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Erster Beitrag
Auch wenn ich müde bin und es spät ist, hätte ich nun nichts lieber als diesem Beitrag ein Ende zu setzen, bevor ich ins Bett gehe! Aber woran weiß man, ob er mit der Sache fertig ist oder nicht? Manchmals ist das Thema, das einen antreibt; andermals ist einer, der das Thema stoßen, aus sich selbst mit Mühe herausziehen und nicht ungleich dem Sisyphus es hinauftragen muß. Aber wohin? Wenn es sich um nichts handelt, das heißt, um ein Thema, das nichts mehr ist, als ein Vorwand weiterzuschreiben, woran kann man die Grenze der Sache erkennen? Man muß eine freiwillige Entscheidung treffen. So.
Dec. 10, 2019
MAZE CRAZE
for some reason the page gave me the tittle "maze craze" and it happens it's a word or phrase I don't know, I guess it has something to do with mazes?.
I want to get better at writing in english but also in general, I can type fast, but meaning slips aways as I keep on writing, I can multi tax, or more like, I have to, becasuse I can focus on writing, right now I'm "watching" a movie in a small window next to this one, I'm bad at reading webpages, so if I completely missed the point let me know.
Dec. 10, 2019
미국사람의 한국을 위한 향수병
나는 얼마전에 한국에서 1년동안 살다가 다시 미국에 돌아왔다. 한국에 있었을때 향수병이 너무 심해서 미국으로 돌아가는 것을 굉장히 기대했다. 그런데 이제 미국에 돌아와서 몇개월 동안 미국 생활을 지냈다보니까 원래 미국에서 왜 떠나고 싶었는지 다시 알게 됐다.
일단 내가 다시 돌아오는 도시는 내 고향이거든. 큰 도시 아니고 미국 남부에 위치한다. 내가 사는 주에는 대중교통이라는게 아예 발전 하지 않으니 어디 가든 무조건 자동차 타고 가야한다. 한국에 있었을때 자동차 타는것을 그리웠는데 편의점에 가고 싶어도 자동차 타고 가야하는것은 너무 한다고 생각한다.
이런 교통 문제는 불편하지만 미국으로 돌아간 지 가장 힘들던것은 식생활이다. 한국인들은 미국 음식에 대해서 생각해보면 햄버거나 핫도그나 피자나 이런 음식을 먼저 떠오르겠다. 나도 이런 음식을 솔직히 좋아하는데 자주 먹는편 아니다. 한국에 있었을때 이따금 미국 음식을 땡긴적이 있었는데 거의 매일 한식을 먹었다 익숙해졌다. 한식의 맵고 신 맛에 익숙한 내가 이제 미국식을 싱겁다고 생각하게 됐다. 또한 정형적인 한국인의 식생활을 따르면 소화가 잘 된다고 본다.
언젠가 한국으로 다시 살고 싶은데 학교에서 선생님으로 일하는 생활은 나랑 안 맞았다. 다시 갈 기회가 생기면 좋겠는데 이제 미국 생활에 익숙할 노력을 해야 될 것 같다...
Dec. 10, 2019
Ein Neuer Freund - Kurzgeschichte Teil 2
Es gibt ein Mädchen in meiner Klasse, das Haley heißt. Sie ist ein süß Mädchen mit blonden Haaren und blauen Augen. Ihre Freunde sind nicht so nett wie sie. Sie alle spielen einen Sport, aber sie sind manchmal gemein. Ich mag mit ihnen nicht sprechen, aber Haley war auch beim Mittagessen mit ihnen. Wenn ich mit ihr saß, musste ich mit ihren anderen Freunden sitzen.
Nächste Mittwoch stand ich für das Mittagessen in der Schlange. Sobald ich Haley sah, hatte ich eine Idee. Warum sitze ich nicht mit ihnen? Sie hassten mich nicht. Ich durfte sie vor mich gehen. Ich ging zu Haley und ihren Freunden und sprach mit ihr. Ich wurde nervös. "Kann ich mit euch sitzen?" fragte ich. "Niemand, dass ich kenne, geht zu diesem Mittagessen." "Ja!" sagt sie. Nach ein paar Minuten saß ich mit Haley und ihren Freunden. Ich war froh, denn ich war allein kein mehr. Die andere Mädchen waren doch cool. Deswegen gefällt Mittagessen mir.
