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Deutschkurs: Hausaufgabe, 06.02.20
Heute habe ich noch mehr Hausaufgabe. Los geht's!
1. Ich bin heute mit dieser Hausaufgabe gestartet.
2. Du hast Kaffee nie gemocht.
3. Der Pfarrer begann die Predigt, weil die Glocke geklungen hat.
4. Weil Frau Müller ein neues Baby bekam, ist sie umgezogen.
5. Das kleine Mädchen ist vor ein paar Jahren viel gewachsen.
6. Wegen des Unfalls, sind wir uns erschrocken.
7. Habt Ihr meine Pflanzen gegossen?
8. Sie haben uns diesen Samstag zu ihrer Hochzeit eingeladen.
9. Ich habe im Leben so viele Wetten gewonnen.
10. Ich bin sehr beeindruckt, weil du so gut gesungen hast.
11. Sie ist sehr sauer, weil er ihre Lieblingsvase zerschlagen hat.
12. Die Nacht ist heute sehr dunkel, weil die Sterne seit gestern nicht geleuchtet haben.
13. Sind wir fit? Ja, wir sind letztes Jahr ziemlich oft gejoggt!
14. Wir haben Fische im Kühlschrank gefroren.
15. Das ist leider ziemlich schlecht gelungen...
16. Sie haben viel überarbeitet, da am kommenden Wochenende ihr Treffen stattfindet.
17. Ich habe das Jahr 2020 gut angebrochen.
18. Der Hund hat dich schlecht gebissen!
19. Er hat währen der Beerdigung geschwiegen.
20. Hilfe! Meine Kinder sind seit drei Stunden verschwunden!
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T12 Hard and confusing!
Four Democratic Candidates in a Melee U.S. Presidential Election 2020 from Iowa Caucus
The first “match” for the selection of candidates from democratic and republican parties for the U.S. presidential election was held in De Moines, Iowa, on the evening of the 3rd of February. Four candidates (fought against each other (?) including Bernie Sanders（age: 78) from the left-wing party, and a former vice president, Joe Biden (age: 77) from the non-radical party. Due to the delay in vote counting operation, caucus began in a great upheaval.
The result hasn’t been disclosed as of midnight of the 4th of February, Japan time.
Based on the entrance survey of the caucus, the New York Times reported that candidate Sanders is most likely to win. However, later, the statement was revoked. Sanders emphasized at the caucus saying, “original quote”, and showed his confidence in winning.
At Iowa’s public opinion survey, Sanders overtook Biden(?) (and) gained the lead in the average approval rate. He is also leading in the next primary election scheduled in New Hampshire for the 11th of February.
If candidate Sanders wins twice consecutively, … (he will gain more momentum? confidence? approval?) for the nomination (?).
Sanders’ liberal policies including free college education and a large corporate tax increase are gaining great popularity. The background behind this is the sign (?) of the public, especially the younger generation, expressing (voicing?) their concerns towards widening inequality.
According to the Washington Post’s entrance survey, 48% of the voters aged 17 to 29 are in favor of candidate Sanders. As many as 31% of the electors who are supporting the policy to reduce inequality selected candidate Sanders.
Elizabeth Warren( age: 70) from the same left-wing party(?) followed with 26% of the votes.
However, some question the possibility of the left-wing candidates winning the election against Trump.
Liberal policies tend to be avoided among the working-class that supported President Trump in the 2016 election in the mid-western swing states such as Michigan. (How can I make this sentence sound more concise….?)
Candidate Biden claims that he is the most suitable candidate to recapture (regain?) the popularity among the white middle-class. He told his supporters the evening of the 3rd that the day has been a close (match?) and that it is going to be a long night.
According to an entrance survey, Biden gained 25% of the votes from the centrists.
The youngest candidate on this election, Pete Buttigieg (age: 38), a former mayor of South Bend, Indiana, also gained 25% of the votes from the centrists equaling to Biden. His team is confident that they were able to leap out to the top.
At the caucus held on the evening of the 3rd, Buttigieg commented, “original quote” and showed his confidence regarding the result.
The structure of left-wings and centrists fighting for the top (position?) is similar to that of between the former secretary of state Hilary Clinton and candidate Sanders in the 2016 presidential election. A widely accepted opinion for candidate Clinton’s loss is that at the end of a fierce battle between the two candidates, some of the Sanders’s supporters ended up not voting for candidate Clinton.
