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An interesting conversation
In terms of interesting conversations I have ever had, I would say I had so many interesting conversations, among which impressed me most was daily talking with one of my friends. Actually, he is not my friend, but a person I know from a language-learning app. He is a highly well-formed young boy and every time I try to strike up a conversation, he can easily catch up with what I want to topic. He seems to know everything and can always surprise me. The last conversation we had was about the history of Jews and I just told him what I know about Jews, the timeline of their history. But he can get into detail even how many tribes they had in 5000 years ago, the feud between Jews and Egypt and how Jews were exiled. The reason why I think this conversation fascinates me is that I can learn a lot of knowledge from this conversation. In China, some social media is not available, so what I can get online is limited and full of bias. But he can inform me of something new. Another thing is that he is funny and the way he speaks always make me laugh.
Jan. 8, 2021
El lugar donde vivo
Vivo en una ciudad pequeña en alemania. Està en el sur de alemania a cerca de Munich. Hay dos universidades donde puedes estudiar muchos ciclos de estudios como la silvicultura, la arquitectura de paisajes o la industria cervecera. Además hay algunas iglesias que son viejos y muy grande. El centre de la ciudad es muy bonito por que hay pocos edificios que son hermosos y cada miercoles z sabado hay un mercado, donde los campesinos de los alrededores vender muchos diferentes verduras, frutas, quesos, carne y muchas otras cosas. Desgraciadamente no hay muchos bares.
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Translation Practice
I am preparing to attend the graduate exam and I am not confident enough to pass it. I think it is not enough although I study for four hours every day. In order to decrease my pressure, my good friend took me to go have fun. That day, she forced me not to think about the exam and the only thing I should do is have fun. The city we live in is close to the sea, so we first watched the sunrise. Although I used to enjoy getting up late, the sunrise is very worth me getting up early. After watching the sunrise, we went shopping downtown. All that day, she bought me gifts and treated me to meals. Next time, I want to repay her three times as she did. That day she told me a story about her trip with her boyfriend. This time, they traveled to Thailand, the Philippines and Japan. From the picture shot in Thailand that she touched an elephant. You could see that she was a little scared. They were very excited during their trip. Every time we meet up, we are really happy. I really don’t know how I can have such a good friend, and I don’t know how to express these joyful feelings.
Jan. 8, 2021
Jan. 8, 2021
Roscón de reyes
Este año mi novio y yo hemos tardado mucho en hacer el roscón de reyes. El año pasado, lo hicimos la noche del 5 de enero y estaba listo justo a medianoche. ¡Fue tan grande que casi no quedó en el horno! Estuvo listo justo a medianoche. Mi novio lo colocó encima de hojas de papales decoradas y dejó un mensaje para mis compañeras de piso.
El año pasado, mi novio había traído agua de azahar y levadura fresca desde España, pero este año, tuvo que buscar una nueva botella. Llamó a tres sitios antes de encontrar una tienda que la vendía. De hecho, la dueña nunca había usado agua de azahar en un roscón de reyes. Siempre lo usaba para tratar las cefaleas.
Hemos estado cansados esta semana y al final empezamos a hacer el roscón la noche del 6 de enero. Pusimos dentro una moneda y un albaricoque (en vez de la alubia). No tuvimos suficiente tiempo para fermentar y hornearlo así que lo dejamos fermentar en la nevera durante la noche. En la mañana, lo puse en el horno con un sartén de agua caliente para fermentarlo un poco más y aumentar la temperatura de la masa. Poco después de que incendiamos el horno, la cocina empezó a oler genial.
A toda mi familia les encantó el roscón. Comieron el roscón entero, salvo el trozo con el albaricoque (que guardaban para mi, jaja).
Jan. 8, 2021
I Plan on Importing the Text Below into My Anki Deck.
I want to make sure that these sentences are correct, as they will show up frequently during my Anki reviews. Anki is an electronic flashcard app that helps with memorization.
Please correct all of the following sentences.
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Q: What is the grammar term for the word within the quotation marks?
