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Skiing, Part 4
Finally I had that skiing week. I feel it was enough. There were good parts and also bed parts. The road was 12 hours long, but fortunetly it didn't seem so long.
First of all we arrived on the hotel at 18 p.m. but on the reception the staff said, that we should have go to another. The misunderstanding caused, that it was two Hotel, but one owner and one e-mail adress. We weren't upset because the receptionist said, that the other Hotel is bigger and much better. Somewhere it was no question, that it should have better, cause it was a court accomodation.
We were never have a this kind of accomodation. We were happy as we knew, that we didn't have to drive to the court an back. It was always so much time (one hour) the procedure. We al ways had to pack in all the devices and the end of the day packing out. So it began very well.
We found the Hotel and occupied our rooms. In our room we were four, and it was a really small room. It was one cabinet, with two hangers. I went to the receptionist for ask four more at least. She wrote it and told me, that I'll get it tomorrow.
Everybody waited for the dinner, we were hungry...
Feb. 6, 2020
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Indonesian “Smart Fish Farming” Startup Provides Services to Neighboring Countries
EFishery, an Indonesian agri-tech startup, is reported to have been negotiating towards fundraising. The negotiation partners are Northstar, a Singaporean investment firm, and the investment department of an Indonesian ride-hailing giant Go-Ventures.
EFishery is a company that provides smart feeding machines for fish and shrimp farming and data infrastructure. The company was established in 2013.
EFishery’s technology leads to risk management for farmers and solves the issues of lack of funds.
The startup is aiming to raise 15 million dollars at this current investment round.
Patrick Walujo, a managing partner and a co-founder of Northstar Group, commented at the beginning of January that they are ready to support EFishery, without going further into the details. Walujo commented, “Our interest lies in how we can aid in providing this product to millions of farmers. Their product is gaining popularity not only in Indonesia but also in Vietnam and Thailand.”
EFishery successfully raised funds at their beginning stage in 2015 following with a 4 million dollars funding in 2018. Other investors were actively participating as well. EFishery did not accept an interview regarding this matter. Go-Ventures commented that they are not ready to respond yet, while Northstar said they do not comment on rumors in the market.
Feb. 6, 2020
Deutschkurs: Hausaufgabe, 06.02.20
Heute habe ich noch mehr Hausaufgabe. Los geht's!
1. Ich bin heute mit dieser Hausaufgabe gestartet.
2. Du hast Kaffee nie gemocht.
3. Der Pfarrer begann die Predigt, weil die Glocke geklungen hat.
4. Weil Frau Müller ein neues Baby bekam, ist sie umgezogen.
5. Das kleine Mädchen ist vor ein paar Jahren viel gewachsen.
6. Wegen des Unfalls, sind wir uns erschrocken.
7. Habt Ihr meine Pflanzen gegossen?
8. Sie haben uns diesen Samstag zu ihrer Hochzeit eingeladen.
9. Ich habe im Leben so viele Wetten gewonnen.
10. Ich bin sehr beeindruckt, weil du so gut gesungen hast.
11. Sie ist sehr sauer, weil er ihre Lieblingsvase zerschlagen hat.
12. Die Nacht ist heute sehr dunkel, weil die Sterne seit gestern nicht geleuchtet haben.
13. Sind wir fit? Ja, wir sind letztes Jahr ziemlich oft gejoggt!
14. Wir haben Fische im Kühlschrank gefroren.
15. Das ist leider ziemlich schlecht gelungen...
16. Sie haben viel überarbeitet, da am kommenden Wochenende ihr Treffen stattfindet.
17. Ich habe das Jahr 2020 gut angebrochen.
18. Der Hund hat dich schlecht gebissen!
19. Er hat währen der Beerdigung geschwiegen.
20. Hilfe! Meine Kinder sind seit drei Stunden verschwunden!
Feb. 6, 2020
T12 Hard and confusing!
Four Democratic Candidates in a Melee U.S. Presidential Election 2020 from Iowa Caucus
The first “match” for the selection of candidates from democratic and republican parties for the U.S. presidential election was held in De Moines, Iowa, on the evening of the 3rd of February. Four candidates (fought against each other (?) including Bernie Sanders（age: 78) from the left-wing party, and a former vice president, Joe Biden (age: 77) from the non-radical party. Due to the delay in vote counting operation, caucus began in a great upheaval.
