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La cabaña
En la aldea de Culcheth, la cual está en una isla asilada, hay una cabaña arruinada. Los locales dicen que una vez había una familia allí, que se llamaba "los Graves". Ahora la cabaña está vacía, pero la gente de la aldea dice que a veces puedes oír algo de dentro la casa. Sin embargo, nadie ha ido a ahí.
La aldea de Culcheth es muy antigua, creada por los antiguos celtas de la isla. A pesar de eso, cuando los aldeanos llegaron hace muchos años, solo había ruinas que quedaban de la gente original. La gente es dedicada, pero no va al interior de la isla. Hay leyendas de criaturas en el bosque, se dice que hay Aos Sí ahí en la oscuridad, que la isla era sagrada para ellos. Los Graves conocían las historias, pero aún así, habían quiero alejarse a los demás. Solo visitaban la aldea los domingos, para comprar comida al mercado.
Se dice que el padre era ignorante, insolente a los Aos Sí, que destruyó parte del bosque. Los duendes no perdonan a nadie nunca. Se dice que a los Graves les dieron cinco días para salir de la isla. Ellos se negaron, y se dice que pareció haber una lucha. Las ventanas eran rotas y la puerta había desaparecido. Había una mesa al lado de la puerta de la cocina, y agujeros en el muro.
Aún la cabaña está allí, destruida y vacía. Parece que los duendes querían que la gente de la aldea tuviera miedo, que saliera de la isla para siempre. Algunos de la aldea dicen que hay algo más. Durante las noches donde la luna está llena, puedes ver una fantasma. No dice nada, sino camina hacía el bosque con algo en mano, y desparecer.
Dos oraciones con "llevar + gerundio/participio".
1. Nos llevó dado un postre delicioso.
2. Llevo pasado cinco años trabajando para ti; ¡no voy a hacerlo nada más!
Jan. 1, 2021
January 1st
It’s 2021 today. 2020 was a tough year due to the coronavirus, such as online classes and school exams. Exams are not related to the coronavirus, but I’m in 11th grade and go to american school, so exams were very difficult. Despite all that happened, it was a fun year.
I live in Spain now, so I had many sad experiences and wanted to go back to Japan, but this is the last year that I live here, so I’m thinking about I must have fun with the rest of time.
Jan. 1, 2021
Проект Скетчбука
Сегодня я рисовала в моей тетради "Проект Скетчбука". Я нарисовала картину Дублина. Особенно, нарисовала мост "Ha'penny". Мне грустно что мы не могли ехаить в Ирланд в этом году. Может быть, в следующем году мы с мужем можем ехать куда-нибудь вместе. Не знаю куда мы будем ехать. Я хотела бы ехать ущё раз в Барселону. У нас там друзья.
Но 2020 было хороший год для меня. Мне очень нравится быть дома. Люблю мой кот и люблю мой муж. Время с обей было очень приятно. Сейчас, мы с мужем (с котом) смотрим "Die Hard with a Vengeance". Камин горит. Мне очень тепло!
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Jan. 1, 2021
Neues Jahr
Frohes Neues! Es ist ein neues Jahr und eine neue Gelegenheit. Ehrlich gesagt bin ich nicht sehr sicher, was ich in diesem Jahr machen will. Ich habe ein paar Ideen. Obwohl ich sehr oft dasselbe sage, möchte ich ein bisschen mehr lesen. Ein Buch pro Monat. Das ist nicht unerreichbar, oder?
Ich möchte letztlich den Fantasysaga ,,Das Lied von Eis und Feuer" zu lesen beenden. Ich finde mich jetzt in dem dritten Buch und ich finde es sehr interessant, aber ich lese seltsam und das Buch liegt im Kühl im Bücherstand ungeöffnet und staubig.
Weiterhin möchte ich vielleicht den Saga ,,Der Herr der Ringe" lesen. Ich habe nur wunderbare Dinge darüber gehört und ich möchte danach die Filme anschauen.