It makes this SUV almost as fun in the snow as a Subaru Imprezza (used to come "own" one).
A: the bare infinitive
PS: As far as I remember, it in that sentence refers to a specific make of tires.
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Jan. 8, 2021
Translation Practice
Yesterday, I had a video call with my friend. We haven’t had video calls for ages. I was very happy because I had finally seen her. She asked me how my day was and any changes for me recently. I told her that I didn’t get along well with my roommate and often quarreled. I think the key problem is that we didn’t know each other well. There have been many misunderstandings since we first met, so they affected our relationship. From her behavior, I know exactly that she dislikes me. For example, last month our water rent exceeded 300 USD. It’s too expensive. I came up with a saving money method and it is so easy. I told my roommate that maybe we can reduce our bath time and remember to turn off tap after brushing our teeth. What do you think?She didn’t say a word and with an impatient expression on his face, and then left our apartment. My friend comforted me and said that alright, sometimes, no matter if you are kind or not, there is someone who dislikes you. You can’t change their thoughts, and just be your ideal self.
Jan. 8, 2021
La Veneno
Hoy comencé a ver el primer episodio de "Veneno" por HBO España. La serie se trata de Cristina Ortiz Rodríguez, conocida como La Veneno, una de las figuras LGBT más conocidas e importantes de la historia española. Ella era la primera mujer trans que se popularizó en el país peninsular tras ser reconocida como un personaje de personalidad única. Una entrevista con ella, que trataba de su trabajo como prostituta, se estrenó en "Esta noche cruzamos el mississippi", un programa de la televisión que era lo más visto del país en los años noventa. Aunque todavía no he visto como la historia se desarrollará, el primer episodio a mí me llamó la atención mucho y es probable que siga viéndola.
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Jan. 8, 2021
J'ai mis à nouveau mon portable
Mon portable n'est pas si vieux. Je crois que c'est un modèle de l'an 2015. Mon père l'avait acheté pour lui, mais je l'utilisais plus. Alors, il a décidé de s'acheter un nouveau portable, et m'en a donné le vieux. Donc, j'ai eu ce portable depuis plus de 5 ans. C'est un bon portable, qui a bien servi mes besoins. Mais c'était un peu lent, notamment lorsque tu essayes de l'allumer. Parfois, il se figeât si j'essayais d'utiliser trop de programmes. C'était très ennuyeux. Pour résoudre ce problème, mes parents m'ont acheté un nouveau hard drive et plus de mémoire Ram, comme cadeau de Noël. Maintenant mon portable est tres rapide !
Jan. 8, 2021
Das Zimmer
Ich bin in einem seltsamen Zimmer aufgewacht. Es gibt eine Kamera in der Ecke, eine Tür ohne Griff und ein metallisches Bett. Ein künstliches Licht beleuchtet den Raum, währenddessen ich versuche, um meine Identität zu erinnern. Ich weiß nicht, wer ich bin, woher ich komme oder warum ich hier bin.
Ich fühle jedoch, dass ich sicher hier bin. Es ist etwas, dass ich nicht so einfach erklären kann, nur ein beruhigendes Gefühl. Ein paar Minuten später öffnet sich die Tür und ein Roboter mit einem Tablett nähert sich plötzlich an mich.
- ,,Herr 1830, fühlen Sie jetzt besser? Vielleicht das kann dir helfen."
Er streckt seine Hand mit einer Pille aus. Seine Stimme ist erkennbar und freundlich. Ich hole sie ab und esse sie. Alles ist wieder bunt.
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Jan. 8, 2021
Vou tentar fazer uma tradução
Meu cachorro Curro gosta de passear pelo parque a pimeira hora da manhã.
Eu me levanto as seis da manhã nos dias de trabalho para acompanhâ-lo ao parque antes de ir a trabalhar. El sempre fica me esperando sentado na porta do meu quarto com uma grande impaciencia, esperando que me levante.
Quando chegamos lá, costumo tirar a coleira para que possa correr livremente, pois nesse horario não tem ninguém que possa se incomodar. Ele fica muito feliz e durante um tempo fica explorando o parque com grande curiosidade.
