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Jan. 19, 2020
PAUCITY OF MEAT
Always put enough meat into your customers’ pizza!
The action took place in Spartburg, South Carolina in the early morning hours on March 8th in 2018. A man entered a Taco Bell restaurant wanting a Mexican pizza. But a problem arose. As the man said, the pizza “could have used more meat”. So the man got into an argument with the employee who eventually remade the pizza. The man, however, was equally displeased with the amount of meat in the new pizza. Now, ask yourself what is your MO when you are in such situation. Whatever your answer is, that’s not what the guy did.
The story went down as the guy demanded a refund but he didn’t get any since there was no manager on the premises. The man then became enraged, declaring that he “would show the employee how to make his pizza the appropriate way”… and he did! According to the police protocol, “the man then walked behind the counter into the kitchen area and began making his own pizza. The man was angry and upset and was using foul language in response to employee’s repeated demands to leave the Taco Bell”. The man subsequently left the Taco Bell with the pizza. The fact that the guy walked and made his pizza by himself is quite shocking and one would probably guess that’s the end of the story… But wait, it gets better. The only claim the Taco Bell had was that “the man didn’t follow official guidelines when being in the kitchen”. The story ends like that, with the police unleashed and the man on the loose with presumably excessive amount of meat in his Mexican pizza. The meat hog (please suggest any other phrases/words) hasn’t been found yet.
Jan. 19, 2020
Jan. 19, 2020
Belle And The Dragon
Diese Band, die ich liebe, hat gerade ihr erstes Album veröffentlicht! Es heißt „Birthrights". Zwei der Bandmitglieder sind früher von „Flyleaf", meine Lieblingsband! Sie haben einen sehr unterschiedlichen Sound in dieser neuer Beitrag. Das Album hat zehn Lieder. Mein Favorit im Moment ist „Blood Money"! Es freut mich, denn das ihre erste Veröffentlichung seit fünf jahre ist!
Jan. 19, 2020
Jan. 19, 2020
Jan. 19, 2020
Good night!
I had studied English at a cafe until a while ago. I finally completed making Eglish long sentences and tried to post here but couldn't do it because the phone's battery ran out. I was pretty bummed out because I worked quite hard on making a long sentences. I post this message about my sad feeling ahead of the long sentences. The long ones will be posted tomorrow. Good night!
Jan. 19, 2020
Jan. 19, 2020
Ich verlor meine Kreativität
Vor vielen Jahren, habe ich meine Krativität verloren. Meine Denkweise ist jetzt langweilig. Ich habe daran gedacht, zwei Fliegen mit einer Klappe zu schlagen. Ich werde versuchen, kurze Geschichten auf deutsch zu schreiben. So kann ich mein Wortschatz verbessern und mehr Grammatik studieren. Alle meine Einträge auf dieser Seite sind über meinen langweiligen Alltag. Geschichte können über so viel mehr sein. Ich denke, dass meine Geschichte sehr furchtbar sein werden, aber ich denke, ich kann mehr von ihn lernen. Ich hoffe, dass ich eine Stunde pro Tag schreiben kann und ich hoffe, dass Sie nichts gegen meine furchtbaren Geschichten haben werden.
Dankeschön fürs Lesen!
Jan. 19, 2020
Jan. 19, 2020
About my plan
I have a plan. So I just started it today.
It's IG account that introduce abont Japan. (For example...cultures,foodies,caffe shops,phote spots and tourist spot.)
But it's getting ready now.Just opened account.
I want lot of people to know about japan's many carme.
I started it that study English for me.
Then I'm recruiting friend(volunteer) who correct to my post.
You read this and If you want to do this.
Please send me message on IG DM.
ID : 8_2ki
Thank you for reading my post.
-Haz
Jan. 19, 2020
Summary
I am posting a summary of an article I read a few days ago.
Mucus
Mucus is our body's hero according to the author.
Mucus is best known for stringy slime dripping from noses and vicious goop hacked up by sickening airways. But it’s so much more than that. Mucus coats the surfaces of intestines, eyes, mouth, nasal cavity, and ears, playing important physiological roles. It hydrates, cleans, supports good microorganisms, and repels invaders.