Schließlich möchte ich mich im Fitnessstudio baldigst anschreiben, gesünder essen, mehr kochen... Allgemein mehr an mich kümmern.
Jan. 1, 2021
Les cours particuliers
En France, les élèves n’ont pas de cours le mercredi après-midi... mais sont, pour la plupart, très occupés. Ils suivent des cours de musique, de dessin, ils jouent au tennis, au football, font du judo ou de l’aikido... Certains prennent aussi des cours particuliers dans les matières où ils ont des difficultés. Et pour certains, il en est de même le samedi... Croyez-vous que leurs parents ont raison de leur faire faire autant d’activités. Les enfants n’ont-ils pas besoin de temps pour jouer ou se distraire?
De nos jours, de nombreux parents laissent leurs enfants participer aux plusieurs activités différentes telles que des cours de musique, de dessin, etc lors de temps libre (quand ils n’ont pas de cours de l’école). Je trouve cette initiative bénéfique non seulement pour les enfants mais aussi les parents.
Tout d’abord, ces activités constituent une bonne façon de protéger les enfants des mauvaises influences de technologie. La plupart des enfants aujourd’hui préfèrent passer du temps devant l’écran plutôt que faire des activités extérieures. Cela est donc néfaste sur la santé car ces technologies réduisent la qualité d’attention et de concentration des enfants et abîme leurs yeux. C’est pourquoi, participer aux cours particuliers leur permet non seulement d’avoir une bonne santé mais aussi d’éviter les répercussions négatives qu’apportent des technologies.
Ensuite, il me semble que celles-ci aident les parents à gérer facilement leurs enfants. En effet, quelques parents sont très occupés et n’ont pas de temps pour prendre soin leurs enfants. Donc au lieu de laisser les prognitures rester tout seul à la maison, le fait de les encourager à joindre à des cours particuliers ou à des acitivités extérieures rend les parents assurant parce qu'ils savent où sont leurs enfants et ce qu'ils font.
Pourtant, il ne faudrait pas forcer les enfants à prendre des cours dans les matières qu’ils n’aiment pas où ils ont des difficultés. En réalitté, de plus en plus des enfants se sentent fatigués et pressés car ils doivent participer aux activités choisises par leurs parents même s’ils détestent tellement ça. Cela parfois présente des impacts négatifs plutôt que positifs si on ne comprend vraiment pas leurs goût et leurs besoins.
En conclusion, il est nécessaire d’encourager les enfants à participer aux activités particulières en plus du travail à l’école. Cependant, ce qui est trop n’est pas bon, il faudrait les laisser choisir les activités préférées afin de stimuler efficacement leur créativité et leur réflexion.
Jan. 1, 2021
#2 – Ano novo
Hoje é o primeiro dia do ano de 2021. Sempre parece que o tempo passa rápidamente.
Na ultima entrada (em espanhol), falei sobre o que logrei no ano passado, que foi muito para mim. Esta entrada quero enfocar-me em o que é que quero alcanzar em 2021.
Primeiro, vou explicar que normalmente não gosto de estabelecer metas relacionadas a resultados. Não gosto de ter este tipo de pressão, e acho que a intenção de seguir o proceso é mais importante que o resultado. Então a diferença seria não decidir “este ano vou produzir cinco pinturas” mas “este ano vou pintar meia hora toda noite”.
Não acho que sempre é mal ter metas como o primeiro tipo, e às vezes é necesario porque o que realmente você quer cumprir é o resultado. Um exemplo seria o dono duma pequena empresa que quer ganhar un mínimo de lucros este ano. Esta pessoa pode enfocar-se em trabalhar na empresa x horas por semana (o que seria um foco no esforço) ou em identificar quais servicios de vendas precisa ou em quais aspectos deve enfocar-se (o que seria um foco em melhoria ou eficiência). Mas ao fim, a meta é os lucros e é uma parte disso é sorte, as pessoas compram ou não.
