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Heute war es genau wie gestern
Schreiben Sie die Sätze und ergänzen Sie „auch“, sodass es sich auf den ganzen Satz bezieht.
1. Ich bin gestern ohne Wecker aufgewacht: Ich bin heute auch ohne Wecke aufgewacht.
2. Claudia ist gestern mit meinem Hund spazieren gegangen: Claudia ist heute auch mit meinem Hund spazieren gegangen.
3. Ich habe gestern Musik gehört: Ich habe heute auch Musik gehört.
4. Wir sind gestern ins Kino gegangen: Wir sind heute auch ins Kino gegangen.
5. Wir mussten gestern wegen der vielen Leute lange Schlange stehen: Wir mussten heute wegen der vielen Leute auch lange Schlange stehen.
6. Der Film gestern hat uns nicht so gut gefallen: Der Film heute hat uns auch nicht so gut gefallen.
Dec. 20, 2020
Les maisons
Les maisons en bois ne sont pas prises au sérieux en France et ceux qui s’en font construire sont vus avec condescendance. Une étude du Comité national pour le développement du bois confirme cette observation: En 2005, la construction des maisons en bois était de 5% par rapport aux autres pays comme l’Allemagne où ce percentage est de 30%.
Dec. 20, 2020
Story
I can remember those days very vividly even now. It was several years ago, my grandfather was diagnosed with lung cancer and he suffered excruciating pain most of the time. Apparently it was an incurable illness. And at that time, all of my family were in other cities so on one took care of my grandfather. In this case, he needed to go to the hospital himself. At that time, I went to my hometown because it was my summer holiday. So I was the only one who could visit my grandfather from time to time. Sometimes I went to the hospital to visited him. At that time he was so happy because you know when people suffer they always want their families to e there for them. But at that time, I felt so bored and always wanted to hang out with my friends, as I didn’t know how bad the situation was. I am so regret that I did not spend more time with him. But now I have grown up and realized that I need to cherish every moment with my family because we all lead a fast-paced life and do not have time to gather together. Whenever they need help, we need to extend our helping hand to them and this is also a way to strengthen family bond.
Dec. 20, 2020
Think
It is important to think about something. To do so, we need something or someone that keeps us thinking, because it is difficult to make our thoughts deeper in our own. For example, in many Japanese schools, teachers often tell children to think about some topic for a few minutes in class, but most children cannot bear to stick with a single topic for more than a minutes. The rest of the time, they are always thinking about something different. That means they are stuck to think. Then, they need to communicate with others.
A little bit different opinion leads us to step forward, because it makes us to think about the difference.
Dec. 20, 2020
Cashless Society
A society without cash has a lot of advantages and disadvantages. For example, digital money will not allow bad people to conceal illegal trades or black markets. That means it may decrease the number of crime dramatically. However, if cash cannot be used in daily lives, elderly people who cannot be used to using smart phones or other devices would have a problem.
Dec. 20, 2020
Oh Christmas
I used to be thrilled to death about Christmas. Because Christmas, no matter what it was, would always come with a long holiday. Waiting for Santa Claus dropping presents through the chimney which didn't exist in my house, I would look through the window, praying for something I didn't really understand. Such blissful innocence didn't last long as I grew up, but I'm still happy now, as out of the church come lots of beautiful and lovely songs reverberating among people. They were famous back in the day but not so nowadays, perhaps it's because people are much more into the virtual world as opposed to the real one. Sadly I have been gradually losing my passion on Christmas. If It was possible, I would go back to the day I was still innocent, and tell the younger me, "what a wonderful pain in the arse."
Dec. 20, 2020
Mi familia en Navidad
Te cuento algo sobre mi familia en Navidad y nuestras tradiciones. Yo vivo con mi novio, pero en Navidad no estamos en casa, sino vamos a visitar a nuestras familias. La Nochebuena normalmente la pasamos con la familia de mi novio. Hay una cena de Navidad, a la cual vienen los padres de mi novio, sus abuelos y su tío con su esposa. Para cenar, los padres de mi novio preparan un fondue. Después de la cena, encendemos las velas del árbol de Navidad y abrimos los regalos.