Depois de quinze minutos, volta para o banco onde eu fico sentado e aí, a gente joga com uma bolinha, eu a tiro e ele traz para mim. Depois voltamos para casa e vou para o trabalho e ele fica feliz deitado no seu colchão.
Brigado por me ajudar!
Jan. 8, 2021
Las ballenas
Cuando era niño, uno de mis temas favoritos era las ballenas. Nunca he entendido por qué me fascinan tanto, pero creo que es relacionado con mi amor de los dinosaurios. De la perspectiva de un niño, ambos son enormes criaturas que parece provenir de la fantasía. Los dinosaurios son extintos, se murieron hace millones de años, pero las ballenas aún viven. Aunque la población es mucho menos de lo que era hace más de dos cientos años, aún los puedes encontrar en los océanos todo alrededor el mundo.
La mayoría de las ballenas no tienen ningún tipo de diente. Pues... tienen dientes, pero no nos parecen como dientes. Tienen lo que nos luce como un cepillo dentro de sus bocas. Lo usan para comer plancton, su comida preferida. Algunas de ellas, como las orcas, sí tienen dientes como nosotros, o realmente un mejor ejemplo sería un león. Sin embargo, técnicamente las orcas no son ballenas, entonces es discutible si ellas deberían contar.
Pese a que las ballenas son las criaturas más grandes del mundo (menos los árboles), casi no duraron hasta nuestros días. Durante los siglos XVIII y XIX, muchos países enviaron cazadores tras las ballenas para obtener la grasa de la ballenas, la cual podía volverse a aceite. Afortunadamente, gracias a las prohibiciones que muchos países imponían durante el siglo XX, aún tenemos estos animales fabulosos.
Dos oraciones con "por si acaso".
1. ¡Traiga un paraguas por si acaso!
2. No creo que algo importante vaya a suceder, pero aún te traído mi móvil, por si acaso.
Jan. 8, 2021
Fim da terapia
Acabei de fazer minha última sessão de psicoterapia, quer dizer a discussão final preliminar.
Eu tinha dito há um ano que desistiria porque os outros precisam mais, vou liberar espaço para eles ...
Mas fiquei e não fiquei satisfeito, nem a psicóloga, que gosto muito.
Só agora eu (e ela também) gradualmente percebi que fiz grandes avanços. Agora é a hora certa e eu não quero mais porque foi um trabalho duro.
Agora (depois de 3 anos) eu não tenho mais nenhuma terapia de grupo em que eu possa praticar falar, "me empurrar para frente" e me colocar no centro, e também primeiro reconhecer meus sentimentos e depois expressá-los.
Infelizmente, ela diz, eu não tinha praticado o suficiente e ela sempre me dizia para dar um passo à frente e "me tornar um tópico" em vez de me adaptar ao grupo.
Ela respondeu que agora se sente bem quando vê meu desenvolvimento.
Pois agora me mostro mais, ou seja, mostro minha carência e vulnerabilidade, vejo o que mais preciso e os métodos que escolhi para continuar trabalhando estão bem escolhidos.
E a prevenção de recaídas?
Eu disse que na minha vida atual no momento tudo é pobre em encontros e agitado, tenho meu esporte e minha família, mas quase não encontro ninguém - não vai mudar até a primavera. Gostaria de guardar as 8 sessões individuais restantes para um momento em que haja mais potencial para conflito e, até então, ver se consigo me dar bem.
Então, marcamos um encontro para o final de abril. Ela acha que é uma excelente decisão e está satisfeita, mas onde posso praticá-la agora? Eu disse que preciso de uma imagem na minha cabeça: para cada pessoa que encontro até abril, "não puxo a parede para cima, apenas deixo a toalha cair".
Ela riu muito.
Na verdade, a "toalha" era uma imagem para "mostrar-se vulnerável" ou "mostrar-se"
Para fazer isso, você tem que se submeter à boa vontade e humanidade da outra pessoa ou pelo menos respeitar,
e não fingir ou se esconder, especialmente por medo de julgamento.