Então vou voltar a meu primeiro punto, por isso que as metas enfocados em resultados podem ser negativos, porque muitas vezes uma parte do alcanço é sorte. Você pode fazer todas as coisas corretas, mas ao fim você pode receber uma nota ruim, ou não receber o trabalho ou papel, ou não vende a ideia. Acho que está bem ainda para as pessoas que tem confianza e podem manejar decepções. Mas por predefinição, sou uma pessoa negativa. Não parezco assim agora porque esforzei para mudar-me, parte disso é evitar as coisas assim onde pode aparecer o meu lado negativo. Talvez outro dia escrevo um pouco sobre isso.
Bem, agora com as minhas metas no 2021. Claro que vou me enfocar em idiomas. Estou pensando em ter as metas ligadas a idioma assim:
- Escrita: escrever uma entrada em portguês e uma entrada em espanhol cada semana
- Escuta: seguir com os podcasts (isso já é uma parte normal da minha rotina), quero seguir com escutar podcasts em espanhol e português a maioria dos dias, também quero assistir mais séries em netflix e reduzir a necesidade de usar legendas
- Fala: ter, pelo menos, dois intercambios em cada idioma por semana, que seria mínimo duma hora de falar cada idioma por semana
- Leitura: quero encontrar e ler mais noticias ou artigos em cada idioma semanalmente, também quero ler pelo menos dois livros em cada idioma este ano
- Trabalho de forma inteligente: Regularmente, talvez cada dois meses, quero revisar o meu progresso/nível nos idiomas e pensar no que preciso ou no que devo me enfocar
Em geral, este ano quero melhorar em português sem perder fluência em espanhol. Quero voltar o meu espanhol ao seu nível anterior mais fluente, e também melhorar a minha escrita. Acho que não vou adicionar outro idioma este ano porque espanhol e português são muito importantes para mim e não quero ferir meus habilidades, quero estabelecer-os muito bem antes de pensar noutro idioma.
Acho que já escrevi suficiente, então vou deixar as metas não enfocadas em idiomas para outra entrada. Obrigada e feliz ano novo!
Jan. 1, 2021
Jan. 1, 2021
Translation Practice
Two days ago, one of my neighbors told me that she had arrived in Naning and asked me to keep her two cats. Maybe she thought beforehand I wouldn’t mind this. I didn’t want to unauthorized enter her room as well as let outside cold wind blow into my room when I opened my door, so when I got home I took these two cats to my room. So when the New Year comes, I celebrate the New Year with these two cats. The cats are different from the ones I was familiar with before. They didn’t make trouble, and did not scratch or bite. At first, the cats were very curious about my room and ran around in the room-it seemed there were unknown places everywhere in my room. They always liked to go back places, for example, the corner behind my bed, so they caused dust. I thought I should clean the whole room the next day. I just finished cleaning the room and took this moment to relocate my furniture, and tidy everything up.
Two days ago, I finally watched the Qingyaji movie and I think it is beautiful. Under a big magic background, magic masters detected murder cases. There are some familiar things between Qingyaji and Yaomaozhuan: they both are related to magic, mystery and murder. But compared with Yaomaozhuan, the difference is that there is a big monster in Qingyaji damaging the human world. The protagonist needs to find who is the murderer, prevent monsters, and defeat his own weaknesses. Otherwise, the world will be destroyed. This movie inspired me to write a short novel the next time about magic, legendary and deities.
After the movie, I went home to feed the cats. because I never kept cats so that they didn’t eat the food I prepared for. At 2 am the middle of the night, I suddenly knew the mistakes I made, and finally I got some delicious food for them.
Jan. 1, 2021
La télé-réalité
Née en 1973 aux États-Unis, la télé-réalité est présente sous différentes formes, sur de nombreuses chaines de télévision, à l’étranger comme en France. Que pensez-vous de ce genre d’émissions? Quels sont, d’après vous, leurs aspects positifs et négatifs? Que peut-on leur reprocher mais aussi porter à leur crédit?
