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June 20, 2020
Einige Punkte in der deutschen Grammatik!
Zuerst möchte ich gern eine Frage über den folgenden Satz stellen:
Einige Computerexperten erzählten damals, dass wenn man Spiele auf ein Computer installiert, der Computer nicht mehr so gut funktioniert wie davor.
Warum steht kein Verb im obigen Satz nach dem Nebensatz( dass wenn..........installiert, [hier])? Zum Beispiel: Wenn ich Zeit habe, gehe ich gern raus. Hier steht das Verb im Hauptsatz vor dem Koma, aber in dem ersten Beispiel steht das Verb nicht vor dem Koma.
Meine zweite Frage: ................, dass wenn man Spiele auf ein Computer installiert,................
Warum nicht: dass wenn man Spiele auf einem Computer installiert? ist das Akkusativ und kann nicht Dativ sein, weil es eine Bewegung gibt?
Ich freue mich auf eure Hilfe! Vielen Dank im voraus!
June 20, 2020
20.06.2020
Det är min första text på svenska. Jag fortfarande inte veta mycket därrför att inte studerar jag mycket svenska. Jag föredrar att studera andra språk, som kinesiska, koreanska eller tyska. Jag har studerat tyska i åratal och jag kan förstå mycket på tyska. Jag har studerat koreanska för mindre tid och jag har studerat kinisiska för i ett år, för att min flickvän är taiwanesisk. Jag tror kinisiska är det svåraste språket från de jag lära mig men jag ska fortsätta studera all min språk.
June 20, 2020
Avez-vous déjà dormi dans une tente?
Prompt: Have you ever slept in a tent?
Traduction: Avez-vous déjà dormi dans une tente?
Réponse:
Oui, il y avait beaucoup de temps que j'ai dormi dans une tente. J'aime bien le camping, ainsi j'ai dormi dans des tentes.
Malgré le fait que j'aime bien le camping, je n'aime pas le dorment dans des tentes. Je trouve, generallement, que je dors pire dans une tente que dans mon lit. Mais, c'est une chose que je peux tolérer, parce-que pour moi, c'est le valoir à être dans la campagne.
Additionellemnt, je suis un dormeur facillement. Dans le passée, je dormais dans une grande orage, et je me reveillais dans le matin, completement mouilleur. Il etait comme j'ètais dans le milleu d'un grand lac, mais dan ma tente. Malgré tout ca, je dormais trés bon.
June 20, 2020
Vocabulario
El director gerente de nuestra empresa es avaro, por eso no tiene pasante.
Por causa de un acidente, la policia ha establecido un desvío pasante.
Los estudiantes hacen prácticas para adquirir experiencia.
Esta pequena empresa fue adquirida por una multinacional.
He advertido las plantas venenosas a mi vecino.
June 20, 2020
June 20, 2020
MY DREAM JOB
Actually, I don't have job i want to do, however I want to work oversea. So I decided to go to study in the US. I don't spend my life on just routine, so I want to work at place where it makes me excited. I also value my time, so I would like to work at place which give me a carefree holiday.
June 20, 2020
I will write a diary from today！
I'm going to write a diary from today. Output the words I have learned to improve my English in a diary. If there is something wrong with the grammar, please point it out.
I would like to introduce myself a little. I am a college student and live in Osaka. Originally I was planning to go to study abroad in Australia from March of this year, but I can't study abroad because of the influence of corona⤵︎ So I want to connect with many people through this diary！Today I studied with friends at Starbucks. I will write my diary tomorrow, so please comment and correct diary grammar！
June 20, 2020
British and American Pronunciations
Today I've seen an interesting video on YouTube on a history of these two pronunciations. We all know the main differences between them, but I was really surprised to hear that British RP pronunciation isn't the classic English pronunciation. It was just developed in 19th century. At Russian schools, students learn British English in most cases. And it turns out that saying the 'r' sound has always been the part of the English language until 19 century once again. I tried to make the 'r' sound myself, but I can't do it that well and I always end up with my tongue being twisted. I'm used to leave it out as I was taught at school. To being honest, I like how British English sounds a bit more, however I have to admit that sometimes it's hard to understand. For instance, I've been watching a TV series 'Good Omens', and it was easier to understand a few American actors there rather than the main cast of British actors.