Isso torna mais fácil para os outros serem humanos e respeitosos.
Obrigado pelo seu sinal de feedback
Jan. 7, 2021
Ma routine pour apprendre le français
Je n'ai pas vraiment une routine en ce moment plutôt pour améliorer mon français j'essaie de consommer des médias francophones tous les jours. Je lis des livres, regarde des émissions de télévision et joue des jeux vidéos, tous en français. Le plus de temps je peux passer en consommer le français le mieux.
Je veux vraiment m'exposer plus au français, car mes cours d'université étaient uniquement concentrés sur la grammaire. Je suis aussi capable de converser en français grâce à un programme auquel je m'étais inscrite avant l'université, mais je fais beaucoup d'erreurs. La grammaire tout seul n'est pas assez pour apprendre le français, il faut aussi écouter les francophones et le français quotidien. C'est difficile à faire quand on n'habite pas dans une région francophone, mais si je veux améliorer mon français je pense que c'est nécessaire.
Jan. 7, 2021
The Queen's Gambit
I get bored with "Stranger Things", which is a Netflix original show, and looked for another one in Netflix.
I found "The Queen's Gambit" interesting since the plot is about my favorite game "chess". Chess is easier to grasp how to play than shogi, which is called as Japanese chess, so I learned to play chess online against the computer.
Genius people are always depicted as lunatic people in the movies, and this story is no exception. the protagonist suffers from alcoholic and drug addiction. I'm looking forward to see how she overcomes obstacles such as unfortunate home environment and gender discrimination.
Jan. 7, 2021
Jan. 7, 2021
Snön
Jag älskar snö. Jag såg snö för första gången när jag var 22. Innan det bodde jag på en tropisk ö där de normala temperaturerna är mellan 22 och 36 grader. Jag hatar det kalla vädret men jag är alltid glad när det snöar.
I går på natten snöade det ungefär 15 centimeter. Jag bor i en liten stad och det finns skogar runt staden. Jag tog en lång promenad i skogen och allt var så fint, så vackert, så fantastisk med snö. Jag nästan grät! Det snöade medan jag var i skogen och jag tog bilder på allt. Jag önskar att det var alltid lika det. Jag skulle vara okej med vinter om det alltid snöade.
Jag har aldrig gjort en snögubbe och hoppas att det fortfarande finns snö imorgon så att jag kan göra den. Jag är lika ett barn när det snöar!
Jan. 7, 2021
用词汇写一篇短作文
词汇：相处，彼此，节省，限制，要不，行为，表情，对方，安慰，格外，
第一篇作文：
昨天我跟我的好朋友视频！我们很久没视频，所以昨天我非常高兴终于能看到他的脸了。他问了我最近怎么样？有没有变化？我开始告诉他我最近跟我的室友相处得不好，常常吵架。我觉得问题的核心是我们不够了解彼此。从我们初次见面的时刻我们有太多的误会，因此影响了我们现在的关系。从他的行为来看，我明明知道他不喜欢我。比如，我们上个月的水费单超过了300美元，太贵了！我想起了一个能节省钱的办法，确实很简单。我向我室友说“我们要不限制我们的洗澡时间，要不刷牙时记得关水龙头，你觉得这是好的办法吗？” 他一个词也没说出口，脸上带了一个不耐烦的表情，然后他直接转身离开了我们的公寓。我的朋友安慰话是：“没事，有时候不管你善良不善良，都会有一些人不喜欢你。你没有办法改变他们的看法。做你理想的自己就够了。”
词汇：不足，倒，显得，形容，完整，似乎，情景，宁可
第二篇作文：
我正在准备考研究生。对于通过考试的可能性，我自信不足。我倒是每天学习4个多小时，但我认为我还学习得不够。为了缓解我的压力，我的好朋友带我去玩。她那天不允许我想着我的考试，我唯一的任务只是好好玩。我们住的城市靠了海洋，所以我们先去享受日出的情景。虽然我是一个宁可懒睡的人，但是这个景色是值得早起床的。我们看日出升起了之后，去城市中心逛逛商场。她整天请我吃饭和买东西。我下次一定会报答她三倍。那天她完整地叙述她和她男朋友最近的旅游故事，这次他们去了日本，泰国和非鲁宾。看她在泰国摸了大象的照片里，她似乎有点害怕。他们旅游时显得非常高兴。我们每次在一起的时候，是真愉快的时期！我真不知道我怎么会有那么好的好朋友。我不会形容这种快乐的感觉。
Jan. 7, 2021
Shortsentences29
1. Valizimin dibinde gömleklerim ve onların üstünde pantolonum var. My shirts are at the bottom of my suitcase and my pants are on top of them.