On parle en ce moment de l’omniprésence de la télé-réalité sur de nombreuses chaines de télévision dans le monde. Certains l’apprécient du fait de ses différents formes prenants qui attirent l’attention des téléspectateurs tandis que d’autres considèrent que ce type d’émission présente un mauvais influence sur les autres, surtout les jeunes.
Tout d’abord, on ne peut pas nier que le télé-réalité reflète la vie quotidienne, la réalité – une chose fait partie de la vie des gens. Autrement dit, tous les participants peuvent exprimer facilement leur opinion, leurs émotions voire se disputent et il n’y a pas de scénarios comme les autres programmes. C’est pourquoi les spectateurs se sentent proches et peuvent apprendre de nouvelles choses en plus de celles normales.
Ensuite, ces émissions sont de plus en plus diversifiées, certaines d’entre elles, notamment celles qui sont basées sur des exploits d’endurance, de visites de pays, permettent distraire les spectateurs, de leur faire découvrir d’autre pays, d’autres cultures. Je peux le montrer en prenant un exemple d’une émission très populaire dans mon pays qui s’appelle “Je t’aime Vietnam”. Cette émission présente de nouvelles paysages du Vietnam et leur histoire très intéressant qui aide les étrangers et les personnes qui n'y visitent pas à connaitre mieux leurs cultures et leurs coutumes.
Pourtant, ce type d’émissions dominent également des aspects négatifs. La qualité de ces émissions semble laisser à désirer. En effet, quelques personnes trouvent que les participants agitent outrageusement qui rendent les spectateurs désagréables. En outre, certaines émissions existent aussi des images et des scènes inappropriées afin de séduire les spectateurs. Cela inquiète les parents par leurs mauvaises répercussions sur leurs enfants.
Jan. 1, 2021
Jan. 1, 2021
2021年到了！
两天以前，我的一个隔壁邻居竟然告诉了我她在南宁了，请求我喂她两只猫。也许她事先预测到了我不会介意。我不想屡次擅自进入她的房间，也不想开门让寒冷走廊的空气进入我已经过度冷的房间，因此回家时，我把这两只猫搬到了我的房间。所以过新年时，我就在房间里跟两只猫庆祝。和我以前熟悉的猫相比，这两只猫不麻烦，不抓也不咬。起初好奇的猫在我的房间里跑来跑去，到处都有未知的地方。它们跑去我没洗干净的地方，比如我的床后面，这样搅动起灰尘。我认为了第二天（即是今天）需要把全房间洗干净。我刚才洗完了我的房间，而且我也趁这个时间搬动了我的家具，收拾一切。
两天以前晚上，我终于看了《晴雅集》那部电影。我觉得是挺好看。在艰巨魔法的背景下，魔法高手们来侦破谋杀犯罪案件。《晴雅集》跟《妖猫传》有些相似之处：魔法、神秘、凶手。可是跟《妖猫传》不同，《晴雅集》有伟大的怪物来损害人间。主角们需要发现谁是凶手、防止怪物以及克服自己的缺点，否则世界将被毁灭。这部电影启发我下次写短篇小说，讲关于魔法、传奇和神灵的故事。
看完之后，我回家尝试喂猫，可是由于我从来没有照顾过猫，它们不能吃我给它们吃的。凌晨2点，我突然意识到自己犯的错误，终于给可怜的猫食物。
Jan. 1, 2021
Oude ouders
Mijn ouders zijn boven de 60 nu. Ik zie hun elk jaar met Kerst. Soms zie ik hun vaker, maar dit jaar lukt het niet. Elk jaar merk ik op hoe merkbaar ze ouder worden. Ze worden kalmer, bewegen langzamer, praten meer en vertellen hetzelfde verhalen vier of vijf keer en doen ze minder elke dag. Ik vind het soms verfrissend om een dagen met mijn ouders door te brengen en alles langzamer te done. Maar wat ik minder prettig vind, is dat ze geen ambities meer hebben. De toekomst is niet meer opwindend voor hun en ze kijken nergens ernaar uit.