Most of these functions come from mucins. Mucins give mucus its gel-like qualities. Mucins come in two types: secreted mucins and exuded mucins.
In airways, having too much mucus might cause harm under certain conditions: asthma, cystic fibrosis, and chronic obstructive pulmonary disease.
However, in the intestine, having too much mucus is not a problem. Having too much would be better rather than too little.
Thank you very much for reading.
Jan. 19, 2020
Quiero probar algo diferente
Todas mis entradas en este sitio son de mi vida y mi experiencia pero eso me aburre. Mis experiencias no son amplias y muchas veces no puedo pensar en cosas interesantes para escribir. Así que, quiero tratar de escribir algunos relatos cortos. No soy escritora aunque quería ser escritora cuando era pequeña, pero pienso que esciribir relatos cortos es un buen ejercicio para la mente. Hace algunos años perdí la creatividad y no puedo pensar creativamente. Escribir relatos cortes, aunque sean horriblemente escritos, me permitiría estudiar y usar gramática y vocabulario que nunca emerjan si solo escribo de mi vida. También quiero leer artículos y resumirlos aquí para mejorar mi nivel. Ojalá que pueda reservar una hora por día para escribir y ojalá que ustedes no les importa corregir mis cuentos terribles.
¡Gracias por leer!
Jan. 19, 2020
Konjunktiv II Übungen
Konjunktiv II (Vergangenheit)
1. Ich hätte Biologie studiert, wenn ich mich mehr für Pflanzen als für Menschen interessiert hätte. Das heißt, ich habe Psychologie studiert und nicht Biologie.
2. Wenn ich dich gesehen hätte, hätte ich dich natürlich gegrüßt. D.h. ich habe dich nicht gesehen und deswegen nicht gegrüßt.
3. Ich wäre ins Konzert gegangen, wenn ich genug Geld gehabt hätte. D.h. ich habe nicht genug Geld gehabt, darum bin ich nicht ins Konzert gegangen.
4. Warum habt ihr nicht gefragt? Ich hätte euch mein Auto geliehen. D.h. Ihr habt nicht gefragt, deswegen habe ich euch mein Auto nicht geliehen, weil ich nicht gewusst habe, dass ihr mein Auto braucht.
5. Frau Müller wäre nicht glücklich gewesen, wenn wir ihr nicht ein Geschenk verschenkt hätte. D.h. wir haben sie ein Geschenkt verschenkt, deswegen ist sie Glücklich.
Jan. 19, 2020
Life is...
This morning, I saw a small beautiful rainbow in the sky.
My husband, my son, my mother, and I were really lucky to see it because it disappeared in a few minutes.
Something happened that made me incredibly moved this evening.
I thought that rainbow made a miracle.
“There’s many ups and downs in our lives.”
I think it’s so true.
I will accept everything and move forward.
Jan. 19, 2020
Jan. 19, 2020
What I hate on a packed train
What I hate on a packed train is when I get off. There're so many people that we can't get off the train smoothly, yet some people never fail to strongly push us from the back as if they tell us to get off quickly. Some other people hit us with their bags and some other people clear the throats noisy, repeatedly to make the others move aside. I really get disgusted just seeing these people.
When I get off a train, I say loud, "Excuse me! I'm getting off!", then many people try to move aside to pass me through. When I say "Thank you" passing, many people quickly clear themselves on my way.
When I ignored what grandma said as a child, she said me, "Is your mouth an ornament? Go to a hospital right now and have your mouth and vowel got rid of by a doctor. Give them to children who haven't had their mouths and vowels since they were born." I feel sometimes I'm glad I had a strict grandma.
I think many of Japanese people tend to take bad behaviors not saying anything. These people are just cowards who can't speak out what they want to say.
I read today it'll be difficult to speak if you don't speak at all for a long time, because the vowel shrinks. As you get older, more clearly it'll stand out.