Dec. 10, 2019
Schreiben Teil 2 - B1
"Autofrei in der Stadt"
Thiago schrieb
„Wenn die Wirtschaft sich so gut entwickelt, erhört sich der Bedarf an Autos in der Bevölkerung. Aber man muss diese Erhöhung im Zusammenhang mit der Verbesserung der Infrastruktur von der Stadt bringen. Das heißt, wenn es mehr Autos in der Stadt gibt, braucht man unbedingt breite, bessere Straße, auf die man mit dem Auto fahren kann. Aus diesem Grund bin ich der Meinung, dass die Autos in der Stadt verboten werden sollen, bis man die Maßnahme für die Verbesserung der Straße trifft.“
Hier is meinen Text:
"Autofrei in der Stadt" ist ein aktuelles Thema debattiertes Thema, über das heutzutage oft diskutiert wird. Und ich bin mit Thiago komplett einverstanden. Neuerdings besitzen die Menschen immer mehr ein eigenes Auto. Das führt dazu, dass man stundenlang im Stau stecken muss. Ist doch logisch, dass man das Geld für Verkehrsnetz abgenommen investiert, wenn ´´Autofrei in der Stadt´´ übergenommen wird. Zusätzlich können wir auch die Umwelt schützen. Ich gebe zu, ob das Auto innerhalb der Stadt verboten ist, viele Leute finden ungünstig, zur Arbeit zu fahren. Aber sie können sich bald daran gewöhnen. Ich hoffe darauf, die Regierung ruft ´´Autofrei in der Stadt´´ ins Leben so bald wie möglich, um die Vorteile zu erringen. Das ist meine ehrliche Meinung zu diesem Thema.
Dec. 10, 2019
A ir para Lisboa
Mais cedo este ano, eu e minha familia foimos para Lisboa por nossa feriado. A razão que eu quis para Lisboa é porque eu tenho um amigo de Portugal, ele dissete sobré Lisboa e as coisas fantastico na Lisboa mas especialmente sobré a comida e a historia. Então, porque ele ama bastante Portugal eu quis ir e ver-me Lisboa.
Porque nós iremos para Lisboa, e porque e sei uma Lisboeta, eu achei que devo aprender Português então não preciso usar Inglês. Quando eu estive ali eu não precisou usar inglês muito e as pessoal gostou que posso falar algums Português. Mas um tempo, quando eu estive numa livraria e estive a perguntar por algumas recomendos para ums livros tradição de Portugal (em Português), infelizmente a mulher não pôde entender. Eu acho que está porque meu sotaque é estraho e também porque o meu Português não está perfeito.
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Taiwanin asema kansainvälisessä politiikassa
Taiwanin perustuslain mukaan, Nanjing on meidän pääkaupunki, ja olemme…osia Kiinaa. Kiinan tasavaltaa tarkalleen ottaen.
Maailmassa on kaksi Kiinaa, eli Taiwanissa oleva vallassa Kiinan tasavalta ja Manner-Kiinassa hallitseva Kiinan kansantasavalta. Toisen Kiinan sisällissodan jälkeen, nationalistinen puolue Kuomintang sekä monet kiinalaiset pakenivat sotaa Taiwaniin, ja kohta perustivat uuden hallinnon. Sillä aika kun Kiinan kommunistinen puolue julisti Kiinan kansantasavallan perustamiseksi mantereessa.
Sen jälkeen, kun Kiinan tasavalta (Taiwan) erosi YK:sta 1970-luvulla, useimmat maat vaihtoivat diplomaattisuhteensa Kiinan kansantasavaltaan, ja ilmoittavat Taiwanin oleva osa sitä.
Kuomintangin autokratia, joka hiljensi yleisön ja vallankumouksellisten, loppui virallisesti vuonna 1987, ja ensimmäiset presidenttivaalit pidettiin vuonna 1996. Siitä lähtien Taiwanin identiteetti on kasvanut nuoren sukupolven keskenään. Monet ihmiset nykyään vaativat Taiwanin tulevan itsenäiseksi nimeltään Taiwanin tasavallaksi.
