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Tập luyện từ vựng mới
Lầu Năm Góc, tức là tổ chức mà lãnh đạo quan sự Hoa Kỳ, sợ mất uy tín của thế giới do những hành động mới đay của Tổng thống Trump.
Vào rạng sáng hôm qua Vệ binh Cách mạng Iran phóng khoảng tấm 20 quả tên lửa trúng hai căn cứ của Mỹ nằm ở Iraq tây.
Ngoài ra, trong khi ông Trump công bố ông muốn đặt hoa bình giữa Mỹ và Iran, có máy quả pháo được Liên Xô sản xuất bị rơi trúng Vùng xanh ở Baghdad, thủ đô Iraq.
Chị ba của tôi sợ nếu mang búi tóc chặt quá thì chị ấy sẽ bị hói.
Do tôi là người cầu toàn nên có nhiều bạn bảo là tôi khắt khe quá.
Hình như bây giờ Quốc hội Mỹ không hài lòng với các đe doạ của ông Trump thì phải.
Bây giờ sự lãnh đạo của quân sự Hoa Kỳ rất sợ rằng thế giới Hồi giáo sẽ ngày càng cảm nhận những gì Hoa Kỳ làm giống như hành động của đế quốc độc ác.
Jan. 9, 2020
Überraschungsparty im Büro
Heute gab es eine Überraschungsparty für einen Mitarbeiter, der am Samstag heiraten wird. Wir haben ihm eine Glückwunschkarte und Geld geschenkt. Er war ziemlich überrascht.
Wir haben Kuchen gegessen und ein Glas Wein getrunken. Prost! Ich habe auf den Kuchen verzichtet, weil Süßigkeiten mir häufig nicht gefallen. Vielleicht stimmt irgendetwas mit mir nicht. Haha.
Wir haben vorm Arbeitsschluss ein paar Brettspiele gespielt. Es hat Spaß gemacht, aber ich muss gestehen, dass ich richtig schlecht in Brettspielen bin.
Jan. 9, 2020
Rewriting My Journals
This year I have decided to rewrite all my journals that get corrections.
I have already rewritten my previous journals from this year.
I guess it’s one of the good ways to learn languages!
I put the date I rewrote them at the bottom of the journals.
I didn’t know all corrections would disappear when I rewrote it the way they corrected it!
(Corrected on Jan. 9th)
Jan. 9, 2020
J'ai traduit quelque chose pour une collègue
Hier, j'ai aidé une collègue à traduire quelque chose. Je travaille à une école internationelle, donc il y a beaucoup d'enfants qui vient de plusieurs de pays. Avant que ma collègue m'a demandé de l'aide je ne le savais pas, mais il y a une élève qui vient d'une pays africaine où les personnes parlent français. Ses parents ne parlent que le français, mais il n'y a personne à l'école qui peut le parler, sauf que moi! Sans doute, mon français n'est pas parfait, mais comme il n'y a d'autre personne qui pourrait donner de l'aide, j'ai fait mon mieux! Le message que j'ai traduit:
Veuillez envoyer des sous-vêtements et des chaussettes pour votre enfant. Additionellement, elle a besoin d'une brosse à dents, du dentifrice, et d'une tasse pour utiliser quand les enfants se brossent les dents. Finalement, veuillez envoyer des chaussures que votre enfant peut porter à l'intérieur. Les chaussures doivent être des chaussures normales, pas les chaussures blanches comme les élèves portent aux écoles coréenes, parce que votre fille doit les porter pendant l'éducation physique. Merci beaucoup!
Jan. 8, 2020
次のアップデートについて
昨日の夜、LangCorrectバージョン1.4.0をリリースしたが、このアップデートではサイトに色々なことを追加された。まず多くのユーザーは何を書くか考えづらいので、彼らの為に作文のお題をサイトに追加するつもりだ。ただ、これ（お題）が実現する前に、みんなの言語レベルを知ることが大切だった。なぜ？ユーザーが落胆させないために、彼らの能力を超えるお題を受け取れないことが大事だと思う。例えば、ビギナーは中級お題を貰ったら、落胆するではないか？
お題について
お題を書きたいユーザーは自分の母国語で特別のサイトのページに書ける。お題を書き終わったら、データベースにセーブする前に、お題の難しさや言語を選べなければいけない。今度、その書いたお題の言語を勉強しているユーザーは日記を書くと、そのお題を読めるようになる。
僕の作文について
日本語ではどうやって文書をコネクトするか教えてくれませんか？それとも教えてくれるサイトがありますか？僕の日本語はまだ中級の下なので、ググる先生に何を聞く（書く）か分からないので、見つけにくいです。
Jan. 8, 2020
Jan. 8, 2020
Introducción
Hola, me llamo cm. Me gusta aprender idioma. Me aprender alemana y espanol. Yo aprendido espanol en colegio pero estoy oxidado. Me sentencia probablemente estén equivocados, lo siento. Quiero llegar de nuevo en espanol entonces estoy aquí. Me amiga Raspbeere habló de esta el sitio de web y discord. Espero tu correcto me espanol con tú y aprender más. Gracias!
