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Jan. 11, 2021
The weather I like
I would say I am a big fan of cool weather which is not scorching hot or not freezing cold. The reason is that I am crazy about dress. When it comes spring, the weather becomes warm, I can wear my elegant dress to hang out with my friends. It is also a lovely season with all flowers in full bloom and everything is alive. Therefore, you could enjoy breathtaking scenery if you would travel with your friends. When it comes this season, you would feel you have mood to do everything you like. For example, you would feel comfortable with this weather when you go shopping, since you would not sweat like a pig. For me, I used to going traveling with my friends in this season and we are planning for our next journey. On top of that, It is also good for people’s skin when air is moist.
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Translation Practice
No mom, no dad. She thought that her and her younger brother had become orphans. Later, when she grew up, she started to think about making money to find her dad. She saved 500 yuan, and followed that address to find her father, but because she was a illiterate and couldn’t read, she did not find it.
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Translation Practice
She didn't dare to let her younger brother know about that because she was afraid that her younger brother could not stand that. Mom had passed away, no father. She was afraid her younger brother would commit suicide, and she didn't want to lose her younger brother again. If so, she would lose her only relatives.
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Translation Practice
All of these things, her younger brother didn't know, and she also didn't tell her younger brother. So all these years, the younger brother didn't know the truth about the abduction of his mom, the reason for committing suicide of his mom and where his father was. And all of this is because the older sister wanted to protect her younger brother.
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Translation Practice
Mom called her up, hugged her face crying, then hugged her younger brother crying. After that, she kissed her and her younger brother. Mom said to them while crying: "Sorry, mom cannot raise you up......" During that time, mom carrying two kids had escaped twice, but each time they were caught back by her husband.
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Translation Practice
When the last time his mom was hospitalized, because his family didn't have money, his mom didn't want to spend money again. She wanted her two children to have a good life and no foreign debt. While she was in the hospital, she worried about her kids a lot, not to wait to go through the discharge procedures, she ran out of the hospital.
Jan. 11, 2021
Estudando idiomas com LWT
Eu estou pesquisando um novo método para estudar os idiomas que eu estou aprendendo. Eu gostei do método do Steve (o senhor de LingQ) sobre ler o que eu mas possa, assim assimilar vocabulário em contexto. Agora eu estou utilizando o software LWT (Learning with texts) que me permite fazer algo parecido ao que oferece lingQ mais sim pagar. Eu gostaria de poder apoiar ao Steve mais em meu país o dólar está muito caro, entre três e quatro vezes mais.
Eu vou continuar lindo e tratando de me organizar. Muito obrigada pela sua ajuda.
Jan. 11, 2021
本棚
幼い頃から、私は本好きなので、段々たくさん本が積もった。私の本棚で6棚がある。正確に数えてないけど、400から600本があると思う。もちろんたくさんは短い短編集や漫画だ。他のたくさんは両親の古い本と図書館の景品の本だ。昔で全部の本は英語だった。中学生の頃で、少しはスペイン語だった。今は2棚は日本語の本だ。多分将来では半分の棚は日本語になる。
最近本の数が多すぎるので、2箱も満たした。この2箱を大学に持っていく。でも、家を出るときどうやって本棚の全部の本を持っていくのは大変だと思う。例えば他の国を住んでいると大好きな本だけを選ばないと。他のことをろくに買わないけど、多分少ない本を買う方がいいかも。
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Jan. 10, 2021 The Tree
In our culture, people believe when they died, they will get reincarnation. That means you will born as an another person or maybe an another species, like an animal. When the first time I knew that, I was thinking that I would like to be a big tree if I can choose the next life. A tree that's big, straight and tall. A tree that never moves, doesn't matter how the environment changes. A tree that always stable, kind and reliable.
Jan. 11, 2021
The invention of paper
Paper has been widely applied in every corner of our lives. You need paper to write, exchange, contain things, and solve sanitation problem. Due to the inexpensiveness of paper and its effectiveness as a writing medium, massive production of a significantly larger number of books can be achieved, producing knowledge cheaper, faster, farther, and easier. Paper’s traits also prompted the prosperity of economy.