2. Valizim masanın altından alırken kahvemi düştü. While i was taking my luggage from under the table, my coffee fell.
3. Merve, benim doğum günüm için yeni ızgara aldı, yani yaz mevsiminde boyunca her cumartesi mangal partisini yapacağız. Merve bought me a new grill for my birthday, so that means we will have a barbecue every Saturday.
4. Senden daha balıklar yakaladım, benden geri kalıyorsun, oltam çok şanslı değil mi? I caught more fish than you, you are lagging behind me, my fishing rod is lucky isn't it?
5. Bursa'da gezirken Emine gruptan geri kaldı çünkü her şeyi fotoğraf çekiyordu. While traveling in Bursa, Emine fell behind from the group because she was taking pictures of everything.
6. Genellikle her sabah kahvem içerken biraz kuru pasta yerim, çünkü sabah fazla vaktim yok. I usually eat biscuits with my coffee every morning because i don't have much time in the morning.
7. Cansu Kuru pasta fırında pişirirken radyodaki beysbol maçını dinliyor. Cansu is listening to baseball match on the radio while baking biscuits.
8. Suat, bu gece paynırdayken keyif çattı, gerçekten çok mutlu görünüyor. Suat enjoyed himself tonight while at the fair, he seems very happy.
9. Doğal felaketten sonra çok fazla mülteci yardım için Kolombia'ya akın ediyordu. After the natural disaster many refugees were flocking to Colombia for help.
10. Mülteciler Kolombia'ya girmeye deniyordu ama erken sabah saatlerinde deniz polisi onları yakalandı. Refugees were trying to enter Colombia but the sea police caught them.
11. Mehmet Ankara'da yaşarken soğuk havaya alışmaya ihtiyacı, orası İzmir gibi değil. Mehmet needs to get used to the cold weather while living in Ankara, it's not like İzmir over there.
12. Bursa'da dolaşırken türlü pazar ve çarşıya gittik, alışveriş yaparken bulduğum bir halı gerçekten sevdim. While wandering in Bursa, we went to different markets and bazaars, i really liked a carpet I found while i was shopping.
13. Lokanta'da yerken bir adam tanıştım televizyon'da olan futbol macını hakkında konuştuk. I met a man while I was eating in the restaurant, we talked about the soccer match which was on tv.
14. Onlara şakam söylemek için fırsat kolluyordum. I was waiting for an opportunity to tell them my joke.
15. Biz plajda yürürken bir altın yüzüğü bulmuştuk. We had found a golden ring while walking on the beach.
16. Mukaddes, zümrüt yüzüğü ona verilen murat tarafından kaybolmuştu. Mukaddes had lost the emerald which was given to her by Murat.
17. Geçen yıl şampiyonluğun takımının oyunculara yüzükler verildi. Rings were given to the players of last years championship team.
18. Arkadaşım, Rize'ye gitmekten beri ondan haber alamamamıştım. Since my friend arrived in Rize, i haven't received any news from him.
19. Dükkandan çalan zalı önümde koşmuştu, ellerindeki iki poşet vardı. The suspect who stole from the shop had ran in front of me, he had two bags in his hands.
20. Başı dönerken yatağımda olmak zorundayım, dengem çok kötüydü. While i was dizzy, i had to be in my bed, my balance was very bad.
21. Dansçı ayakk ucundayken dengesi çok şahaneydi. While the dancer was on her toes, her balance was fantastic.