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Hausaufgabe
Aufgrund einer Warnung des Innenministeriums vor terroristischen Anschlägen wurden die Sicherheitsvorkehrungen auf allen Bahnhöfen verstärkt: Die Sicherheitsvorkehrungen wurden auf allen Bahnhöfen verstärkt, weil es eine Warnung des Innenministeriums vor terroristischen Anschlägen gab.
Oder
Es gab eine Warnung des Innenministeriums vor terroristischen Anschlägen, folglich wurden die Sicherheitsvorkehrungen auf allen Bahnhöfen verstärkt.
Vor der morgigen Sitzung müssen noch alle Teilnehmer über die Änderung der Tagesordnung informiert werden: Die Tagesordnung könnte jeden Morgen sich ändern, infolgedessen müssen alle Teilnehmer vor der morgigen Sitzung informiert werden.
Während der Tagung des Vorstands am Mittwoch findet im Konferenzraum 2 eine Belegschaftsversammlung statt: Die Tagung des Vorstands ist am Mittwoch, währenddessen findet im Konferenzraum 2 eine Belegschaftsversammlung statt.
Trotz viele Besucher klagen die Museen in diesem Jahr über Einnahmeverluste: Obwohl es in diesem Jahr viele Besucher gab, klagen die Museen über Einnahmeverluste.
Dec. 7, 2020
Dec. 7, 2020
Journal 12/07/20
When I left the hospital to go to work this afternoon, I happened to meet some of my leaders. They were going to visit my colleagues at the hospital. (My colleague was hospitalized because he had cerebral hemorrhage. I wrote this in my former post). But they were not allowed to enter the patients’ building. You know why? Because some time ago, one of our locals had the COVID-19 (although this patient was already cured two weeks ago) our government was very nervous, and demanded each hospital to be ensured to manage the visiting personnel strictly. The hospital stipulated a rule that a patient can only have one escort, and an escort certificate was issued. No one can enter the ward without an escort certificate. They had to leave the gift and left the hospital. I took care of these gifts and informed my colleagues’ families to pick them up.
Dec. 7, 2020
relationship
A relationship, in my opinion, is a definition of a communication connection between one person and another. For me, friendship is the most indispensable relationship from primary school to university. When we were in primary school, we played games with our friends, when we were in middle school, we helped each other with homework problems, and when we were in college, we took part in club activities with our friends. All this is brought by friendship.
Friendship is the foundation of all good relationships. It is a beautiful word. It contains gentleness, understanding, approval, tolerance, mutual warmth... These are all connotations that I would like to give. I've always felt like I had a problem. It's easy to start a new relationship, but it doesn't seem to last. Sometimes think anyway are quite familiar, too lazy to do the icing on the cake thing feel too deliberate too artificial. It turns out that relationships are like gardening. If you don't take care of them regularly, the weeds will grow thick and even the most intimate relationships will grow thin.
In the past, I did not know how to express embarrassed and do not know how to express. My friends disappeared one by one. So in the future, I will strengthen this aspect so that the person I love and the person who loves me can clearly and clearly feel my heart.
Dec. 7, 2020
Exercises (4)
1. Bristled with rage, he broke into a commodious house, plundering everything he saw.
2. I don't like unexpected events, because they always intrude on my day.
3, I did not know why he intruded into the party. He just spoiled all our mood.
4, No one wants to become an ineffectual leader when they are in charge.
5, Having heard about his sales bonanza, I had an emotion oddly compounded of vicarious pleasure and great emptiness.
6, The thief easily broke through the lax security but failed to take anything away.
7, He was incensed by their treachery.
Dec. 7, 2020
How Jellyfish is eaten in China
I do think most people reading this title will say “Not Again!”
Chinese people can eat anything!
I am not try to convince you to eat jellyfish.
But after I watch the video, I would say is 100% safe to eat jellyfish.
Depends on how you cook it.
I think it can become a popular food.
Looking back last year, KFC use vegetable to make chicken meat.
Hamburger meat is made from beat or even insect.
So eating a jellyfish shouldn’t be that scare?
just go to your local supermarket maybe you can buy it already.
Dec. 7, 2020
The British Village in Izu City
Thanks to a British YouTuber he lives in Japan now.
Introduce this place to us.
Unlike other theme park will have big roller coaster.
This place give you the British “smell”.
I hope they offer foods like “fish & chips”.
For pachinko fans I hope they got “amusement”.
When I live in UK (90’s) I like to go “Amusement” shop.
To play the slot machine just like pachinko in Japan.
Lastly maybe a “bookies” too.
“Bookies” is place you can almost betting anything.
Like queen’s grandson name….
Am I getting in a wrong directions?
Dec. 7, 2020
Strange Sound
Today, I heard a strange sound during class. It was like the sound of thunder, or a cat purring. However, it was sunny and there was no cat. After a while, I found a dozing student at the back of the classroom. The sound was his snore! I guess he couldn't solve a mini-quiz at the end of the lecture.