Jan. 8, 2020
THIEVES STEAL THE DUMBEST THING EVER!
However tempting it might be, do not steal devices that can help track you down!
Today we are visiting Silicon Valley, Santa Clara, California. There we are going to find two stupid idiots who stole some things.
Now, let me ask you this. If you were a thief, would you like to be tracked down? So you probably would not steal anything, which would help police locate you, right? So would our crazy stupid idiots, but guess what? They failed to do so. Because what they had stolen, was a lot of GPS trackers from a hi-tech company which produces them.
The theft happened in June 2017 when two thieves stole $18,000 worth of GPS trackers presumably confusing them with phone chargers since the trackers were very alike to such phone accessories. The owner of the company didn’t get confused though:
“The moment we realized they had a box of trackers, we went into recovery mode,” the owner said. “We notified the police and equipped them to track the devices, and in about 5 or 6 hours, it was done.”
The thieves were tracked down in five hours or so. You would probably think that’s the end of the story. But wait, there is more. Not only did the thieves steal the trackers, but they also decided to celebrate their success by drinking beer from the fridge situated in the scene of the crime. That was when one of the thieves cut his finger with a beer tab and left bloody fingerprints all over the place!
The police had plenty evidence to work with. The cxops were also able to locate the place where the thieves kept their prey. There were even more stolen things from other crimes the thieves had committed.
Don’t steal devices that can help track you down – that’s our free CSI advice for today!
Jan. 8, 2020
Jan. 8, 2020
Some of the ways I use to learn a new language
Today I was busy with work so I think I will not be able to write a long journal. I am going to share with you today some of my favourite ways to learn a new language. First, I try to engage my self in online communities who speak this language. I mean by community is any group who share my intrest and hobbies, games or social media websites for example. This strategy helped a lot because it does not require to focus only in learning, but also enjoying it. Second, I changed my device setting to the language I learn, so I have to figure out how to use my device based on this language. Another way I do is watching interesting videos or movies in my target language. I start watching first with subtitles then I remove it after some time.
Thank you for reading.
Jan. 8, 2020
A short entry
Recently I don't have time to type entries to this website because I have to study more for the exams. But I'm glad because it's almost weekend and I'll have time to see films or TV series. On summer days I used to cycle and I usually cycle to silent places where I chill. But on winter days instead of cycling I play computer games. I usually play with budget games because my computer is a low spec PC.
Jan. 8, 2020
Jan. 8, 2020
Uma Arranha
Ontem eu vi a MAIOR Arranha que já vi na minha vida. Era TÃO GRANDE e as pernas eram bem compridas também. Eu quase resolvi ardar a minha casa. Você tinha ter visto-o para entender. Mas no fim eu convoquei a coragem para matá-lo sem problems. Espero que eu não veja uma arranha assim novamente!!
Jan. 8, 2020
About Kyoto people in Japan
Be careful Kyoto people.😱😱😱
They never say straight what they want to say.
For example,,,
Kyoto people
"Your wrist watch is very nice"
It means
"Please go home soon."
(You can't know the time even though you have a wrist watch?)
But It's their considerate.✨🌟✨🌟
They avoid direct expressions and
They avoid that hurt you.😌😌😌
They never speak bad words.
Jan. 8, 2020
8th Jan 2020
Hi guys! I've got a lot on my mind lately, some questions that I have no answers for. So I thought I'd just write them down.
I met someone a while ago. Well, we were classmates before but we didn't really know each other at that time. And now we met under a different circumstance, and I'm glad we did because I hadn't felt that way about anyone in a long long time. I honestly thought we had a connection, you know?
Everything was going well, we went on a couple of dates, he's a decent and sophisticated person which is exactly my type. He may be a bit cocky and judgemental sometimes but that, obviously, didn't stop me from developing feelings for him. And then it all went south on our Christmas date. I honestly don't know why but he started acting really weird halfway through the date and we didn't talk at all on our way home. I got a bit upset that night so I texted him and said something like "I don't know what's on your mind, but I feel like I deserved a little bit more attention". And guess what? He just apologised for ruining such a good day for me, and I never heard back from him again. Honestly, I just don't get it. Why on earth would he ask me out on Christmas if he wasn't interested in me? Like why???? But I'm not a person who double-texts/ gets clingy so I tried REALLY hard not to text him again.
I got really upset and pessimistic since then, I started asking myself what I had done so wrong because I honestly don't know. I'd consider myself a good person, there's not a single circumstance under which I didn't put myself the second and thought about his needs first. I just can't help thinking, am I not good enough?
But I'm grateful for all the people who love me and care about me. x I feel sorry for bombarding them with sour and sad messages, especially during the holidays. But I'm more clear-minded now. If he doesn't like me for who I am then perhaps it's better now that he's not in my life. I need to acknowledge the fact that I'm not responsible for his decisions and that I need to stop beating myself over it.
