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Journal 16/12/20
At noon, when I arrived at a box lunch store to eat my lunch, the store owner told me the meal was sold out, so I turned to another Chinese fast food store, but when I arrived at the store, it was closed. So I turned to a noodle shop that I used to go to. Fortunately, the shop was still open. Apart from several types of noodles, the shop provided various small dishes. The one I liked the most was braised lamb chops. I used to eat it several times and I thought it was very delicious, although it was very spicy. Today I bought lamb chops again. Its price was 160 yuan per kilogram and that piece of the chops cost me 26 yuan. This time it was still spicy as usual and this also was an aspect I hated the most. I have complained about this to the shop owner several times, but he didn't seem to take my suggestion to decrease the chop’s spicy.
Dec. 16, 2020
One of my hobbies----writing
This is something I actually don't talk to anybody about but I’m really addicted in writing some articles in English. And I shared it in a corrective website to correct my mistakes. What’s more. It taught me how to communicate, how to craft a narrative effectively, and also how to be interesting. The best thing about writing is that it actually has improved my verbal communication skills.
I haven’t written for a long time after the graduation from the senior high school. What’s more, my writing skill has been limited to a rigid format. In China, we were allowed to recited many advanced, beautiful sentences for the exams, not practical, helpful ones. In my views, the first step of writing is express what I thought with my own words and receive more corrections from others to improve them. Practice makes perfect, the things I learnt not like a strangers I greeted but more like a close friend. It could be a part of mine; it could be my weapon to took; it even could be my life. I do hope I will never forget the period of time on writing and stick in it.
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Mit dagligt skema.
- Jeg vågner op fra klokken 5:00 til 8:00.
- Jeg laver min hunds morgenmad når han vågner op omkring 9:00 til 12:00 og jeg lade ham ud.
- Jeg studerer til klokken 13:00.
- Jeg bruger tid sammen med min kæreste til 18:00
- Jeg laver aftensmad og studerer omkring klokken 19:00 til 21:00.
- Min hund spiser også omkring klokken 19:00 til 21:00.
- Jeg går i seng klokken 22:00 til 00:00.
Jeg er mere et morgenmenneske. Jeg vågner op tidligt, fordi jeg kan koncentrere mig bedre om morgen. Også, dage føles længere.
Jeg kan godt lide mit dagligt skema! Jeg organiserer det min selv, og der er nok tid og plads hvis jeg må flytte tingene rundt.
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Journal 16/12/20
I want to talk about some situations in our country and I have always had some points on it. I don’t know if there is a situation in your country. I worked in a public institution which is funded by the government. When it’s the end of the year, our department is required to book a lot of next year’s newspapers and magazines. They are published from all levels of the departments of governments. For example, Party Style and Clean Government, China’s Discipline Inspection and Supervision, Yingzhou Evening News and so on. This kind of cost every year is almost around ten thousand yuan. But no one really reads them. We just put it alone and some day sell them as waste. This kind of situation really makes us sad, but we can do nothing about this. The publishers belong to every high authority department, and these departments are our leading departments. For instance, China’s Discipline Inspection and Supervision is issued by the CPC Central Commission for Discipline Inspection and you all know that it’s the department focusing on each official behavior, and everybody who works in a department that is funded by the government is afraid of it. Our district party committee also has its Discipline inspection committee. And it is the department that requires us to book that magazine. Who dare refuse its demand? Except you want bad things to happen. So why don't people read newspapers and magazines? Because nowadays, information is particularly developed and you can get a lot of information on your phone, and very fast. In this kind of situation, who will read those newspapers and magazines? Will this happen in your country?
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Dec. 16, 2020
Are Animals in a Zoo Happy?
This question is very difficult to answer. In the perspective of freedom, the animals don't have freedom because they can't do what they want to do instinctively. For example, birds want to fly over the sky but they can't because of cages. On the other hand, they are guaranteed their safety. If they get sick, vets will treat them. Besides, they won't suffer from starvation and natural enemies. We can't ask whether they feel happy or not, so it's impossible to answer the question. However, I think we should take care of animal rights as same as human rights.