Dec. 7, 2020
Journal 12/07/20
With the development of people’s living conditions, now all the hospitals are constructed with high standards. Sickrooms’ ground paved with floor tile, as well as the wall. Besides, there is central air conditioning, independent bathroom, wall cabinets, TV, and many medical facilities in the room. My mom was in good condition, the doctor said, and a few days later, we could be discharged from the hospital.
Dec. 7, 2020
Dec. 7, 2020
Un guion corto
Antonia y su hijo Javi sentados en la mesa
Antonia.- Este año, pienso regalar algo diferente a los chicos que suelo dar regalos navideños.
En vez de dar certificados de regalos, voy a donar la misma dinero a una organización sin fin de lucros, y darles una nota avisándoles. ¿Te parece?
Javi le miró a Antonia impactado y a punto de reírse
Javi.- Te quiero mamá. Pero si se la regalas a los chicos una nota de donación, sería inolvidable pero en un sentido de infamia. Te suplico que nunca seas tan cruel y noble a la vez.
Dec. 7, 2020
Hair
When I was a little girl, my hair was very long (it reached my hips). I used to cut my hair, just the ends, once a year. When I grew up, I got tired of it, because it was heavy (I have a lot of hair) and it hurt to wear it in a ponytail. I started gradually cutting it more and more. First, up to my waist. Then, up to my chest. Later, a bit below my shoulders. Finally, I got a bob cut (a bit longer than chin length). My family mocks me and says I look like Dora the Explorer. They are just joking, they like my hair like this.
Now, I want to cut my hair even shorter! I want to get a pixie cut, sort of like a "boy hair cut" (I don't think haircuts should have a gender). I know it's going to look terrible on me, but I still want to do it because I think it'll be comfortable. I always tie my hair because it bothers me, so this should fix it. And if I regret it, it'll grow back. Haircuts are not that big of a deal, I don't get why people think it's life altering. Like, yeah, I may not like it for a while, but I'll just have to deal with it until it grows.
If you want to cut your hair a certain way but you don't dare, I encourage you to do it. Life is one and hair grows.
Dec. 7, 2020
Dec. 7, 2020
Journal 12/07/20
When I just returned home from a training meeting, I heard from my younger sister that my mom was hospitalized because of her cerebral arteriosclerosis. She has had this disease for many years. When she got sick, she could not speak clearly, even could not speak, and her hands were shaking badly. The doctor said that because of her age, there were no good methods to treat the disease. Under the present circumstances, it can only be maintained.
Dec. 7, 2020
Desayuno
No suelo desayunar, pero creo que debería empezar a hacerlo para tener mas energía durante el día.
Hace unos años, una amiga me animó a desayunar cada mañana. De hecho, ese año ella me ayudó a comer de forma más regular en vez de saltarme una comida o cenar a la medianoche.
Me gustaba prepararme un huevo frito, una tostada con aguacate, y yogur con muesli. Lo tomaba con un té. El acto de preparar algo para comer me ayudó a empezar los días de una manera calmada y me gustaba enfocarme en cocinar y degustar. Además, era más fácil prestar atención en clase sin el estómago gruñendo.
El semestre siguiente, viví en España con una familia anfitriona. Solíamos tomarnos un té y una tostada con mantequilla y mermelada (escribí sobre las mermeladas de mi madre anfitriona en un texto anterior).
Cuando regresé a mi país y empecé mi pasantía, viví con compañeras de piso desordenadas. No importa tantas veces que limpié la cocina, siempre quedaba cochambrosa porque mis compañeras siempre dejaban sus platos y sartenes sucios en el fregadero. No podía cocinar en ese entorno y entonces perdí el hábito de comer desayuno.
Ahora que vivo con mis padres mantenemos una cocina muy limpia. ¿Alguno de vosotros me puede recomendar un desayuno sano, satisfactorio y fácil de hacer?
Dec. 7, 2020
Journal 12/07/20
I didn’t dare fall asleep.
I didn’t dare to fall asleep.
I think the second sentence is correct because of the rules that there is only a verb in one sentence. “Dare” is a verb, “fall asleep” is a phrase verb, so I put a “to” in front of the “fall asleep” changing it to an infinitive. In this sentence, “I” is subject, “didn’t dare” is predicate, and “to fall asleep” is infinitive as object. That is my understanding of the second sentence. I think the first sentence is incorrect because there are two predicate verbs that “didn’t dare” and “fall asleep” in one sentence. This is against the rules of English grammar. English speakers correct the second sentence into the first one. I have checked many grammar resources, but I failed to get the correct answers. So I posted it here hoping somebody could help me out. Thank you guys very much.
Dec. 7, 2020
Собака?
Может быть, что моя семья заведёт собаку! Я так рада. Мы раньше думали, что было невозможно иметь собаку домой потому что у моей мамы аллергия на всех виды животных. Но сегодня, мы поиграли с собакой наших друзей и моя мама сейчас чувствует себя хорошо. Она очень счастлива.
Однажды я собираюсь заведу служебную собаку. У меня аутизм и собака поможет мне выходить из дома жить самостоятельно. Собаки очень умные животные. Они чуствует, когда человек расстраивает и находит способы помочь. Слжебные собаки даже имеют принести лекарство человеку, если нужно.
