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Ein Interessantes Getränk
Hallo liebe Lesern von Langcorrect!
Meine Schwester und einen Freund von ihr kamen zwei Tage früher als Weihnachten zu Hause an und dort hatten wir zusammen entschiedet ein schönes Mittagessen in ein Hotel zu machen. Wir hatten ein Weihnachtsbuffet bestellen und es gab viele verschiedene Essen und Getränke. Ein besonders Getränk hatte uns sehr beeindruckt. Der Name des Getränk war "Chameleon" und es war sogennant, weil die Farbe des Getränks würde ändern, nach man es gerührt hatte. Das Getränk komposiert aus Gin und viele andere Zutaten und schmeckt süß. Zuerst war die Farbe des Getränks Blau und nach ein paar Momente hatte die Farbe plötzlich geändert! Es war hüblisch und interessant zu sehen. Ich hoffe, dass ihr konntet es auch ein mal probieren.
Jan. 2, 2021
我和猫新的生活方式
现在，我房间的情况变了。两只可爱的猫不断地转我的注意力，我如今无法学习。我睡觉时，右胳膊抱着一只猫，胸脯上躺着另一只猫。我开门时，最灵活那只猫像火箭跑出去，以至于刷牙或者上厕所时，我需要抱它。或更准确地说，我需要一边把猫平衡在肩膀上，一边刷牙。我的老师说了照顾邻居的两只猫很麻烦，而她可能是对的。我已经清洁了我整个房间以及在网上买了猫食品。它们不断地打断在学习的我。即使如此，它们还是十分可爱的猫。
今天早上，它们吃完所有我邻居拥有的猫食品。昨天，我事先去超市尝试买一些可以给这两只猫的食品。我本来以为跟西方的超市一样，在任何超市随时可以买猫食品，不过我发现了实际上很少卖猫食品。后来，我上网从京东买了猫食品，跟我邻居提供的差一点。但是那猫食品正在在郑州，今晚和明天猫还应该吃什么。所以今天，我买了两包“牛肉干”和一罐“金枪鱼”。虽然这些都不是猫食品，但是我觉得猫可以吃肉干和鱼。我没有经历养猫，所以我也许不对。至少这两只猫有吃的。
Jan. 2, 2021
ParaNorman
Hoy vi ParaNorman por primera vez. Es una película de animación inspirado por la brujería y el argumento tiene lugar en Salem, Massachusetts.
Esta película trata de un chico que puede hablar con espíritus. Todo el mundo (incluso su familia) cree que Norman está loco o que está inventando cosas para atraer atención y tiene que usar sus poderes para salvar el pueblo de una maldición.
Jan. 2, 2021
Food
Nowadays, with the fast-paced life we led, we hardly ever have enough time to cook for ourselves to have a heavy breakfast. In this case, most of them just grab a piece of bread and eat them on the way to their schools or companies, while some of them prefer ready meals. When it comes to children, they are dying of junk food like burgers or fried chips which contain food additives, because they think nourishing meals are boring. On top of that, there are a large quantity of advertisements on TV to promote some processed foods, which aims at children. What’s more, younger generations prefer to go to restaurants since they believe it is a good way to gather together and have snap-up meals. However, some restaurants leave perishable food lying round outside the fridge, and some people get food poisoning.
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Jan. 2, 2021
Translation Practice
Your inside world decided your outside behavior. Do you know those people who live painfully? Doesn’t their pain come from their inner confusion? Yes, it’s indeed this. We all intend to change ourselves by changing the environment. But think it reverse, we should change ourselves first before changing the environment.
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Jan. 2, 2021
Why I choose Pimsleur.
Recently, I have considered taking a online English lesson. I found the a site like EnglishClass101, Rocket Language. I almost make a payment but I didn't, because I realized that just watching some lectures is not helpful. It could make me feel studying English for a hour, however that's not true. Nothing remains in my head.
I thought I need something to make me move. And then, I found Pimsleur. Although it has only audio lesson, it have great strength that make learner speak repeatly. I can concentrate on the lesson during the audio played. If watching normal lesson is passive study, Pimsleur is active learning.
Nevertheless, I am not sure that it is really works. I just want things to go well.
PS. Thanks for correction. Even if it is grammatically correct, please correct it naturally.
Jan. 2, 2021
1 janvier (coutumes du Jour de l'An)
Bien que ma famille n'ait pas fêté le Jour de l'An comme d'habitude, il y avait encore de certaines coutumes que nous avons respectées aujourd'hui. Par exemple, il ne faut pas dépenser d'argent ou sortir les poubelles. C'est à cause de l'idée que ce qu'on fait durant le Premier de l'An symbolise comment le reste de l'année se passera. Donc, si on achète quelque chose, ça indique qu'on perdra beaucoup de l'argent pendant l'année. De la même façon, si on sort les poubelles, on jettera et gâchera ses ressources. Nous avons aussi cuisiné un dîner un peu symbolique : nous avons mangé des nouilles, qui représentent la longévité. Ils étaient assez bons ; c'était la première fois où je les ai faits. En cuisinant, je me suis brûlée, alors j'espère que la prochaine fois, il n'y aura pas d'accidents !
Jan. 2, 2021
The influence of books on our life
Books are extremely important for our life, not only because they provide information and improve skills, but also because they are an useful way of making contact with other cultures, and different points of view.
It can be debated, but I would say that books have been the "tool" through which civilization has reached this actual stage. Nowadays, we can see to and fro the influence of books on daily basis: our way of see the world was shaped by books and their ideas within them. In the same way, it´s impossible to argue that books are not helpful or a lost of time, because in fact they are - regardless of the genre of the book.