The result hasn’t been disclosed as of midnight of the 4th of February, Japan time.
Based on the entrance survey of the caucus, the New York Times reported that candidate Sanders is most likely to win. However, later, the statement was revoked. Sanders emphasized at the caucus saying, “original quote”, and showed his confidence in winning.
At Iowa’s public opinion survey, Sanders overtook Biden(?) (and) gained the lead in the average approval rate. He is also leading in the next primary election scheduled in New Hampshire for the 11th of February.
If candidate Sanders wins twice consecutively, … (he will gain more momentum? confidence? approval?) for the nomination (?).
Sanders’ liberal policies including free college education and a large corporate tax increase are gaining great popularity. The background behind this is the sign (?) of the public, especially the younger generation, expressing (voicing?) their concerns towards widening inequality.
According to the Washington Post’s entrance survey, 48% of the voters aged 17 to 29 are in favor of candidate Sanders. As many as 31% of the electors who are supporting the policy to reduce inequality selected candidate Sanders.
Elizabeth Warren( age: 70) from the same left-wing party(?) followed with 26% of the votes.
However, some question the possibility of the left-wing candidates winning the election against Trump.
Liberal policies tend to be avoided among the working-class that supported President Trump in the 2016 election in the mid-western swing states such as Michigan. (How can I make this sentence sound more concise….?)
Candidate Biden claims that he is the most suitable candidate to recapture (regain?) the popularity among the white middle-class. He told his supporters the evening of the 3rd that the day has been a close (match?) and that it is going to be a long night.
According to an entrance survey, Biden gained 25% of the votes from the centrists.
The youngest candidate on this election, Pete Buttigieg (age: 38), a former mayor of South Bend, Indiana, also gained 25% of the votes from the centrists equaling to Biden. His team is confident that they were able to leap out to the top.
At the caucus held on the evening of the 3rd, Buttigieg commented, “original quote” and showed his confidence regarding the result.
The structure of left-wings and centrists fighting for the top (position?) is similar to that of between the former secretary of state Hilary Clinton and candidate Sanders in the 2016 presidential election. A widely accepted opinion for candidate Clinton’s loss is that at the end of a fierce battle between the two candidates, some of the Sanders’s supporters ended up not voting for candidate Clinton.
The current situation where both parties are clearly divided indicates that the history might repeat itself in the 2020’s election as well.
Feb. 6, 2020
Ripper
Today, I read my entries that I posted to review the feedback. Every feedback is very helpful and I appreciate that.
By the way, I saw a Youvideo where Nancy Peloci tore up a copy of Trump's speech. I found it interesting as a means of showing her angry. Critics nicknamed her "Nancy the Ripper."
Thank you for reading!
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Einer verschiedene Styl
Ich versuche kürzere Briefe zu schreiben, so dass ich weniger Fehler machen will.
Einfache Briefe kann mir helfen schnell zu schreiben und meine Wörtschatz ohne viele Unterbrechungen zu aktivieren.
Während des TAges schaffe ich eine Stunde Deutsch zu üben, die ich normalerwiese verbringe Karteikarten zu tun.
Ich habe bald das Lesen und das Hören vor zu ergänzen.
Liebe Grüße
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안녕하세요, 여러분. 제 문장을 좀 고쳐주세요. :)
제게 그런 일을 일어났다면 민지처럼 속상하지 않았을 것 같아요.
if something like that happened to me, i don't think i would be as upset as MinJi.
만약 요리책을 더 똑똑히 따랐으면 우리의 식사가 더 맛있었을 텐데요
if we had followed the cookbook a little more closely I think our meal would have tasted better.
제가 단지 은행에 오른쪽에 갔다면 이렇게 늦게 도착하지 않았을 것 같아요./더 일찍 도착했을 것 같아요.
If i had just went right at the (place of the) bank i dont think i wouldve been this late/i think i would have arrived earlier.
제 생각에는 노래를 부르면서 큰 목소리로 했으면 더 좋았을 거에요.
In my opinion, it would have been better if you had sang with a louder voice.