Normalmente, el 25 de diciembre vamos a visitar a mi familia. Nos encontramos en un ristorante y comemos pescado allí. Vienen mis padres, mi tía y mi tío y mis abuelos. Después de la comida, damos un paseo por el pueblo porque hemos comido demasiado y nos sirve!
Este año, por Covid, todo es diferente. Hace algunos días, mi novio se puso enfermo con Covid. Yo no tuve un test pero creo que yo también estaba enferma. Tenemos que quedarnos en cuarentena durante Navidad. No podemos salir de casa y no podemos ver a nuestras familias. Vamos a hablar con ellos a través de Skype. Espero que mis abuelos entiendan cómo funciona. Dejamos los regalos fuera de la puerta y nuestra familia viene a tomarlos y a dejar sus regalos.
Dec. 20, 2020
Journal 20/12/20
I looked at the picture you sent me carefully. I can see the blue sky and the distant woods, and the snow on the ground. The scene is definitely shot in the wild. But I have two questions that I want to know, if it is convenient for you to answer. First, is your office in the wild? What is the thing that is on the left of the picture? Is it a bridge? But it looks unlike a bridge. So I am very curious about that.
Dec. 20, 2020
Dimanche 20 décembre 2020
À Noël, nous mangions beaucoup de chocolat. J’étais souvent malade parce que j’ai trop mangé. Maintenant je suis une adulte, je ne veux plus manger autant. Maintenant, je préfère manger (ou boire) quelque chose d’autre comme de la viande, des patates rôties, du vin. L’année dernière je n’ai mangée que le déjeuner, j’étais rassasiée.
Hier je lisais ‘Les Seigneurs des Anneaux’ (cette fois en anglais car c’est ma première lecture) et dans ce livre il parle quelque fois de la nourriture délicieuse - surtout quand les Hobbits, Frodo, Sam, Merry et Pippin, mangent autour du feu de camp, ou une dans auberge. C’est très charmant - je ne connais personne qui n’aime pas cette trilogie. Personnellement, je ne peux pas m’arrêter de lire. Vendredi soir, je l’ai lu de sept heures à dix heures moins le quart. Je crois que je finirais la moitié de la livre bientôt.
Dec. 20, 2020
Christmas letter
Yesterday I walked all day long looking for Santa Claus with my 3 years old son. To follow the tradition, children need to write a letter to Santa Claus and give it in hand whithin the days before christmas. But Barcelona has changed a lot on last year. The impact of covid in a tourism based city has been huge: closed shops and empty streets are now the picture of the city. However Christmas is magical and there are lots of activities to enjoy with childrens. We spent 3 hours looking for a Santa’s letter, we wrote it and finally we give it in hand to Santa Claus. A beautiful experience for a 3 years old kid who don’t understand nothing about covid.
Happy Christmas
Dec. 20, 2020
Playing Ring Fit Adventure
I bought Ring Fit Adventure at last Christmas. It's been out of stock for a long time, but I luckily found it on the way back home from grocery shopping. Playing Ring Fit Adventure is pretty tough. I was thinking of play it every day, but I couldn't. I mostly play two stages a day. At the beginning, my muscles were sore the next day. I played it 106 times until today. I've played it for 6 days in a row recently because I started playing rhythm dance mode. It's very fun to do it. I'm sure that I will play it tomorrow too.
Dec. 20, 2020
Journal 20/12/20
In China, cities are similar to each other except for some minority cities. For this trip, the destination Hangzhou City is economically developed in China and it’s also the top one city among new first-tier cities. When you look at the appearances of Hangzhou and my hometown Fuyang, there seems no big difference except that Hangzhou has more tall buildings. But in fact, there are big differences between these two cities. First, Hangzhou is a deputy ministerial city, but Fuyang is just a prefectural city. Second, Hangzhou has an urban population of 7.45 million and covers 700 square kilometers, but Fuyang only has an urban population of 2 million and covers an area of 2 hundred square kilometers. Third, the GDP of Hangzhou in 2019 is 1,537,3 billion yuan, but Fuyang only has 270 billion yuan in the same year. Fourth, Hangzhou is the most developed area in its private enterprises in China, but Fuyang’s industry and private enterprises are very weak. Fifth, the natural scenery in Hangzhou is very beautiful and Hangzhou is called heaven on the earth, but Fuyang is just a medium city in plain areas and it doesn’t have those beautiful natural sceneries. So although the cities in China look similar in their appearances, they have significant differences.