1. Paper’s invention simplifies and lower the cost of making a book so that decrease rates of illiteracy, rising the level of education. Paper is an important invention because it replaced expensive parchment and papyrus as the storage medium of writing.
2. Extremely light weight decides paper’s storage and transportation are better than any other materials.
3. Paper money’s strength brought about radical changes in economy which replaced the foundation of financial structure. Businessmen trades with lighter, portable, and more reliable paper money, able to making more deals.
Jan. 11, 2021
La secadora
La secadora de mi familia ha dejado de funcionar hace unos meses. Durante el verano pasado, tenía que usar la secadora dos o tres veces seguidas para hacer que la ropa secara. Luego, funcionaba al azar. O sea, a veces encendería y secaría la ropa después de unos ciclos, pero otras veces encendería y solo se producía un zumbido. Empecé a colgar la ropa para secarla.
La semana pasada, mis padres desmontaron la secadora para ver si una parte se había roto o si los tubos estaban llenos de polvo. Desafortunadamente, no encontraron nada y ahora la secadora ni se enciende.
No me molesta no poner la ropa en una secadora se conserva mejor cuando se seca en aire libre y no usa energía, pero es difícil encontrar espacio para colgar las sábanas y toallas en mi casa. Si no encontramos una nueva secadora pronto, tendremos que montar líneas más grandes para colgar todo.
Jan. 11, 2021
Aujourd'hui, j'ai mangé une "parillada"
La "parillada" c'est un plat qu'on connait plus comme "asado" ou, en anglais et en français, barbecue. Je suis sûr que vous savez que c'est un plat de viandes, comme du bœuf, du porc et du poulet. Ici en Équateur, d'habitude on sert la parillada avec de la "menestra", qui est un ragoût de lentilles, du riz et des frites. On a acheté ce parillada dans un restaurant près de chez nous, qui a ouvert ses portes récemment. J'ai la viande, donc j'avais envie d'y aller depuis longtemps. C'était très bon, et à un bon prix du coup. Donc, je crois que nous y reviendrons dans le futur.
Jan. 11, 2021
Domenica di fatica
Questa mattina mi sono svegliato alle 7 della mattina dopo, ho preso il mio telefonino e ho cominciato a leggere sul Internet un articolo dal New Yorker che parlava di quello che hanno accaduto il mercoledì scorso nel Stati Uniti. Me pare molto interessante che il uomo che lo ha scritto (sono quasi sicuro che sia statunitense) ha riferito un termino non troppo conosciuto per gli americani "American Excpetionlism" insomma quella cieca credenza che, tutto fanno da loro è sempre meglio che si lo fossero fatto alcuno altro, Soprattutto qualcuno non nato nei gli Stati Uniti. Mi ha piaciuto molto perché parla di quello che quasi non si dice; Gli Americano sono come qualsiasi popolo, anche lei potrebbe diventare una "republica bananera"
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Translation Practice
Mom asked her if she remembered it. She still said: no. Mom grabbed a stick, beat her hands and head, forced her to kneel on the ground facing the wall. She cried, and mom also cried. Mom said: "Why can't you remember? Don't you have memories?" And mom even cried more awfully than my sister. Mom wiped her tears with her cotton sleeves when she cried, and her sleeves could even be wring out water.
