2, 3
Jetzt ausspanne ich, d.h. ich entspanne mich.
Mir wurde klar, dass ich etwa 100 Stunden beim Sprachpraxis brauche, um das Sprechen auf Deutsch zu beherrschen. Ich habe bisher 60 Stunden beim Sprechen hinter mir und fühle mich gemütlicher wenn ich Deutsche spreche. Fortschritte machen, macht Fortschritt.
Dec. 2, 2020
Which is better to gain information?
Do you agree or disagree with the following?
"Reading paper materials is better than watching electronic devices to gain information."
It is critically important that we expand our information and gain knowledge on various topics. No one can deny that there are both positive and negative effects of using paper materials or watch electronic devices to gain information. Personally, I disagree that reading paper materials are better. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, gaining information from electronic devices could be more beneficial to access what we looking at. Moreover, it saves a lot of time, rather than reading many pages to get achieve the point. My opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. Two years ago I had to work with my professor on medically related research. He asked me to read specific books to gain the information needed. Therefore, I have had to read five books, to find the point we are looking at. Instead, I did not follow his rules, and I watched many videos on YOUTUBE related to the topic. Moreover, I searched on researches related websites, and I got more than what he wants in a very short time. The professor was shocked at that, and I think he will consider using modern technology in future papers.
Furthermore, proved paper materials are not present everywhere. Therefore, many people may not get the chance to access what they want to learn or read. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Last semester I went to visit my friend in a small town near me. He had to work in the library, during my visit, one day I went with him to his work and during my tour in the library, I asked where I can find books about dental emergencies. He told me that we don't have any medically related books. I was shocked, how could that the whole library does not have medically-related books. Then, I Figured out that his town does offer limited things including books. Thanks to our technology, after we went to his home, I opened my laptop, and I got what I was looking for.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that electronic devices are better to gain information. This is because it allows for more information and easily accessed.
Dec. 2, 2020
Color azul
My favorite color is blue. I think that I'll try to go close to the sea and I'd like this person touch the water and feels how fresh is this element. Later we would walk on the seashore and I'd asking how she or he feels... I think it would be a good beginnen to explain it.
Thank you,
Gemma Mi color favorito es el azul. Creo qud intentaría ir cerca del mar y me gustaría que esta persona tocará el agua y sintiera como de fresco es este elemento. Luego nosotros podríamos andar o pasear por la orilla y le preguntaría como se siente. Creo que sería un buen comienzo para explicarlo.
Gracias,
Gemma
Dec. 2, 2020
Dec. 2, 2020