Well, it's always easier said than done. I can't even study Japanese without him popping up on my mind (he's fluent in Japanese and had always said that he would help me with mine). Every time I got out of the house I'm super nervous about running into him (we live really close together) and there were a few times I thought I saw him (and then I'd start wondering if I was hallucinating). And now I just completely lost interest in meeting anyone new. Time will heal, I know, but right now I just want to be alone (and probably drink away my sorrow).
Considering the situation now here in Hong Kong, honestly I just want him to be safe and stay healthy. That's what's important. x
Thanks for reading guys, I feel better now that I got it off my chest. Stay positive and stay strong. xx
Jan. 8, 2020
This New Year Holidays
(This post is written in contracted form. It would be helpful, if you could check my sentences with contraction. )
Before the New Year holidays started, I'd been determined to learn a whole word book, but I attended to language exchange meet-ups. I ended up going to meet-ups 7 days in a row from 30th to 5th.
I attended twice a day, and after meet-ups, I went out for supper with the people I got to know at those meet-ups. Every day was busy and tiring, but I was very glad to have conversations with many people from other countries. It was fun.
They told me how they learned Japanese language and I got some nice advice.
I've studied English with a focus on reading and writing but I'll try to change the way of studying to a focus on listening and speaking from now on.
As for a speaking practice, it'll be difficult to carry out as I don't have anyone who talks to me, but I'll try to talk to myself out loud, sometimes I play double role (lol).
Monday was the first working day of this year. I've already been tired due to lack of sleep. It was the first time I hadn't have enough sleep during the New Year holidays. But I was honestly satisfied with a different New Year holidays than usual.
Jan. 8, 2020
Today's Words
I'm posting several sentences with words that I need to memorize.
Chinese people espouse communism.
Tom's remarks compounded the issues.
The manager was relegated to a do-nothing job.
Some of her colleagues attested her innocence.
John swore off alcohol many times before; however, he couldn't stick to it.
The lawyer debunked the claim Lucy was murdered by her husband.
I wanted to write a longer entry, but I didn't have enough time to do so.
So, I ended up posting a quick entry today.
Thank you for reading!
I would also like to express my gratitude for releasing v1.4.0. Much appreciated for all your efforts.
Jan. 8, 2020
Recent Events
Recently I am very lazy..
Last year I usually get up at five AM, and I start studying English for thirty minutes.
But this year I usually get up at 6:30 AM, in addition I didn't study English.
Because I feel so tired I don't get used to working.
So recently I seldom study English.
I will learn English with zeal from tomorrow little by little.
Jan. 8, 2020
Jan. 8, 2020
Jan. 8, 2020
Europa debe correr un riesgo político
El asesinato del general iraní Soleimani en Irak por un ataque de dron deliberadamente de los americanos significa un momento crucial de las tensiones regionales en el Oriente Próximo y Medio. No hay ninguna duda que el Irán tomará represalias en las próximas semanas y los próximos meses.
Jan. 8, 2020
4.- Infinitivsätze-Übung
Welches Tempus hat der Infinitivsatz?
- Wenn der Infinitivsatz Passiv ist:
Gleichzeitigkeit. Die Handlung im Infinitivsatz passiert zur gleichen Zeit wie die Handlung im Hauptsatz. In diesem Fall, hat der Infinitiv Passiv die Form : "Partizip II + zu + werden".
Es ist (mir) üblich, täglich gestresst zu werden.
Ich mag es nicht, vor 7 Uhr morgens aufgewacht zu werden.
Vorzeitigkeit. Die Handlung im Infinitivsatz passiert vor der Handlung im Hauptsatz. In diesem anderen Fall, hat der Infinitiv Passiv die folgenden Form: "Partizip II + worden zu sein".
Wir sind heute froh, als Kinder nie geschlagen worden zu sein.
Der Minister beschwerte sich, nicht genau informiert worden zu sein.
Jan. 8, 2020
I am eager to improve my English skill
Hello,friends
I am Futurejo in China with more 10 years exprience in English study. And also I took BEC higher test this year ,only to get Level B2. The test result manifests that my reading and listensing ability is in very bad. please would you like to give some sugguestions to improve my english skills.
I am eager to watch naitive english film without caption,but it is very difficult for me ,and also I want to write good passage,but the result always make me frustrated.
I plan to post my my writen passanges on langcorreect platform and I hope friends in Langcorrect can help correct my writting.
Appreciate it.
Jan. 8, 2020
My day
Yo guys, today was a good day. I woke up at 4 am, made my bed, took a cold shower, ate my breakfast and prayed. Then I went to my workout, and back hom around 7:30 am. Then I started to study english, did some flash cards on anki and read something while I was waiting my friend from Indonesia, He's learning english too, so then we did some conversation section in english. It was very fun and a learnt a lot, once he's english is a way better than mine but anyway.
After all this I ate my lunch, I has some rice, beans, and chicken breasts for today and it was good, then I started to study for sat exam and after that study section I went to gym, and it was full o people, every beginning of year, at least my gym, is full o people, but the good news is they generally gave up so then I have a gym just for me. After gym a came back home and did another conversation with a girl from NYC, it was very cool. After that I, studied a little bit more and now I'm here almost falling in sleep lol. Good night for y'all BTW.
Jan. 8, 2020
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