Dec. 7, 2020
Mon jour, le dimanche 6 de decembre
Aujourd’hui c’était un jour sympa. Je me réveille à dix heures du matin. Pour mon petit-déjeuner, j’ai mangé des pancakes cuisinés par ma mère. Après, j’ai lu pendant deux heures, et ma mère et moi sommes allés au sentier de randonnée. Il faisait froid, parce que nous habitons au nord des états-unis. Mais c'était un bon sentier. Enfin, nous sommes allées au café pour soupe et café. J’ai bu du café espresso, mais ma mère a bu du café latte.
Dec. 7, 2020
Dec. 7, 2020
Los árboles de Navidad
Creo que todos nosotros podemos asentir a que nuestras fiestas lucirán distintas este año. Sin embargo, hay algunas tradiciones que aún se pueden hacer. Opino que una de lo más icónicas de los Estados Unidos es el árbol de Navidad. Realmente, este tradición nos provenía de Alemania, o a menos que sí las velas/los luces. Aunque el uso de los árboles de plástico ha aumentado en los años recientes, todavía muchas families utilizan un árbol natural. Es común que usemos un árbol de hoja perenne, y creo que también se provenía de Alemania. Los decoramos con los adornos y luces, y cuando terminamos, son como pilares de luz y hojas que brilla con todos los adornos, vidrios, fotografías y tal. Aunque en las tiendas a menudo tienen árboles con adornados perfectos y semejantes, el árbol regular es una mezcla de muchos adornados diferentes, y, en mi opinión, muestra la historia de la familia para todos los huéspedes.
Dos oraciones con ser/no ser + muy/mucho de.
1. Soy muy de descansar los domingos.
2. Ella no es mucho de estudiar para un examen, le gusta hacer cosas en su única manera propia.
Dec. 7, 2020
Demain, j'ai un jour ferié
Oui, demain j'ai un jour ferié, donc je n'ai pas de cours, et je peux juste me reposer tranquillement. C'est un jour ferié parce qu'on commémore l'anniversaire de l'établissement de notre ville, Quito, qui est aussi la capitale du pays. En fait, l'anniversaire c'est aujourd'hui, mais heureusement il existe une loi qui dit que, si un jour ferié tombe sur le week-end, on aura un jour ferié le lundi ou le vendredi, quel que soit plus proche de la vrai date de la fête. Donc, comme l'anniversaire de l'établissement a tombé en dimanche, on aura un jour ferié le lundi.
Dec. 6, 2020
Dec. 6, 2020
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
"It is better to go on a trip by oneself than to take a group tour with a guide."
It is critically important that we know how to enjoy our time on trips. No one can deny that either going for a trip by oneself or take a group with a guide has both positive and negative effects. Personally, I agree with the argument that a trip on our own is better. There are two reasons why I feel this way, both of which I explore in the following essay.
To begin with, traveling or going on a trip on your own is more comfortable and enjoyable. My opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. Last year, I traveled with my family to Istanbul. We arranged everything without anyone's help, we booked the hotels and rented a car to go to the places that we want. It was a very nice and comfortable trip for us, in contrast to our last trip. We went with a group with a guide and that's was a waste of time and we didn't enjoy anything. Because there were a lot of people and each of them needs something to do, therefore we were always in hurry and that's caused us to not enjoy anything.
Furthermore, when we travel or go for a trip by oneself, you can choose the company that you want to enjoy with, My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Last semester, there was a school trip for the whole class. I and my best friends didn't like the idea of going with 25 persons. Therefore we skipped their trip and we went the next day to the exact place. We managed our time carefully, and we went to many places that attractive to us. We really enjoyed our time and it was such a great experience.
In light of the above reasons, I strongly believe that it is far better to go on a trip on your own. This is because you can enjoy your time precisely and it is more comfortable in many ways.
Dec. 6, 2020
Qu’as-tu fait hier ?
Hier, j'avais la gueule de bois parce que je suis allée au pub le nuit avant. Je me suis réveillé à 7 heures mais je ne me suis pas levé avant 9 heures. J'ai pris une très longue douche puis j'ai préparé le petit déjeuner.
L’après-midi, j'ai fait une promenade dans le parc mais j'avais encore la gueule de bois. Je suis rentré chez moi et j'ai fait une sieste. Je ne boirai plus jamais.
Dec. 6, 2020
Weihnachtsbaum
Gestern hat meine Familie einen Weihnachtsbaum gekauft und dekoriert. Wir haben eine Weihnachtsbaum-Farm besucht, und einen Baum ausgewählt. Es war schwer, einen großen, schönen Baum zu finden. Jedoch haben wir einen guten Baum gefunden! Es ist ein 9-Füße hoch White Pine. Zu Hause haben wir Weihnachtsmusik auf dem Radio gespielt, und wir haben den Baum mit Lichten, Bänder, und Ornamente dekoriert. Es macht Spaß jedes Jahr, alte Ornamente zu sehen und Geschichten zu erzählen. Der Baum sieht jetzt sehr schön aus.