Dec. 16, 2020
debate on private colleges and universities
There has aroused a heated debate on whether private colleges and universities are benefit to our education or not. Views on this issue vary from person to person. From my point of view, before airing my own opinion, I do think it's necessary to analyze this thorny issue from different perspectives.
Those who declare that these universities could enable more students to have access to higher education present the following reasons. To begin with, private college provide an opportunity for students who cannot enter public universities and experience 3-year learning life. In addition, because of the 3-year experiences, they also get the ticket to access to the bachelor or Master degree.1What's more, if the student don't want to continue the study, they will acquire a specific technique by 3-year studys that will help them get a job after graduation.
Although the explanation is rational, other people may explore this issue for another angel. for one thing, the private colleges and universities are operated by private groups whom aim at high profit rather than education quality. For another thing, the teacher's quality should also be concerned because of good resources might chose the public universities for stable income and future.
In conclusion, although it's very hard to arrive at an absolute conclusion on this issue, considering these factors, I will assent to the former viewpoint because the defects cannot obscure the virtues.No matter how bad the teacher quality or the education, those can be solved through the government's overview. However, if we don't have these private colleges, our society will lack professional technician. In addition, those students cannot continue study will enlarge the unstable factor of society which might cause various social problems
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Journal 16/12/20
This morning, I attended the Fifth Congress of Yingzhou District, Fuyang City, China Communist Youth League. Present at the meeting were Sun Cunkun, deputy secretary of Yingzhou District Party Committee, Zhou Xuan, deputy secretary of Fuyang Municipal Committee of Communist Youth League and other relevant leaders. A special section was where four young pioneers from Liu Qi Primary School delivered speeches to the conference. The conference was successful and I had seen the hope of our country and our cause from those young pioneers and Communist Youth League members. This meeting reminded me of how I had become a communist youth league member. It was in sixth grade. My PE teacher told me that I could apply to join the Communist Youth League, then he gave me a form to let me fill it. I took the form home after school and told my father all about this. My father was very pleased and helped me to finish the form. Many years later, I just realized that the form was a volunteer book for joining the Communist Youth League. No wonder how beautiful it was. I didn’t join the Young Pioneers because our primary school was remote at that time and didn’t carry out this work. The young are hope and future. It is because of their existence that our cause can keep moving forward.
Dec. 16, 2020
Un Guion Cortito (2)
Alba y Mari, dos hermanas, están en la banqueta del aeropuerto
Alba.- Quiero que regreses muy pronto y no te olvide de lo que me prometiste
Mari.- Desearía poder decirte que regresaría muy pronto, pero las cosas pasan y tengo que vivir. Los cosmos no son tan fijos como pensamos
Alba.- Y la familia no está tan estable sin ti.
Mari.- Esto es mi momento...si no lo hago, me voy arrepintiéndolo poco a poco, día por día
Dec. 16, 2020
Meine Stadt
Hallo Erik,
Es war schön deinen lezten Brief zu lesen. Ich bin gut, aber das Wetter ist hier ab und zu schlecht.
Du muss unbedingt in die nächste Wochen meine Stadt besuchen! Du hattest mir das gesagt, dass du nach Knightsberg kommen will, nicht wahr? Warum nicht mir zum Weihnachten besuchen? Es ist hier viel wärmer als Deutschland und es gibt so viele Sachen zu tun zum Weihnachten.
Zuerst, könnten wir die Weihnachtsmarkt besichtigen und viele Sachen probieren zu essen. Es gibt leckere Heißeschokolade, Bratessen, und verschiedene Eis. Man kann hier Leute von verschiedene Lände sehen, die sehr gut gelaunt sind.