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Jan. 10 2021
Je crois que j'ai besoin de pratiquer d'écrire et de parler plus souvent, parce que même si mon lécture est en train d'améliorer, je ne fait pas assez pour améliorer mon écriture. Je suis en train de perdre ma tête parce que j'ai étudié le français pendant deux ans, mais il n'y a pas assez preuve de ça quand je parle. Mais si je fait un journal d'écriture chaque jour, mon français aurait améliorer - mais seulement si je trouve quelqu'un de corriger mon écriture. J'ai besoin de relire le livre qui a cette liste des sites sur lesquels on peut trouver des gens pour corriger les textes. Aujourd'hui, avant d'écrire ce texte, j'ai vu un vidéo sur le site médiathèque de mon alliance française qui s'agit d'un dessert pour la fête de nouvel an. Elle s'appelle "une galette des rois." A mon avis, elle était un peu bizarre, bien qu'elle a probablement un goût délicieux. Mais je n'ai rien compris qu'est-ce que la femme qui a cuisiné ce dessert a dit. C'est une mystère totale pour moi. Mais c'était un vidéo selectionner pour mon niveau de français! Il y a un mois qu j'ai pensé "oui, mais bien sur, je suis entre les niveaux B1 et B2." Mais maintenent, je ne sais pas si je suis même au niveau A2! Ouais, quand les gens parlent lentement, comme dans les vieux documentaires, je crois que je peux comprendre preque tout qu'ils disent. Mais des gens qui vivrent dans le 21ième siècle ne parle pas commes des gens des années cinquante ou soixante! Heureusement, je commencerai un nouveau cours intensif de francais demain, alors ça aurait m'aider quand je commencerai mon vrai cours universitaire en février.
[S'il vous plaît, dîtes-moi si ce récit est trop longue]
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Translation Practice
The next day, my mom asked her if she remembered what my mom had said, but my sister said: no. And then my mom repeated it again, and asked her again, but she still said: no. So my mom started to teach her to count fingers, one word by one word, and told her that when she counted to the seventeenth word, she could find my father.
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Translation Practice
Mom was aware that there were not many days left for her. One day, mom called my older sister to the front and said to her: "If one day I pass away, cannot raise you up, sorry, you must go find your father." My father's address is: Jiuda 1 team, Mingjing commune, Jiangyou County, Sichuan Province. Wu Daishou.
Jan. 11, 2021
Série sur Netflix
Je suis en train de regarder une série télé qui s'appelle "Spinning out". Il n'est pas terrible, mais je ne le recommande pas. Il y a beaucoup de séries qui sont bien mieux intelligents et créatifs. J'ai décidé de regarder cette série parce que je m'intéresse au patinage artistique dernièrement. J'ai commencé par regarder des compétitions russe pour pratiquer la langue, et puis j'ai cherché des séries sur le sport sur Netflix. En fait, j'ai regardé les premiers épisodes doublés en français, et je me suis aperçu que les voix des acteurs ajoutent beaucoup à l'expérience de visionnement. Dans l'original, on sent les emotions des personnages, et c'est difficile de reproduire cela, même si le scénario est bien traduit.
Demain, si j'en ai le temps, j'écrirai un petit résumé des dernières épisodes. Les verbes réflechis s'avèrent utile pour décrire les feuilletons : ils se détestent, ils s'aiment, ils se fâchent l'un contre l'autre, ils se maquillent, ils se soûlent et tout le tralala.
Jan. 11, 2021
Gilmore Girls
Para praticar, veo "Gilmore Girls" a Netflix en español.
Esta serie es sobre una madre y su hija quién viven en la pueblo ficticio, "Stars Hollow."
La hija se llama Rory y es muy inteligente. En el primer episodio, se acceptó en una escuela privada se llama Chilton.
La madre, Lorelai, era muy feliz para su hija. Pero, no sabía como pagarlo. Lorelai es una madre sola. Entonces necesitaba pedir ayuda de sus padres ricos.
Esta serie es muy graciosa y reconfortante. Lo veo de vez en cuando.
Jan. 10, 2021
Why do you learn foreign languages?
I read an article saying that people who get more free time due to the lockdown tend to start learning foreign languages. They are just killing the time, and besides, learning foreign languages helps you to get a new job. The author got interested in decoding the script on ancient architecture by learning Luwian, of which I never heard though.
Though I'm glad to read and correct articles written in Japanese, I want to know why those who live far from Japan got interested in Japanese. I guess that anime and manga enticed them to learn the original language.