June 20, 2020
経済より人間
新聞は株価指数について報道する時、私はいつも「どうしてこの数は人にとってそんなに大切か」と思わなければならない。もちろん株を買った人にとって、株価と自分のお金に関係があるので、株価に興味があることが知っているが、どうして株価だけは新聞が毎日報道する物だろう。
二つの株価の使い方が特に嫌い。まず、最近株価はまるで人類の具合になった。株価が高ければ、世界は大丈夫という意味だ。低くなったら、問題がある。それが違うと思う。経済がよくても、全部の人は幸せわけではない。株価指数や社会正義や健康などの問題もあるけど、新聞はその科目に全然報道しない。だから、ある人にとって、社会の一番大切の数は株価指数だけだ。選挙の時、他の物を考えなくて、誰かが経済を大切するのを選ぶ。
他の嫌いのは、株価だけは会社の一番大切にする物になった。会社は何をすると、いつもその会社の株価について報道する。でも、そうしたら、会社は絶対に株価に悪いことをしない。だから会社は社会にとって悪いことするばかりだ。もし新聞はもっと会社の活動は社会にどんな結果について報道すれば、人は株価だけに心配しないかもしれない。
つまり、私は経済より人間の方が大切と信じるから、新聞は経済だけに報道するのがすきじゃない。
June 20, 2020
Routine
"I need to do it, but I don't want to." It has been the most common phrase on my life. One of the resolutions that I made in the start of the year was learning English and French. Actually my french level improved so much, so I can fell a half happy and proud of myself, but on the other hand I haven't done my best in English, so I needed to do something.
I sometimes know when something is good for me, obviously which I study hard I'll learn faster, but the most difficult part is toward the procrastination line. To fight it, the routine is the best armor.
The routine makes me comfortable, with it I don't need to think about what am I doing or what am I going to do, I just do the same every day. This is awesome because I don't need to be animated with I'm doing, I just do it. Whatever, like everything isn't perfect, it isn't the solution for all my needs.
The routine makes me to much comfortable, furthermore I don't improve some skills that I need when they aren't on the daily routine, and to do it, I always need to toward or the procrastination line, or the routine prison line, which either is very hard.
Finally, the routine is something desirable, but you can't stay to much time doing the same old grind, so sometimes you need to change it. With it, you can always improve yourself.
June 20, 2020
カーペットの掃除
僕は、犬を飼っている。犬はとても可愛いけど、残念ながら、僕の犬はよく家の中に吐く。そして、家には床じゃなくて、カーペットだから、掃除もしにくい。たくさんの黄色の痕跡が残っている…
だから、今日やっと家のカーペットの掃除にした！
家の近くのホームセンターから、カーペット掃除機を借りてきた。初めてだから、色々勉強になった。平凡の掃除機と以外に似ていて、驚いた。借りたカーペット掃除機は、二つのタンクがあって、きれいな水のと、汚い水のだった。カーペット掃除機を付けると、水は、きれいな水のタンクからノズルに行ってから汚いタンクに行く。
掃除を始める前に、家の全部のカーペットを掃除したかったけど、コンピューターの前に座るばかりの僕は、やはりできるわけがなかった。残っている部分は、来年するかな…
June 20, 2020
Wörter, die ich heute rezensiert habe
das Übermaß - excess
Der Laden hat ein Übermaß von Apfelsaft; deshalb müssen sie es zu einem günstigen Preis verkaufen, Kosten zu decken.
etw (akk) verkünden - to announce
Heute hat meine Schwester ihre Schwangerschaft verkündet.
der Schlamm - sludge, mud, slurry
Wenn es Schlamm auf der Straße gibt, dein Auto wird schmutzig zu sein.
June 20, 2020
Esapadas
Espadas são armas brancas, que se costumava a usar nas batalhas. Elas são afiadas, e perigosas. Elas caiu em desuso quando armas foram inventadas, porque elas eram muito mais perigosas. Existem muitas espécies de espadas, como a katana, uma espada tradicional japonesa, geralmente usada por samurais. Também tem a adaga; uma espada curta que se usa no combate corpo a corpo.
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June 19, 2020
Tag 13
Ich habe heute meinem Hausärztin für einen Check-up besucht. Ich habe zuerst meine Krankenversicherungskarte zur Sekretärin gezeigt. Dann ich habe mich im Wartezimmer gesetzt. Eine Krankenschwester hat mein Name gerufen. Sie hat von mir Blut abgenommen und EKG aufgenommen. Danach hatte ich einen Termin für eine Sprechstunde bekommen, um die Ergebnisse zu lernen.
Vielen Dank, dass ihr das gelesen habt!
June 19, 2020
Soll man Computerspiele spielen?
Als ich ein Kind war, habe ich viel Computerspiele gespielt. Ich erinnere mich daran, dass meine Eltern mir immer erklärt haben, dass zu viel Computerspiele nicht gut für das Gehirn sind. Einige Computerexperten erzählten damals davon, dass wenn man Computerspiele an einem Computer installiert, funktioniert den Computer nicht so gut wie ohne Spiele.