Taiwanissa kasvaneena, yksi tärkeimmistä muistoistani on kansanliikkeisiin osallistuminen. Tiedämme, että eivät voi pitää Taiwanin demokraattia itsestäänselvyytenä, paitsi kun kohua ja uhkausta olivat myös Manner-Kiinasta heränneet. Niin pitkään kuin tämä kiistanalaisuus jatkaa, taiwanilaiset ovat vielä etsimässä tapoja sopeutua kansainvälisiin politiikkoihin, vaikkei meillä ole mahdollisuuksia, ja se ei tule loppumaan lähestulevaisuudessa.
Dec. 9, 2019
बचपन
नमस्ते! आज, मैं अपने बचपन के बारे बोलूँगा। मैंने अपना बचपन दो स्थानों के बीच में बिताया। शालीय वर्ष के समय में, मैं एक नगर में रहता था। मेरा जन्म सुनदर नगर में हुआ, पर एक कोंक्रिट के दुर्ग में पाला गया और इस में कुछ आनंदायक नहीं था। लेकिन मैंने छुट्टियं दहाल में बिताईं, गाँव में जहाँसे माता का परिवार है। वह अलग ही था! फ़्रंस के विपरीत्, भारत घनी आबादी वाला देश है। अकेला महसूस करना दिल्ली में मुशकिल होगा! मेरे गाँव में अलेका महसूस करना मुझे आसान था। मैं वनों में घूमता था और चारागाहों में सोता था। जानवरों से भी प्यार करता था। मैं पूरे दिन उनको पुमकारके बिता सकता था। मैं सोचता हूँ कि मनुष्यों को प्रकृति की ज़रूरत है। वह शांति मिलने का अच्छा ढंग है। इसने खुश होने में मेरी मदद हमेशा की है।
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Dec. 9, 2019
A poc a poc
Ara que he tornat a intentar aprendre el català, recordo per què trobo aprendre una llengua nova tan frustrant. Una idea que en sembla tan senzilla a la meva ment, i que pot escriure ràpidament en la meva llengua materna, em costa tant d’esforç i tant de temps produir. Em desanima molt. Però jo sé he de continuar, a poc a poc, amb la esperança de millorar.
Dec. 9, 2019
Coworkers feedback letter
First, I want to thank all of you for the training we have with Reporting Services, despite we already knew some of the topics, there was some information very useful, in my particular case, I applied some of that knowledge in my daily tasks for [Name of project]. I hope we can have more training like this.
This was my first year working with [coworker name] in [Name of project] and he made very easy for me to understand the project and I always received help and advice when I faced a problem
I work with [coworker name] on the data centralization for [Name of project] again, and the [Name of project] Domain Migration, a very hard-working person, and motivated and attentive to details, even in internal projects
Also, I have the chance to work with [coworker name] with the [Name of project] Ecommerce, and I appreciate the clarity on the task I have to do, and as usual, just reading his code is enough to try to improve mine
Dec. 9, 2019
Dec. 9, 2019
Ein Tag im Warten
Ein Tag im Warten/ A day in waiting
Heute war ein sehr langsamer Tag. Ich bin spät aufgestanden und danach habe ich mich um einige administrative Sachen gekümmert. Ich musste für einen Flug einchecken weil morgen früh fahre ich nach Berlin für ein paar Tagen. Ich musste auch das Hotel kontaktieren weil ich ein ruhiges Zimmer mit Aussicht brauchen und der beste Ansatz ist, mit dem Personal sprechen wenn möglich. Berlin hat so viele Hotels bei einem guten Preis und die Servicekräfte sind normalerweise in dieser Stadt sehr freundlich und professionell. Das Hotel hat mir ein gutes Zimmer versprochen und ich freue mich so sehr auf meinen Besuch zu Berlin!
Dec. 9, 2019
Eine E-Mail
Sehr geehrte Frau Professorin,
Ich bin gerade fast fertig mit dem Videoreferat (dessen Thema ist Karl Marx' Leben und politischer Effekt), und bereite mich die Letzte von meinen Materialien vor. Darf ich vor 5 Uhr sie Ihnen schicken, natürlich auch mit der Aufnahme?
Ihre dankbarer Student,
Shin1
Dec. 9, 2019
Being Hung Out to Dry
(From now onward, I'll take inspiration from one expression or word to put together a short text every day. This one was WAY harder to pull off haha, and at times, I felt like I was going nowhere.)