Sometimes, we watch on the TV a scientist talking about that nowadays, despite having a complete and handy access to books, we don´t read. Unfortunately, this phenom has been increasing since ten 10 ago without any interruption, but readers have not disappeared yet. Actually, I would say that we are experiencing a new increment in the percentage of people who are starting to read. Whether this is true or not, books will influence more and more on our decisions, and worldview, through their content. I hope that in this new year more people will give them an opportunity.
Thanks for reading!
Jan. 2, 2021
Translation Practice
Fan Kexin is a Chinese skater. Her home is in Qitaihe, China, and many skaters are from there. When she was a child, her family was very poor. In 2003, she went to study skating at 9 years old. She joined the Chinese skating team at seventeen.
In 2012, she first participated in the World Skating Competition in England. She really wants to get first place because she can help her mom and dad to live a good life. She called her dad and mom as soon as she had just got the first place, and her whole family was very joyful.
Now, 26 years old Fan Kexin has participated eight times in the World Competition, and received first place five times. She hopes she can get first place in the Olympics Winter Game of 2022.
Jan. 2, 2021
Ämnen i varje lands filmer
Jag är öppen till det mesta, men här i Colombia teman brukar handla om motgång och hur man överkommer det, och det är alltid en gråtig historia där någon som lider bara försätter och lever. Det spelar ingen roll om du fattas en ben, du ska springa som alla andra och vara taksam för den andra benen du har kvar. Jag ibland gillar detta väg att tänka om problem men ibland det gillar jag inte, det beror på vad är problemet man har. Också det gör att våra filmer är så föruttsägbara.
Vad tänker ni? känner ni att filmer i ditt land brukar surfa en especifik ämne? I så fall, vad är det?
Jan. 2, 2021
Zusammenfassungen
Hallo,
heute hätte ich viele Hausaufgaben machen sollen, aber ich machte keine :). Eigentlich habe ich nur zwei Hausaufgaben. Die erste ist eine Hausarbeit und sie handelte sich von Terminologie von Gynäkologie. Die zweite geht es um ein Analyse über die Ereignisse, die ich von der Suche von Terminologie bekamm.
Aber die wichtigste Hausaufgabe war die Zusammenfassung von vier Texte auf Deutsch und ich habe sie nicht gemacht.
Vielleicht mache ich sie morgen, wenn ich nicht so erschöpf bin. Es ist Ferien!, warum sollte ich lange Hausaufgabe machen? Ach! Ich erinnere mich jezt, dass ich eine gute Studentin sein möchte. Und wenn ich mein Deutsch verbessern möchte, muss ich denn viel üben :)
Ok, das wars
Jan. 2, 2021
Translation Practice
I used to go to the karaoke bar several times when I was studying in Beijing. Usually, I am not good at singing, but I can sing some Chinese songs, like Guangliang’s Fairy Tale. This song’s lyrics are not complicated, so everybody can try it. Recently, I have been very into Zhou Huajian’s 花心.The first time I heard this song was when I watched the movie [阳光普照]. I really like the lyrics “spring will go and come again. The flowers will fall and reopen again." The lyrics touched me a lot. It means to me that although today is hard, please don’t give up, because tomorrow is wonderful.
Jan. 2, 2021
Translation Practice
I think I am a hard work woman. I am studying Chinese although it is hard.
There are some new words in unit13, I’d like to practice.
1, there is a restaurant downstairs from my house. My colleague said the dishes were very delicious. I wanted to go there and have a try.
2, there are too many people in the lift, let us walkupstairs. Well, but where are the stairs? It is behind.
3, children all stood up when the teacher entered the class.
4, you should stand up when you see the chairman of China.
5, please don’t forget to turn off the light when you go out.
6, I don’t like math, so I will sleep during math class.
7, does everybody watch TV and buy things online?
Jan. 2, 2021
¡Feliz año nuevo!
finalmente dos mil venti es terminada
en 2020 aprendí much sobre mí. tuve hacer mucho autorreflexión sobre quien queiro ser y como queiro vivir. aprendí llorar (eso muy deficil para mí) y aprendí amar. todavia necesita aprendo much o mas pero este viaje de spiritual me háre un persona mejor.
espero que todos las personas año esté llena de la risas y amor
Jan. 1, 2021
Translation Practice
This is a jigsaw I have just played. Two weeks ago, I found it occasionally at a shop store. I wanted to play this jigsaw puzzle as soon as I saw it. I thought it would be very interesting because I have never played a jigsaw puzzle about stars. I unexpectedly spent a whole week playing it. Generally, I used to play a jigsaw within 4 to 5 days. Why does this one take my whole week? Am I not a masochist? No matter how difficult it was, I finally got it done. But I could not find the last piece although I looked it up everywhere. I was afraid that it would be eaten by a pet.
Jan. 1, 2021
New Year
Unfortunately, the new year didn't start so well for me. However, I can only hope for the rest of the year to be better. I don't think we can say that something is good or bad. There's always a bit of both. I'll try to be more positive and look for the good in situations where there's more bad.
Jan. 1, 2021
Translation Practice
Xiaowang’s phone rang and this was Linna’s call. Linna wanted to celebrate Xiaowang’s birthday on Wednesday and Xiaowang would be free on Wednesday. Linna told Xiaowang that her birthday party would be held at 7pm on Wednesday. There would be 23 guests. Xiaowang wanted to bring Linna a gift.
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Français et moi
J’avais été apprendre français pour quelques ans a l’instant. Cependant, mon autograph est beaucoup mauvais, et j’ai un problème avec réussir le prochain niveau de la langue. Donc, j’essaye d'écrire plus cette année et élargir mon vocabulaire de la langue. Esperement, ces changes seront suffis pour moi atteindre le niveau prochain de Français.
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