Heutzutage habe ich leider keine Zeit, Computerspiele zu spielen. Es wäre nett, wenn ich mehr Zeit hätte und Computerspiele spielen könnte.
June 19, 2020
한국어 연습 4
일전에 김태리의 영상을 봤다. 김대리가 책에 대해 말핬니까 너무 재미있었다. 저는 책 습관에 대해 듣는 것을 많이 좋아하다. 나를 어떤 책을 난 선호하는 묻는다면 소설라고 대답할까. 왜일까요? 긴 이야기를 너무 좋아해서. 김대리 책들을 완독이 목적이 아니에요라고 했다, 하지만 저는 책을 완독이 중하는 생각하다. 읽기 끝내까질 때 성취의 감을 있으니까 많이 의미하다. 설사 책을 안 끝내면, 책의 페이지를 펼칠 때는 너무 기쁘다. 김대리 많이 책갈피를 필요하라고 말하는대 저는 항상 책을 끝내기 때문에 많이 책갈피를 안 쓰다.
June 19, 2020
June 19, 2020
Our journey back to taiwan- the way from bandung city to th
We packed all our stuffs in all of our luggage which is two carry-on luggage, two check-in baggage,two backpacks and two little shoulder bags.
The weight of our luggage was much lighter than the maximum weight that we are allowed to carry.
We also cleaned our department, and threw away all the thing that we couldn't carry, and no one wanted before our departure day.
I was very sleepy, waking up at 4:30am when is too early compared to our typical wake up time(8am).
The school bus driver came at 5pm after I carried my water dispenser to my colleague Mr. ma's department, and gave my keys to anther colleague Miss ara.
The bus driver helped us loaded all the luggage into the bus compartment, and we sprayed alcohol all over the place where we might touch after we get into the bus just in case.
It typically took at least more than five hours from our city to the airport due to the traffic jam before the lockdown, but on the departure day it only took us three hours to get to the airport.
We put on our masks before getting off the bus,and bade the bus diver good bye along with some tip.
To my surprise, there were few passenger in the airport ( we had thought that airport would be the most dangerous place full of passenger from all over the world).
We couldn't check in our luggage since we arrived too early, so the only thing we can do was wait.
We noticed that for every bench in the airport there were two long strip tapes of X shape stuck to the middle seat so that everyone could follow the social distance policy.
We had three hours to kill, so we just sat on the sides of a bench, playing with our phones.
Bliar strolled around the airport after she felt bored playing her phone.
The view in the airport reminded me of the drama walking dead in which most of human is dead, and all the place that once full of people is empty.
I had never thought that airport would be almost empty one day, it was like the end of the world.
It was an hour before we could check in.
June 19, 2020
Elle me dit
Le chanteur Mika a composé beaucoup de chanson anglaises et françaises dans sa carrière, et aujourd'hui, je vais vous parler vraiment d'une de les Françaises, c'est "Elle me dit".
"Elle me dit" est une chanson qui parle de la difficulté que les fils trouvent quand ils sont critiqués pour ses parents. Le scénario dont le chanteur parle sur une façon très comique se passe couramment dans les loyers, où les parents posent beaucoup de pression sur les épaules de ses enfants. Je sais que dans le revers de la médaille, je vais trouver des explications de ces parents qui cherchent un à venir mieux pour ses fils, mais à mon avis la pression est quelques fois très lourdes pour être sustenté pour quelqu'un, même que cette enfant a une bonne image de lui propre.
Non seulement, la chanson aussi parle d'un mal sentiment que se cache sur le vers "Qu'elle me dit un truc que j'aime", c'est qui montre que certains fils ont de haine de ses parents.
Alors, vis a vis que cette pression n'est plus qu'un couteau à double tranchant, j'ai trouvé que la solution pour les parents sériait chercher la juste mesure pour assurer que ses fils auront un bon avenir sans les mettre beaucoup de pression et les donnaient en plus de liberté.
June 19, 2020
How to Stay Focused
Recently I've realized that it's hard for me to stay focused on a task for a long time. In past, I tried the Pomodoro technique to study programming. I'd say it worked well, but I didn't have enough discipline to follow it all the time. Then, I used a method of 45 minutes of work and 15 minutes of break. This was a method from a book, which author recommended to do so. That's kind of pomodoro too, but without declaring the global goal of a session. After that, I threw away all timings and just sit and wrote code like in a constant stream. When I went to university almost all classes were free to us to do what we wanted to do, so I was sitting with my laptop and making an app the whole time. Now, with this quarantine, staying home and focus on studying became a difficult mission. I've picked up Pomorodo again, and I'll try to follow it more patiently. What do you do to stay focused on your study or work?