The promise of being there for someone, no matter how rough the going gets, is often an unfortunate lie that either we tell to others, or that we have to deal with when we least expect it.
Considering how fast-paced our lives have become, it's no wonder that many of us don't devote enough time to nurturing those incipient relationships that we gladly disparage and tear apart when things go south. Maybe it shouldn't surprise us that much because this is just a natural inclination of ours. The blame is always to be found in others' yard, right?
On the other hand, when we find ourselves promising loyalty and companionship, even under the harshest of the circumstances, the excuses (or reasons as we prefer to call them) not to follow through with our commitments are plentiful, logical, and sensible. Rationalizing is such an effortless game that we play prodigiously well.
Be that as it may, it's often because of brazenness and fear that we promise that which is beyond the scope of our willingness and abilities, to end up failing miserably. We underestimate the effort that is necessary to be there for someone else, and when the realization dawns on us, we bail out due to the daunting challenge before us.
Wouldn't it be just a matter of having more humility to recognize our limitations? If only it were so easy.
Overestimating ourselves comes naturally to us.
Dec. 9, 2019
Viaje con tren
Es tiempo para irme. Voy a llegar tarde, pienso yo. Tomo mis cosas y me voy. Pesa mucho todo mi equipaje, pero no puedo quejarme, no tengo tiempo. Tengo que irme pronto o voy a llegar tarde para el tren. Camino lentamente con todas mis cosas y al final alcanzo el distinto, la estación de tren. Miro mi reloj. Tengo suficiente tiempo. Me compro el billete y además resulta que el tren va a llegar tarde... de nuevo. pero al menos yo soy aquí a tiempo. y espero.
y el tren viene y todo está bien. pero cuando tengo que coger el otro tren, ocurre que no hay espacio para mi y tengo que estoy a pie por cuarenta minutos... pero vale y eso paso. al menos pude disfrutar el puso del sol. entonces cogo mi tren final y me siento en un lugar con calma. Es mi destino final. Y el final de mi viaje con tren... por hoy xD salgo del tren y voy para coger el bus pero justo voy caminando hacia la estación y el bus pasa. ;-; tengo que esperar para el próximo bus. y no tengo espacio en el. esta tan paquetado, no puedo respirar. pero libertad! alcanzo mi destino! el fin.
I know it's boring. I'm sorry ;-; but that's my real life
Dec. 9, 2019
Le créativité
Aujourd'hui une amie a me dit écrire quelque chose à propos de créativité en la langue français. Alors, c'est parti.
Depuis mon enfance, je voulais toujours devenir une personne créative. Mes parents voulaient moi devenir ingénieur mais j'ai toujours été intéressé par l'art. Alors, après j'ai grandi, je prends des études en design et maintenant je travaille dans le domaine du design. Le design graphique est l'une des choses que je fais le plus.
Beaucoup de gens croient que créativité est quelque chose on peut apprendre avec les livres et théories. Mais, ce viens seulement de pratique.
Mon avis: il y n'a pas n'importe règles d'art, si les gens aiment les trucs qu'on fait, il est qualifié comme l'art. Il y n'a pas n'importe chose bien ou mal.
Dec. 9, 2019
Mi Primer Mensaje
Hola mis amigos! Mi llamo Tim y estoy aquí porque yo quiero aprender más Español. Quiero hablar más Español para mi trabajo en Medicina. Yo siento que si aprendo Español puedo mejor cuidan a mis pacientes. Lo siento, mi Español es muy, muy malo pero yo soy intento aprender todo lo possible. Gracias por leer.
Dec. 9, 2019
When you're bored
Come to think of it, boredom is the cradle of creativity and productivity.
We always complain about being bored. Something likes: It's boring here at my town, I can't wait for the day I get out of it; or I've literally gone through hell having to watch that bore of a film with my grandmother. More often than not, we try to break free from dullness by doing something, anything. That's why I think boredom gives birth to creative ideas and productive works and thus, we should give it credit rather than whining about having nothing to do all the time. This is not you being bored, it's you being lazy. So the next time when you feel bored, you know that something good is about to be created, by no other than you.