Jan. 19, 2020
Jan. 19, 2020
Jan. 19, 2020
2020.01.18(土)
実は、昨日久しぶりに友達と話していたから長い日記を書かなかった。去年の春頃、英語を学んでいる日本人の生徒と英会話の練習でボランティアしていた。その経験で、この三人とすぐに仲良くなった。その時は第一目の学期は地獄のような忙しい時だったのでよく電話していない。友達はそろそろ（三月に）大学を始めるので暇な時間がついにある。私ももっと暇な時間があって、頻繁に電話したいものだ。日本語を喋る機会のこともあるね。
話しながら、友達はそろそろ矯正して驚いたことだった。去年、私と私の二人の友達とこの日本人の友達と知り合って、私たち三人は矯正をしている。そろそろ日本人の友達も、この団に入る（笑笑）。
今日はあまり面白くなかった。来週は2学期の間の週（生徒はテストを受けたことなかったり、課題をまだ出さなかったり、宿題に追いついたりするような一周間）だから暇な時だ！生物学のテストはもっと胃週間後にずれてよかった。
おけー、書くのやる気が出せないからここで終わりです。
Jan. 19, 2020
Jan. 18, 2020
Rant!
Hi guys! I have been here for a little over 2 weeks now. People here are really lovely and helpful so let me start by saying a huge thank you to you all! x Now comes my rant against another language learning group!
A while ago I joined a Japanese learning group on Facebook. Most people there are also pretty nice and serious about learning Japanese, which is superb! But occasionally there are people asking questions that can be answered by a simple Google search, which literally takes a few seconds. I mean, of course I don't mind people asking questions as long as they have actually made an effort to find out the answers beforehand. Just now someone in that group posted something like:-
How do I say
"How are you?"
"Thank you"
"What's your name?"
in Japanese?
Think that's bad? Wait til you hear this! They said, and I quote, "I don't understand Japanese words. Answer in English words."
If they aren't even willing to actually learn the Japanese writing systems, then I'm pretty sure they're not asking this because they want to start learning Japanese! Also, the use of the phrase "English words" just annoys me so much. It shows that they have no knowledge of the Japanese language at all, or just knowledge of linguistics in general. I'm not usually that petty, nor do I say bad things to people. But this is just ridiculous IMO. And the worst thing is, they didn't even say "thank you". I HATE RUDE PEOPLE!
That's about it! Thanks for reading! Again, thank you all for being amazing, and of course the admin(s) for doing a wonderful job! :) Just want you to know how much I appreciate this community! X
(Actually for English, I'm just trying to up my speaking game. I don't have a lot of chances to actually speak English now that I've graduated from university and I have yet to start working. So most of my entries would be rather causal as I'm trying to treat it as my "script" for when I'm speaking. Therefore, you don't need to comment on my formality unless you think that it's inappropriate even in speech. Thanks guys!! Much love x)
Jan. 18, 2020
Jan. 18, 2020
Stardew Valley
Hallo alle Zusammen!
Also, gestern und heute habe ich endlich das Spiel "Stardew Valley" auf meiner Nintendo Switch-Konsole gespielt. Das Spiel ist ein Art "Farming" Simulator.
Im Spiel gibt es viel zu tun, man kann Gemüse anbauen, Tiere pflegen und sogar einen Hund haben. Ich möchte mehr über das Spiel erzählen, aber ich fand mein Deutsch noch zu schlecht, um eine richtige Zusammenfassung zu schreiben.
Danke fürs Lesen und bis zum nächsten Mal!
Jan. 18, 2020
선생님 찾기
홍길동쌤 안녕하세요? 저는 메건 이에요. 8년 동안 한국에서 살았지만 4년 전에 독일로 이사했어요. 갑자기 독일어 배우고 필요했어서 한국어 연습할수있는 시간이 없었어요. 그래서 제 독일어 향상시켰지만 한국어 거의 다 잊었어요 (특별히 단어… 랑 문법 ㅎㅎ). 독일에 대학교 언어학 [Master's] 프로그램 [join]으러 , 3언어 말해야되요. 저는 TestDaF (독일어 시험) 이미 봤 [and passed] 서 지금 TOPIK 시험 보로 한국어 한번도 배우고 싶어요. 그렇지만 처음 한국어 기억하고 필요해요.
저는 "Korean Grammar in Use" 초급, 중급, 하고 고급 PDF들을 이미있어요. 제생각에는 초급이 제 수준은 맞고있어요… 그렇지만 홍길동 선생님 씨 다른책을 있는데요?
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