Nach wir viele Sachen für das Abendessen kaufen gehabt, könnten wir zu Hause einen Weihnachtsbaum bauen. Ich will er mit verschiedene Sachen dekorieren, zum Beispiel, Baublen, Sterne, Schenke, Glitter, und so weiter!
Der nächsten Tag können wir Ski fahren und mit Morty (Mein Hund) durch die Stadt spazieren.
Ich hoffe, dass du dieses mal kommen konnen.
Mit viele Grüße,
A
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Olá pessoal/melhorar a escrita
Olá pessoal, tudo bem? Meu nome e Jessica e amo o Brasil: o povo, o país, e a língua. Já morei em São Paulo (estado e cidade) e em Vitoria, ES. Talvez eu volte um dia, mas até eu chegar novamente, quero manter o português que eu já falo e, além disso, melhorar a escrita. Aprendi o português falando, então sei bem como conversar, mas não sei muito bem como escrever de um jeito mais elegante ou usar palavras e construções mais rebuscadas. Por isso, pretendo escrever cada dia mais para alcançar essa nova meta. Bora estudar!
Dec. 16, 2020
Ciao a tutti/Lingue simili
Ciao a tutti e benvenuti al mio Langcorrect! Sono Jessica e sono una studentessa di italiano fa molti anni. Ho cominciato formalmente nella scuola e ho continuato anche nell’università, ma i miei nonni erano nati a Trieste, quindi, sono cresciuta sempre ascoltando la lingua e forse anche imitando i suoni.
Ho passato l’estate con i miei cugini in Italia quando avevo 18 anni fino a 21 anni. Dopo di che sono ritornata forse tre volte per consultare gli archivi per causa dei miei studi. Ho studiato la storia e l’anno prossimo completerò il mio dottorato di ricerca nel campo della storia rinascimentale. Per questo, ho letto parecchi libri, periodici e documenti italiani ma non parlo (e scrivo) mai. I miei nonni infelicemente sono scomparsi quattro anni fa e durante questo tempo trovavo l’atto di parlare l’italiano molto difficile.
Oggi vorrei ricominciare a parlare ma ho paura che il portoghese ha corrotto il mio italiano. Le parole più piccole tipo 'io, adesso, tra,' non mi vengono in mente ma invece ‘eu, agora, entre’ e non solo questo ha già creato problemi ma anche le parole che si scrive lo stesso ma si pronuncia di un modo diverso, per esempio ‘governo, casa, canto,’ ecc.
Qualcuno di voi già avete esperienza con due lingue simili si interferiscono? Per favore aiutami e rispondere nei commenti.
Dec. 16, 2020
ein neuer Anfang
Hallo Leute! Herzlich Wilkommen zu meinem Langcorrect. Ich habe fast keines Deutsch seit 2016 geschrieben, aber man muss irgendwo anfangen! Nach einem Tag auf der Suche von interessante Videos auf Youtube, habe ich Robin MacPherson gefunden. Ich fand es überraschend, wie ähnlich denken wir über Sprachlernen. Deswegen, habe ich die Links des Videos geklickt und Journaly gefunden. Aber es scheint mir, dass Journaly ein bisschen ruhig war. Vor vielen Jahren, benutzte ich Lang8 und ich habe mich errinert, dass ich auf Reddit gelesen habe, über ein neue Website, die Langcorrect heißt. Deshalb bin ich hier. Ich freue mich auf mein Deutsch zu verbessern und viele Leute kennenzulernen. Bis bald!