Dec. 20, 2020
HIIT
Do you know HIIT? HIIT is the initials of High-Intensity Interval Traning. This is one method of training, and it's effective particularly for cardiopulmonary function. HIIT is sets of high-intensity workouts and incomplete recoveries such as jogging or walking. One of the upsides is this training needs only a few moments. However, it means the density and hardness is very high. I sometimes do HIIT, and I feel I want to quit this torture as soon as possible, but when I finish the program I'm proud of my patience. Freeletics is a good app for practicing HIIT.
Dec. 20, 2020
My biggest regret!
It will be probably when I was 7, and I was playing on my ps2, with a new friend I made.
He was 15 and we was playing wwe game and i was wining he said he was gonna show me
a new technique so i handed him my controller and he made my player approach his then he used his ultimate move making lose i started crying to mom this kid was living with us because his mom abandoned him when he was a child and he living with his dad and his dad brought him to us while he go to works and he could work on for my auntie convenient store anyway when mom heard i was crying she started freaking out i didn't thought she was gonna get like that
and he was very apologetic and he was just pulling prank on him but she didn't listen and kicked him out at midnight That night i felt very guilty because i knew i overreacted and i was thinking i will apologies to him in the morning when he comes back but he never did that was 14 years ago
last week i heard that he died in yemen in he sleep he left he is dad to go look for his mom leaving younger brother alone and all this from 15 just started flooding back i wished i could've
meet once more time so i can say i was sorry for acting childish
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Dec. 20, 2020
Куда пойдём? (упражнение из учебника)
Какая выставка проходит в Центре современного искусства “Винзавод”? Какая тема выставки?
В Центре современного искусства проходит выставка “Лучшие фотографии России”. На выставке представлены популярные тем фотолюбителей Россиской Федерации: закаты, рассветы, детски улыбки и счастливые старики.
Что идёт в Московском драматическом Театре на Малой Бронной? Кто режиссёр? Кто играет в спектакль?
В Московском драматическом Театре идёт спектакль “Три сестры”. В нём играют Марина Александрова, Алёна Бабенко, Владислав Ветров и другие. Режиссёр – Александр Савостьянов.
Кто принимает участие в концерте “Моцарт-квартет”? Что в программе концерта?
В концерте “Мозарт-квартет” принимают участие Ирина Павлихина, Антон Кулапов, Вячеслав Маринюк и Сергей Мазаев. В программе концерта – Танеев, Моцарт, Сальери, Вебер и Мендельсон.
Dec. 20, 2020
J'ai réussi mon test de français
Comme je l'ai dit dans mon post d'hier, j'avais un test de français aujourd'hui. Je crois que j'ai réussi le test et donc ce niveau. Pour être diplômé en mon université il faut réussir quatre niveaux d'un langue étrangère, soit l'anglais, le français ou l'italien. Je parle anglais déjà et j'adore le français, donc pourquoi j'ai choisi le cours de français. C'est mon troisième niveau, alors je n'ai qu'un niveau de plus pour réussir ce critère. Je suis dans mon quatrième semestre, ce qui veut dire que j'avais beaucoup de temps pour faire le programme de langues, mais c'est mieux de le faire bien avant. Sinon, c'est assez difficile ! Je vais m'inscrire au niveau final dans les prochaines vacances.
Dec. 20, 2020
Dec. 20, 2020
Festival de luces de Navidad
Mañana iré al jardín botánico con mi hermana pequeña y su mejor amiga porque hay un festival de luces de Navidad. ¡Estoy emocionada! Fui con mi familia y mis primos hace casi diez años y me gustó mucho perderme entre los árboles y las luces. Recuerdo que compramos tazas de chocolate caliente y que después fuimos a un restaurante Amish donde comimos puré de papas, verduras frescas, pan blando, y pollo asado (comida casera).