This idea is not something I have pondered on for a long time. A couple of minutes ago, I was bored. Then I came across this site, a seemingly perfect place for me to rant about my tedious life. So that is it for this first entry of mine on this site: nothing profoundly meaningful but just what I suddenly come up with when I have nothing else to do after work.
Cheers.
Dec. 9, 2019
An entry from my diary
All I can’t stand has a name. So does all I love.
When somebody starts describing to me their travels to places, all this ‘I have been here and there, I tried X and Y, I bought Z’ hardly tells me anything about either a person or a place. Well, let’s say it doesn’t tell me much. It’s not real. What fascinates me is how one felt there and what one has experienced. Living it, this is an approach.
Once I was told (reproachfully) that I’m always lucky to come across wonderful people who treat me in a special way. That’s not quite true.The truth is that in order to find a treasure I have always had to go through so much crap in the blind belief that there is the Grail somewhere deep inside.
The first thing I did this year subconsciously was that I bricked up all the entrances and exits. A vicious circle was triggered. I couldn’t breathe, I needed fresh air but failed to find the way out of the trap over and over again. I hardly yielded to it. However, life is full of coincidences, now and then it assumes strange forms. On my third visit to Berlin I grew a friendship I hadn’t known before. He was sensitive, unbelievably patient and shrewd. His capacity to perceive things surprises me even now, over time.
There was a whole world there. He let me in. Each object at his home had a story to tell. Each word conveyed a meaning. I even thought that he could give sense to the senseless. It was him who was surrounded by wonderful people. Sometimes he was inexplicably sad, off in some direction of his own. Sometimes I looked at him and he reminded me of myself. Maybe that’s why he got me in no time. Never had I felt so understood and accepted. I got rid of all the chains that had oppressed me and could afford just to be myself. He wasn’t deaf to my pain. When he smiled at me, I felt so natural as if I had just been born and still didn’t know the rules by which people live.
We had coffee or his signature cold tea in the morning, leisurely and ritually, then got lost in the city till late at night and on our return couldn’t stop talking on the balcony. I spoke out my joys and sorrows. He saw me at both extremes, at the moments of complete happiness and abject despair.
There was a whole life there. One day I failed, he saved me the trouble. I asked him if he was upset with me, he replied: «Honey, I’m never». Later he told me that I’m not aware of how different I am and that I see what others don’t. I felt something similar with few people. With my art teacher, I was 7 years old, with Y. in Saint Petersburg, I was 17. They guided me through life in the same way. How much of what they have once said to me still echoes in my ears! It is something to touch someone’s heart in a way it has never been touched before. All the rest doesn’t matter that much.
A documentary director, writer, a very human one (!), he is an inexhaustible source of inspiration to me, that Grail that brings me back to life and reminds me not to stray from my path. All I love has a name. He has a beautiful Scandinavian name. Dag.
Where else, if not in Berlin, could I experience that?
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Dec. 9, 2019
To gossip or not to gossip, that's the bond.
No thing feels best then to take apart the entire life existence of other peoples, and while perhaps there is moral grey areas conservationists might to argument in the contrary, there are a numbers of valid reasons for to indulgence in the timeless tradition of gossip in the job, at the school, in the congregations, and in any possibility to gather in societal groupings.
For listing the first one that goes to my mind is the joy it creates. You and the groups of peoples who are building the gossip targets an individual and proceed to argument in the contrary of all thinks that make this person. You may to begins with the weight and critic is it is too light or if it is on the heavy side of the coin. You may to discuss the relationship marital or singular status of the subject and with no boundaries pass judgements in regards of the partner, or the lack there off, because that is the beautiful of gossip, theres no limitations to what can to be done. If it is crafted in the school, you can to target the professors and disect their methodologies if you have the wish for that. If it is about the cooking person in the cafeteria, you can talk about why they give more foods to some one than the others because perhaps there is a romantic interesting there. If it is in the congregation, you could to center your attention to the attires and invent reasons why they use the suits they use, because they have no more, or because they love that suit and nothing more.In short, the reasons for to indulgence in the ancient traditions of gossip are infinity, but ultimately the main principal reasons is that it gives joy to the hearts and the souls, and no one should to stop and say no to the abundant felicity encountered within inside the universe of universal gossip.