Voor mij is zelf-ontwikkeling en verbetering de drijfveer van het leven, en ik kan me geen leven voorstellen waar ik geen doelen heb en de toekomst geen verandering biedt.
Jan. 1, 2021
A family I like
Today, I am going to talk about a family I like. It is my close friend’s family. She is from a respectable family. Several months ago, they bought a new condominium in Beijing with carving furniture and cherry ground. They invited me to their new apartment. They hosted me hospitality with elegant food. It was the first time I met her families, but I can tell they are well-educated through their speech and behaviour. Her father is the CEO of a big company. He is really talkative and sociable. He seemed to know everything, because every time we try to strike up a conversation he can always easily get into conversation with us and get to the point. Her mother is a teacher and she is also well-informed. I really like this loving family. It is the one I am always looking forward to living in.
Jan. 1, 2021
Translation Practice
The New Year is coming. In China, you have passed the New Year, but in the US, January 1st hasn’t come yet. I have some resolutions for 2021. I want to change myself. To tell you the truth, I think I am lazy, and also have some bad habits. Through getting rid of the bad habits and working hard, I think I will be happy and become diligent. The following three paragraphs are the goals that I want to realize next year.
First, I want to attach great importance to Chinese learning. I want to pass HSK5 in 2021. I think it will be difficult to achieve this goal. Although my spoken Chinese is not bad, there is a lot of HSK5 vocabulary that I haven’t studied. Besides, many characters that I don’t know how to write, and I can only type. Moreover, I can’t write them fluently, and I have to look at some words that I am unfamiliar with in a dictionary when I write them. I think if I study hard, watch more Chinese TV shows, write more journals, maybe I can do it. Apart from this, I want to read a book this year. My plan is that every day before I go to bed, I read it a little.
Second, I want to learn a new foreign language: Swedish. My cousin is German, and his husband is Swedish. They live in Sweden and they have three children. They only speak Swedish (generally, they can understand German, but they can’t speak it). I want to get along with them well, so I want to speak Swedish. My goal is that by the end of 2021, I can take a 15 minute chat in a row in Swedish without a single English word. I also know that it’s difficult to achieve this. I only know some simple Swedish words and sentences, but I don’t even know a little of some Swedish grammar and many words. I don’t know if I can do it, but I want to try.
The last plan has nothing to do with a foreign language. I want to actively help others more. Basically, I think I am a good person and I am very friendly to others, but because I am always shy, I usually avoid helping others. I think I should develop my style. Next year, I want to join more public welfare activities. Thus, I am useful to our society and I hope I can make myself happy.
I also have some small New Year’s resolutions, but I am afraid of pursuing too many goals, and I don’t want to put much pressure on me. I hope everyone can realize their resolutions in 2021. Everybody, come on!
Jan. 1, 2021
Jan. 1, 2021
Quelle est la devise d'australie
La devise de l'australie peut se résumer en deux mots 'fair go’ : Je ne sais pas comment on peux les traduirai.
Cette phrase apparais dans les nouvelle très souvant. C’est un but. Souvent on échoue, mais c’est un grande but.
Ce but demand qu’on donne la tolérance et le respect mutuel vers les autre Australiennes et Australiens. On doit porte un masque pour protéger les autres ainsi que soi-même
On doit laisse les concitoyens pense ce qu’il veut (sauf si le résultat est de menace l’autre). Les citoyens peuvent croire en un dieu or pas croire en un dieu. En Australia, la religion la plus populaire du pays est l’athéisme. En fait sur la dernière “census” en Australie, certains ne prend pas la question très au sérieux, ils écrivent leur religion comme “JEDI”
On doit donne la compassion pour ceux qui en ont besoin. Apres les feu et les inundation, beaucoup de bénévoles vient de l’aide des victimes.