Dec. 16, 2020
こんにちは/夢の旅行
こんにちは。はじめまして。ジェシカといいます。オーストラリアに住んでいる大学生です。よろしくお願いします。日本語は２００６年に勉強してはじめてが、実は、２００６年から２０１０年までだけ勉強していました。２０１０年から２０２０年まであまり勉強していません。でも、コロナのせいで、暇な時がありました。ですから、日本語をどんどん勉強していました。いま、ワニカニという漢字を習うためにサイトを使っていて、YouTubeの文法ビデオを見て、授業に参加しています。目的は漢字マスターになるし、本を自由に読むし、ペラペラ会話ができると思います。頑張ります！
夢は日本に日本語の勉強ために短期的住みたいだと思います。日本に住むと、東京のマラソンを走りたいだし、グルメな旅行をしたいだし、たくさんの食べたがない和食を食べみたいだと思います！日本に行ったことがありますが、二週間だけでした。JENESYSという文部科学省プログラムを参加して、東京と別府市のAPU大学に行きました。すごく楽しかったですが、短すぎりました。歴史的な場所に行くつもりです。例えば、京都や奈良や高山や伊勢や金沢に行きたいだと思います。
みんなさん、アドバイスがあったら、ぜひ連絡してくれませんか。またね。
Dec. 16, 2020
과거와 현재
제가 이 세상에서 몇 십 년 동안 살아와서 때때로 지난날이 그립게 됩니다. 제가 보기에는 대다수 나이가 든 사람들도 이런 생각을 갖고 있습니다. 실제적인 까닭은 잘 모르겠지만 그 무렵의 아름답다는 것은 아무도 부정할 수 없습니다. 이 현상 대문에 많은 기업이나 장사가 레트로 개념을 사용하여 예전의 기분과 추억을 돌이켜 보았습니다.
현대기술의 발달과 더불어 생활이 급속도로 변하고 있으면서 모든 것은 오히려 복잡해졌습니다. 그렇지만 인간에게 현재를 간직한다는 마음이 있어야 합니다. 시간이 일단 흐르면 아무리 해도 만류하지 못합니다. 그러므로 시간을 낭비하지 말고 반드시 충분히 이용해야 비로소 다음날에는 후회가 없습니다.
Dec. 16, 2020
2020 My Christmas Present
This year I wish my Christmas present is a…computer joystick with vibrational function.
My current joystick works normally.
But it would more fun when I play games like street fighter.
I am looking at a website sells now or used items.
So, a new joystick with vibrational function is US$10.
A similar but more cooling looking type will only cost US$20.
Which still sounds reasonable to me.
But when I look at the game console section.
A second hand PS3 with 10 games is just cost US$50.
US$50 you can’t even buy one new game disc.
My room is too small, if I had a PS3 that means no space place for another console.
But I already want a PS5 this year.
I am so confused!
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Decisiones
Cuando me siento muy ansiosa es casi imposible tomar decisiones.
Por ejemplo, decisiones como ¿que día debería ir al jardín con mi amiga? o ¿deberíamos ir andando o en coche? de repente son muy difíciles. No importa la elección final, siempre pienso que me he equivocado o que voy a decepcionarle a alguien.
Ahora me siento así y no puedo recordar lo que hice la última vez para sentirme mejor. Lo que quiero es no tener que tomar ninguna decisión durante un rato.
Dec. 16, 2020
¿Qué asiento prefieres cuando viajas?
Habitualmente, prefiero el asiento de la ventana porque puedo mirarme el paisaje escuchando música, lo que es una manera muy bonita de matar el tiempo durante un viaje aburrido. En avión, me parece que la vista de las nubes flotando en un cielo azur o en un cielo de noche tiene algo mágico. Cuando era un niño, también tenía la costumbre de apoyar mi cabeza contra la ventana para sentir las vibraciones del vehiculo: sé que es un poco extraño, pero me gusté hacer eso. Cuando hacía frío, podía también dibujar formas en el vaho que se formaba sobre la ventana.
Debo decir que me gusta también el asiento del pasillo, para extender mis piernas a veces. En la mayoría de los vehiculos, me parece que no hay bastante espacio delante de los asientos: ¡estamos apretados como sardinias en una lata! Ya que soy un chico alto, es desagradable para mí.
Finalmente, la opción peor sería el asiento del medio: ni paisajes, ni posibilidades para extender las piernas... ¡Qué pesadilla, en viajes largos!
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