Second reasons after the first reason I give, it is in the natural condition of the bond. In the super productions of holliwood, mister James Cameron calls it Tsaheylu, a word in the language Na´vi with the meaning of neural connections by the likes of the tales. The blue peoples , and animals in this super production have little hairs at the end of the tales, and when they connect the hairs with the other tale, they suffer a neuronal intrinsical reciprocal mystical experience, called the bond. When two peoples gossip, they also experience the bond. The reciprocation of the trust that the two people experiment connects them for life. Their pupils dilate, their hearts synchronize, their blood flows in unison, their minds become one. This two people, have now a confidence in the other they can always be safe. They now have a crime partner, and this does not have a dissolution. When two people make the bond, of the gossip, they have now mated for life like beavers or bold eagles. And that is worthiness of your respect and acknowledgement.
The reason number three, is the creations of factions of gossipers within the kingdom, and please give me your pardon for electing this license, but i will call kingdom and given plays that has gossip happening, to match, the metaphor, of factions, for because, every group of gossiper, is a faction, inside the kingdom. So each faction, recognize the members of their league as troopers of the same womb, and no other member can insert himself there, it is impossible, it is impermeable, it is impenetrable, and no one has to speak of this ever, it is a thing that you no speak of, because by making the bond, you are elected and christened as one of the group, and you shall never ever ever betray your leader, your pack, your troop, your family. So in addition to the enjoyment you aspire with the gossip, you become a brother of a nother mother, or a sister, and that has no price. Only value.
In less regard for the reasons you are entertaining the decision for becoming the next gossiper in one faction of the kingdom you belong, with the acceptance of the bond, you are signing a contract of the social kind, and with this great responsibilities, you will have to receive also some benefits in additional form that what I already tells, like for example the entertaining of each memeber. You see, with the skillful art of gossip, you developement many abilities you will other wise should have never to obtain like the blessing of creativity and scents of humor. With advancing levels of gossip you can to tickle of the funny bones of all members in the clan. Not like jester. More like a smart guy who can produce laughings with his remarkings about other people; and this will augment the opinion the factions will have of you, and your status will continue to go up. But you are to be full of care. And this is why...
... with the power of the gossip, you can to give directions to the opinions of the others, and with all that might, where you can flick them is impossible to say. So you may play fully start to gossip in the directions of a woman who have been lost the train and now her rice is already passed. She is, in your words in this parable, a lady who has no lucky, and is now only good to dress saints, because she will not know men, and men don't want to know her. You tell a women member of your faction this, and proceeding to say that she should to be in hurry because she is next in the line, and because you are brothers of the bond now, she makes the decision to follow after your gossip, and uses much time to think she has necessity to know a man too, or she is the next in the line for to lose the train. She jumps at the first man she sees, she marries, has family, and ten years laters she has remorse for to follow the influence in her ideas your gossip creates. That is another reason for acting full of care because you can never make predictions about where the impacts of your influential gossips will reach.
If you are of the good kind of gossiper and use this power only for the doing of the good, you may become an expectation and develop the synergy necessary to have learning from the actions of the others that you precisely gossip about. So that is good too, and there are more benefits. Like for example, you have to live your actually faction for a new one because you move countries. New languages, new idioms, new lexicons, new proverbials, new culture, new motions of gesticulations, and all have new meanings. By accepting the gossip for the doing of the good, you can shortcut with a bypass the learning of all the rules of this new kingdom, and get the hanging in much sooner time. I only have to say that you must to choose your next family very full of care before you make the bond. Remember it is for life.
I never have intentions to be the talker of morality, so in honest fashion, I tell you that in person I feel no need to use the words good or bad to description the gossip. That is for the gossiper to choice what words she wants to use. But in person, I will say this: if you gossip only for the pleasures of the guilt, if it gives you much schadenfreude, rejoice to the full extend of your capabilities, and don't hold your horses, because you will still be in bond, and once in bond, always in bond. Beside, in additions to be a member of your faction, you are too a donor of energy for the synergy of your siblings of other mothers, and to that finish, no gossip, evil and malignant, or innoncent and playful, is of waste. So gossip like the tomorrow never comes and live your live any such way you choice too. Is gossip a necessity? Is gossip and evil of the social? the answer is yours.
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