On dois donne le respect a les règle de loi et les tribunal, et til faut tout est egal devant la loi. C’est un “fair go”
Je pense que les devises de beaucoup de pays democratic sont un peu similaire.
Jan. 1, 2021
Translation Practice
The last plan has nothing to do with foreign languages. I want to actively help others more. Basically, I think I am a good person and I am very friendly to others, but because I am always shy, I usually avoid helping others. I think I should develop my style. Next year, I want to join more public welfare activities. Thus, I am good for our society and I also hope I can make myself happy.
Jan. 1, 2021
Returned to Evernote from Notion
I just tried Notion and it feels so complex, although I could use it. I just want to write a note, just that. I can make a note in one or two clicks on Evernote.
Notion has so many functions and that is the reason why so many people enthusiastic about Notion. However, in case of me, it's not. I like Evernoto because it has no functions. I can focus on writing and scrapping easily. Notion seems more suitable for constructing a web/wiki, not a note taking.
Regardless of my preference, it is certain that both of them is really good product. For now, I just prefer something simpler. Evernote remains my filing cabinet.
Jan. 1, 2021
Translation Practice
Second, I want to learn a new foreign language: Swedish. My cousin is German, and his husband is Swedish. They live in Sweden and they have three children. They only speak Swedish (generally, they can understand German, but they can’t speak it). I want to get along with them well, so I want to speak Swedish. My goal is that by the end of 2021, I can take a 15 minute chat in a row in Swedish without a single English word. I also know that it’s difficult to achieve this. I only know some simple Swedish words and sentences, but I don’t even know a little of some Swedish grammar and many words. I don’t know if I can do it, but I want to try.
Jan. 1, 2021
Translation Practice
First, I want to attach great importance to Chinese learning. I want to pass HSK5 in 2021. I think it will be difficult to achieve this goal. Although my spoken Chinese is not bad, there is a lot of HSK5 vocabulary that I haven’t studied. Besides, many characters that I don’t know how to write, and I can only type. Moreover, I can’t write them fluently, and I have to look at some words that I am unfamiliar with in a dictionary when I write them. I think if I study hard, watch more Chinese TV shows, write more journals, maybe I can do it. Apart from this, I want to read a book this year. My plan is that every day before I go to bed, I read it a little.
Jan. 1, 2021
Jan. 1, 2021
Translation Practice
The New Year is coming. In China, you have passed the New Year, but in the US, January 1st hasn’t come yet. I have some resolutions for 2021. I want to change myself. To tell you the truth, I think I am lazy, and also have some bad habits. Through getting rid of the bad habits and working hard, I think I will be happy and become diligent. The following three paragraphs are the goals that I want to realize next year.
Jan. 1, 2021
Dec. 31, 2020
Mi ùltimo sueño
Yo no puedo recordar mi último sueño. Por alguna razón, cuando me levanto en las mañanas, yo sé que yo soñé, pero no puedo recordar. Para unos minutos, yo puedo recordar fragmentos de mi sueño pero nada más de fragmentos. Incluso los fragmentos desaparecen después de unos minutos.
Desafortunadamente, sobre todos mis sueños son pesadillas. Ya sea alguien muere o alguien me roba o... la lista continua.
Cuando los sueños son buenos, yo intento a quedar durmiendo. Por ejemplo, un ruido me despertará, y yo intentará a incluir el ruido en mi sueño. O, alguien me despierta, yo quedo en mi cama e imaginar el sueño otra vez hasta yo comenzar a dormir y soñar el sueño. ¡A veces, esa manera funciona!
¿Haces esas cosas tú?
Dec. 31, 2020
Productivity
This year was a total disaster for me. I stand in awe at people who got to accomplish something this year . Hopefully next year will be better.I don’t believe in goals. I am old enough at this point to know that I wil never reach them. Instead this year I will thing about 3 things that will bring me the utmost happiness if I accomplish them and I will do my best to enjoy the process. No massive objectives,3 small things that in the long run will change my life .