The current situation where both parties are clearly divided indicates that the history might repeat itself in the 2020’s election as well.
Feb. 6, 2020
Ripper
Today, I read my entries that I posted to review the feedback. Every feedback is very helpful and I appreciate that.
By the way, I saw a Youvideo where Nancy Peloci tore up a copy of Trump's speech. I found it interesting as a means of showing her angry. Critics nicknamed her "Nancy the Ripper."
Thank you for reading!
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Einer verschiedene Styl
Ich versuche kürzere Briefe zu schreiben, so dass ich weniger Fehler machen will.
Einfache Briefe kann mir helfen schnell zu schreiben und meine Wörtschatz ohne viele Unterbrechungen zu aktivieren.
Während des TAges schaffe ich eine Stunde Deutsch zu üben, die ich normalerwiese verbringe Karteikarten zu tun.
Ich habe bald das Lesen und das Hören vor zu ergänzen.
Liebe Grüße
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안녕하세요, 여러분. 제 문장을 좀 고쳐주세요. :)
제게 그런 일을 일어났다면 민지처럼 속상하지 않았을 것 같아요.
if something like that happened to me, i don't think i would be as upset as MinJi.
만약 요리책을 더 똑똑히 따랐으면 우리의 식사가 더 맛있었을 텐데요
if we had followed the cookbook a little more closely I think our meal would have tasted better.
제가 단지 은행에 오른쪽에 갔다면 이렇게 늦게 도착하지 않았을 것 같아요./더 일찍 도착했을 것 같아요.
If i had just went right at the (place of the) bank i dont think i wouldve been this late/i think i would have arrived earlier.
제 생각에는 노래를 부르면서 큰 목소리로 했으면 더 좋았을 거에요.
In my opinion, it would have been better if you had sang with a louder voice.
형사는 시작부터 첫번째 살인을 더 똑똑히 들여다 봤다면 이만큼 많은 사람들이 죽지않아도 됐을 거에요.
if the detective had looked closer at/into the first murder since the beginning, this many people would not have died.
Feb. 6, 2020
My Son and a Baby Girl
Today, a school nurse stopped me when I took my son to the daycare center.
She said,
“Your son is really kind! He’s always pays attention to babies, and talking care of them! When a baby girl was crawling toward the wall, he stopped her with his hands softly. It was so adorable!”
I was really happy to hear that, and also happy that she often looks out for him.
I didn’t know how he spent days there because he always told me few things when I asked him about it, especially babies there.
The schools nurse made my day! :)
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A universidade aceitou minha aplicação
Oi gente!! Tenho uma notícia animador hoje: a universidade que me candidatei aceitou minha aplicação! Como já num dos meus postos anteriores, quero ser contador (o que eu espero que português me ajude). A universidade que tô estudando é bem professional também :), minha vida só tá começando e eu ainda tenho muito a aprender, mas eu já dei um grande passo à frente!
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Deutsche Musik
In letzter Zeit habe ich fast alle Tage deutsche Musik gehört. Das war nicht der Fall zuvor, da ich Musik auf Englisch lieber höre. Auf Spanisch höre ich Musik nicht so oft. Ich mag viele mexikanische und lateinamerikanische Bands, aber ich würde gerne deutsche Musik, statt Musik auf Spanisch, hören, offensichtlich weil ich Deutsch lernen will.
Ich finde, dass deutsche Musik echt toll ist. Und zwar meine Lieblingsbands sind "Die Toten Hosen" und "Die Ärzte". Sie spielen beide Rockmusik und ein bisschen Punk. Ihrer Texte sind super kreativ und habe so viel Spaß, wenn ich versuche, die zu verstehen. Ich meine, ich habe Spaß und lerne gleichzeitige Wörter! Das ist einfach klasse.
Ich empfehle euch, wenn ihr Lust habt, deutsche Musik zu hören.
Feb. 5, 2020
Modismos Nuevos
He aprendido unos modismos nuevos hoy, y quiero compartirlos contigo.
"Salvarse por los pelos":
La policía casi lo atrapó muchas veces, él está salvándose por los pelos.
"Perder los estribos":
El caballo había huido, y estaba causando estragos. La agricultora ha perdido los estribos.
"Echar agua al mar":
Él ha ido, pero ella sigue intentando. Está echando agua al mar.