형사는 시작부터 첫번째 살인을 더 똑똑히 들여다 봤다면 이만큼 많은 사람들이 죽지않아도 됐을 거에요.
if the detective had looked closer at/into the first murder since the beginning, this many people would not have died.
Feb. 6, 2020
My Son and a Baby Girl
Today, a school nurse stopped me when I took my son to the daycare center.
She said,
“Your son is really kind! He’s always pays attention to babies, and talking care of them! When a baby girl was crawling toward the wall, he stopped her with his hands softly. It was so adorable!”
I was really happy to hear that, and also happy that she often looks out for him.
I didn’t know how he spent days there because he always told me few things when I asked him about it, especially babies there.
The schools nurse made my day! :)
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A universidade aceitou minha aplicação
Oi gente!! Tenho uma notícia animador hoje: a universidade que me candidatei aceitou minha aplicação! Como já num dos meus postos anteriores, quero ser contador (o que eu espero que português me ajude). A universidade que tô estudando é bem professional também :), minha vida só tá começando e eu ainda tenho muito a aprender, mas eu já dei um grande passo à frente!
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Deutsche Musik
In letzter Zeit habe ich fast alle Tage deutsche Musik gehört. Das war nicht der Fall zuvor, da ich Musik auf Englisch lieber höre. Auf Spanisch höre ich Musik nicht so oft. Ich mag viele mexikanische und lateinamerikanische Bands, aber ich würde gerne deutsche Musik, statt Musik auf Spanisch, hören, offensichtlich weil ich Deutsch lernen will.
Ich finde, dass deutsche Musik echt toll ist. Und zwar meine Lieblingsbands sind "Die Toten Hosen" und "Die Ärzte". Sie spielen beide Rockmusik und ein bisschen Punk. Ihrer Texte sind super kreativ und habe so viel Spaß, wenn ich versuche, die zu verstehen. Ich meine, ich habe Spaß und lerne gleichzeitige Wörter! Das ist einfach klasse.
Ich empfehle euch, wenn ihr Lust habt, deutsche Musik zu hören.
Feb. 5, 2020
Modismos Nuevos
He aprendido unos modismos nuevos hoy, y quiero compartirlos contigo.
"Salvarse por los pelos":
La policía casi lo atrapó muchas veces, él está salvándose por los pelos.
"Perder los estribos":
El caballo había huido, y estaba causando estragos. La agricultora ha perdido los estribos.
"Echar agua al mar":
Él ha ido, pero ella sigue intentando. Está echando agua al mar.
"Tirar la casa por la ventana":
Para esta fiesta, ella tirará la casa por la ventana.
Gracias por leer! :)
Feb. 5, 2020
Consells per viatjar a Sud-àfrica
(Aquest és un exercici amb estructures del subjuntiu del curs de B1. Per a mi, el subjuntiu és molt difícil. No hi ha equivalent en anglès i per això em costa recordar quan i com utilitzar-lo.)
Em demanes que et doni alguns consell per viatjar a Sud-àfrica. La primera cosa que cal que entenguis és que hi ha riscos a Sud-àfrica que no vols trobar a Cataluyna.
No vull dir que tothom sigui lladre, però és un país de pobresa. Penso que pots anar amb seguretat si segueixes el meu consell. El sistema de transport públic és dolent i fer autoestop és massa perillós. Tindràs més flexibilitat i més seguretat si llogues un cotxe.
T'aconsello que mai condueixis amb els finestretes oberts i/o amb les portes no tancats amb clau. És important que posis totes les coses com el móbil, la bossa de mà o la cartera dins de la guantera o el maleter. Mai deixa una cosa de valor al seient de passatger.
Encara que sembli contra el llei, et recomano que no paris a un semàfor de nit. Frena, mira i si no hi ha altre cotxe, no paris. Continua.
No tinguis por, la majoria de la gent és molt simpàtica i te donarà una gran benvinguda!
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Новые выражения
Несмотря на редкие неприятности, мне всё нипочём.
Я не всегда выполняю свои обещания. Иногда я бросаю слова на ветер.
В прошлом я совсем не заботился о своей безопасности, совершал необдуманные поступки, и ходил по краю.
Чтобы добиться результата, иногда приходится действовать жёстко и не стесняться в методах.
При жизни Высоцкого его концерты не показывали по телевидению, а песни, за редким исключением, не издавали на дисках
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