Espero hacer recuerdos tan buenos con ellas mañana.
Dec. 20, 2020
L’entrée troisième
Bonjour ! Bienvenue à ma deuxième entrée du journal. Je suis très heureux que j’écris encore après j’ai écrit hier aussi, j’espère que je vais continuer écrire en français tous les jours depuis longtemps.
Aujourd’hui je me suis levé très tard encore, mais je me suis couché tôt hier (à vingt-deux heures !). J’espère que c’est parce que je n’ai pas dormi bien depuis longtemps avant ces vacances, et je vais n’avoir besoin de ça pour les vacations entières.
J’ai lit beaucoup hier soir, qui est très sympa. J’ai aussi parlé avec mes amis en ligne – nous sommes très proches à ce moment, et j’espère que ce va continuer, en partie parce que nous sommes à le début de les vacances.
Je trouve qu’apprendre le français était très plait pour moi. Ce m’occupe bien, et c’est vraiment intéressant. J’ai appris beaucoup du vocabulaire, mais maintenant je veux améliorer ma grammaire en partie, parce que c’est très mauvais et je veux écrire meilleur. Merci pour l’auto-correct !
Aussi - c'est marrant que c'est les espaces entre des virgules et des mots en français.
En tout cas, merci pour lit mon entrée et à bientôt !
Dec. 20, 2020
Buy PS3 in 2020?
Is that even a question to ask?
If you are a game fans, you must know PS5 is on sale now.
But you will be lucky to buy one even you have the money.
So, why buy a PS3 now?
Because after PS2 I stop play games.
I never have PS3, PS4 or another console like XBOX.
So, I did a quick research in internet.
Really surprise me that some people still suggest you buy such old console. (PS3)
But after they fully explain the specifications.
I do agree that even at 2020, If you don’t have a gaming console.
And thinking a cheap present for yourself.
Buy a PS3.
Dec. 20, 2020
Journal 20/12/20
Although I don't know which city you live in, the weather sounds similar to that of northeast China because the temperature there in winter is also minus thirty to forty degrees Celsius. To be honest, I prefer mild weather. I have been to southern China like Guangzhou, Shenzhen, Sanya, as well as northern China like Hulunbeier, Manzhouli, so I know a little bit the weather difference between the north and the south. My home town Fuyang is located in the Mideast part of China and we have four different seasons. In the summer, it rains a lot and it is a little bit moist and the highest temperature range is between thirty-five to forty degrees Celsius. In the winter, the lowest temperature range is between minus ten to twenty degrees. In spring and autumn, the weather is pretty nice, though it is a bit dry in autumn. During these two seasons, the temperature range is usually between ten to twenty-five degrees Celsius. But I still have a dream that when I retire I want to find a small southern coastal town with mountains to live in. I don't know if this dream can come true.
Dec. 20, 2020
我推荐的书
My teacher wants me to record myself speaking and gave me a list of prompts. My fourth prompt is to talk about a book I recommend. This is what I intend to say, please correct me! Thank you!
今天我将谈论我推荐的一本书。 我推荐的书叫《The Spirit Catches You and You Fall Down: A Hmong Child, Her American Doctors, and the Collision of Two Cultures》。 我在大学读过这本书。 它讨论了老挝和美国之间医疗保健的文化差异。 他们是两个截然不同的国家。 这是一本很好的书。 这本书告诉我们有关医生和家庭之间语言交流和文化差异的误解。 这本书启发了我开始学习语言，从而可以帮助不会说英语的人。 我希望你能读这本书。
Dec. 19, 2020
童年的爱好
My teacher wants me to record myself speaking and gave me a list of prompts. My third one is to talk about a hobby I had as a child. This is what I intend to say, please correct me! Thank you!
今天，我将谈论我小时候的爱好。 我小时候喜欢踢足球。 我并加入了一支足球队。 我踢了八年足球。 当我十四岁的时候，我踢足球时受伤了。 我弄伤了臀部的肌肉。 在那之后我不得不停止踢足球。 我很悲了。 一年后，我试图再次在一个队中比赛，但我又一次受伤了。 所以现在我只是偶尔玩一次。 我现在喜欢在电视上看足球。