"Tirar la casa por la ventana":
Para esta fiesta, ella tirará la casa por la ventana.
Gracias por leer! :)
Feb. 5, 2020
Consells per viatjar a Sud-àfrica
(Aquest és un exercici amb estructures del subjuntiu del curs de B1. Per a mi, el subjuntiu és molt difícil. No hi ha equivalent en anglès i per això em costa recordar quan i com utilitzar-lo.)
Em demanes que et doni alguns consell per viatjar a Sud-àfrica. La primera cosa que cal que entenguis és que hi ha riscos a Sud-àfrica que no vols trobar a Cataluyna.
No vull dir que tothom sigui lladre, però és un país de pobresa. Penso que pots anar amb seguretat si segueixes el meu consell. El sistema de transport públic és dolent i fer autoestop és massa perillós. Tindràs més flexibilitat i més seguretat si llogues un cotxe.
T'aconsello que mai condueixis amb els finestretes oberts i/o amb les portes no tancats amb clau. És important que posis totes les coses com el móbil, la bossa de mà o la cartera dins de la guantera o el maleter. Mai deixa una cosa de valor al seient de passatger.
Encara que sembli contra el llei, et recomano que no paris a un semàfor de nit. Frena, mira i si no hi ha altre cotxe, no paris. Continua.
No tinguis por, la majoria de la gent és molt simpàtica i te donarà una gran benvinguda!
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Новые выражения
Несмотря на редкие неприятности, мне всё нипочём.
Я не всегда выполняю свои обещания. Иногда я бросаю слова на ветер.
В прошлом я совсем не заботился о своей безопасности, совершал необдуманные поступки, и ходил по краю.
Чтобы добиться результата, иногда приходится действовать жёстко и не стесняться в методах.
При жизни Высоцкого его концерты не показывали по телевидению, а песни, за редким исключением, не издавали на дисках
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Binomial Pairs
Today, I learned how to call these words that are made of similar two words: pick and choose, carrot and stick, the hustle and bustle, yes and no, wine and dine, pins and needles, and fast and furious. They are binomial pairs.
Here are some sentences that I wrote for memorizing these binomial pairs.
I want to get away from the hustle and bustle in the city.
She wined and dined us.
We were in pins and needles.
The discussion was fast and furious from start to finish.
Thank you for reading!
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Music Heals Me
Today I got a bit irritated for no reason before I went to bed.
I tried several things to relax - playing games, looking at some funny things on the internet and listening to the music.
I noticed that I could hear the music instruments clearly through my earphones and that made me relaxed the most!
I’m feeling good now.
I hope everyone has a great day/night! :)
(Corrected on Feb. 6th)
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FONDUE EXPERIENCE
Treating guests like kings? With our cheat meal, you’re all set to do that!
Fondue1 is a Swiss melted chocolate or cheese dish served in a common dish over a portable stove8 heated with a candle or spirit lamp, and eaten by dipping different sweet things into the chocolate using long-stemmed forks or just holding them in your hand. To successfully make it happen you need to have:
dips
chocolate to dip the dips in
special two-section vessel to melt the chocolate in. It has a chocolate cup and a candle cave beneath it.
Chocolate melts in the chocolate cup part of the fondue vessel. It uses the heat from the candle which situates beneath it in the candle cave segment of the fondue cup. Do not be mean and buy some high quality chocolate to melt – the chocolate is the star of the show and it should be really tasty.
Use anything you like as dips: brad straw, dried fruits, fresh fruits, cookies or any other thing.
You may even try mixing tastes – such as using salty chips as dips.
You also need to have the two-section fondue cup to make the experience happen and some specific fondue forks to pick up the dips and dip them into the chocolate. The last thing you need to make the experience happen is to have a tea light candle and matches to light it.
Let’s do it!
First, we assign the lighting and the stirring keepers. The lighting keeper is set to light the candle while the stirring keeper is in charge of stirring the slowly melting chocolate. There is also the dips keeper whose mission is to arrange and prepare the dips with grace.
The sequence of the ritual is the next:
light the candle
start stirring the chocolate till it is completely melted
arrange the deeps to be visually appealing for the people to take from the plate
once the chocolate is melted, put out the candle13 and get to the next step
give everybody a fork and start trying the dish out
share your opinions on the dish
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